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Hello professor, I'm Wooyeon Lee, taking the Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I've completed Dedline assignments. Please check. This is the links I did. Thank you. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%9D%BC%EB%B3%B8%EC%9D%98_%EB%8C%80%EB%A7%88%EC%B4%88 https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%98%81%ED%99%94_%EA%B2%80%EC%97%B4 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lee Wooyeon ( talk • contribs) 06:20, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Lee Wooyeon Your translations are a good start but they are not finished. Please ensure that you translate all content - there are still untranslated parts, including most references. Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Korean).

For articles that exist on English but not Korean Wikipedia, please use ko:틀:임시링크 .

Also, please revisit our module on communicating on Wikipedia. You should leave your messages at the bottom of the talk page, and you should sign them properly. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:07, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello Professor！ I am WEN JIAYAO（2023087238）a student of the Everyday Life and Social Structure.WANG SIWEN（2023025414）and I will finished our homework in a group. Our project is to translate a Wikipedia article about the license plate number of civil motor vehicles of the People's Republic of China. https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/中华人民共和国民用机动车号牌 In addition, We will complete a research on the identity and social status of car owners reflected by Shanghai license plate policy in recent years.！ What do you think, professor? I hope to hear your reply.

.My student numbeWen Jiayao and I finished our homework in a group. Her student number is202308723. Our project is to Wjyy1212 ( talk) 06:10, 19 March 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Wjyy1212 @ Wsw1357 The translation topic about Chinese car plates from Chinese to English is approved. Regarding your other topic I am not sure I fully understand it - I'd recommend you instead chose to translate a topic from my list here from English to Chinese: User:Piotrus/Ideas for students . If you are interested in motorization, how about History of steam road vehicles ? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:28, 19 March 2024 (UTC) reply

Professor, we have chosen the topic of English translation into Chinese. Do you think it's okay? /info/en/?search=Censorship_of_TikTok Wjyy1212 ( talk) 07:57, 19 March 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Wjyy1212 Ok - topic approved! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:05, 20 March 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, professor! I have uploaded the translated content to the sandbox! And two photos were uploaded in the Wiki folk photo competition.

This is the link!Do you think it's okay? Professor?

https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:江南甜蜜蜜.jpg

https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:江南夜市行.jpg Wjyy1212 ( talk) 07:09, 31 March 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Wjyy1212 Very good job with the pictures. For your images, can you add the description in English? You should also add categories (they are like tags). See Commons:Categories .

For example, your first picture should probably be somewhere under the category Category:Food products of China - Wikimedia Commons

Regarding your sandbox translation, please link it here for a review. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:26, 1 April 2024 (UTC) reply

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wjyy1212/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92

This is my sandbox link, which contains the content I translated.The description and classification of the picture is a little difficult for me, because it has been uploaded. If you want to change it, you need to use coding. I am not very good at using it. I’m sorry, Professor. Wjyy1212 ( talk) 14:14, 4 April 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Wjyy1212 This is a good start, but please use tools like Grammarly to improve your grammar; many sentences are hard to understand. Next, work on adding blue links (hyperlinks) and correctly formatted references, as well as importing images. If there are any code issues, talk to me during class or office hours, and I'll help you solve the problems. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:23, 5 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Professor, I didn't have time to visit you in the office on Friday because of the exam. I have slightly modified the translation. Do you have any questions?The translation is in my sandbox. Wjyy1212 ( talk) 07:05, 15 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Wjyy1212 You are making good progress. Remember that all content added should be referenced, otherwise it can be removed form Wikipedia and will not count for course grade. You can publish your work ( WP:MOVE it to the mainspace) anytime.

After moving it, please add categories (see bottom of the original Chinese articles for Chinese categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the Chinese article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:26, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

I modified it as you said. Do you think there are any other problems? Wjyy1212 ( talk) 02:44, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Wjyy1212 Regarding your English translation about Chinese vehicle plates, there are two problems to fix in this round of the review:

1) Your categories are incorrect (red). Please try to identify working (blue) categories.

2) Some links you added are to Wikipedia:Disambiguation pages like Wuwei - which Wuwei did you mean?

To identify and fix the problem, go to your Preferences and activate the gadget called "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange". After you save your preferences and refresh (reload) your article, the wrong links will be in orange. Please fix them, then you can publish ( move) your page.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:47, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

OK, I see, professor. When will it be completed at the latest? Wjyy1212 ( talk) 06:13, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Wjyy1212 If you are asking about deadline, please complete your Wikipedia project ASAP, at minimum by June 26th. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:56, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

I have fixed the above two problems. Do you have any other problems, professor? Wjyy1212 ( talk) 14:28, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Wjyy1212 Well done. Please comment here: Talk:People's Republic of China's civilian motor vehicle license plate. Your current grade for our class is A; please try to finish your group project at zh wiki: User:Wsw1357/沙盒 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:13, 23 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hi professor, I'm a student in your class "Everyday Life and Social Structure". I edited and added references in here. please check. I used a citation template and make my reference have a title, author, publisher, date of publication and translated title. Kimseoeun2023079825 ( talk) 15:17, 25 March 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Kimseoeun2023079825 Your reference is good, but in your edit why did you chance "Haemaro" to "Haimarrow "? This seems like an error - please restore the original spelling unless you can explain to me why your version is better. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:10, 28 March 2024 (UTC) reply

Umm.. actually it’s not an error. I edited because the company’s official spelling is Haimarrow. Not the Haemaro. You can see here. Also, when you search haemaro in google, you cannot see the company that take over mom’s touch. When you search haimarrow, you can find the official site. Haimarrow and Haemaro, both can read “해마로“, its not a problem in korean, but i think it have to be more correct in enlglish wikipedia.(because it is a korea company, enlgish users can have a problem when they search it.) 210.98.151.244 ( talk) 16:09, 29 March 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Kimseoeun2023079825 I see. Thank you for correcting me, you are indeed right. I recommend you copy your explanation from here to the article's talk page at Talk:Mom's Touch for extra credit. Other people can be confused like I was and it is good to explain this to them. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:36, 1 April 2024 (UTC) reply

I copied my explanation to the article's talk page here. Kimseoeun2023079825 ( talk) 12:38, 2 April 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Kimseoeun2023079825 Very good. I also recommend using software like Grammarly to improve your English output _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 13:43, 2 April 2024 (UTC) reply

PS. For extra credit, perhaps you can take a picture of the store (front and inside) and add it to the article? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:36, 1 April 2024 (UTC) reply

I took a picture of the store and added to the article. please check. Kimseoeun2023079825 ( talk) 12:47, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Kimseoeun2023079825 I see your picture at Commons ( File:Mom's touch picture.png) but it is not in the article yet. I'd recommend trying to take a better picture - the right half of your picture is taken up by unrelated content. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:28, 23 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello Professor！I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.I have already started my translation work, I translated the first paragraph before it could be quoted and inserted, if there is any grammar problem, please give me your opinion, I will change it in time, thank you! Hkiho ( talk) 14:59, 31 March 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Hkiho This is a good start and the grammar is fine. However, as it happens, another of our students has translated this very article without discussing this with me - I assume this was done for extra credit although I have not heard from them yet. See User:Muqing112233/Handan Junior High School Student Kills a Student . As such, while you have successfully completed all assignments so far, and I will credit your work as well, I recommend that you change your topic. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:24, 2 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor, as you said, this student translated without approval, but I have already completed most of the translations. I don't want to make me choose other articles because of her mistake, other Chinese articles that meet the requirements are difficult to find, but in order to be fair, I will not plagiarize her article, so I choose to find a new article. Because the time to re-translate the new article is urgent, if there is any mistake, please help me correct it. I wish you a good day！ Hkiho ( talk) 17:14, 2 May 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Hkiho

The topic is ok, but right now your draft is not close to the standards that are required for publication on English Wikipedia. It is primarily a plot summary with no information about the importance of the work; it is also not referenced. Remember that content added to English Wikipedia (and credited for our course) has to be referenced (as I mentioned above). For articles about movies or other works of arts, we need to provide information about awards and reception. Please see formatting and sections at Meteor Shower (TV series) or other entries in (for example) Category:2009 Chinese television series debuts, paying special attention to section(s) on "Reception".

Please also review Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Film, with special attention to "Critical reception" and the policy on importance ( Wikipedia:Notability (films)) - right now nothing in your draft suggest the chosen production is important enough to warrant an entry in Wikipedia (for that, you need to include the said section on Reception, with reviews by reliable critics - in newspapers, magazines, or such, not social media)

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:57, 3 May 2024 (UTC) reply

Professor, can I meet the final requirements of the article now, because the previous article others choose, I can change the topic to meet the requirements of the article very few, I hope you can tell me what else to do, thank you very much for your reply Hkiho ( talk) 01:59, 3 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Hkiho I am afraid I do not understand your question. Just above I told you what you need to do to bring your work up to acceptable quality. If anything I wrote is unclear, please let me know here or you can come to my office hours or talk to me after our class. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:30, 3 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Professor, thank you for helping me in class, I'm looking for a new topic now, I'll finish it as soon as possible this week if I can, thank you! Hkiho ( talk) 14:02, 16 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Hkiho I discourage translating articles about seasons of TV shows, as it is hard to show their Wikipedia:Notability and they may be deleted. Instead, try to expand Joy of Life (TV series) with information on reviews and reception, or translate information about another show (but not a season of the show). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:59, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Thank you for your reply professor, so I decided not to focus on TV series anymore, this is my new article should meet the requirements, if possible, I will finish as soon as possible, thank you for your reply, wish you have a nice day！ Hkiho ( talk) 02:47, 18 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Professor, I have completed my latest translation assignment and will upload it pending your approval." Hkiho ( talk) 16:25, 18 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Hkiho This is an interesting topic. I have moved it to a better title. Here are items you need to fix:

• please review the grammar and vocabulary with a tool like Grammarly. Some concepts are not translated properly' for example, you use the term Demonization but I am pretty sure you mean Discrimination
• If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link
• Your article needs a proper lead (summary) at the top. You can try to create one by asking an AI tool like ChatGPT to summarize your article - but please proofread the outcome and ensure it has no errors (hallucinations)
• Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese).
• please add categories (see bottom of the original Chinese articles for Chinese categories and try to add similar one to your article)
• Please ensure all content is referenced. I see several sentences (half-paragraphs, etc. that do not have references.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:17, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Thanks to the professor's guidance, I corrected a lot of grammatical errors and corrected them according to your requirements, if it passes, I will upload it as required, thank you for your reply! Hkiho ( talk) 14:48, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Hkiho Good progress. For Xinyang Incident, please add a link using the Template:Interlanguage link. Ditto for 黄泛区, 苏北, 王士性 and 炒作 (double check first if they don't have English article, I fixed one link for you - 中国大陆 has an English Wikipedia article ( Mainland China).

You also moved the article back to the previous title, despite my note above that I have moved it to a better title. Please move it to the title I used unless you have a good reason no to?

You should also add more blue links and double check the terminology. For example, Anti-Japanese War should be linked but in English it is usually known as "Second Sino-Japanese War", hence the article location at that title ( Second Sino-Japanese War). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:05, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Thank you professor for your opinion, I have revised the title, as well as the use of a lot of technical terms, and added a lot of blue links, but now the only problem is that there is no English article about the Xinyang incident, I tried to use Template:Interlanguage link.I would appreciate it if you could help!Thanks for your reply and I wish youEnjoyable day Hkiho ( talk) 06:31, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Hkiho Well done. I've fixed the Xinyang link for you. Please double check that the link to Central Plains I fixed is correct now. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:56, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Please try to fix the link to "six central provinces", right now it is broken. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:57, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor, thank you for fixing the link for me. After checking, it is correct. Thank you very much! And I fixed the link to Six Central Provinces and uploaded the English version of my translation for the original text. This is my assignment. Thank you for your reply and I wish you a pleasant day!! Hkiho ( talk) 06:09, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Hkiho Well done. For extra credit, now that your wiki skills have improved, you could consider finishing your old work from last year (still available in the history of your sandbox here).

