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Thank you for reviewing my work. I am now learning how to edit the document most especially how to make citations and references. Once I understand how to do it things will be find.
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talk!) 15:36, 28 December 2013 (UTC)Is there a change in policy? Unless there is (and I might have very well missed it), if there's an old version and a much better new version, are we not going with the new version and marking/deleting the old as a Duplicate rather than asking editors to move everything back to an old draft? MatthewVanitas ( talk) 20:48, 18 December 2013 (UTC)
Hi, you declined Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Dorle Jarmel Soria for not establishing notability, but the article was then copied to the mainspace, identical in every way as far as I can tell. Would you stand by your not enough notability established statement? Thanks in advance, have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year, Mat ty. 007 12:40, 22 December 2013 (UTC)
First of all: thanks a lot for reviewing the article! It's my first Wikipedia article, so I'm thankful about any comments. I have just changed two of the references so that they link not to blogs, but to more credible sources.
A disclaimer: The Starling Framework is (as you sure have noticed) my own framework; it has a huge and active community, and thousands of developers are using it. Thus, I thought it was time it joined the list of other gaming frameworks that are described on Wikipedia (many of which have a smaller developer base). However, I tried to write the article as objective and general as possible. I hope I succeeded with that?
There is a book about Starling available, which was published by O'Reilly; it is listed in the article and should be a credible source. The other references point to websites that contain the specific information that is mentioned in the text. You won't find any articles about Starling in the Washington Post! ;-)
Thanks in advance for reviewing the referencing changes I just made! Let me know if you have any other ideas or suggestions that could lead to the publication of the article.
-- PrimaryFeather ( talk) 07:39, 19 December 2013 (UTC)
Hi APerson,
I asked on the IRC channel on what the expectations may be in order to get the Velocite Bikes article included. They gave me some useful insights, with the last one being to actually ask you as to what you expected to see, or not see for that matter, in order to include Velocite Bikes article.
I would greatly appreciate your specific feedback on what it is that I can do to improve my article.
Thanks,
Victor — Preceding unsigned comment added by Vmajor ( talk • contribs) 03:54, 23 December 2013 (UTC)
Was editing Bardia Rahim while you declined it, seconds ago as it is open in my sandbox. Please read notes first. Subject meets notability golden rule and is to be opened to be edited and in discussion. Please undo so it may be worked on Osrius ( talk) 04:38, 23 December 2013 (UTC)
I read your explanation on the talk page, I understand it and I want you to know I am reporting another user not you, just in case you were confused. However, if you did not send an explanation I would have included you. I would refrain from such verbiage as it seemed like your pointing fingers at people and talking in all caps when read. Please understand I mean well and I thank you for the direction. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Osrius ( talk • contribs) 23:52, 23 December 2013 (UTC)
I hope this reaches you with the right references: /info/en/?search=Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Carbone_Smolan_Agency
Thank you for taking the time to read and make comments on my entry for the Carbone Smolan Agency. I will go back and do as you suggest, specifically, remove the agency's website and any bold peacock language that cannot be substantiated. When I wrote the NYC is the epicenter of design, I cited the number of designers registered with the leading guild of Graphic Design, the AIGA. NY, I offered, has more members than the combined total of LA and Chicago. I thought that was "enough" to back up that comment but I will see if I can find some other reference and note it and add a footnote. If I cannot, I will remove it.
Your comments were helpful. But you only mentioned those two small issues. Are there any other things that stand out that make this entry unacceptable? I was more afraid you guys might ask me to back off all the footnote references — too much. But I figured better err towards more third party substantiation than not. Again, thank you for the time you took reading this and offering some suggestions. I have been waiting anxiously to see what an editor thought of this. I feel that I am very close.
If this helps, here is your comment to me for easy reference: "Comment: While this is a very good article, there are just a few issues that should be cleared up before creation of this article; namely, the slight -y feel, phrases like "New York is widely regarded as the epicenter of American design" (uncited) and the link to the company's website at the end (which sort of smacks of an advertisement). After those have been fixed, please re-submit the article. APerson (talk!) 17:03, 28 December 2013 (UTC)" Porterwritewiki ( talk) 22:58, 29 December 2013 (UTC)Porterwritewiki
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Thank you for reviewing the TINA.org article. If I eliminated all the content that is attributed only to TINA.org, would that suffice? I believe that all the other sources cited are solid, journalistic sources as defined by your guidelines. Any guidance is greatly appreciated. RayPellecchia ( talk) 17:44, 6 January 2014 (UTC)
Edits like this aren't necessary, because if no page to be edited is specified, the template assumes it's the page that goes with the talk page the request is on, which is correct in this case. Jackmcbarn ( talk) 18:55, 9 January 2014 (UTC)
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Thank you for the review of my article GAL22V10. I've gone back and added more sources including a textbook I recently got access to and multiple materials from college curricula as citations. Is it acceptable in its new state, or am I missing the mark with where I should be proceeding with notability? I assume that the Lattice Semiconductor sources are acceptable under WP:SELFPUB. Am I correct there as well? Thanks! Rarkenin ( talk) 03:12, 12 January 2014 (UTC)
Thank you for the comments and for the review of the article. It is now revised, hopefully in accord with the comments and the review, overseas friend also helped with the style and contents. The article was shortened by 25 %, all non-English references except one, essential but without an English equivalent, were removed, together with the links to other language Wikipedias and Slovenian text. 6 new references were added. May I ask for your opinion? AndyKamy ( talk) 09:24, 14 January 2014 (UTC)
It has 7 declines. I think they are notable but prior submissions have been promotional and properly declined. I'll be working with them to make a proper submission with a conflict of interest. I was wondering if after I take a run at it if I could persuade you to take a fresh look at it. CorporateM ( Talk) 23:14, 16 January 2014 (UTC)
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Hi there,
Thanks for reviewing the Kloq Band page. Having read your comments I have added a few more references on top of the ones already there...
Regarding Empirion, they have their own Wikipedia page. They also features on Prodigy's 'Firestarter' single as a remix. I fail to see what else I can find as the band were notable and have been for years (since 1993).
Please advise with anything else that can be done to get this added as soon as possible.
Thank you very much in advance ! -- Woody286786 ( talk)>
Can you change your rationale? I'm going to change my votes soon; I'll give you updates. -- George Ho ( talk) 04:29, 19 January 2014 (UTC)
Hi,
I'm unclear exactly on what parts of the guidelines in WP:MANOTE this article is not meeting. The subject himself is noted in the article as the subject of several magazine articles (in English as well as other languages), and has held a distinctive position as a Hong Kong police force instructor. The art he teaches also meets the criteria under the guidelines, as it maintains international branches and is described in articles featuring Wan Kam Leung as well as other instructors. This info is from the English sources provided. The issue noted by the first reviewer seems to be with the Chinese sources; should I pare down the information taken from the Chinese sources and reassess the adherence to the notability guidelines then, using only English sources? Thanks for your help! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Echirlin ( talk • contribs) 19:52, 24 January 2014 (UTC)
But y... Asrarbaigs ( talk) 19:28, 28 January 2014 (UTC)
... because your contribution does not include one or more citations to reliable sources.
Thanks for your message (yes, I am new) - but the previous edits likewise had not provided proper cited references - besides, it is charged with an agenda throughout which cannot be substantiated, hence my edits. Bouncing Faces ( talk) 03:42, 29 January 2014 (UTC)
Hi, I am a bit new but was trying to be helpful regarding Textspeak.
