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So at end of August "Submission declined" with "This submission appears to read more like an advertisement...". Did an edit of draft. Here are two possible improvements that come to mind:
1) shorten "educate, develop and celebrate" to "educate, and develop" (is "celebrate" too advert-y?)
2) add words about recent collaboration with Disney (GFS alumni short: Yo Recuerdo/ I Remember.)
Deadline.com ref (I've got other things to-do so may NOT have time for another edit of draft today)
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So at end of August "Submission declined" with "This submission appears to read more like an advertisement...". Did an edit of draft. Here are two possible improvements that come to mind:
1) shorten "educate, develop and celebrate" to "educate, and develop" (is "celebrate" too advert-y?)
2) add words about recent collaboration with Disney (GFS alumni short: Yo Recuerdo/ I Remember.)
Deadline.com ref (I've got other things to-do so may NOT have time for another edit of draft today)
EarthFurst (
talk)
20:36, 15 October 2023 (UTC)reply