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This page holds approved nominations that are waiting to appear in the " Did you know" section on the Main Page. Following DYK approval, nominations are processed and moved into a Prep area, and from there, prep sets are promoted to a queue, and then to the main page.

To create a new nomination or to see those that are yet to be approved, see Template talk:Did you know. For the discussion page see WT:DYK. Click on the link to go directly to the Special occasion holding area.

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Count of DYK Hooks
Section # of Hooks # Verified
February 28 1 1
March 12 1 1
March 14 1
March 19 1
March 24 1
March 25 3
March 30 1
March 31 1
April 2 2 1
April 4 1
April 5 2 2
April 6 2 1
April 7 4 3
April 8 5 4
April 9 4 2
April 10 3 2
April 11 1 1
April 12 1 1
April 13 10 6
April 14 6 1
April 15 9 6
April 16 6 3
April 17 9 6
April 18 10 6
April 19 12 7
April 20 10 9
April 21 8 5
April 22 6 3
April 23 8 7
April 24 14 7
April 25 7 2
April 26 6 2
April 27 9 3
April 28 10 5
April 29 8 1
April 30 6
Total 189 98
Last updated 22:12, 30 April 2024 UTC
Current time is 23:36, 30 April 2024 UTC [ refresh

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If you can't find the nomination you submitted to the nominations page, and it also isn't on this page, in most cases it means your article has been approved and is either in one of the prep areas, has been promoted from prep to a queue, or is on the main page.

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  • In one window, open the DYK nomination subpage of the hook you would like to promote.
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  • In the prep set...
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    • Paste the credit information ({{DYKmake}} and/or {{DYKnom}}) into the credits area.
    • Add an edit summary, e.g., "Promoted [[Jane Fonda]]", preview, and save
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    • change |passed= to |passed=yes
    • Add an edit summary, e.g., "Promoted original hook to Prep 3", preview, and save

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Nominations Information

Special occasion holding area

May 23

David Raymond, Jonathan Stoklosa, Cheryl Hamilton, Kevin Tresolini, Eric Cannon, Gary Chelosky, Marcy Levine, Caitlin Van Sickle, Cliff Brumbaugh

Jonathan Stoklosa with then-U.S. vice president Joe Biden
Jonathan Stoklosa with then-U.S. vice president Joe Biden
Moved to mainspace by BeanieFan11 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 152 past nominations.

Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.

BeanieFan11 ( talk) 19:56, 21 March 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Reviewing.
  • Despite what the bot/tool says, you owe 10 QPQs as you seem to already be aware.- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 23:10, 21 March 2024 (UTC) reply
    • Thanks for offering to review – just note that Van Sickle and Brumbaugh are not yet ready – I'll make sure to 5x them within the next three days (nominated now so as to not exhaust 7-day eligibility of Raymond). BeanieFan11 ( talk) 23:12, 21 March 2024 (UTC) reply
  • I forgot to say let me know when all the articles are ready for evaluation.- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:21, 22 March 2024 (UTC) reply
  • 5x expanded Caitlin Van Sickle (calculated it needed to be 7,725+ – currently ~8,200). Just Brumbaugh left to do. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 02:42, 23 March 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Expanding Brumbaugh is taking longer than I thought, but I'm almost certain I can have it done by the end of tomorrow. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 23:26, 26 March 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Was able to finish Brumbaugh tonight. Needed to be 10,725, now is at ~13,000 bytes. @ TonyTheTiger: All the articles are ready for review now. (Still have to do the QPQs, of course). Also, tell me your thoughts of the date request I mentioned? Thanks! BeanieFan11 ( talk) 01:20, 27 March 2024 (UTC) reply
Collapsing individual article reviews as everything was addressed. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 16:50, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
The DYK tool gives the following results:
  • David Raymond, 3177 characters created by BeanieFan11 on March 13, 2024
    • WP:AGF on hook quote claim.
    • Maybe revise 'the man who "practically invented the modern sports mascot"' to 'the "inventor" of the modern sports mascot'
    • 41.9% copyvio result stems from direct quotations that are presented with proper WP:ICs.
  • Jonathan Stoklosa, 1996 characters created by BeanieFan11 on March 18, 2024
    • I am a former competitive powerlifter myself. I have deadlifted 600 lbs, but that was a career personal best. I can not now. I think "can lift up to 425 pounds" should be changed to "has lifted 425 pounds" (sources confirmed)
    • 14.5% copyvio result stems from poor paraphrasing. Often times the exact phrasing of the source is used, but not at a too problematic level. Better paraphrasing is encouraged.- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 03:42, 29 March 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Cheryl Hamilton, 2574 characters created by BeanieFan11 on March 17, 2024
    • Can we tigten up "turned one of the world's best gymnastics judges" to "turned Olympic games judge", which has a more encyclopedic and neutral tone (sources confirmed).
    • 18% copyvio result from quotation and Official terminology and names.
  • Kevin Tresolini, 2647 characters created by BeanieFan11 on March 21, 2024
    • Can we shorten 'Delaware's "preeminent sportswriter"' to 'a "preeminent sportswriter"'? (sources confirmed)
    • 9.9% copyvio result all good.
  • Eric Cannon, 2496 characters created by BeanieFan11 on March 17, 2024
  • I am the Thomas Wilcher article creator. You have motivated me to dig up some NCAA results. Here are two indoor All-American (top 8) finishes: [4], [5].
  • Here is where to find the outdoor results: https://www.ustfccca.org/meets-results/meet-history?series=3369.
  • Gary Chelosky, 1942 characters created by BeanieFan11 on March 19, 2024
    • Source confirmed.
    • 3.8% copyvio result all good.
  • Marcy Levine, 2075 characters created by BeanieFan11 on March 20, 2024
    • NCAA women's gymnastics tournament? Link it. Even only one National or international championship deserves some medals bling in the infobox. Maccabiah Games and maybe AIAW too. (source confirmed)
    • 3.8% copyvio result all good.
  • Caitlin Van Sickle, 8266 characters moved from User:Knope7/sandbox/Caitlin Van Snickle on August 11, 2016, expansion began 22 edits ago on March 22, 2024
    • previously 1547 characters (required 7735 for 5x)
    • Source confirmed.
    • 18% copyvio result from quotation and Official terminology and names.
  • Cliff Brumbaugh, 14345 characters created by Deiz on June 8, 2007, expansion began 38 edits ago on March 24, 2024
    • previously 2143 characters (required 10715 for 5x)
    • The phrase "10 hits, four RBIs, two hits and one home run" can not be right.
    • This infobox could host more highlights, MVPs and All-league or All-start honrs.
      • Per the Del. Sports HOF, Brumbaugh was a five-time minor league all-star and four-time all-star in Asia; however, the years aren't mentioned. We know three of the minor league all-star selections (1995, 1999, 2010) – he also was MVP in at least 1995 and 2010. As for the Asian leagues, it seems we know 2003 and 2004, but the other years are less certain. We also know a bunch of honors from HS/college. What do you suggest? BeanieFan11 ( talk) 02:01, 2 April 2024 (UTC) reply
    • Source confirmed.
    • 12.3% copyvio result from poor paraphrasing.
      • Are you referring to the Baseball-Reference.com link? Its just two basic sentences that I'm not sure could be reworded differently, and the match is half a machine-generated part at the end, while the other half, I'm not sure how they consider that a match. Thoughts? BeanieFan11 ( talk) 01:40, 2 April 2024 (UTC) reply

      • The date request window is 6 weeks, I believe. So you can only request dates within 6 weeks of the date that you nominate a hook. You can read further about special occaision requests at WP:DYKSO.- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 20:03, 28 March 2024 (UTC) reply
        • Crap! I was never aware of that! And just two weeks off. Is it possible to IAR, something? One of the main reasons I nominated this was in hope that it could be set for that date... BeanieFan11 ( talk) 20:06, 28 March 2024 (UTC) reply
          • It says exceptions to the six-week limit can be implemented by way of a local consensus at WT:DYK. I'll open a discussion about it once the reviewing is done. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 20:09, 28 March 2024 (UTC) reply
Collapsing lengthy ALT talk that is moot with the below proposals. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 03:13, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply


Approved nominations

Articles created/expanded on February 28

Kirby: King of Comics

Jack Kirby
Jack Kirby

** ALT1: ... that Mark Evanier was a good friend of Jack Kirby (pictured) which gave him access to lots of original art to include in his biography? Source: https://www.theguardian.com/books/2008/may/03/featuresreviews.guardianreview12 ** ALT2: ... that while writing Kirby: King of Comics, once Mark Evanier hit a word count of 250,000 he considered the book nowhere near finished? Source: https://www.theguardian.com/books/2008/may/03/featuresreviews.guardianreview12

5x expanded by OlifanofmrTennant ( talk). Self-nominated at 20:54, 1 March 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Kirby: King of Comics; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page. reply

  • Expanded 5x, from 319 to 1614 characters; long enough. Well-sourced, neutral, no plagiarism. I like the first hook; its source is reliable. Great image; I agree that's a better one than the book cover. Well done taking a stub to a short-ish and salvageable article. Good to go. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Figureskatingfan ( talkcontribs) 21:12, 29 March 2024 (UTC) reply

I have pulled this nom from prep, as it fails to include a summary of the book's contents and thus fails WP:DYKCOMPLETE. It also contains at least two errors, one which says Evanier "obtained" artworks from Kirby "while working for him" - he only obtained access, and not apparently while working for him, and another which says the book was met with "positive" reviews when in fact it was panned by The Guardian critic. The article clearly needs more work before it can be featured, if it should be featured at all given the apparent errors. Gatoclass ( talk) 09:50, 10 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Gatoclass I've begun working on a summary of the books contents, its been a while sinces I've read the book so I'll have to look over it again Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 05:22, 13 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Pinging nominator OlifanofmrTennant, reviewer Figureskatingfan, and promoter PrimalMustelid. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 ( talk) 12:15, 11 April 2024 (UTC) reply
There has been no improvement of the article. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 ( talk) 00:43, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ AirshipJungleman29: I feel that their has been improvement of the article I've just been struggling to find content supported backed up by sources. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 01:25, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Upon reviewing policy I belive that it would be covered under WP:DYKCITE Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 02:11, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply

I took a look at this. The summary is extremely short, to the point of remaining woefully incomplete. Still fails WP:DYKCOMPLETE. Time to pass on this as the nominator just isn't accepting what they are being told. 4meter4 ( talk) 13:55, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply

@ 4meter4: I've expanded it a bit how much would be needed? I fear that to much would just be a mini biography of Jack Kirby. It took me a while to begin writing the summary as I didnt have my copy at the time. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 14:40, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
OlifanofmrTennant The summary needs to present a complete but not overly detailed picture of the book's entire plot. It should provide enough detail to give the reader a general picture of the book's contents. It should not be too vague (which it currently is) nor should it be overly detailed. It should be a summary. See MOS:PLOT and Wikipedia:Summary style for guidance. I would suggest removing the bulleted point by chapter. It isn't entirely necessary to break down the content into chapters. It would be better to concentrate on narrative. What is the story being told? Summarize that story. Since this is a biography it should be biographical. Best. 4meter4 ( talk) 14:57, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
See also Wikipedia:WikiProject Books/Non-fiction article on summaries for non-fiction such as biographies. It might be helpful to think about how you would summarize the book if you were writing for a summary on the book jacket of the back of the book, or if you were having to write a book summary for an English class, or an abstract for a journal article book review in which a summary is provided as part of a review. All of those require narrative and details but still succinct writing with an overview scope. You should be able to craft one or two paragraps of prose that summarizes the book's narrative arc. 4meter4 ( talk) 15:26, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Nominator has not made any movement on this since the above discussion. It's time to close this for failing WP:DYKCOMPLETE. 4meter4 ( talk) 15:36, 25 April 2024 (UTC) reply

I have. I've just been struggling to do so as I havent written a book article before. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 16:21, 25 April 2024 (UTC) reply

I took a re-look and I think the summary is now sufficiently in-depth to pass WP:DYKCOMPLETE. I would have preferred a paragraph structure with smoother prose, but that is no reason to hold up a DYK review. All other DYK criteria check out. However, portions of both the Alt1 and Alt2 hook facts are not currently in the article. The quote "nowhere near finished" is not in the article, and there is no mention of a friendship between Evanier and Kirby. For this reason, only the original hook can be promoted. 4meter4 ( talk) 16:37, 25 April 2024 (UTC) reply

@ 4meter4: I made a few new hooks as those arent the best. Also since ALT0 is wrong I rephrased it. Also ALT2 is included now. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 17:10, 25 April 2024 (UTC) reply
OlifanofmrTennant Please add citations directly after each hook fact. Any sentence with a fact in a hook must have a citation to pass DYK review. In just rechecking Alt2, the sentence with the hook fact lacks a citation and the text that's in quotes in the hook is not in quotes in the article. Is this a quote? If it is it needs to be in quotes in the article's prose. If it's not a quote then it should not be in quotes within the hook sentence. I'm not going to even look at the other hooks until you have fixed this one and can assure me all the necessary citations are in place. Ping me when you are ready. 4meter4 ( talk) 17:45, 25 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ 4meter4: its there, its the gaurdian source. But reguardless I used the citation again higher in the paragraph. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 17:52, 25 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ OlifanofmrTennant In looking at the Alt2 hook fact, it is not a quote of Evanier directly but it is a quote of The Guardian. The text needs to attribute it to The Guardian in quotes in both the article and the hook, or its a problem with WP:Plagiarism. This needs to be fixed. We can't promote an article with plagiarism issues. Now that I've seen this, I'm going to have to go through all the sources and make sure there aren't other issues of non-attributed text or close paraphrasing. I had trusted the original reviewer had done this, but I'm going to have to re-review with a careful eye on any copyright violations. In the mean time, please put the attributions for this quote in the article. Also, I was asking earlier for you to confirm that all the citations were in place for the many alt hooks you proposed. I don't want to have to keep coming back here and asking again for more citations. Every hook fact must have a citation immediately following the sentence of the hook fact. This may mean we duplicate citations in ways that we may not do when not featuring an article at DYK. This is one of those hoops that DYK requires, even if it seems redundant. 4meter4 ( talk) 19:12, 25 April 2024 (UTC) reply

New reviewer needed. I'm not seeing any more close paraphrasing, but I'd like a second set of eyes on this just to make sure I didn't miss anything. 4meter4 ( talk) 22:32, 29 April 2024 (UTC) reply

I can't see any either. Let's roll.-- Laun chba ller 09:09, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on March 12

Forever Young (horse)

Forever Young
Forever Young

Created by NinetyNineDragon ( talk). Self-nominated at 16:16, 12 March 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Forever Young (horse); consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page. reply

    • Comments: Well done for creating such an article. However, to make this article more presentable as I mentioned in the Talk area of the article that the Japanese references in the article need to be replaced with English. Both JBIS and Netkeiba have English and can readily be used as references.
    • The statistics needs to conform to what is used in the English wikipedia space. There are columns with abbreviations which as specific in Japanese form reader but for the US/English make no sense. Also the odds are not displayed as payout coefficients. Margins are in lengths or part of horse's posture (head, neck, nose etc...) Brudder Andrusha ( talk) 21:49, 12 March 2024 (UTC) reply
      • First of all, thank you very much for revising the article. The quality of the article cannot be decent without your help. Second, may I know whether there are any rules stating that English references are better than those which are not in English? For articles about Japanese stuff, isn't that Japanese references are more accurate and relevant?
      • Third, for your comment about the abbreviations in the statistics section, could you provide some good articles for my reference? You may guess that I am not that familiar with horse racing from my contributions (but obviously someone with limited knowledge cannot write this article). NinetyNineDragon ( talk) 15:39, 13 March 2024 (UTC) reply
  • This is a comment and not a review, but even as someone who's watched Uma Musume, I'm not a fan of the hook. It's more about Fujita or even the game itself than the horse, and the guidelines say that hooks that are only tangentially about the bolded article should be avoided. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 14:00, 13 March 2024 (UTC) reply
    • I believe the hook is definitely not tangentially about the article. The information in the hook is completely mentioned in the headline of the source (the Nikkan Sports article) I put above. I guess not everyone here knows Japanese so let me put a rough translations of the headline here: "[ Saudi Derby] Uma Musume's Fujita Susumu Got First Overseas Graded Race Victory, Owns Forever Young '[I] won'". If you google Japanese news articles about Forever Young, you will find it is not rare for them to mention Uma Musume at the same time.
    • If you think it is not generally interesting enough, is this better to you:
    'ALT1:' ... that someone wants Forever Young (pictured), the winner of the Saudi Derby, to be turned into a horse girl because he is owned by the CEO of CyberAgent? Source: https://www.inside-games.jp/article/2023/12/13/150914.html
I mean, even the source you provided (or at least the quote) focuses on the owner and not the horse itself. Having said that, ALT1 might be better and address my concerns, but the wording isn't the greatest given how vague the word "someone" is in this context. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 02:55, 14 March 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Full review needed, including hooks. Thank you. BlueMoonset ( talk) 18:55, 27 March 2024 (UTC) reply


General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: None required.

Overall: Thank you for this positive article about a racehorse. The picture is nice, too. Just two issues:

  • (1) Earwig picks up only one phrase: the track record for the distance by about two seconds. Please rephrase it, to avoid copyright violation..
  • Hooks: ALT0 is fine. We are talking about a racehorse here, which is not a person or a pet. In this context it is a sports icon and the property of an investor (Some of us may not like that, but that's not the point. The point is the facts). So we must compare it to articles about racing cars, racing bikes etc. where riders, owners and winnings get all the attention.
  • (2) In ALT1, the word "someone" is a bit weird, even a bit creepy. Maybe name them - or at least their trade or position?
  • Re article content: notability for this subject seems to be about the winning record, which is a good one in this case. and the winnings are tabled in full in the article. So no problem of content there.
  • I have given the article a minor copyedit, which does not affect DYK.

If you can resolve the above two issues, then this nomination should be good to go. Storye book ( talk) 11:16, 12 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Note: @ NinetyNineDragon: As of this edit on 16 April 2024, the article has had a number of new edits, but the above issues have not been addressed. Please resolve this? Thank you. Storye book ( talk) 11:12, 16 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Update: @ NinetyNineDragon: Points (1) and (2) above have still not been addressed. Please do that? Thank you. Storye book ( talk) 09:25, 23 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Personally I prefer ALT3 because (1) you wonder why on earth? and (2) there is less emphasis on his owner. Mary Mark Ockerbloom ( talk) 13:48, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Thank you, Mary Mark Ockerbloom, for resolving points 1 and 2. I have struck out those points above, and also ALT1. Your additions to the article have now produced more copyvio (quoted below). Please would you kindly rephrase it.

On March 30, Forever Young drew the outside, 11 gate for the 1,900-meter ... He broke well and jockey Ryusei Sakai let him take an outside position behind the leaders. As the field straightened into the stretch, South American Auto Bahn went to the front but could not withstand the relentless charge of the

  • Please remember, it is not good practice to copy and paste copyright source material into an article, and then try to rephrase it. You always end up with copyright bits remaining. The best way is to read it in the original, try to remember it, then write it in your own words in the article. If that is really too difficult, then copy it as a formal quotation into the article, with a citation at the end of it. DYK reviewers will usually spot any copyvio, so it is a waste of your own time and ours if you copy and paste with no quotation marks. No matter how experienced we are, we editors all have to work like that. (Of course, un-rephraseable words like proper names, with capital letters, long scientific terms, etc. are OK, and not counted as copyvio).
  • I am happy to accept ALTs 2 and 3 in good faith, as I cannot read the foreign-language citations. Storye book ( talk) 15:43, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Hello @ Storye book: The copyvios were introduced by someone else, but I have rephrased them since that is clearly needed to move this forward. (Also I confirmed alts 2 and 3 using google translate.) Mary Mark Ockerbloom ( talk) 16:14, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Thank you, Mary Mark Ockerbloom, for correcting the above. Unfortunately, now that the larger piece of copyvio has been removed, Earwig has found another smaller one: "under rider Yusaku Oka, the colt jogged in the one-mile chute for about 20 minutes before taking a". Please rephrase it, or change it to a quote? Thanks. Storye book ( talk) 17:33, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 2

World Central Kitchen aid convoy attack

Created by Makeandtoss ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 37 past nominations.

Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.

Makeandtoss ( talk) 13:41, 3 April 2024 (UTC). reply

My objection is now outdated. Events and sources are moving. starship .paint ( RUN) 02:44, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
The following discussion has been closed. Please do not modify it.


  • Objection - the content in the hook three consecutive missiles fired by an Israeli drone cannot be presented in Wikivoice using this Haaretz source, which said that the information comes from Israeli defense sources. Haaretz has not independently reported the information (without attribution). starship .paint ( RUN) 00:05, 4 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Starship.paint: The same material has been covered in RS including NYT, Al Jazeera, BBC, and Bellingcat; and in visual investigations not just reporting articles. All RS have provided the same information about three missiles being shot. I don't see why information from RS requires attribution, especially given that all these RS agree on the same exact point. Makeandtoss ( talk) 08:54, 4 April 2024 (UTC) reply
They agree on the same point, but they don’t seem to have independently verified it. Perhaps something like “three separate vehicles” will be closer to having verified coverage? FortunateSons ( talk) 09:48, 4 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ FortunateSons: They did verify it themselves -i.e independently- using visual data, please read the Bellingcat, AJ and BBC investigations. Makeandtoss ( talk) 10:01, 4 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Source article links please. starship .paint ( RUN) 10:08, 4 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Makeandtoss: - you are assuming too much of the sources. (1) Bellingcat does not say three consecutive strikes, they simply say Israeli airstrike, Bellingcat cannot confirm that it was missiles or that they were even fired by a drone: Although not possible to be certain without fragments of the munition itself, the WCK vehicles bear the hallmarks of a precision strike by inert or low-yield missiles ... In order to successfully accomplish a laser guided strike it is necessary for a platform, such as a drone, to “illuminate” the target with a laser while the missile is launched. (2) BBC writes that the evidence suggests there was more than one strike, but this is not confirmation, BBC's experts also do not confirm that it was a drone strike: Chris Cobb-Smith, a former British Army officer and ex-UN weapons inspector, said the attack was probably the result of drone-launched Spike missiles ... Justin Crump, a former British Army officer who runs Sibylline - a risk intelligence company - agreed. He says the attack "was likely drone-launched and targeted". He added the strike had probably been caused by a missile, rather than a bomb or mortar. (3) Al Jazeera goes the furthest, their article text says The shelling targeted three vehicles belonging to WCK, one at a time, but if you read the article text, there is no mention of drone missiles, instead they say: Analysis of images of the second and third targeted vehicles showed signs of a projectile entering from the top and exiting through the bottom, suggesting that the cars were targeted from the air. Now, Al Jazeera's image does mention "drone strikes" and missiles, but I find it peculiar that they didn't mention (or even attempt to explain) it in the article text. The sources are simply weaker than you portray them to be. None of them confirm, all of them are simply suggesting / probably / likely etc. starship .paint ( RUN) 11:55, 4 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Can I suggest some edits to the hook to make it clearer what happened? I'd suggest something like Humanitarian and aid organizations suspended their operations in the Gaza Strip after seven World Central Kitchen aid workers were killed when their marked cars on a preapproved route were bombed by Israeli drones. I think its really important to make clear they were in marked cars, they were also on a route approved by the Israeli military. Makeandtoss what do you think? Also have any additional sources been published that would resolve the dissagreement above? If not maybe a third party could be involved to help resolve if the sourcing meets Wikipedia's rules. John Cummings ( talk) 13:48, 4 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Please note that this is also nominated at ITN. It can only reach the main page through one of the possible venues. At this point, there isn't consensus to post to ITN, but that can change. Schwede 66 02:12, 5 April 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Starship.paint: @ John Cummings: Thanks for commenting. Starship.paint, building on our discussion on the talk page, I think we can both agree to this ALT1 version: ... that the attack on World Central Kitchen convoy in the Gaza Strip, which killed seven aid workers, was likely a result of three consecutive missiles fired by an Israeli drone? Makeandtoss ( talk) 14:07, 5 April 2024 (UTC) reply

I don't think I can add anything more than what starship.paint and John Cummings have said. Any hook we run on this topic should be widely supported across a cross section of media, and be independently verified. Otherwise its likely to be challenged at Wikipedia:Main Page/Errors. We need a hook that won't get pulled. John made some good suggestions. 4meter4 ( talk) 02:29, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Makeandtoss, 4meter4, John Cummings, and Narutolovehinata5: I've hatted my objection above due to recent events: the IDF's admission, which I believe supports this hook: starship .paint ( RUN) 02:54, 6 April 2024 (UTC)@ FortunateSons: - forgot to ping. starship .paint ( RUN) 02:58, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Starship.paint: Thanks for the ping, I agree that the objection is now out of date. FortunateSons ( talk) 07:51, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply

ALT2 ... that the Israel Defense Forces have accepted responsibility for killing seven World Central Kitchen aid workers in targeted drone strikes that destroyed the aid workers' cars, one by one? Source 1: Associated Press Source 2: CBS News Source 3: BBC News starship .paint ( RUN) 02:54, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply

I would be ok with this as long as there are no objections to featuring violent content at DYK. There has been some pushback of late against featuring potentially disturbing hooks. That said, this hook appears to have wide support in media, and is so widely reported I don’t think an argument for censoring would be successful. 4meter4 ( talk) 02:59, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Well, our main page constantly features potentially disturbing content, so I don't see why this can't be, either. Right now, our ITN section: A severe earthquake strikes near Hualien City, Taiwan ... In Syria, an Israeli airstrike kills 16 people at the Iranian consulate in Damascus, including brigadier general Mohammad Reza Zahedi ... A bus falls from a bridge in Limpopo, South Africa, killing 45 people ... The Francis Scott Key Bridge in the U.S. city of Baltimore collapses after being hit by a container ship. starship .paint ( RUN) 06:08, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
DYK and ITN have different goals. In addition, the issues with IP hooks have never really been about violence but rather tone and POV. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 06:23, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
One might consider, is the problem Wikipedia's "tone and POV", or does the event inherently make one side look bad? I'd say the answer is provided by the BBC: There are also moments, like the last few days in the Middle East, when events leave belligerents and their allies at a crossroads with big decisions to make ... The killing of foreign aid workers in Gaza might finally exhaust the considerable patience of Israel's allies, led by the United States. and Reuters: the killing of a group of aid workers by an Israeli air strike summed up both the dire humanitarian crisis and the lack of a clear way out of a conflict that is leaving Israel increasingly isolated. The attack on Monday night that killed seven staff of the World Central Kitchen (WCK) aid group, including six foreigners, has angered even some of Israel's closest allies, adding to growing pressure for an end to the fighting. starship .paint ( RUN) 07:09, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Starship.paint: ALT2 doesn't really sound interesting, but more like a news headline; do you have any other alternatives? Makeandtoss ( talk) 10:15, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Makeandtoss I don't think it's going to be possible to run a different kind of hook without being accused of trivializing the event. This would probably pull the hook into Wikipedia:Main Page/Errors. Optics for an event like this are going to force us to keep the main event front and center in the hook. As such I don't see there being any meaningfully different hooks passing DYK review. Alt2 is probably our best option. 4meter4 ( talk) 12:18, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
An admission to killing seven aid workers in targeted strikes ... not interesting?! It is no less interesting than the originally proposed hook, Makeandtoss. starship .paint ( RUN) 12:51, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Starship.paint: @ 4meter4: If there is support for ALT2 then I would go for it. Makeandtoss ( talk) 12:55, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Approving hook ALT2 per WP:CONSENSUS opinion. Article appears to be compliant with all DYK review criteria (newness, length, inline citations, NPOV, etc.) Hook fact is widely supported and independently verified in many sources. Promoter will need to check whether this gets featured at ITN. If it does, we can't feature it at DYK because it will have already been on the main page. 4meter4 ( talk) 13:02, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Not so fast. This article has been moved twice in the last 24 hours. It should probably stabilise first.-- Laun chba ller 13:06, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Not yet, the Israeli explanation of events hasn't been fully added to the article. I didn't have time to do it yesterday. But, I can probably add it now. starship .paint ( RUN) 13:11, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
The article is stable and was moved without consensus. As for the Israeli explanation of events, its already in the article, the expansion of it doesn't affect moving forward with the DYK anyway. Makeandtoss ( talk) 13:14, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Makeandtoss Page moves whether with or without consensus are a clear sign of instability. I would suggest not getting in a back and forth over issues like this, because if you argue its only likely to tank the DYK approval. @ Launchballer I hear you, but from a DYK reviewer standpoint this is ready to go. There's nothing more on our checklist for the reviewer to do, and the nominee has done everything they need to do. Obviously, the promoter will need to evaluate stability because it is a current event. Due to the backlog there will be a natural signigicant delay anyway before this gets put into prep. I think it best that we leave it to the promoter to determine when its stable enough to move it into the queue. That's not something we need to worry about from the DYK evaluator standpoint. We can trust in the promoting admin to evaluate that. If it hangs out in the approved hook area for a while everything should be fine. 4meter4 ( talk) 13:20, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ 4meter4: There is no back and forth here; I reverted the latest page move because it was undiscussed and because multiple editors on the talk page agreed as well. The article is stable but one or two more days of waiting will not hurt as you said. Makeandtoss ( talk) 13:31, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
No, Makeandtoss, the article's Israeli explanation is incomplete. This will become apparent when I add the content (I am writing it right now). starship .paint ( RUN) 13:21, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Done. starship .paint ( RUN) 13:34, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Both of you need to quit or I will have to pull the DYK tick. The article has had some instability issues as is typical of a current event. The article is likely to be edited heavily as new information is released. Any promoting admin will need to monitor the stability of the article before promoting. This means that if there are content disputes, edit wars, page moves, etc. the article will have to remain in the approved section until all that settles. I would suggest a minimum of two weeks of calm (ie no content reversions in the article's editing history, no arguments on the talk page, no page moves) before the article is featured at DYK. Best. 4meter4 ( talk) 13:46, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Given the concerns about stability above and the other issues, it probably wouldn't be safe to mark this as approved until at least a couple of weeks from now. Once the article has stabilized, it can probably be given a fresh look. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 22:24, 7 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Narutolovehinata5 Have your concerns been assuaged?-- Laun chba ller 12:27, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
If the article has stabilized then, yes, this is ready for a fresh review. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 13:15, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Launchballer and Narutolovehinata5 currently tagged for a formal title change discussion. Stability is therefore still an issue. I don't think this needs a formal re-review. I already did a competent review. Someone just needs to check for stability and once that has been established, Alt2 can be ticked. 4meter4 ( talk) 13:20, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
After a prolonged discussion resulting in a move, I think it is safe to say that the article is now stable. Hook edited accordingly. Makeandtoss ( talk) 10:11, 26 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Reviewer needed now that article has stabilized and the hooks reflect the new article name. BlueMoonset ( talk) 03:56, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply
If stability is the only barrier and this has now stabilised, then this is good to go.-- Laun chba ller 09:47, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 5

Axel Downard-Wilke

Axel Downard-Wilke presenting on Wikipedia's homepage while the homepage featured a video he was in
Axel Downard-Wilke presenting on Wikipedia's homepage while the homepage featured a video he was in
Moved to mainspace by Marshelec ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 5 past nominations.