A redirect to SMS Messaging seems misleading and prevented interaction with other contributions to "textspeak"
"TextSpeak" applies to a variety of Interests
Is can be SMS, it can also refer to TextSpeak the technology, and it can also be used as a type of slang
"The process of shortening words and adding numbers" and may have nothing to do with SMS at all.
So i removed the redirect, but left it intact for others to continue to add to the page in coming months etc.
best regards :) OemEngr — Preceding unsigned comment added by Oemengr ( talk • contribs) 09:17, 29 January 2014 (UTC)
Thank you, I am unfamiliar with your style, but it seems to follow (at times) APA (I teach that), but in the case of McCarter, the initial should be a capital P (not lower case) and then Kyle should not follow (it is his middle name). On my copy, Fortress Press states Philadelphia, not Minneapolis. It is also Philadelphia on worldcat.org. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dr. Arthur Frederick Ide ( talk • contribs) 13:31, 1 February 2014 (UTC)
My edit ( [1]) should not be classified as vandalism under any measure; and neither was it a test, as I knew what I was doing. 166.137.88.159 ( talk) 04:43, 2 February 2014 (UTC)
The list of things that are claimed to be associated with the purple ribbon is outrageously off. Just to name a few, Child Abuse is a blue ribbon, Drug abuse is red, Homelessness is green, Loss is blue and pink, 9/11 is red white and blue, anti gay bullying is a rainbow. The list goes on of what ribbons stand for the things listed under the purple ribbon, one of the few correct things is Crohn's disease. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.24.70.98 ( talk) 05:01, 2 February 2014 (UTC)
Hi, I have taken note of what you said last time we spoke. Was just wondering if you could take a look once again and tell me if everything is all in order. I have included citations on pretty much everything that needs be. Band member, labels, history, notable content etc. Was also wondering what the next step would be and how long roughly it would take to go live. Thanks for your help — Preceding unsigned comment added by Woody286786 ( talk • contribs) 01:15, 8 February 2014 (UTC)
Also, I have just accidentally deleted my Submission part out and had to resubmit it... I actually resubmitted it 17 days ago when we last spoke and was 611th in the queue.... I am now last again. Is there anyway I could get put forward? Just when I think I'm getting the hang of this. Woody286786
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I've gotten several notifications that you have left me messages on my talk page, but every time I look I don't see anything. I apologize if you gave me notes for correction and it seemed I ignored them. Not sure if it's just me, or if there is an issue with my page? Maybe if you respond here I'll be able to see them?
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I checked Alternative medicine#External links to see how the unicode character works. It doesn't, could you please go back and change the character to File:Asclepius staff.svg? Thanks! -- evrik ( talk) 03:45, 15 February 2014 (UTC)
I take issue with your rejection of Ryan_Van_Winkle.
I have to say that it is no wonder that AfC is backed up if you keep rejecting articles with such flimsy reasoning. Span ( talk) 17:57, 15 February 2014 (UTC)
I have accepted several articles you recently declined:
In the other direction, I nominated an article you accepted Carbone Smolan Agency for AfD as hopelessly promotional--I couldn't see any way to fix it without starting over. I almost sent Japec Jakopin, to AfD for the same reason, but I decided he was notable enough to be worth fixing and cut the irrelevant parts
I consider Institute for New Culture Technologies-t0 very highly promotional -- I am trying to decide what to do with it. As typical for articles on european projects, the style is so opaque that it's hard to figure out what to do. DGG ( talk ) 21:46, 15 February 2014 (UTC)
My apologies that it has taken so long for me to get back to you with a proposed article for Tapad. I'll have it you soon. I've also submitted one for Brilliant Earth at: Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Brilliant_Earth
It's sort of a "feel-good" topic because their whole business is based on ethics, though there is a short snippet of criticism in there.
I saw that the queue is backlogged by 2,500+ submissions. I'm not really sure how fair it is for me to ask if I can skip to the front of the line, but if you do have time to take a look, I'd appreciate it. Meanwhile, if you feel I should wait my turn, that's ok too. ;-) CorporateM ( Talk) 21:37, 21 February 2014 (UTC)
Good Evening APerson, understanding you are very busy, would you please take a look at /info/en/?search=Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Colorvision_International.
I made the adjustmets you suggested. Thank you for your help. D Cocchiarella 01:11, 22 February 2014 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dcocchiarella ( talk • contribs)
Hello. In this edit, you tagged the article with {{ technical}}, to say This article may be too technical for most readers to understand. Unfortunately you didn't comment at the talk page to say why you thought that. This is a perennial issue with mathematics articles -- perhaps most readers do not understand any of them, or even want to do so. Presumably a reader looking for information about Yoneda's lemma is already reasonably prepared mathematically. Are you suggesting that the article is too technical for a reader who, say, already knows what a category is? As it happens I do not think that it is, and am removing the tag. In any event it would help if you were to explain your concerns at the article talk page rather than this "hit-and-run" tagging. Deltahedron ( talk) 18:09, 23 February 2014 (UTC)
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APerson, My first ever article about the Carbone Smolan Agency in New York was accepted by you on January 8 2014. A friend searching for it just told me it was not available. When I looked it up, she was correct. I also had my Sandbox deleted for some unknown reason. When I looked on my talk page there was a lot of talk regarding articles that I had not written and had nothing to do with. Can you explain why the article was later pulled off Wiki (by another reviewer?) and if any of this has to do with the articles that have been attributed to Porterwritewiki (me) but I had nothing to do with? Could my Wiki name have been hacked? If there was a problem with the Carbone Smolan Agency article AFTER you approved it January 8, I was unaware of it. I had not checked back in more than a month. Porterwritewiki ( talk) 19:32, 10 March 2014 (UTC)porterwritewiki Porterwritewiki ( talk) 19:32, 10 March 2014 (UTC)
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Hi. I read your comments on Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Whited00r. It said "Add citations (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners) to secondary reliable sources that are entirely independent of the subject."
But there were references up until the day before you declined it! Somebody named "Happy Attack Dog" deleted the external references. I consider that vandalism.
(Note that I had weeks earlier deleted many references that the original author had written, because the first moderator who declined the article said they were "blogspam.")
Can you suggest a way to get this article approved without waiting another month... and possibly getting vandalized again? Mackerm ( talk) 14:19, 20 March 2014 (UTC)
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Here is the last log report I had from APerson on that article:
03:37, 8 January 2014 APerson (talk | contribs) moved page Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Carbone Smolan Agency to Carbone Smolan Agency (Created via Articles for creation (you can help!) (AFCH beta)) (revert)
Now I cannot find my Wiki history or that article! Porterwritewiki ( talk) 19:37, 10 March 2014 (UTC)porterwritewiki Porterwritewiki ( talk) 19:37, 10 March 2014 (UTC)
Here is my response. If you can offer me ANY advice on how to resubmit this, I welcome it. You have been nothing but kind, fair and honest. I am learning to do this and as a writer for one of the most respected magazines in the field, Communciation Arts, I would like to write more articles on this subject about other studios and people who should be on the Wiki resource list. DGG might not like my writing but CSA is peers with MANY other firms (e.g. Pentgram, Massimo Vignelli, Steve Heller) who are on these pages. I had not checked the article in a while. So, if I can work with you, please let me revise it so it will pass the stink test of being too promotional. There are thousands of for profit organizations on these pages and if you have to tell their story, it is by nature promotional. But I tried very hard to cite many third-party resources to PROVE that it had merit and CSA was worthy. Thank you again,APerson. Porterwritewiki ( talk)porterwritewiki Porterwritewiki ( talk)
Talk History: I just learned that a previously approved article I had written was deleted. First, reading the trail of comments below, I am a person, not a team of editors and I find the suggestion by DGG that I am "I suspect from the name of the contributor and totally inappropriate style that this is the work of many of our not-very-skilled-paid-editors" to be hostile, personal and insulting. I have never written for Wiki and I am a known writer for other magazines that cover graphic design. Every suggestion APerson made to me for change was made. DGG's suggestion that I cited their own ARCHIVE is incorrect. I did cite their book — which was NOT self published — and I used information that told their history. If that should be cut down, so be it.
