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Hi Kikichugirl
Thanks for your comments regarding the non-acceptance of the article James McInerney (Poet) - I must confess to being confused here. I originally submitted earlier last year, was declined for the same reasons you gave, then a week or so ago was advised the article would be deleted if there were no further edits. I then got this message from Thaddeus B: "I have delayed deletion for now as the subject appears to meet our inclusion criteria. Would you consider returning to the article and giving it another shot by adding some additional content? Feel free to contact me directly with any questions you may have." I responded, then added some extra material and two additional sources, and re-submitted, only to find I am back at square one! Can you advise? Many thanks, Chris, (Popstopher) Popstopher ( talk) 08:58, 29 March 2015 (UTC)
Kikichugirl,
Thank you, first of all, for your feedback on the article. I was wondering if you could provide me with some more concrete feedback regarding which parts of the article are not suitable for Wikipedia publication. Is there certain content that should be deleted? Or phrasing that should be reworded? Please see the article itself for reference: 180fusion
Any and all feedback would be welcomed.
Thanks!
Ha.Hoffman ( talk) 19:38, 2 April 2015 (UTC)
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Hi Kikichugirl,
Thanks for reviewing my draft ( Colby Keller). I've made quite a few revisions using your suggestions and have removed several other 'unreliable' (at least I'm assuming they're deemed as such, based on your recommendations) citations. Would you be so kind as to take another look and let me know if there are further changes I should make before resubmitting?
Thanks in advance for your help. -- LDBlakeley ( talk) 15:19, 4 April 2015 (UTC)
Good day Kikichu!
I already edited my article's sources Maris Racal kindly review the changes and please let me know if it passes the criteria. Your help is very much appreciated. thank you! -- Inajane ( talk) 16:13, 4 April 2015 (UTC)
inajane — Preceding unsigned comment added by Inajane ( talk • contribs) 16:06, 4 April 2015 (UTC)
The reason I am asking for the creation of the article on the "Jaguar XF (X250)" is so that it can be split from the "Jaguar XF" page. The reason I want the pages split is because there is another Jaguar XF generation coming out later this year. The X250 is the first generation car, the second generation car will have a different number (the number is yet to be released). Splitting the X250 page from the main XF page will bring the article in line with other articles on multiple generation cars such as BMW 3 series and Jaguar XJ.
Article link below:
User:Strudal21/sandbox
Thank you, and i hope you will reconsider. Strudal21 ( talk) 00:19, 6 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi Kikichugirl. I'm writing to query your rejection of my article submission Snails_Kids because I disagree with (or perhaps misunderstand) you reasons for rejecting it.
You wrote "This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed." However every sentence of the article is a simple statement of fact backed by independent references. Could you please explain your reasons in your own words?
Thanks,
Holynightfever ( talk) 22:11, 5 April 2015 (UTC)
Hello Thank you very much for reviewing the article, I have made some changes and hopefully it will meet the guidelines now. Please let me know if it reads too much like an advertisement still and if the references are all ok. I have tried to keep the subject in the headline of each article... Thanks again
LittleGold ( talk) 15:52, 7 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi Kikichugirl,
I was stalking your user page and noticed that you are not religious and also believed that freedom of religion is not an excuse for stupidity. I'm on the same page with you, and just wanted to say that I'm upset by the new laws that have been passed in the US recently giving religion legal impunity to discriminate based on sexual orientation. In my view, this is akin to allowing churches to turn people away for their race or any other trait that is out of our control. I fell away from my religion 13 years ago (I was born and raised in an extremely Mormon household), and for years even though I wasn't religious I didn't really have anything to explain the gaps in life that are usually filled by religion. That is until I started getting really into science, more specifically, string theory, M-theory, physics, astrophysics, and so forth. My first introduction to this type of science was the double-slit experiment, which really opened my eyes to the strange and wonderful world of science, which in my opinion is much more mysterious and beautiful than anything religion has to offer. Finally, have you heard of the Flying Spaghetti Monster? If not you would probably be amused! It's nice to talk to like-minded people sometimes so I figured I write to you, even though it's not really wiki-related. Anyways, hope you are enjoying your day. Cheers. - War wizard90 ( talk) 04:29, 9 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi,Kikichugirl!
I was reading a few articles about football clubs here in Manila and I came across Carrigans F.C. and Ceres Crius FC. Just noticed that Ceres Crius FC's article has notability/reference issues. Wondering what could've been the problem. How come Carrigans FC did not have any issue even if their reference/s is basically their website and another site that can no longer be found. I think Ceres Crius FC's article is all right. Provides adequate information about their club and reference/s.
Cheers! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ylizzaj ( talk • contribs) 05:40, 9 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi, Kikichugirl!
I was reading a few articles about the football clubs in Manila and I came across Ceres Crius FC and Carrigans FC's articles. I noticed that that Ceres Crius FC has issues about references/notability. Just wondering what could have been the problem coz with Carrigans FC's article, they basically just have their website as their reference and another site which can no longer be found now. I just think that Ceres Crius FC's article is all right. It has adequate information about their club and provides several reference as well. =)
Ceres Crius FC's article is at Draft:Ceres Crius Football Club Carrigans FC's article is at Carrigans F.C.
Cheers!
Ylizzaj ( talk) 05:48, 9 April 2015 (UTC)
Good morning! My article "Christian Study Centers" (found here: /info/en/?search=Draft:Christian_Study_Centers) was recently declined.
There are no more sources that exist surrounding this subject -- meaning, there are none I can add -- so do I strategically delete certain ones that are not appropriate? I do not understand why the sources are not appropriate, being form such varied and trustworthy sources as First Things, NPR, the historian Mark Noll, Christianity Today, and the New York Times.
There was also mention of the article's tone being like an advertisement. How can that be changed? Specifically, what aspects of the article are not fitting for an encyclopedia?
Thank you so much for your help.
SamHeath4 (
talk) 15:22, 9 April 2015 (UTC)
Kindly advise on the article.
It wasn't meant to be an advertisement as the review suggests...it is just information on who and how the business was started and where it operates. There is no mention of its products nor how it operates...i dont believe it thus qualifies as an advertisement. Kindly review or advise on what i should remove/edit for it to comply.
Regards,
Isaiah.
Isaiah.onyango ( talk) 09:58, 10 April 2015 (UTC)
Kindly advise on the article.
It wasn't meant to be an advertisement as the review suggests...it is just information on who and how the business was started and where it operates. There is no mention of its products nor how it operates...i dont believe it thus qualifies as an advertisement. Kindly review or advise on what i should remove/edit for it to comply.