Additionally, looking at my notes, I see you / your group where also supposed to translate the article Russian fashion from English to Chinese and zh:邯郸初中生杀人案 to English. Are you still working on those projects? What is their status? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:40, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor, about zh: Handan junior high school student murder to English this topic was written by other students before, you asked me to change the topic may you forgot, it is in the dialogue above. I have been unable to contact my team member, so I can only try my best to complete my own task. Thanks to the professor's affirmation, I learned a lot of skills in using Wikipedia in this class! Although there are many shortcomings, I will continue to work hard! I hope I can take your class again next time！！ Hkiho ( talk) 16:50, 23 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Hkiho Thank you for the reminder. It seems that the other student has abandoned their draft about 邯郸初中生杀人案, so if you would like, you can finish it yourself (using the draft at User:Muqing112233/Handan Junior High School Student Kills a Student) for extra credit.

You can also work on your Russian fashion article, which has been started here: zh:User:Redyeoni/沙盒 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:23, 24 June 2024 (UTC) reply

HI, Professor.I am a student in the Introduction to Collective Intelligence Practices and the Sociology of Information course.I have started to make translation homework Please check it.Thank you! Redyeoni ( talk) 15:08, 31 March 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Redyeoni It is a good start. But your sandbox is on English Wikipedia. You should copy it to Chinese Wikipedia - the code on English is not the same as on Chinese one. The sooner you start working in Chinese Wikipedia, the better. I will provide more feedback after you copy your article there. You'll likely need to redo all the hyperlinks after the move _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:28, 2 April 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor Good evening, this is my translation homework has been completed Please check Thank you！ Redyeoni ( talk) 10:12, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Redyeoni This is a good start, which you should have completed over a month ago. You need to move it to Chinese Wikipedia, fix errors resulting from interwiki move, then publish it. After moving it, please add categories (see bottom of the original English articles for English categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the English article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list). Remember to proofread your translations to eliminate any machine translation errors, for example. Poor translation can lead to your articles being deleted and that would negatively impact your grade, so please make sure to proofread them carefully before publication.

You will need to complete much extra credit work in addition to raise your grade to satisfactory levels, since you have not carried out most of the other assignments and missed most deadlines for the main one. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:23, 23 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Professor, I've created all the contents of the sandbox. Please check it Bai0926 ( talk) 07:46, 28 May 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Bai0926 Good progress. There are several issues that need to be fixed:

• Please review our module on writing the lead (introduction): User:Hanyangprofessor2/Module/Lead. Your lead contains content that is not mentioned elsewhere in the article, ex. about Dompamine style. Please move such content to the relevant section(s).
• please review the guideline on which terms should have blue links ( Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking). Your article contains many important terms that are not linked. In the lead, for example China's economy, Tang suit or Hanbok . This is not a problem in the lead, many other terms are not linked in other parts of the article (ex. Genghis Khan). If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link.
• Is the international fashion week you mention the same as China Fashion Week?
• Use AI tools or Grammary to double check for errors, such as repeating of "On the one hand" twice in the lead
• Please ensure all content is referenced. There is no reference for the first paragraphs of 'Wei and jin dynasties' or 'Sui and tang dynasties' sections, for example
• Please try to add more pictures, particularly for the modern fashion you discuss (remember to add only pictures already found on Wikipedia, or your own - see User:Hanyangprofessor2/Instructions/6)
• Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). See User:Hanyangprofessor2/Instructions/2

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:48, 31 May 2024 (UTC) reply

I modified the article please check. Thank you!

Here is my answer to the question about World Fashion Week and China Fashion Week. World Fashion Week and China Fashion Week are not the same. China Fashion Week is an event organized by China Fashion Designers Association, abbreviation: CIFW. Bai0926 ( talk) 08:02, 7 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Bai0926 Regarding "China international fashion week", please ensure the name is properly capitalized. Is there a Chinese Wikipedia article for it, or for the China Fashion Designers Association? If not, please provide Chinese names in the right places, just as when we learned in the recent module on Manual of Style in class.

Please review my remarks above. You have not addressed majority of the issues raised. Your lead contains content that is not mentioned elsewhere in the article. You have added some links, but more are needed. I've listed specific examples above ("In the lead, for example China's economy, Tang suit or Hanbok") and you have not improved them. There are still unreferenced paragraphs; the references still have missing metadata, etc. Please address ALL of the issues I've raised CAREFULLY (not A FEW of the issues haphazardly), then ask me for the review again.

Please check whether the links are correct. For example, Zhongshan suit should probably link to Mao suit. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:20, 7 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Professor, I have corrected the mistake as per your instructions, please check.

And I found a link to China Fashion Week, which has also been added.Let me know if I have any other questions Thanks! Bai0926 ( talk) 12:12, 12 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Bai0926 Good. Next, please use Grammarly or similar service to check for the prose of your article in English. Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). For linking to other Wikipedia articles, if a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. After addressing those issues, you can can publish your article. After publishing (moving) your article, please add relevant WP:CATEGORIES. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:31, 14 June 2024 (UTC) reply

For my richly referenced content, please check Bai0926 ( talk) 09:34, 14 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Bai0926 Good. After you check for links to Chinese articles (interlanguage links) you can publish your article as I described above. (Move it to the mainspace) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:08, 15 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Professor, I don't know how to do interlanguage links, can I ask you for advice on Monday before uploading it? Bai0926 ( talk) 11:55, 16 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Bai0926 Of course, ask me during or after class and I'll demonstrate _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:59, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Professor, my Chinese translation into English has been done, please check it /info/en/?search=Special:ContentTranslation?title=Special:%E5%86%85%E5%AE%B9%E7%BF%BB%E8%AF%91&campaign=ulsaddlanguages&from=zh&page=%E9%84%A7%E5%85%B8&to=en&targettitle=User%3A%EC%9E%A5%EB%A1%9C%EC%95%84%2FDeng+Dian 장로아 ( talk) 09:05, 8 June 2024 (UTC) reply

ZHANG LUYA 장로아 ( talk) 09:06, 8 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ 장로아 Please link your published article(s) that you want me to review directly like this: China,

(not the translation module). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:23, 9 June 2024 (UTC) reply

/info/en/?search=Draft:Deng_Dian

Do you think this is the right address? 장로아 ( talk) 07:11, 9 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ 장로아 Yes, I can review this. I am afraid your article needs a lot of improvement before it is publishable.

The information at top should be in a properly formatted WP:INFOBOX.

Your article is missing blue links to other Wikipedia articles (see Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking). If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link.

Your article needs references; only referenced content is allowed on Wikipedia (and counts for class credit). See WP:V and our corresponding class module. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:47, 10 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Professor, this is my revised translation, please check

/info/en/?search=User:%EC%9E%A5%EB%A1%9C%EC%95%84/sandbox 장로아 ( talk) 12:45, 15 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ 장로아 I see some progress with links. For links to Chinese articles like " The Coming One 2 please use tool: Template:Interlanguage link.

Your infobox at the top is not correct. Please see our module on how to create a proper one: User:Hanyangprofessor2/Module/Infoboxes

Most of your content still needs references. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:44, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Professor, this is my revised translation, please check

User:장로아/sandbox 장로아 ( talk) 08:17, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ 장로아 You are making progress, but please use a proper infobox template. Look at the infoboxes used in other similar articles (ex. Zhou Shen), and copy one of them and add it to your article, then modify accordingly.

After that, focus on adding references (and ensure they have the correct metadata - author, date, publisher, and title; if the source is Chinese the title should be both in Chinese and English). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:02, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Professor, this is my revised translation, please check

User:장로아/sandbox 장로아 ( talk) 11:38, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ 장로아 Good,but there are still many issues to fix. Some are the ones I mentioned before - For links to Chinese articles like " The Coming One 2 please use tool: Template:Interlanguage link. Some link to articles that do not even seem to exist on zh wiki like 见面吧!电台 .

Also, please add Chinese name of that person to your lead and infobox - again, compare your article with Zhou Shen "Zhou Shen ( Chinese: 周深; pinyin: Zhōu Shēn; born 29 September 1992), also known as"

Your three references do not have correct metadata, and the biggest problem still remains - most of your article is still unreferenced. In order for you to be able to publish your article and complete the assignment,all the content needs to be referenced to reliable sources (see Wikipedia:Verifiability); as mentioned in our syllabus, only referenced content counts for our assignment. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:45, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

We are students of collective intelligence in practice.We have completed the translation, please check1 https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SU_YIQI/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92_%E5%A1%94%E7%BD%97%E7%89%8C%E8%A7%A3%E8%AF%BB_Tarot_card_reading、check2 User:Liangyiqiao2004/sandbox 许靖韵Xu Jingyun#quantity. Liangyiqiao2004 ( talk) 09:38, 9 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Liangyiqiao2004 Good progress. Regarding your Chinese article,you can now publish ( WP:MOVE) your article. After that, please add WP:CATEGORIES: and link your article to the English one with the tool explained here Help:Interlanguage links. After that, you should monitor your article to check for any feedback from Chinese reviewers over the next few weeks.

Regarding your English article, it needs much more work. Much of it is is unreferenced (see ( WP:V and recall that only referenced content is allowed on Wikipedia and counts for our class credit). Next, your article needs throughout proofreading as right now it contains numerous grammar and vocabulary errors that make reading and understanding it very difficult. I am afraid that almost every sentence has errors or is written in unencyclopedic style (see Wikipedia:Writing_better_articles#Use_of_pronouns). Please have your article reviewed by someone who is fluent in English; you can also try to use tools like Grammarly but I am afraid the amount of errors I see will make any automatic tool struggle with fixing this.

Also, please let me know when you have asked for and gotten permission to translate this topic from Chinese in English? I cannot locate it in my records. (The topic is probably fine, but I need to know the name of the Chinese article you are translating to offer you more feedback and to ensure you have chosen a topic that is not already covered in English; like Siheyuan, which already is, and has some coverage under Siheyuan#Layout_of_Beijing_siheyuan) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:18, 10 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Professor, I have corrected the syntax error with grammarly, please check it.I'm sorry about the changed theme. I changed the theme to Beijing Courtyard because there were many themes that didn't have proper translation in English. Liangyiqiao2004 ( talk) 10:10, 15 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Liangyiqiao2004 Good that you are improving the language. You should clarify the topic of your article - I assume it is about a type of a building?

Once you add references to unreferenced parts of your article, you can publish it (see WP:MOVE). After that, please add WP:CATEGORIES: and link your article to the Chinese one with the tool explained here Help:Interlanguage links _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:49, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

I have finished the link, please check it. https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%A1%94%E7%BD%97%E7%89%8C%E5%8D%A0%E5%8D%9C SU YIQI ( talk) 03:14, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ SU YIQI I am afraid your work was declined from Chinese Wikipedia by a reviewer to due to poor translation (翻译品质不佳、格式不符，在草稿空间改善 ). Please improve it (fix the problems raised) and then ask the reviewer (@ TimWu007) for a new review. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:51, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:%E5%A1%94%E7%BD%97%E7%89%8C%E5%8D%A0%E5%8D%9CI published the revised draft on the 19th, but I still haven't got the reply and review from the administrator. What should I do? SU YIQI ( talk) 13:47, 23 June 2024 (UTC) reply

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:%E5%A1%94%E7%BD%97%E7%89%8C%E5%8D%A0%E5%8D%9C SU YIQI ( talk) 13:49, 23 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ SU YIQI To get quick feedback, please ask here: zh:维基百科:Discord交流群 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:24, 24 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Dear Professor,I'm SU YIQI, in the 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' class.I have finished my translation homework.Please check it. https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SU_YIQI/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92_%E9%AD%94%E6%B3%95%E5%B8%88%EF%BC%88%E5%B9%BB%E6%83%B3%EF%BC%89Magician_(fantasy) https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SU_YIQI/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92_%E9%A9%AC%E8%B5%9B%E5%A1%94%E7%BD%97%E7%89%8C_Tarot_of_Marseilles SU YIQI ( talk) 09:56, 9 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ SU YIQI Good progress. Regarding your Chinese article,you can now publish ( WP:MOVE) your article. After that, please add WP:CATEGORIES: and link your article to the English one with the tool explained here Help:Interlanguage links . After that, you should monitor your article to check for any feedback from Chinese reviewers over the next few weeks. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:19, 10 June 2024 (UTC) reply

I have finished the link, please check it. https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E9%AD%94%E6%B3%95%E5%B8%88%EF%BC%88%E5%B9%BB%E6%83%B3%EF%BC%89 https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E9%A9%AC%E8%B5%9B%E5%A1%94%E7%BD%97%E7%89%8C SU YIQI ( talk) 10:15, 16 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Replied above. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:51, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, Professor. I have completed your translation and I would like to ask you to check1、 check2 it. I will seriously make corrections based on your suggestions. Thank you. ZixuanHE ( talk) 03:14, 10 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ ZixuanHE Regarding your Chinese article, you can now publish ( WP:MOVE) your article. After that, please add WP:CATEGORIES: and link your article to the English one with the tool explained here Help:Interlanguage links . After that, you should monitor your article to check for any feedback from Chinese reviewers over the next few weeks. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:38, 10 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ ZixuanHE Please review the concerns raised over your work at zh:Wikipedia:互助客栈/其他#新用户通过撰写新条目的方式“完成学科作业”的处理讨论 and address them. Thank you _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:41, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, Professor. I have completed your translation and I would like to ask you to check1 check2 it. I will seriously make corrections based on your suggestions. Thank you. JINJINYAN ( talk) 07:28, 11 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ JINJINYAN Good job, you can publish your article. After publishing (moving) your article, please add WP:CATEGORIES: and link your article to the English one with the tool explained here Help:Interlanguage links Now, you should monitor your article to check for any feedback from Chinese reviewers over the next few weeks _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:00, 12 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ JINJINYAN Please review the concerns raised over your work at zh:Wikipedia:互助客栈/其他#新用户通过撰写新条目的方式“完成学科作业”的处理讨论 and address them. Thank you _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:42, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ JINJINYAN Please note that majority of your translated content has been removed. You can still complete the assignment by addressing the issues raised at zh:Wikipedia:互助客栈/其他#新用户通过撰写新条目的方式“完成学科作业”的处理讨论 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:33, 23 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor, we are students from Everyday Life and Social Structure, we already finished and pulished our wiki translate projects. Please checked it, Thank you!