To be safe, I tried to find any relevant citation in our industry and used it. APerson did not ask me to make fewer citations and all of them are respected (not TRIVIAL) in our industry. Too promotional? It is the brief history of an esteemed FOR PROFIT company that has made a historic impact on this industry and is revered by many of the same people who are featured on this online resource? Please, if someone can guide me on what to remove I will make the effort to do it. I put a lot of time into this and I was certain that this article was superior to ANY of the peer organizations that I was reading on WIKI that are up and acceptable now.
As for "name dropping" (another comment by DGG, that is unkind and inaccurate), the names I cite I also quote and they are people on Wiki who are PEERS of Ken Carbone and Leslie Smolan. The pair were just nominated to the AIGA Hall of Fame, affirming my choice to write this article about this agency. Why write it? Because so many of their peers are on Wiki now and if they are Wiki then Carbone Smolan should be too. I have received no payment from CSA for this but I know them personally (of course) and told them I felt they should be on the encyclopedia if people like Pentagram and Stefan Sagmeister and Steven Heller and Massimo Vignelli were.. These people are competitors and peers. And as for "trivial mentions" in publications, most of these are interviews My first reviewer, APerson, was very helpful and I responded to each of their comments and requests/suggestions for changes.
When you ask the contributors to be polite and appreciative, how do you regard the acid commentary of an editor like DGG? Other Wiki editors deemed the piece worthy of publication. If Wiki is not a place to talk about such companies as Carbone Smolan and other design firms of note, fine. But pull all of them down. But don't call my promotional when I used so many outside references to verify that the CSA group is notable, important and has made a great impact on the graphic design/communication arts profession.
Porterwritewiki (talk)porterwritewikiPorterwritewiki (talk) Carbone Smolan Agency[edit] Carbone Smolan Agency (edit|talk|history|links|watch|logs|views) – (View log · Stats) (Find sources: "Carbone Smolan Agency" – books · scholar · JSTOR · free images) I think the agency is probably notable, but the article is so promotional that it should be started over--it would have to be rewritten very fundamentally to eliminate the personal anecdotes, the quotes from the founders, the list of clients, the list of influences that amounts to name-dropping, the long list of trivial mentions in various publications, and the many references sourced merely to their own archives. I suspect from the name of the contributor and the totally inappropriate style that this is either the work of many of our not-very-skilled paid editors, or of some good faith editor thinking that this sort of writing is acceptable here on the grounds we have so many articles of business concerns that are the work of such editors. It's time to clean the encyclopedia. DGG ( talk ) 05:16, 11 February 2014 (UTC) Note: This debate has been included in the list of New York-related deletion discussions. • Gene93k (talk) 15:33, 11 February 2014 (UTC) Note: This debate has been included in the list of Visual arts-related deletion discussions. • Gene93k (talk) 15:33, 11 February 2014 (UTC) Note: This debate has been included in the list of Advertising-related deletion discussions. • Gene93k (talk) 15:33, 11 February 2014 (UTC) Note: This debate has been included in the list of Business-related deletion discussions. • Gene93k (talk) 15:33, 11 February 2014 (UTC) Strong Keep - Clearly enough articles to show is notable; easy enough to cut down or tag for improvement if we don't have someone available to do it. Jeremy112233 (talk) 03:10, 12 February 2014 (UTC) Strong Keep (as person who accepted it at AfC); I raised questions about the tone on the discussion at my talkpage about it and those were answered to my satisfaction. Notability is definitely met, and although the mentions in the sources can be viewed as trivial, there are a lot of them. Article can be easily improved. APerson (talk!) 20:36, 16 February 2014 (UTC)
Slow-delete or incubate per WP:NOTFORPROMOTION and/or WP:G11. APerson may think the article can be easily fixed, but seems not to have done so. APerson should never have accepted the article for creation in the first place: NOTFORPROMOTION seems to disallow such articles. There's an unreasonable backlog of numerous articles tagged as promotional, and it's safe to assume the backlog is steadily growing. Unless someone fixes the article before this AfD finishes, let's cut down the backlog by simply deleting this article. If an unbiased editor really cares, they can recreate it later. —Unforgettableid (talk) 00:01, 20 February 2014 (UTC)Dear APerson,
I do not understand why my article on Tito Canepa was not accepted. Can you please explain so I can make whatever changes are necessary?
Thanks, Leezk ( talk) 16:49, 21 March 2014 (UTC)
Some phrases in this submission which I think violate this guideline include "his work enjoyed a new wave of appreciation" (rather vague), "he is the leading modernist painter of the US Dominican dispora" (probably fails WP:PEACOCK; needs a reference), and "In 1996 it was only natural that..." (check MOS:OPED).
Dear Aperson,
The banners at the top and bottom of the article warn of bare URLs and the dearth of categories. I have fixed both issues. Is it therefore possible for you to remove the banners?
Tito Canepa's son owns the paintings and photos of them which he would like to have included in the article. I am puzzled by the different size requirements for "non-free content, fair use". I see that for common cover art the horizontal and vertical dimension of an image should not surpass 250 px and 400 px respectively. The total pixels should not surpass 100,000. There seems to be a different resolution and size guideline for thumbnail inline images. Can he be in touch with you for guidance in these issues?
I appreciate all your help in presenting this Wikipedia article in the most elegant and presentable format.
Thanks so much!
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Firstly, thank you for reviewing my article Isle of Man Companies Act 2006.
This is my first submission to Wikipedia, hopefully I will follow it up with additional articles about the other Isle of Man Companies Acts in due course.
I am going to try to improve the Article as you have suggested by adding more references which demonstrate notability.
In the meantime, please do let me know if you have any other specific suggestions.
thanks again Martin — Preceding unsigned comment added by Middletonkatz ( talk • contribs) 10:17, 22 March 2014 (UTC)
There have been more than 10000...), then by all means put that in the submission and cite that article!
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Hello. I accidentally created a general hospital character as days of our lives. So can u please delete this page:- /info/en/?search=Carlos_Rivera_%28Days_of_Our_Lives%29 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Princessruby ( talk • contribs) 05:09, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
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U suck — Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.122.0.206 ( talk) 17:38, 3 May 2014 (UTC)
Hello,
Why is my article being considered for deletion? Please advice and if possible do give me more time to improve my article. /info/en/?search=Carlos_Rivera_(General_Hospital) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Princessruby ( talk • contribs) 14:51, 27 April 2014 (UTC)
Hello APerson,
I have a question regarding the creation of this article: /info/en/?search=Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Blimp_Rock
Will a greater quantity of secondary, reliable citations allow this article to be accepted? If so, what number of citations might you suggest?
