Hi, I saw you changed many of the '|200px' to '|thumb' in List of military aircraft operational during World War II. You only changed some of them. Should I change them all to 'thumb', or change them back? -- The High Fin Sperm Whale 00:28, 13 May 2010 (UTC)
Why did you revert my trimming of the armament section? Most of that detail belongs in the class article, not the ship article. I'll be changing it back unless you can convince me otherwise. And all the armament revisions will be covered; I'd saved all that stuff for when I get to my planned sections on interwar and wartime modifications. However I'm perfectly willing to discuss the organization of this article if you have any better ideas.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 19:00, 20 May 2010 (UTC)
Hi, the page history of Parasite aircraft suggests that you are the main editor, at least recently. I have proposed moving it to Composite aircraft for two reasons, see discussion page. Do you have an opinion either way? — Cheers, Steelpillow ( Talk) 20:50, 25 May 2010 (UTC)
It's been beefed up a bit now, please don't delete an important topic such as side-by-side seating before it's had a chance to be fleshed out. It's an unusual configuration for high performance aircraft, but favored for training and electronic-intensive operations. Bachcell ( talk) 19:42, 16 June 2010 (UTC)
Have you ever heard that the RN ever had any particular skill at night-fighting? That's news to me and needs a citation if it's to remain in the article.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 21:54, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
Hello there. I've noticed that you've been helpeing me a bit with this article and my GAN for the Type IXA's. I was wondering, since Parsec cannot help me, would you mind being my co-nom in an ACR for SMS Zrinyi?-- White Shadows There goes another day 21:14, 30 June 2010 (UTC)
Your assertion that the former purported Dab is plainly and absurdly false in light of
WP:Stub -- it could even in fact be divided into several valid stubs if any of the crossings are inadequately covered -- so i assume you mean that nothing adequate to the title
History of crossings of the Rhine can be written. The proper action in that case is one of the deletion processes, not the discarding of
the creator's prose without due process. You may of course draw on that prose in getting to a Dab (tho see below w/in this contrib), which i applaud. In the meantime, i will restore my version when you seem to be done, splitting the edit history in the least confusing fashion to keep the original editor's revisions with the article until there is a decision about retention of it as an article. I will monitor it for a reasonable time, and if a deletion should be made, propose an edit-history-only merge back into the edit history of the Dab, and a soft-Dab to the Dab from
History of crossings of the Rhine (which is less likely to attract recreation of an article.
(IMO the content of a compliant Dab has the same copyright status as a telephone directory: the protections apply to the "work" (the Dab page) as a whole, but not to any of the individual entries, which may individually be freely copied w/o even attribution, so IMO the copyright underlying our copyleft is not relevant to the status of the Dab you are creating -- bcz a paraphrasing of a copyright-protected work is an original work for copyright purposes, breaking the chain of attribution at the point where you reduce each entry to a mere prose-free Dab entry.
(Still, courtesy and our copyleft policies counsel caution, and the attribution trail should IMO be maintained using at least an edit summary like "material extracted from
History of crossings of the Rhine has its edit history at that article, pending consideration of its deletion or merging its history back into that of this Dab. I can add that via a dummy edit to the Dab, if that confuses you or you're not interested.)
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Hello. This message is being sent to inform you that there currently is a discussion on Temple's reliability here. Regards Gun Powder Ma ( talk) 08:39, 11 August 2010 (UTC)
Hello Graeme. I have removed the clarify tag. There is no contradiction with it, the ETC 500 is the model name only. It does not mean that the rack can only carry 500lbs max. The number does not denote weight restriction. Dapi89 ( talk) 21:54, 13 August 2010 (UTC)
Absolutely. It’s an oversight I made. Will do it now. Dapi89 ( talk) 14:17, 14 August 2010 (UTC)
I added a REFERENCED explanation for who the faces shown in this episode may be. The Discontinuity Guide, published by Virgin Books in 1995, suggests that the faces may be younger faces of the first Doctor. This seems a valid contribution and is sourced. Certainly equal to the other sources which also provide speculative answers to who these faces may be. My edit was deleted with the comment that speculation has no place in the article. You have now selectively restored some speculation, but not mine. I don't see the difference. 71.146.29.93 ( talk) 09:14, 17 August 2010 (UTC)
It will simply be deleted by the editor who seems to have set themselves up as the guardian of all the Dr Who pages. 71.146.29.93 ( talk) 09:30, 17 August 2010 (UTC)
Dear Graeme, Thanks for taking an interest in the LCA article. I have not taken time to familiarize myself with all the style conventions on Wikipedia - you've no doubt noticed. One place you have altered an "a" to an "an" article before LCA. I've written the entire article using the article "a", so you may have some editing to do. I've been reading "a Landing Craft Assault" each time LCA comes up, and not "an el-see-ay". Anyway, where initialisms are concerned, in the USA this is an English usage decision that must be made by each writer (I don't know about British English or Wiki style guide). I'm going to change it back, but if I see you've gone through the whole article and made the change consistently sometime in the future, I'll not be fussed. Also, here is a question for you: the LCA is more of a Navy than a Military subject (LCA being Royal Navy craft). I've had someone change all my 0000 times to 00:00 times. Do you have an opinion? Do you know of a convention for WikiProject articles that are both military and ship? Thanks for any assistance. I've been somewhat surprised by how lonely this project has been. Regards, AmesJussellR ( talk) 19:28, 25 August 2010 (UTC)