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Marshelec ( talk) 04:03, 7 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Not "recent", per WP:DYKHOOK: "The hook should include a definite fact that is unlikely to change". Try "March 2024" instead. Otherwise, nice article (although I'm not quite sure how comfortable I am actually reviewing this, given I'm the one that put the hook there!)-- Laun chba ller 08:31, 8 April 2024 (UTC) reply
    Amended hook. Marshelec ( talk) 08:49, 8 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Full review needed.-- Laun chba ller 08:51, 8 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Actually, I'm really sorry to be so anal about this, but there is an outside chance there could be more than one this year, so it should really give the month.-- Laun chba ller 09:21, 8 April 2024 (UTC) reply
I understand the requirement, and could add the month, but in this case I believe the year is sufficient. As a member of the affiliate that organised the Wikicon, I know that this was the annual Wikicon - ie the only one for 2024. The next one is planned to be in Christchurch in 2025. See m:wiki/Wikimedia_Aotearoa_New_Zealand#Activity:_Annual_National_WikiConference for verification. Marshelec ( talk) 06:38, 9 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Fair enough. Full review needed.-- Laun chba ller 07:57, 9 April 2024 (UTC) reply
BlueMoonset This is the oldest fully unreviewed nom. Given that I put that hook on the front page, does WP:DYKRR prohibit me from reviewing it?-- Laun chba ller 14:24, 18 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Launchballer, it seems to me that you're involved. The nomination isn't even two weeks old; I wouldn't worry about "oldest fully unreviewed nom"; it will get picked up by someone else soon enough. BlueMoonset ( talk) 19:47, 18 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Article is new and long enough. Sourcing looks good and Earwig raises no concerns. Hook is interesting and sourced in the article. Photo is clear, licensing looks good, and works amazingly with the hook (I'd love to see this as the image hook). QPQ done so we are good to go. PCN02WPS ( talk | contribs) 15:43, 20 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Ron's Place

Painting from outsider art flat Ron's Place
Painting from outsider art flat Ron's Place

Source: BBC: "Now, supporters of Ron’s Place, including singer Jarvis Cocker, are trying to raise money to buy his old flat and turn it into a space for artists." The Guardian: "Catherine Croft, the director of the Twentieth Century Society, said Ron’s Place was '20th century heritage unlike any other, the first example of outsider art to be nationally listed'."

Created by Jonathan Deamer ( talk).

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Jonathan Deamer ( talk) 17:39, 11 April 2024 (UTC). reply

Minotaur from Ron's Place
Minotaur from Ron's Place
  • Article is new enough and long enough. It is well-sourced, neutral, presentable, and BLP-compliant. Earwig checks out. Images are freely licensed (I'm assuming these are eligible under Commons:COM:FOP UK as a public interior and works of artistic craftsmanship). The hook is cited and interesting. I've added the Minotaur image as an option per the talk page discussion. Both images are clear at a small size. QPQ has been done. gobonobo + c 12:37, 12 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 6

Kiro Gligorov

Kiro Gligorov
Kiro Gligorov
Improved to Good Article status by StephenMacky1 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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StephenMacky1 ( talk) 16:31, 9 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article recently updated to GA-status. Hook mentioned in the article and the article has no issues with copyright. Good to go. - Toadboy123 ( talk) 08:54, 11 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 7

Mad honey

Spoonful of mad honey
Spoonful of mad honey
Created by Gobonobo ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 114 past nominations.

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gobonobo + c 07:21, 14 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • To be honest, I really don't understand the main hook or ALT1. Why are "giant" and "make" in italics? It kind of looks like the word order got scrambled. Pinging Gobonobo in case this is an accident that passed unnoticed. Oh , my bad, it's a joke, I didn't read the comment. But given that users reading the hook won't have the privilege of seeing the comment, this should probably be tagged with Humor. Cremastra ( talk) 20:19, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply
    • Full review needed. Striking both original hook and ALT1; parentheses are not allowed as part of hooks (except for "pictured" and the like). BlueMoonset ( talk) 03:44, 17 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Long enough, new enough. ALT2 short enough, interesting, and AGF sourced (shame about the other two). No neutrality issues found, no maintenance templates found. There's one quote in the article which is two paragraphs, only one of which is cited; I say it's obvious that the cite covers both, so I would pass this, but for the presence of single-sentence paragraphs which should be expanded per WP:DYKCOMPLETE.-- Laun chba ller 10:42, 19 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Launchballer: I've added a reference to the first half of the quote and moved a sentence. I'm not sure which other paragraphs strike you as not DYKCOMPLETE, I think the only single-sentence paragraph now is the one on legality. I could find no other (reliable) sources addressing legality, though I think it worth mentioning that it is banned in South Korea. gobonobo + c 16:10, 19 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Looking at the source, that could easily be expanded. I wonder if it's worth knocking it and the paragraph together into a general 'Usage' section?-- Laun chba ller 16:42, 19 April 2024 (UTC) reply
I could use some clarification. I'm not sure which paragraph you are referring to or which source. Is the issue a matter of how sections/paragraphs are arranged or is there an aspect that is not reasonably complete? This source mentions the 2005 ban in South Korea but makes no mention of legality in other countries. gobonobo + c 17:51, 19 April 2024 (UTC) reply
I did mean that source. What I meant was that the source says "According to a report, South Korea alone imported over 8000 kg of mad honey from Nepal during 2003–04 and then, further import was banned by the Korean government in 2005." The 'imported over 8000 kg' bit could go into the article. I'm not holding the nom up for it though, and given that I've merged it into the above section myself I can pass this.-- Laun chba ller 15:42, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Lewis W. Green

Lewis W. Green
Lewis W. Green
Improved to Good Article status by PCN02WPS ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 76 past nominations.

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PCN02WPS ( talk | contribs) 16:32, 7 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation

QPQ: No - Not done
Overall: @ PCN02WPS: Nice work on this article. The copyvio detector highlighted a few phrases, but they seem to be proper names or common phrases. Everything else checks out policy-wise. Just waiting on the 2 QPQs. Epicgenius ( talk) 17:54, 8 April 2024 (UTC) reply

  • Missing QPQs are required to be supplied within seven days of a review or comment pointing out that they are missing; it's now been twelve. Please submit your QPQs this weekend. Thank you. BlueMoonset ( talk) 13:59, 20 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Ernest Prestwich, Harrogate War Memorial

Harrogate War Memorial
Harrogate War Memorial
Created by Storye book ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 103 past nominations.

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Storye book ( talk) 08:37, 9 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Re Earwig's comparison of Harrogate War Memorial: it only picks up proper names and a quotation beginning "one of the first British servicewomen...", which is properly signified as a quotation, and attributed in the article. As far as I am aware, there is no poor paraphrasing or copyvio in that article. Storye book ( talk) 09:40, 11 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • As I understand it, isolated, short, common phrases are de minimis, and do not count as copyvio. No big-ass lawyer hoping to make his fortune off us would pick on that one. it would cost him money when it got laughed out of court. However, just to keep the peace I have rephrased it for you. Storye book ( talk) 15:20, 11 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • ALT1: ... that Harrogate War Memorial (pictured), by Ernest Prestwich, names 1163 casualties of the First and Second World Wars, of whom 300 have unknown graves, and the youngest was 15 years old? (source as ALT0 above).
  • I have removed the dodgy numbers from the article. The plaques were removed, rewritten and replaced in 1948, and who knows whether they have been corrected (or just misread) since then. The name-counts were probably all correct in their day. Harrogate Civic Society counted them last, and they had two people spending five years on the study of all the war dead mentioned, ending in 2023, so they have the best chance of being up to date and correct. Storye book ( talk) 15:13, 11 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 8

George Henry Jenkins

Jenkins in 1901
Jenkins in 1901
Created by ITBF ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 21 past nominations.

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ITBF ( talk) 11:58, 15 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Length, date, hook, image, qpq, close paraphrase checks out. -- Soman ( talk) 00:33, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Agnes Kimball

Agnes Kimball (1912)
Agnes Kimball (1912)
  • ... that although Agnes Kimball (pictured) was a popular recording artist of opera and musical theatre, she never appeared as a singing actress on the stage? Source: Kutsch, K. J.; Riemens, Leo (2003). "Kimball, Agnes". In Rost, Hansjörg (ed.). Grosses Sängerlexikon. Vol. Kainz–Menkes. K. G. Saur Verlag. p. 2380.
Created by 4meter4 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 73 past nominations.

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4meter4 ( talk) 02:42, 10 April 2024 (UTC). reply

Interesting life and work, on fine sources, offline sources accepted AGF. The hook works for me. The image is licensed and an excellent illustration not only of the person but also the period at a glance. I have a few points about the article that you may consider, irrelevant for DYK.
  1. Her name. I would not call her Kimball until she is married.
  2. I would - as you know - whenever a composition has an article, mention the composer only by last name without link, to avoid two links in a row, and to link the more specific thing. People who really don't know Rossini can find that in the Stabat Mater article, - Stabat Mater as a standard Latin phrase like Magnificat not needing italics.
  3. GSL - I would link to Großes Sängerlexikon, - as written, with the two authors, it sounds as if two people had arrived at the same view independently. I strongly recommend to use the actual link to page in the latest edition.
    Kutsch, K. J.; Riemens, Leo (2012). "Kimball, Agnes". Großes Sängerlexikon (in German) (4th ed.). De Gruyter. p. 2380. ISBN  978-3-59-844088-5.
  4. I have a hard time with the wording "They had one daughter together" - why not "They had a daughter"?
  5. Second image: I'd find it better on the right side, making her "turn in" (the posture rather than the eyes), and use standard upright size.
  6. I am not sure that "beautifully conducted" is the right term for "schön geführt" talking about voices, but am too unfamiliar with such technical terms in English to recommend something better.
Again thank you for much detail about a forgotten singer! -- Gerda Arendt ( talk) 14:18, 10 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Gerda Arendt Thanks for the review Gerda. I incorporated most of your suggestions. In terms of the translation of "schön geführt" would "beautifully executed" be a better translation than "beautifully conducted"? You are after all a native German speaker. 4meter4 ( talk) 15:09, 10 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Yes, I'm a native German speaker, but unfamiliar with the terms to describe voices in English. "geführt" suggests "in control" and an even production of lines without register breaks, but is there one word for it in English. I heard "gut geführt" more often than "schön geführt", btw. -- Gerda Arendt ( talk) 15:42, 10 April 2024 (UTC) reply
I think "beautifully controlled" would be a fine translation for English speakers. I've made that change per your input. 4meter4 ( talk) 15:47, 10 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Thank you! -- Gerda Arendt ( talk) 16:19, 10 April 2024 (UTC) reply

William F. Fiedler

William F. Fiedler
William F. Fiedler
Created by Toadboy123 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 30 past nominations.

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Toadboy123 ( talk) 06:20, 8 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article eligibility and quality check out, as does the hook itself. No evidence of copyvio. You do need a second QPQ though, as DYK is currently in backlog mode: editors with more than 20 past nominations need two QPQs at the moment. Generalissima ( talk) (it/she) 06:35, 9 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Mounir Akbache

Akbache rabbiting the 2022 FBK Games 1500 metres
Akbache rabbiting the 2022 FBK Games 1500 metres
  • ... that after failing to qualify for prestigious races as an athlete, Mounir Akbache (pictured) became a rabbit? Source: In "Mounir Akbache, un coureur au service des autres" (in French), "Why did you choose to be a hare rather than a runner? I was a good athlete [...] but it didn't allow me to enter the world's biggest races. Today, I have the opportunity to be on the starting line alongside an Olympic or world champion. I'm living exceptional moments that I could never have experienced as an individual."
In L'Equipe (in French), ""Since what they had done two years ago, it was no longer a myth to aim for the world record," jubilated Mounir Akbache, whose first world record as a hare was set."
    • Reviewed:
    • Comment: This is my first DYK nomination, open to feedback.
Created by Habst ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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Habst ( talk) 00:29, 8 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article is just barely long enough, but satisfies other requirements. I don't see any copyvio or outstanding issues (though I would recommend adding a second sentence to the lede). The hook checks out in its current state, but I think it's a bit excessively in length. How about something like "... that after failing to qualify for prestigious races, Mounir Akbache became a rabbit?" I think you can make this a great quirky hook by playing on the rabbit line without actually explaining what that is. Makes people wanna click to learn more. Generalissima ( talk) (it/she) 06:42, 9 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Generalissima, thank you for your feedback.  Done I expanded the article lede, and edited the hook (only part I added onto your suggestion is the phrase "as an athlete" to emphasize the distinction between running solo vs as a rabbit, but you are free to remove it if you think it's awkward). -- Habst ( talk) 10:05, 9 April 2024 (UTC) reply
I like the contrast created between athlete and rabbit here, it's good wordplay. Generalissima ( talk) (it/she) 13:25, 9 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 9

Attica (1974 film)

Moved to mainspace by GamerPro64 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 11 past nominations.

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GamerPro64 01:55, 10 April 2024 (UTC). reply

Phillip Eng

Created by Spaghettifier ( talk).

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Spaghettifier ( talk) 13:44, 9 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • - overall, passes the criteria. Definitely an interesting hook too. I think this is ready. Bneu2013 ( talk) 00:33, 10 April 2024 (UTC) reply


Articles created/expanded on April 10

V. Kerry Smith

  • ... that environmental economist V. Kerry Smith has been described as a "Renaissance Man of Economics"? Source: [14] See "critical acclaim" tab: "‘Kerry Smith is a Renaissance Man of Economics. This book represents the master at work, drawing implications from research that traverses four decades of scholarship, the economics of environmental risk comes alive in ideas that scale, policies that are cost-effective, and insights that generalize to situations beyond risk. Anyone who wants to learn, or is just curious about pathbreaking economic work, should pick up this insightful and encyclopedic collection of articles.’ – John List, University of Chicago, US"
Created by Malinaccier ( talk).

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Malinaccier ( talk) 01:30, 11 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article length and age are fine, no copyvio or plagiarism concerns (Some common phrases recur between sources and the article when checked with Earwig, but no more than expected), reliable sources are used. Hook seems fine to me, if a bit dry.
This is one of my first QPQ attempts, so apologies if I've messed up!
Maximilian775 ( talk) 13:40, 11 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Just a note that the above review was originally posted on the article's talk page.-- Laun chba ller 21:21, 11 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Li Zhaoxing

Li Zhaoxing
Li Zhaoxing
5x expanded by Toadboy123 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 31 past nominations.

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Toadboy123 ( talk) 13:33, 10 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: 5X expanded recently; all cited; hook is very interesting; picture is under CCA4; waiting for QPQ so this should be afterwards GTG. Makeandtoss ( talk) 16:09, 10 April 2024 (UTC) reply

GTG now . Makeandtoss ( talk) 09:31, 11 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 11

287 Broadway

287 Broadway
287 Broadway
5x expanded by Epicgenius ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 649 past nominations.

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Epicgenius ( talk) 13:40, 11 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Newly 5x expanded. Article is well-sourced, presentable, neutral, and BLP-compliant. Earwig looks fine and no close paraphrasing was detected. Images are freely licensed. The hooks are all cited and interesting. The hook image renders well. For ALT3 and the related quote in the article, the version of the AIA Guide that I'm looking at reads " most succulent cast-iron street-show in all New York". QPQs are needed. Excellent article. gobonobo + c 16:54, 11 April 2024 (UTC) reply
    • Thanks for the review. I will do the QPQs within the next few days, but for now I've fixed ALT3. Epicgenius ( talk) 20:07, 11 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 12

1916 Warsaw City Council election

Decree calling on Warsaw residents to register to vote in the 1916 City Council polls
Decree calling on Warsaw residents to register to vote in the 1916 City Council polls
Moved to mainspace by Soman ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 373 past nominations.

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Soman ( talk) 12:29, 12 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • I don't have access to that source, nor would I be able to read it, but the hook is good, and the article is in decent condition, no copyvio or glaring issues that I see. I would only recommend wiki-linking curiae, as I have never heard that term used like that before. QPQs check out. Generalissima ( talk) (it/she) 06:17, 14 April 2024 (UTC) reply
    • Thanks, I added link to curiae in the hook. -- Soman ( talk) 10:16, 14 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 13

Thomas Figures, Michael Figures

Created by Muboshgu ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 529 past nominations.

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–  Muboshgu ( talk) 00:25, 13 April 2024 (UTC). Both articles: reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: Yes
  • Interesting: Yes
  • Other problems: No - I would go with ALT1. ALT0 might cause issues at WP:ERRORS because technically it was only two KKK members who were prosecuted, not the whole group.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: @ Muboshgu: Nice work. Everything looks good except for the QPQ. Epicgenius ( talk) 14:10, 16 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Frank Croxton

5x expanded by 4meter4 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 74 past nominations.

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4meter4 ( talk) 00:47, 20 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting: Yes
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Expanded 5x since 13 April. Article is neutral and well-sourced. AGF on offline sources. Copyvio check good. QPQ complete. I find ALT1 more interesting. Riley1012 ( talk) 20:35, 24 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Me at the zoo

Me at the zoo
Improved to Good Article status by Davest3r08 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 6 past nominations.

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Davest3r08 >:3 ( talk) 01:06, 14 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: @ Davest3r08: Everything checks out here. Just waiting on the one QPQ. Nice work! 🐱FatCat96🐱 Chat with Cat 16:04, 14 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Sitdown strike

Sitdown strikers in the 1937 General Motors strike in Flint Michigan
Sitdown strikers in the 1937 General Motors strike in Flint Michigan
  • ... that there were 583 sitdown strikes in the United States from 1936 to 1939, affecting over a half-million workers? Source:
  • US Department of Labor, Division of Industrial Relations (May 1939). "Analysis of Strikes in 1938". Monthly Labor Review: Table 16.
  • US Department of Labor, Division of Industrial Relations (May 1940). "Strikes in 1939". Monthly Labor Review: 28-29.

Source 1 states: "The number of sit-down strikes in 1936, 1937, and 1938 by months, with the number' of workers involved, is given in table 16."

Table 16 lists the same numbers of strikes given in source 2 below. It lists workers involved as follows: 1936: 87,817 1937: 398,117 1938: 28,749

Source 2 states: "In 1936 there were 48 so-called sit-down strikes. In 1937 the number increased to 477, but by 1938 they decreased to 52. There were only 6 strikes during 1939 in which all or part of the strikers remained at their workplaces for one or more days after ceasing work. he number of workers idle in connection with these 6 strikes was 3,416, although the number participating in the sit-down or stay-in feature is not known."

This sentence involves a very encyclopedic form of synthesis in that it adds numbers from two consecutive studies by the same source. Similar synthesis, but without inclusion of the latter number appears in Sidney Fine's book Sitdown, cited in the article.

5x expanded by Carwil ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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Carwil ( talk) 16:00, 13 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • QPQ not needed, expansion is recent and article is long enough. Hook is properly sourced. However, Earwig detected a 43.2% similarity. Before I pass this nom, I think it would be suitable to trim down some quotes, if possible. Davest3r08 >:3 ( talk) 22:33, 14 April 2024 (UTC) reply
I've reviewed the Earwig similarity report, which highlights passages that are either in quotes or comprise part of citations (including the journal name and another cited article). The longest passage is the summary of the Matignon Agreement, a quotation I don't think I can improve upon. I've revised the article to reduce the amount of material directly quoted from Torigian and from Adamic, but keep Adamic's longer definition and Torigian's POV that the mid-1930s strikes were a distinct phase of using the tactic. Let me know whether you think these changes sufficiently reduce the reliance of direct quotations.-- Carwil ( talk) 13:29, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply
FYI, here's the Earwig similarity report with bibliography temporarily removed.
Fair rationale. Passing nomination. LunaEcplise (for the record I'm Davest3r08) ( talk) 20:33, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Bajroqi Miⱨnat

November 7, 1930 issue of Bajroqi Miⱨnat
November 7, 1930 issue of Bajroqi Miⱨnat
Moved to mainspace by Soman ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 376 past nominations.

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Soman ( talk) 10:27, 14 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting: Yes
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Looks good. AGF on the offline source. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 15:39, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply

You're Losing Me

Improved to Good Article status by Gained ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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Gained ( talk) 15:17, 14 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Date of GA status, close paraphrase check checks out. No QPQ needed. That said, I'd encourage reflection on ALT hook, considering that Swift was a major international star when the album was released it is not unusual that the song was shared widely. Perhaps the fact that the album was sold at a specific event should be highlighted. -- Soman ( talk) 15:43, 14 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Hey Soman, I made two alternative hooks with the added location of where the CD was sold, both are just arranged differently. Does this suffice? Gained ( talk) 10:43, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply
for ALT1/ALT2, ok good, my preference is ALT2. -- Soman ( talk) 10:55, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 14

C1 Espresso

Created by Panamitsu ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 38 past nominations.

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Panamitsu (talk) 09:26, 14 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Great work on this article! The hook is cited and interesting, and the sourcing is robust. I fixed a few typos in the article. Cremastra ( talk) 20:43, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 15

Chestnut Street Opera House

1880 sketch
1880 sketch
  • ... that the model movie theater at the Chestnut Street Opera House (pictured) in Philadelphia aimed to attract "the very best people" but closed within the year? Source: "Made for the Masses with an Appeal to the Classes": The Triangle Film Corporation and the Failure of Highbrow Film Culture https://www.jstor.org/stable/3661092
    • Reviewed:
Created by TSventon ( talk) and 4meter4 ( talk). Nominated by TSventon ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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TSventon ( talk) 15:18, 20 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • New enough and long enough. Nominator is QPQ-exempt. Hook fact checks out. No textual issues. Ready to go. Sammi Brie (she/her •  tc) 19:14, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Comment. I'm not sure being a short lived movie theatre is all that interesting or hooky. Here are a few alt hooks that I think are better. I also added a pic. @ Sammi Brie can ypu take a look at these please? 4meter4 ( talk) 12:56, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Comment 4meter4 I was amused by "the very best people" in Alt0. I had something like Alt2 in mind in case an alt was needed. Alt1 could possibly be shorter, hopefully I got the legal jargon right. The picture is slightly skew, it would be nice to rotate it if it went to main page. TSventon ( talk) 13:22, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • @ 4meter4, I was just giving my opinion, I am happy for Sammi Brie to choose whatever she likes. On the larger picture, the black border at the top slopes, which suggests that the scan could be skew, but damage could also be involved. TSventon ( talk) 13:52, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • It probably is a skew issue, probably for paper damage, which might be fixable especially for this crop. The image is acceptable in license. New ALT1 is fine (AGF). ALT2 is fine and checks out to source. I don't like the wording on ALT1 with "Pennsylvania" twice. 4meter4, I had to make a lot of small copy tweaks to the large addition that was made; you should read MOS:DATECOMMA. Sammi Brie (she/her •  tc) 17:47, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Sammi Brie Thank you for the copy edit. I appreciate your help. As for the wording... this isn't a case of improper word redundancy. There isn't a way to remove the word Pennsylvania as the proper names of both these organizations include that word. The University of Pennsylvania is the University of Pennsylvania, and the Supreme Court of Pennsylvania is the Supreme Court of Pennsylvania. If we remove the word Pennsylvania from the university it could be any university rather than the well know Ivy League school. Likewise, if we remove it from the court, readers would likely assume it was the national Supreme Court and not a state Supreme Court. I don't see any way of rewording this without it ending up in Wikipedia:Main Page/Errors and loosing 'hookiness' for lack of a better word. 4meter4 ( talk) 18:12, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
I agree—it's redundant and looks off but is needed to avoid obvious confusion. It's kind of why, if I were a promoter, I would skip it. But I want the promoter to choose the hook. Sammi Brie (she/her •  tc) 18:25, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
That's fair. The wording may read awkwardly to some people even if it is technically a necessary redundancy. I personally would pick it anyway because I believe it is the most interesting fact (to me anyway) among the hook choices. I guess it depends on whether one prefers style or substance (not that the other hooks are lacking substantive value). 4meter4 ( talk) 18:36, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Stonewall Inn

Exterior of the Stonewall Inn
Exterior of the Stonewall Inn
Improved to Good Article status by Epicgenius ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 650 past nominations.

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Epicgenius ( talk) 12:21, 15 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Ooh, Stonewall! Article eligibility and condition checks out, became a good article a few days ago. I like the ALT0 here best, though I would suggest linking those names. Assuming good faith on the sourcing. Obviously, going to have to wait til the QPQ is resolved to officially check this off. And I think June 28 would be a wonderful day for this hook. Generalissima ( talk) (it/she) 06:18, 16 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Frederick Kimble

Moved to mainspace by Hawkeye7 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 426 past nominations.

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Hawkeye7 (discuss) 09:43, 15 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article and hook look good and hook is interesting, although I personally would link "general". I can't understand the source so I'll approve with good faith. — Panamitsu (talk) 10:12, 18 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Jan Klán

A Hawk 75 in the livery of the Groupe de Chasse II/5
A Hawk 75 in the livery of the Groupe de Chasse II/5
Created by Chetsford ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 150 past nominations.

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Chetsford ( talk) 16:18, 15 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: I know that your said there's a QPQ in progress. Nonetheless, I decided to take the initiative to review it. In terms of dogfighting history, this is certainly a worthy niche to be promoted as a DYK. NeverBeGameOver ( talk) 00:02, 17 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Thanks for your patience, NeverBeGameOver. QPQ now done. Chetsford ( talk) 05:39, 18 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Cool cool. NeverBeGameOver ( talk) 05:56, 18 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Debbie Currie

Created by Launchballer ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 217 past nominations.