Thanks for your time, Pdemakos ( talk) 13:48, 15 May 2014 (UTC)
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Dear APerson, Thank you for your review of my article on media management. You said that the content was not enough for an article of its own. So my question is, what has to be included to become an article of its own? I am not happy with the solution to include my text into the article media communication, because media management is something quite different. I would like to improve my text for media management and would appriciate some advices. Thank you a lot in advance! Mysterious-times Mysterious-times ( talk) 12:25, 2 June 2014 (UTC)
Thank you for helping make Wikipedia a relevant source of information. I am not sure I found your comments unless it regards the presence of Wikipedia articles referenced when there should not be. So, my first submission had not enough references and the second submissions included inappropriate references. After reading the guidelines I realized that there were too many insignificant references in my article and it was my intention to clean it up. My apologies for not doing it quickly enough and wasting your time. I will remove all the Wikipedia links plus the links where she is barely mentioned. I will add a section about they Young Dubliners because I discovered she was a founding member of that group in the late 80's. I'd like not to waste your time, can you let me know please if I am in the right direction. Regards,
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{{ admin help}} Would it be possible for an admin to add the bot I'm operating which just got approved for trial to the AWB checkpage? Thanks! APerson ( talk!) 19:57, 8 June 2014 (UTC)
Thank you for reviewing my AfC reviews. I'm concerned, however, because you put your comments in the bot-controlled section of the page. Won't these reviews be over-written the next time it adds more to the list? You might move your reviews to the bottom with the other reviews. Chris Troutman ( talk) 17:49, 12 June 2014 (UTC)
Answer me this question, APerson. In this day and age, can we afford to turn a blind eye to torture, persecution and murder. What does Wikipedia want to tell the readers of Putin's page. That he is an outdoors guy, that he can sing, that he rides horses. How can this be put under public image and not the fate of these people. There are enough reliable sources to prove these monstrous events. How can Vladimir Putin not have one Controversy section. His power, KGB membership and mental capacity has brought the deaths of numerous figures who fought for democracy in the former Soviet Union, which now looks like the Former Soviet Union is going to be The Current Soviet union. How can we live with ourselves knowing that we saved a page which misinforms readers. I implore you to read the information that you reverted.
APerson if you are really a person, you will understand why this information needs to be added to his article. Not as a form of propaganda. Because it isn't that. It's facts. Putin's current page is a farce. Please let Wikipedia be a reliable source. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Radiohist ( talk • contribs) 18:59, 12 June 2014 (UTC)
Hello.
You recently rejected my article on Angel Propps. I'm sorry, I'm a little confused as to what I need to do to cite sources. She has over 100 titles in print and won several awards. Do I need to place the entire body of her work into the article? Also her teaching schedule spans across the years and she has a hectic schedule still. Do I need to cite those sources as well? What exactly separates notable from non-notables? I'm not asking to be huffy, I am just trying to ensure that I get this done properly. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ovationaangel ( talk • contribs) 18:34, 13 June 2014 (UTC)
One of the basic bars an article like this is going to have to meet is notability, which is defined under Wikipedia as being shown by coverage in arm's-length, reliable sources. These are usually things such as newspaper articles and magazine articles, and excludes the sort of "reprinted press releases" common to some local business rags--those sources must be independent and reliable.(from here) So, all you need to do is go and find some sources about Angel Propps (which are about her: this specifically excludes tangential mentions) and cite them in the article, while demonstrating that she is notable. The specific guideline that's relevant here is WP:NAUTHOR. If one or more of the criteria listed there are met, it means that she's
likely to be notable(from the intro to the criteria). APerson ( talk!) 18:49, 13 June 2014 (UTC)
Hello Again APerson.
Would you check this article out and tell me if I have it on the correct place so that is cued for review. You may remember this story and that you approved it about Jan 7 but it was pulled down in late Feb. In late May I edited it heavily, removing some of the concerns. It MIGHT have too many sources but I did remove many of the quotes attributed to the subjects, Ken Carbone and partner Leslie Smolan. Anyway, I am new to this and I am not certain I have placed it back in the appropriate area. I will sign off here then sign back on with a link to the location of it now. porterwritewiki Porterwritewiki ( talk) 18:48, 16 June 2014 (UTC)
The link to the draft today is: /info/en/?search=User:Porterwritewiki/Carbone_Smolan_Agency Porterwritewiki ( talk) 18:50, 16 June 2014 (UTC)
You rejected my submission for a page for the upcoming film "Found Footage 3D" with only a link to "What Wikipedia is not". That covers a very broad range of topics. Can you please be more specific? Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 99.57.128.186 ( talk) 06:47, 18 June 2014 (UTC)
The submission Northwest Conference Baseball History has been rejected twice on the basis of requiring more reliable, independent sources. Because these archives stretch back to the late 1980's, few (sometimes just single) sources exist to reference the data and text that comprise in the wiki page submission. Because of these limitations, looks like I'm stuck (dead end).
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Thank you. What should I do next--just wait? I am new to DYK. Btw for Beverly Hills 9/11 Memorial Garden, I was told I should do a QPQ, but I don't know how to do them. Are you able to help please? Zigzig20s ( talk) 04:56, 20 June 2014 (UTC)
{{ Resolved}} I disagree with your assessment of the noteworthiness of Donadea. It is every bit as noteworthy as any other civil parish in Ireland. I know of no other article for a civil parish that has been refused. Many, like Kilshanny, have even fewer merits than Donadea. Even if it was not notable, it is essential to the building up of a comprehensive schema for parishes and baronies in the county such as has been developed for County Clare. Please revisit your decision. Laurel Lodged ( talk) 21:37, 21 June 2014 (UTC)
[l]egally recognized, populated places are presumed to be notable.Therefore, as soon as there are sources which prove this, the submission is definitely going to be accepted. APerson ( talk!) 01:47, 22 June 2014 (UTC)
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Hi APerson! Thanks for reviewing this article. I can see a couple places where I might tone down language that appears in the independent sources, but there's not a whole lot that looks unencyclopedic. Can you tell me what parts you think should be removed? I hope to copyedit and add more sources very soon. You might also compare Anyvan, Shiply, and UShip, which are all in the same category. (Feel free to tone down any ad language in any of those articles as well!) Thank you! Frieda Beamy ( talk) 00:20, 28 June 2014 (UTC)
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Hello, my page submission has been declined for "lacking notability" when I have 10 times the notability listed of current peers of my subject that do have published pages (I have multiple independent published book and magazine articles referenced- while others have one or two). Editors in the live chat have told me I have plenty of notability for publication or posting, but still I am declined and given little to no guidance on making changes that will correct the page for posting. Please help! Thank you- ADDED- No respose to my question? Response was given to the person below mine? Please advise. Hhrfan ( talk) 00:01, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
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Hi ! You put on relief the fact that there is two submissions for the same page. However, for the first submission, you told me that there was a lack of external links in english and blocked the edition of it, so I created a second draft with, this time, several external links. This page is the exact copy of the french one... so I really don't understand why I encoutered so many issues to publish a page which is the exact copy of a pre-existent page on the French Wikipédia. Look at our website, there is nothing false or wrong with thoses submissions.. So, I can delete the first submission and keep this one for another review ? BeastieJim ( talk) 10:40, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
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Thank you for reviewing my work. I am now learning how to edit the document most especially how to make citations and references. Once I understand how to do it things will be find.