Regards,
Isaiah. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Isaiah.onyango ( talk • contribs) 09:55, 10 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi kikichugirl, I saw your review of this page and I actually disagree with it. I don't feel that the page is promotional. Sure, there are some positives listed, but of course it's not a problem and it's in fact written in a very objective tone. @ Holynightfever: for reference, here is the message. Thanks! Darylgolden( talk) Ping when replying 13:56, 10 April 2015 (UTC)
While there are references to company provided materials, there are also many others that did not originate from the company. I feel the external third party references fully support the notable contribution that ESChat is making on its industry and I don't understand your denial of the article. If not, please be more specific regarding the number of allowed company references vs the number of required external references.
Thanks,
Josh
71.9.63.250 ( talk) 22:08, 10 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi Kikichugirl,
Thank you for reviewing Draft:DataXoom_Corp <---hope I got this syntax right. /info/en/?search=Draft:DataXoom_Corp
And so fast! I thought there was a 10 day backlog?
However, yours is the second boilerplate rejection I have received.
I really though I had nailed it this time.
Can you be more specific about what it is you don't like?
I have labored over being neutral and providing references and proof of noteworthiness, trying to second-guess the last boilerplate rejection, my plea for more specifics being unanswered.
Do you look at reference 1 http://www.bestmvno.com/dataxoom-mvno-providing-data-business/ from BestMVNO.com a FREE MVNO directory? This is a company who's business it is to be authority on MVNOs and they have singled out DataXoom as one of a kind. DataXoom did not pay them, bribe them or incent them to do so in any way.
I fear if I try to second guess your objections again, I'll just end up with the same result. There must be something more specific you can tell me about what you disliked.
Thank you
Markcowtan ( talk) 01:59, 11 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi,
I removed as much subjective content as possible, and I sourced every statement in the bio. The discography, bibliography, and filmography info will be sourced as soon as we can compile all the references, however it would be great to get this page active as soon as possible. Thanks!
Ben
Bpscholz (
talk) 18:48, 8 April 2015 (UTC)
January 1914 is a redirect to a month in 1914, I want to move this in over the redirect as *many* other months are. The redirect needs to be deleted so that Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/January 1914 can be moved there. I can do the approval, I just can't do the removal of the redirect. Naraht ( talk) 01:39, 11 April 2015 (UTC)
I do need your assistance. It may take some of your valuable time, but I really do need your help. You recently rejected my article on the artist Rinaldo Paluzzi. I have personally talked to the curator of a major museum in Los Angeles, who agreed with me that Rinaldo Paluzzi is considered to be a Notable American Abstract Expressionist artist. I do understand the need to establish the Notability of Paluzzi and include references; and I believe I have done so in my article.
But please explain something to me?
Since Paluzzi was an American Abstract Expressionist Artist, I examined the list of artists whose mature work related to the American Abstract Expressionist movement (see: /info/en/?search=Abstract_expressionism) (Note: 7.2 Other artists) and may I suggest my article on Paluzzi includes more information establishing his notability and references than do the articles on the following artists listed there: William Brice , Alexander Bogen (was neither significant nor American), Charles Ragland Bunnell, Edward Corbett, Lynne Mapp Drexler, Jean Dubuffet, Sam Gilliam, Joseph Glasco, John D. Graham, Stephen Greene, Gino Hollander, Frances Kornbluth, André Lansky, Michael Lowe, John Levee, Herbert Matter (he was not an Abstract Expressionist, he was a photographer and graphic designer), Seong Moy, Jan Müller, Pat Passlof, Earle M. Pilgraim, Aaron Siskind (a photographer who had little to do with the Abstract Expressionist movement), Ary Stillman, and Cora Kelley Ward. PLEASE look at the WIKIPEDIA articles on each of the above and explain why they have an article and Paluzzi does not?
By the age of 32, his work was already in major collections and being shown in major exhibitions. [1]
Also, may I suggest you look at the following:
http://www.javierbmartin.com/index.php/textos/535-obito-rinaldo-paluzzi
http://www.javierbmartin.com/index.php/pintores-javier-b-martin/222-rinaldo-paluzzi
Please go to: http://www.inwhiteriver.com/attractioncategory/public-art/ Scroll down to “Totem” and read the bio on Paluzzi. If that doesn’t establish his nobility and references more than all the artists listed in section 7.2 of the American Abstract Expressionist article, I don’t understand what will?
After taking the time to do what I have requested, please let me know exactly what needs to be added to my article for it to be included in WIKIPEDIA.
I am age 90.85 and may not live long enough to see my article in WIKIPEDIA.
With cordial regards, SirSwindon Sirswindon ( talk) 19:48, 11 April 2015 (UTC)
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Hi,
In reference to the rejection of the article about sports and media company, Supponor Draft:Supponor, I have made some additions to the article that I hope will help to increase its possibility of submission. I have added further information into the initial introduction to try to highlight why Supponor and their product DBRLive should be included in an encyclopaedia - I initially kept this out to try to ensure it didn't read like a promotional piece.
DBRLive visual advertising technology is the only technology that has been developed with the ability to display different advertisements to different viewers who are watching the same sporting event on the perimeter boards of football fields/hockey pitches etc.
On the Wiki page for Virtual Advertising Supponor's DBRLive system is used as an example of virtual advertising for sporting events.
I think those reasons are why it is notable enpugh for Wikipedia and I hope I have managed to get that across in a balanced and well-referenced manner.
I've also added further references within the piece from reliable sources.
I'd appreciate any further comments that you have if you feel it is still not acceptable for submission.
Thanks in advance, -- Charlottecourtleeds ( talk) 09:10, 9 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi,
In response to your comment to remove articles from Supponor, I have deleted the three https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Draft:Supponor&redirect=no article references in the article and replaced them with third party information.
Thanks for your advice and I hope this helps get the article approved.
Thanks -- Charlottecourtleeds ( talk) 10:43, 13 April 2015 (UTC)
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go ahead shuvokhan123 21:11, 15 April 2015 (UTC) |
Hello Kikichugirl,
Please help me understand why a biographical page written about myself, a world-renowned classical pianist, needs citations? My article was not accepted due to insufficient citations. What types of citations does one need for a simple auto-biographical page?
Thank you for your help!
