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2017 AFL Rising Star ( | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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This is my fourth instalment in a campaign to increase the number of Australian Football League FLs (there have been three successful promotions since August 2018). The AFL Rising Star is a prestigious annual award presented to a standout young player in the league. I hope that if this attains featured status, it can be replicated across a lot more lists across the project. Allied45 ( talk) 09:32, 6 February 2019 (UTC) reply
The club that garnered the most individual nominations this season was Carlton with five players nominated for the award across the season.(emphasis mine) One of the bolded parts could be cut without losing any information.
Additionally Brisbane Lions player Alex Witherden, who received a nomination in round 17, was subsequently nominated for the award again in the 2018 season–becoming the eleventh player to ever be nominated twice for a Rising Star award.Is 'additionally' necessary? Either 'subsequently' or 'again' could also be cut. 'eleventh player ever to be' seems a more natural phrase than 'eleventh player to ever be', but that might just be personal preference.
Andrew McGrath, winner of the AFL Rising Star in 2017Why not 2017 winner Andrew McGrath or Andrew McGrath, 2017 winner?
Alex Witherden, who received a nomination in round 17, was also nominated for the award again in the 2018 season.Cut 'also' or 'again'.
table of nomineesThe header immediately above says nominations; it's clear that the list is a list of nominees without the need for a subheader. Same with 'table of voting' below, but that one is tricky to eliminate as there's no other clear place for the citation.
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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot ( talk) 00:25, 15 March 2019 (UTC) [1]. reply
2017 AFL Rising Star ( | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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This is my fourth instalment in a campaign to increase the number of Australian Football League FLs (there have been three successful promotions since August 2018). The AFL Rising Star is a prestigious annual award presented to a standout young player in the league. I hope that if this attains featured status, it can be replicated across a lot more lists across the project. Allied45 ( talk) 09:32, 6 February 2019 (UTC) reply
The club that garnered the most individual nominations this season was Carlton with five players nominated for the award across the season.(emphasis mine) One of the bolded parts could be cut without losing any information.
Additionally Brisbane Lions player Alex Witherden, who received a nomination in round 17, was subsequently nominated for the award again in the 2018 season–becoming the eleventh player to ever be nominated twice for a Rising Star award.Is 'additionally' necessary? Either 'subsequently' or 'again' could also be cut. 'eleventh player ever to be' seems a more natural phrase than 'eleventh player to ever be', but that might just be personal preference.
Andrew McGrath, winner of the AFL Rising Star in 2017Why not 2017 winner Andrew McGrath or Andrew McGrath, 2017 winner?
Alex Witherden, who received a nomination in round 17, was also nominated for the award again in the 2018 season.Cut 'also' or 'again'.
table of nomineesThe header immediately above says nominations; it's clear that the list is a list of nominees without the need for a subheader. Same with 'table of voting' below, but that one is tricky to eliminate as there's no other clear place for the citation.
Source review passed; promoting. --
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