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Hi, you declined Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Dorle Jarmel Soria for not establishing notability, but the article was then copied to the mainspace, identical in every way as far as I can tell. Would you stand by your not enough notability established statement? Thanks in advance, have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year, Mat ty. 007 12:40, 22 December 2013 (UTC)
First of all: thanks a lot for reviewing the article! It's my first Wikipedia article, so I'm thankful about any comments. I have just changed two of the references so that they link not to blogs, but to more credible sources.
A disclaimer: The Starling Framework is (as you sure have noticed) my own framework; it has a huge and active community, and thousands of developers are using it. Thus, I thought it was time it joined the list of other gaming frameworks that are described on Wikipedia (many of which have a smaller developer base). However, I tried to write the article as objective and general as possible. I hope I succeeded with that?
There is a book about Starling available, which was published by O'Reilly; it is listed in the article and should be a credible source. The other references point to websites that contain the specific information that is mentioned in the text. You won't find any articles about Starling in the Washington Post! ;-)
Thanks in advance for reviewing the referencing changes I just made! Let me know if you have any other ideas or suggestions that could lead to the publication of the article.
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Hi APerson,
I asked on the IRC channel on what the expectations may be in order to get the Velocite Bikes article included. They gave me some useful insights, with the last one being to actually ask you as to what you expected to see, or not see for that matter, in order to include Velocite Bikes article.
I would greatly appreciate your specific feedback on what it is that I can do to improve my article.
Thanks,
Victor — Preceding unsigned comment added by Vmajor ( talk • contribs) 03:54, 23 December 2013 (UTC)
Was editing Bardia Rahim while you declined it, seconds ago as it is open in my sandbox. Please read notes first. Subject meets notability golden rule and is to be opened to be edited and in discussion. Please undo so it may be worked on Osrius ( talk) 04:38, 23 December 2013 (UTC)
I read your explanation on the talk page, I understand it and I want you to know I am reporting another user not you, just in case you were confused. However, if you did not send an explanation I would have included you. I would refrain from such verbiage as it seemed like your pointing fingers at people and talking in all caps when read. Please understand I mean well and I thank you for the direction. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Osrius ( talk • contribs) 23:52, 23 December 2013 (UTC)
I hope this reaches you with the right references: /info/en/?search=Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Carbone_Smolan_Agency
Thank you for taking the time to read and make comments on my entry for the Carbone Smolan Agency. I will go back and do as you suggest, specifically, remove the agency's website and any bold peacock language that cannot be substantiated. When I wrote the NYC is the epicenter of design, I cited the number of designers registered with the leading guild of Graphic Design, the AIGA. NY, I offered, has more members than the combined total of LA and Chicago. I thought that was "enough" to back up that comment but I will see if I can find some other reference and note it and add a footnote. If I cannot, I will remove it.
Your comments were helpful. But you only mentioned those two small issues. Are there any other things that stand out that make this entry unacceptable? I was more afraid you guys might ask me to back off all the footnote references — too much. But I figured better err towards more third party substantiation than not. Again, thank you for the time you took reading this and offering some suggestions. I have been waiting anxiously to see what an editor thought of this. I feel that I am very close.
If this helps, here is your comment to me for easy reference: "Comment: While this is a very good article, there are just a few issues that should be cleared up before creation of this article; namely, the slight -y feel, phrases like "New York is widely regarded as the epicenter of American design" (uncited) and the link to the company's website at the end (which sort of smacks of an advertisement). After those have been fixed, please re-submit the article. APerson (talk!) 17:03, 28 December 2013 (UTC)" Porterwritewiki ( talk) 22:58, 29 December 2013 (UTC)Porterwritewiki
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Citation Style 1. I'll fix the citations now. The article looks pretty good now.
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Thank you for reviewing the TINA.org article. If I eliminated all the content that is attributed only to TINA.org, would that suffice? I believe that all the other sources cited are solid, journalistic sources as defined by your guidelines. Any guidance is greatly appreciated. RayPellecchia ( talk) 17:44, 6 January 2014 (UTC)
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Thank you for the review of my article GAL22V10. I've gone back and added more sources including a textbook I recently got access to and multiple materials from college curricula as citations. Is it acceptable in its new state, or am I missing the mark with where I should be proceeding with notability? I assume that the Lattice Semiconductor sources are acceptable under WP:SELFPUB. Am I correct there as well? Thanks! Rarkenin ( talk) 03:12, 12 January 2014 (UTC)
Thank you for the comments and for the review of the article. It is now revised, hopefully in accord with the comments and the review, overseas friend also helped with the style and contents. The article was shortened by 25 %, all non-English references except one, essential but without an English equivalent, were removed, together with the links to other language Wikipedias and Slovenian text. 6 new references were added. May I ask for your opinion? AndyKamy ( talk) 09:24, 14 January 2014 (UTC)
It has 7 declines. I think they are notable but prior submissions have been promotional and properly declined. I'll be working with them to make a proper submission with a conflict of interest. I was wondering if after I take a run at it if I could persuade you to take a fresh look at it. CorporateM ( Talk) 23:14, 16 January 2014 (UTC)
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Hi there,
Thanks for reviewing the Kloq Band page. Having read your comments I have added a few more references on top of the ones already there...
Regarding Empirion, they have their own Wikipedia page. They also features on Prodigy's 'Firestarter' single as a remix. I fail to see what else I can find as the band were notable and have been for years (since 1993).
Please advise with anything else that can be done to get this added as soon as possible.
Thank you very much in advance ! -- Woody286786 ( talk)>
Can you change your rationale? I'm going to change my votes soon; I'll give you updates. -- George Ho ( talk) 04:29, 19 January 2014 (UTC)
Hi,
I'm unclear exactly on what parts of the guidelines in WP:MANOTE this article is not meeting. The subject himself is noted in the article as the subject of several magazine articles (in English as well as other languages), and has held a distinctive position as a Hong Kong police force instructor. The art he teaches also meets the criteria under the guidelines, as it maintains international branches and is described in articles featuring Wan Kam Leung as well as other instructors. This info is from the English sources provided. The issue noted by the first reviewer seems to be with the Chinese sources; should I pare down the information taken from the Chinese sources and reassess the adherence to the notability guidelines then, using only English sources? Thanks for your help! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Echirlin ( talk • contribs) 19:52, 24 January 2014 (UTC)
But y... Asrarbaigs ( talk) 19:28, 28 January 2014 (UTC)
... because your contribution does not include one or more citations to reliable sources.
Thanks for your message (yes, I am new) - but the previous edits likewise had not provided proper cited references - besides, it is charged with an agenda throughout which cannot be substantiated, hence my edits. Bouncing Faces ( talk) 03:42, 29 January 2014 (UTC)
Hi, I am a bit new but was trying to be helpful regarding Textspeak.
A redirect to SMS Messaging seems misleading and prevented interaction with other contributions to "textspeak"
"TextSpeak" applies to a variety of Interests
Is can be SMS, it can also refer to TextSpeak the technology, and it can also be used as a type of slang
"The process of shortening words and adding numbers" and may have nothing to do with SMS at all.