English to Chinese: 朝鲜环境

Korean to English: Ansan Reed Marshy Park Wantiin ( talk) 08:26, 12 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Wantiin Good progress. There are several things to fix in your English project:

• If a topic exists in Korean but not English (such as ko:시화호 - Lake Sihwa) , please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. If you don't know how to use it, stop by my office hours or ask in class and I will demonstrate it.
• please find the correct name of the "Hajja Engineering Company". There is no such entity ("Hajja Engineering Company").
• some of your references are missing metadata; most often original data. For example, https://www.kyeonggi.com/article/201410150605456 is from 2014-10-15. Please add such dates. Another missing metadata element is the translated title (in English, do not replace to existing Korean title - use the translated title metadata parameter. Ask me in class if you need help
• the "Conflict over artificial pump operating costs between municipalities" is based on news from 2014. Can you find more up to date coverage and update the article? You can also update the Korean one for extra credit

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:51, 14 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor. Thanks for your feedback, we are revising our article. Regarding your reference to "Hajja Engineering Company", I have not been able to find any information about this company either. However, "하자엔지니어링사" (the Korean name of this company) is mentioned inside the Korean article of this article. But the Korean Wikipedia page also does not have a specific link to the company. Therefore I was unable to locate the co-company. So I have removed the reference to "Hajja Engineering Company" from the English article. Rachel.zrq ( talk) 07:45, 15 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Rachel.zrq Good, I think this is the correct move. I think you can see why it is always important to use not only the translated title of something, but also the original. Here the error comes from the newspaper that reported poorly on this issue. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:53, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor, we also added English translation of the title and dates in our article's references, please check it, Thank you! Wantiin ( talk) 16:01, 15 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Very good! You are almost finished. I hope you can find some up to date information on how the conflict between Ansan and Hwaseong was resolved. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:54, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor, these are four articles I translated. I have two classes of yours. Please check them. Thank you! User:등혜진/sandbox DENG HUICHEN ( talk) 08:44, 12 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ 등혜진 Your sandbox contains links to more than four articles, I count eight links. Please link each article you would like me to review here, directly (i.e. please provide four links to four articles you'd like me to review here). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:55, 14 June 2024 (UTC) reply

one class

1. The Coming Conflict with China

2. https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:%EB%93%B1%ED%98%9C%EC%A7%84/%E4%B8%9C%E5%BE%B7%E7%9A%84%E7%94%B5%E5%BD%B1%E5%AE%A1%E6%9F%A5%E5%88%B6%E5%BA%A6( Film censorship in East Germany)

two class

1. Film censorship in South Korea

2. User:등혜진( Abortion in Japan) DENG HUICHEN ( talk) 12:57, 14 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ 등혜진 1. You linked the article in English. I believe you were supposed to translate it to Korean or Chinese?

2. zh:User:등혜진/东德的电影审查制度 this looks good. Please add links to English articles that do not exist in Chinese using this tool: zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi . After that, you can publish your articles. After publishing (moving) your article, please add WP:CATEGORIES: and link your article to the English one with the tool explained here Help:Interlanguage links Now, you should monitor your article to check for any feedback from Chinese reviewers over the next few weeks

3. You again linked the English article instead of your translation

4. Regarding the draft at zh:User:등혜진 . It needs blue links to other articles on Chinese Wikipedia (and if the relevant articles don't exist, use interlanguage link tool I linked above to link to English ones). Please ensure all content is referenced. In some cases you split paragraphs into smaller ones, that's fine, but you should then copy the reference (footnote) to the end of each paragraph. After you do this, you can publish your article. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:17, 15 June 2024 (UTC) reply

one class

1. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%ED%95%9C%EA%B5%AD%EC%9D%98_%EC%98%81%ED%99%94_%EA%B2%80%EC%97%B4

two class

1. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%8B%A4%EA%B0%80%EC%98%A4%EB%8A%94_%EC%A4%91%EA%B5%AD%EA%B3%BC%EC%9D%98_%EA%B0%88%EB%93%B1 DENG HUICHEN ( talk) 05:40, 16 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ 등혜진 Good, your translations look fine, please monitor them to see if the Korean reviewers have any feedback over the next few weeks. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:55, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor, I'm Chaeyeong Lee, the student of Sociology of Everyday Life. Left a feedback on my friend's Wikipedia edit. Please check. here Chaeyeong09 ( talk) 05:13, 13 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Chaeyeong09 You have left your comment in the wrong place. Please try again and leave your comment at your classmate's talk page, not on their sandbox talk (subpage). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:28, 14 June 2024 (UTC) reply

I revised it, please check it again. here Chaeyeong09 ( talk) 04:33, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Chaeyeong09 Now it is correct. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:58, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, Professor. I used an article translation instead of editing this week. But I don't know why it can't be successfully connected to the English article.

迈克尔·斯特恩·哈特 Muqing112233 ( talk) 14:13, 13 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Muqing112233 Because you have not moved your article to public space. It should be at 迈克尔·斯特恩·哈特 but instead you moved it to User:迈克尔·斯特恩·哈特 (and several other wrong places). Try again - but this time, I recommend reading about Wikipedia:Namespace ( :维基百科:命名空间) first - it should help you understand the problem. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:41, 14 June 2024 (UTC) reply

I moved this article. However, the English Wikipedia cannot be found on the homepage linked to the page. What should I do?

迈克尔·斯特恩·哈特 Muqing112233 ( talk) 14:21, 16 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Okay, I have realized the problem. There is no problem with my translation. It is because the author has set permissions to not allow others to edit, so that I can't link the two articles together. Muqing112233 ( talk) 14:35, 16 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Muqing112233 I believe the problem is fixed now and your article is at zh:迈克尔·斯特恩·哈特 . Now, please try to add some WP:CATEGORIES to it - look at the ones at the bottom of the English article and try to add similar ones to your translated Chinese article. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:57, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

The issue has been resolved, can I get extra points? Muqing112233 ( talk) 05:05, 18 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Certainly, I will consider it when I am calculating the final grade. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:47, 18 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Dear Professor,

I have completed my translation work from Chinese to English and have published my article. I have linked my article to the Chinese article and added the categories. Please take a look.

Thank you！ TMXX0818 ( talk) 00:35, 14 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ TMXX0818 Well done. One issue needs to be fixed: your article is a WP:ORPHAN. Please link it from other relevant articles like the 2021 Henan floods or Line 5 (Zhengzhou Metro).

Please monitor your work for the next few weeks to see if the reviewers have any feedback. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:44, 14 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Thank you very much for your feedback. I have linked " Zhengzhou subway flooding" to " 2021 Henan floods". Please take a look.

Have a great day. Thank you! TMXX0818 ( talk) 14:22, 14 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ TMXX0818 Good. Can you link it from other relevant articles like Line 5 (Zhengzhou Metro)? Can you think of what other articles should mention this event? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:18, 15 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor, I have linked " Zhengzhou subway flooding" to " Line 5 (Zhengzhou Metro)"and " Zhengzhou Metro".And I tried to add a template for interlanguage links, but because articles that only have Chinese but not English are included in the references，it seems like I haven't found a way to add interlanguage links to the references yet. Thank you for your reply. TMXX0818 ( talk) 12:16, 16 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ TMXX0818 I believe we fixed this in the class - you are doing a very good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:58, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

PS. The final item to improve is to link to articles that exist in Chinese but not English using Template:Interlanguage link. For example, zh:郑州北站 . There are several other articles that should be linked with this tool as well. Please compare the links in the Chinese and English articles and add missing links. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:22, 15 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, professor.

I'm Yang Peifu, taking classes on 'Understanding Wikipedia' and 'Everyday Life and Social Structure'.

I have 10 edits per week, Please check it. Thank you!

Eggy Party and Taiwan Daily News are Wikipedia articles for increasing the score of Introduction to Sociology. Liu Shuqin, Zhang Wenhuan, Draft: Wang Baiyuan, Xie Lifa, and Wu Kunhuang are articles that need to be completed and increase the score of Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia. Please check them out. Thank you! Yangpeifu ( talk) 12:23, 14 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Yangpeifu Well done. Here are the fixes needed:

• in Eggy Party, please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). If you don't know how to do this, ask me in class or during office hours
• in Taiwan Daily News, please add categories (look at Chinese article and its categories, then try to add similar categories to your English translation), and format references with metedata.
• in Liu Shuqin, format references with metedata. That article can also use more blue links, for example to Tsinghua University. See what other terms can be linked and link them. For articles that exist in Chinese but not English use Template:Interlanguage link.
• Zhang Wenhuan needs categories and metadata fixing in references
• Wang Baiyuan can be moved to mainspace after you add categories (most references there are well formatted already with metadata). After publishing it (moving it), please link it to the Chinese article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list).
• Xie Lifa needs reference metadata improvements. It has also been tagged as a Wikipedia:Orphan - can you resolve this by linking to this article from other articles? See links to Chinese article for ideas here Link to the page of "Sheriffa" - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
• Please add links to your other articles in the same fashion (see how they are linked to in Chinese then try to add links from existing English articles)
• Wu Kunhuang needs ref metadata, and addressing the orphan issue

Overall, you are doing a very good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:52, 15 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Dear Professor,

I have been completing the above tasks these days, and I added " Guo Qiusen"'s article to solve the orphan article of " Liu Shuqin". I have moved " Wang Baiyuan"'s article and the cross-language links of the above articles. Please check, thank you!

My blog1 and blog2 assignments are also all completed, And commented on classmates' blogs more than a dozen times, please check, thank you, professor! Yangpeifu ( talk) 06:59, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Yangpeifu Well done. Wang Baiyuan needs WP:CATEGORIES (see original Chinese articles or categories in Guo Qiusen for ideas). Well done expanding Guo Qiusen, it will count for extra credit. Please double check the references you added there - they may need metadata fixing (title, author, date, etc.). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:14, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, professor. We are students in everyday life and social structure.

We have made revisions to the editing of the English article. There has been no feedback received regarding the editing of the Chinese article. Please review, thank you! Han77720 ( talk) 11:05, 15 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Han77720 Good, you are almost finished. Some links you added are to Wikipedia:Disambiguation pages like Bells - you probably wanted to link to Bell.

To identify and fix the problem, go to your Preferences and activate the gadget called "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange". After you save your preferences and refresh (reload) your article, the wrong links will be in orange. Please fix them, then you can publish ( move) your page.

After moving it, please add categories (see bottom of the original Chinese articles for Chinese categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the Chinese article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list).

