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Per Talk:Kokoda Track campaign/Archive 1#Japanese landings and initial advance
pls see proposal for migration of material Cinderella157 ( talk) 06:14, 14 May 2017 (UTC)
Not overly happy with this because I think it is likely temporally out of context (specifically wrt the type 92 heavy mortar). Would like a better image that has no ambiguities. Comments and suggestions pls. Cinderella157 ( talk) 08:30, 27 May 2017 (UTC)
Hi, @ AustralianRupert you will see that it is pretty much the finished article. I will step back and let you cast your eyes over it as I can see you are looking at it. Not certain about the lead and perhaps the aftermath. I think they are close but might need a tweak wrt what the article is meant to cover. The aftermath could include the atrocities being moved here from the man page? The section in the main page can now be parsed down. Let me know where you are at so we don't clash. Regards Cinderella157 ( talk) 09:41, 27 May 2017 (UTC)
Hi AR, added some analysis. Sure that Williams will have something to add. Regards Cinderella157 ( talk) 13:10, 27 May 2017 (UTC)
This is getting a little cluttered. McCarthy tells the story in detail and the two missionaries are part of that tale - as is what McAuley is telling. Would you like to look at it or would you rather I did? I must admit that I was being a little lazy at that time of night in not expandingg NcCarthy's account. Cinderella157 ( talk) 07:34, 28 May 2017 (UTC)
Hi, Btphelps, I have some concerns with these recent edits: [1] and [2].
First edit
Second edit
Regards, Cinderella157 ( talk) 12:08, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
PS: per: the Japanese chose to land troops on the northern coast of New Guinea at Buna-Gona
, it is the northern coast of the territory of Papua on the island of New Guinea - ie Papua, not New Guinea is more consistent with how it is described elsewhere in the article (particularly the lead.
Cinderella157 (
talk) 03:17, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
PS: B Coy departed Illolo 7 July to Uberi. It then departed Uberi 8 July. It generally reported that they departed [along the track] on 8 July. For more details, see edits of 29 Dec 21. Cinderella157 ( talk) 09:45, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
Edits have been reverted because of these concerns. Cinderella157 ( talk) 09:57, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
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Per Talk:Kokoda Track campaign/Archive 1#Japanese landings and initial advance
pls see proposal for migration of material Cinderella157 ( talk) 06:14, 14 May 2017 (UTC)
Not overly happy with this because I think it is likely temporally out of context (specifically wrt the type 92 heavy mortar). Would like a better image that has no ambiguities. Comments and suggestions pls. Cinderella157 ( talk) 08:30, 27 May 2017 (UTC)
Hi, @ AustralianRupert you will see that it is pretty much the finished article. I will step back and let you cast your eyes over it as I can see you are looking at it. Not certain about the lead and perhaps the aftermath. I think they are close but might need a tweak wrt what the article is meant to cover. The aftermath could include the atrocities being moved here from the man page? The section in the main page can now be parsed down. Let me know where you are at so we don't clash. Regards Cinderella157 ( talk) 09:41, 27 May 2017 (UTC)
Hi AR, added some analysis. Sure that Williams will have something to add. Regards Cinderella157 ( talk) 13:10, 27 May 2017 (UTC)
This is getting a little cluttered. McCarthy tells the story in detail and the two missionaries are part of that tale - as is what McAuley is telling. Would you like to look at it or would you rather I did? I must admit that I was being a little lazy at that time of night in not expandingg NcCarthy's account. Cinderella157 ( talk) 07:34, 28 May 2017 (UTC)
Hi, Btphelps, I have some concerns with these recent edits: [1] and [2].
First edit
Second edit
Regards, Cinderella157 ( talk) 12:08, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
PS: per: the Japanese chose to land troops on the northern coast of New Guinea at Buna-Gona
, it is the northern coast of the territory of Papua on the island of New Guinea - ie Papua, not New Guinea is more consistent with how it is described elsewhere in the article (particularly the lead.
Cinderella157 (
talk) 03:17, 23 December 2021 (UTC)
PS: B Coy departed Illolo 7 July to Uberi. It then departed Uberi 8 July. It generally reported that they departed [along the track] on 8 July. For more details, see edits of 29 Dec 21. Cinderella157 ( talk) 09:45, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
Edits have been reverted because of these concerns. Cinderella157 ( talk) 09:57, 29 December 2021 (UTC)