So i removed the redirect, but left it intact for others to continue to add to the page in coming months etc.
best regards :) OemEngr — Preceding unsigned comment added by Oemengr ( talk • contribs) 09:17, 29 January 2014 (UTC)
Thank you, I am unfamiliar with your style, but it seems to follow (at times) APA (I teach that), but in the case of McCarter, the initial should be a capital P (not lower case) and then Kyle should not follow (it is his middle name). On my copy, Fortress Press states Philadelphia, not Minneapolis. It is also Philadelphia on worldcat.org. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dr. Arthur Frederick Ide ( talk • contribs) 13:31, 1 February 2014 (UTC)
My edit ( [1]) should not be classified as vandalism under any measure; and neither was it a test, as I knew what I was doing. 166.137.88.159 ( talk) 04:43, 2 February 2014 (UTC)
The list of things that are claimed to be associated with the purple ribbon is outrageously off. Just to name a few, Child Abuse is a blue ribbon, Drug abuse is red, Homelessness is green, Loss is blue and pink, 9/11 is red white and blue, anti gay bullying is a rainbow. The list goes on of what ribbons stand for the things listed under the purple ribbon, one of the few correct things is Crohn's disease. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.24.70.98 ( talk) 05:01, 2 February 2014 (UTC)
Hi, I have taken note of what you said last time we spoke. Was just wondering if you could take a look once again and tell me if everything is all in order. I have included citations on pretty much everything that needs be. Band member, labels, history, notable content etc. Was also wondering what the next step would be and how long roughly it would take to go live. Thanks for your help — Preceding unsigned comment added by Woody286786 ( talk • contribs) 01:15, 8 February 2014 (UTC)
Also, I have just accidentally deleted my Submission part out and had to resubmit it... I actually resubmitted it 17 days ago when we last spoke and was 611th in the queue.... I am now last again. Is there anyway I could get put forward? Just when I think I'm getting the hang of this. Woody286786
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I've gotten several notifications that you have left me messages on my talk page, but every time I look I don't see anything. I apologize if you gave me notes for correction and it seemed I ignored them. Not sure if it's just me, or if there is an issue with my page? Maybe if you respond here I'll be able to see them?
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I checked Alternative medicine#External links to see how the unicode character works. It doesn't, could you please go back and change the character to File:Asclepius staff.svg? Thanks! -- evrik ( talk) 03:45, 15 February 2014 (UTC)
I take issue with your rejection of Ryan_Van_Winkle.
I have to say that it is no wonder that AfC is backed up if you keep rejecting articles with such flimsy reasoning. Span ( talk) 17:57, 15 February 2014 (UTC)
I have accepted several articles you recently declined:
In the other direction, I nominated an article you accepted Carbone Smolan Agency for AfD as hopelessly promotional--I couldn't see any way to fix it without starting over. I almost sent Japec Jakopin, to AfD for the same reason, but I decided he was notable enough to be worth fixing and cut the irrelevant parts
I consider Institute for New Culture Technologies-t0 very highly promotional -- I am trying to decide what to do with it. As typical for articles on european projects, the style is so opaque that it's hard to figure out what to do. DGG ( talk ) 21:46, 15 February 2014 (UTC)
My apologies that it has taken so long for me to get back to you with a proposed article for Tapad. I'll have it you soon. I've also submitted one for Brilliant Earth at: Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Brilliant_Earth
It's sort of a "feel-good" topic because their whole business is based on ethics, though there is a short snippet of criticism in there.
I saw that the queue is backlogged by 2,500+ submissions. I'm not really sure how fair it is for me to ask if I can skip to the front of the line, but if you do have time to take a look, I'd appreciate it. Meanwhile, if you feel I should wait my turn, that's ok too. ;-) CorporateM ( Talk) 21:37, 21 February 2014 (UTC)
Good Evening APerson, understanding you are very busy, would you please take a look at /info/en/?search=Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Colorvision_International.
I made the adjustmets you suggested. Thank you for your help. D Cocchiarella 01:11, 22 February 2014 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dcocchiarella ( talk • contribs)
Hello. In this edit, you tagged the article with {{ technical}}, to say This article may be too technical for most readers to understand. Unfortunately you didn't comment at the talk page to say why you thought that. This is a perennial issue with mathematics articles -- perhaps most readers do not understand any of them, or even want to do so. Presumably a reader looking for information about Yoneda's lemma is already reasonably prepared mathematically. Are you suggesting that the article is too technical for a reader who, say, already knows what a category is? As it happens I do not think that it is, and am removing the tag. In any event it would help if you were to explain your concerns at the article talk page rather than this "hit-and-run" tagging. Deltahedron ( talk) 18:09, 23 February 2014 (UTC)
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APerson, My first ever article about the Carbone Smolan Agency in New York was accepted by you on January 8 2014. A friend searching for it just told me it was not available. When I looked it up, she was correct. I also had my Sandbox deleted for some unknown reason. When I looked on my talk page there was a lot of talk regarding articles that I had not written and had nothing to do with. Can you explain why the article was later pulled off Wiki (by another reviewer?) and if any of this has to do with the articles that have been attributed to Porterwritewiki (me) but I had nothing to do with? Could my Wiki name have been hacked? If there was a problem with the Carbone Smolan Agency article AFTER you approved it January 8, I was unaware of it. I had not checked back in more than a month. Porterwritewiki ( talk) 19:32, 10 March 2014 (UTC)porterwritewiki Porterwritewiki ( talk) 19:32, 10 March 2014 (UTC)
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Hi. I read your comments on Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Whited00r. It said "Add citations (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners) to secondary reliable sources that are entirely independent of the subject."
But there were references up until the day before you declined it! Somebody named "Happy Attack Dog" deleted the external references. I consider that vandalism.
(Note that I had weeks earlier deleted many references that the original author had written, because the first moderator who declined the article said they were "blogspam.")
Can you suggest a way to get this article approved without waiting another month... and possibly getting vandalized again? Mackerm ( talk) 14:19, 20 March 2014 (UTC)
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Here is the last log report I had from APerson on that article:
03:37, 8 January 2014 APerson (talk | contribs) moved page Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Carbone Smolan Agency to Carbone Smolan Agency (Created via Articles for creation (you can help!) (AFCH beta)) (revert)
Now I cannot find my Wiki history or that article! Porterwritewiki ( talk) 19:37, 10 March 2014 (UTC)porterwritewiki Porterwritewiki ( talk) 19:37, 10 March 2014 (UTC)
Here is my response. If you can offer me ANY advice on how to resubmit this, I welcome it. You have been nothing but kind, fair and honest. I am learning to do this and as a writer for one of the most respected magazines in the field, Communciation Arts, I would like to write more articles on this subject about other studios and people who should be on the Wiki resource list. DGG might not like my writing but CSA is peers with MANY other firms (e.g. Pentgram, Massimo Vignelli, Steve Heller) who are on these pages. I had not checked the article in a while. So, if I can work with you, please let me revise it so it will pass the stink test of being too promotional. There are thousands of for profit organizations on these pages and if you have to tell their story, it is by nature promotional. But I tried very hard to cite many third-party resources to PROVE that it had merit and CSA was worthy. Thank you again,APerson. Porterwritewiki ( talk)porterwritewiki Porterwritewiki ( talk)
Talk History: I just learned that a previously approved article I had written was deleted. First, reading the trail of comments below, I am a person, not a team of editors and I find the suggestion by DGG that I am "I suspect from the name of the contributor and totally inappropriate style that this is the work of many of our not-very-skilled-paid-editors" to be hostile, personal and insulting. I have never written for Wiki and I am a known writer for other magazines that cover graphic design. Every suggestion APerson made to me for change was made. DGG's suggestion that I cited their own ARCHIVE is incorrect. I did cite their book — which was NOT self published — and I used information that told their history. If that should be cut down, so be it.