Regarding your Chinese article, you can publish it as well, following the same advice as I gave you above. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:50, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, professor.We have already moved the English and Chinese articles and added the categories. Please check, thank you! Han77720 ( talk) 12:47, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Han77720 Good. Please ensure that your article ls linked to from others (see Wikipedia:Orphan). I recommend checking what other articles link to the Chinese one and try to link your article from simialar article on English WIkipedia. See here: 链接至“投币祈福”的页面 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 (wikipedia.org) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:30, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, professor.We have added the ' See also' section. Please check it. Thank you! Han77720 ( talk) 14:36, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Han77720 Good, but please try to address the Orphan issue I mentioned above. If you do not know what it means, read the linked article explaining this in detail (in short, it means you need to indentify other articles on English Wikipedia that should mention yours and link it from them). Good luck! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:00, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, professor. I have already linked the Chinese page in the article, please check. 1 Han77720 ( talk) 18:24, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Han77720 Well done. To improve your grade to A+ I recommend translating another (short) article into English or Chinese. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:46, 23 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor, our translated article has been completed, please check.

/info/en/?search=User:Yue03090616/sandbox_111

At the same time, our Chinese articles have not received feedback and are requested to be published directly.

Editing User:Yue03090616/沙盒 - Wikipedia Yue03090616 ( talk) 11:08, 15 June 2024 (UTC) reply

User:Yue03090616/sandbox 111 - Wikipedia This is English article. Yue03090616 ( talk) 11:12, 15 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Yue03090616

Good, you are almost finished.

You should add some images to your article. If there are none on Chinese Wikipedia, try to locate them on Wikimedia Commons by searching it in English and Chinese for related terms.

Some links you added are to Wikipedia:Disambiguation pages like Administrative - you probably wanted to link to Bell.

To identify and fix the problem, go to your Preferences and activate the gadget called "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange". After you save your preferences and refresh (reload) your article, the wrong links will be in orange. Please fix them, then you can publish ( move) your page.

After moving it, please add categories (see bottom of the original Chinese articles for Chinese categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the Chinese article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list).

Regarding your Chinese article, you can publish it as well, following the same advice as I gave you above.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:52, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, professor.We have already moved the English and Chinese articles and added the categories. Please check, thank you! Yue03090616 ( talk) 13:16, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Yue03090616 I see. Your article has one major problem - compared to the Chinese article, it has more references, but most of them seem to be fake / garbage such as links to irrelevant pages. Please remove all fake references from your article immediately, and ensure that the remaining references are properly formatted with metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:37, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

The link to the Chinese article above is to your sandbox. Please publish your article (and then add categories, interlanguage link, etc.) and update me again. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:38, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor, my English article has been revised again, and the Chinese article has been added to the language, and the mobile is complete. Please check, thank you! Yue03090616 ( talk) 10:02, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Yue03090616 Your English article still contains many fake/wrong references, likely a result of using a malfunctioning AI tool. Please remove ALL references from it, then add references from Chinese Wikipedia. Otherwise your English article will be deleted from English Wikipedia shortly, as it is not only effectively unreferenced, but it has fake/wrong references. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:43, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Your Chinese article was published correctly. Please monitor it over the next few days to check for reviews from Chinese editors. Remember to proofread it to avoid errors introduced by machine translation - if the quality of the translation is too poor, the article may be deleted, which would cause the assignment to fail. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:45, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, professor. I have modified the footnote citation. Please check. Han77720 ( talk) 21:46, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Yue03090616@ Han77720 Very good. The final thing is to ensure they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:58, 23 June 2024 (UTC) reply

PS. Please send me an email with a link to your blogs or link them here; I cannot locate them. I also encourage you to consider translating additional content for extra credit. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:01, 23 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, Professor I modified and completed the translation of article based on your suggestion of modification, and other users' suggestions of modification.Please check. What else do we need to do?Thank you 1 2 3

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I believe I provided to you feedback earlier in my office hours, but do let me know if you have any questions. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:53, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello Professor Piotr K. I enrolled in Training/Students, Wikipedia's dashboard system course. Also, I learned courses such as 'Special Topics', 'Exercise', and 'Discussion' for additional credits, so please check. I am sorry for learning too late. Student Training Modules - Wiki Education Dashboard Jujuheee0408 ( talk) 19:32, 15 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Jujuheee0408 Dear student. It may be a bit challenging to try to start the major class project in the final week, but you are welcome to try. Please tell me which class or classes of mine you are taking. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:55, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, Professor. In my Collective Intelligence in Practice class, I want to translate these two Wikipedia articles Michael S. Hart From English to Korean Online hate speech From English to Korean. I'm so sorry I'm late... Jujuheee0408 ( talk) 20:30, 15 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Jujuheee0408 All right, topics approved, good luck. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:56, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, professor. I have completed the translation. Please check it. Thank you. 1 2

@ Jujuheee0408: Good progress, please publish your first article, and remember to proofread the content to avoid machine translation errors, which are a common reason to see submissions declined/deleted from Korean Wikipedia. -- _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:57, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

PS. After moving (publishing) your article(s), please add categories (see bottom of the original English articles for English categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the English article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:58, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Professor, I'm sorry that my Wikipedia account has been blocked to 6.29.Now that I can't finish my homework, is there any other way I can finish my homework or do some other homework? Liangyiqiao2004 ( talk) 05:22, 16 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Liangyiqiao2004 If your account was blocked at Chinese Wikipedia, read zh:维基百科:封禁申诉 and on your talk page at zh:User talk:Liangyiqiao2004. I will ping blocking Chinese administrator @ Manchiu since it seems possible there is an error in the block - your primary assignment is to translate the English article to Chinese Student and university culture in South Korea -> zh:User:Liangyiqiao2004/sandbox Student and university culture in South Korea 韩国学生和大学文化 - there should be no copyright problem here? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:06, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Liangyiqiao2004 To speed up your unblock, please also explain your situation at zh:维基百科:Discord交流群 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:32, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

I've checked the block and confirmed that it is correct. Admins including Manchiu (I believe) and me are willing to unblock once we are convinced that Liangyiqiao2004 understands why they got this block and how to avoid it. Translations from Wikipedias of another language does not violate copyright as long as they are properly tagged (see Template:Translated_page). It could be better for both your Liangyiqiao2004 and patrollers on zhwiki if their translations are done on draft pages or userpages. Translations under certain quality are subject to deletion on zhwiki while drafts and userpages are given way more patience. Tiger ( Talk) 13:57, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

PS. In the meantime, you can earn extra credit by doing constructive edits on English and Korean Wikipedias, as well as Wikimedia Commons or Wikivoyage. Please see syllabus for details of extra credit tasks. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:07, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Liangyiqiao2004: Hello, you were blocked on Chinese Wikipedia due to copyright violation. Please note that you should not copy content from external websites (e.g. Baidu Baike) and paste on the article (e.g. your edits on zh:豌豆黄, zh:艾窝窝 these articles). You can discuss your unblock request with admins on your user talkpage on Chinese Wikipedia. Thanks.

cc @ Tigerzeng: fyi. SCP -20 00 13:05, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Liangyiqiao2004 Please respond to this on your zh wikipedia page, and to speed things up, please WP:ECHO the admins there. You can try to finish the assignment until June 26th. There is still enough time to resolve this matter. Good luck. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:42, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor. This is the Wikipedia editing task I have completed. Please review this and this. Thank you. Hayoung1 ( talk) 12:21, 16 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Hayoung1 Good progress. Your translations look good and are close to being finished, very good. For articles that exist on English but not Korean Wikipedia, please use ko:틀:임시링크

Make sure to include full bibliographical references for books and other sources cited at the bottom of your article.

After addressing the above, you can publish (move) your articles. After moving (publishing) your article(s), please add categories (see bottom of the original English articles for English categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the English article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:05, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, professor.

I revised it to reflect the feedback and completed 황색언론 and 뉴욕 타임스.

Thank you. Hayoung1 ( talk) 18:37, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Hayoung1 Good. Please monitor your articles over the next few days to see if there is feedback from the Korean reviewers. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:01, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Dear Professor,I'm SU YIQI, in the 'Collective intelligence' class.I did my editing work in Chinese Wikipedia, please check it on my homepage. https://zh.wikipedia.org/?title=Special:%E9%A6%96%E9%A1%B5&source=personaltoolslink&namespace=4 SU YIQI ( talk) 13:39, 16 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ SU YIQI I am afraid that link does not take me to your homepage. Please provide a working link for me to review. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:06, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Please check my editing records on this page. https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%BC%A0%E8%BF%9C_(%E6%AD%8C%E6%89%8B) SU YIQI ( talk) 10:52, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ SU YIQI I see now, looks good. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:44, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor, I have translated the article " Cultural impact of TikTok" into Chinese in my sandbox, please check it. WYRRRR ( talk) 13:49, 16 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ WYRRRR Well done. You can publish (move) your articles. After moving (publishing) your article(s), please add categories (see bottom of the original English articles for English categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the English article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:06, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Ok.Professor. Good evening, I have moved the article and linked it to the English article. Please check it. WYRRRR ( talk) 11:08, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ WYRRRR I see now, looks good. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:45, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Good evening, professor，I am a student participating in the Collective Intelligence in Practice courses.

I have completed ten edits on Wikipedia this week, please check.

Wishing you a pleasant day! 왕예화 ( talk) 14:43, 16 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ 왕예화 Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:07, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor, I have translated the article " zh:奇虎360相关争议" into English in my sandbox. Please check it. WYRRRR ( talk) 01:35, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ WYRRRR Good, you are almost finished. Below are issues to be fixed:

Some of the content in your article is missing references - please add them. If they are also missing from the original Chinese article, you can add them there as well for extra credit.

If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link - for example this is how you should link to zh:瑞星 and zh:快视频

After that, you can publish (move) your articles. I recommend the following name Criticism of Qihoo 360:

After moving (publishing) your article(s), please add categories (see bottom of the original English articles for English categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the English article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:17, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, professor I added references and intermediate language links. Could you check it out for me? Can I move this article out now? WYRRRR ( talk) 13:27, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ WYRRRR Very good. Now you can move the article, add categories and link it to the zh wiki. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:48, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello,Professor. Good evening, I have moved the article and linked it to the Chinese article. Please check it. WYRRRR ( talk) 10:39, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ WYRRRR Good job _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:11, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Dear Professor, I am Huang lingxuan a student of Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia. I have done English Wikipedia edits and Chinese Wikipedia edits about 250 times in total. And I have modified the problem of Hua you mentioned last time.Please check. Thank you. Hhhlx ( talk) 02:19, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Hhhlx Good. See Zhou Fang (Tang dynasty) where reviewers have marked some parts that require citations or clarifications. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:18, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Good afternoon professor, first of all, thank you for your reply. I added some links in the article, and answered the administrator's questions and modified the relevant questions, thank you. Hhhlx ( talk) 16:30, 18 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Hhhlx Good, but please fix the links - many go to wappass.baidu.com which is not a website most people can access.

Check for other requests for sources or clarification - I still see several at large. For example here:

"He successively served as the Governor of Yuezhou and Xuanzhou. ^when?]"

and here

it is the earliest style in ancient China with the characteristics of a painting school and is highly praised by painters throughout history. ^{citation needed} _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:50, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Good afternoon, professor. I have completed and published the translated article as you requested. Please check it. Hanyuanyuan613 ( talk) 03:26, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Hanyuanyuan613 Good. Please try to add references to the parts that do not have them (last paragraph of 'History and culture' and middle paragraph of 'Customary form') _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:23, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Good evening professor, I have added some references appropriately, please check. Hanyuanyuan613 ( talk) 12:20, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Hanyuanyuan613 I still see parts that are unreferenced. To help you, I've marked them with "citation needed" template inline. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:52, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Good evening, Professor. Thank you very much for your help. I have revised the article, please check it. Hanyuanyuan613 ( talk) 10:04, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Hanyuanyuan613 You need to add references to the parts that do not have them. All I see is minor rewording that still results in parts of the article being unreferenced. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:03, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Good evening, professor. I don't know how to add citations to some Chinese abbreviations, such as "dragon through flowers"（龙穿花）. So I changed it to a description of the meaning of the word. And the sentence "exudes a unique charm" means that the iron flower has unique characteristics, which are displayed in front of the audience. How should I add citations to this sentence? Hanyuanyuan613 ( talk) 16:44, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Hanyuanyuan613 You should check which of your existing sources confirms those facts, such as says that the iron flowe has unique characteristics, and add it to the relevant sentence. If none of your current sources contain that assertion, you need to find a new source to add or remove that sentence as unverifiable. See also Wikipedia:Verifiability _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:51, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

I have made appropriate modifications and added some citations. Please check it, professor. Hanyuanyuan613 ( talk) 11:19, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Hanyuanyuan613 Well done _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:11, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Thank you very much, professor. Hanyuanyuan613 ( talk) 15:49, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Good afternoon professor, I am a student of class Collective Intelligence. We have perfected and published it as per your request. This is our final result presentation. English Wikipedia & Chinese Wikipedia. Please check it. Thank you. AYAO32269 ( talk) 04:16, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ AYAO32269 Well done, your articles look good. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:30, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Good afternoon, professor. This is our article, which has been completely revised. Please check.