Sincerely, Cory Hall
Ralkram ( talk) 01:02, 14 April 2015 (UTC)
I asked in -en-help, and marktraceur was confused as to what part of the article read like an advertisement. Could you confirm? I'd like to request a re-review because everything included in the text is cited to a reputable source and is framed in the exact same way as many other biographies. Please let me know if there is a portion that raises any concerns and I'd be happy to re-write or add additional sources. Thanks in advance for your time!
Zjmg40 ( talk) 13:45, 16 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi Kikichu, I'm writing in regards to Draft:Bulpros. I am using Softengi as a sample and I'm using the same word style. Could you elaborate on why the article reads like an advertisement - you have left some guiding notes last time which I have complied to, but none on your last review (15th of April)? Thanks for your help! Redstainedfriday ( talk) 06:48, 16 April 2015 (UTC)
Thanks for your comment on Draft:Mark_Saint_Juste. I removed all references to IMDB per your advice. Jazzypr2015 ( talk) 02:36, 17 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi, your "no consensus keep decision" for Karl Dalhouse has shown up in an abuse discussion about Arb. There is currently a discussion at Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Incidents regarding an issue with which you may have been involved. Thank you. Be..anyone ( talk) 09:59, 20 April 2015 (UTC)
Hello!
I saw the Array Networks page was updated with promotional content and read your comments. I deleted all the new updates and put back the text that was there previously. Are you able to give any additional feedback at this time?
Thank you in advance! Rachelamarshall ( talk) 15:06, 23 April 2015 (UTC)
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Thanks. And have a nice day. NickCT ( talk) 18:41, 26 April 2015 (UTC)
user name: Yatin Rewale article: /info/en/?search=Draft:Jayantilal_Gada Hello - I've just seen that My article I submitted for review Draft:Jayantilal Gada has been rejected after review. I made some necessary changes in my article.Please tell me what changes need to do so my Article is approved .Please help me thank you. Yatin Rewale ( talk) 08:53, 27 April 2015 (UTC)
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I would request you to review my page ( /info/en/?search=Al_wathba_national_insurance_awnic). I am new to wikipedia and I would appreciateif you could review my page and suggest changes. It will promote new users like me to create pages and be active contributor on wikipedia.
I respect your suggest to wiki, but would have preferred suggestion to improve on my page.
Regards. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Iloveabudhabi ( talk • contribs) 09:05, 2 May 2015 (UTC)
I feel a little bad going over your head, but a helpee pinged me about Draft:John Marshall and I accepted it as John Marshall (entrepreneur) because
If you disagree, feel free to move it back to the draftspace, but I'm pretty happy with the article. -- MarkTraceur ( talk) 04:34, 7 May 2015 (UTC)
Oyecrystal ( talk) 18:32, 14 May 2015 (UTC)Thank you for your kind feedback of my first created page for Bezalel.Inc.
Yes, it is really disappointed to be deleted again and again, I really want to give up and do not touch wiki again. However, I think it is really a pity to have no results. Then I follow all the discussion to modify and create page of ARK (Portable wireless charger). But it is deleted again. I really do not know how to do next. The discussion is like really mean to me. It is like I can never create my page successfully because what I do is meaningless. Can you please give me more advise and instruction? I appreciate it so much!
Thank you for your feedback.
I have a question. How is my proposed article ( Draft:Begin Japanology) different from Kekkon Dekinai Otoko for instance (there are many other examples on wikipedia)? I have read the wikipedia guidelines carefully but I also browsed the website to see what other articles currently exist to get a feeling for what is acceptable and what is not.
This article is a submission for a university project and your reason for declining it does not give me the opportunity to improve the article in any way. I would appreciate it if you could give me any ideas on how we can resolve this issue and get the article accepted.
Thank you in advance.
Roaldnel ( talk) 08:20, 7 May 2015 (UTC)
Can you tell me how a page like this gets approved? None of the links work, and even if they did, is it noteworthy information? /info/en/?search=Charles_Mace Briansmith451 ( talk) 13:55, 24 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi, Thanks for reviewing my article. It helped me a lot to improve my articles. This is my first article and I've made few changes in citations for reference links. I would be thankful if you could help me to create this article on Wikipedia. Kindly advice me how I can improve my article and please find below by sandbox link.
Sbrsiva1985 ( talk) 13:37, 17 May 2015 (UTC)
A full time job .... Nooooo! What about all the little kittens articles which need looking after.
Coolabahapple (
talk) 03:29, 4 June 2015 (UTC)
Hi there! Back again. Hope you're doing well!
Wondered if you could have a look back through my latest draft for 'The Talks'. Have found a fair few sturdy citations, and had a general tidy up. Any more feedback would be much appreciated!!
http://www.en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:The_Talks
AOOHull ( talk) 13:59, 5 June 2015 (UTC)
Hello Kikichugirl,
I have updated and fixed the following article - Draft:Alex_Gilbert with new reliable sources. Including:
Both secondary sources. You will need a VPN to play the TV3 website clip for NZ if you live outside of NZ.
Thank You!
Dmitry -- DmitryPopovRU ( talk) 03:18, 6 June 2015 (UTC)
hi Kikichugirl,
You reviewed my draft for institutional investor journals. I resubmitted it after editing. Its been over 3 weeks. Could you please re-review it?
205.217.108.5 ( talk) 16:21, 8 June 2015 (UTC)
Hello,
This is regarding the Prime Focus Technologies Wikipedia article that is in the Draft section, Link: /info/en/?search=Draft:Prime_Focus_Technologies
I have revised the article and have also changed the tone of the article, so that it does not read like a press release. Can you please review the article once again and approve the changes. Also if you still think that the article reads like a press release/news article, it would be great if you could tell me about how the article can be made better.
All your help will be greatly appreciated, awaiting your response.
Thank You!! — Preceding unsigned comment added by AayushyaBajpai ( talk • contribs) 11:54, 12 June 2015 (UTC)
Hello Kikichugirl,
It will be great if you could re-view the article once again, I have revised the article and also corrected the flow, to make the article more encyclopaedic.
Thank you!