Thanks for catching my error on the British patent number. Obviously I should be writing such things down instead of trusting my short-term memory. As to the article you linked to on Googlebooks not saying it was a motorjet, I agree entirely. I added that reference when I changed the page to read that this plane was a ducted fan. I believe the patents and articles written at that time establish this, as does Gibbs-Smith's later detailed treatment of the Coanda 1910. However This assertion has met with some resistance. I am currently engaged in a discussion on the aircraft engine talk page as to wether these patents can be used as evidence as to the nature of Coanda's propulsion system. The other side argues that these patents aren't germane because Coanda's plane was a jet which he never bothered to patent and that the plane's resemblance to these patents is entirely co-incidental. Romaniantruths ( talk) 03:56, 27 August 2010 (UTC)
I can't see what your were trying to achieve here. Why have you edited the image size of the ATC crest?, it was sized for a reason, you just made the article look untidy, the page has reverted as I cannot be bothered to go round chasing your edits. You are welcome to contribute but if you make a mess of it then expect a revert, I have also reverted the ATC Activities page as the the info box is relevant. Pandaplodder ( talk) 13:16, 27 September 2010 (UTC)
Lsorin ( talk · contribs) has asked for my help regarding the content dispute at Coandă-1910, which you are involved in. Without taking any sides, I have explained my actions on his talk page. — KuyaBriBri Talk 17:27, 1 October 2010 (UTC)
Ah, I'd missed that with regard to that category. Apologies, and thanks. - The Bushranger Return fire Flank speed 18:26, 14 October 2010 (UTC)
Hi. The only correct spelling for the island is Spitsbergen. It was discovered by the Dutch and is a Dutch name, so there is absolutely no reason to use the German spelling outside the German language. British authors have numerous times used the German spelling, ignorant of the fact that it is a Dutch name. And it only has a redirect from the German spelling because this mistake has been made several times. Note though, usage does not make it correct. And please ignore the Etymology section, written by British editors completely ignorant of the island and its history. They simply nitpicked sources and put whatever they wanted. Jonas Poole ( talk) 23:55, 15 October 2010 (UTC)
Hi, why remove the link to the photo of Weymann. Surely you could see that it was an addition to what you had put there, not a replacement? Would you put it back please. Eddaido ( talk) 07:40, 29 October 2010 (UTC)
Graeme, if I could find a photo I would put it up. I thought I had found one (your link, once mine) and all I did was let readers know where they could see it. Have you noticed that the new page I created (fabric bodies) from scratch receives much more than twice the attention of this biography and indeed this biography now gets double the attention it got before I tarted it up in May this year. Weymann 66 gets rather less than quarter of the attention of the car bodies. Please put back that link. Its the only pic we got!! Eddaido ( talk) 08:46, 29 October 2010 (UTC)
Please take special note that the reason the photo is important to me is that it shows Haitians he is possibly of local (African-American) stock which probably will be why he chose to live in France and not USA.
What might "encyclopaedic in tone" mean? I do not understand. Eddaido ( talk) 09:07, 29 October 2010 (UTC)
Graham, please have a look at the Discussion page on Charles Terres Weymann. Whoever supplied the info has gone back and deleted any identity to make it unsourced so I added the question which you have subsequently posed pn the actual page. If I could privide a source I would but as it seems to be entirely credible I have used the form of words "it is said" to indicate it is not an established fact, May I be directly rude to you within articles? Eddaido ( talk) 12:32, 29 October 2010 (UTC)
Please add the right template to Coanda-1910 if you understand what I mean. I don't really now all those bloody templates in Wikipedia.Thanks in advance!-- Lsorin ( talk) 21:20, 10 November 2010 (UTC)
Dear Graeme, Thanks for the attention to the Motor Landing Craft page. Do you know where an image might be found? I have only seen one; it is in the early pages of Brian Lavery's "Assault Landing Craft." According to the picture credits in the index the image belongs to him. Best regards, AmesJussellR ( talk) 14:43, 24 November 2010 (UTC)
The forum link shows the Motor Landing Craft! Second image I've seen of the beast. That would be perfect - if legal. The Science Museum MLC20 model is a Thornycroft 1938 design LCM(1). AmesJussellR ( talk) 15:18, 24 November 2010 (UTC)
Dear GraemeLeggett, You have done a great job on that page. But if you are interested I was cleaning up the ex links and I added a link of a video of the first Perth fitted with the COW 37mm and it shown being fired. And it explains which course the designer took to deal with recoil: ie either a muzzle brake or a very long recoil. If you watch the video you can tell which option was chose. Again, thanks for a great page. Jack
Jackehammond (
talk) 07:14, 27 November 2010 (UTC)
1. I totally disagree with you. In 2007 there was much talk on the PUC discussion page to no avail because there is no GOOD justification for taking all the pertinent information out of the tables. There was some suggestion for moving it to a new page or a subpage where people could find the information they seek. But that was not done then and I don't think you have any intention to do that.