This is an article translated from Chinese into English: Death of Li Keqiang

This is an article translated into Chinese in English: 韩国的性 Muqing112233 ( talk) 04:59, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Muqing112233 Well done, your articles look good. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:32, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor. I am a student of daily life and social structure. My academic number is 2023025414.This is my Wikipedia assignment.I'd like to ask you how to insert English pictures, but the pictures can't be inserted.And there's something else to add.Please check, thank you! https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wsw1357/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92 Wsw1357 ( talk) 05:38, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Wsw1357 To use a picture, click "add image" on Chinese Wikipedia and add the picture name, or copy the code from "use this picture" option from the image page. You should be able to use File:Censorship of Tik Tok.svg and File:Banning of TikTok on state devices in the United States.svg on Chinese Wikipedia without any problems, although you may have to ask Chinese experienced editors on how to copy the advanced caption (legend) code from English - I recommend doing so here: at zh:维基百科:Discord交流群

After that, you can publish (move) your article. After moving (publishing) your article, please add categories (see bottom of the original English articles for English categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the English article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:35, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor.I have successfully inserted this photo through your explanation.But for the last link, I don't have this option because I implemented the wrong upload a few weeks ago and the administrator has restricted my permissions on this. Can you delete this permission?Or maybe there are ways to solve it. 211.36.149.43 ( talk) 05:38, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Just driving by because this edit triggered the edit filter, which I am patrolling, but you seem to be logged out, which is uncommon for a student editor. Maybe fix that? Also IP editors can't upload images if I'm correct. Anyways, I'm sure that if an image is protected from being uploaded, I'm sure people with appropriate permissions can do it. Also a drive by note that I've modified the archiving interval for this page since it's getting too laggy to patrol. ABG ( Talk/Report any mistakes here) 05:50, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ AlphaBetaGamma Student forgetting to log in - not as uncommon as you think :P _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:58, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Well I've encountered problematic student edits before, but they're more uncommon than you think, as much as an IP forgetting to log in during a discussion and causing a patroller to revert the comment because they thought a completely different person was replying. I had to get an administrator to protect an article from being made to prevent 4th recreation of CSD-worthy mess once, but that was about it. By the way, I've modified the archive date to 14d for the convenience of other people and myself as the page was getting too heavy, but I hope you don't mind. ABG ( Talk/Report any mistakes here) 06:05, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Oh well. Anyways, @ Wsw1357, I'm going to intervene but only autoconfirmed users can upload messages in Wikipedia and you have 9 edits to both ZH and EN versions, which regrettably is not enough for the status. ABG ( Talk/Report any mistakes here) 06:10, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ AlphaBetaGamma Sure. I was trying to keep more content here on the off chance some students would read it and learn from my comments to others, but, a, I've never seen any indication this happens, and b, yeah, this page is too big and I am having trouble loading it myself, so - good call. Cheers, _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:42, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Wsw1357 You will need to publish (move) your article before you can link it to the English article. Please publish it first, then link it. Hopefully this will fix the issue you are having. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:01, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Hanyangprofessor2Professor, I don't have the option to move, which means I can't publish, I can only publish in my own sandbox.I tried but couldn't find a move option.If I can't publish it means I can't join the link, what should I do with the tasks I did earlier? Wsw1357 ( talk) 06:47, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Wsw1357 I see. In that case, you need to ask for help from Chinese Wikipedia editors with advanced permission - see instructions here: zh:Help:页面重命名 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:55, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, Professor.

I would like to inform you that I have uploaded the main project for 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' course.

My articles have been completed since about a month ago.

1. the article "Education in India" translated from English to Korean, you can check it on here.

2. the article "Education in England" translated from English to Korean, you can check it on here.

Please check them out and give me your feedback.

※ In addition, after taking the quiz in the Quiz tab on the LMS, I tried to retake the quiz to correct the content, but the content of the quiz item changed. Is there any problem in this case?

(I have already submitted the assignment)

Thank you. Soongki ( talk) 09:52, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Soongki Good. Please monitor your work to see if there is any feedback from Korean editors over the next few weeks. Your LMS issue should not affect your grade. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:53, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello. Professor. I am Kim minjun taking Collective intelligence class. I finished my main wiki project.

Main topic 1 - 러시아의 우크라이나 침공에 대한 허위 정보

Main topic 2 - 중국 사회 신용 제도

Also, i made extra wiki translation to KR.

Extra credit wiki topic 1 - 마틴 브라이언트

Extra credit wiki topic 2 - 멘체스터 테니스 및 라켓 클럽

Please check it. Thanks. I also finished my Blog post. KMJ0521 ( talk) 10:34, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ KMJ0521 Very good. Please monitor your work to see if there is any feedback from Korean editors over the next few weeks. Your extra credit wiki topic 2 needs WP:CATEGORIES - please try to add some (see English article for ideas) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:59, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, professor. I would like to inform you that I have uploaded the main project for 'Everyday Life and Social Structure' course. Originally, I was going to translate the Promotion of anorexia and Film censorship articles from English to Korean, but someone had already translated the film censorship article almost completely, so I translated the gaps in the Korean translation of the related article, Cinema of Japan, from English to Korean. To summarize, I translated the promotion of anorexia and cinema of Japan articles from English to Korean. The translated documentation is here. [ [1]], [ [2]]

Thanks. Cookinu ( talk) 11:26, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Cookinu Well done. Please monitor your work to see if there is any feedback from Korean editors over the next few weeks.

Since your second translation is relatively short, perhaps you could translate another short topic from English to Korean? You can chose any topic you like (anything you find interesting). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:01, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Good evening, professor，I am a student participating in the Collective Intelligence in Practice courses.

My team member @ TMXX0818 and I have already published the translated article. This is my published article, please check it. This is my team member @ TMXX0818's published article, please check it.

Have a nice day！ 왕예화 ( talk) 14:49, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ 왕예화 Well done, your articles look good. Please monitor them over the next few weeks to see if there is any feedback _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:02, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor, I am a student of your Sociology of Everyday Life class and Collective Intelligence in Practice courses studies, and I have completed two translations of Wikipedia,

I have translated the article " zh:豫章书院修身教育专修学校" into English in my sandbox.

I have translated the article " Copyfraud " into Chinese in my sandbox,

please check it. Sephyy ( talk) 15:31, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Sephyy Regarding your English article, it looks good but we need some fixes:

• If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link . A sample term to link in this way is zh:豫章書院 (南昌), but there are others - please compare Chinese text to English and see what is missing
• references 13 and 14 seem incorrect ( "Sina Visitor System".)
• some content is unreferenced. You can either remove it or add references to it for extra credit (ex. "
  • In May 2018, "Zimu", one of the main whistleblowers of the Yuzhang Academy incident, attempted suicide.
  • In April 2019, the company's name was changed from "Yuzhang Academy" to "Tangyuanwen".)

Regarding your Chinese article, it seems ready. You can publish (move) it. After moving (publishing) your article(s), please add categories (see bottom of the original English articles for English categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the English article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:10, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello Professor,

I have corrected two citation errors and expanded the cross-language links. Following your suggestions, I have added new references 19 and 20.

Both articles have now been moved.

Yuzhang Academy Self-cultivation Education School

版权欺诈

Please review.

Thank you. Sephyy ( talk) 17:12, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Sephyy Good. Please monitor your work over the next few weeks to see if the reviewers mark any issues for fixing. The Chinese article already has one request at the top, from @ 暁月凛奈 - perhaps you can ask that user for more detailed feedback on what needs to be fixed. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:58, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Good evening, professor，I am a student participating in the Collective Intelligence in Practice courses.

I have completed ten edits on Wikipedia this week, please check.

Wishing you a pleasant day! 왕예화 ( talk) 15:37, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ 왕예화 Good. When uploading images, please remember they should be your own work. Please add categories to your images - some are missing them. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:12, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Good evening, Professor.

I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses.

Here's my Wikipedia editing assignment for the week, which totalled over 20 edits. Please check it, thank you. CHENG SHIYI ( talk) 16:09, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ CHENG SHIYI Good job _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:13, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

The Korean translation of the 'Censorship of Tickettok' article has been added and the translation has been completed! Please check! I've completed both of them. Are you done with the Wiki part project? /info/en/?search=Censorship_of_TikTok Huejyi ( talk) 07:40, 18 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Huejyi Your translations look good and are close to being finished, very good. For articles that exist on English but not Korean Wikipedia, please use ko:틀:임시링크 (you don't need to fix this in references, only in the main text). Please monitor your article to check for feedback from Korean editors. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:14, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor, these are the 15 blog posts I have completed this semester. Please review them. Thank you very much. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8 .9. 10. 11. 12. 13. 14. 15 Jzhdylb ( talk) 09:24, 18 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Jzhdylb Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:15, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Good evening Professor! I am a student of the Collective Intelligence and Wikipedia course, Zhang Linyue.

1.Here is a link to all my blog content.

2.Here's a link to my all weekly extra Wikipedia edit.

3.This is a link to the final results of my articles<中國古典詩詞>.

4.This is the link to my group member article<Chinese Academy of Cultural Heritage> final results.

Please check! Thankyou! AYAO32269 ( talk) 16:14, 18 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ AYAO32269 Well done. Can you add an image to Yanjin huoshao? It sounds tasty :) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:18, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Good evening, Professor. I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Sociology of Everyday Life aka Everyday Life courses. Last week, I submitted two translated articles and asked you questions in class. In the end, I completed the revisions to those two articles. And my third article was deleted, so I added some new references. This time it was not deleted, please check.

First article: Hangzhou daily zh to en

Second article: 中国对日本文化的影响 en to zh

Third article: history of Chongqing zh to en ZHANGQI1066 ( talk) 16:18, 18 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ ZHANGQI1066 I am afraid many of the references you have added are not good. References 11-14 are just meaningless text like "Reference for Ming Dynasty's control over Chongqing." - where is the actual reference? Links for references 21-32 to seem broken or lead to unrelated articles. Please fix them all, then format them so that they have correct metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). Currently they look like they've been generated by a hallucinating AI.

In addition, your article (history of) needs some improvements in its linking structure.

1) Some links you added are to Wikipedia:Disambiguation pages like Yuzhou. Which Yuzhou did you mean? To identify and fix the problem, go to your Preferences and activate the gadget called "Display links to disambiguation pages in orange". After you save your preferences and refresh (reload) your article, the wrong links will be in orange. Please fix them.

2) If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link (ex. Shannan West Circuit or Kuizhou Road). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:25, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

ok！I will correct it right away. Since there are a lot of parts that are in our national history textbooks, I didn't think the part about the Ming Dynasty needed any special detail. Sorry I will zai ci for the modification. I used ai in the revision process, because this article originally had English content, only due to the fact that the Chinese translation is very much after. So I used ai to combine my revised content in the sandbox with the original English of this article. This process may have caused a lot of errors, which I will fix right away. 14.34.103.171 ( talk) 09:32, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

I have completed the modifications. Firstly, regarding the reference citations of 11-14, I have removed some of the text and references, and changed the text references that I believe can continue to be retained into the form of external link references.

Secondly, I have made modifications to the citation section of 21-32. Due to some of the original citations being related to Dai Li, I have replaced those citations with a unified format and removed unnecessary ones. And regarding the reference to the Anti Japanese War section, my original text was deleted, so I found the link to this book on Amazon. I am not sure if this is feasible. And I had a link before that described an article about the North Korean government in Chongqing, but after clicking on it, it was an article about insects, and I also made modifications to this section.

