I am nominating this article for A-Class review. —
Ed!
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20:08, 1 January 2012 (UTC)
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Oppose at this time, regrettably. I'm seeing a fair amount of awkwardness in the prose - as a quick example, "Thomas Jerome Hudner Jr. was born 31 August 1924 in Fall River, Massachusetts his father, Thomas Hudner Sr. was a businessman of Irish descent who ran a chain of grocery stores, Hudner's Markets" is missing either addition words or punctuation. If this article is thoroughly copy-edited I'd be happy to revisit.
Nikkimaria (
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02:41, 4 January 2012 (UTC)
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I am nominating this article for A-Class review. —
Ed!
(talk)
20:08, 1 January 2012 (UTC)
reply
Oppose at this time, regrettably. I'm seeing a fair amount of awkwardness in the prose - as a quick example, "Thomas Jerome Hudner Jr. was born 31 August 1924 in Fall River, Massachusetts his father, Thomas Hudner Sr. was a businessman of Irish descent who ran a chain of grocery stores, Hudner's Markets" is missing either addition words or punctuation. If this article is thoroughly copy-edited I'd be happy to revisit.
Nikkimaria (
talk)
02:41, 4 January 2012 (UTC)
reply