2. In my opinion an encyclopedia is for providing information to those people researching a particular subject or area of interest. Providing the entire (which is the appropriate thing to do) information which includes the cited authority, issuing authority and complete text supporting the awarding of the award is encyclopedic. The only reason paper encyclopedias restricted article size was because of the cost of publishing. In a world of electronic encyclopedias size is a minor problem. When there are Wikipedia articles that amount to advertisements for computer games we should not be discussing eliminating historic information.
3. The entire citation often includes individual organizations down to section and platoon level who participated in the events leading to the heroic efforts for which they are being awarded. These individual units may not normally be organic to the larger organization and therefore not identified singularly. Which is another way we could list awardees, down to platoons and sections.
4. Finding the citations published by the government, either the Department of War/Navy or the Department of Defense or one of the subordinate services is not easy. The Pentagon Library is the only source that I am aware of to find this information.
5. I would gladly leave this up to the Military History WikiProject folks for determination. Meyerj ( talk) 00:00, 30 November 2010 (UTC)
Dear Graeme, I have come across another image of the MLC - http://www.seayourhistory.org.uk/content/view/457/610/1/0/ . I have no idea how to put images into the wikicommon. Do you know some saintly person who could make the miracle happen? I am lost as to the mechanics and the legality of it all.
The current article on LCT is covering a vast subject area. I was toying with the idea of a separate LCT(1) page. It has all the promise of exploring the background discussions that went into imagining this type of craft - all the others marks have their interesting stories, but their beginnings are pretty much "improvements were desired on the then current LCT design." What do you think? Regards, AmesJussellR ( talk) 22:22, 30 November 2010 (UTC)
Thanks Graeme. I can wait. I can even get back to what I really should be doing. I know nothing about finding images at the IWM site. Best regards, AmesJussellR ( talk) 00:52, 1 December 2010 (UTC)
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Hi, I'm polling editors active in the 1953 Iranian coup article on the issue of revising two sentences in the article lead.
The change is discussed here and reasons for the change also here
Hope you have time to give it a look see, BoogaLouie ( talk) 02:12, 15 December 2010 (UTC)
Graeme, I've been doing some image cleanup. What is File:AM vickers.JPG an image of? Is it a toy? Kelly hi! 20:19, 23 December 2010 (UTC)
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Hi, I'm doing another poll of editors active in the 1953 Iranian coup article on the issue of revising a phrase in the article lead. It's a repeat but I didn't explain it well in the first poll.
The reason for the change is discussed
here and is, briefly, that the sentence as is doesn't match the rest of the article, (and doesn't match most of the books that deal with US motivation in the coup).
The
US motivation section gives only one author (Abrahamian) who thinks the US leadership wasn't seriously worried about the possibility that Iran might become a communist country, while listing several who thought cold war motivation of the US was important.
An even more thorough examination of the sources dealing with issue is
here.
Hope you have time to give it a look see, -- BoogaLouie ( talk) 01:21, 19 January 2011 (UTC)
Hi, could you take a look at Talk:Ground attack aircraft#Requested move? -- Kubanczyk ( talk) 19:44, 23 January 2011 (UTC)
Aliwiki (
here) and Kurdo (
here) have both made complaints about the proposed changes that I think have merit, so I'm
revising the change so that Iran falling under the influence of the expansionist Soviet Communist "empire"[7] refers to the US administration point of view and not a statement of fact.
The to-be-revised text and revised text are in italics. --
BoogaLouie (
talk) 17:45, 25 January 2011 (UTC)
Current wording
Proposed change
The reason for the change is the same as the original one and is discussed here
I know you didn't make any comment on my last attempt but I hope you will find this one is a true improvement. -- BoogaLouie ( talk) 01:05, 26 January 2011 (UTC)
Trying to get some commonality between projects. You can weigh in here. Marcus Qwertyus 08:41, 28 January 2011 (UTC)
Hi, Graeme! I just wanted to mention that informed input from all users is welcome at ANI. I'm not an admin, either, but I do contribute there frequently, trying to provide helpful information and (as I hope!) a calm/respectful take on issues presented. It's my impression that maybe half to two-thirds of the contributors there on any given day aren't admins, and don't have any personal involvement with the issues they comment on. Non-admin participation has always seemed welcome there, to me; no one has ever objected in the least. ( On the contrary, actually: I'm somewhat embarrassed to mention it, but our illustrious founder once made an extremely positive comment about a lengthy analysis I posted there, and another user gave me a barnstar for my analysis of a different issue at ANI. ) I do try to think carefully and understand the relevant issues before I express an opinion that opposes that of any admin, of course, but it's been my strong impression that my participation has been entirely welcome, as I'm sure your thoughtful contributions would be as well. Best regards, – OhioStandard ( talk) 02:06, 29 January 2011 (UTC)
A file that you uploaded or altered, File:Motorcycle engine configs.PNG, has been listed at Wikipedia:Files for deletion. Please see the discussion to see why this is (you may have to search for the title of the image to find its entry), if you are interested in it not being deleted. Thank you. Kelly hi! 20:58, 5 February 2011 (UTC)
Hello There -
I didn't remove the discussion I just posted it twice by mistake and removed the dupe! :)-- Connorthomha ( talk) 21:21, 7 February 2011 (UTC)
I trying to get rid of that when 3 Brits were killed by Us in august 2007 when in fact that it was a Brit-on-Brits Friendly Fire. the British FAC gave the wrong coordinates to the the pilots which accidentally drop it on 3 Brits. Right now, he's facing charges. So it's not the pilots fault. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Paulioetc19 ( talk • contribs) 02:18, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Hi. i tried contacting the CBC contact about this two weeks and no reply at all. When I also found this the Korean War, "Canadian officer Dan Loomis called in mortar fire to help Canadian troops being pursued by Chinese forces, but the fire hit his own men after he mistakenly transmitted the wrong map co-ordinates". But i don't know what kind of battle they are talking about and how many were killed in this? does anyone know? i tried look for it everywhere and i can't seem to find one. http://www.cbc.ca/news/background/friendlyfire/fogofwar.html I also heard that the British(or Indian and British i think) 17th division during the retreat from Burma was repeatedly bombed by RAF planes causing hundred of casualties in the Irrawaddy River. Tried look for it and its still heard to find. can anybody answer me or something? Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Paulioetc ( talk • contribs) 00:12, 16 February 2011 (UTC)
as regardinf your comment about edward not being killed by friendly fire?