— Preceding unsigned comment added by AayushyaBajpai ( talk • contribs)
Hi, AayushyaBajpai, you have to submit it before I can review it. Make sure you've addressed the comments of the previous reviewers before you do. Thanks! — kikichugirl oh hello! 00:21, 16 June 2015 (UTC)
Hi, Sorry if I do not send my message to the right box, I am new to Wikipedia. The site says it was you who deleted the article and I cannot find anyone else who rejected it. I am asking you about Arkshya and Rajesh site. They offer online PowerPoint tutorials. What was wrong with my article? Greets, Alice Forest 17 June 2015 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Alexandra Alice Forest ( talk • contribs) 10:56, 17 June 2015 (UTC)
Hi. I wouldn't criticise your enthusiasm for a moment - and you know that - but I have removed the entry you made for Quinto Simmaco. As I introduced the rule of 500 mainspace edits which was supported by consensus, I'm a bit of a stickler to see it upheld. Exceptions will only get everyone asking to be an exception. Take care and kindest regards, -- Kudpung กุดผึ้ง ( talk) 11:45, 14 June 2015 (UTC)
Good Afternoon,
Thank you for reviewing my submission. After printing out other editors suggestions, and following them by taking out articles/news writing by anyone except government agencies, newspapers, trade publications and regulatory agencies and the article was still rejected. I also "mirrored" the article as much as possible after NRU, NRC and other similar nuclear medicine wiki-sites. I stated the facts as they are to the company and am still confused about this. Please advise. Draft:SHINE_Medical_Technologies Thank you so much! PattiMoly99 ( talk) 20:43, 19 June 2015 (UTC)
Dear Kikichugirl, I'm user Capiel PG1 and tried to upload the article Electric Motor effficiency on under my username.
Draft:Electric motor efficiency
In the past this article was deleted, the reason was: this is not a typical wikipedia article, there was only one reference for the whole article, and write in a neutral position
I tried to modify the article, add several references and sources as well as I tried to write in a neutral position.
This article is very important for the CAPIEL Gruop, please help to correct and release this article. if something is missing or incorrect, please let me know.
best regards
Gerd Brenning
member of CAPIEL PG1 — Preceding unsigned comment added by CAPIEL PG1 ( talk • contribs) 13:34, 22 June 2015 (UTC)
Hey,
Thanks for your review.
This is my first such page creation for Wikipedia. Not sure what went wrong but can you please guide me as to how to fix this error with Mara mentor. I think it is a really cool app as some of my friends in Africa use this to boost there business. I have tried to include references, should I add some more or should I create a sandbox page?
I know you are busy but many thanks for taking out time to review the page and for responding to my query.
Thanks, Ameena
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Coolabahapple (
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Thank you for the advice on our Russ Emanuel page! : https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Draft:Russ_Emanuel We have done as you suggested and removed IMDB from our references. One question, some film event awards are only listed on IMDB, is it okay to list their official festival film results IMDB page as a reference? Thank you for your time! 04:47, 9 July 2015 (UTC)
Hello!
Please look at Draft:Alex Gilbert. I'm not sure how to correctly get this up for a deletion review.
Thanks! Dmitry! -- DmitryPopovRU ( talk) 04:15, 24 August 2015 (UTC)
Hi
Thanks for the opportunity of contacting you
I submitted Draft:Trevor Gray - you said references aren't adequately supported by reliable sources - so you mean discogs/allmusic/imdb are not reliable?
The whole music and film industries use these resources as gospel.
I understand they are user-inputted like Wiki is, but they are constantly monitored and edited. Surely the sheer weight of links shows the notability of an entry.
I see these sources everywhere in Wiki pages on huge artists.
I'm confused...
Regards
James
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talk) 14:00, 24 August 2015 (UTC)
Fusionem ( talk) 00:45, 29 August 2015 (UTC)
Hello, you declined the article [
[2]] due to insufficient reliable sources. More credible sources were added, and the article is resubmitted for review. Please feel free to let me know if there is anything more I can do. Thanks!
Ongaku ongaku ( talk) 13:31, 6 September 2015 (UTC) Ongaku ongaku ( talk) 13:52, 6 September 2015 (UTC)
Hi Kikichugirl .. I'm really new at this :-(
I have made a few changes / added references from the Internet. I do get the spirit of Wikipedia and I am trying my hardest .. really! Would you please have a look now at the revised/expanded article and see what you think? Thank you!
Link is here (hope I'm doing this right) /info/en/?search=Draft:Wildeboer_Dellelce
Paul
Pflint ( talk) 21:07, 8 September 2015 (UTC)
Hollenderek ( talk) 04:49, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
this is the link
/info/en/?search=Draft:Nisan_Katz
how this prson is not notable..there are links which clearly shows.then what else is required let me know.so that i may edit and resubmit it.— Preceding unsigned comment added by Hollenderek ( talk • contribs) 05:49, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
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Hello, I have recently made the edits as you suggested and resubmitted the article [
[3]] for rereview. Please let me know when we can have the draft published, and if we can change the article title to "Matthew Stevens (guitarist)" to "Matthew Stevens (musician)". Thanks!
Ongaku ongaku (
talk) 01:02, 14 September 2015 (UTC)
Ongaku ongaku ( talk) 01:02, 14 September 2015 (UTC)
Can you help creating old seasons in Liga II. Thanks !-- Alexiulian25 ( talk) 07:46, 4 November 2015 (UTC)
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Hi, you recently reviewed and declined my submission of the page
Joseph C. Maroon. The reason you gave was that it read more like an advertisement. While in previous versions I understood this feedback, I heavily revised the page and at this point, it is unclear to me what exactly it is that makes the text sound like an advertisement. In my choice of words, I have heavily relied on published wiki pages of other doctors/researchers and I am unclear how my page differs from these other, published pages. I'd really appreciate it if you could give me specifics, and if at all possible, suggestions on how to improve this contribution. Thank you very much.
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Hi Kikichugirl,
How are you doing today? I trust you're fine. Could you please help with copy editing on the above article? Thanks. Wikic¤l¤gy t@lk to M£ 17:31, 26 November 2015 (UTC)
Hi, This is regarding the Article Draft:Akshay Agrawal which you recently rejected due to its non-neutrality and tone. I have made some changes and it should sound better now. Pl let me know if there is something specific youd like me to change. Thanks.