To be safe, I tried to find any relevant citation in our industry and used it. APerson did not ask me to make fewer citations and all of them are respected (not TRIVIAL) in our industry. Too promotional? It is the brief history of an esteemed FOR PROFIT company that has made a historic impact on this industry and is revered by many of the same people who are featured on this online resource? Please, if someone can guide me on what to remove I will make the effort to do it. I put a lot of time into this and I was certain that this article was superior to ANY of the peer organizations that I was reading on WIKI that are up and acceptable now.
As for "name dropping" (another comment by DGG, that is unkind and inaccurate), the names I cite I also quote and they are people on Wiki who are PEERS of Ken Carbone and Leslie Smolan. The pair were just nominated to the AIGA Hall of Fame, affirming my choice to write this article about this agency. Why write it? Because so many of their peers are on Wiki now and if they are Wiki then Carbone Smolan should be too. I have received no payment from CSA for this but I know them personally (of course) and told them I felt they should be on the encyclopedia if people like Pentagram and Stefan Sagmeister and Steven Heller and Massimo Vignelli were.. These people are competitors and peers. And as for "trivial mentions" in publications, most of these are interviews My first reviewer, APerson, was very helpful and I responded to each of their comments and requests/suggestions for changes.
When you ask the contributors to be polite and appreciative, how do you regard the acid commentary of an editor like DGG? Other Wiki editors deemed the piece worthy of publication. If Wiki is not a place to talk about such companies as Carbone Smolan and other design firms of note, fine. But pull all of them down. But don't call my promotional when I used so many outside references to verify that the CSA group is notable, important and has made a great impact on the graphic design/communication arts profession.
Porterwritewiki (talk)porterwritewikiPorterwritewiki (talk) Carbone Smolan Agency[edit] Carbone Smolan Agency (edit|talk|history|links|watch|logs|views) – (View log · Stats) (Find sources: "Carbone Smolan Agency" – books · scholar · JSTOR · free images) I think the agency is probably notable, but the article is so promotional that it should be started over--it would have to be rewritten very fundamentally to eliminate the personal anecdotes, the quotes from the founders, the list of clients, the list of influences that amounts to name-dropping, the long list of trivial mentions in various publications, and the many references sourced merely to their own archives. I suspect from the name of the contributor and the totally inappropriate style that this is either the work of many of our not-very-skilled paid editors, or of some good faith editor thinking that this sort of writing is acceptable here on the grounds we have so many articles of business concerns that are the work of such editors. It's time to clean the encyclopedia. DGG ( talk ) 05:16, 11 February 2014 (UTC) Note: This debate has been included in the list of New York-related deletion discussions. • Gene93k (talk) 15:33, 11 February 2014 (UTC) Note: This debate has been included in the list of Visual arts-related deletion discussions. • Gene93k (talk) 15:33, 11 February 2014 (UTC) Note: This debate has been included in the list of Advertising-related deletion discussions. • Gene93k (talk) 15:33, 11 February 2014 (UTC) Note: This debate has been included in the list of Business-related deletion discussions. • Gene93k (talk) 15:33, 11 February 2014 (UTC) Strong Keep - Clearly enough articles to show is notable; easy enough to cut down or tag for improvement if we don't have someone available to do it. Jeremy112233 (talk) 03:10, 12 February 2014 (UTC) Strong Keep (as person who accepted it at AfC); I raised questions about the tone on the discussion at my talkpage about it and those were answered to my satisfaction. Notability is definitely met, and although the mentions in the sources can be viewed as trivial, there are a lot of them. Article can be easily improved. APerson (talk!) 20:36, 16 February 2014 (UTC)
Slow-delete or incubate per WP:NOTFORPROMOTION and/or WP:G11. APerson may think the article can be easily fixed, but seems not to have done so. APerson should never have accepted the article for creation in the first place: NOTFORPROMOTION seems to disallow such articles. There's an unreasonable backlog of numerous articles tagged as promotional, and it's safe to assume the backlog is steadily growing. Unless someone fixes the article before this AfD finishes, let's cut down the backlog by simply deleting this article. If an unbiased editor really cares, they can recreate it later. —Unforgettableid (talk) 00:01, 20 February 2014 (UTC)Dear APerson,
I do not understand why my article on Tito Canepa was not accepted. Can you please explain so I can make whatever changes are necessary?
Thanks, Leezk ( talk) 16:49, 21 March 2014 (UTC)
Some phrases in this submission which I think violate this guideline include "his work enjoyed a new wave of appreciation" (rather vague), "he is the leading modernist painter of the US Dominican dispora" (probably fails WP:PEACOCK; needs a reference), and "In 1996 it was only natural that..." (check MOS:OPED).
Dear Aperson,
The banners at the top and bottom of the article warn of bare URLs and the dearth of categories. I have fixed both issues. Is it therefore possible for you to remove the banners?
Tito Canepa's son owns the paintings and photos of them which he would like to have included in the article. I am puzzled by the different size requirements for "non-free content, fair use". I see that for common cover art the horizontal and vertical dimension of an image should not surpass 250 px and 400 px respectively. The total pixels should not surpass 100,000. There seems to be a different resolution and size guideline for thumbnail inline images. Can he be in touch with you for guidance in these issues?
I appreciate all your help in presenting this Wikipedia article in the most elegant and presentable format.
Thanks so much!
93.46.210.207 ( talk) 11:32, 26 March 2014 (UTC)
Firstly, thank you for reviewing my article Isle of Man Companies Act 2006.
This is my first submission to Wikipedia, hopefully I will follow it up with additional articles about the other Isle of Man Companies Acts in due course.
I am going to try to improve the Article as you have suggested by adding more references which demonstrate notability.
In the meantime, please do let me know if you have any other specific suggestions.
thanks again Martin — Preceding unsigned comment added by Middletonkatz ( talk • contribs) 10:17, 22 March 2014 (UTC)
There have been more than 10000...), then by all means put that in the submission and cite that article!
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Thank you for identifying issues with references on this page. I have removed the dead links and statements associated with them. please check out the remaining references and let me know whether they actually support what they claim to. I thought they did but would value an external opinion. Fattutor ( talk) 20:52, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
Hello. I accidentally created a general hospital character as days of our lives. So can u please delete this page:- /info/en/?search=Carlos_Rivera_%28Days_of_Our_Lives%29 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Princessruby ( talk • contribs) 05:09, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
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U suck — Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.122.0.206 ( talk) 17:38, 3 May 2014 (UTC)
Hello,
Why is my article being considered for deletion? Please advice and if possible do give me more time to improve my article. /info/en/?search=Carlos_Rivera_(General_Hospital) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Princessruby ( talk • contribs) 14:51, 27 April 2014 (UTC)
Hello APerson,
I have a question regarding the creation of this article: /info/en/?search=Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Blimp_Rock
Will a greater quantity of secondary, reliable citations allow this article to be accepted? If so, what number of citations might you suggest?