actually there is? wanna see? here
http://www.fijitimes.com/story.aspx?id=68040 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Paulioetc ( talk • contribs) 04:35, 21 February 2011 (UTC)
Hello user User:GraemeLeggett: I have restored the article's last version of anonymous user 82.44.98.11 for the following reasons: 1. Infobox "trivia" -- Why do you consider the actual names of the airline's 3 successive HQ buildings trivial? It names these buildings. Though I agree that such info is not absolutely essential in an airline info box, it doesn't distract the reader's attention (as opposed to unrelated/irrelevant details, ie trivia). 2. Adding timeframe and context to first sentence of intro -- By reading through this passage and looking at the accompanying info box itself it will be sufficiently clear to uninitiated readers that this company was sold to and ultimately absorbed into British Airways. Therefore, this re-phrasing adds no extra value. 3. Trimming descriptions of external links and removing possible hyperbole -- Conceding that the original author[s] could have phrased these in a more succinct way, they are nonetheless relevant. To make this clearer, let me give you this example: ... a Dan-Air Boeing 707 ... on the ramp at Berlin Tegel on X-mas Day 1971 ... the aircraft's colour scheme was the airline's 2nd livery (the 1st to be applied uniformly, fleet-wide); maybe, for you personally the info inside the round brackets may not seem to be very important but it is still correct, especially if you check this against the references cited in the article, incl. some only available in printed format (ie inflight magazines and other relevant hard copy publications); also, it certainly doesn't constitute hyperbole. 4. Trimming references -- I do agree that these could have been written a lot shorter and appreciate your effort to re-write them; however, the original author[s] must have had good reasons why they chose a particular style to cite references' and as long as they have been consistent in their chosen style of citation and it does include relevant details, then that's OK; also, when you do this please make sure that you re-check your edits before posting them on to the website to avoid having orphaned references, most probably as a result of mistakenly deleting [14] tags and/or square brackets (or forgetting to put them when completely re-writing a reference). 5. Style manual advising against use of scroll boxes for listing citations at end of article due to browser compatibility issues -- I am aware of this manual's existence and have actually read it; however, I do consider it a guideline to be applied with a common sense approach (as opposed to a strictly [to be] enforced, uniform rule; what I mean by this is that if you've got an article with say 10, 15, 20-30 or even 50-60 citations at the end, a scroll box is unnecessary; if, however, on the other hand, you've got more than 100, perhaps even 200+ citations at the end, a scroll box makes navigating the article definitely easier (regardless of any browser issues); and rather than "hiding" anything (the other, and in my opinion somewhat "specious" argument advanced in the aforesaid style manual against the use of scroll boxes to list citations at the end of articles), anyone who is familiar with the basics of computer use will know that the so-called "hidden" info can be accessed without difficulty by moving down on the scroll bar (the reason I'm making this assumption is that I don't want to give ammunition to those who say in public that Wikipedia is not serious and/or unreliable because they think it's too "dumbed down", which is why I'm not assuming that every reader of an article published in this media is a "dummy"); therefore, I'm kindly requesting you to take this into consideration in future before you decide to remove scroll boxes.
The 4 points made above equally apply to other articles where I saw you making similar edits
OK then. That's enough for today. Don't be discouraged by my specific criticisms of some of your recent edits; try to take it as constructive criticism and continue having a great time improving Wikipedia articles. Devanahalli2008 ( talk) —Preceding undated comment added 15:52, 21 February 2011 (UTC).
1. The specific locations of an airlines HQ or even its registered address (whether defunct or not) go beyond the needs of an encyclopaedia. Further the infobox is for summary information and detail is to be avoided. It can go within the main article but does not belong in the infobox.