Due to the fact that there have been English articles on this topic before, but the English section is only about one tenth of the Chinese section and the content does not overlap. So I have many problems when transferring translation content from Shahe to specific web pages. I asked AI if they could help me sort and combine my translated article and original text in a reasonable order, but this caused many citation issues. I'm sorry for the result.

Regarding the structural issues of the article:

1) I have completed the identification of 'yu zhou' and searched again for the most suitable website, so I did not use the method you proposed. I hope you can take a look at my results. And the specific Chinese characters for 'yu zhou' are mentioned in the next paragraph of the original text, so if you think it is necessary, I can make changes to the article and remind readers here.

2) I have completed this task, please check. ZHANGQI1066 ( talk) 14:55, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ ZHANGQI1066 Good job fixing the errors. AI can be a very useful tool but as you can see it can also make many errors, and we need to supervise it carefully. It looks much better now. Well done _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:18, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor, these are two Wikipedia articles that I have edited. Please review them. Thank you very much. 1， 2 Jzhdylb ( talk) 16:45, 18 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Jzhdylb Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:26, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Good afternoon, Professor.

I am a student in both the Collective Intelligence in Practice and Introduction to Information Sociology courses,CHENG SHIYI.

I have come to report to you the results of all my assignments this semester.

1.I have translated Organic food culture into Chinese 有机食品文化 and have posted it.

2.Here are all the Wikipedia editing assignments for this term.

3.Here are the blogs I've written about this term's Collective Intelligence in Practice course.

4.Here are the 16 comments I have made on blogs written by other students this term in the Collective Wisdom in Practice course: 15.1, 15.2, 14.2, 13.2, 12.2, 11.2, 10.2, 9.1, 8.1, 7.1, 6.1, 5.1, 4.1, 3.1, 2.1, 1.1.

5.Here is my group member @ Zhongxxin who has translated 中国史前文化 into English Prehistory of China and posted it.

6.Here are the blogs I've written about this term's Introduction to Information Sociology course.

7.Here are the 26 comments I have made on blogs written by other students this term in the Introduction to Information Sociology course： 15.2, 15.1, 14.2, 14.1, 13.2, 13.1, 12.2, 12.1, 11.2, 11.1, 10.2, 9.2, 9.1, 8.2, 8.1, 7.2, 7.1, 6.1, 5.2, 5.1, 4.2, 4.1, 3.2, 3.1, 2.2, 2.1.

Also, I contributed in wikivoyage and wikimedia for extra credit.

Please check the above assignments and I would appreciate it if you could give me advice. CHENG SHIYI ( talk) 11:06, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ CHENG SHIYI Well done, your wiki assignments look good. Please double check them to see if any feedback from reviewers is given over the next few weeks. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:22, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Good evening, professor，I am a student participating in the Collective Intelligence in Practice courses.

1)I have translated the English version of Health in North Korea into the Chinese version and released it.

2)This is my team member @ TMXX0818's published article, please check it.

3)This is the English Wikipedia that I edited this semester, and this is the Chinese Wikipedia.

4）This is all the blogs I have written this semester.

5）Wikipedia Extra Credit Photography Challenge：I have completed Photo challenge/2024- April - Flames，and Photo challenge/2024 - April - Vertical lines

Wishing you a pleasant summer vacation！ 왕예화 ( talk) 12:14, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ 왕예화 Well done, , your wiki assignments look good. Please double check them to see if any feedback from reviewers is given over the next few weeks. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:26, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, professor! I'm Jeongha Ahn and I'm taking the Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I've finished editing deadline 3 and 4. Please check it! Thank you.

Deadline3 here

Deadline 4 here Jeongha1 ( talk) 12:34, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Jeongha1 In here, please note that terms in headings are not usually linked, and links should go to other Wikipedia articles, not wiktionary. I recommend that you expand ko:문화 충격 directly, while keeping in mind that only referenced content can be added. Unreferenced content (or poorly translated content) may be removed by reviewing Korean Wikipedia editors, and it will not count for class credit - so make sure to add references together with your translations, and to proofread them carefully. Good luck! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:28, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello Professor, I am Kim Min-jee, academic taking Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I am attaching an article, so I would appreciate it if you could check it and give me feedback.

[3] https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/courses/Hanyang_University/Sociology_of_Everyday_Life_(2024)/students/articles/Minis707 Minis707 ( talk) 12:51, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Minis707 I am afraid the links you provided above are broken. Please link your articles here directly and double check that the links work from this page, then I'll provide feedback. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:30, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

사용자:Minis707/연습장2 - 위키백과, 우리 모두의 백과사전 (wikipedia.org)

https://ko.wikipedia.org/?title=%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90%3AMinis707%2F%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5&wvprov=sticky-header Minis707 ( talk) 13:19, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Minis707 Good progress. Please finish your translation ASAP (for example, your Korean article on Overgrazing is missing more than half the references). Information overload is also missing many. Once you are done, you can move (publish) your article. Then please add categories (see bottom of the original English articles for English categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the English article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list). After that, please update me linking to your published articles, and monitor them to see if there is any feedback from Korean reviewers. In particular, make sure to proofread your work correctly to remove any errors from machine translation; too many errors can result in your article being deleted and the assignment failed. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:03, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

I submit Deadline 7. Before submitting my final assignment, please give me feedback. Thank you

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Seohyun_S/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Seohyun_S/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A52 Seohyun S ( talk) 13:58, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Seohyun S Please double check feedback from the last time; ko:사용자:Seohyun S/연습장 still has some unnecessary text in English at the bottom, which I pointed out before. After you fix the issues I raised last time, you can publish your articles (make sure to add categories and connect your published articles to English originals). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:32, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, Professor. I am a student in the Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I would like to report my final progress: 1. I have successfully published my article. It has been rated as Start-Class articles. And the language link has been added. Please check. Although there are still some shortcomings. I will work hard with the Wikipedia administrator to revise it. Thank you for your valuable suggestions on this article.

2. I have also completed all the extra credit activities for the blog. Please check it.

3. I will edit some additional English Wikipedia. The main edited article is this. Please check it.

Thank you for your help this semester. Thank you very much. Professor, you have worked hard. Lihaochang678 ( talk) 15:18, 19 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Lihaochang678 Well done. Please note that several Chinese editors have reviewed your work and some have asked for additional fixes, you can see who they are here. I recommend you contact them on their talk pages and ask for detailed feedback.

Regarding your additions to the English article here, remember that all content added should be referenced, otherwise it can be removed form Wikipedia and will not count for course grade. Please add references to the content that is missing it to ensure your effort is not wasted. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:35, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

OK, professor, I understand. Thank you for your advice.

1. I have communicated with those administrators. I basically know where the problem is. We will work together to revise this article.

2. I will continue to add some references to the additional edited Wikipedia. And make appropriate changes.

Thank you Lihaochang678 ( talk) 08:16, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Lihaochang678 Good. Please keep me updated about your progress. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:04, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor, these are my two article translations 1 HAHAHAHAHA_(Chinese_program） please check, my blog has also been completed. and This is my next edit from Wikipedia, please check itThank you very much. 218.37.101.231 ( talk) 02:55, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Dear student @ Linziyu1823. Remember to sign ( Wikipedia:Signatures) your messages, otherwise you cannot be notified of my replies.

Your article (currently at HAHAHAHAHA (Chinese program）which is a bad title, due to wrong bracket and ambigious term in the parenthesis - it will be renamed shortly) has a number of problems.

First, you should have asked me whether this topic is a good one to translate - this is required in Deadline 2. I do not see that you have ever done so, and the article you have chosen is problematic. It does not appear to meet Wikipedia:Notability, because it lacks sections on awards (reviews) and reception (awards), which are used to demonstrate that the topic is important. You can rescue your article by adding such sections. For example of how this should look, see IPartment#Reception and Awards below, or much better Friends#Reception.

Please link your article to the Chinese article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list).

Please add Chinese name to the top of the article (see how it is done in iPartment).

Your article needs more blue links. Please compare it to the Chinese article and link all the important concepts (see Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking). If a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link.

Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:55, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Ok Professor, there is a question do I need to re-translate an article or improve this one? In addition, is my other translation OK?Please check it Linziyu1823 ( talk) 07:07, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Professor, I also translated another article, but it has not been published yet. Could you please check it? Linziyu1823 ( talk) 07:42, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor, the translations of my two articles are respectively

Czech Gothic architecture translated into Chinese 捷克建筑发展

中华文明五千年说into English Five thousand years of Chinese civilization

Please check it again. Thank you。 Linziyu1823 ( talk) 08:02, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Linziyu1823 Regarding HAHAHAHAHA (Chinese TV series) as I noted above, you need to show the importance of this topic by adding information on reviews and awards. Otherwise it will be deleted and will not count for much course credit. If you find such sources and add them to the article, please also say so at the relevant deletion discussion (a Wikipedia reviewer has already nominted that article for deletion due to lack of importance).

Regarding your other work. zh:捷克建筑发展 was deleted from Chinese Wikipedia by a Chinese reviewer @ Manchiu who explained the issues in their deletion comment (red box). Please read them carefully and improve your draft there so that the issues raised (ex. poor translation) are fixed before publishing it again.

I see you have chosen another topic for translation, Five thousand years of Chinese civilization. It is an good topic (notable) and I don't think it will be deleted. However, it has a number of problems that need to be fixed (as the Chinese article is simply not finished). Please format the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Chinese). Then you should add references to unrefenced paragraphs and sentences. The article is also pretty short. Please expand it using the following high quality sources: one, two. If you cannot access them, ask for help in our Hanyang ERICA library. You can also use Chinese sources such as the ones found here ( link). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:18, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor. I have done additional translation. Hope it can add points. Please check Linziyu1823 ( talk) 08:33, 24 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Linziyu1823 I'll update your grade shortly. Please publish your article. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:43, 25 June 2024 (UTC) reply

PS. Please let me know which class you want the points to be awarded; as you are taking two of my classes and both have room for the extra points. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:45, 25 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, professor. I have leave a feedback on user talk page /info/en/?search=User_talk:Chaekyo#feedback .Please chack it. Another thing. I'm very sorry that my final assignment was submitted to the wrong place( Final - Everyday Life Story). I sent an email to explain, but I didn't get a reply. I hope professor will understand, thank you. MouFengcoo ( talk) 05:06, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ MouFengcoo I will check your final issue soon. I hope the other student finds your feedback useful; please remember that assignments completed late are awarded only some of the points you'd get if you complete them on time. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:57, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, professor. I've added a few links and comments to Wikipedia's meda bias page. Please check. The link is here: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%A7%A4%EC%B2%B4_%ED%8E%B8%ED%96%A5 Thank you! 전진이 ( talk) 08:14, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ 전진이 That's fine for weekly extra credit, sure. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:19, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Professor, I may be in trouble, I had a problem with the article I posted, Chinese Fashion redirected to Chinese Clothing, the Chinese Fashion I wrote could not be named, and after being warned by the Wikipedia administrators I tried to move back to my home page but found that I could not do that either. I left a message on Wednesday but it didn't go out because of the internet, I'm sorry for the trouble, please show me how to solve it, thanks. /info/en/?search=User:Bai0926/Fashion_in_China Bai0926 ( talk) 14:46, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Professor, are you in your office on Friday? Can I come to your office and ask you this question? Bai0926 ( talk) 15:38, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Bai0926 I am afraid I am not in the office today.

According to the review at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Fashion in China. your article contained plagiarized or insufficiently rewritten content.

At this point I recommend that you try to merge the parts of the article that are referenced and not plagiarized into Chinese clothing, and to try to earn extra credit by translating some article(s) from English to Chinese Wikipedia, as we are running out of time to do further research on your chosen topic. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:26, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Professor, I have compared and blended the content of my article with Chinese clothing, check it out!

And edited 50 Wikipedia articles, check it out.

If I want to translate an article into Chinese, should I just find a random article or should I choose from the original topic? Bai0926 ( talk) 06:28, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Professor, I apologize for the many interruptions. But I would like to explain that I did not plagiarize others' content, my article and the Chinese clothing are not the same in terms of citing articles and content although they are both strung together with time development. You can compare and check. Bai0926 ( talk) 08:34, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Bai0926 Thank you for your explanation. Are you familiar with the page https://www.scielo.br/j/trans/a/T3zX3gNY7kR3bP8dmh7LTdr/ which according to the reviewers is the one some content was copied from?

