Submission declined on 17 February 2024 by
AirshipJungleman29 (
talk).
Where to get help
How to improve a draft
You can also browse Wikipedia:Featured articles and Wikipedia:Good articles to find examples of Wikipedia's best writing on topics similar to your proposed article. Improving your odds of a speedy review To improve your odds of a faster review, tag your draft with relevant WikiProject tags using the button below. This will let reviewers know a new draft has been submitted in their area of interest. For instance, if you wrote about a female astronomer, you would want to add the Biography, Astronomy, and Women scientists tags. Editor resources
| ![]() |
Submission declined on 12 February 2024 by
Dan arndt (
talk). This draft's references do not show that the subject
qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:
This submission is not adequately supported by
reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be
verified. If you need help with referencing, please see
Referencing for beginners and
Citing sources. Declined by
Dan arndt 5 months ago. | ![]() |
The Cyrus family tree, which (relevant part) starts with Achaemenes and ends at Xerxes I, who was in the house of Cyrus due to Atossa, as His father Darius The Great Deposed Bardiya(Smerdis or possibly an imposter named Gaumata [*]). This Family tree is part of the Achaemenid family tree which starts to get out of sync afterwards and eventually ends due to Alexander The Great's Conquering Of Persia. [1] [2]
Achaemenes King of Persia
[*] 705–675 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
Teispes King of Persia 675–640 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
Cyrus I King of Persia 640–600 |
Ariaramnes Prince
[*] | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
Cambyses I King of Persia 600–559 | Arukku |
Arsames Prince
[*] | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
Cyrus II the Great King of Persia 559–530/28 |
Hystaspes Prince
[*] |
Pharnaces I satrap of Phrygia Pharnacid dynasty |
Megabates military leader | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
Artystone Princess | Smerdis (Bardiya) |
Cambyses II King of Persia 530–522 |
Atossa Princess |
Darius I the Great King of Persia 522–486 |
Artaphernes I general satrap of Lydia |
Artabanus counselor |
Megabazus general | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
Parmys | (by daughter of
Gobryas) Ariabignes admiral | (by Atossa) Masistes satrap of Bactria | (by Atossa) Xerxes I the Great King of Persia 485–465 | (by Atossa) Achaemenes satrap of Egypt | (by Artystone) Artazostre married Mardonius | (by Parmys) Ariomardus |
Artaphernes II general satrap of Lydia |
Artyphius commander | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
Submission declined on 17 February 2024 by
AirshipJungleman29 (
talk). This draft's references do not show that the subject
qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:
Where to get help
How to improve a draft
You can also browse Wikipedia:Featured articles and Wikipedia:Good articles to find examples of Wikipedia's best writing on topics similar to your proposed article. Improving your odds of a speedy review To improve your odds of a faster review, tag your draft with relevant WikiProject tags using the button below. This will let reviewers know a new draft has been submitted in their area of interest. For instance, if you wrote about a female astronomer, you would want to add the Biography, Astronomy, and Women scientists tags. Editor resources
| ![]() |
Submission declined on 12 February 2024 by
Dan arndt (
talk). This draft's references do not show that the subject
qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:
This submission is not adequately supported by
reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be
verified. If you need help with referencing, please see
Referencing for beginners and
Citing sources. Declined by
Dan arndt 5 months ago. | ![]() |
The Cyrus family tree, which (relevant part) starts with Achaemenes and ends at Xerxes I, who was in the house of Cyrus due to Atossa, as His father Darius The Great Deposed Bardiya(Smerdis or possibly an imposter named Gaumata [*]). This Family tree is part of the Achaemenid family tree which starts to get out of sync afterwards and eventually ends due to Alexander The Great's Conquering Of Persia. [1] [2]
Achaemenes King of Persia
[*] 705–675 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
Teispes King of Persia 675–640 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
Cyrus I King of Persia 640–600 |
Ariaramnes Prince
[*] | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
Cambyses I King of Persia 600–559 | Arukku |
Arsames Prince
[*] | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
Cyrus II the Great King of Persia 559–530/28 |
Hystaspes Prince
[*] |
Pharnaces I satrap of Phrygia Pharnacid dynasty |
Megabates military leader | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
Artystone Princess | Smerdis (Bardiya) |
Cambyses II King of Persia 530–522 |
Atossa Princess |
Darius I the Great King of Persia 522–486 |
Artaphernes I general satrap of Lydia |
Artabanus counselor |
Megabazus general | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
Parmys | (by daughter of
Gobryas) Ariabignes admiral | (by Atossa) Masistes satrap of Bactria | (by Atossa) Xerxes I the Great King of Persia 485–465 | (by Atossa) Achaemenes satrap of Egypt | (by Artystone) Artazostre married Mardonius | (by Parmys) Ariomardus |
Artaphernes II general satrap of Lydia |
Artyphius commander | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
-
in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
-
reliable
-
secondary
-
independent of the subject
Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.