2. Given the poorly laid out and overburdened with refs lede of the article. It's important to get the first sentence right until the rest can be addressed. Not everyone reads infoboxes.
3. External links should be for giving information not included (but not necessary to the article) the description of the link should indicate what it gives you. The MoS says "a concise description of the contents and a clear indication of its source is more important than the actual title of the page". The current titles are not concise and don't indicate why the content linked is relevant because there is too much detail.
4. Trimming references was for presentation - the long blue underline link make for poor readability. The link need only cover the actual article title not the publication, date and page number.
5. The deprecation of scrolling lists of citations is that they do not work in every browser. For instance on Safari on an iPhone viewing the mobile version of the Dan-Air article only citations 1, 2 and 118 display, in the regular version its only 1-7 and 119-124. On the British Eagle article - which currently does not have the scrolling - they all display.
Of these issues the most important is No. 5 - the non display of information. GraemeLeggett ( talk) 16:32, 21 February 2011 (UTC)
I see you're having a problem with User:Paulioetc, may I suggest a WP:WQA is appropriate as he clearly isn't prepared to listen or engage on the talk page. Wee Curry Monster talk 10:49, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
Have you looked at the main source of all of User:Paulioetc's edits? They nearly all stem from WP:SPS such as forums. There is a thread at WP:RSN#Forums a reliable source?, where the forum names the source this is what he is quoting as his source. I see no indication his edits meet WP:RS. Wee Curry Monster talk 11:58, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
Re your blanking of the occupants from the list. I'm not sure that every occupant needed to go, although I probably wouldn't object to some criteria being established for inclusion. Please give your thoughts at talk:Lympne Airport#Infobox. Thanks for your assistance in improving the article. Mjroots ( talk) 17:43, 7 March 2011 (UTC)
Yes, as soon as I saw it I thought it was him again. Let me check that reference out. Wee Curry Monster talk 20:55, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
Another newly registered editor, editing friendly fire? [1] Wee Curry Monster talk 21:04, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
Copyedit from my talk page: Though your note mentions safety, Hamilton-Paterson stresses that the SBAC request was not on safety grounds but, and I think he's quoting the SBAC, because it was "inappropriate behaviour for a bomber". He cites The Aeroplane Jan 09 p10. GraemeLeggett ( talk) 19:37, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
Thanks for cleaning up and helping edit the above article. I have been doing all this by myself as most of the other contributions are pretty much politically biased stuff. It hasnt been easy as I often get accused of being the supporter of military junta. Okkar ( talk) 23:10, 15 March 2011 (UTC)
I see that you have gone through and removed the Merge banners that I placed on the various Libyan NFZ Operation pages stating that the "merge suggestion closed out with "keep separate" at target page talk" The talk page for 2011 military intervention in Libya claims that the matter was previously closed "on the merger project page, after consensus was reached." I cannot find the "merger project page" referred to and so do not see where the claimed consensus is. Merge proposals are supposed to stay open for 7 days to allow the forming of a consensus, but some editors have decided to close the topic after only 1-2 days. This is premature. Unless you are able to identify where the consensus is, please reinstate the merge banners you have deleted. regards Mztourist ( talk) 13:58, 21 March 2011 (UTC)
I have resisted the temptation to revert your edit there - merely corrected where you attributed the Lynx Mk 8 to the Sutherland when the original says it had the Mk 3.
But what is going to happen is that more recent data wil be published and the original replaced. The big advantage of the table format was that when data for different dates become available, then it can be added as different columns without too much effort.-- Toddy1 ( talk) 21:20, 23 March 2011 (UTC)
Re: the October discussion you participated in on hyphenating ship names, User:SW is willing to make a mass move with a bot if there is a consensus here. — kwami ( talk) 21:47, 25 March 2011 (UTC)
(I posted that to all the participants of the discussion so I wouldn't be accused of canvassing.)
Per you recent edit here, I'm wondering why a Type 22 frigate would not hyphenate, but a Type 312 minesweeper would. Oversight? Shall I remove similar articles that remain?
Also, I would think that Standard-type battleship would hyphenate, even if 'Standard' is not the name of the type. — kwami ( talk) 22:01, 25 March 2011 (UTC)
Hi Graeme,
Thanks for all your help so far with this article. It needs a lot of works, and is a bit daunting, so having experts on board is a big help! Heywoodg 20:13, 29 March 2011 (UTC)
http://www.daftlogic.com/projects-google-maps-distance-calculator.htm enjoy :) Bwmoll3 ( talk) 13:12, 5 April 2011 (UTC)
I admire your rewrite of the lede for List of World War I aces from Poland. I was obviously unaware of the link to which you connected; that link improves the article enormously. Good show, as the Brit cousins would say.