Agrawal.akshay98 ( talk) 10:31, 7 December 2015 (UTC)
Hi, can you be more specific please and tell me an example from my text which is not written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article? That will help greatly. Thanks. Cznal ( talk) 20:22, 8 December 2015 (UTC)
Hi! Can you help me with this draft? This draft has been resubmitted and is currently awaiting re-review Thanks!-- 27century ( talk) 07:50, 27 December 2015 (UTC)
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Hi Kikichugirl
Thanks for your comments regarding the non-acceptance of the article James McInerney (Poet) - I must confess to being confused here. I originally submitted earlier last year, was declined for the same reasons you gave, then a week or so ago was advised the article would be deleted if there were no further edits. I then got this message from Thaddeus B: "I have delayed deletion for now as the subject appears to meet our inclusion criteria. Would you consider returning to the article and giving it another shot by adding some additional content? Feel free to contact me directly with any questions you may have." I responded, then added some extra material and two additional sources, and re-submitted, only to find I am back at square one! Can you advise? Many thanks, Chris, (Popstopher) Popstopher ( talk) 08:58, 29 March 2015 (UTC)
Kikichugirl,
Thank you, first of all, for your feedback on the article. I was wondering if you could provide me with some more concrete feedback regarding which parts of the article are not suitable for Wikipedia publication. Is there certain content that should be deleted? Or phrasing that should be reworded? Please see the article itself for reference: 180fusion
Any and all feedback would be welcomed.
Thanks!
Ha.Hoffman ( talk) 19:38, 2 April 2015 (UTC)
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Hi Kikichugirl,
Thanks for reviewing my draft ( Colby Keller). I've made quite a few revisions using your suggestions and have removed several other 'unreliable' (at least I'm assuming they're deemed as such, based on your recommendations) citations. Would you be so kind as to take another look and let me know if there are further changes I should make before resubmitting?
Thanks in advance for your help. -- LDBlakeley ( talk) 15:19, 4 April 2015 (UTC)
Good day Kikichu!
I already edited my article's sources Maris Racal kindly review the changes and please let me know if it passes the criteria. Your help is very much appreciated. thank you! -- Inajane ( talk) 16:13, 4 April 2015 (UTC)
inajane — Preceding unsigned comment added by Inajane ( talk • contribs) 16:06, 4 April 2015 (UTC)
The reason I am asking for the creation of the article on the "Jaguar XF (X250)" is so that it can be split from the "Jaguar XF" page. The reason I want the pages split is because there is another Jaguar XF generation coming out later this year. The X250 is the first generation car, the second generation car will have a different number (the number is yet to be released). Splitting the X250 page from the main XF page will bring the article in line with other articles on multiple generation cars such as BMW 3 series and Jaguar XJ.
Article link below:
User:Strudal21/sandbox
Thank you, and i hope you will reconsider. Strudal21 ( talk) 00:19, 6 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi Kikichugirl. I'm writing to query your rejection of my article submission Snails_Kids because I disagree with (or perhaps misunderstand) you reasons for rejecting it.
You wrote "This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed." However every sentence of the article is a simple statement of fact backed by independent references. Could you please explain your reasons in your own words?
Thanks,
Holynightfever ( talk) 22:11, 5 April 2015 (UTC)
Hello Thank you very much for reviewing the article, I have made some changes and hopefully it will meet the guidelines now. Please let me know if it reads too much like an advertisement still and if the references are all ok. I have tried to keep the subject in the headline of each article... Thanks again
LittleGold ( talk) 15:52, 7 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi Kikichugirl,
I was stalking your user page and noticed that you are not religious and also believed that freedom of religion is not an excuse for stupidity. I'm on the same page with you, and just wanted to say that I'm upset by the new laws that have been passed in the US recently giving religion legal impunity to discriminate based on sexual orientation. In my view, this is akin to allowing churches to turn people away for their race or any other trait that is out of our control. I fell away from my religion 13 years ago (I was born and raised in an extremely Mormon household), and for years even though I wasn't religious I didn't really have anything to explain the gaps in life that are usually filled by religion. That is until I started getting really into science, more specifically, string theory, M-theory, physics, astrophysics, and so forth. My first introduction to this type of science was the double-slit experiment, which really opened my eyes to the strange and wonderful world of science, which in my opinion is much more mysterious and beautiful than anything religion has to offer. Finally, have you heard of the Flying Spaghetti Monster? If not you would probably be amused! It's nice to talk to like-minded people sometimes so I figured I write to you, even though it's not really wiki-related. Anyways, hope you are enjoying your day. Cheers. - War wizard90 ( talk) 04:29, 9 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi,Kikichugirl!
I was reading a few articles about football clubs here in Manila and I came across Carrigans F.C. and Ceres Crius FC. Just noticed that Ceres Crius FC's article has notability/reference issues. Wondering what could've been the problem. How come Carrigans FC did not have any issue even if their reference/s is basically their website and another site that can no longer be found. I think Ceres Crius FC's article is all right. Provides adequate information about their club and reference/s.
Cheers! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ylizzaj ( talk • contribs) 05:40, 9 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi, Kikichugirl!
I was reading a few articles about the football clubs in Manila and I came across Ceres Crius FC and Carrigans FC's articles. I noticed that that Ceres Crius FC has issues about references/notability. Just wondering what could have been the problem coz with Carrigans FC's article, they basically just have their website as their reference and another site which can no longer be found now. I just think that Ceres Crius FC's article is all right. It has adequate information about their club and provides several reference as well. =)
Ceres Crius FC's article is at Draft:Ceres Crius Football Club Carrigans FC's article is at Carrigans F.C.
Cheers!
Ylizzaj ( talk) 05:48, 9 April 2015 (UTC)
Good morning! My article "Christian Study Centers" (found here: /info/en/?search=Draft:Christian_Study_Centers) was recently declined.
There are no more sources that exist surrounding this subject -- meaning, there are none I can add -- so do I strategically delete certain ones that are not appropriate? I do not understand why the sources are not appropriate, being form such varied and trustworthy sources as First Things, NPR, the historian Mark Noll, Christianity Today, and the New York Times.
There was also mention of the article's tone being like an advertisement. How can that be changed? Specifically, what aspects of the article are not fitting for an encyclopedia?
Thank you so much for your help.
SamHeath4 (
talk) 15:22, 9 April 2015 (UTC)
Kindly advise on the article.
It wasn't meant to be an advertisement as the review suggests...it is just information on who and how the business was started and where it operates. There is no mention of its products nor how it operates...i dont believe it thus qualifies as an advertisement. Kindly review or advise on what i should remove/edit for it to comply.
Regards,
Isaiah.
Isaiah.onyango ( talk) 09:58, 10 April 2015 (UTC)
Kindly advise on the article.
It wasn't meant to be an advertisement as the review suggests...it is just information on who and how the business was started and where it operates. There is no mention of its products nor how it operates...i dont believe it thus qualifies as an advertisement. Kindly review or advise on what i should remove/edit for it to comply.