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Laun chba ller 10:46, 15 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • QPQ done. Hook is interesting and inline cited to The Independent, which is RS. Article is new enough (created April 15), long enough, and NPOV. Earwig returns 2.9% (violation unlikely). No image. Looks good! Chetsford ( talk) 05:39, 18 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Mum (sea lion)

Created by Panamitsu ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 39 past nominations.

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Panamitsu (talk) 05:52, 15 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article is new enough, long enough, well sourced, and clear of copyvio. The hook is interesting and sourced, perhaps say Otago, New Zealand, but it probably isn't needed. Should be good to go. ULPS ( talkcontribs) 01:07, 16 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 16

New Britain Mules

5x expanded by BeanieFan11 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 163 past nominations.

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BeanieFan11 ( talk) 20:44, 23 April 2024 (UTC). reply

The Strange Death of Captain America

Created by Morgan695 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 163 past nominations.

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Morgan695 ( talk) 22:26, 16 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Not a review, and I review oldest first so would not get to this any time soon (but would not object to any other editor reviewing this in the interim); if ALT2's "penciled, inked, lettered, and colored by Jim Steranko, making it" somehow manages to survive WP:DYKTRIM, none of "penciled, inked, lettered, and colored" should be linked per WP:SEAOFBLUE.-- Laun chba ller 18:42, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply
    • I'm fine with de-linking those instances if that's the case. Morgan695 ( talk) 20:47, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • I'm guessing the first hook is meant to say "dispute between himself and Stan Lee"? PanagiotisZois ( talk) 12:31, 23 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Will perform the review. Have a mild interest in the article, and just found out Jim Steranko did concept art for Coppola's Dracula; what a nice coincidence. Anyway
    • The article is new enough, having been created only about 8 days ago, which is when this nomination took place. It also has the appropriate length, being very in-depth, and well-sourced; most sources are offline from books, but I'm assuming good faith, especially given the nominator's track record. It is very much presentable, and has three images; one is the writer-artist and is CC, while the other two are the cover of the last issue of this story and an example of Steranko's visual style, which is brought up in the article itself, making them both appropriate.
    •  On hold All of the hooks are present in the article itself and properly cited. Finding the best one is somewhat tricky, as there's what the nominator finds most interesting, what I find most interesting, and what will help the article achieve the most views. Hook #3 is mildly interesting as you have the primacy effect, but I don't think it will hook many people in, so it's the other two. Either one could work, but I'm leaning more with Hook #1, mostly because it also references Stan Lee, which is a name that will attract views. The mention of a "dispute" between them is also kind of juicy. Admittedly, I found the full context behind their "dispute" kind of boring (lol), but at least the hook did its job. Unless @ Morgan695: has a different hook to suggest, the only thing remaining is the QPQ. PanagiotisZois ( talk) 23:19, 23 April 2024 (UTC) reply
      • @ PanagiotisZois: Thanks for taking on this review. I've already done a QPQ, so if that is the only outstanding concern than this should be good to go. Morgan695 ( talk) 04:48, 24 April 2024 (UTC) reply

United States' Telegraph

Created by Generalissima ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 39 past nominations.

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Generalissima ( talk) (it/she) 06:32, 16 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Wonderful work! I enjoyed reading this (I just love old newspapers! ). Looks good to go. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 17:51, 17 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Joseph Déjacque

Improved to Good Article status by Grnrchst ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 34 past nominations.

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Grnrchst ( talk) 13:55, 17 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article was nominated for DYK within 7 days of passing GAR. Article is long enough. Article well-sourced, neutral, BLP-compliant, and copyvio-free; only pings on Earwigs are for some properly attributed quotes. QPQ has been completed. Hooks are interesting, cited (AGF on paywalled source in ALT0), and short enough for DYK. My preference would be for ALT1 or ALT3 as the most interesting options. Morgan695 ( talk) 16:20, 17 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 17

March on Rome (88 BC)

  • ... that in 88 BC, Lucius Cornelius Sulla made the first coup d'état in Roman history? Source: Harriet I. Flower, Roman Republics, Princeton University Press, 2010, p. 159. ISBN 978-0-691-14043-8
    • Reviewed:
    • Comment: No QPQ done as I have nominated less than 5 articles.
Created by T8612 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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T8612 (talk) 11:27, 22 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article nominated five days after creation. More than long enough, meets proper sourcing requirements. Earwig didn't find anything noteworthy, WP:AGF on the bibliography sources. I was able to access the source used in the hook and the passage being referenced (p. 159) seems to be good. Definitely interesting! No QPQ needed, great work on the article! Looks good to go. B3251 ( talk) 21:27, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Bedok Reservoir MRT station

  • ... that Bedok Reservoir MRT station features a public artwork including a message that "dribbles down" the lift shaft in motifs of droplets? Source: Zhuang, Justin; Soh, Darren (2022). Art in Transit: Downtown Line Singapore. Singapore: Land Transport Authority. ISBN 978-981-18-3967-2. OCLC 1342054525. (p168)
Improved to Good Article status by ZKang123 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 14 past nominations.

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ZKang123 ( talk) 05:07, 19 April 2024 (UTC). reply

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting: Yes
QPQ: Done.

Overall: The guideline WP:INTEXT advises that In-text attribution may need to be used with direct speech (a source's words between quotation marks or as a block quotation)... It seems DYK allows leeway for this not to be in the hook, but a reader should be able to see in the article where the quote came from. It also avoids the appearance of a WP:SCAREQUOTE. Alternatively, is paraphrasing an option? I don't have access to the source; is it possible to provide a relevant excerpt here for review? Otherwise, I'll WP:AGF. — Bagumba ( talk) 11:20, 19 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Here's the excerpt of the page for your perusal.-- ZKang123 ( talk) 09:28, 20 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ ZKang123: Thanks. It's a nice metaphor to quote (and I'm not creative enough to offer a paraphrase). If the in-text attribution is added to the article, this should be good to go.— Bagumba ( talk) 15:08, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Bagumba: fixed.-- ZKang123 ( talk) 10:08, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ ZKang123: Sorry if it wasn't clear. I meant that the article needed in-text attribution added as to who said "dribbles down". I'm neutral on whether it needs to be in the hook or not. Regards.— Bagumba ( talk) 10:17, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Oh I see. Will fix that haha. Ok, done.-- ZKang123 ( talk) 10:19, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ ZKang123: In the snapshot of the source you linked above, "dribbles down" wasn't quoted. Wouldn't that mean that those specific words should be attributed to Zhuang and Soh, the source's authors?— Bagumba ( talk) 10:33, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Edited accordingly.-- ZKang123 ( talk) 12:48, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Approved. @ ZKang123: It seems that Soh was a photographer and not listed as an author, so I tweaked the attribution to Zhuang only. Feel free to modify if I'm wrong.— Bagumba ( talk) 15:58, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply

1901 Boston Marathon

Ronald McDonald
Ronald McDonald
Mounted police clearing the way at the 1901 Boston Marathon
Mounted police clearing the way at the 1901 Boston Marathon
Created by Habst ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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Habst ( talk) 20:44, 17 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: None required.

Overall: Nice work @ Habst:. The only issue is that there needs to be a citation at the end of the following paragraph: As the race advanced through Framingham and Natick, Hughson had built up a lead but was still closely tailed by Caffrey. 45 minutes in, Hughson passed the Natick town hall about 100 yards (91 m) ahead of Caffrey. McDonald at this point was 75 yards (69 m) behind Caffrey, and Sammy Mellor and Davis were running in fourth and fifth 1⁄3 mile (0.54 km) behind McDonald. (Every paragraph needs to have a citation for DYK). BeanieFan11 ( talk) 02:43, 19 April 2024 (UTC) reply

@ BeanieFan11,  Done the citation, thank you. -- Habst ( talk) 12:23, 19 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Good to go, BeanieFan11 ( talk) 15:40, 19 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Crosby-Schøyen Codex MS 193

A folio from the Crosby-Schøyen Codex
A folio from the Crosby-Schøyen Codex
Created by NeverBeGameOver ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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NeverBeGameOver ( talk) 02:49, 17 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • This review is for ALT0, the best hook IMO:
General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

  • Adequate sourcing: Yes
  • Neutral: Yes
  • Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing: Yes
  • Other problems: No - One issue: the statement in the intro "It is considered the oldest surviving book in the world" is not supported by the references; only the Smithsonian Magazine says "one of the oldest surviving books." That is a significant difference. Please update this.
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Great article, thanks for this contribution. Just correct the issue noted above; otherwise all good. P 1 9 9   19:09, 18 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Corrected. I used a more appropriate hook found in Reuters instead. Hope that helps NeverBeGameOver ( talk) 22:22, 18 April 2024 (UTC) reply
yes, that is better. Good source too. Thanks. -- P 1 9 9   22:29, 18 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Boot Monument

The Boot Monument at Saratoga National Historical Park
  • ... that the Boot Monument (pictured) never mentions the name of its honoree because he was a traitor? Source: [15] [16] and Martin, James Kirby (1997). Benedict Arnold, Revolutionary Hero: An American Warrior Reconsidered. New York University Press. ISBN 0814755607
Improved to Good Article status by Relativity ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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Rela tivity ⚡️ 00:54, 17 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Comment: It has appeared on DYK before, but not in bold print. (See talk page for more details) Rela tivity ⚡️ 00:58, 17 April 2024 (UTC)--> reply
  • I'll review this. Have read about this subject before. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 15:37, 17 April 2024 (UTC) reply
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: None required.

Overall: @ Relativity: Nice work. ALT0 is good. I'm not sure ALT1 works however as the source only says that it is Arnold's only monument on American soil whereas the hook seems to apply to all American traitors. I also thought of another potential hook that might be decent: ... that a boot is the only monument in the United States to traitor Benedict Arnold because it "was the only part of Arnold not to later turn traitor"? That would require another reviewer, though. Let me know what you think; but ALT0 is good to go. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 15:54, 17 April 2024 (UTC) reply

I'm fine with ALT0. Thank you for taking on the review! Rela tivity ⚡️ 01:50, 18 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Kiso 5639

The Skyrocket Galaxy, as photographed by the Hubble Space Telescope
The Skyrocket Galaxy, as photographed by the Hubble Space Telescope
Created by MemeGod27 ( talk) and Chaotic Enby ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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MemeGod ._. ( talk) 17:44, 17 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  •  Comment: I'm not really a creator of this article, I just reviewed it and added a few potential references that could help expand it in the future. Anyway, hope the firework gets the picture slot! Chaotıċ Enby ( talk · contribs) 17:54, 17 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Comments by Tbhotch

General eligibility:

Policy compliance:

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: Yes
  • Interesting: Yes
  • Other problems: Yes
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: (CC)  Tbhotch 07:03, 18 April 2024 (UTC) reply

A new article that is barely long enough. The hook is interesting so is the galaxy's shape. QPQ unrequired and there are no copyright issues with the online sources. However, there are sourcing issues. The lead includes multiple statements that are not present in the body of the article or that the source that is supposed to cite them doesn't mention them.

  • It has an elongated and flattened shape, with a maximum diameter that extends for approximately 2,700 light years.
  • The new stars are distributed in about ten groups and have a mass corresponding to about one million solar masses.
  • The starburst is believed to have begun approximately one million years ago following the galaxies' encounter with a filament of intergalactic gas.

After that, the following statements lack an inline source:

  • "It has also been informally called the Rocket Galaxy or the Firework Galaxy due to its "trail" structure and brightness at the head."
  • "The Skyrocket Galaxy was discovered in 2004 using the Hubble Space Telescope, and was further observed in February and July of 2015 with the Wide Field Camera 3. Further research is ongoing by the European Space Agency."

Additionally, and not part of the DYK review, the article should probably be called Kiso 5639 instead since "Skyrocket Galaxy" is just a nickname and the present sources prefer the former, including NASA. (CC)  Tbhotch 07:03, 18 April 2024 (UTC) reply

  • Everything has been fixed, I'll move it back to Kiso 5639 in a few minutes. Thanks, MemeGod ._. ( talk) 12:17, 18 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 18

Matthew Charles Johnson

Moved to mainspace by GMH Melbourne ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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GMH Melbourne ( talk) 05:04, 18 April 2024 (UTC). reply

Full review needed.-- Laun chba ller 06:43, 18 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Article is new and long enough. Sourcing looks good though Earwig found a handful of word-for-word similarities with "theage.com.au" source. A minor issue with each of the proposed hooks: ALT0 says that Williams was Victoria's most high-profile prisoner - the body of the article supports that but the sources seem to claim he was just a high-profile prisoner. ALT1 says they threw feces at a member of the jury but the article and sources only say "excrement". Both hooks are interesting however. QPQ is not required so just need hooks fixed and that should be all. PCN02WPS ( talk | contribs) 15:31, 20 April 2024 (UTC) reply

@ PCN02WPS: Thank you for taking the time to review! I have reworded the article in most cases where Earwig's Copyvio Detector identified an issue but I think a lot of it falls under WP:LIMITED, or are quotes. Let me know if this needs to be addressed further. In paragraph 249 of that source, it mentions Williams as the "highest profile prisoner in Victoria". I have changed the wording of ALT1 from 'feces' to 'excrement' — GMH Melbourne ( talk) 03:12, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Very sorry, totally forgot about this nom. Missed the "highest profile" bit in that source so thank you for that info. Both hooks look good so we are GTG. PCN02WPS ( talk | contribs) 15:15, 28 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Prunus jamasakura

Yamazakura, by Kawahara Keiga (Siebold Collection)
Created by Maculosae tegmine lyncis ( talk).

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Maculosae tegmine lyncis ( talk) 05:51, 19 April 2024 (UTC). reply

Le Touquet

5x expanded by Szmenderowiecki ( talk).

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Szmenderowiecki ( talk) 16:38, 19 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • expanded recently enough; article is well-written and well-sourced. In my opinion ALT2 is by far the most interesting hook. Elli ( talk | contribs) 04:14, 23 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Bonn–Oberkassel dog

  • ... that ancient humans cared for a 14,000-year-old puppy? Source: Janssens, L., Giemsch, L., Schmitz, R., Street, M., Van Dongen, S., & Crombé, P. (2018). A new look at an old dog: Bonn-Oberkassel reconsidered. Journal of Archaeological Science, 92, 126–138. doi:10.1016/j.jas.2018.01.004, p. 10 "The dog was young and sick, likely was untrained as a result, and thus had no obvious utilitarian value to surrounding humans. Thus, we hypothesize further that the inferred supportive care probably was due to compassion or empathy, without any expectation of reciprocal utilitarian benefits. We suggest that the Bonn-Oberkassel dog provides the earliest known evidence for a purely emotion-driven human-dog interaction."
Moved to mainspace by Generalissima ( talk).

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Generalissima ( talk) (it/she) 23:16, 18 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Great work on the article, Generalissima! That's quite an interesting hook; humans caring for a 14,000-year-old puppy?! Anyway, for the hook's source, which I managed to track down using the DOI in the article and leading me to a ScienceDirect source, and verifies the hook as the data "statistically overlaps 14C". Again, great work! :) ~ Tails Wx ( 🐾, me!) 02:42, 20 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Boyz Unlimited

Created by Launchballer ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 220 past nominations.

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Laun chba ller 15:58, 18 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • 5x expanded by nom. Article is adequately sourced, no issues arose upon checking. The largest similarity result from Earwig is just due to a quoted passage from a critic. Hooks are interesting, I personally like the first hook and ALT2 the most, but all are good and work. QPQ OK. Nicely done! Good to go. B3251 ( talk) 15:25, 19 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Antimonumento 5J

Antimonumento 5J
Antimonumento 5J
  • ... that the Antimonumento 5J (pictured) was installed to commemorate police repression during a protest in response to Giovanni López's arrest four years ago today and his subsequent death? Source: Milenio [19]: "se realizó un acto de memoria pacífica donde también se develó un antimonumento con el objetivo de no olvidar los actos de opresión que ejercieron las autoridades de seguridad pública en contra de ciudadanos manifestantes durante el 4, 5 y 6 de junio del 2020, protestas que se realizaron en torno al asesinato de Giovanni López a manos de policías municipales de Ixtlahuacán de los Membrillos." (Translation: "an act of peaceful remembrance was held where an anti-monument was also unveiled with the objective of not forgetting the acts of oppression exercised by public security authorities against protesting citizens during 4, 5 and 6 June 2020, protests that took place around the murder of Giovanni López at the hands of municipal police officers of Ixtlahuacán de los Membrillos.")
Moved to mainspace by Tbhotch ( talk).

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(CC)  Tbhotch 07:03, 18 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Length, date, qpq ok, no close paraphrase found. Image on Commons. Not sure we'd time the DYK to match what the death anniversary, though. -- Soman ( talk) 09:46, 19 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 19

155 Mercer Street

155 Mercer Street
155 Mercer Street
  • ... that firefighters were alerted to a fire in their fire station at 155 Mercer Street in Manhattan by a ring-tailed monkey named Jenny throwing billiard balls down a flight of stairs? Source: "One time she woke the sleeping company to a fire in its own building by throwing billiard balls down a flight of stairs." [20]
Moved to mainspace by Found5dollar ( talk).

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Found5dollar ( talk) 19:39, 19 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation

QPQ: No - Not done
Overall: hinnk ( talk) 22:16, 19 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Dadang Supriatna

Created by Juxlos ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 216 past nominations.

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Juxlos ( talk) 11:04, 19 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting: Yes

QPQ: No - Not done
Overall: @ Juxlos: Nice work. I'm just waiting on a QPQ. Epicgenius ( talk) 14:32, 19 April 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Epicgenius: QPQ added. Juxlos ( talk) 03:44, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Good to go. Epicgenius ( talk) 17:33, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Butterfly Theater

Butterfly Theater at night (1911)
Butterfly Theater at night (1911)
Moved to mainspace by Lightburst ( talk).

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Lightburst ( talk) 23:06, 19 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: This review is for the original hook. Created on April 19th, 4199 characters of prose. Earwig shows no plagiarism or close paraphrasing. Issues with sourcing of hook, neutrality in one section, and a factual issue with who made the terrcotta. Found5dollar ( talk) 19:14, 20 April 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Found5dollar: Thank you for the review. I edited the section about the imposter which now reads " The theater hired a doorman who said he was oscar award winning actor and boxer Victor McLaglen, but he was an imposter. Victor McLaglen exposed the man as a fraud and revealed that the man was actually his brother Leopold McLaglen". Changed the terra-cotta bit, the actual source language is "a great deal of the design credit must be given to the terra-cotta supply company in Chicago." So my error was in thinking it was a company rather than a generic random supply company- I fixed it. Regarding the hook citation it is correct and the information can be found in the first paragraph of the source. Lightburst ( talk) 23:01, 20 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Lightburst: the article now seems neural to me and the factual issue was corrected. Unfortunatly that cite calls it a "woman with butterfly wings" not a "butterfly." I'd suggest either changing the source or changing from claiming it is a butterfly to "a woman with butterfly wings." -- Found5dollar ( talk) 21:37, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Found5dollar: Seems like we are in WP:BLUE territory. The theater is called butterfly, according to most sources the facade is adorned with a butterfly. It is either a woman with butterfly wings or a butterfly with a woman's body but still a butterfly. I backed it up by adding a Rankin citation to end of sentence. "terra cotta butterfly for the facade, delineated in 1,000 light bulbs and spanning some 27 feet from wingtip to wingtip" Lightburst ( talk) 21:55, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Thank you. this is good to go now. -- Found5dollar ( talk) 15:00, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Edna May Sperl

Created by Silver seren ( talk) and FloridaArmy ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 115 past nominations.

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Silver seren C 20:32, 20 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Looks good. Nice work. Either hook works. @ Silver seren: Not necessary for approval, but were you really not able to find anything on when she was born and died? Aware that IMDb is unreliable, but it lists her as being born in 1899 and dying in 1981 ( [22]). Wondering if you can find anything else confirming that. Not required for approval, though. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 01:56, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply

I mean, I know the dates, but I don't have a source for any of it. I can also find her on Ancestry.com and am 100% sure it is the right person. But, per WP:RSP, that's not a reliable source. Silver seren C 03:00, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Climate of Triton

  • ... that Neptune's moon Triton has thin clouds that are likely made of nitrogen ice crystals? Source: McKinnon, William B.; Kirk, Randolph L. (2014) "Encyclopedia of the Solar System" Chapter 40 - Triton https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/B9780124158450000402 (on ScienceDirect) Source says: At the limbs, clouds could be distinguished from haze by being optically thicker and localized both in height (10 km or less) and in horizontal extent (patchy, and mainly concentrated at mid to high southern latitudes, where they cover one-third of the limb). The sharp upper boundary of the clouds suggests that they consist of condensed nitrogen rather than involatile solids like the haze. (p. 873)
    • ALT1: ... that Neptune's moon Triton has a southern polar cap of frozen nitrogen which extends almost all the way to its equator? Source: Brown, Robert H.; Kirk, Randolph L. (1994) "Coupling of volatile transport and internal heat flow on Triton" https://ui.adsabs.harvard.edu/abs/1994JGR....99.1965B/abstract (NASA ADS) Source says: ... what seems to be a bright, massive south polar cap that extends nearly to Triton's equator ... They [Moore and Spencer] hypothesized that Triton's south polar cap is primarily a permanent deposit of nitrogen.
    • Reviewed:
    • Comment: Personally, I'm unsure as to which hook would be more interesting to use, so I'll leave it to whomever reviews this to decide!
Created by ArkHyena ( talk).

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ArkHyena ( talk) 20:38, 20 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • I like the first hook the best, and it certainly checks out with the source. Article seems presentable; new enough, no evidence of copyvio, well-sourced, and well-written (and of course, long enough.) I don't have any suggestions for alternative phrasing, so seems like we're good to go, as no QPQ is needed for you. Generalissima ( talk) (it/she) 17:29, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Horvat ’Eqed

A fortified gate dating from the 2nd century BC at Horvat ’Eqed, possibly built by Seleucid general Bacchides
A fortified gate dating from the 2nd century BC at Horvat ’Eqed, possibly built by Seleucid general Bacchides
  • ... that the fortifications of Horvat ’Eqed may have been constructed by the Seleucid general Bacchides as part of his efforts to suppress the Maccabean Revolt? Source: Hizmi, Hananya; Haber, Michal; Aharonvich, Evgeny (2013). "From the Maccabees to Bar Kokhba: Evidence of Fortification and Revolt at Khirbet el-'Aqd: The Results of the Renewed 2012 Excavations". New Studies in the Archaeology of Jerusalem. 7: 6–24.
    • ALT1: ... that Horvat ’Eqed, a fortified ruin nestled in the Judaean Mountains, may have served as a major stronghold during the Bar Kokhba revolt? Source: Hizmi, Hananya; Haber, Michal; Aharonvich, Evgeny (2013). "From the Maccabees to Bar Kokhba: Evidence of Fortification and Revolt at Khirbet el-'Aqd: The Results of the Renewed 2012 Excavations". New Studies in the Archaeology of Jerusalem. 7: 6–24.
    • ALT2: ... that excavations at Horvat ’Eqed uncovered coinage and hiding complexes dating from the Bar Kokhba revolt, as well as arrowheads, armor scales, slingshots, and ballistae? Source: Hizmi, Hananya; Haber, Michal; Aharonvich, Evgeny (2013). "From the Maccabees to Bar Kokhba: Evidence of Fortification and Revolt at Khirbet el-'Aqd: The Results of the Renewed 2012 Excavations". New Studies in the Archaeology of Jerusalem. 7: 6–24.
    • Reviewed:
Created by Mariamnei ( talk).

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Mariamnei ( talk) 20:17, 19 April 2024 (UTC). reply

Chuck Eisenmann

Created by B3251 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 8 past nominations.

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B3251 ( talk) 15:40, 19 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article was nominated within three days of creation, so is new enough. It's more than long enough. The article properly uses in-line citations and the copyvio detector finds nothing outside of dates and names of institutions. Both hooks are good, interesting, and cited in-line. I think the original hook is worded best, personally. The QPQ has been done. Looks good to go! Silver seren C 23:43, 19 April 2024 (UTC) reply


Articles created/expanded on April 20

Magdalena Hinterdobler

Created by Gerda Arendt ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 2102 past nominations.

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Gerda Arendt ( talk) 11:40, 27 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Another singer to beguile us :-) Mary Mark Ockerbloom ( talk) 00:37, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Spider (musician)

Moved to mainspace by Launchballer ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 222 past nominations.

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Laun chba ller 19:40, 20 April 2024 (UTC). reply

Interesting bio on fine sources, no copyvio obvious. I like the original hook and approve that one. It clearly says that Spider is a Black woman musician, which I miss in all ALTS, and actually also in the lead of the article; I think that her Nigerian background should be mentioned there. My English is not good enough to tell a difference between "on the grounds" and a simple "because", but I know that the former phrase appears in the article in two sentences in a row, which I believe should be avoided. -- Gerda Arendt ( talk) 11:51, 27 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Both done.-- Laun chba ller 17:19, 28 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Katherine Sleeper Walden

Improved to Good Article status by Dionysius Miller ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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Dionysius Miller
talk 18:42, 20 April 2024 (UTC).
reply
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation

QPQ: No - Not needed
Overall: This one caught my eye, as I am also a participant of WikiProject Appalachia! Great work on this article! Personally, I like ALT3. Also, I think you should consider adding an image. Earwig highlighted a few phrases, but they appear to be just common phrases and quotes. Good to go!   Kentuckian | 💬   03:13, 25 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Coffee Talk Episode 2: Hibiscus & Butterfly

Converted from a redirect by JuniperChill ( talk).

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JuniperChill ( talk) 17:13, 22 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Not a review, and I review oldest first so would not get to this any time soon (but would not object to any other reviewer doing so in the interim); both hooks violate WP:NPOV and have been struck. I've also removed one sentence that also violated WP:NPOV, so this is now below 1500 characters.-- Laun chba ller 20:17, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
    • Given that it is midnight for me (in the UK), I will expand this article and think of a compliant hook ~10 hours from now after my sleep. I may even have to think about a hook that doesn't have something to do with the lo-fi music. JuniperChill ( talk) 22:59, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
    • Done the expansion to at least 1500 characters (can also be 1.5kb), now I am thinking of the following hooks.

For both, the sources came from https://www.eurogamer.net/coffee-talk-creator-fahmi-has-passed-away

No, it can't "also be 1.5kb" - WP:DYKRULES specifies "1500 characters". ALT3 is the better hook, although I'd expect a more merciless prepbuilder to truncate it at "died". Full review needed.-- Laun chba ller 10:45, 23 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Just long enough, well refed, everything else GTG. Strongly suggest cutting ALT3 for reading clarity:

Prince Philip, Duke of Edinburgh

Portrait of Philip, 1992
Portrait of Philip, 1992
  • ... that Prince Philip (pictured) was the first member of the British royal family to fly in a helicopter? Source: [1]
    • Reviewed:
Improved to Good Article status by MSincccc ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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MSincccc ( talk) 18:25, 20 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article qualifies via recently achieving Good Article status. SFNs don't work on this page, but I was able to confirm the hook through the cite in the article itself. Obviously, as a GA about a major figure, it is long enough, well-sourced, and quite presentable. No QPQ is needed—you did this before getting 5 DYKs? Well done. Hook itself is pretty interesting; only suggestion I would give before confirming is specifying British royal family, as many readers would think of other royal families upon seeing the phrase. Generalissima ( talk) (it/she) 17:36, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply
The hook is represented on Page 259 of the source. It is essentially WP:ABOUTSELF since someone is asking him if he was first and he answers "yes". I do not think it is controversial. We have another problem however, the article has recently appeared as a bold link in the news. Unfortunately we may have to reject this nomination because of that. Bruxton ( talk) 21:39, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply

References

  1. ^ Brandreth 2004, p. 259

September 2023 New York floods

Created by Tails Wx ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 21 past nominations.

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~ Tails Wx ( 🐾, me!) 02:29, 20 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation

QPQ: No - Not done
Overall: Well done on the GA review @ Tails Wx :) preference for ALT1. Nothing else of note, really. Just ping me if the QPQ is done. ‍  PSA 🏕️  ( talk) 07:21, 20 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Thanks for the review, PSA, I've provided the QPQ above! :) ~ Tails Wx ( 🐾, me!) 13:55, 20 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Thank you, @ Tails Wx. Good to go ‍  PSA 🏕️  ( talk) 02:01, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Erik Sparre

A 1595 painting of Sparre, holding his treatise Pro rege, lege et grege
A 1595 painting of Sparre, holding his treatise Pro rege, lege et grege
Created by ThaesOfereode ( talk).