Your contributions to Chinse clothing will be recognized as part of your main project, so your effort will not be wasted. As for translating content to Chinese, you can chose any content you want, although if you want some suggestions, how about this? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:12, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Professor, this page https://www.scielo.br/j/trans/a/T3zX3gNY7kR3bP8dmh7LTdr/ which I linked to in the content of my article, has been removed by the Wikipedia administrators.

I checked the translation assignment, is the score for this assignment an extra score or is it a score for my big assignment? It seems a bit difficult to complete in a short period of time.Also I have completed 20 more Wikipedia edits please check.

Looking forward to your reply. Bai0926 ( talk) 14:02, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Bai0926 Your current score is very good (A), so you would only need to do a small extra credit translation to get to A+. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:03, 23 June 2024 (UTC) reply

A short, referenced article on “ Dopamine,” or “ New Chinese style” might be a good idea, for example (500-1000 words). Or you could chose something else you find is enjoyable. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:04, 23 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor， This is all the blogs I write 1， 2， 3， 4， 5， 6， 7， 8， 9， 10 I found that /info/en/?search=Asylums_(book)#References has no Chinese translation, can I translate this into Chinese？ And,This is our group translation assignment, we modified them as per your request, can we publish it?  /info/en/?search=Draft:Notice_of_the_National_Press_and_Publication_Administration_on_Further_Strict_Management_and_Effective_Prevention_of_Minors%27_Addiction_to_Online_Games /info/en/?search=User:Babaibiaobin/sandbox Thank you Babaibiaobin ( talk) 14:55, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Babaibiaobin Well done, you can publish your artcles (move them to the mainspace - see Wikipedia:Moving a page and Wikipedia:Namespace).

And yes, you can translate Asylums (book) for extra credit, good choice. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:28, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Dear Professor. I'm LIU XINRUI of the collective intelligence course.The following is my homework for this semester.

1. Here are all my English Wikipedia editors.

2. Here are all my Chinese Wikipedia editors.

3. Here are all the blogs I've posted.

4. Here are the images I uploaded on Wikimedia Commons with the relevant tags and picture descriptions.

5.Here are the translations of two articles that I and my team member MU QING have completed. One is a Chinese translation into English. One is translated from English into Chinese. Both articles have been revised and published as recommended.

That's all I've done this semester.I hope to get your confirmation. Thank you for your help this semester. Thank you once again for your time and attention.Wishing you all the best and have a wonderful holiday! 1.241.68.131 ( talk) 19:54, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Muqing112233 Well done, I'll be calculating your grade in a short while and you can see if you need any extra credit then. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:32, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello Professor,

I am ZHONG XIN, a student in the Collective Intelligence in Practice course.（Wikipedia ID: Zhongxxin）

I will give you a report on all the course tasks I have completed this semester:

1. I have added a lot of new content to the article " 中国史前文化", and have translated the Chinese article into English ( Prehistory of China) and then published and revised it.

2. In this semester, I have edited the English Wikipedia more than 340 times (on average, more than 20 times per week), the Chinese Wikipedia more than 50 times, the Wikivoyage more than 20 times, and the Wikicommons more than 50 times.

3. This is a total of 17 blog posts I wrote this semester. In addition to the weekly blog assignments, there were also blog discussions in Collective Intelligence in Practice course. And I have commented on my group member @ CHENG SHIYI's blog post more than ten times.

4. I participated in the Wikipedia Extra Credit Photography Challenge in April.( 163. Hanyang University - ERICA Campus cherry)

5. I actively participated in class discussions during class and earned a total of 31 points.

6. This is my team member @ CHENG SHIYI, she has translated the article " Organic food culture" into Chinese( 有机食品文化） and has finished publishing it.

These are all the tasks I have completed this semester, please check them. I hope I can get some extra marks from these.

I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.

Thank you for your hard work this semester, Professor. Thank you very much for your constant teaching and help. Zhongxxin ( talk) 21:01, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Zhongxxin Very good, I'll be calculating your grade shortly, I am sure it will be good. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:50, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Thank you very much,Professor! Zhongxxin ( talk) 12:15, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, Professor. I am a student in the Everyday Life and Social Structure class.Here's my translation of Wikipedia. Check it out. [4]This Wikipedia is very new to me, so there are very many things that are not done well. The professor worked hard this semester, thank you. Orange-1203 ( talk) 22:24, 20 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Orange-1203 Regarding your Chinese article, it seems ready. You can publish (move) it. After moving (publishing) your article(s), please add categories (see bottom of the original English articles for English categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the English article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list)

But please keep in mind that if you are translating from English to Chinese for this assignment, you need to carry out TWO translations. Anarchism in Korea is one. What is your second one? If you have not chosen it yet, how about Anarchism in Poland? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:53, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor, I moved from English Wikipedia to Korean Wikipedia based on the feedback I received on Deadline 4, and I also added pictures and links. Additionally, I've completed all of Deadline 8. Please check. I'll attach the link below. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%ED%9A%8C_%EA%B3%84%EA%B8%89 https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%B2%95%EC%82%AC%ED%9A%8C%ED%95%99 Seungmilsm ( talk) 00:07, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Seungmilsm Good. Now please monitor your work over the next few weeks to ensure that any feedback from Korean reviewers is promptly addressed. Remember to proofread your translations to eliminate any machine translation errors, for example. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:54, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

I've finished editing the wiki. As you gave me the feedback on The Economist, I've added my editing to the Korean document, and I've also added a citation for it. Please give me your feedback. '이코노미스트' here and '일본의맥주' This is my page. Chaeyeong09 ( talk) 05:26, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Chaeyeong09 Good progress. Please expand ko:일본의 맥주 but remember to add references (unreferenced content may be removed from Wikipedia and will not count for class credit, see also Wikipedia:Verifiability - ko:위키백과:확인 가능).

And please monitor your work over the next few weeks to ensure that any feedback from Korean reviewers is promptly addressed. Remember to proofread your translations to eliminate any machine translation errors, for example. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:57, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

As the professor gave me the feedback, I changed the 'The Economist(이코노미스트)' to natural Korean after reviewing it to avoid machine translation. Regarding the 'Japanese beer(일본의 맥주)', I added my editing content to the original document and quoted it, and changed it to natural Korean sentence to avoid machine translation. Please check it. The Economist(이코노미스트) is here and Japanese beer(일본의 맥주) is here Chaeyeong09 ( talk) 17:52, 23 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Chaeyeong09 Well done. You are almost done. For articles that exist on English but not Korean Wikipedia, please use ko:틀:임시링크 to link articles from English Wikipedia. (for example, for :en:John_Ralston_Saul). See if there is any more content to translate from English for The Economist. I'll update your grade shortly _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:16, 24 June 2024 (UTC) reply

To accommodate the feedback, I linked the English wiki for the contents that are not in the Korean wiki regarding the 'economist'. Also, for more information, I added the part that corresponds to 'censorship'. Please check. here Chaeyeong09 ( talk) 08:36, 24 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Chaeyeong09 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:46, 25 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello Professor, I have completed half of the media bias wiki task. Please check! /info/en/?search=User:%EC%A0%84%EC%A7%84%EC%9D%B4/Media_bias#%EB%A7%A4%EC%B2%B4_%ED%8E%B8%ED%96%A5 전진이 ( talk) 06:28, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ 전진이 Good start, although you should have done so months ago, per our deadlines. Please try to finish your work ASAP, right now this is just a beginning that needs links and references and other advanced elements like images. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:40, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Wiki document editing task I translated 2 documents from English to Korean. 1. 1. 민주주의의 물결 ( https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%AF%BC%EC%A3%BC%EC%A3%BC%EC%9D%98%EC%9D%98_%ED%8C%8C%EB%8F%84 ) 2. 2. 라틴아메리카의 역사( https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%9D%BC%ED%8B%B4%EC%95%84%EB%A9%94%EB%A6%AC%EC%B9%B4%EC%9D%98_%EC%97%AD%EC%82%AC )

Originally, I tried to edit Korean translations on two topics: 1. The Wave of Democracy document and 2. The censorship document of Korean movies. 2. Someone else has already translated the censorship document of Korean movies into Korean, so I translated the document on "Latin America's History" as a Wikipedia-recommended editing document into Korean. I was going to visit the lab today Friday and talk to you in person, but I'm sorry to talk to you late because you didn't come today. If there's anything I need to change, please let me know Jeong dayean ( talk) 08:10, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Jeong dayean Your changed topic is approved.

However, your translations have a number of errors. You need to add references in the form of footnotes to appopriate places. For articles that exist on English but not Korean Wikipedia, please use ko:틀:임시링크 to link articles from English Wikipedia. Remember to proofread your translations to eliminate any machine translation errors, for example - your articles have already been tagged as having translation problems. Please correct the issues promptly; poorly translated articles can be deleted and that would negatively affect our assignment.

Some content in your articles have been already fixed by the reviewers - please study the changes ( 1, 2) and learn from them for your future writing. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:34, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hi Professor, I'm going to link you to all my work for this semester

Two group wiki articles；(Intensive animal farming) 集约化畜牧业 Happy Baby (animation) 开心宝贝

19 blogs； Blog Links

Extra weekly wiki edits for the semester； Contribution Links

Please check. I hope the professor has a nice vacation. LIYULUN ( talk) 10:05, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ LIYULUN Good job. To finish your English article, please Please the references so that they have all metadata: first and late name, date, publisher, title (in English as well as Korean).

There is also a potential problem with the review section: most of it comes from https://movie.douban.com/review/14024363/ . This seems like Wikipedia:User-generated content - what makes the reviewer 掌中萌虎 , a reliable source? Can you find reviews in newspapers, magazines and other reliable souces to improve this section? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:43, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Seohyun_S/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Seohyun_S/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A52

Submitting the Final Deadline. Please give me feedback. Thank you.:) :) Seohyun S ( talk) 13:08, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Seohyun S I am glad to see progress. Here are some final issues to fix:

Some of your links go to English Wikipedia.For articles that exist in English but not Korean, please use ko:틀:임시링크 to link articles from English Wikipedia.

Then please publish your articles. After moving (publishing) your article(s), please add categories (see bottom of the original English articles for English categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the English article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list).

And please monitor your work over the next few weeks to ensure that any feedback from Korean reviewers is promptly addressed. Remember to proofread your translations to eliminate any machine translation errors, for example. Poor translation can lead to your articles being deleted and that would negatively impact your grade, so please make sure to proofread them carefully before publication.

Please update me once your work is published. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:48, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Minis707/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A52

https://ko.wikipedia.org/?title=%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90%3AMinis707%2F%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5&wvprov=sticky-header

Submitting the Final Deadline. Please give me feedback. Thank you. Minis707 ( talk) 13:21, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Minis707 Good. Please publish your articles as I described in my previous feedback (moving them, adding categories and linking to the English original). And please monitor your work over the next few weeks to ensure that any feedback from Korean reviewers is promptly addressed. Remember to proofread your translations to eliminate any machine translation errors, for example. Poor translation can lead to your articles being deleted and that would negatively impact your grade, so please make sure to proofread them carefully before publication. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:51, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, Professor

I am LI MENGRU, a student in the Collective Intelligence in Practice course.

I have completed all the blog assignments on time, please check them out.

Thank you very much for your help this semester, which has helped me gain a lot. I wish you a happy holiday！ TMXX0818 ( talk) 04:27, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Ok! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:54, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, Professor

1. I discussed with the administrator. The administrator said that there are some unclear definitions in the English article itself. The administrator said: (The bigger problem is that the English version itself did not make it clear that when the media used the term "biohacker", they were referring to DIY biology in a broad sense or just body hacking in a narrow sense. In particular, the relevant reports of the Washington Post have a paywall, and it seems that it is impossible to verify without paying them a little money). So far, my translation has been completed. In terms of content, I will correct it with experts in this field based on the changes made in the English article.

2. My team member has also completed the translation. She sent it to you for inspection before. She also successfully published it. And completed the editing. Please check.