Regards,
Isaiah. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Isaiah.onyango ( talk • contribs) 09:55, 10 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi kikichugirl, I saw your review of this page and I actually disagree with it. I don't feel that the page is promotional. Sure, there are some positives listed, but of course it's not a problem and it's in fact written in a very objective tone. @ Holynightfever: for reference, here is the message. Thanks! Darylgolden( talk) Ping when replying 13:56, 10 April 2015 (UTC)
While there are references to company provided materials, there are also many others that did not originate from the company. I feel the external third party references fully support the notable contribution that ESChat is making on its industry and I don't understand your denial of the article. If not, please be more specific regarding the number of allowed company references vs the number of required external references.
Thanks,
Josh
71.9.63.250 ( talk) 22:08, 10 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi Kikichugirl,
Thank you for reviewing Draft:DataXoom_Corp <---hope I got this syntax right. /info/en/?search=Draft:DataXoom_Corp
And so fast! I thought there was a 10 day backlog?
However, yours is the second boilerplate rejection I have received.
I really though I had nailed it this time.
Can you be more specific about what it is you don't like?
I have labored over being neutral and providing references and proof of noteworthiness, trying to second-guess the last boilerplate rejection, my plea for more specifics being unanswered.
Do you look at reference 1 http://www.bestmvno.com/dataxoom-mvno-providing-data-business/ from BestMVNO.com a FREE MVNO directory? This is a company who's business it is to be authority on MVNOs and they have singled out DataXoom as one of a kind. DataXoom did not pay them, bribe them or incent them to do so in any way.
I fear if I try to second guess your objections again, I'll just end up with the same result. There must be something more specific you can tell me about what you disliked.
Thank you
Markcowtan ( talk) 01:59, 11 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi,
I removed as much subjective content as possible, and I sourced every statement in the bio. The discography, bibliography, and filmography info will be sourced as soon as we can compile all the references, however it would be great to get this page active as soon as possible. Thanks!
Ben
Bpscholz (
talk) 18:48, 8 April 2015 (UTC)
January 1914 is a redirect to a month in 1914, I want to move this in over the redirect as *many* other months are. The redirect needs to be deleted so that Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/January 1914 can be moved there. I can do the approval, I just can't do the removal of the redirect. Naraht ( talk) 01:39, 11 April 2015 (UTC)
I do need your assistance. It may take some of your valuable time, but I really do need your help. You recently rejected my article on the artist Rinaldo Paluzzi. I have personally talked to the curator of a major museum in Los Angeles, who agreed with me that Rinaldo Paluzzi is considered to be a Notable American Abstract Expressionist artist. I do understand the need to establish the Notability of Paluzzi and include references; and I believe I have done so in my article.
But please explain something to me?
Since Paluzzi was an American Abstract Expressionist Artist, I examined the list of artists whose mature work related to the American Abstract Expressionist movement (see: /info/en/?search=Abstract_expressionism) (Note: 7.2 Other artists) and may I suggest my article on Paluzzi includes more information establishing his notability and references than do the articles on the following artists listed there: William Brice , Alexander Bogen (was neither significant nor American), Charles Ragland Bunnell, Edward Corbett, Lynne Mapp Drexler, Jean Dubuffet, Sam Gilliam, Joseph Glasco, John D. Graham, Stephen Greene, Gino Hollander, Frances Kornbluth, André Lansky, Michael Lowe, John Levee, Herbert Matter (he was not an Abstract Expressionist, he was a photographer and graphic designer), Seong Moy, Jan Müller, Pat Passlof, Earle M. Pilgraim, Aaron Siskind (a photographer who had little to do with the Abstract Expressionist movement), Ary Stillman, and Cora Kelley Ward. PLEASE look at the WIKIPEDIA articles on each of the above and explain why they have an article and Paluzzi does not?
By the age of 32, his work was already in major collections and being shown in major exhibitions. [1]
Also, may I suggest you look at the following:
http://www.javierbmartin.com/index.php/textos/535-obito-rinaldo-paluzzi
http://www.javierbmartin.com/index.php/pintores-javier-b-martin/222-rinaldo-paluzzi
Please go to: http://www.inwhiteriver.com/attractioncategory/public-art/ Scroll down to “Totem” and read the bio on Paluzzi. If that doesn’t establish his nobility and references more than all the artists listed in section 7.2 of the American Abstract Expressionist article, I don’t understand what will?
After taking the time to do what I have requested, please let me know exactly what needs to be added to my article for it to be included in WIKIPEDIA.
I am age 90.85 and may not live long enough to see my article in WIKIPEDIA.
With cordial regards, SirSwindon Sirswindon ( talk) 19:48, 11 April 2015 (UTC)
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Hi,
In reference to the rejection of the article about sports and media company, Supponor Draft:Supponor, I have made some additions to the article that I hope will help to increase its possibility of submission. I have added further information into the initial introduction to try to highlight why Supponor and their product DBRLive should be included in an encyclopaedia - I initially kept this out to try to ensure it didn't read like a promotional piece.
DBRLive visual advertising technology is the only technology that has been developed with the ability to display different advertisements to different viewers who are watching the same sporting event on the perimeter boards of football fields/hockey pitches etc.
On the Wiki page for Virtual Advertising Supponor's DBRLive system is used as an example of virtual advertising for sporting events.
I think those reasons are why it is notable enpugh for Wikipedia and I hope I have managed to get that across in a balanced and well-referenced manner.
I've also added further references within the piece from reliable sources.
I'd appreciate any further comments that you have if you feel it is still not acceptable for submission.
Thanks in advance, -- Charlottecourtleeds ( talk) 09:10, 9 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi,
In response to your comment to remove articles from Supponor, I have deleted the three https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Draft:Supponor&redirect=no article references in the article and replaced them with third party information.
Thanks for your advice and I hope this helps get the article approved.
Thanks -- Charlottecourtleeds ( talk) 10:43, 13 April 2015 (UTC)
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Hello Kikichugirl,
Please help me understand why a biographical page written about myself, a world-renowned classical pianist, needs citations? My article was not accepted due to insufficient citations. What types of citations does one need for a simple auto-biographical page?
Thank you for your help!
Sincerely, Cory Hall
Ralkram ( talk) 01:02, 14 April 2015 (UTC)
I asked in -en-help, and marktraceur was confused as to what part of the article read like an advertisement. Could you confirm? I'd like to request a re-review because everything included in the text is cited to a reputable source and is framed in the exact same way as many other biographies. Please let me know if there is a portion that raises any concerns and I'd be happy to re-write or add additional sources. Thanks in advance for your time!