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Rhynchocyon

  • ... that a new subspecies of giant sengi was recently discovered? Source: "Despite the pelage differences, initial DNA comparisons found it nearly identical to R. chrysopygus. A later DNA comparison supported a designation of a new subspecies, Rhynchocyon chrysopygus mandelai as it diverges in pelage and is allopatric to R. chrysopygus (Agwanda et al. 2021)."
    • Reviewed:
5x expanded by Azcolvin429 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 6 past nominations.

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Andrew Z. Colvin • Talk 02:53, 20 April 2024 (UTC). reply

Date, size, expansion, hook, refs, QPQ, copyvio spotcheck, all GTG. Minor disclaimer: the prose script I use does not count tables and bulleted lists, and without them I see only ~2.5-3x expansion. But there is a new large table (with some advanced features) and a new list, so I am AGFing the 5x claim. PS. I added a single citation needed request to one sentence - I ask the nom to comment here on whether it has been addressed. -- Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 10:15, 20 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Reference added! And yes, it was not massively expanded, however I am working on more sections in the conservation section today. Thank you for the comments. Andrew Z. Colvin • Talk 22:55, 20 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Cam Booser

Created by Muboshgu ( talk) and Yankees10 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 530 past nominations.

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–  Muboshgu ( talk) 01:22, 20 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Interesting subject. Nice work. Looks good to go! BeanieFan11 ( talk) 02:49, 20 April 2024 (UTC) reply


Articles created/expanded on April 21

Ellen Oliver (suffragette)

Ellen Oliver
Ellen Oliver
Created by Lajmmoore ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 96 past nominations.

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Lajmmoore ( talk) 16:44, 21 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Great work on this article! Earwig highlighted a few words, but they just appear to be common words and phrases. Good to go!   Kentuckian | 💬   15:11, 24 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Nxdia

Created by Launchballer ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 223 past nominations.

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Laun chba ller 14:38, 21 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Article is new enough and long enough, it is neutral and well sourced. Earwig picks up a bit of a quote, but otherwise no close phrasing, so all OK. QPQ is done. Hook is interesting, but I couldn't see a reference to the Singles Chart in the source - could you clariy the chart part of the hook? Thanks Lajmmoore ( talk) 16:35, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply

My mistake, I kept rewording the hook. Try [24].-- Laun chba ller 18:15, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Thanks Launchballer - hook is good (& citation archived here), all OK Lajmmoore ( talk) 09:13, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply

WLOS

Improved to Good Article status by Sammi Brie ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 683 past nominations.

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Sammi Brie (she/her •  tc) 19:24, 21 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Recent GA with QPQ done. No copyvio detected, hooks cited and verified. Prefer the original hook. Juxlos ( talk) 03:42, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply

John Silva Meehan

5x expanded by Generalissima ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 41 past nominations.

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Generalissima ( talk) (it/she) 17:49, 21 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • I will gladly review this! WatkynBassett ( talk) 17:57, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply
    • The article was expanded and nominated today (21 April 2024).
    • The article has been expanded more than fivefold (more like 20x).
    • The article is well sourced. I did one spot check and the reference checked out.
    • The article is written in a neutral and non-promotional tone.
    • Earwig did not pick up anything.
    • QPQ provided.
    • The hook has the right length and is interesting. The part of the hook on him being hired and the quote itself is well sourced. However, I struggle a bit with the part on him being "a critic of the spoils system". I think you rely here on Smith 1981 (pp. 82–83). I see that he criticized particulars of the spoils system there. But whether this elevates him to an outright critic of the system I am unsure. Maybe a weaker statement like "[...] who had criticized the political patronage system earlier [...]" would be more reflective of the source? What do you think?
    • Thank you for your great work Generalissima! I will approve this nomination if this one quibble is addressed. WatkynBassett ( talk) 18:57, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • @ WatkynBassett: Fair point! Would something along the lines of "... that after criticizing the political patronage system, John Silva Meehan was hired as Librarian of Congress through "purely an act of political patronage"?" work? Generalissima ( talk) (it/she) 19:05, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Valerija Narvydaitė

Moved to mainspace by Soman ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 379 past nominations.

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Soman ( talk) 00:36, 21 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article is new enough, well sourced, and long enough. I don't see any outstanding concerns as far as presentability. QPQ checks out. I'm assuming good faith on the hook, as I do not speak Lithuanian! Generalissima ( talk) (it/she) 17:31, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 22

Live into 85

Created by Launchballer ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 224 past nominations.

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Laun chba ller 12:33, 22 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • What a trainwreck!! This article had me in stitches. It also is new enough, long enough, and contains the hook fact in the article with no textual issues. A hearty thank you for the laughter, Launchballer. Sammi Brie (she/her •  tc) 08:50, 29 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Not Strong Enough (Boygenius song)

Boygenius performing live in 2023
Boygenius performing live in 2023
Improved to Good Article status by Dylan620 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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Dylan620 (he/him • talkedits) 22:55, 24 April 2024 (UTC). Interesting song GA on many and substantial sources, no copyvio obvious. I wonder if "expresses" would be a better word than "describes". The licensed image is beautiful when large, but not captivating in stamp size. In case it is not taken, I believe that the word "song" should be added to the hook for clarity that it has to do with music. -- Gerda Arendt ( talk) 12:03, 27 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Isaac L. Rice Mansion

The Isaac L. Rice Mansion
The Isaac L. Rice Mansion
Created by Epicgenius ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 651 past nominations.

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Epicgenius ( talk) 16:15, 22 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: ALT2 is not really suitable in this form, since it's not clear who it's accusing of antisemitism, but any other hook would be fine. Smurrayinchester 11:42, 23 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Thanks for the review. For what it's worth, I initially didn't really think the tugboat thing was that interesting (it has to do more with people protesting Julia Rice, who just so happened to live in the house). I might consider a hook about it later, though. Epicgenius ( talk) 12:46, 23 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Actually what about this?
I'll mark this as ready, and let the admin decide which hook to use. Thanks for the quick reply! Smurrayinchester 14:46, 24 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 23

Samir Aït Saïd

Aït Saïd at the 2016 Olympic Test Event
Aït Saïd at the 2016 Olympic Test Event
5x expanded by Riley1012 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 28 past nominations.

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Riley1012 ( talk) 21:44, 23 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Article checks out for 5x expansion, length, neutrality and sourcing. Copyvio completely checks out. Hooks are interesting and fully sourced, and present within the article. QPQ has been completed. Happy to pass this one. Sims2aholic8 ( talk) 21:27, 29 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Richard Louhenapessy

Created by Juxlos ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 218 past nominations.

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Juxlos ( talk) 04:49, 23 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • The article is new enough, long enough, and free from close paraphrasing. The hook is interesting, cited inline, and verified. The source is Indonesian, but Google Translate checks out on the fact. The hook probably meets BLP as it's not undue focus since it focuses more on the four mayors aspect. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 12:50, 27 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Oophaga solanensis

5x expanded by AryKun ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 31 past nominations.

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AryKun ( talk) 21:51, 25 April 2024 (UTC). reply

@ AryKun: Article is new enough (per WP:DYK5X) and long enough. The article is sourced adequately and reliably, neutral, and there isn't any plagiarism. I prefer ALT1, as it's a little more interesting and the wording in ALT0 is a little unclear. I've made an alternative hook for ALT1 specifying that Colombia is their native country (just for complete clarity).
  • ALT1a: ... that Oophaga solanensis frogs can be bought for $3 in their native Colombia and sold for up to $1,000 overseas?
Looks ready. This is my first DYK review, so I'd love a second opinion. Thanks, SupremeLordBagel ( talk to me) 05:04, 26 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Here's your second opinion. Long enough, new enough. No maintenance templates found, no neutrality issues found, Earwig is quiet. QPQ done. Both hooks would require an end-of-sentence citation. (Side note: Please consider reviewing oldest first per WP:DYKRI.)-- Laun chba ller 22:10, 26 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Launchballer added end-of-sentence cites. AryKun ( talk) 03:32, 27 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Let's roll.-- Laun chba ller 05:15, 27 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Ivančena

Stele erected at Ivančena
Stele erected at Ivančena
Created by Evrik ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 113 past nominations.

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-- evrik ( talk) 21:32, 24 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General eligibility:

Policy compliance:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: I can't read Czech, so accepted that source in good faith. ALT1 is definitely the more interesting of the two. Article looks good and pic is a nice addition. Arcahaeoindris ( talk) 23:07, 26 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Amie Parnes

  • ... that Amie Parnes allegedly first heard about her employer, The Messenger, ceasing operations from a New York Times article? Source: "I’m a loyal person by nature and I talked to Jimmy up until the minute we found out about the shutdown from a piece in The New York Times." Vanity Fair
    • ALT1: ... that a 2013 photo of Joe Biden embracing political journalist Amie Parnes generated controversy? Source: "In a light-hearted photograph taken with The Hill’s White House correspondent Amie Parnes, Vice President Joe Biden can be seen with his hands high on the reporter’s waist — and Parnes with her hands firmly on top of Biden’s. The photo was lifted off Parnes' Facebook page, and some outlets questioned whether Parnes was trying to block Biden’s hands from moving any further." TODAY
    • Reviewed:
    • Comment: Two potential hooks. I thought both were interesting but I understand that the second might violate WP:DYKHOOKBLP. Haven't done one of these in a while so forgive me if I need to adjust some of the formatting.
Moved to mainspace by Pac-Man PHD ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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Pac-Man PHD ( talk) 07:25, 23 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article new and long enough notwithstanding the seven month draft period (happens). QPQ not needed as this is nominator's first DYK - welcome, by the way. Original hook is more interesting, cited inline and confirmed in cited source(s), and agree about the BLP issues with ALT1. Copyvio check only flagged direct quotes, so no issues. Good to go. Juxlos ( talk) 03:47, 24 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Missoula Children's Theatre

MCT production of The Secret Garden
MCT production of The Secret Garden
Created by Montanabw ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 38 past nominations.

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Montanabw (talk) 05:52, 23 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article new and long enough with no copyvio detected (Earwig only flags a direct quote). QPQ is completed. Hook fact is inline (lead section), and verified by source (audio transcript). Good to go. Juxlos ( talk) 03:42, 24 April 2024 (UTC) reply

2010 Oklahoma State Question 755

Created by Elli ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 20 past nominations.

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Elli ( talk | contribs) 04:18, 23 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • I personally think the first hook is great. It certainly got my attention. The article itself is long, was moved to the mainspace just today, is based on reliable sources, and looks fully complete. My only potential concern is that the hook doesn't explicitly state that it was struck down in court, but I think that can probably be inferred as is. Pac-Man PHD ( talk) 08:27, 23 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Though Earwig found likely copyvio, it's basing that off of a direct quote from the contents of the proposal, an open and free document that is properly attributed to, so it shouldn't be a violation. I think this is all in order. Still, felt it should be mentioned in case the author wants to paraphrase the contents of the proposal or if an administrator takes issue with it. Pac-Man PHD ( talk) 08:46, 23 April 2024 (UTC) reply
    • Yeah as the author I generally don't think quoting the direct ballot title of the proposal is a problem (and imo paraphrasing would be less informative to our readers than seeing what voters saw). Elli ( talk | contribs) 09:09, 23 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 24

Marcus Jacob Papilaja

Created by Juxlos ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 219 past nominations.

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Juxlos ( talk) 08:20, 24 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Looks good. QPQ pending. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 23:41, 24 April 2024 (UTC) reply

@ BeanieFan11: QPQ added. Juxlos ( talk) 17:05, 27 April 2024 (UTC) reply
BeanieFan11 ( talk) 23:16, 29 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Ronald Reagan and AIDS

Reagan first acknowledges AIDS, beginning at the 7:12 mark.
Moved to mainspace by Wasianpower ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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🌸wasianpower🌸 ( talkcontribs) 01:51, 24 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation

Image eligibility:

QPQ: None required.

Overall: Thanks for writing this article ( t · c) buidhe 04:29, 25 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Hi again Buidhe! Article has been updated with history.com source removed and wording in lede adjusted to make it more clear which part of the article it's referring to. 🌸wasianpower🌸 ( talkcontribs) 13:41, 26 April 2024 (UTC) reply
"Kirchick cites the different government reactions as a reason why during the 1980s the rate of HIV infection in the Great Britain was just 10 percent of that in the United States" This sentence may still need work. I can't see the full context or what source he cites, but I looked it up and ran the numbers for 1989, at which point the number of infections was 20 times larger in the US which also has 6x greater population. That does point to a substantial difference but doesn't support Kirchick's argument. I would prefer to cite epidemiologists for claims about the causes of different prevalence rates.
Stand-alone "defense" and "criticism" is typically integrated into one reception section, maybe put the defense last since the criticism section sums up the overall view.
"In 2015, following the release of the short film When AIDS Was Funny, renewed criticism from progressive media ..." I don't see where the sources discuss progressive media. If they are being cited as examples of progressive media, this paragraph likely falls foul of WP:NOR (and UNDUE).
"However, it is controversial whether Reagan himself could be considered homophobic, or if his personal views on homosexuality affected his AIDS response." part 1 is a false dichotomy, part 2 is unprovable (and I'm not seeing anywhere the opposite argument is made). The ultimate controversy/criticism is not about what Reagan believed but what he did, the article should reflect the bulk of the legacy section.
"Timeline of the Reagan administration's AIDS response" If you keep this section everything needs an inline citation. ( t · c) buidhe 17:22, 26 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Kirchick's source for the one-tenth figure is The Age of Reagan by Wilentz, I don't have access to this book though. The other issues have been addressed. 🌸wasianpower🌸 ( talkcontribs) 19:04, 26 April 2024 (UTC) reply
For now I've gone ahead and changed the 10 percent figure to a more general figure that is still in line with what Kirchick wrote, and also in line with your analysis. 🌸wasianpower🌸 ( talkcontribs) 12:31, 27 April 2024 (UTC) reply

OK, the hook + article probably meet the requirements now but I'm not sure if the video does. ( t · c) buidhe 17:33, 29 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Heaven on Earth: Art from Islamic Lands

Emerald-set box from the Heaven on Earth exhibition
Emerald-set box from the Heaven on Earth exhibition
Moved to mainspace by MartinPoulter ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 33 past nominations.

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MartinPoulter ( talk) 14:37, 24 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Date, length, hook, close paraphrase check, qpq checks out. Image free on Commons. -- Soman ( talk) 21:13, 28 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Coulrophilia

Created by Di (they-them) ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 10 past nominations.

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Di (they-them) ( talk) 22:53, 24 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Well that's a quite interesting topic. Everything checks out! Skyshifter talk 19:45, 27 April 2024 (UTC) reply

German atrocities committed against Soviet prisoners of war

Overcrowded camp in Smolensk
Overcrowded camp in Smolensk
Created by Buidhe ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 244 past nominations.

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( t · c) buidhe 23:44, 24 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Nominated soon enough after GA. Meets length and citation requirements. Hook is absolutely interesting and the right length. The content of the hook is referenced in the article and a citation is appended immediately after where it appears. The image appears to come from a Nazi German government source, which means it's almost certainly in the public domain. Only concern is with the image's visibility at a smaller scale; going to just leave that up to promoter discretion. QPQ done (a quick-fail of novice nomination). Overall great work! ~ Pbritti ( talk) 21:47, 26 April 2024 (UTC) reply

John Gould Stephenson

5x expanded by Generalissima ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 42 past nominations.

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Generalissima ( talk) (it/she) 08:37, 24 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Really lovely expansion today, long enough, no plagiarism issues, very interesting hook with a reliable source. Thanks for this! Spaghettifier ( talk) 22:43, 24 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Vulcan Bridge

Converted from a redirect by Kentuckian ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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  Kentuckian | 💬   13:34, 24 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article length is good, QPQ not needed, article uses reliable sources and passes GNG, WP:EARWIG turns up with no copyvios. Hook is interesting and backed up by source. Overall, good to go in my opinion! Di (they-them) ( talk) 22:18, 24 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 25

Mike Watts (sportscaster)

Created by Hameltion ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 53 past nominations.

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Hameltion ( talk | contribs) 01:56, 25 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Wow. I did not think it was possible to reference Taylor Swift 235 times in one broadcast lol. Looks good. Approving. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 23:44, 28 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Lunch (song)

Converted from a redirect by PSA ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 17 past nominations.

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‍  PSA 🏕️  ( talk) 03:39, 26 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Generally well-written, sources are okay, hook is interesting. Just a small recommendation, links to Rolling Stone and Coachella 2024 can be added. Good to go! Prince of EreborThe Book of Mazarbul 11:10, 26 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 26

Ludwell–Paradise House

The Ludwell–Paradise House, Rockefeller's "antique"
The Ludwell–Paradise House, Rockefeller's "antique"
Created by Pbritti ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 48 past nominations.

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Pbritti ( talk) 21:48, 26 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • AGF on offline book source. Article expansion is sufficient and recent, QPQ done. No copyvio is detected, Earwig flags a bibliography item and a direct quote only. Hook is good. To DYKA you go. Juxlos ( talk) 17:04, 27 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Rosal, Sutherland

  • ... that Rosal was the largest of 49 townships in Strathnaver, shortly before it was deserted entirely?
  • Reviewed:
Created by DandelionAndBurdock ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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-- D'n'B- t -- 16:15, 26 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • New enough, long enough, and properly sourced. No QPQ needed. Earwig found no problematic copied wording. Good-enough hook, but one must synthesize a couple pieces of information in the article to obtain it: the "largest township" part is at the end of the town section, dated to the early 19th century, while the "deserted" part is at the end of the "clearance" section. In fact both facts are adjacent in the "Maverick Guide to Scotland" source, with much tighter dating (largest in 1815; cleared between 1814 and 1818) and to avoid problems with WP:SYN the article would benefit from making them adjacent somewhere within it, footnoted to that source. Also, "deserted" is maybe a euphemism for what happened. — David Eppstein ( talk) 18:14, 26 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Thanks David. What if the sentence in the Town section said "Before the clearance, it was the largest of 49 townships in Strathnaver"? That would would be consistent with the Maverick Guide guide source and not change up the current before-during-after structure. I could also change the sentence in the Clearance section to say "completely deserted by 1818" to avoid any ambiguity.
I think "deserted" is, from a NPOV, the end result of what happened, it describes what's left. You could say "forcibly depopulated" or something but I think "deserted" is clear enough and used in the sources. -- D'n'B- t -- 18:42, 26 April 2024 (UTC) reply
To me, "deserted" is an accurate and neutral description of the state of the place now, but not of the process by which it reached that state. How about
  • ALT1 ... that before its inhabitants were evicted, Rosal was the largest of 49 townships in Strathnaver?
but that would require a new reviewer as I can't both propose hooks and approve them. — David Eppstein ( talk) 19:00, 26 April 2024 (UTC) reply
I'd be happy with that ALT1, (although with the link just saying "Rosal" for preference). -- D'n'B- t -- 19:08, 26 April 2024 (UTC) reply
That was an unintentional omission. I've piped the link as you originally did now. — David Eppstein ( talk) 20:00, 26 April 2024 (UTC) reply
ALT1 short enough, cited, and interesting, though may be worth adding "in Scotland" per WP:DYKINT. Let's roll.-- Laun chba ller 06:25, 27 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 27

Robyn Gigl

Created by Bridget ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 17 past nominations.

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Bridget  (talk) 15:08, 28 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article is long and new enough, and properly sourced. There are no BLP issues. Both hooks are interesting. ALT0 is properly cited but I'm unsure about ALT1. Waiting on that QPQ. 🌙Eclipse ( talk) ( contribs) 15:51, 28 April 2024 (UTC) reply
    Hi LunaEclipse, I'm definitely leaning more towards ALT0, since it's focused on the critical reception of her work featuring a trans character, rather than the focus solely on the fact that Gigl and her character are trans. I've just added a DYK that I just reviewed. Thanks for taking a look at this! Best, Bridget  (talk) 00:58, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • The facts for ALT1 are supported but the phrasing seems a little awkward. How about
  • This one is great, but I'm kind of thinking the same thing as ALT1 – maybe we can come up with a hook that is centered on her literary work (rather than her transition)? Bridget  (talk) 21:56, 30 April 2024 (UTC) (edited 23:34, 30 April 2024 (UTC)) reply

Elizabeth Seifert

  • ... that Elizabeth Seifert quit medical school after only one year as she was denied a medical degree due to her gender, went on to publish more than 80 novels in her career?
Created by Xoak ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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X ( talk) 10:12, 29 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article created 27 April. No issues of copyvio or plagiarism. All sources appear reliable. Hooks are all interesting and sourced. QPQ is not required. Looks ready to go. Thriley ( talk) 15:36, 29 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Nellie McCoy

Created by Silver seren ( talk) and FloridaArmy ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 116 past nominations.

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Silver seren C 22:19, 27 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Verified that the article is long enough, that there are no plagiarism concerns through the Copyvios tool and spotchecking, and that the hook is sourced in the article. Cunard ( talk) 00:12, 28 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 28

Olga Lander

Defusing explosives, 1943, photographed by Lander
Defusing explosives, 1943, photographed by Lander
  • ... that Olga Lander used a fixed 50 mm focal length camera, requiring her to work close to the dangerous war-time subjects she photographed (example pictured)?
Created by Mary Mark Ockerbloom ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 80 past nominations.

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Mary Mark Ockerbloom ( talk) 00:04, 29 April 2024 (UTC). reply

Interesting life and work, on fine sources, offline sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. I approve the hook, and it goes well with the current trend for short "hooky" wording. I wonder, however, if - since her name doesn't give much clue to where she comes from - some hint at place and/or time might add interest. I found interesting, for example, that she took pics in both world wars. -- Gerda Arendt ( talk) 10:12, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply
How about including her photo, which - with a year in the caption - would add some time? It would illustrate the hook perfectly although it is not strictly she who is pictured. -- Gerda Arendt ( talk) 10:16, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • @ Gerda Arendt: I've added the photo as you suggest. Regarding the hook info, if you don't tell them everything, they have to click through to find out, right? Mary Mark Ockerbloom ( talk) 13:00, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply
    Thank you for the image which tells what I missed. -- Gerda Arendt ( talk) 17:02, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply
    adding to approval: the image is licensed and a great illustration of the kind of photos she took. -- Gerda Arendt ( talk) 18:38, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Foundation of the Communist Party of India

Banner of the Communist Party of India
Banner of the Communist Party of India
  • Source: Kiran Saxena (1990). Trade Union Movement and the National Movement. South Asian Publishers. p. 128. ISBN 978-81-7003-116-1.
Moved to mainspace by Soman ( talk).

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Soman ( talk) 21:16, 28 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: This is a very nicely-written and well-researched article, with quite the interesting hook for DYK. Excellent work on this! Only real issue is that it's currently tagged as an orphan, this can be remedied by linking to this article from at least one other article. Ping me once this is done and I'll be happy to approve this. (I'm also not convinced that the picture is necessary for this kind of a hook, but its inclusion is up to the DYK coordinators) Grnrchst ( talk) 14:12, 29 April 2024 (UTC) reply

The Lord Chamberlain's plays

  • ... that the Lord Chamberlain was the official theatrical censor in England for over 200 years until 1968 with the power to prevent any new play from being performed, often for blasphemy or indecency?
  • ALT1: ... that the Lord Chamberlain's plays are a historical archive of play scripts curated through theatrical censorship that provide a unique insight to attitudes to race and sexuality?
  • Reviewed:
Created by OAnick ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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Nick Sheppard ( talk) 14:55, 28 April 2024 (UTC). reply

User:Launchballer ( talk)

  • fair point, novice at DYK…is update any good?

Nick Sheppard ( talk)

It's customary to propose new ALTs instead of replacing them. Full review needed.-- Laun chba ller 18:23, 28 April 2024 (UTC) reply
I've suggested a possibility of linking for the original alt. Someone else may have a better idea of whether this complies appropriately with best practice for formatting a DYK hook. Mary Mark Ockerbloom ( talk) 21:58, 28 April 2024 (UTC) reply
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: None required.

Overall: I prefer ALT1 to ALT. The hook length is acceptable for both. ALT has a couple of issues: the title of the article does not appear, but more importantly, the idea of the office's powers is not clearly conveyed: it currently says "for over 200 years until 1968 with the power to prevent ANY new play from being performed". However, those powers were somewhat restricted after 1843, so to say ANY new play could be restricted after 1843 is perhaps misleading. This hook could be rephrased slightly, but at this point, for both reasons, I recommend ALT1 instead. Mary Mark Ockerbloom ( talk) 23:47, 28 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Peale's Philadelphia Museum

The Exhumation of the Mastadon
The Exhumation of the Mastadon
  • ... that exhibits at Peale's Philadelphia Museum included the first known skeleton of a mastodon (excavation pictured)? Source: Semonin, Paul (2000). American Monster: How the Nation's First Prehistoric Creature Became a Symbol of National Identity. NYU Press. p. 5 "Charles Willson Peale and his son Rembrandt excavated the first complete skeleton of the American incognitum, or mastodon" "when the mounted skeleton was placed in their Philadelphia Museum for public viewing".
Created by TSventon ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 5 past nominations.

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TSventon ( talk) 21:05, 28 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Review:


General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: I don't see anything in the guidelines about QPQs needing to be done recently, but this one was done in 2021 and hasn't been used as a QPQ by the nominator before. If that's okay, then this nom is good to go. voorts ( talk/ contributions) 23:15, 28 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Voorts, thank you for the review, I tried to do a few QPQs before I needed them and they have got rather old. Fortunately WP:QPQ says QPQs do not expire and may be used at any time for a future DYK nomination. TSventon ( talk) 00:09, 29 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Aza Arnold

  • ... that within years of Aza Arnold inventing a device to improve cotton roving, it was plagiarized across the United States and Europe?
  • Source: Jeremy, D. J. (1981). Technological diffusion—the case of the differential gear. Industrial Archaeology Review, 5(3), 217–227. doi:10.1179/iar.1981.5.3.217
Created by Generalissima ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 43 past nominations.

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Generalissima ( talk) (it/she) 05:12, 28 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting: Yes
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Looks good. AGF on the offline source. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 23:27, 28 April 2024 (UTC) reply


Articles created/expanded on April 29

Evgeniia Subbotina

  • Source: Shilov, A. A.; Karnaukhova, M. G., eds. (1932). "Субботина, Евгения Дмитриевна" [Subbotina, Evgeniia Dmitrievna]. Деятели революционного движения в России [ ru (in Russian). Vol. 4. Moscow: Society of Former Political Prisoners and Exiled Settlers. p. 1635–1636. OCLC  749336544. С помощью А. Лу. кашевича пыталась 28 янв. 1879 г. бежать; добралась до Иркутска, где была задержана 29 янв. т. г. Признанная ген.-губернаторок виновной в самовольн. отлучке, подвергнута 7-дневн. аресту при Иркутск. тюремн. Зам. к. азатем выслана в Верхоленск (Иркутск. губ.) с ением за ней особ. [...] В 1881 г. переведена в Иркутск, где жила с В. Александровой-Натансон, Принимала вместе с нею участие в денежной помощи и в организации побегов Е. Брешко-Брешковской из Баргузина и Е. Ковальской и С. Богомолец из Иркутск. [With the help of A. L. Kashevich she tried to escape on 28 January 1879; she reached Irkutsk, where she was detained on 29 January of that year. Found guilty of AWOL by the Governor-General, she was subjected to a 7-day arrest at the Irkutsk prison. She was deported to Verkholensk (Irkutsk province) and then deported with a special charge. [...] In 1881, she was transferred to Irkutsk, where she lived with V. Alexandrova-Natanson; she took part with her in providing monetary aid and in organising the escape of E. Breshko-Breshkovskaya from Barguzin and E. Kovalskaya and S. Bogomolets from Irkutsk.]
Created by Grnrchst ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 35 past nominations.