Georgejdorner ( talk) 15:49, 6 April 2011 (UTC)
I'm soliciting active editors in coup article for a poll on this proposed change -- BoogaLouie ( talk) 15:00, 9 April 2011 (UTC)
See here - Neutralhomer • Talk • 00:47, 13 April 2011 (UTC)
You participated in the Frank Buckles A-Class review. If you have any further comments on the article or are satisfied with the article as it is, please post on the A-Class review page. Thanks. - Neutralhomer • Talk • 23:55, 18 April 2011 (UTC)
Why did you merge AC into Armed merchantmen? AC's may have technically been AMMs but they had a primarily navel function like privateers. AMMs had a primary merchant function. There is a big difference.-- 71.162.161.175 ( talk) 17:44, 19 April 2011 (UTC)
The A-Class Review for the Frank Buckles article was closed and promoted just moments ago. I want personally thank you for your help on the article and hope to work again with you on the FAC in the near future. :) - Neutralhomer • Talk • 10:23, 21 April 2011 (UTC)
Looks like the RAF Radar Museum is back online after fixing the fire exit problem. I'm going to be based in Cambridge from 18 to 22 May, inclusive, and perhaps I will be able to hire a car for a day and take a run up to Neatishead. What's your schedule during that period? I'd love to say hello. Email me via the link on my user page. Binksternet ( talk) 21:43, 24 April 2011 (UTC)
I disagree with your edit of the 21st of November. Would you object to me inserting a new version based around the word 'Notwithstanding'? Dolive21 ( talk) 11:13, 25 April 2011 (UTC)
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Would you be interested in WikiProject East Anglia?
If yes, please support us here at Wikipedia:WikiProject Council/Proposals/East Anglia. Wilbysuffolk talk 07:36, 8 May 2011 (UTC)
If it checks out then feel free to insert it. My problem with the edits is while some of the uncited material checks out, much of it doesn't as it is from unreliable sources such as WP:SPS and then he's obsessed with blaming that poor FAC in the Afghan incident when no-one was to blame. For info I asked a guy from the Operation Crimp article to comment. Wee Curry Monster talk 19:35, 10 May 2011 (UTC)
you wrote "A US Patriot missile battery fired on two F/A-18C Hornets 50 mi (80 km) from Karbala, Iraq. One missile hit the aircract of U.S. Navy pilot Lieutenant Nathan Dennis White of VFA-195, Carrier Air Wing Five killing him. This was the result of the missile design flaw in identifying hostile aircraft" You make sound like as if two aircrafts was fired on.
How about this: Two missiles fired by a US Patriot missile battery on F/A-18C Hornets from Karbala, Iraq. One missile hit the aircraft of U.S. Navy pilot Lieutenant Nathan Dennis White of VFA-195, Carrier Air Wing Five killing him. This was the result of the missile design flaw in identifying hostile aircraft". Is that ok? BTW try and find a link that say two missile cause i having a hard time finding them. Correct if i'm wrong but was two aircrafts fired on? 67.164.105.159 ( talk) 14:38, 11 May 2011 (UTC)
On the friendly fire section for Iraq War, someone needed to update and changhe the steve roberts. I don't like when it statement said shot and killed by a fellow British soldier when in fact he was shot by a tank-mounted machine gun from a fellow British soldier along with an Iraqi protester. Would you mind changing it it or something source it into something good? we need to let the readers know that he was shot by a tank-mounted machine gun, not a fellow UK soldier(like killing him with a sniper or something) I can't because my grammar and my spelling can be a pretty bit upwards and not good. I asked u since you pretty good at grammar.
Aslo can you add this as well? i found this link:
http://www.arlingtoncemetery.net/edward-korn.htm —Preceding unsigned comment added by 130.65.109.34 ( talk) 19:11, 24 May 2011 (UTC)
Hello, i noticed you moved Battle of Brazos Santiago to an action of title but you had moved it to the wrong date. Ive changed it to the correct one, just thought id give you a heads up in case you were planning to move some other articles. XavierGreen ( talk) 23:00, 24 May 2011 (UTC)
why was that steven roberts section erased? I don't see the "steven roberts" section for no reason. 130.65.109.34 ( talk) 21:20, 25 May 2011 (UTC)
I think the best citation to look up is The Poor Man's Guardian, "Advertisements & Notices," Issue 54. June 23, 1832. Text fragment: “attack on the Iron Duke, the”. That could get us new information, as opposed to confirming what I did. This was right after the iron shutters were put up, so it might tell us if people at the time made a connection with the nickname. The Freeman Journal cites are 14 June 1830, 16 June 16 1830, 28 June 1830, 26 July 1830, 30 October 1830, 5 November 1830, 4 January 1832, and 18 May 1832. I am surprised you haven’t voted in the Duke of Marlborough page move yet. Kauffner ( talk) 17:51, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
I'm notifying contributors to the 1953 Iranian coup article about a proposed change in the article posted on the talk page, that adds information about events leading up to the coup. Only a couple of comments so far. Am planning to request comments WP:RfC later. -- BoogaLouie ( talk) 00:00, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
Hey GraemeLeggett, I posted some information in the thread you opened on the Type VII that should hopefully clear up the situation. Just thought I'd drop by and let you know in case you have not seen it. Parsecboy ( talk) 11:11, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
Graeme, did you mean to rate the current version of Blockhaus d'Éperlecques as start-class? [2] The article was originally rated start-class before I expanded it, but it looks well beyond a start-class article now. Could you possibly take another look at it? Prioryman ( talk) 20:18, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
Thank you for pointing that out. I suggest to work on one single page. I will merge my article with Catsmeat's one and delete mine afterwards. -- Alberto Fernandez Fernandez ( talk) 11:06, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
I wondered why you reverted my edit? I think it is against MOS for "see also" to occur within the prose. The link within it simply doesn't back up the claim either. Such a claim surely needs a source, and the only one I have seen on one of the BI articles doesn't quite say this. To say that historians often avoid a term (for whatever reason) is quite a big claim to make without any support. Matt Lewis ( talk) 20:53, 11 June 2011 (UTC)