Zjmg40 ( talk) 13:45, 16 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi Kikichu, I'm writing in regards to Draft:Bulpros. I am using Softengi as a sample and I'm using the same word style. Could you elaborate on why the article reads like an advertisement - you have left some guiding notes last time which I have complied to, but none on your last review (15th of April)? Thanks for your help! Redstainedfriday ( talk) 06:48, 16 April 2015 (UTC)
Thanks for your comment on Draft:Mark_Saint_Juste. I removed all references to IMDB per your advice. Jazzypr2015 ( talk) 02:36, 17 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi, your "no consensus keep decision" for Karl Dalhouse has shown up in an abuse discussion about Arb. There is currently a discussion at Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Incidents regarding an issue with which you may have been involved. Thank you. Be..anyone ( talk) 09:59, 20 April 2015 (UTC)
Hello!
I saw the Array Networks page was updated with promotional content and read your comments. I deleted all the new updates and put back the text that was there previously. Are you able to give any additional feedback at this time?
Thank you in advance! Rachelamarshall ( talk) 15:06, 23 April 2015 (UTC)
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user name: Yatin Rewale article: /info/en/?search=Draft:Jayantilal_Gada Hello - I've just seen that My article I submitted for review Draft:Jayantilal Gada has been rejected after review. I made some necessary changes in my article.Please tell me what changes need to do so my Article is approved .Please help me thank you. Yatin Rewale ( talk) 08:53, 27 April 2015 (UTC)
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Hello! Thank you for reviewing our article about Sonia Gutierrez. ( /info/en/?search=Draft:Sonia_Gutierrez#Carlos_Rosario_School_Founder) This is my first time submitting a Wikipedia entry, and I would welcome any specific feedback you have about how to make the entry better. Best, Mandy — Preceding unsigned comment added by 38.70.10.18 ( talk) 21:10, 27 April 2015 (UTC)
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I would request you to review my page ( /info/en/?search=Al_wathba_national_insurance_awnic). I am new to wikipedia and I would appreciateif you could review my page and suggest changes. It will promote new users like me to create pages and be active contributor on wikipedia.
I respect your suggest to wiki, but would have preferred suggestion to improve on my page.
Regards. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Iloveabudhabi ( talk • contribs) 09:05, 2 May 2015 (UTC)
I feel a little bad going over your head, but a helpee pinged me about Draft:John Marshall and I accepted it as John Marshall (entrepreneur) because
If you disagree, feel free to move it back to the draftspace, but I'm pretty happy with the article. -- MarkTraceur ( talk) 04:34, 7 May 2015 (UTC)
Oyecrystal ( talk) 18:32, 14 May 2015 (UTC)Thank you for your kind feedback of my first created page for Bezalel.Inc.
Yes, it is really disappointed to be deleted again and again, I really want to give up and do not touch wiki again. However, I think it is really a pity to have no results. Then I follow all the discussion to modify and create page of ARK (Portable wireless charger). But it is deleted again. I really do not know how to do next. The discussion is like really mean to me. It is like I can never create my page successfully because what I do is meaningless. Can you please give me more advise and instruction? I appreciate it so much!
Thank you for your feedback.
I have a question. How is my proposed article ( Draft:Begin Japanology) different from Kekkon Dekinai Otoko for instance (there are many other examples on wikipedia)? I have read the wikipedia guidelines carefully but I also browsed the website to see what other articles currently exist to get a feeling for what is acceptable and what is not.
This article is a submission for a university project and your reason for declining it does not give me the opportunity to improve the article in any way. I would appreciate it if you could give me any ideas on how we can resolve this issue and get the article accepted.
Thank you in advance.
Roaldnel ( talk) 08:20, 7 May 2015 (UTC)
Can you tell me how a page like this gets approved? None of the links work, and even if they did, is it noteworthy information? /info/en/?search=Charles_Mace Briansmith451 ( talk) 13:55, 24 April 2015 (UTC)
Hi, Thanks for reviewing my article. It helped me a lot to improve my articles. This is my first article and I've made few changes in citations for reference links. I would be thankful if you could help me to create this article on Wikipedia. Kindly advice me how I can improve my article and please find below by sandbox link.
Sbrsiva1985 ( talk) 13:37, 17 May 2015 (UTC)
A full time job .... Nooooo! What about all the little kittens articles which need looking after.
Coolabahapple (
talk) 03:29, 4 June 2015 (UTC)
Hi there! Back again. Hope you're doing well!
Wondered if you could have a look back through my latest draft for 'The Talks'. Have found a fair few sturdy citations, and had a general tidy up. Any more feedback would be much appreciated!!
http://www.en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:The_Talks
AOOHull ( talk) 13:59, 5 June 2015 (UTC)
Hello Kikichugirl,
I have updated and fixed the following article - Draft:Alex_Gilbert with new reliable sources. Including:
Both secondary sources. You will need a VPN to play the TV3 website clip for NZ if you live outside of NZ.
Thank You!
Dmitry -- DmitryPopovRU ( talk) 03:18, 6 June 2015 (UTC)
hi Kikichugirl,
You reviewed my draft for institutional investor journals. I resubmitted it after editing. Its been over 3 weeks. Could you please re-review it?
205.217.108.5 ( talk) 16:21, 8 June 2015 (UTC)
Hello,
This is regarding the Prime Focus Technologies Wikipedia article that is in the Draft section, Link: /info/en/?search=Draft:Prime_Focus_Technologies
I have revised the article and have also changed the tone of the article, so that it does not read like a press release. Can you please review the article once again and approve the changes. Also if you still think that the article reads like a press release/news article, it would be great if you could tell me about how the article can be made better.
All your help will be greatly appreciated, awaiting your response.
Thank You!! — Preceding unsigned comment added by AayushyaBajpai ( talk • contribs) 11:54, 12 June 2015 (UTC)
Hello Kikichugirl,
It will be great if you could re-view the article once again, I have revised the article and also corrected the flow, to make the article more encyclopaedic.
Thank you!