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Grnrchst ( talk) 14:20, 29 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Thanks for creating this. I've read some interesting first person accounts that mention the women Russian exiles. Please tag me once the missing citation is added. Mary Mark Ockerbloom ( talk) 01:33, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply

  • @ Mary Mark Ockerbloom: I'm confused as to why this claim needs a citation? She collaborated on Lavrov's Vpered, was involved in a Narodnik organisation, was tried in two mass trials of Narodnik revolutionaries and actively organised with other Narodniks for decades. Is it not exceedingly obvious that this was the movement she was involved in? -- Grnrchst ( talk) 08:12, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Grnrchst: Yes, but all of that relies on the reader having knowledge of what that movement was and who it involved. For a Wikipedia reader who follows the hook to a topic that they aren't knowledgeable about, none of that is obvious. So I would suggest adding a sentence or phrase later in the body that in which you explicitly use the term Narodnik, with a citation to something that clarifies or at least uses that term. Mary Mark Ockerbloom ( talk) 12:15, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply
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May 23

David Raymond, Jonathan Stoklosa, Cheryl Hamilton, Kevin Tresolini, Eric Cannon, Gary Chelosky, Marcy Levine, Caitlin Van Sickle, Cliff Brumbaugh

Jonathan Stoklosa with then-U.S. vice president Joe Biden
Jonathan Stoklosa with then-U.S. vice president Joe Biden
Moved to mainspace by BeanieFan11 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 152 past nominations.

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BeanieFan11 ( talk) 19:56, 21 March 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Reviewing.
  • Despite what the bot/tool says, you owe 10 QPQs as you seem to already be aware.- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 23:10, 21 March 2024 (UTC) reply
    • Thanks for offering to review – just note that Van Sickle and Brumbaugh are not yet ready – I'll make sure to 5x them within the next three days (nominated now so as to not exhaust 7-day eligibility of Raymond). BeanieFan11 ( talk) 23:12, 21 March 2024 (UTC) reply
  • I forgot to say let me know when all the articles are ready for evaluation.- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:21, 22 March 2024 (UTC) reply
  • 5x expanded Caitlin Van Sickle (calculated it needed to be 7,725+ – currently ~8,200). Just Brumbaugh left to do. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 02:42, 23 March 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Expanding Brumbaugh is taking longer than I thought, but I'm almost certain I can have it done by the end of tomorrow. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 23:26, 26 March 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Was able to finish Brumbaugh tonight. Needed to be 10,725, now is at ~13,000 bytes. @ TonyTheTiger: All the articles are ready for review now. (Still have to do the QPQs, of course). Also, tell me your thoughts of the date request I mentioned? Thanks! BeanieFan11 ( talk) 01:20, 27 March 2024 (UTC) reply
Collapsing individual article reviews as everything was addressed. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 16:50, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
The DYK tool gives the following results:
  • David Raymond, 3177 characters created by BeanieFan11 on March 13, 2024
    • WP:AGF on hook quote claim.
    • Maybe revise 'the man who "practically invented the modern sports mascot"' to 'the "inventor" of the modern sports mascot'
    • 41.9% copyvio result stems from direct quotations that are presented with proper WP:ICs.
  • Jonathan Stoklosa, 1996 characters created by BeanieFan11 on March 18, 2024
    • I am a former competitive powerlifter myself. I have deadlifted 600 lbs, but that was a career personal best. I can not now. I think "can lift up to 425 pounds" should be changed to "has lifted 425 pounds" (sources confirmed)
    • 14.5% copyvio result stems from poor paraphrasing. Often times the exact phrasing of the source is used, but not at a too problematic level. Better paraphrasing is encouraged.- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 03:42, 29 March 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Cheryl Hamilton, 2574 characters created by BeanieFan11 on March 17, 2024
    • Can we tigten up "turned one of the world's best gymnastics judges" to "turned Olympic games judge", which has a more encyclopedic and neutral tone (sources confirmed).
    • 18% copyvio result from quotation and Official terminology and names.
  • Kevin Tresolini, 2647 characters created by BeanieFan11 on March 21, 2024
    • Can we shorten 'Delaware's "preeminent sportswriter"' to 'a "preeminent sportswriter"'? (sources confirmed)
    • 9.9% copyvio result all good.
  • Eric Cannon, 2496 characters created by BeanieFan11 on March 17, 2024
  • I am the Thomas Wilcher article creator. You have motivated me to dig up some NCAA results. Here are two indoor All-American (top 8) finishes: [4], [5].
  • Here is where to find the outdoor results: https://www.ustfccca.org/meets-results/meet-history?series=3369.
  • Gary Chelosky, 1942 characters created by BeanieFan11 on March 19, 2024
    • Source confirmed.
    • 3.8% copyvio result all good.
  • Marcy Levine, 2075 characters created by BeanieFan11 on March 20, 2024
    • NCAA women's gymnastics tournament? Link it. Even only one National or international championship deserves some medals bling in the infobox. Maccabiah Games and maybe AIAW too. (source confirmed)
    • 3.8% copyvio result all good.
  • Caitlin Van Sickle, 8266 characters moved from User:Knope7/sandbox/Caitlin Van Snickle on August 11, 2016, expansion began 22 edits ago on March 22, 2024
    • previously 1547 characters (required 7735 for 5x)
    • Source confirmed.
    • 18% copyvio result from quotation and Official terminology and names.
  • Cliff Brumbaugh, 14345 characters created by Deiz on June 8, 2007, expansion began 38 edits ago on March 24, 2024
    • previously 2143 characters (required 10715 for 5x)
    • The phrase "10 hits, four RBIs, two hits and one home run" can not be right.
    • This infobox could host more highlights, MVPs and All-league or All-start honrs.
      • Per the Del. Sports HOF, Brumbaugh was a five-time minor league all-star and four-time all-star in Asia; however, the years aren't mentioned. We know three of the minor league all-star selections (1995, 1999, 2010) – he also was MVP in at least 1995 and 2010. As for the Asian leagues, it seems we know 2003 and 2004, but the other years are less certain. We also know a bunch of honors from HS/college. What do you suggest? BeanieFan11 ( talk) 02:01, 2 April 2024 (UTC) reply
    • Source confirmed.
    • 12.3% copyvio result from poor paraphrasing.
      • Are you referring to the Baseball-Reference.com link? Its just two basic sentences that I'm not sure could be reworded differently, and the match is half a machine-generated part at the end, while the other half, I'm not sure how they consider that a match. Thoughts? BeanieFan11 ( talk) 01:40, 2 April 2024 (UTC) reply

      • The date request window is 6 weeks, I believe. So you can only request dates within 6 weeks of the date that you nominate a hook. You can read further about special occaision requests at WP:DYKSO.- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 20:03, 28 March 2024 (UTC) reply
        • Crap! I was never aware of that! And just two weeks off. Is it possible to IAR, something? One of the main reasons I nominated this was in hope that it could be set for that date... BeanieFan11 ( talk) 20:06, 28 March 2024 (UTC) reply
          • It says exceptions to the six-week limit can be implemented by way of a local consensus at WT:DYK. I'll open a discussion about it once the reviewing is done. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 20:09, 28 March 2024 (UTC) reply
Collapsing lengthy ALT talk that is moot with the below proposals. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 03:13, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply


Approved nominations

Articles created/expanded on February 28

Kirby: King of Comics

Jack Kirby
Jack Kirby

** ALT1: ... that Mark Evanier was a good friend of Jack Kirby (pictured) which gave him access to lots of original art to include in his biography? Source: https://www.theguardian.com/books/2008/may/03/featuresreviews.guardianreview12 ** ALT2: ... that while writing Kirby: King of Comics, once Mark Evanier hit a word count of 250,000 he considered the book nowhere near finished? Source: https://www.theguardian.com/books/2008/may/03/featuresreviews.guardianreview12

5x expanded by OlifanofmrTennant ( talk). Self-nominated at 20:54, 1 March 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Kirby: King of Comics; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page. reply

  • Expanded 5x, from 319 to 1614 characters; long enough. Well-sourced, neutral, no plagiarism. I like the first hook; its source is reliable. Great image; I agree that's a better one than the book cover. Well done taking a stub to a short-ish and salvageable article. Good to go. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Figureskatingfan ( talkcontribs) 21:12, 29 March 2024 (UTC) reply

I have pulled this nom from prep, as it fails to include a summary of the book's contents and thus fails WP:DYKCOMPLETE. It also contains at least two errors, one which says Evanier "obtained" artworks from Kirby "while working for him" - he only obtained access, and not apparently while working for him, and another which says the book was met with "positive" reviews when in fact it was panned by The Guardian critic. The article clearly needs more work before it can be featured, if it should be featured at all given the apparent errors. Gatoclass ( talk) 09:50, 10 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Gatoclass I've begun working on a summary of the books contents, its been a while sinces I've read the book so I'll have to look over it again Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 05:22, 13 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Pinging nominator OlifanofmrTennant, reviewer Figureskatingfan, and promoter PrimalMustelid. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 ( talk) 12:15, 11 April 2024 (UTC) reply
There has been no improvement of the article. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 ( talk) 00:43, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ AirshipJungleman29: I feel that their has been improvement of the article I've just been struggling to find content supported backed up by sources. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 01:25, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Upon reviewing policy I belive that it would be covered under WP:DYKCITE Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 02:11, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply

I took a look at this. The summary is extremely short, to the point of remaining woefully incomplete. Still fails WP:DYKCOMPLETE. Time to pass on this as the nominator just isn't accepting what they are being told. 4meter4 ( talk) 13:55, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply

@ 4meter4: I've expanded it a bit how much would be needed? I fear that to much would just be a mini biography of Jack Kirby. It took me a while to begin writing the summary as I didnt have my copy at the time. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 14:40, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
OlifanofmrTennant The summary needs to present a complete but not overly detailed picture of the book's entire plot. It should provide enough detail to give the reader a general picture of the book's contents. It should not be too vague (which it currently is) nor should it be overly detailed. It should be a summary. See MOS:PLOT and Wikipedia:Summary style for guidance. I would suggest removing the bulleted point by chapter. It isn't entirely necessary to break down the content into chapters. It would be better to concentrate on narrative. What is the story being told? Summarize that story. Since this is a biography it should be biographical. Best. 4meter4 ( talk) 14:57, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
See also Wikipedia:WikiProject Books/Non-fiction article on summaries for non-fiction such as biographies. It might be helpful to think about how you would summarize the book if you were writing for a summary on the book jacket of the back of the book, or if you were having to write a book summary for an English class, or an abstract for a journal article book review in which a summary is provided as part of a review. All of those require narrative and details but still succinct writing with an overview scope. You should be able to craft one or two paragraps of prose that summarizes the book's narrative arc. 4meter4 ( talk) 15:26, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Nominator has not made any movement on this since the above discussion. It's time to close this for failing WP:DYKCOMPLETE. 4meter4 ( talk) 15:36, 25 April 2024 (UTC) reply

I have. I've just been struggling to do so as I havent written a book article before. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 16:21, 25 April 2024 (UTC) reply

I took a re-look and I think the summary is now sufficiently in-depth to pass WP:DYKCOMPLETE. I would have preferred a paragraph structure with smoother prose, but that is no reason to hold up a DYK review. All other DYK criteria check out. However, portions of both the Alt1 and Alt2 hook facts are not currently in the article. The quote "nowhere near finished" is not in the article, and there is no mention of a friendship between Evanier and Kirby. For this reason, only the original hook can be promoted. 4meter4 ( talk) 16:37, 25 April 2024 (UTC) reply

@ 4meter4: I made a few new hooks as those arent the best. Also since ALT0 is wrong I rephrased it. Also ALT2 is included now. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 17:10, 25 April 2024 (UTC) reply
OlifanofmrTennant Please add citations directly after each hook fact. Any sentence with a fact in a hook must have a citation to pass DYK review. In just rechecking Alt2, the sentence with the hook fact lacks a citation and the text that's in quotes in the hook is not in quotes in the article. Is this a quote? If it is it needs to be in quotes in the article's prose. If it's not a quote then it should not be in quotes within the hook sentence. I'm not going to even look at the other hooks until you have fixed this one and can assure me all the necessary citations are in place. Ping me when you are ready. 4meter4 ( talk) 17:45, 25 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ 4meter4: its there, its the gaurdian source. But reguardless I used the citation again higher in the paragraph. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 17:52, 25 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ OlifanofmrTennant In looking at the Alt2 hook fact, it is not a quote of Evanier directly but it is a quote of The Guardian. The text needs to attribute it to The Guardian in quotes in both the article and the hook, or its a problem with WP:Plagiarism. This needs to be fixed. We can't promote an article with plagiarism issues. Now that I've seen this, I'm going to have to go through all the sources and make sure there aren't other issues of non-attributed text or close paraphrasing. I had trusted the original reviewer had done this, but I'm going to have to re-review with a careful eye on any copyright violations. In the mean time, please put the attributions for this quote in the article. Also, I was asking earlier for you to confirm that all the citations were in place for the many alt hooks you proposed. I don't want to have to keep coming back here and asking again for more citations. Every hook fact must have a citation immediately following the sentence of the hook fact. This may mean we duplicate citations in ways that we may not do when not featuring an article at DYK. This is one of those hoops that DYK requires, even if it seems redundant. 4meter4 ( talk) 19:12, 25 April 2024 (UTC) reply

New reviewer needed. I'm not seeing any more close paraphrasing, but I'd like a second set of eyes on this just to make sure I didn't miss anything. 4meter4 ( talk) 22:32, 29 April 2024 (UTC) reply

I can't see any either. Let's roll.-- Laun chba ller 09:09, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on March 12

Forever Young (horse)

Forever Young
Forever Young

Created by NinetyNineDragon ( talk). Self-nominated at 16:16, 12 March 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Forever Young (horse); consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page. reply

    • Comments: Well done for creating such an article. However, to make this article more presentable as I mentioned in the Talk area of the article that the Japanese references in the article need to be replaced with English. Both JBIS and Netkeiba have English and can readily be used as references.
    • The statistics needs to conform to what is used in the English wikipedia space. There are columns with abbreviations which as specific in Japanese form reader but for the US/English make no sense. Also the odds are not displayed as payout coefficients. Margins are in lengths or part of horse's posture (head, neck, nose etc...) Brudder Andrusha ( talk) 21:49, 12 March 2024 (UTC) reply
      • First of all, thank you very much for revising the article. The quality of the article cannot be decent without your help. Second, may I know whether there are any rules stating that English references are better than those which are not in English? For articles about Japanese stuff, isn't that Japanese references are more accurate and relevant?
      • Third, for your comment about the abbreviations in the statistics section, could you provide some good articles for my reference? You may guess that I am not that familiar with horse racing from my contributions (but obviously someone with limited knowledge cannot write this article). NinetyNineDragon ( talk) 15:39, 13 March 2024 (UTC) reply
  • This is a comment and not a review, but even as someone who's watched Uma Musume, I'm not a fan of the hook. It's more about Fujita or even the game itself than the horse, and the guidelines say that hooks that are only tangentially about the bolded article should be avoided. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 14:00, 13 March 2024 (UTC) reply
    • I believe the hook is definitely not tangentially about the article. The information in the hook is completely mentioned in the headline of the source (the Nikkan Sports article) I put above. I guess not everyone here knows Japanese so let me put a rough translations of the headline here: "[ Saudi Derby] Uma Musume's Fujita Susumu Got First Overseas Graded Race Victory, Owns Forever Young '[I] won'". If you google Japanese news articles about Forever Young, you will find it is not rare for them to mention Uma Musume at the same time.
    • If you think it is not generally interesting enough, is this better to you:
    'ALT1:' ... that someone wants Forever Young (pictured), the winner of the Saudi Derby, to be turned into a horse girl because he is owned by the CEO of CyberAgent? Source: https://www.inside-games.jp/article/2023/12/13/150914.html
I mean, even the source you provided (or at least the quote) focuses on the owner and not the horse itself. Having said that, ALT1 might be better and address my concerns, but the wording isn't the greatest given how vague the word "someone" is in this context. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 02:55, 14 March 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Full review needed, including hooks. Thank you. BlueMoonset ( talk) 18:55, 27 March 2024 (UTC) reply


General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: None required.

Overall: Thank you for this positive article about a racehorse. The picture is nice, too. Just two issues:

  • (1) Earwig picks up only one phrase: the track record for the distance by about two seconds. Please rephrase it, to avoid copyright violation..
  • Hooks: ALT0 is fine. We are talking about a racehorse here, which is not a person or a pet. In this context it is a sports icon and the property of an investor (Some of us may not like that, but that's not the point. The point is the facts). So we must compare it to articles about racing cars, racing bikes etc. where riders, owners and winnings get all the attention.
  • (2) In ALT1, the word "someone" is a bit weird, even a bit creepy. Maybe name them - or at least their trade or position?
  • Re article content: notability for this subject seems to be about the winning record, which is a good one in this case. and the winnings are tabled in full in the article. So no problem of content there.
  • I have given the article a minor copyedit, which does not affect DYK.

If you can resolve the above two issues, then this nomination should be good to go. Storye book ( talk) 11:16, 12 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Note: @ NinetyNineDragon: As of this edit on 16 April 2024, the article has had a number of new edits, but the above issues have not been addressed. Please resolve this? Thank you. Storye book ( talk) 11:12, 16 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Update: @ NinetyNineDragon: Points (1) and (2) above have still not been addressed. Please do that? Thank you. Storye book ( talk) 09:25, 23 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Personally I prefer ALT3 because (1) you wonder why on earth? and (2) there is less emphasis on his owner. Mary Mark Ockerbloom ( talk) 13:48, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Thank you, Mary Mark Ockerbloom, for resolving points 1 and 2. I have struck out those points above, and also ALT1. Your additions to the article have now produced more copyvio (quoted below). Please would you kindly rephrase it.

On March 30, Forever Young drew the outside, 11 gate for the 1,900-meter ... He broke well and jockey Ryusei Sakai let him take an outside position behind the leaders. As the field straightened into the stretch, South American Auto Bahn went to the front but could not withstand the relentless charge of the

  • Please remember, it is not good practice to copy and paste copyright source material into an article, and then try to rephrase it. You always end up with copyright bits remaining. The best way is to read it in the original, try to remember it, then write it in your own words in the article. If that is really too difficult, then copy it as a formal quotation into the article, with a citation at the end of it. DYK reviewers will usually spot any copyvio, so it is a waste of your own time and ours if you copy and paste with no quotation marks. No matter how experienced we are, we editors all have to work like that. (Of course, un-rephraseable words like proper names, with capital letters, long scientific terms, etc. are OK, and not counted as copyvio).
  • I am happy to accept ALTs 2 and 3 in good faith, as I cannot read the foreign-language citations. Storye book ( talk) 15:43, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Hello @ Storye book: The copyvios were introduced by someone else, but I have rephrased them since that is clearly needed to move this forward. (Also I confirmed alts 2 and 3 using google translate.) Mary Mark Ockerbloom ( talk) 16:14, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Thank you, Mary Mark Ockerbloom, for correcting the above. Unfortunately, now that the larger piece of copyvio has been removed, Earwig has found another smaller one: "under rider Yusaku Oka, the colt jogged in the one-mile chute for about 20 minutes before taking a". Please rephrase it, or change it to a quote? Thanks. Storye book ( talk) 17:33, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 2

World Central Kitchen aid convoy attack

Created by Makeandtoss ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 37 past nominations.

Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.

Makeandtoss ( talk) 13:41, 3 April 2024 (UTC). reply

My objection is now outdated. Events and sources are moving. starship .paint ( RUN) 02:44, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
The following discussion has been closed. Please do not modify it.


  • Objection - the content in the hook three consecutive missiles fired by an Israeli drone cannot be presented in Wikivoice using this Haaretz source, which said that the information comes from Israeli defense sources. Haaretz has not independently reported the information (without attribution). starship .paint ( RUN) 00:05, 4 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Starship.paint: The same material has been covered in RS including NYT, Al Jazeera, BBC, and Bellingcat; and in visual investigations not just reporting articles. All RS have provided the same information about three missiles being shot. I don't see why information from RS requires attribution, especially given that all these RS agree on the same exact point. Makeandtoss ( talk) 08:54, 4 April 2024 (UTC) reply
They agree on the same point, but they don’t seem to have independently verified it. Perhaps something like “three separate vehicles” will be closer to having verified coverage? FortunateSons ( talk) 09:48, 4 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ FortunateSons: They did verify it themselves -i.e independently- using visual data, please read the Bellingcat, AJ and BBC investigations. Makeandtoss ( talk) 10:01, 4 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Source article links please. starship .paint ( RUN) 10:08, 4 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Makeandtoss: - you are assuming too much of the sources. (1) Bellingcat does not say three consecutive strikes, they simply say Israeli airstrike, Bellingcat cannot confirm that it was missiles or that they were even fired by a drone: Although not possible to be certain without fragments of the munition itself, the WCK vehicles bear the hallmarks of a precision strike by inert or low-yield missiles ... In order to successfully accomplish a laser guided strike it is necessary for a platform, such as a drone, to “illuminate” the target with a laser while the missile is launched. (2) BBC writes that the evidence suggests there was more than one strike, but this is not confirmation, BBC's experts also do not confirm that it was a drone strike: Chris Cobb-Smith, a former British Army officer and ex-UN weapons inspector, said the attack was probably the result of drone-launched Spike missiles ... Justin Crump, a former British Army officer who runs Sibylline - a risk intelligence company - agreed. He says the attack "was likely drone-launched and targeted". He added the strike had probably been caused by a missile, rather than a bomb or mortar. (3) Al Jazeera goes the furthest, their article text says The shelling targeted three vehicles belonging to WCK, one at a time, but if you read the article text, there is no mention of drone missiles, instead they say: Analysis of images of the second and third targeted vehicles showed signs of a projectile entering from the top and exiting through the bottom, suggesting that the cars were targeted from the air. Now, Al Jazeera's image does mention "drone strikes" and missiles, but I find it peculiar that they didn't mention (or even attempt to explain) it in the article text. The sources are simply weaker than you portray them to be. None of them confirm, all of them are simply suggesting / probably / likely etc. starship .paint ( RUN) 11:55, 4 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Can I suggest some edits to the hook to make it clearer what happened? I'd suggest something like Humanitarian and aid organizations suspended their operations in the Gaza Strip after seven World Central Kitchen aid workers were killed when their marked cars on a preapproved route were bombed by Israeli drones. I think its really important to make clear they were in marked cars, they were also on a route approved by the Israeli military. Makeandtoss what do you think? Also have any additional sources been published that would resolve the dissagreement above? If not maybe a third party could be involved to help resolve if the sourcing meets Wikipedia's rules. John Cummings ( talk) 13:48, 4 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Please note that this is also nominated at ITN. It can only reach the main page through one of the possible venues. At this point, there isn't consensus to post to ITN, but that can change. Schwede 66 02:12, 5 April 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Starship.paint: @ John Cummings: Thanks for commenting. Starship.paint, building on our discussion on the talk page, I think we can both agree to this ALT1 version: ... that the attack on World Central Kitchen convoy in the Gaza Strip, which killed seven aid workers, was likely a result of three consecutive missiles fired by an Israeli drone? Makeandtoss ( talk) 14:07, 5 April 2024 (UTC) reply

I don't think I can add anything more than what starship.paint and John Cummings have said. Any hook we run on this topic should be widely supported across a cross section of media, and be independently verified. Otherwise its likely to be challenged at Wikipedia:Main Page/Errors. We need a hook that won't get pulled. John made some good suggestions. 4meter4 ( talk) 02:29, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Makeandtoss, 4meter4, John Cummings, and Narutolovehinata5: I've hatted my objection above due to recent events: the IDF's admission, which I believe supports this hook: starship .paint ( RUN) 02:54, 6 April 2024 (UTC)@ FortunateSons: - forgot to ping. starship .paint ( RUN) 02:58, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Starship.paint: Thanks for the ping, I agree that the objection is now out of date. FortunateSons ( talk) 07:51, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply

ALT2 ... that the Israel Defense Forces have accepted responsibility for killing seven World Central Kitchen aid workers in targeted drone strikes that destroyed the aid workers' cars, one by one? Source 1: Associated Press Source 2: CBS News Source 3: BBC News starship .paint ( RUN) 02:54, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply

I would be ok with this as long as there are no objections to featuring violent content at DYK. There has been some pushback of late against featuring potentially disturbing hooks. That said, this hook appears to have wide support in media, and is so widely reported I don’t think an argument for censoring would be successful. 4meter4 ( talk) 02:59, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Well, our main page constantly features potentially disturbing content, so I don't see why this can't be, either. Right now, our ITN section: A severe earthquake strikes near Hualien City, Taiwan ... In Syria, an Israeli airstrike kills 16 people at the Iranian consulate in Damascus, including brigadier general Mohammad Reza Zahedi ... A bus falls from a bridge in Limpopo, South Africa, killing 45 people ... The Francis Scott Key Bridge in the U.S. city of Baltimore collapses after being hit by a container ship. starship .paint ( RUN) 06:08, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
DYK and ITN have different goals. In addition, the issues with IP hooks have never really been about violence but rather tone and POV. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 06:23, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
One might consider, is the problem Wikipedia's "tone and POV", or does the event inherently make one side look bad? I'd say the answer is provided by the BBC: There are also moments, like the last few days in the Middle East, when events leave belligerents and their allies at a crossroads with big decisions to make ... The killing of foreign aid workers in Gaza might finally exhaust the considerable patience of Israel's allies, led by the United States. and Reuters: the killing of a group of aid workers by an Israeli air strike summed up both the dire humanitarian crisis and the lack of a clear way out of a conflict that is leaving Israel increasingly isolated. The attack on Monday night that killed seven staff of the World Central Kitchen (WCK) aid group, including six foreigners, has angered even some of Israel's closest allies, adding to growing pressure for an end to the fighting. starship .paint ( RUN) 07:09, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Starship.paint: ALT2 doesn't really sound interesting, but more like a news headline; do you have any other alternatives? Makeandtoss ( talk) 10:15, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Makeandtoss I don't think it's going to be possible to run a different kind of hook without being accused of trivializing the event. This would probably pull the hook into Wikipedia:Main Page/Errors. Optics for an event like this are going to force us to keep the main event front and center in the hook. As such I don't see there being any meaningfully different hooks passing DYK review. Alt2 is probably our best option. 4meter4 ( talk) 12:18, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
An admission to killing seven aid workers in targeted strikes ... not interesting?! It is no less interesting than the originally proposed hook, Makeandtoss. starship .paint ( RUN) 12:51, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Starship.paint: @ 4meter4: If there is support for ALT2 then I would go for it. Makeandtoss ( talk) 12:55, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Approving hook ALT2 per WP:CONSENSUS opinion. Article appears to be compliant with all DYK review criteria (newness, length, inline citations, NPOV, etc.) Hook fact is widely supported and independently verified in many sources. Promoter will need to check whether this gets featured at ITN. If it does, we can't feature it at DYK because it will have already been on the main page. 4meter4 ( talk) 13:02, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Not so fast. This article has been moved twice in the last 24 hours. It should probably stabilise first.-- Laun chba ller 13:06, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Not yet, the Israeli explanation of events hasn't been fully added to the article. I didn't have time to do it yesterday. But, I can probably add it now. starship .paint ( RUN) 13:11, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
The article is stable and was moved without consensus. As for the Israeli explanation of events, its already in the article, the expansion of it doesn't affect moving forward with the DYK anyway. Makeandtoss ( talk) 13:14, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Makeandtoss Page moves whether with or without consensus are a clear sign of instability. I would suggest not getting in a back and forth over issues like this, because if you argue its only likely to tank the DYK approval. @ Launchballer I hear you, but from a DYK reviewer standpoint this is ready to go. There's nothing more on our checklist for the reviewer to do, and the nominee has done everything they need to do. Obviously, the promoter will need to evaluate stability because it is a current event. Due to the backlog there will be a natural signigicant delay anyway before this gets put into prep. I think it best that we leave it to the promoter to determine when its stable enough to move it into the queue. That's not something we need to worry about from the DYK evaluator standpoint. We can trust in the promoting admin to evaluate that. If it hangs out in the approved hook area for a while everything should be fine. 4meter4 ( talk) 13:20, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ 4meter4: There is no back and forth here; I reverted the latest page move because it was undiscussed and because multiple editors on the talk page agreed as well. The article is stable but one or two more days of waiting will not hurt as you said. Makeandtoss ( talk) 13:31, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
No, Makeandtoss, the article's Israeli explanation is incomplete. This will become apparent when I add the content (I am writing it right now). starship .paint ( RUN) 13:21, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Done. starship .paint ( RUN) 13:34, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Both of you need to quit or I will have to pull the DYK tick. The article has had some instability issues as is typical of a current event. The article is likely to be edited heavily as new information is released. Any promoting admin will need to monitor the stability of the article before promoting. This means that if there are content disputes, edit wars, page moves, etc. the article will have to remain in the approved section until all that settles. I would suggest a minimum of two weeks of calm (ie no content reversions in the article's editing history, no arguments on the talk page, no page moves) before the article is featured at DYK. Best. 4meter4 ( talk) 13:46, 6 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Given the concerns about stability above and the other issues, it probably wouldn't be safe to mark this as approved until at least a couple of weeks from now. Once the article has stabilized, it can probably be given a fresh look. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 22:24, 7 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Narutolovehinata5 Have your concerns been assuaged?-- Laun chba ller 12:27, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
If the article has stabilized then, yes, this is ready for a fresh review. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 13:15, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Launchballer and Narutolovehinata5 currently tagged for a formal title change discussion. Stability is therefore still an issue. I don't think this needs a formal re-review. I already did a competent review. Someone just needs to check for stability and once that has been established, Alt2 can be ticked. 4meter4 ( talk) 13:20, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
After a prolonged discussion resulting in a move, I think it is safe to say that the article is now stable. Hook edited accordingly. Makeandtoss ( talk) 10:11, 26 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Reviewer needed now that article has stabilized and the hooks reflect the new article name. BlueMoonset ( talk) 03:56, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply
If stability is the only barrier and this has now stabilised, then this is good to go.-- Laun chba ller 09:47, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 5

Axel Downard-Wilke

Axel Downard-Wilke presenting on Wikipedia's homepage while the homepage featured a video he was in
Axel Downard-Wilke presenting on Wikipedia's homepage while the homepage featured a video he was in
Moved to mainspace by Marshelec ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 5 past nominations.

Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.

Marshelec ( talk) 04:03, 7 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Not "recent", per WP:DYKHOOK: "The hook should include a definite fact that is unlikely to change". Try "March 2024" instead. Otherwise, nice article (although I'm not quite sure how comfortable I am actually reviewing this, given I'm the one that put the hook there!)-- Laun chba ller 08:31, 8 April 2024 (UTC) reply
    Amended hook. Marshelec ( talk) 08:49, 8 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Full review needed.-- Laun chba ller 08:51, 8 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Actually, I'm really sorry to be so anal about this, but there is an outside chance there could be more than one this year, so it should really give the month.-- Laun chba ller 09:21, 8 April 2024 (UTC) reply
I understand the requirement, and could add the month, but in this case I believe the year is sufficient. As a member of the affiliate that organised the Wikicon, I know that this was the annual Wikicon - ie the only one for 2024. The next one is planned to be in Christchurch in 2025. See m:wiki/Wikimedia_Aotearoa_New_Zealand#Activity:_Annual_National_WikiConference for verification. Marshelec ( talk) 06:38, 9 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Fair enough. Full review needed.-- Laun chba ller 07:57, 9 April 2024 (UTC) reply
BlueMoonset This is the oldest fully unreviewed nom. Given that I put that hook on the front page, does WP:DYKRR prohibit me from reviewing it?-- Laun chba ller 14:24, 18 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Launchballer, it seems to me that you're involved. The nomination isn't even two weeks old; I wouldn't worry about "oldest fully unreviewed nom"; it will get picked up by someone else soon enough. BlueMoonset ( talk) 19:47, 18 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Article is new and long enough. Sourcing looks good and Earwig raises no concerns. Hook is interesting and sourced in the article. Photo is clear, licensing looks good, and works amazingly with the hook (I'd love to see this as the image hook). QPQ done so we are good to go. PCN02WPS ( talk | contribs) 15:43, 20 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Ron's Place

Painting from outsider art flat Ron's Place
Painting from outsider art flat Ron's Place

Source: BBC: "Now, supporters of Ron’s Place, including singer Jarvis Cocker, are trying to raise money to buy his old flat and turn it into a space for artists." The Guardian: "Catherine Croft, the director of the Twentieth Century Society, said Ron’s Place was '20th century heritage unlike any other, the first example of outsider art to be nationally listed'."

Created by Jonathan Deamer ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 5 past nominations.

Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.

Jonathan Deamer ( talk) 17:39, 11 April 2024 (UTC). reply

Minotaur from Ron's Place
Minotaur from Ron's Place
  • Article is new enough and long enough. It is well-sourced, neutral, presentable, and BLP-compliant. Earwig checks out. Images are freely licensed (I'm assuming these are eligible under Commons:COM:FOP UK as a public interior and works of artistic craftsmanship). The hook is cited and interesting. I've added the Minotaur image as an option per the talk page discussion. Both images are clear at a small size. QPQ has been done. gobonobo + c 12:37, 12 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 6

Kiro Gligorov

Kiro Gligorov
Kiro Gligorov
Improved to Good Article status by StephenMacky1 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.

StephenMacky1 ( talk) 16:31, 9 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article recently updated to GA-status. Hook mentioned in the article and the article has no issues with copyright. Good to go. - Toadboy123 ( talk) 08:54, 11 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 7

Mad honey

Spoonful of mad honey
Spoonful of mad honey
Created by Gobonobo ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 114 past nominations.

Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.

gobonobo + c 07:21, 14 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • To be honest, I really don't understand the main hook or ALT1. Why are "giant" and "make" in italics? It kind of looks like the word order got scrambled. Pinging Gobonobo in case this is an accident that passed unnoticed. Oh , my bad, it's a joke, I didn't read the comment. But given that users reading the hook won't have the privilege of seeing the comment, this should probably be tagged with Humor. Cremastra ( talk) 20:19, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply
    • Full review needed. Striking both original hook and ALT1; parentheses are not allowed as part of hooks (except for "pictured" and the like). BlueMoonset ( talk) 03:44, 17 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Long enough, new enough. ALT2 short enough, interesting, and AGF sourced (shame about the other two). No neutrality issues found, no maintenance templates found. There's one quote in the article which is two paragraphs, only one of which is cited; I say it's obvious that the cite covers both, so I would pass this, but for the presence of single-sentence paragraphs which should be expanded per WP:DYKCOMPLETE.-- Laun chba ller 10:42, 19 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Launchballer: I've added a reference to the first half of the quote and moved a sentence. I'm not sure which other paragraphs strike you as not DYKCOMPLETE, I think the only single-sentence paragraph now is the one on legality. I could find no other (reliable) sources addressing legality, though I think it worth mentioning that it is banned in South Korea. gobonobo + c 16:10, 19 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Looking at the source, that could easily be expanded. I wonder if it's worth knocking it and the paragraph together into a general 'Usage' section?-- Laun chba ller 16:42, 19 April 2024 (UTC) reply
I could use some clarification. I'm not sure which paragraph you are referring to or which source. Is the issue a matter of how sections/paragraphs are arranged or is there an aspect that is not reasonably complete? This source mentions the 2005 ban in South Korea but makes no mention of legality in other countries. gobonobo + c 17:51, 19 April 2024 (UTC) reply
I did mean that source. What I meant was that the source says "According to a report, South Korea alone imported over 8000 kg of mad honey from Nepal during 2003–04 and then, further import was banned by the Korean government in 2005." The 'imported over 8000 kg' bit could go into the article. I'm not holding the nom up for it though, and given that I've merged it into the above section myself I can pass this.-- Laun chba ller 15:42, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Lewis W. Green

Lewis W. Green
Lewis W. Green
Improved to Good Article status by PCN02WPS ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 76 past nominations.

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PCN02WPS ( talk | contribs) 16:32, 7 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation

QPQ: No - Not done
Overall: @ PCN02WPS: Nice work on this article. The copyvio detector highlighted a few phrases, but they seem to be proper names or common phrases. Everything else checks out policy-wise. Just waiting on the 2 QPQs. Epicgenius ( talk) 17:54, 8 April 2024 (UTC) reply

  • Missing QPQs are required to be supplied within seven days of a review or comment pointing out that they are missing; it's now been twelve. Please submit your QPQs this weekend. Thank you. BlueMoonset ( talk) 13:59, 20 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Ernest Prestwich, Harrogate War Memorial

Harrogate War Memorial
Harrogate War Memorial
Created by Storye book ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 103 past nominations.

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Storye book ( talk) 08:37, 9 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Re Earwig's comparison of Harrogate War Memorial: it only picks up proper names and a quotation beginning "one of the first British servicewomen...", which is properly signified as a quotation, and attributed in the article. As far as I am aware, there is no poor paraphrasing or copyvio in that article. Storye book ( talk) 09:40, 11 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • As I understand it, isolated, short, common phrases are de minimis, and do not count as copyvio. No big-ass lawyer hoping to make his fortune off us would pick on that one. it would cost him money when it got laughed out of court. However, just to keep the peace I have rephrased it for you. Storye book ( talk) 15:20, 11 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • ALT1: ... that Harrogate War Memorial (pictured), by Ernest Prestwich, names 1163 casualties of the First and Second World Wars, of whom 300 have unknown graves, and the youngest was 15 years old? (source as ALT0 above).
  • I have removed the dodgy numbers from the article. The plaques were removed, rewritten and replaced in 1948, and who knows whether they have been corrected (or just misread) since then. The name-counts were probably all correct in their day. Harrogate Civic Society counted them last, and they had two people spending five years on the study of all the war dead mentioned, ending in 2023, so they have the best chance of being up to date and correct. Storye book ( talk) 15:13, 11 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 8

George Henry Jenkins

Jenkins in 1901
Jenkins in 1901
Created by ITBF ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 21 past nominations.

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ITBF ( talk) 11:58, 15 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Length, date, hook, image, qpq, close paraphrase checks out. -- Soman ( talk) 00:33, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Agnes Kimball

Agnes Kimball (1912)
Agnes Kimball (1912)
  • ... that although Agnes Kimball (pictured) was a popular recording artist of opera and musical theatre, she never appeared as a singing actress on the stage? Source: Kutsch, K. J.; Riemens, Leo (2003). "Kimball, Agnes". In Rost, Hansjörg (ed.). Grosses Sängerlexikon. Vol. Kainz–Menkes. K. G. Saur Verlag. p. 2380.
Created by 4meter4 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 73 past nominations.

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4meter4 ( talk) 02:42, 10 April 2024 (UTC). reply

Interesting life and work, on fine sources, offline sources accepted AGF. The hook works for me. The image is licensed and an excellent illustration not only of the person but also the period at a glance. I have a few points about the article that you may consider, irrelevant for DYK.
  1. Her name. I would not call her Kimball until she is married.
  2. I would - as you know - whenever a composition has an article, mention the composer only by last name without link, to avoid two links in a row, and to link the more specific thing. People who really don't know Rossini can find that in the Stabat Mater article, - Stabat Mater as a standard Latin phrase like Magnificat not needing italics.
  3. GSL - I would link to Großes Sängerlexikon, - as written, with the two authors, it sounds as if two people had arrived at the same view independently. I strongly recommend to use the actual link to page in the latest edition.
    Kutsch, K. J.; Riemens, Leo (2012). "Kimball, Agnes". Großes Sängerlexikon (in German) (4th ed.). De Gruyter. p. 2380. ISBN  978-3-59-844088-5.
  4. I have a hard time with the wording "They had one daughter together" - why not "They had a daughter"?
  5. Second image: I'd find it better on the right side, making her "turn in" (the posture rather than the eyes), and use standard upright size.
  6. I am not sure that "beautifully conducted" is the right term for "schön geführt" talking about voices, but am too unfamiliar with such technical terms in English to recommend something better.
Again thank you for much detail about a forgotten singer! -- Gerda Arendt ( talk) 14:18, 10 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Gerda Arendt Thanks for the review Gerda. I incorporated most of your suggestions. In terms of the translation of "schön geführt" would "beautifully executed" be a better translation than "beautifully conducted"? You are after all a native German speaker. 4meter4 ( talk) 15:09, 10 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Yes, I'm a native German speaker, but unfamiliar with the terms to describe voices in English. "geführt" suggests "in control" and an even production of lines without register breaks, but is there one word for it in English. I heard "gut geführt" more often than "schön geführt", btw. -- Gerda Arendt ( talk) 15:42, 10 April 2024 (UTC) reply
I think "beautifully controlled" would be a fine translation for English speakers. I've made that change per your input. 4meter4 ( talk) 15:47, 10 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Thank you! -- Gerda Arendt ( talk) 16:19, 10 April 2024 (UTC) reply

William F. Fiedler

William F. Fiedler
William F. Fiedler
Created by Toadboy123 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 30 past nominations.

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Toadboy123 ( talk) 06:20, 8 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article eligibility and quality check out, as does the hook itself. No evidence of copyvio. You do need a second QPQ though, as DYK is currently in backlog mode: editors with more than 20 past nominations need two QPQs at the moment. Generalissima ( talk) (it/she) 06:35, 9 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Mounir Akbache

Akbache rabbiting the 2022 FBK Games 1500 metres
Akbache rabbiting the 2022 FBK Games 1500 metres
  • ... that after failing to qualify for prestigious races as an athlete, Mounir Akbache (pictured) became a rabbit? Source: In "Mounir Akbache, un coureur au service des autres" (in French), "Why did you choose to be a hare rather than a runner? I was a good athlete [...] but it didn't allow me to enter the world's biggest races. Today, I have the opportunity to be on the starting line alongside an Olympic or world champion. I'm living exceptional moments that I could never have experienced as an individual."
In L'Equipe (in French), ""Since what they had done two years ago, it was no longer a myth to aim for the world record," jubilated Mounir Akbache, whose first world record as a hare was set."
    • Reviewed:
    • Comment: This is my first DYK nomination, open to feedback.
Created by Habst ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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Habst ( talk) 00:29, 8 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article is just barely long enough, but satisfies other requirements. I don't see any copyvio or outstanding issues (though I would recommend adding a second sentence to the lede). The hook checks out in its current state, but I think it's a bit excessively in length. How about something like "... that after failing to qualify for prestigious races, Mounir Akbache became a rabbit?" I think you can make this a great quirky hook by playing on the rabbit line without actually explaining what that is. Makes people wanna click to learn more. Generalissima ( talk) (it/she) 06:42, 9 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Generalissima, thank you for your feedback.  Done I expanded the article lede, and edited the hook (only part I added onto your suggestion is the phrase "as an athlete" to emphasize the distinction between running solo vs as a rabbit, but you are free to remove it if you think it's awkward). -- Habst ( talk) 10:05, 9 April 2024 (UTC) reply
I like the contrast created between athlete and rabbit here, it's good wordplay. Generalissima ( talk) (it/she) 13:25, 9 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 9

Attica (1974 film)

Moved to mainspace by GamerPro64 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 11 past nominations.

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GamerPro64 01:55, 10 April 2024 (UTC). reply

Phillip Eng

Created by Spaghettifier ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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Spaghettifier ( talk) 13:44, 9 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • - overall, passes the criteria. Definitely an interesting hook too. I think this is ready. Bneu2013 ( talk) 00:33, 10 April 2024 (UTC) reply


Articles created/expanded on April 10

V. Kerry Smith

  • ... that environmental economist V. Kerry Smith has been described as a "Renaissance Man of Economics"? Source: [14] See "critical acclaim" tab: "‘Kerry Smith is a Renaissance Man of Economics. This book represents the master at work, drawing implications from research that traverses four decades of scholarship, the economics of environmental risk comes alive in ideas that scale, policies that are cost-effective, and insights that generalize to situations beyond risk. Anyone who wants to learn, or is just curious about pathbreaking economic work, should pick up this insightful and encyclopedic collection of articles.’ – John List, University of Chicago, US"
Created by Malinaccier ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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Malinaccier ( talk) 01:30, 11 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article length and age are fine, no copyvio or plagiarism concerns (Some common phrases recur between sources and the article when checked with Earwig, but no more than expected), reliable sources are used. Hook seems fine to me, if a bit dry.
This is one of my first QPQ attempts, so apologies if I've messed up!
Maximilian775 ( talk) 13:40, 11 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Just a note that the above review was originally posted on the article's talk page.-- Laun chba ller 21:21, 11 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Li Zhaoxing

Li Zhaoxing
Li Zhaoxing
5x expanded by Toadboy123 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 31 past nominations.

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Toadboy123 ( talk) 13:33, 10 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: 5X expanded recently; all cited; hook is very interesting; picture is under CCA4; waiting for QPQ so this should be afterwards GTG. Makeandtoss ( talk) 16:09, 10 April 2024 (UTC) reply

GTG now . Makeandtoss ( talk) 09:31, 11 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 11

287 Broadway

287 Broadway
287 Broadway
5x expanded by Epicgenius ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 649 past nominations.

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Epicgenius ( talk) 13:40, 11 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Newly 5x expanded. Article is well-sourced, presentable, neutral, and BLP-compliant. Earwig looks fine and no close paraphrasing was detected. Images are freely licensed. The hooks are all cited and interesting. The hook image renders well. For ALT3 and the related quote in the article, the version of the AIA Guide that I'm looking at reads " most succulent cast-iron street-show in all New York". QPQs are needed. Excellent article. gobonobo + c 16:54, 11 April 2024 (UTC) reply
    • Thanks for the review. I will do the QPQs within the next few days, but for now I've fixed ALT3. Epicgenius ( talk) 20:07, 11 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 12

1916 Warsaw City Council election

Decree calling on Warsaw residents to register to vote in the 1916 City Council polls
Decree calling on Warsaw residents to register to vote in the 1916 City Council polls
Moved to mainspace by Soman ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 2. DYK is currently in unreviewed backlog mode and nominator has 373 past nominations.

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Soman ( talk) 12:29, 12 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • I don't have access to that source, nor would I be able to read it, but the hook is good, and the article is in decent condition, no copyvio or glaring issues that I see. I would only recommend wiki-linking curiae, as I have never heard that term used like that before. QPQs check out. Generalissima ( talk) (it/she) 06:17, 14 April 2024 (UTC) reply
    • Thanks, I added link to curiae in the hook. -- Soman ( talk) 10:16, 14 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 13

Thomas Figures, Michael Figures

Created by Muboshgu ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 529 past nominations.

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–  Muboshgu ( talk) 00:25, 13 April 2024 (UTC). Both articles: reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: Yes
  • Interesting: Yes
  • Other problems: No - I would go with ALT1. ALT0 might cause issues at WP:ERRORS because technically it was only two KKK members who were prosecuted, not the whole group.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: @ Muboshgu: Nice work. Everything looks good except for the QPQ. Epicgenius ( talk) 14:10, 16 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Frank Croxton

5x expanded by 4meter4 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 74 past nominations.

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4meter4 ( talk) 00:47, 20 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting: Yes
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Expanded 5x since 13 April. Article is neutral and well-sourced. AGF on offline sources. Copyvio check good. QPQ complete. I find ALT1 more interesting. Riley1012 ( talk) 20:35, 24 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Me at the zoo

Me at the zoo
Improved to Good Article status by Davest3r08 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 6 past nominations.

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Davest3r08 >:3 ( talk) 01:06, 14 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: @ Davest3r08: Everything checks out here. Just waiting on the one QPQ. Nice work! 🐱FatCat96🐱 Chat with Cat 16:04, 14 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Sitdown strike

Sitdown strikers in the 1937 General Motors strike in Flint Michigan
Sitdown strikers in the 1937 General Motors strike in Flint Michigan
  • ... that there were 583 sitdown strikes in the United States from 1936 to 1939, affecting over a half-million workers? Source:
  • US Department of Labor, Division of Industrial Relations (May 1939). "Analysis of Strikes in 1938". Monthly Labor Review: Table 16.
  • US Department of Labor, Division of Industrial Relations (May 1940). "Strikes in 1939". Monthly Labor Review: 28-29.

Source 1 states: "The number of sit-down strikes in 1936, 1937, and 1938 by months, with the number' of workers involved, is given in table 16."

Table 16 lists the same numbers of strikes given in source 2 below. It lists workers involved as follows: 1936: 87,817 1937: 398,117 1938: 28,749

Source 2 states: "In 1936 there were 48 so-called sit-down strikes. In 1937 the number increased to 477, but by 1938 they decreased to 52. There were only 6 strikes during 1939 in which all or part of the strikers remained at their workplaces for one or more days after ceasing work. he number of workers idle in connection with these 6 strikes was 3,416, although the number participating in the sit-down or stay-in feature is not known."

This sentence involves a very encyclopedic form of synthesis in that it adds numbers from two consecutive studies by the same source. Similar synthesis, but without inclusion of the latter number appears in Sidney Fine's book Sitdown, cited in the article.

5x expanded by Carwil ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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Carwil ( talk) 16:00, 13 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • QPQ not needed, expansion is recent and article is long enough. Hook is properly sourced. However, Earwig detected a 43.2% similarity. Before I pass this nom, I think it would be suitable to trim down some quotes, if possible. Davest3r08 >:3 ( talk) 22:33, 14 April 2024 (UTC) reply
I've reviewed the Earwig similarity report, which highlights passages that are either in quotes or comprise part of citations (including the journal name and another cited article). The longest passage is the summary of the Matignon Agreement, a quotation I don't think I can improve upon. I've revised the article to reduce the amount of material directly quoted from Torigian and from Adamic, but keep Adamic's longer definition and Torigian's POV that the mid-1930s strikes were a distinct phase of using the tactic. Let me know whether you think these changes sufficiently reduce the reliance of direct quotations.-- Carwil ( talk) 13:29, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply
FYI, here's the Earwig similarity report with bibliography temporarily removed.
Fair rationale. Passing nomination. LunaEcplise (for the record I'm Davest3r08) ( talk) 20:33, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Bajroqi Miⱨnat

November 7, 1930 issue of Bajroqi Miⱨnat
November 7, 1930 issue of Bajroqi Miⱨnat
Moved to mainspace by Soman ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 376 past nominations.

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Soman ( talk) 10:27, 14 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting: Yes
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Looks good. AGF on the offline source. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 15:39, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply

You're Losing Me

Improved to Good Article status by Gained ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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Gained ( talk) 15:17, 14 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Date of GA status, close paraphrase check checks out. No QPQ needed. That said, I'd encourage reflection on ALT hook, considering that Swift was a major international star when the album was released it is not unusual that the song was shared widely. Perhaps the fact that the album was sold at a specific event should be highlighted. -- Soman ( talk) 15:43, 14 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Hey Soman, I made two alternative hooks with the added location of where the CD was sold, both are just arranged differently. Does this suffice? Gained ( talk) 10:43, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply
for ALT1/ALT2, ok good, my preference is ALT2. -- Soman ( talk) 10:55, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 14

C1 Espresso

Created by Panamitsu ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 38 past nominations.

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Panamitsu (talk) 09:26, 14 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Great work on this article! The hook is cited and interesting, and the sourcing is robust. I fixed a few typos in the article. Cremastra ( talk) 20:43, 15 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 15

Chestnut Street Opera House

1880 sketch
1880 sketch
  • ... that the model movie theater at the Chestnut Street Opera House (pictured) in Philadelphia aimed to attract "the very best people" but closed within the year? Source: "Made for the Masses with an Appeal to the Classes": The Triangle Film Corporation and the Failure of Highbrow Film Culture https://www.jstor.org/stable/3661092
    • Reviewed:
Created by TSventon ( talk) and 4meter4 ( talk). Nominated by TSventon ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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TSventon ( talk) 15:18, 20 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • New enough and long enough. Nominator is QPQ-exempt. Hook fact checks out. No textual issues. Ready to go. Sammi Brie (she/her •  tc) 19:14, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Comment. I'm not sure being a short lived movie theatre is all that interesting or hooky. Here are a few alt hooks that I think are better. I also added a pic. @ Sammi Brie can ypu take a look at these please? 4meter4 ( talk) 12:56, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Comment 4meter4 I was amused by "the very best people" in Alt0. I had something like Alt2 in mind in case an alt was needed. Alt1 could possibly be shorter, hopefully I got the legal jargon right. The picture is slightly skew, it would be nice to rotate it if it went to main page. TSventon ( talk) 13:22, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • @ 4meter4, I was just giving my opinion, I am happy for Sammi Brie to choose whatever she likes. On the larger picture, the black border at the top slopes, which suggests that the scan could be skew, but damage could also be involved. TSventon ( talk) 13:52, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • It probably is a skew issue, probably for paper damage, which might be fixable especially for this crop. The image is acceptable in license. New ALT1 is fine (AGF). ALT2 is fine and checks out to source. I don't like the wording on ALT1 with "Pennsylvania" twice. 4meter4, I had to make a lot of small copy tweaks to the large addition that was made; you should read MOS:DATECOMMA. Sammi Brie (she/her •  tc) 17:47, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Sammi Brie Thank you for the copy edit. I appreciate your help. As for the wording... this isn't a case of improper word redundancy. There isn't a way to remove the word Pennsylvania as the proper names of both these organizations include that word. The University of Pennsylvania is the University of Pennsylvania, and the Supreme Court of Pennsylvania is the Supreme Court of Pennsylvania. If we remove the word Pennsylvania from the university it could be any university rather than the well know Ivy League school. Likewise, if we remove it from the court, readers would likely assume it was the national Supreme Court and not a state Supreme Court. I don't see any way of rewording this without it ending up in Wikipedia:Main Page/Errors and loosing 'hookiness' for lack of a better word. 4meter4 ( talk) 18:12, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
I agree—it's redundant and looks off but is needed to avoid obvious confusion. It's kind of why, if I were a promoter, I would skip it. But I want the promoter to choose the hook. Sammi Brie (she/her •  tc) 18:25, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
That's fair. The wording may read awkwardly to some people even if it is technically a necessary redundancy. I personally would pick it anyway because I believe it is the most interesting fact (to me anyway) among the hook choices. I guess it depends on whether one prefers style or substance (not that the other hooks are lacking substantive value). 4meter4 ( talk) 18:36, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Stonewall Inn

Exterior of the Stonewall Inn
Exterior of the Stonewall Inn
Improved to Good Article status by Epicgenius ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 650 past nominations.

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Epicgenius ( talk) 12:21, 15 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Ooh, Stonewall! Article eligibility and condition checks out, became a good article a few days ago. I like the ALT0 here best, though I would suggest linking those names. Assuming good faith on the sourcing. Obviously, going to have to wait til the QPQ is resolved to officially check this off. And I think June 28 would be a wonderful day for this hook. Generalissima ( talk) (it/she) 06:18, 16 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Frederick Kimble

Moved to mainspace by Hawkeye7 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 426 past nominations.

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Hawkeye7 (discuss) 09:43, 15 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article and hook look good and hook is interesting, although I personally would link "general". I can't understand the source so I'll approve with good faith. — Panamitsu (talk) 10:12, 18 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Jan Klán

A Hawk 75 in the livery of the Groupe de Chasse II/5
A Hawk 75 in the livery of the Groupe de Chasse II/5
Created by Chetsford ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 150 past nominations.

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Chetsford ( talk) 16:18, 15 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: I know that your said there's a QPQ in progress. Nonetheless, I decided to take the initiative to review it. In terms of dogfighting history, this is certainly a worthy niche to be promoted as a DYK. NeverBeGameOver ( talk) 00:02, 17 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Thanks for your patience, NeverBeGameOver. QPQ now done. Chetsford ( talk) 05:39, 18 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Cool cool. NeverBeGameOver ( talk) 05:56, 18 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Debbie Currie

Created by Launchballer ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 217 past nominations.

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Laun chba ller 10:46, 15 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • QPQ done. Hook is interesting and inline cited to The Independent, which is RS. Article is new enough (created April 15), long enough, and NPOV. Earwig returns 2.9% (violation unlikely). No image. Looks good! Chetsford ( talk) 05:39, 18 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Mum (sea lion)

Created by Panamitsu ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 39 past nominations.

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Panamitsu (talk) 05:52, 15 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article is new enough, long enough, well sourced, and clear of copyvio. The hook is interesting and sourced, perhaps say Otago, New Zealand, but it probably isn't needed. Should be good to go. ULPS ( talkcontribs) 01:07, 16 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 16

New Britain Mules

5x expanded by BeanieFan11 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 163 past nominations.

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BeanieFan11 ( talk) 20:44, 23 April 2024 (UTC). reply

The Strange Death of Captain America

Created by Morgan695 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 163 past nominations.