...but I reverted one of your edits in reverting our old friend User:Paulioetc for block evasion. Wee Curry Monster talk 13:30, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
Hi there. I do not disagree that infoboxes should be concise but the version you restored contains information that is simply incorrect. There is a different between "human" and "human with altered DNA" and that difference should be included in the infobox as well. I don't think that little bit (45 characters) makes the infobox any more complicated. What is irrelevant is the number of times it has been stated on the show though. If the primary source says it once, it's enough, there is no need to have it said multiple times before we can include it in the infobox. I don't think there is a policy/guideline that says different, is there? As such, I would request that you undo your revert, also per WP:BRD, since I just restored the revision before Edokter's edit and you shouldn't re-revert me if you disagree but instead take it to the talk page. Regards So Why 17:58, 17 June 2011 (UTC)
I am not confident with the list of the bombings on Mimoyecques. Given your experience, how would you recommend to systematically track (and correctly source) the bombings? Thank you for your help-- Alberto Fernandez Fernandez ( talk) 06:55, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
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First off, thanks for your assistance with editing the 3d Infantry Division article. You're been a great help. I apologize if we seem to be stepping on each other's toes between edits. Perhaps I can shed some justification on my edits.
Again, considering
good faith, I appreciate your help in making my Division's page better.
Bullmoosebell (
talk) 21:42, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
Hi did you read the article before and after the edit. My revision had sources Mjroots did not. Based on the hate message he put on my page he has a problem with Iranians, accusing me of being one. I guess he's not the only one? Xonus ( talk) 21:32, 4 July 2011 (UTC)
Thanks for the appreciation - there's still some way to go on that article though. DexDor ( talk) 20:57, 5 July 2011 (UTC)
Your there. As I'm not familiar with en:WP rules/details/templates: better than only removing the template do yourself what you ask from a “foreigner/guest”. That way ignorance will remain what seems to be usual. -- Хрюша 10:57, 8 July 2011 (UTC)
I'm still in the dark as to what "a difference of less than an eighth of an inch of water gauge" means. The link to water gauge leads to an article about a device for showing the water level in a boiler or whatever: it is nothing to do with pressure differences, which surely is the issue here. I'm no technical expert, but I do have a prety fair understanding of technical issues for an amateur, and think that if I can't understand this, the average user of wkipedia will be equally baffled. (if it means less han an eighth of an inch of hydrostatic pressure, that is indeed a very sensitive valve indeed) TheLongTone ( talk) 10:37, 9 July 2011 (UTC)
I notice you were at one time active editing sugar beet. I would like to remove the "unref" tag and was hoping you could help. Do you know of some reference(s) one could cite for the long, detailed section about processing? The "History" section also cites no sources except for something about GM sugar beets. And so on. I was hoping you'd have some background info that you could share. Sharktopus talk 21:15, 9 July 2011 (UTC)
Chryssoun Aristion Andrias mean Golden Medal for Bravery.-- 46.246.178.119 ( talk) 10:23, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
I have edited out many, if not all, of the material commented upon on the article's talk page. It would now be quite easy to transfer the remaining sections into the existing Hyper engine article. I was quite concerned about the major rework necessary to revise the existing article with what material I thought was needed to revive it, but I am now confident, with the consensus of all concerned, that I can manage that task. Would you please, when you find a moment, take a look at my edits and leave your comments? Regards, Buster40004 Talk 16:22, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
Thanks for researching this change. If you have the time, you might consider examining the rest of the category's entries to see which others are more properly named Exercise rather than Operation, as well. Cheers and thanks Buckshot06 (talk) 19:22, 17 July 2011 (UTC)
Graeme, the issue of Barnes and the relative worth of his work are IMO a distraction in the article. I'll see if I can find some other sources for the relative strength of both sides in the battle -- this would allow citations to Barnes' work to be removed from the article as well as the amplifying note I inserted as "nb 1". Barnes' work overall may be fine, but the ratios cited for the two forces appear to be internally inconsistent with other information provided in the work. Cheers, W. B. Wilson ( talk) 15:16, 21 July 2011 (UTC)
"British" Ministry of War Transport? How many other MoWTs are there. Surely the phrase shows that it's British, in a similar way to Royal Air Force and Royal Navy do. Mjroots2 ( talk) 10:37, 28 July 2011 (UTC)
including a Norwegian one. GraemeLeggett ( talk) 11:56, 28 July 2011 (UTC)
I have reverted your truncation of subject article pending discussion and consensus on alleged duplication of material in unspecified articles. A certain amount of duplication may be appropriate background for a site commemorating a relatively short duration of service by a small number of aircraft with some high-profile events at other points on the service routes. Potential duplication may involve articles on:
Alternative approaches might be to merge stub articles on some of these subjects into more comprehensive articles and replace the stubs with redirects. I invite your comments. Thewellman ( talk) 21:41, 1 August 2011 (UTC)
I have a question. Are we deleting all images (rank, awards, etc.) in infoboxes of military personnel? I understand how flags should not be included, per
MOS:FLAG, though they do serve the purpose of the infobox, according to
MOS:INFOBOX, which allows "readers to identify key facts at a glance."