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Hi, AayushyaBajpai, you have to submit it before I can review it. Make sure you've addressed the comments of the previous reviewers before you do. Thanks! — kikichugirl oh hello! 00:21, 16 June 2015 (UTC)
Hi, Sorry if I do not send my message to the right box, I am new to Wikipedia. The site says it was you who deleted the article and I cannot find anyone else who rejected it. I am asking you about Arkshya and Rajesh site. They offer online PowerPoint tutorials. What was wrong with my article? Greets, Alice Forest 17 June 2015 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Alexandra Alice Forest ( talk • contribs) 10:56, 17 June 2015 (UTC)
Hi. I wouldn't criticise your enthusiasm for a moment - and you know that - but I have removed the entry you made for Quinto Simmaco. As I introduced the rule of 500 mainspace edits which was supported by consensus, I'm a bit of a stickler to see it upheld. Exceptions will only get everyone asking to be an exception. Take care and kindest regards, -- Kudpung กุดผึ้ง ( talk) 11:45, 14 June 2015 (UTC)
Good Afternoon,
Thank you for reviewing my submission. After printing out other editors suggestions, and following them by taking out articles/news writing by anyone except government agencies, newspapers, trade publications and regulatory agencies and the article was still rejected. I also "mirrored" the article as much as possible after NRU, NRC and other similar nuclear medicine wiki-sites. I stated the facts as they are to the company and am still confused about this. Please advise. Draft:SHINE_Medical_Technologies Thank you so much! PattiMoly99 ( talk) 20:43, 19 June 2015 (UTC)
Dear Kikichugirl, I'm user Capiel PG1 and tried to upload the article Electric Motor effficiency on under my username.
Draft:Electric motor efficiency
In the past this article was deleted, the reason was: this is not a typical wikipedia article, there was only one reference for the whole article, and write in a neutral position
I tried to modify the article, add several references and sources as well as I tried to write in a neutral position.
This article is very important for the CAPIEL Gruop, please help to correct and release this article. if something is missing or incorrect, please let me know.
best regards
Gerd Brenning
member of CAPIEL PG1 — Preceding unsigned comment added by CAPIEL PG1 ( talk • contribs) 13:34, 22 June 2015 (UTC)
Hey,
Thanks for your review.
This is my first such page creation for Wikipedia. Not sure what went wrong but can you please guide me as to how to fix this error with Mara mentor. I think it is a really cool app as some of my friends in Africa use this to boost there business. I have tried to include references, should I add some more or should I create a sandbox page?
I know you are busy but many thanks for taking out time to review the page and for responding to my query.
Thanks, Ameena
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Coolabahapple (
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Thank you for the advice on our Russ Emanuel page! : https://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Draft:Russ_Emanuel We have done as you suggested and removed IMDB from our references. One question, some film event awards are only listed on IMDB, is it okay to list their official festival film results IMDB page as a reference? Thank you for your time! 04:47, 9 July 2015 (UTC)
Hello!
Please look at Draft:Alex Gilbert. I'm not sure how to correctly get this up for a deletion review.
Thanks! Dmitry! -- DmitryPopovRU ( talk) 04:15, 24 August 2015 (UTC)
Hi
Thanks for the opportunity of contacting you
I submitted Draft:Trevor Gray - you said references aren't adequately supported by reliable sources - so you mean discogs/allmusic/imdb are not reliable?
The whole music and film industries use these resources as gospel.
I understand they are user-inputted like Wiki is, but they are constantly monitored and edited. Surely the sheer weight of links shows the notability of an entry.
I see these sources everywhere in Wiki pages on huge artists.
I'm confused...
Regards
James
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Fusionem ( talk) 00:45, 29 August 2015 (UTC)
Hello, you declined the article [
[2]] due to insufficient reliable sources. More credible sources were added, and the article is resubmitted for review. Please feel free to let me know if there is anything more I can do. Thanks!
Ongaku ongaku ( talk) 13:31, 6 September 2015 (UTC) Ongaku ongaku ( talk) 13:52, 6 September 2015 (UTC)
Hi Kikichugirl .. I'm really new at this :-(
I have made a few changes / added references from the Internet. I do get the spirit of Wikipedia and I am trying my hardest .. really! Would you please have a look now at the revised/expanded article and see what you think? Thank you!
Link is here (hope I'm doing this right) /info/en/?search=Draft:Wildeboer_Dellelce
Paul
Pflint ( talk) 21:07, 8 September 2015 (UTC)
Hollenderek ( talk) 04:49, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
this is the link
/info/en/?search=Draft:Nisan_Katz
how this prson is not notable..there are links which clearly shows.then what else is required let me know.so that i may edit and resubmit it.— Preceding unsigned comment added by Hollenderek ( talk • contribs) 05:49, 10 September 2015 (UTC)
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Hello, I have recently made the edits as you suggested and resubmitted the article [
[3]] for rereview. Please let me know when we can have the draft published, and if we can change the article title to "Matthew Stevens (guitarist)" to "Matthew Stevens (musician)". Thanks!
Ongaku ongaku (
talk) 01:02, 14 September 2015 (UTC)
Ongaku ongaku ( talk) 01:02, 14 September 2015 (UTC)
Can you help creating old seasons in Liga II. Thanks !-- Alexiulian25 ( talk) 07:46, 4 November 2015 (UTC)
Hello: Just a note that I have created a new user box for WikiProject Deletion sorting members, located at {{ WikiProject Deletion sorting user box}}. Feel free to include it on your user pages if you'd like. Cheers, North America 1000 09:59, 11 November 2015 (UTC)
Hi, you recently reviewed and declined my submission of the page
Joseph C. Maroon. The reason you gave was that it read more like an advertisement. While in previous versions I understood this feedback, I heavily revised the page and at this point, it is unclear to me what exactly it is that makes the text sound like an advertisement. In my choice of words, I have heavily relied on published wiki pages of other doctors/researchers and I am unclear how my page differs from these other, published pages. I'd really appreciate it if you could give me specifics, and if at all possible, suggestions on how to improve this contribution. Thank you very much.
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talk) 01:32, 13 November 2015 (UTC)
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talk) 14:29, 24 November 2015 (UTC)
Hi Kikichugirl,
How are you doing today? I trust you're fine. Could you please help with copy editing on the above article? Thanks. Wikic¤l¤gy t@lk to M£ 17:31, 26 November 2015 (UTC)
Hi, This is regarding the Article Draft:Akshay Agrawal which you recently rejected due to its non-neutrality and tone. I have made some changes and it should sound better now. Pl let me know if there is something specific youd like me to change. Thanks.
Agrawal.akshay98 ( talk) 10:31, 7 December 2015 (UTC)
Hi, can you be more specific please and tell me an example from my text which is not written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article? That will help greatly. Thanks. Cznal ( talk) 20:22, 8 December 2015 (UTC)
Hi! Can you help me with this draft? This draft has been resubmitted and is currently awaiting re-review Thanks!-- 27century ( talk) 07:50, 27 December 2015 (UTC)