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Morgan695 ( talk) 22:26, 16 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Not a review, and I review oldest first so would not get to this any time soon (but would not object to any other editor reviewing this in the interim); if ALT2's "penciled, inked, lettered, and colored by Jim Steranko, making it" somehow manages to survive WP:DYKTRIM, none of "penciled, inked, lettered, and colored" should be linked per WP:SEAOFBLUE.-- Laun chba ller 18:42, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply
    • I'm fine with de-linking those instances if that's the case. Morgan695 ( talk) 20:47, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • I'm guessing the first hook is meant to say "dispute between himself and Stan Lee"? PanagiotisZois ( talk) 12:31, 23 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Will perform the review. Have a mild interest in the article, and just found out Jim Steranko did concept art for Coppola's Dracula; what a nice coincidence. Anyway
    • The article is new enough, having been created only about 8 days ago, which is when this nomination took place. It also has the appropriate length, being very in-depth, and well-sourced; most sources are offline from books, but I'm assuming good faith, especially given the nominator's track record. It is very much presentable, and has three images; one is the writer-artist and is CC, while the other two are the cover of the last issue of this story and an example of Steranko's visual style, which is brought up in the article itself, making them both appropriate.
    •  On hold All of the hooks are present in the article itself and properly cited. Finding the best one is somewhat tricky, as there's what the nominator finds most interesting, what I find most interesting, and what will help the article achieve the most views. Hook #3 is mildly interesting as you have the primacy effect, but I don't think it will hook many people in, so it's the other two. Either one could work, but I'm leaning more with Hook #1, mostly because it also references Stan Lee, which is a name that will attract views. The mention of a "dispute" between them is also kind of juicy. Admittedly, I found the full context behind their "dispute" kind of boring (lol), but at least the hook did its job. Unless @ Morgan695: has a different hook to suggest, the only thing remaining is the QPQ. PanagiotisZois ( talk) 23:19, 23 April 2024 (UTC) reply
      • @ PanagiotisZois: Thanks for taking on this review. I've already done a QPQ, so if that is the only outstanding concern than this should be good to go. Morgan695 ( talk) 04:48, 24 April 2024 (UTC) reply

United States' Telegraph

Created by Generalissima ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 39 past nominations.

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Generalissima ( talk) (it/she) 06:32, 16 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Wonderful work! I enjoyed reading this (I just love old newspapers! ). Looks good to go. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 17:51, 17 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Joseph Déjacque

Improved to Good Article status by Grnrchst ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 34 past nominations.

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Grnrchst ( talk) 13:55, 17 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article was nominated for DYK within 7 days of passing GAR. Article is long enough. Article well-sourced, neutral, BLP-compliant, and copyvio-free; only pings on Earwigs are for some properly attributed quotes. QPQ has been completed. Hooks are interesting, cited (AGF on paywalled source in ALT0), and short enough for DYK. My preference would be for ALT1 or ALT3 as the most interesting options. Morgan695 ( talk) 16:20, 17 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 17

March on Rome (88 BC)

  • ... that in 88 BC, Lucius Cornelius Sulla made the first coup d'état in Roman history? Source: Harriet I. Flower, Roman Republics, Princeton University Press, 2010, p. 159. ISBN 978-0-691-14043-8
    • Reviewed:
    • Comment: No QPQ done as I have nominated less than 5 articles.
Created by T8612 ( talk).

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T8612 (talk) 11:27, 22 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article nominated five days after creation. More than long enough, meets proper sourcing requirements. Earwig didn't find anything noteworthy, WP:AGF on the bibliography sources. I was able to access the source used in the hook and the passage being referenced (p. 159) seems to be good. Definitely interesting! No QPQ needed, great work on the article! Looks good to go. B3251 ( talk) 21:27, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Bedok Reservoir MRT station

  • ... that Bedok Reservoir MRT station features a public artwork including a message that "dribbles down" the lift shaft in motifs of droplets? Source: Zhuang, Justin; Soh, Darren (2022). Art in Transit: Downtown Line Singapore. Singapore: Land Transport Authority. ISBN 978-981-18-3967-2. OCLC 1342054525. (p168)
Improved to Good Article status by ZKang123 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 14 past nominations.

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ZKang123 ( talk) 05:07, 19 April 2024 (UTC). reply

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting: Yes
QPQ: Done.

Overall: The guideline WP:INTEXT advises that In-text attribution may need to be used with direct speech (a source's words between quotation marks or as a block quotation)... It seems DYK allows leeway for this not to be in the hook, but a reader should be able to see in the article where the quote came from. It also avoids the appearance of a WP:SCAREQUOTE. Alternatively, is paraphrasing an option? I don't have access to the source; is it possible to provide a relevant excerpt here for review? Otherwise, I'll WP:AGF. — Bagumba ( talk) 11:20, 19 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Here's the excerpt of the page for your perusal.-- ZKang123 ( talk) 09:28, 20 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ ZKang123: Thanks. It's a nice metaphor to quote (and I'm not creative enough to offer a paraphrase). If the in-text attribution is added to the article, this should be good to go.— Bagumba ( talk) 15:08, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Bagumba: fixed.-- ZKang123 ( talk) 10:08, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ ZKang123: Sorry if it wasn't clear. I meant that the article needed in-text attribution added as to who said "dribbles down". I'm neutral on whether it needs to be in the hook or not. Regards.— Bagumba ( talk) 10:17, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Oh I see. Will fix that haha. Ok, done.-- ZKang123 ( talk) 10:19, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ ZKang123: In the snapshot of the source you linked above, "dribbles down" wasn't quoted. Wouldn't that mean that those specific words should be attributed to Zhuang and Soh, the source's authors?— Bagumba ( talk) 10:33, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Edited accordingly.-- ZKang123 ( talk) 12:48, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Approved. @ ZKang123: It seems that Soh was a photographer and not listed as an author, so I tweaked the attribution to Zhuang only. Feel free to modify if I'm wrong.— Bagumba ( talk) 15:58, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply

1901 Boston Marathon

Ronald McDonald
Ronald McDonald
Mounted police clearing the way at the 1901 Boston Marathon
Mounted police clearing the way at the 1901 Boston Marathon
Created by Habst ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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Habst ( talk) 20:44, 17 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: None required.

Overall: Nice work @ Habst:. The only issue is that there needs to be a citation at the end of the following paragraph: As the race advanced through Framingham and Natick, Hughson had built up a lead but was still closely tailed by Caffrey. 45 minutes in, Hughson passed the Natick town hall about 100 yards (91 m) ahead of Caffrey. McDonald at this point was 75 yards (69 m) behind Caffrey, and Sammy Mellor and Davis were running in fourth and fifth 1⁄3 mile (0.54 km) behind McDonald. (Every paragraph needs to have a citation for DYK). BeanieFan11 ( talk) 02:43, 19 April 2024 (UTC) reply

@ BeanieFan11,  Done the citation, thank you. -- Habst ( talk) 12:23, 19 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Good to go, BeanieFan11 ( talk) 15:40, 19 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Crosby-Schøyen Codex MS 193

A folio from the Crosby-Schøyen Codex
A folio from the Crosby-Schøyen Codex
Created by NeverBeGameOver ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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NeverBeGameOver ( talk) 02:49, 17 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • This review is for ALT0, the best hook IMO:
General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

  • Adequate sourcing: Yes
  • Neutral: Yes
  • Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing: Yes
  • Other problems: No - One issue: the statement in the intro "It is considered the oldest surviving book in the world" is not supported by the references; only the Smithsonian Magazine says "one of the oldest surviving books." That is a significant difference. Please update this.
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Great article, thanks for this contribution. Just correct the issue noted above; otherwise all good. P 1 9 9   19:09, 18 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Corrected. I used a more appropriate hook found in Reuters instead. Hope that helps NeverBeGameOver ( talk) 22:22, 18 April 2024 (UTC) reply
yes, that is better. Good source too. Thanks. -- P 1 9 9   22:29, 18 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Boot Monument

The Boot Monument at Saratoga National Historical Park
  • ... that the Boot Monument (pictured) never mentions the name of its honoree because he was a traitor? Source: [15] [16] and Martin, James Kirby (1997). Benedict Arnold, Revolutionary Hero: An American Warrior Reconsidered. New York University Press. ISBN 0814755607
Improved to Good Article status by Relativity ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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Rela tivity ⚡️ 00:54, 17 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Comment: It has appeared on DYK before, but not in bold print. (See talk page for more details) Rela tivity ⚡️ 00:58, 17 April 2024 (UTC)--> reply
  • I'll review this. Have read about this subject before. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 15:37, 17 April 2024 (UTC) reply
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: None required.

Overall: @ Relativity: Nice work. ALT0 is good. I'm not sure ALT1 works however as the source only says that it is Arnold's only monument on American soil whereas the hook seems to apply to all American traitors. I also thought of another potential hook that might be decent: ... that a boot is the only monument in the United States to traitor Benedict Arnold because it "was the only part of Arnold not to later turn traitor"? That would require another reviewer, though. Let me know what you think; but ALT0 is good to go. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 15:54, 17 April 2024 (UTC) reply

I'm fine with ALT0. Thank you for taking on the review! Rela tivity ⚡️ 01:50, 18 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Kiso 5639

The Skyrocket Galaxy, as photographed by the Hubble Space Telescope
The Skyrocket Galaxy, as photographed by the Hubble Space Telescope
Created by MemeGod27 ( talk) and Chaotic Enby ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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MemeGod ._. ( talk) 17:44, 17 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  •  Comment: I'm not really a creator of this article, I just reviewed it and added a few potential references that could help expand it in the future. Anyway, hope the firework gets the picture slot! Chaotıċ Enby ( talk · contribs) 17:54, 17 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Comments by Tbhotch

General eligibility:

Policy compliance:

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: Yes
  • Interesting: Yes
  • Other problems: Yes
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: (CC)  Tbhotch 07:03, 18 April 2024 (UTC) reply

A new article that is barely long enough. The hook is interesting so is the galaxy's shape. QPQ unrequired and there are no copyright issues with the online sources. However, there are sourcing issues. The lead includes multiple statements that are not present in the body of the article or that the source that is supposed to cite them doesn't mention them.

  • It has an elongated and flattened shape, with a maximum diameter that extends for approximately 2,700 light years.
  • The new stars are distributed in about ten groups and have a mass corresponding to about one million solar masses.
  • The starburst is believed to have begun approximately one million years ago following the galaxies' encounter with a filament of intergalactic gas.

After that, the following statements lack an inline source:

  • "It has also been informally called the Rocket Galaxy or the Firework Galaxy due to its "trail" structure and brightness at the head."
  • "The Skyrocket Galaxy was discovered in 2004 using the Hubble Space Telescope, and was further observed in February and July of 2015 with the Wide Field Camera 3. Further research is ongoing by the European Space Agency."

Additionally, and not part of the DYK review, the article should probably be called Kiso 5639 instead since "Skyrocket Galaxy" is just a nickname and the present sources prefer the former, including NASA. (CC)  Tbhotch 07:03, 18 April 2024 (UTC) reply

  • Everything has been fixed, I'll move it back to Kiso 5639 in a few minutes. Thanks, MemeGod ._. ( talk) 12:17, 18 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 18

Matthew Charles Johnson

Moved to mainspace by GMH Melbourne ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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GMH Melbourne ( talk) 05:04, 18 April 2024 (UTC). reply

Full review needed.-- Laun chba ller 06:43, 18 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Article is new and long enough. Sourcing looks good though Earwig found a handful of word-for-word similarities with "theage.com.au" source. A minor issue with each of the proposed hooks: ALT0 says that Williams was Victoria's most high-profile prisoner - the body of the article supports that but the sources seem to claim he was just a high-profile prisoner. ALT1 says they threw feces at a member of the jury but the article and sources only say "excrement". Both hooks are interesting however. QPQ is not required so just need hooks fixed and that should be all. PCN02WPS ( talk | contribs) 15:31, 20 April 2024 (UTC) reply

@ PCN02WPS: Thank you for taking the time to review! I have reworded the article in most cases where Earwig's Copyvio Detector identified an issue but I think a lot of it falls under WP:LIMITED, or are quotes. Let me know if this needs to be addressed further. In paragraph 249 of that source, it mentions Williams as the "highest profile prisoner in Victoria". I have changed the wording of ALT1 from 'feces' to 'excrement' — GMH Melbourne ( talk) 03:12, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Very sorry, totally forgot about this nom. Missed the "highest profile" bit in that source so thank you for that info. Both hooks look good so we are GTG. PCN02WPS ( talk | contribs) 15:15, 28 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Prunus jamasakura

Yamazakura, by Kawahara Keiga (Siebold Collection)
Created by Maculosae tegmine lyncis ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 65 past nominations.

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Maculosae tegmine lyncis ( talk) 05:51, 19 April 2024 (UTC). reply

Le Touquet

5x expanded by Szmenderowiecki ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 9 past nominations.

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Szmenderowiecki ( talk) 16:38, 19 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • expanded recently enough; article is well-written and well-sourced. In my opinion ALT2 is by far the most interesting hook. Elli ( talk | contribs) 04:14, 23 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Bonn–Oberkassel dog

  • ... that ancient humans cared for a 14,000-year-old puppy? Source: Janssens, L., Giemsch, L., Schmitz, R., Street, M., Van Dongen, S., & Crombé, P. (2018). A new look at an old dog: Bonn-Oberkassel reconsidered. Journal of Archaeological Science, 92, 126–138. doi:10.1016/j.jas.2018.01.004, p. 10 "The dog was young and sick, likely was untrained as a result, and thus had no obvious utilitarian value to surrounding humans. Thus, we hypothesize further that the inferred supportive care probably was due to compassion or empathy, without any expectation of reciprocal utilitarian benefits. We suggest that the Bonn-Oberkassel dog provides the earliest known evidence for a purely emotion-driven human-dog interaction."
Moved to mainspace by Generalissima ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 40 past nominations.

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Generalissima ( talk) (it/she) 23:16, 18 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Great work on the article, Generalissima! That's quite an interesting hook; humans caring for a 14,000-year-old puppy?! Anyway, for the hook's source, which I managed to track down using the DOI in the article and leading me to a ScienceDirect source, and verifies the hook as the data "statistically overlaps 14C". Again, great work! :) ~ Tails Wx ( 🐾, me!) 02:42, 20 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Boyz Unlimited

Created by Launchballer ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 220 past nominations.

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Laun chba ller 15:58, 18 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • 5x expanded by nom. Article is adequately sourced, no issues arose upon checking. The largest similarity result from Earwig is just due to a quoted passage from a critic. Hooks are interesting, I personally like the first hook and ALT2 the most, but all are good and work. QPQ OK. Nicely done! Good to go. B3251 ( talk) 15:25, 19 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Antimonumento 5J

Antimonumento 5J
Antimonumento 5J
  • ... that the Antimonumento 5J (pictured) was installed to commemorate police repression during a protest in response to Giovanni López's arrest four years ago today and his subsequent death? Source: Milenio [19]: "se realizó un acto de memoria pacífica donde también se develó un antimonumento con el objetivo de no olvidar los actos de opresión que ejercieron las autoridades de seguridad pública en contra de ciudadanos manifestantes durante el 4, 5 y 6 de junio del 2020, protestas que se realizaron en torno al asesinato de Giovanni López a manos de policías municipales de Ixtlahuacán de los Membrillos." (Translation: "an act of peaceful remembrance was held where an anti-monument was also unveiled with the objective of not forgetting the acts of oppression exercised by public security authorities against protesting citizens during 4, 5 and 6 June 2020, protests that took place around the murder of Giovanni López at the hands of municipal police officers of Ixtlahuacán de los Membrillos.")
Moved to mainspace by Tbhotch ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 45 past nominations.

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(CC)  Tbhotch 07:03, 18 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Length, date, qpq ok, no close paraphrase found. Image on Commons. Not sure we'd time the DYK to match what the death anniversary, though. -- Soman ( talk) 09:46, 19 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 19

155 Mercer Street

155 Mercer Street
155 Mercer Street
  • ... that firefighters were alerted to a fire in their fire station at 155 Mercer Street in Manhattan by a ring-tailed monkey named Jenny throwing billiard balls down a flight of stairs? Source: "One time she woke the sleeping company to a fire in its own building by throwing billiard balls down a flight of stairs." [20]
Moved to mainspace by Found5dollar ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 19 past nominations.

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Found5dollar ( talk) 19:39, 19 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation

QPQ: No - Not done
Overall: hinnk ( talk) 22:16, 19 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Dadang Supriatna

Created by Juxlos ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 216 past nominations.

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Juxlos ( talk) 11:04, 19 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting: Yes

QPQ: No - Not done
Overall: @ Juxlos: Nice work. I'm just waiting on a QPQ. Epicgenius ( talk) 14:32, 19 April 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Epicgenius: QPQ added. Juxlos ( talk) 03:44, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Good to go. Epicgenius ( talk) 17:33, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Butterfly Theater

Butterfly Theater at night (1911)
Butterfly Theater at night (1911)
Moved to mainspace by Lightburst ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 22 past nominations.

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Lightburst ( talk) 23:06, 19 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: This review is for the original hook. Created on April 19th, 4199 characters of prose. Earwig shows no plagiarism or close paraphrasing. Issues with sourcing of hook, neutrality in one section, and a factual issue with who made the terrcotta. Found5dollar ( talk) 19:14, 20 April 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Found5dollar: Thank you for the review. I edited the section about the imposter which now reads " The theater hired a doorman who said he was oscar award winning actor and boxer Victor McLaglen, but he was an imposter. Victor McLaglen exposed the man as a fraud and revealed that the man was actually his brother Leopold McLaglen". Changed the terra-cotta bit, the actual source language is "a great deal of the design credit must be given to the terra-cotta supply company in Chicago." So my error was in thinking it was a company rather than a generic random supply company- I fixed it. Regarding the hook citation it is correct and the information can be found in the first paragraph of the source. Lightburst ( talk) 23:01, 20 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Lightburst: the article now seems neural to me and the factual issue was corrected. Unfortunatly that cite calls it a "woman with butterfly wings" not a "butterfly." I'd suggest either changing the source or changing from claiming it is a butterfly to "a woman with butterfly wings." -- Found5dollar ( talk) 21:37, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Found5dollar: Seems like we are in WP:BLUE territory. The theater is called butterfly, according to most sources the facade is adorned with a butterfly. It is either a woman with butterfly wings or a butterfly with a woman's body but still a butterfly. I backed it up by adding a Rankin citation to end of sentence. "terra cotta butterfly for the facade, delineated in 1,000 light bulbs and spanning some 27 feet from wingtip to wingtip" Lightburst ( talk) 21:55, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Thank you. this is good to go now. -- Found5dollar ( talk) 15:00, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Edna May Sperl

Created by Silver seren ( talk) and FloridaArmy ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 115 past nominations.

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Silver seren C 20:32, 20 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Looks good. Nice work. Either hook works. @ Silver seren: Not necessary for approval, but were you really not able to find anything on when she was born and died? Aware that IMDb is unreliable, but it lists her as being born in 1899 and dying in 1981 ( [22]). Wondering if you can find anything else confirming that. Not required for approval, though. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 01:56, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply

I mean, I know the dates, but I don't have a source for any of it. I can also find her on Ancestry.com and am 100% sure it is the right person. But, per WP:RSP, that's not a reliable source. Silver seren C 03:00, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Climate of Triton

  • ... that Neptune's moon Triton has thin clouds that are likely made of nitrogen ice crystals? Source: McKinnon, William B.; Kirk, Randolph L. (2014) "Encyclopedia of the Solar System" Chapter 40 - Triton https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/B9780124158450000402 (on ScienceDirect) Source says: At the limbs, clouds could be distinguished from haze by being optically thicker and localized both in height (10 km or less) and in horizontal extent (patchy, and mainly concentrated at mid to high southern latitudes, where they cover one-third of the limb). The sharp upper boundary of the clouds suggests that they consist of condensed nitrogen rather than involatile solids like the haze. (p. 873)
    • ALT1: ... that Neptune's moon Triton has a southern polar cap of frozen nitrogen which extends almost all the way to its equator? Source: Brown, Robert H.; Kirk, Randolph L. (1994) "Coupling of volatile transport and internal heat flow on Triton" https://ui.adsabs.harvard.edu/abs/1994JGR....99.1965B/abstract (NASA ADS) Source says: ... what seems to be a bright, massive south polar cap that extends nearly to Triton's equator ... They [Moore and Spencer] hypothesized that Triton's south polar cap is primarily a permanent deposit of nitrogen.
    • Reviewed:
    • Comment: Personally, I'm unsure as to which hook would be more interesting to use, so I'll leave it to whomever reviews this to decide!
Created by ArkHyena ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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ArkHyena ( talk) 20:38, 20 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • I like the first hook the best, and it certainly checks out with the source. Article seems presentable; new enough, no evidence of copyvio, well-sourced, and well-written (and of course, long enough.) I don't have any suggestions for alternative phrasing, so seems like we're good to go, as no QPQ is needed for you. Generalissima ( talk) (it/she) 17:29, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Horvat ’Eqed

A fortified gate dating from the 2nd century BC at Horvat ’Eqed, possibly built by Seleucid general Bacchides
A fortified gate dating from the 2nd century BC at Horvat ’Eqed, possibly built by Seleucid general Bacchides
  • ... that the fortifications of Horvat ’Eqed may have been constructed by the Seleucid general Bacchides as part of his efforts to suppress the Maccabean Revolt? Source: Hizmi, Hananya; Haber, Michal; Aharonvich, Evgeny (2013). "From the Maccabees to Bar Kokhba: Evidence of Fortification and Revolt at Khirbet el-'Aqd: The Results of the Renewed 2012 Excavations". New Studies in the Archaeology of Jerusalem. 7: 6–24.
    • ALT1: ... that Horvat ’Eqed, a fortified ruin nestled in the Judaean Mountains, may have served as a major stronghold during the Bar Kokhba revolt? Source: Hizmi, Hananya; Haber, Michal; Aharonvich, Evgeny (2013). "From the Maccabees to Bar Kokhba: Evidence of Fortification and Revolt at Khirbet el-'Aqd: The Results of the Renewed 2012 Excavations". New Studies in the Archaeology of Jerusalem. 7: 6–24.
    • ALT2: ... that excavations at Horvat ’Eqed uncovered coinage and hiding complexes dating from the Bar Kokhba revolt, as well as arrowheads, armor scales, slingshots, and ballistae? Source: Hizmi, Hananya; Haber, Michal; Aharonvich, Evgeny (2013). "From the Maccabees to Bar Kokhba: Evidence of Fortification and Revolt at Khirbet el-'Aqd: The Results of the Renewed 2012 Excavations". New Studies in the Archaeology of Jerusalem. 7: 6–24.
    • Reviewed:
Created by Mariamnei ( talk).

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Chuck Eisenmann

Created by B3251 ( talk).

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B3251 ( talk) 15:40, 19 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article was nominated within three days of creation, so is new enough. It's more than long enough. The article properly uses in-line citations and the copyvio detector finds nothing outside of dates and names of institutions. Both hooks are good, interesting, and cited in-line. I think the original hook is worded best, personally. The QPQ has been done. Looks good to go! Silver seren C 23:43, 19 April 2024 (UTC) reply


Articles created/expanded on April 20

Magdalena Hinterdobler

Created by Gerda Arendt ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 2102 past nominations.

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Gerda Arendt ( talk) 11:40, 27 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Another singer to beguile us :-) Mary Mark Ockerbloom ( talk) 00:37, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Spider (musician)

Moved to mainspace by Launchballer ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 222 past nominations.

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Laun chba ller 19:40, 20 April 2024 (UTC). reply

Interesting bio on fine sources, no copyvio obvious. I like the original hook and approve that one. It clearly says that Spider is a Black woman musician, which I miss in all ALTS, and actually also in the lead of the article; I think that her Nigerian background should be mentioned there. My English is not good enough to tell a difference between "on the grounds" and a simple "because", but I know that the former phrase appears in the article in two sentences in a row, which I believe should be avoided. -- Gerda Arendt ( talk) 11:51, 27 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Both done.-- Laun chba ller 17:19, 28 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Katherine Sleeper Walden

Improved to Good Article status by Dionysius Miller ( talk).

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Dionysius Miller
talk 18:42, 20 April 2024 (UTC).
reply
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation

QPQ: No - Not needed
Overall: This one caught my eye, as I am also a participant of WikiProject Appalachia! Great work on this article! Personally, I like ALT3. Also, I think you should consider adding an image. Earwig highlighted a few phrases, but they appear to be just common phrases and quotes. Good to go!   Kentuckian | 💬   03:13, 25 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Coffee Talk Episode 2: Hibiscus & Butterfly

Converted from a redirect by JuniperChill ( talk).

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JuniperChill ( talk) 17:13, 22 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Not a review, and I review oldest first so would not get to this any time soon (but would not object to any other reviewer doing so in the interim); both hooks violate WP:NPOV and have been struck. I've also removed one sentence that also violated WP:NPOV, so this is now below 1500 characters.-- Laun chba ller 20:17, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
    • Given that it is midnight for me (in the UK), I will expand this article and think of a compliant hook ~10 hours from now after my sleep. I may even have to think about a hook that doesn't have something to do with the lo-fi music. JuniperChill ( talk) 22:59, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply
    • Done the expansion to at least 1500 characters (can also be 1.5kb), now I am thinking of the following hooks.

For both, the sources came from https://www.eurogamer.net/coffee-talk-creator-fahmi-has-passed-away

No, it can't "also be 1.5kb" - WP:DYKRULES specifies "1500 characters". ALT3 is the better hook, although I'd expect a more merciless prepbuilder to truncate it at "died". Full review needed.-- Laun chba ller 10:45, 23 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Just long enough, well refed, everything else GTG. Strongly suggest cutting ALT3 for reading clarity:

Prince Philip, Duke of Edinburgh

Portrait of Philip, 1992
Portrait of Philip, 1992
  • ... that Prince Philip (pictured) was the first member of the British royal family to fly in a helicopter? Source: [1]
    • Reviewed:
Improved to Good Article status by MSincccc ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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MSincccc ( talk) 18:25, 20 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article qualifies via recently achieving Good Article status. SFNs don't work on this page, but I was able to confirm the hook through the cite in the article itself. Obviously, as a GA about a major figure, it is long enough, well-sourced, and quite presentable. No QPQ is needed—you did this before getting 5 DYKs? Well done. Hook itself is pretty interesting; only suggestion I would give before confirming is specifying British royal family, as many readers would think of other royal families upon seeing the phrase. Generalissima ( talk) (it/she) 17:36, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply
The hook is represented on Page 259 of the source. It is essentially WP:ABOUTSELF since someone is asking him if he was first and he answers "yes". I do not think it is controversial. We have another problem however, the article has recently appeared as a bold link in the news. Unfortunately we may have to reject this nomination because of that. Bruxton ( talk) 21:39, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply

References

  1. ^ Brandreth 2004, p. 259

September 2023 New York floods

Created by Tails Wx ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 21 past nominations.

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~ Tails Wx ( 🐾, me!) 02:29, 20 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation

QPQ: No - Not done
Overall: Well done on the GA review @ Tails Wx :) preference for ALT1. Nothing else of note, really. Just ping me if the QPQ is done. ‍  PSA 🏕️  ( talk) 07:21, 20 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Thanks for the review, PSA, I've provided the QPQ above! :) ~ Tails Wx ( 🐾, me!) 13:55, 20 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Thank you, @ Tails Wx. Good to go ‍  PSA 🏕️  ( talk) 02:01, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Erik Sparre

A 1595 painting of Sparre, holding his treatise Pro rege, lege et grege
A 1595 painting of Sparre, holding his treatise Pro rege, lege et grege
Created by ThaesOfereode ( talk).

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ThaesOfereode ( talk) 02:47, 20 April 2024 (UTC). reply

Rhynchocyon

  • ... that a new subspecies of giant sengi was recently discovered? Source: "Despite the pelage differences, initial DNA comparisons found it nearly identical to R. chrysopygus. A later DNA comparison supported a designation of a new subspecies, Rhynchocyon chrysopygus mandelai as it diverges in pelage and is allopatric to R. chrysopygus (Agwanda et al. 2021)."
    • Reviewed:
5x expanded by Azcolvin429 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 6 past nominations.