Thanks for your time, Pdemakos ( talk) 13:48, 15 May 2014 (UTC)
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Dear APerson, Thank you for your review of my article on media management. You said that the content was not enough for an article of its own. So my question is, what has to be included to become an article of its own? I am not happy with the solution to include my text into the article media communication, because media management is something quite different. I would like to improve my text for media management and would appriciate some advices. Thank you a lot in advance! Mysterious-times Mysterious-times ( talk) 12:25, 2 June 2014 (UTC)
Thank you for helping make Wikipedia a relevant source of information. I am not sure I found your comments unless it regards the presence of Wikipedia articles referenced when there should not be. So, my first submission had not enough references and the second submissions included inappropriate references. After reading the guidelines I realized that there were too many insignificant references in my article and it was my intention to clean it up. My apologies for not doing it quickly enough and wasting your time. I will remove all the Wikipedia links plus the links where she is barely mentioned. I will add a section about they Young Dubliners because I discovered she was a founding member of that group in the late 80's. I'd like not to waste your time, can you let me know please if I am in the right direction. Regards,
Vincent Michel — Preceding unsigned comment added by Vincepm ( talk • contribs) 02:38, 4 June 2014 (UTC)
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{{ admin help}} Would it be possible for an admin to add the bot I'm operating which just got approved for trial to the AWB checkpage? Thanks! APerson ( talk!) 19:57, 8 June 2014 (UTC)
Thank you for reviewing my AfC reviews. I'm concerned, however, because you put your comments in the bot-controlled section of the page. Won't these reviews be over-written the next time it adds more to the list? You might move your reviews to the bottom with the other reviews. Chris Troutman ( talk) 17:49, 12 June 2014 (UTC)
Answer me this question, APerson. In this day and age, can we afford to turn a blind eye to torture, persecution and murder. What does Wikipedia want to tell the readers of Putin's page. That he is an outdoors guy, that he can sing, that he rides horses. How can this be put under public image and not the fate of these people. There are enough reliable sources to prove these monstrous events. How can Vladimir Putin not have one Controversy section. His power, KGB membership and mental capacity has brought the deaths of numerous figures who fought for democracy in the former Soviet Union, which now looks like the Former Soviet Union is going to be The Current Soviet union. How can we live with ourselves knowing that we saved a page which misinforms readers. I implore you to read the information that you reverted.
APerson if you are really a person, you will understand why this information needs to be added to his article. Not as a form of propaganda. Because it isn't that. It's facts. Putin's current page is a farce. Please let Wikipedia be a reliable source. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Radiohist ( talk • contribs) 18:59, 12 June 2014 (UTC)
Hello.
You recently rejected my article on Angel Propps. I'm sorry, I'm a little confused as to what I need to do to cite sources. She has over 100 titles in print and won several awards. Do I need to place the entire body of her work into the article? Also her teaching schedule spans across the years and she has a hectic schedule still. Do I need to cite those sources as well? What exactly separates notable from non-notables? I'm not asking to be huffy, I am just trying to ensure that I get this done properly. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ovationaangel ( talk • contribs) 18:34, 13 June 2014 (UTC)
One of the basic bars an article like this is going to have to meet is notability, which is defined under Wikipedia as being shown by coverage in arm's-length, reliable sources. These are usually things such as newspaper articles and magazine articles, and excludes the sort of "reprinted press releases" common to some local business rags--those sources must be independent and reliable.(from here) So, all you need to do is go and find some sources about Angel Propps (which are about her: this specifically excludes tangential mentions) and cite them in the article, while demonstrating that she is notable. The specific guideline that's relevant here is WP:NAUTHOR. If one or more of the criteria listed there are met, it means that she's
likely to be notable(from the intro to the criteria). APerson ( talk!) 18:49, 13 June 2014 (UTC)
Hello Again APerson.
Would you check this article out and tell me if I have it on the correct place so that is cued for review. You may remember this story and that you approved it about Jan 7 but it was pulled down in late Feb. In late May I edited it heavily, removing some of the concerns. It MIGHT have too many sources but I did remove many of the quotes attributed to the subjects, Ken Carbone and partner Leslie Smolan. Anyway, I am new to this and I am not certain I have placed it back in the appropriate area. I will sign off here then sign back on with a link to the location of it now. porterwritewiki Porterwritewiki ( talk) 18:48, 16 June 2014 (UTC)
The link to the draft today is: /info/en/?search=User:Porterwritewiki/Carbone_Smolan_Agency Porterwritewiki ( talk) 18:50, 16 June 2014 (UTC)
You rejected my submission for a page for the upcoming film "Found Footage 3D" with only a link to "What Wikipedia is not". That covers a very broad range of topics. Can you please be more specific? Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 99.57.128.186 ( talk) 06:47, 18 June 2014 (UTC)
The submission Northwest Conference Baseball History has been rejected twice on the basis of requiring more reliable, independent sources. Because these archives stretch back to the late 1980's, few (sometimes just single) sources exist to reference the data and text that comprise in the wiki page submission. Because of these limitations, looks like I'm stuck (dead end).
Salem zeus ( talk) 18:30, 19 June 2014 (UTC) salem_zeus
Thank you. What should I do next--just wait? I am new to DYK. Btw for Beverly Hills 9/11 Memorial Garden, I was told I should do a QPQ, but I don't know how to do them. Are you able to help please? Zigzig20s ( talk) 04:56, 20 June 2014 (UTC)
{{ Resolved}} I disagree with your assessment of the noteworthiness of Donadea. It is every bit as noteworthy as any other civil parish in Ireland. I know of no other article for a civil parish that has been refused. Many, like Kilshanny, have even fewer merits than Donadea. Even if it was not notable, it is essential to the building up of a comprehensive schema for parishes and baronies in the county such as has been developed for County Clare. Please revisit your decision. Laurel Lodged ( talk) 21:37, 21 June 2014 (UTC)
[l]egally recognized, populated places are presumed to be notable.Therefore, as soon as there are sources which prove this, the submission is definitely going to be accepted. APerson ( talk!) 01:47, 22 June 2014 (UTC)
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Draft:CitizenShipper ( | talk | history | links | watch | logs)
Hi APerson! Thanks for reviewing this article. I can see a couple places where I might tone down language that appears in the independent sources, but there's not a whole lot that looks unencyclopedic. Can you tell me what parts you think should be removed? I hope to copyedit and add more sources very soon. You might also compare Anyvan, Shiply, and UShip, which are all in the same category. (Feel free to tone down any ad language in any of those articles as well!) Thank you! Frieda Beamy ( talk) 00:20, 28 June 2014 (UTC)
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Draft:Troy Ladd ( | talk | history | links | watch | logs)
Hello, my page submission has been declined for "lacking notability" when I have 10 times the notability listed of current peers of my subject that do have published pages (I have multiple independent published book and magazine articles referenced- while others have one or two). Editors in the live chat have told me I have plenty of notability for publication or posting, but still I am declined and given little to no guidance on making changes that will correct the page for posting. Please help! Thank you- ADDED- No respose to my question? Response was given to the person below mine? Please advise. Hhrfan ( talk) 00:01, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
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Draft:Entrevues Belfort film festival ( | talk | history | links | watch | logs)
Hi ! You put on relief the fact that there is two submissions for the same page. However, for the first submission, you told me that there was a lack of external links in english and blocked the edition of it, so I created a second draft with, this time, several external links. This page is the exact copy of the french one... so I really don't understand why I encoutered so many issues to publish a page which is the exact copy of a pre-existent page on the French Wikipédia. Look at our website, there is nothing false or wrong with thoses submissions.. So, I can delete the first submission and keep this one for another review ? BeastieJim ( talk) 10:40, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
Thank You !
BeastieJim ( talk) 09:12, 1 July 2014 (UTC)