3. Professor, in order to facilitate you to check my blog directly. I added the link. Please check.

Thank you professor for watching. Lihaochang678 ( talk) 06:36, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Lihaochang678 Well done! Stop by my office next semseter if you want and I'll show you how to access Washington Post content. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:21, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

I am very willing to do so. It will be my honor. Learning more will also be a kind of improvement for me. Thank you, professor. You have worked hard. Lihaochang678 ( talk) 05:17, 23 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hi professor, I'm a student of your class 'everyday life and social structure'. I did the translation of two articles. https://w.wiki/7nm6 and https://w.wiki/ATKJ please check. Also, this is my blog links. Kimseoeun2023079825 ( talk) 12:32, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

This is my weekly editing up to this day. Here's my deadline 6. Kimseoeun2023079825 ( talk) 13:40, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Kimseoeun2023079825 Well done. Your grade is very good. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:10, 23 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor, we have published a translation of our article https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%A4%9A%E6%B0%91%E6%97%8F%E6%80%A7

/info/en/?search=Anti-Addiction_System_for_Online_Games

/info/en/?search=Notice_of_the_National_Press_and_Publication_Administration_on_Further_Strict_Management_and_Effective_Prevention_of_Minors%27_Addiction_to_Online_Games Babaibiaobin ( talk) 13:34, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Babaibiaobin Well done. Your grade is very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:11, 23 June 2024 (UTC) reply

But try to address the Wikipedia:Orphan problem affecting your two translations. Check what articles link to the Chinese articles, then try to find similar articles on English Wikipedia and add link to your new English translations in them.

See https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:%E9%93%BE%E5%85%A5%E9%A1%B5%E9%9D%A2/%E7%BD%91%E7%BB%9C%E6%B8%B8%E6%88%8F%E9%98%B2%E6%B2%89%E8%BF%B7%E7%B3%BB%E7%BB%9F and https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:%E9%93%BE%E5%85%A5%E9%A1%B5%E9%9D%A2/%E5%9B%BD%E5%AE%B6%E6%96%B0%E9%97%BB%E5%87%BA%E7%89%88%E7%BD%B2%E5%85%B3%E4%BA%8E%E8%BF%9B%E4%B8%80%E6%AD%A5%E4%B8%A5%E6%A0%BC%E7%AE%A1%E7%90%86_%E5%88%87%E5%AE%9E%E9%98%B2%E6%AD%A2%E6%9C%AA%E6%88%90%E5%B9%B4%E4%BA%BA%E6%B2%89%E8%BF%B7%E7%BD%91%E7%BB%9C%E6%B8%B8%E6%88%8F%E7%9A%84%E9%80%9A%E7%9F%A5 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:13, 23 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello Professor,

I am ZHANG ZEHUA, a student in the Collective Intelligence in Practice course.（Wikipedia ID: ZHANG0822ZH)

I will give you a report on all the course tasks I have completed this semester:

1. I have added a lot of new content to the article Etiquette in Asia#China

2. In this semester, I have edited the English Wikipedia more than 215 times  .

3. I have written 15 blogs this semester.

4.I actively participated in class discussions during class and earned a total of 15 points.

These are all the tasks I have completed this semester, please check them. I hope I can get some extra marks from these.

I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.

Thank you for your hard work this semester, Professor. Thank you very much for your constant teaching and help. ZHANG0822ZH ( talk) 16:02, 22 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ ZHANG0822ZH Well done, your grade should be good. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:14, 23 June 2024 (UTC) reply

1. This is my big assignment, Fashion in China. I've filled my post with Chinese Clothing because of the overlap problem with Chinese Clothing.

2. This is my blog content, please check it out!

3. This is my English Wikipedia .

4. for extra points, I created an entry for New Chinese Style and finished compiling it.

I'm sorry that I don't have an accurate memory of the number of POINTS gained from the class, so please confirm.

This is all I have done this semester, thank you for your help this semester and I hope to receive your approval. I wish you all the best! Bai0926 ( talk) 05:14, 23 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Bai0926 Well done, your grade should be very good now (A+). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:46, 23 June 2024 (UTC) reply

South Korean protest music

Vietnam War protest music

I originally added a Korean translation to the article. Posting completed. Please check. Thank you. :) Seohyun S ( talk) 06:16, 23 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Seohyun S It seems to me that you published obsolete versions of your work. ko:사용자:Seohyun S/연습장 is superior to ko:한국_민중가요 and ko:사용자:Seohyun S/연습장2 to ko:베트남 전쟁 시위 음악 Vietnam War protest music (which also has an incorrect title). Please double check and publish the correct versions of your articles, and please finish the translation (for example, ko:사용자:Seohyun S/연습장2 has 18 references, Vietnam War protest music has 22). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:03, 23 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello Professor,

I am LI PEIYU, a student in the Collective Intelligence in Practice course. I would like to report on all the course tasks I have completed this semester. Here is a summary:

1. I have translated two articles. Female infanticide in China Anti-Chinese sentiment in Korea

2. Here is the content of my blog.

3. I have edited both English and Chinese Wikipedia pages.

4. I actively participated in class discussions and scored 48 points.

5. Here are the photos I uploaded.

Please confirm. I am very grateful for your guidance this semester and hope to receive your recognition. I would be deeply appreciative.

Thank you very much. Kikolipu ( talk) 09:53, 23 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Kikolipu Well done. Your grade is already very good (A). To imrove it further, try to address the issues noted by the reviewers in your article at zh:中国杀女婴现象 The reviewer of your article is @ Tokisaki Kurumi - you can ask them for feedback and additional review through their discussion page on Chinese Wikipedia. See also feedback you got at zh:User talk:Kikolipu _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:02, 23 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello Professor，This is the translation of my revised article. Please confirm it, and I would be very grateful for your guidance. Female infanticide in China Kikolipu ( talk) 12:49, 25 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Kikolipu Your article looks good. Try to link it from other articles (see Link to page on "Female infanticide in China" - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia for what articles list to it now) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:11, 26 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello Professor

Here are the 40 Wikipedia edits I made, please check them, thank you! [5] ZHANG0822ZH ( talk) 13:43, 23 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ ZHANG0822ZH Good, I'll award you extra credit for that shortly. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:25, 24 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, professor! I'm SANGROK KIM and I'm taking the Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I've finished editing deadline 6,7 and 8. Please check it! Thank you. https://ko.wikipedia.org/?title=%EB%AC%B8%ED%99%94%EC%82%AC%ED%9A%8C%ED%95%99&wvprov=sticky-header https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%83%9D%ED%99%9C%EC%9E%84%EA%B8%88 Sangrok02 ( talk) 14:59, 23 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, professor! I'm SANGROK KIM and I'm taking the Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I've finished editing deadline 8. I added the feedback and content that I gave you before. Please check it! Thank you. https://ko.wikipedia.org/?title=%EB%AC%B8%ED%99%94%EC%82%AC%ED%9A%8C%ED%95%99&wvprov=sticky-header https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%83%9D%ED%99%9C%EC%9E%84%EA%B8%88 Sangrok02 ( talk) 15:15, 23 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Sangrok02 Good progress, but some content of those articles is still not fully translated. Please ensure all is translated, included references (footnotes). Many references are not yet present in your translation. 생활임금 has 24, but the English version, over 90. (The other article is 11 vs 13) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:28, 24 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor, I have completed the editing task for Wikipedia and hope to receive an additional score. These are five Wikipedia articles that I have edited: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5. This is the article that I corrected and marked as incorrect: 6 7. Please review, thank you very much. Jzhdylb ( talk) 20:04, 23 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Jzhdylb Good, you should have enough extra credit for A+. However, please double check whether content you added to subculture article has been added to the most relevant place. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:32, 24 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Dear Professor,I have completed the task of translating the article from Chinese to English for extra credit. Please review it. Thank you！ Have a pleasant day！ ZHANGQI1066 ( talk) 12:04, 24 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ ZHANGQI1066 Well done, your grade in both classes should be A+ now. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:48, 25 June 2024 (UTC) reply

PS. Please try to address the Wikipedia:Orphan problem tagged in your new article by linking it from relevant other articles. See here for what Chinese articles link to the Chinese one, try to find them in English and add similar links _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:49, 25 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor. I'm Jeongha Ahn and I'm taking the Everyday Life and Social Structure class. I've finished editing deadline 5. I added a lot more content than what I edited on Deadline 4 and uploaded it supplemented. Please check it! Thank you. here Jeongha1 ( talk) 12:25, 24 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Jeongha1 You are now approaching the point your assignment should have reached in late April/early May. Remember the deadline to complete assignments is today. You have to finish translation, including adding blue links, properly formatted references and related media like images, and publish your work (see bottom of the English articles for English categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the English article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list). Remember to proofread your article, as content that is machine translated and not proofread will be quickly deleted from Korean Wikipedia, causing the assignment to fail. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:53, 25 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello, professor. I have completed all the tasks in Wiki and Task 4 for additional credits. 1. https://w.wiki/AUbb 2. https://w.wiki/AUbc 3. Task 4 was uploaded through lms, so please check it out. Thank you:)[User:전진이|전진이]] ( talk) 20:15, 24 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ 전진이 Good. To complete the assignments, please publish your articles (move them to mainspace, add categories and link it to the English original article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list).

I'll update your score with Project 4 score shortly. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:56, 25 June 2024 (UTC) reply

/info/en/?search=Culture_war#External_links

/info/en/?search=Media_bias#Further_reading

I also completed publishing my article at the very end of each wiki. 전진이 ( talk) 03:24, 25 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ 전진이 I don't see your content merged to ko:문화전쟁 and ko:매체 편향 which you were supposed to expand?

You need to copy your content from your sandboxes and merge it (integrate it) with the existing articles on Korean Wikipedia. Be careful not to remove any existing good content. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:18, 26 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor, I have edited two more Wikipedia articles because I want to achieve higher scores. Please review it, if possible, thank you very much! 1. 2. Jzhdylb ( talk) 06:38, 25 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Jzhdylb Well done, your score was updated yesterday. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:20, 26 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Thank you, Professor, for your review. However, my grades seem to have not been updated yesterday, and there have been no other changes since the last update from 93 to 98. I'm sorry to disturb your vacation and wish you a pleasant one. Jzhdylb ( talk) 03:09, 26 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hi professor, I'm a student of your class 'everyday life and social structure'.This is the three extra times I've posted the blog1, blog2， blog3，so hopefully I'll get some points in it, thanks. Orange-1203 ( talk) 09:31, 25 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Orange-1203 Ok - your score was updated yesterday. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:21, 26 June 2024 (UTC) reply

I translated this article from English to Korean. I will continue to fix and add the reference format today. 113.185.109.94 ( talk) 10:09, 25 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Good, I'll update your grade shortly _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:23, 26 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Unfortunately, while you have enough credits now for a passing grade, the system indicate you have insufficient attendance to pass. If you retake this class with me, you can get extra credit for your work that you submitted yesterday. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:26, 26 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor. I wrote four blogs for extra credits. Please understand that I used the 2023 blog I used last year because I couldn't access the 2024 blog. These are the blogs I wrote. 1 2 3 4 전진이 ( talk) 11:23, 25 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ 전진이 Ok, I will update your score shortly _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:27, 26 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor, I'm a student in your class 'everyday life and social structure'. I created 2 English Wikipedia articles, Wan Guopeng and Wang Ziwei. In addition, I also translated and expanded an English article from Chinese: The Tale of Rose. Please check it out. Hopefully, I can get extra credit, Thank you~~！

With the summer break approaching, I hope you have a restful and enjoyable time filled with relaxation and good health.

Well done, I'll update your grade shortly. Please remember to sign your wiki messages correctly (see WP:SIGNATURE), otherwise, you won't receive a notification when I reply. -- _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:33, 26 June 2024 (UTC) reply

OK, professor. Because I later modified the content and republished it, I accidentally deleted the signature information. I will pay attention to it next time. Thank you, professor. Wangtao626 ( talk) 03:04, 26 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor. I am a student in the course (Collective Intelligence in Practice: Understanding Wikipedia). This is an extra Wikipedia translation I made. Please check it out. Hope it can help me get extra credit in this course.Thank you. Linziyu1823 ( talk) 14:42, 25 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Linziyu1823 Good, please publish your article to receive credit. After moving it, please add categories (see bottom of the original Chinese articles for Chinese categories and try to add similar one to your article) and please link it to the Chinese article (see how at Help:Interlanguage_links#Links_in_the_"Languages"_list). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:37, 26 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Hello professor. I tried writing a little more blog additionally. Please review it. Thank you :)

blog blog2 전진이 ( talk) 15:00, 25 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ 전진이 One of your blogs is not in English, and it wasn't graded. I've updated your grade with your other recent submissions. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:38, 26 June 2024 (UTC) reply