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Andrew Z. Colvin • Talk 02:53, 20 April 2024 (UTC). reply

Date, size, expansion, hook, refs, QPQ, copyvio spotcheck, all GTG. Minor disclaimer: the prose script I use does not count tables and bulleted lists, and without them I see only ~2.5-3x expansion. But there is a new large table (with some advanced features) and a new list, so I am AGFing the 5x claim. PS. I added a single citation needed request to one sentence - I ask the nom to comment here on whether it has been addressed. -- Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 10:15, 20 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Reference added! And yes, it was not massively expanded, however I am working on more sections in the conservation section today. Thank you for the comments. Andrew Z. Colvin • Talk 22:55, 20 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Cam Booser

Created by Muboshgu ( talk) and Yankees10 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 530 past nominations.

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–  Muboshgu ( talk) 01:22, 20 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Interesting subject. Nice work. Looks good to go! BeanieFan11 ( talk) 02:49, 20 April 2024 (UTC) reply


Articles created/expanded on April 21

Ellen Oliver (suffragette)

Ellen Oliver
Ellen Oliver
Created by Lajmmoore ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 96 past nominations.

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Lajmmoore ( talk) 16:44, 21 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Great work on this article! Earwig highlighted a few words, but they just appear to be common words and phrases. Good to go!   Kentuckian | 💬   15:11, 24 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Nxdia

Created by Launchballer ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 223 past nominations.

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Laun chba ller 14:38, 21 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Article is new enough and long enough, it is neutral and well sourced. Earwig picks up a bit of a quote, but otherwise no close phrasing, so all OK. QPQ is done. Hook is interesting, but I couldn't see a reference to the Singles Chart in the source - could you clariy the chart part of the hook? Thanks Lajmmoore ( talk) 16:35, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply

My mistake, I kept rewording the hook. Try [24].-- Laun chba ller 18:15, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Thanks Launchballer - hook is good (& citation archived here), all OK Lajmmoore ( talk) 09:13, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply

WLOS

Improved to Good Article status by Sammi Brie ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 683 past nominations.

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Sammi Brie (she/her •  tc) 19:24, 21 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Recent GA with QPQ done. No copyvio detected, hooks cited and verified. Prefer the original hook. Juxlos ( talk) 03:42, 22 April 2024 (UTC) reply

John Silva Meehan

5x expanded by Generalissima ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 41 past nominations.

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Generalissima ( talk) (it/she) 17:49, 21 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • I will gladly review this! WatkynBassett ( talk) 17:57, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply
    • The article was expanded and nominated today (21 April 2024).
    • The article has been expanded more than fivefold (more like 20x).
    • The article is well sourced. I did one spot check and the reference checked out.
    • The article is written in a neutral and non-promotional tone.
    • Earwig did not pick up anything.
    • QPQ provided.
    • The hook has the right length and is interesting. The part of the hook on him being hired and the quote itself is well sourced. However, I struggle a bit with the part on him being "a critic of the spoils system". I think you rely here on Smith 1981 (pp. 82–83). I see that he criticized particulars of the spoils system there. But whether this elevates him to an outright critic of the system I am unsure. Maybe a weaker statement like "[...] who had criticized the political patronage system earlier [...]" would be more reflective of the source? What do you think?
    • Thank you for your great work Generalissima! I will approve this nomination if this one quibble is addressed. WatkynBassett ( talk) 18:57, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • @ WatkynBassett: Fair point! Would something along the lines of "... that after criticizing the political patronage system, John Silva Meehan was hired as Librarian of Congress through "purely an act of political patronage"?" work? Generalissima ( talk) (it/she) 19:05, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Valerija Narvydaitė

Moved to mainspace by Soman ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 379 past nominations.

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Soman ( talk) 00:36, 21 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article is new enough, well sourced, and long enough. I don't see any outstanding concerns as far as presentability. QPQ checks out. I'm assuming good faith on the hook, as I do not speak Lithuanian! Generalissima ( talk) (it/she) 17:31, 21 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 22

Live into 85

Created by Launchballer ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 224 past nominations.

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Laun chba ller 12:33, 22 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • What a trainwreck!! This article had me in stitches. It also is new enough, long enough, and contains the hook fact in the article with no textual issues. A hearty thank you for the laughter, Launchballer. Sammi Brie (she/her •  tc) 08:50, 29 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Not Strong Enough (Boygenius song)

Boygenius performing live in 2023
Boygenius performing live in 2023
Improved to Good Article status by Dylan620 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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Dylan620 (he/him • talkedits) 22:55, 24 April 2024 (UTC). Interesting song GA on many and substantial sources, no copyvio obvious. I wonder if "expresses" would be a better word than "describes". The licensed image is beautiful when large, but not captivating in stamp size. In case it is not taken, I believe that the word "song" should be added to the hook for clarity that it has to do with music. -- Gerda Arendt ( talk) 12:03, 27 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Isaac L. Rice Mansion

The Isaac L. Rice Mansion
The Isaac L. Rice Mansion
Created by Epicgenius ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 651 past nominations.

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Epicgenius ( talk) 16:15, 22 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: ALT2 is not really suitable in this form, since it's not clear who it's accusing of antisemitism, but any other hook would be fine. Smurrayinchester 11:42, 23 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Thanks for the review. For what it's worth, I initially didn't really think the tugboat thing was that interesting (it has to do more with people protesting Julia Rice, who just so happened to live in the house). I might consider a hook about it later, though. Epicgenius ( talk) 12:46, 23 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Actually what about this?
I'll mark this as ready, and let the admin decide which hook to use. Thanks for the quick reply! Smurrayinchester 14:46, 24 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 23

Samir Aït Saïd

Aït Saïd at the 2016 Olympic Test Event
Aït Saïd at the 2016 Olympic Test Event
5x expanded by Riley1012 ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 28 past nominations.

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Riley1012 ( talk) 21:44, 23 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Article checks out for 5x expansion, length, neutrality and sourcing. Copyvio completely checks out. Hooks are interesting and fully sourced, and present within the article. QPQ has been completed. Happy to pass this one. Sims2aholic8 ( talk) 21:27, 29 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Richard Louhenapessy

Created by Juxlos ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 218 past nominations.

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Juxlos ( talk) 04:49, 23 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • The article is new enough, long enough, and free from close paraphrasing. The hook is interesting, cited inline, and verified. The source is Indonesian, but Google Translate checks out on the fact. The hook probably meets BLP as it's not undue focus since it focuses more on the four mayors aspect. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 12:50, 27 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Oophaga solanensis

5x expanded by AryKun ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 31 past nominations.

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AryKun ( talk) 21:51, 25 April 2024 (UTC). reply

@ AryKun: Article is new enough (per WP:DYK5X) and long enough. The article is sourced adequately and reliably, neutral, and there isn't any plagiarism. I prefer ALT1, as it's a little more interesting and the wording in ALT0 is a little unclear. I've made an alternative hook for ALT1 specifying that Colombia is their native country (just for complete clarity).
  • ALT1a: ... that Oophaga solanensis frogs can be bought for $3 in their native Colombia and sold for up to $1,000 overseas?
Looks ready. This is my first DYK review, so I'd love a second opinion. Thanks, SupremeLordBagel ( talk to me) 05:04, 26 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Here's your second opinion. Long enough, new enough. No maintenance templates found, no neutrality issues found, Earwig is quiet. QPQ done. Both hooks would require an end-of-sentence citation. (Side note: Please consider reviewing oldest first per WP:DYKRI.)-- Laun chba ller 22:10, 26 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Launchballer added end-of-sentence cites. AryKun ( talk) 03:32, 27 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Let's roll.-- Laun chba ller 05:15, 27 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Ivančena

Stele erected at Ivančena
Stele erected at Ivančena
Created by Evrik ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 113 past nominations.

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-- evrik ( talk) 21:32, 24 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General eligibility:

Policy compliance:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: I can't read Czech, so accepted that source in good faith. ALT1 is definitely the more interesting of the two. Article looks good and pic is a nice addition. Arcahaeoindris ( talk) 23:07, 26 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Amie Parnes

  • ... that Amie Parnes allegedly first heard about her employer, The Messenger, ceasing operations from a New York Times article? Source: "I’m a loyal person by nature and I talked to Jimmy up until the minute we found out about the shutdown from a piece in The New York Times." Vanity Fair
    • ALT1: ... that a 2013 photo of Joe Biden embracing political journalist Amie Parnes generated controversy? Source: "In a light-hearted photograph taken with The Hill’s White House correspondent Amie Parnes, Vice President Joe Biden can be seen with his hands high on the reporter’s waist — and Parnes with her hands firmly on top of Biden’s. The photo was lifted off Parnes' Facebook page, and some outlets questioned whether Parnes was trying to block Biden’s hands from moving any further." TODAY
    • Reviewed:
    • Comment: Two potential hooks. I thought both were interesting but I understand that the second might violate WP:DYKHOOKBLP. Haven't done one of these in a while so forgive me if I need to adjust some of the formatting.
Moved to mainspace by Pac-Man PHD ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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Pac-Man PHD ( talk) 07:25, 23 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article new and long enough notwithstanding the seven month draft period (happens). QPQ not needed as this is nominator's first DYK - welcome, by the way. Original hook is more interesting, cited inline and confirmed in cited source(s), and agree about the BLP issues with ALT1. Copyvio check only flagged direct quotes, so no issues. Good to go. Juxlos ( talk) 03:47, 24 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Missoula Children's Theatre

MCT production of The Secret Garden
MCT production of The Secret Garden
Created by Montanabw ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 38 past nominations.

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Montanabw (talk) 05:52, 23 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article new and long enough with no copyvio detected (Earwig only flags a direct quote). QPQ is completed. Hook fact is inline (lead section), and verified by source (audio transcript). Good to go. Juxlos ( talk) 03:42, 24 April 2024 (UTC) reply

2010 Oklahoma State Question 755

Created by Elli ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 20 past nominations.

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Elli ( talk | contribs) 04:18, 23 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • I personally think the first hook is great. It certainly got my attention. The article itself is long, was moved to the mainspace just today, is based on reliable sources, and looks fully complete. My only potential concern is that the hook doesn't explicitly state that it was struck down in court, but I think that can probably be inferred as is. Pac-Man PHD ( talk) 08:27, 23 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Though Earwig found likely copyvio, it's basing that off of a direct quote from the contents of the proposal, an open and free document that is properly attributed to, so it shouldn't be a violation. I think this is all in order. Still, felt it should be mentioned in case the author wants to paraphrase the contents of the proposal or if an administrator takes issue with it. Pac-Man PHD ( talk) 08:46, 23 April 2024 (UTC) reply
    • Yeah as the author I generally don't think quoting the direct ballot title of the proposal is a problem (and imo paraphrasing would be less informative to our readers than seeing what voters saw). Elli ( talk | contribs) 09:09, 23 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 24

Marcus Jacob Papilaja

Created by Juxlos ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 219 past nominations.

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Juxlos ( talk) 08:20, 24 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Looks good. QPQ pending. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 23:41, 24 April 2024 (UTC) reply

@ BeanieFan11: QPQ added. Juxlos ( talk) 17:05, 27 April 2024 (UTC) reply
BeanieFan11 ( talk) 23:16, 29 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Ronald Reagan and AIDS

Reagan first acknowledges AIDS, beginning at the 7:12 mark.
Moved to mainspace by Wasianpower ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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🌸wasianpower🌸 ( talkcontribs) 01:51, 24 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation

Image eligibility:

QPQ: None required.

Overall: Thanks for writing this article ( t · c) buidhe 04:29, 25 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Hi again Buidhe! Article has been updated with history.com source removed and wording in lede adjusted to make it more clear which part of the article it's referring to. 🌸wasianpower🌸 ( talkcontribs) 13:41, 26 April 2024 (UTC) reply
"Kirchick cites the different government reactions as a reason why during the 1980s the rate of HIV infection in the Great Britain was just 10 percent of that in the United States" This sentence may still need work. I can't see the full context or what source he cites, but I looked it up and ran the numbers for 1989, at which point the number of infections was 20 times larger in the US which also has 6x greater population. That does point to a substantial difference but doesn't support Kirchick's argument. I would prefer to cite epidemiologists for claims about the causes of different prevalence rates.
Stand-alone "defense" and "criticism" is typically integrated into one reception section, maybe put the defense last since the criticism section sums up the overall view.
"In 2015, following the release of the short film When AIDS Was Funny, renewed criticism from progressive media ..." I don't see where the sources discuss progressive media. If they are being cited as examples of progressive media, this paragraph likely falls foul of WP:NOR (and UNDUE).
"However, it is controversial whether Reagan himself could be considered homophobic, or if his personal views on homosexuality affected his AIDS response." part 1 is a false dichotomy, part 2 is unprovable (and I'm not seeing anywhere the opposite argument is made). The ultimate controversy/criticism is not about what Reagan believed but what he did, the article should reflect the bulk of the legacy section.
"Timeline of the Reagan administration's AIDS response" If you keep this section everything needs an inline citation. ( t · c) buidhe 17:22, 26 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Kirchick's source for the one-tenth figure is The Age of Reagan by Wilentz, I don't have access to this book though. The other issues have been addressed. 🌸wasianpower🌸 ( talkcontribs) 19:04, 26 April 2024 (UTC) reply
For now I've gone ahead and changed the 10 percent figure to a more general figure that is still in line with what Kirchick wrote, and also in line with your analysis. 🌸wasianpower🌸 ( talkcontribs) 12:31, 27 April 2024 (UTC) reply

OK, the hook + article probably meet the requirements now but I'm not sure if the video does. ( t · c) buidhe 17:33, 29 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Heaven on Earth: Art from Islamic Lands

Emerald-set box from the Heaven on Earth exhibition
Emerald-set box from the Heaven on Earth exhibition
Moved to mainspace by MartinPoulter ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 33 past nominations.

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  • Date, length, hook, close paraphrase check, qpq checks out. Image free on Commons. -- Soman ( talk) 21:13, 28 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Coulrophilia

Created by Di (they-them) ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 10 past nominations.

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Di (they-them) ( talk) 22:53, 24 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Well that's a quite interesting topic. Everything checks out! Skyshifter talk 19:45, 27 April 2024 (UTC) reply

German atrocities committed against Soviet prisoners of war

Overcrowded camp in Smolensk
Overcrowded camp in Smolensk
Created by Buidhe ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 244 past nominations.

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( t · c) buidhe 23:44, 24 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Nominated soon enough after GA. Meets length and citation requirements. Hook is absolutely interesting and the right length. The content of the hook is referenced in the article and a citation is appended immediately after where it appears. The image appears to come from a Nazi German government source, which means it's almost certainly in the public domain. Only concern is with the image's visibility at a smaller scale; going to just leave that up to promoter discretion. QPQ done (a quick-fail of novice nomination). Overall great work! ~ Pbritti ( talk) 21:47, 26 April 2024 (UTC) reply

John Gould Stephenson

5x expanded by Generalissima ( talk).

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Generalissima ( talk) (it/she) 08:37, 24 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Really lovely expansion today, long enough, no plagiarism issues, very interesting hook with a reliable source. Thanks for this! Spaghettifier ( talk) 22:43, 24 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Vulcan Bridge

Converted from a redirect by Kentuckian ( talk).

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  Kentuckian | 💬   13:34, 24 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article length is good, QPQ not needed, article uses reliable sources and passes GNG, WP:EARWIG turns up with no copyvios. Hook is interesting and backed up by source. Overall, good to go in my opinion! Di (they-them) ( talk) 22:18, 24 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 25

Mike Watts (sportscaster)

Created by Hameltion ( talk).

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Hameltion ( talk | contribs) 01:56, 25 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Wow. I did not think it was possible to reference Taylor Swift 235 times in one broadcast lol. Looks good. Approving. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 23:44, 28 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Lunch (song)

Converted from a redirect by PSA ( talk).

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‍  PSA 🏕️  ( talk) 03:39, 26 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Generally well-written, sources are okay, hook is interesting. Just a small recommendation, links to Rolling Stone and Coachella 2024 can be added. Good to go! Prince of EreborThe Book of Mazarbul 11:10, 26 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 26

Ludwell–Paradise House

The Ludwell–Paradise House, Rockefeller's "antique"
The Ludwell–Paradise House, Rockefeller's "antique"
Created by Pbritti ( talk).

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Pbritti ( talk) 21:48, 26 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • AGF on offline book source. Article expansion is sufficient and recent, QPQ done. No copyvio is detected, Earwig flags a bibliography item and a direct quote only. Hook is good. To DYKA you go. Juxlos ( talk) 17:04, 27 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Rosal, Sutherland

  • ... that Rosal was the largest of 49 townships in Strathnaver, shortly before it was deserted entirely?
  • Reviewed:
Created by DandelionAndBurdock ( talk).

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-- D'n'B- t -- 16:15, 26 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • New enough, long enough, and properly sourced. No QPQ needed. Earwig found no problematic copied wording. Good-enough hook, but one must synthesize a couple pieces of information in the article to obtain it: the "largest township" part is at the end of the town section, dated to the early 19th century, while the "deserted" part is at the end of the "clearance" section. In fact both facts are adjacent in the "Maverick Guide to Scotland" source, with much tighter dating (largest in 1815; cleared between 1814 and 1818) and to avoid problems with WP:SYN the article would benefit from making them adjacent somewhere within it, footnoted to that source. Also, "deserted" is maybe a euphemism for what happened. — David Eppstein ( talk) 18:14, 26 April 2024 (UTC) reply
Thanks David. What if the sentence in the Town section said "Before the clearance, it was the largest of 49 townships in Strathnaver"? That would would be consistent with the Maverick Guide guide source and not change up the current before-during-after structure. I could also change the sentence in the Clearance section to say "completely deserted by 1818" to avoid any ambiguity.
I think "deserted" is, from a NPOV, the end result of what happened, it describes what's left. You could say "forcibly depopulated" or something but I think "deserted" is clear enough and used in the sources. -- D'n'B- t -- 18:42, 26 April 2024 (UTC) reply
To me, "deserted" is an accurate and neutral description of the state of the place now, but not of the process by which it reached that state. How about
  • ALT1 ... that before its inhabitants were evicted, Rosal was the largest of 49 townships in Strathnaver?
but that would require a new reviewer as I can't both propose hooks and approve them. — David Eppstein ( talk) 19:00, 26 April 2024 (UTC) reply
I'd be happy with that ALT1, (although with the link just saying "Rosal" for preference). -- D'n'B- t -- 19:08, 26 April 2024 (UTC) reply
That was an unintentional omission. I've piped the link as you originally did now. — David Eppstein ( talk) 20:00, 26 April 2024 (UTC) reply
ALT1 short enough, cited, and interesting, though may be worth adding "in Scotland" per WP:DYKINT. Let's roll.-- Laun chba ller 06:25, 27 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 27

Robyn Gigl

Created by Bridget ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 17 past nominations.

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Bridget  (talk) 15:08, 28 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article is long and new enough, and properly sourced. There are no BLP issues. Both hooks are interesting. ALT0 is properly cited but I'm unsure about ALT1. Waiting on that QPQ. 🌙Eclipse ( talk) ( contribs) 15:51, 28 April 2024 (UTC) reply
    Hi LunaEclipse, I'm definitely leaning more towards ALT0, since it's focused on the critical reception of her work featuring a trans character, rather than the focus solely on the fact that Gigl and her character are trans. I've just added a DYK that I just reviewed. Thanks for taking a look at this! Best, Bridget  (talk) 00:58, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • The facts for ALT1 are supported but the phrasing seems a little awkward. How about
  • This one is great, but I'm kind of thinking the same thing as ALT1 – maybe we can come up with a hook that is centered on her literary work (rather than her transition)? Bridget  (talk) 21:56, 30 April 2024 (UTC) (edited 23:34, 30 April 2024 (UTC)) reply

Elizabeth Seifert

  • ... that Elizabeth Seifert quit medical school after only one year as she was denied a medical degree due to her gender, went on to publish more than 80 novels in her career?
Created by Xoak ( talk).

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X ( talk) 10:12, 29 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article created 27 April. No issues of copyvio or plagiarism. All sources appear reliable. Hooks are all interesting and sourced. QPQ is not required. Looks ready to go. Thriley ( talk) 15:36, 29 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Nellie McCoy

Created by Silver seren ( talk) and FloridaArmy ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 116 past nominations.

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Silver seren C 22:19, 27 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Verified that the article is long enough, that there are no plagiarism concerns through the Copyvios tool and spotchecking, and that the hook is sourced in the article. Cunard ( talk) 00:12, 28 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Articles created/expanded on April 28

Olga Lander

Defusing explosives, 1943, photographed by Lander
Defusing explosives, 1943, photographed by Lander
  • ... that Olga Lander used a fixed 50 mm focal length camera, requiring her to work close to the dangerous war-time subjects she photographed (example pictured)?
Created by Mary Mark Ockerbloom ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 80 past nominations.

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Mary Mark Ockerbloom ( talk) 00:04, 29 April 2024 (UTC). reply

Interesting life and work, on fine sources, offline sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. I approve the hook, and it goes well with the current trend for short "hooky" wording. I wonder, however, if - since her name doesn't give much clue to where she comes from - some hint at place and/or time might add interest. I found interesting, for example, that she took pics in both world wars. -- Gerda Arendt ( talk) 10:12, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply
How about including her photo, which - with a year in the caption - would add some time? It would illustrate the hook perfectly although it is not strictly she who is pictured. -- Gerda Arendt ( talk) 10:16, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply
  • @ Gerda Arendt: I've added the photo as you suggest. Regarding the hook info, if you don't tell them everything, they have to click through to find out, right? Mary Mark Ockerbloom ( talk) 13:00, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply
    Thank you for the image which tells what I missed. -- Gerda Arendt ( talk) 17:02, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply
    adding to approval: the image is licensed and a great illustration of the kind of photos she took. -- Gerda Arendt ( talk) 18:38, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Foundation of the Communist Party of India

Banner of the Communist Party of India
Banner of the Communist Party of India
  • Source: Kiran Saxena (1990). Trade Union Movement and the National Movement. South Asian Publishers. p. 128. ISBN 978-81-7003-116-1.
Moved to mainspace by Soman ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 380 past nominations.

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Soman ( talk) 21:16, 28 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: This is a very nicely-written and well-researched article, with quite the interesting hook for DYK. Excellent work on this! Only real issue is that it's currently tagged as an orphan, this can be remedied by linking to this article from at least one other article. Ping me once this is done and I'll be happy to approve this. (I'm also not convinced that the picture is necessary for this kind of a hook, but its inclusion is up to the DYK coordinators) Grnrchst ( talk) 14:12, 29 April 2024 (UTC) reply

The Lord Chamberlain's plays

  • ... that the Lord Chamberlain was the official theatrical censor in England for over 200 years until 1968 with the power to prevent any new play from being performed, often for blasphemy or indecency?
  • ALT1: ... that the Lord Chamberlain's plays are a historical archive of play scripts curated through theatrical censorship that provide a unique insight to attitudes to race and sexuality?
  • Reviewed:
Created by OAnick ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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Nick Sheppard ( talk) 14:55, 28 April 2024 (UTC). reply

User:Launchballer ( talk)

  • fair point, novice at DYK…is update any good?

Nick Sheppard ( talk)

It's customary to propose new ALTs instead of replacing them. Full review needed.-- Laun chba ller 18:23, 28 April 2024 (UTC) reply
I've suggested a possibility of linking for the original alt. Someone else may have a better idea of whether this complies appropriately with best practice for formatting a DYK hook. Mary Mark Ockerbloom ( talk) 21:58, 28 April 2024 (UTC) reply
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: None required.

Overall: I prefer ALT1 to ALT. The hook length is acceptable for both. ALT has a couple of issues: the title of the article does not appear, but more importantly, the idea of the office's powers is not clearly conveyed: it currently says "for over 200 years until 1968 with the power to prevent ANY new play from being performed". However, those powers were somewhat restricted after 1843, so to say ANY new play could be restricted after 1843 is perhaps misleading. This hook could be rephrased slightly, but at this point, for both reasons, I recommend ALT1 instead. Mary Mark Ockerbloom ( talk) 23:47, 28 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Peale's Philadelphia Museum

The Exhumation of the Mastadon
The Exhumation of the Mastadon
  • ... that exhibits at Peale's Philadelphia Museum included the first known skeleton of a mastodon (excavation pictured)? Source: Semonin, Paul (2000). American Monster: How the Nation's First Prehistoric Creature Became a Symbol of National Identity. NYU Press. p. 5 "Charles Willson Peale and his son Rembrandt excavated the first complete skeleton of the American incognitum, or mastodon" "when the mounted skeleton was placed in their Philadelphia Museum for public viewing".
Created by TSventon ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 5 past nominations.

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TSventon ( talk) 21:05, 28 April 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Review:


General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: I don't see anything in the guidelines about QPQs needing to be done recently, but this one was done in 2021 and hasn't been used as a QPQ by the nominator before. If that's okay, then this nom is good to go. voorts ( talk/ contributions) 23:15, 28 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Voorts, thank you for the review, I tried to do a few QPQs before I needed them and they have got rather old. Fortunately WP:QPQ says QPQs do not expire and may be used at any time for a future DYK nomination. TSventon ( talk) 00:09, 29 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Aza Arnold

  • ... that within years of Aza Arnold inventing a device to improve cotton roving, it was plagiarized across the United States and Europe?
  • Source: Jeremy, D. J. (1981). Technological diffusion—the case of the differential gear. Industrial Archaeology Review, 5(3), 217–227. doi:10.1179/iar.1981.5.3.217
Created by Generalissima ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 43 past nominations.

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Generalissima ( talk) (it/she) 05:12, 28 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting: Yes
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Looks good. AGF on the offline source. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 23:27, 28 April 2024 (UTC) reply


Articles created/expanded on April 29

Evgeniia Subbotina

  • Source: Shilov, A. A.; Karnaukhova, M. G., eds. (1932). "Субботина, Евгения Дмитриевна" [Subbotina, Evgeniia Dmitrievna]. Деятели революционного движения в России [ ru (in Russian). Vol. 4. Moscow: Society of Former Political Prisoners and Exiled Settlers. p. 1635–1636. OCLC  749336544. С помощью А. Лу. кашевича пыталась 28 янв. 1879 г. бежать; добралась до Иркутска, где была задержана 29 янв. т. г. Признанная ген.-губернаторок виновной в самовольн. отлучке, подвергнута 7-дневн. аресту при Иркутск. тюремн. Зам. к. азатем выслана в Верхоленск (Иркутск. губ.) с ением за ней особ. [...] В 1881 г. переведена в Иркутск, где жила с В. Александровой-Натансон, Принимала вместе с нею участие в денежной помощи и в организации побегов Е. Брешко-Брешковской из Баргузина и Е. Ковальской и С. Богомолец из Иркутск. [With the help of A. L. Kashevich she tried to escape on 28 January 1879; she reached Irkutsk, where she was detained on 29 January of that year. Found guilty of AWOL by the Governor-General, she was subjected to a 7-day arrest at the Irkutsk prison. She was deported to Verkholensk (Irkutsk province) and then deported with a special charge. [...] In 1881, she was transferred to Irkutsk, where she lived with V. Alexandrova-Natanson; she took part with her in providing monetary aid and in organising the escape of E. Breshko-Breshkovskaya from Barguzin and E. Kovalskaya and S. Bogomolets from Irkutsk.]
Created by Grnrchst ( talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 35 past nominations.

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Grnrchst ( talk) 14:20, 29 April 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Thanks for creating this. I've read some interesting first person accounts that mention the women Russian exiles. Please tag me once the missing citation is added. Mary Mark Ockerbloom ( talk) 01:33, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply

  • @ Mary Mark Ockerbloom: I'm confused as to why this claim needs a citation? She collaborated on Lavrov's Vpered, was involved in a Narodnik organisation, was tried in two mass trials of Narodnik revolutionaries and actively organised with other Narodniks for decades. Is it not exceedingly obvious that this was the movement she was involved in? -- Grnrchst ( talk) 08:12, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Grnrchst: Yes, but all of that relies on the reader having knowledge of what that movement was and who it involved. For a Wikipedia reader who follows the hook to a topic that they aren't knowledgeable about, none of that is obvious. So I would suggest adding a sentence or phrase later in the body that in which you explicitly use the term Narodnik, with a citation to something that clarifies or at least uses that term. Mary Mark Ockerbloom ( talk) 12:15, 30 April 2024 (UTC) reply

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