However, I understand how some infoboxes contain more info than other and, as a result, present an opportunity for a cluster of images and links. So, is it out intent to delete images from infoboxes, or are we going by a case-by-case basis (for instance, the article of
George Washington has flags & images in the infobox, yet is rated a
good article). Here's some other articles to consider,
Carter Ham,
William Westmoreland,
Audie Murphy. Thanks for you help with this and let me know what you think!
Bullmoosebell (
talk) 19:27, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
Regarding your recent edit for Audie Murphy, I invite you to participate in a discussion at Talk:Audie Murphy. Thank you, in advance, Bullmoosebell ( talk) 01:42, 17 August 2011 (UTC)
The intention was to re-direct each to the List, but sleep intervened. Will have a go later, after work. Petebutt ( talk) 03:17, 23 August 2011 (UTC)
I took the liberty to revert your change at Junkers Ju 87. IMHO the very fact that there were some German speakers in the town does not mean we have to use the German name (or double naming, for that matter). There's a couple of thousands of Poles living in London, but that doesn't mean we should always mention "London (Londyn)". Or mention German names of British cities bombed by the Luftwaffe, for that matter. Sure, they are mentioned in German sources, but that doesn't mean we should follow.Cheers, // Halibu tt 00:05, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
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References Brown, R (2006). "Size of the Moon", Scientific American, 51(78). Miller, E (2005). The Sun, Academic Press. Samuraiantiqueworld ( talk) 11:34, 28 August 2011 (UTC)
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Hello Graeme. Thanks for your tweak of Ansett-ANA Flight 325.
I have just noticed the article XV179. I see you have done some work on it this year. The title of this article doesn’t conform to the guidance at Wikipedia:WikiProject Aviation/Aviation accident task force#Accident article naming conventions. Could you have a look at this one and move it to a more appropriate title if you agree that is what is needed. Regards. Dolphin ( t) 12:57, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
Hello Graeme,
According to the Canadian Encyclopedia, Canada is merely consulted when it comes to organizing peace in the aftermath of the World War II. The Peace Conference held in Paris, in the summer of 1946, gives the second-tier Allies such as Canada the opportunity to only comment on the decisions taken. So Canada, like some other Western powers, does not end the state of war with Germany until 1951. Hope this Help! (BenSF) — Preceding unsigned comment added by BenSF ( talk • contribs) 02:44, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
Thanks for your comment Graeme. I'll copy it to TheEd17's talkpage where the discussion may be taking place ; I completely agree with you. Cheers Buckshot06 (talk) 15:36, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
Hello, GraemeLeggett. I looked at the introductory paragraph under the Background section for Exercise Grand Slam, and it is not historically accurate (e.g., World War Two ended in 1945, and NATO was formed in 1949; the start of the Cold War predates the Korean War). NATO reflected the containment policy of the Truman administration, and the Soviet containment strategy sub-section in the Background section summarizes this information in the Exercise Longstep article. Also, Exercise Longstep is contemporaneaous with Exercise Grand Slam, both being 1952 NATO military operations. Marcd30319 ( talk) 23:10, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
I noticed that when you did your last edit on the (shamefully sketchy) Cody biog that you changed the last edit I made, which had changed 'British Isles' to 'Britain'. I did that not because it's an issue with me, but because I've an editor breathing down my nec on the subjest: see my talk page. Nice refs, btw. TheLongTone ( talk) 07:09, 16 September 2011 (UTC)
On Ed17 talk page, Graeme Leggett noted that: "I think some common approach is needed on NATO exercise articles. On the one hand, some degree of background is necessary for each article to be put into context: eg with respect to current doctrine or the results of the previous similar exercise, or a change in the political situation. On the other hand, I think largely political rather than operational viewpoints are too distant from the point and overlong quotes are not useful - deprecated even per MoS etc. Is this something worth flagging up at the MilHist talkpages?" Given the fact that the Eisenhower administration developed its so-called "New Look" approach in defense strategy which emphasized massive retaliation, and this policy represents an evolution from the containment policy of the Truman administration. Also, for the U.S. Navy, historian Samuel P. Huntington set forth a naval strategy oriented to naval operation in the Mediterranean Sea. This strategic background is appropriate and essential to understanding the historical context for NATO exercises in 1957. This assertion that this is covered by other articles is not appropriate approach and does a disservice to our user audience. I therefore reverts the edited text to the original content. See talk page for this article, and I suggest that we examine this issue there. Marcd30319 ( talk) 13:28, 16 September 2011 (UTC)
The suggestion that this background information is duplicative and unnecessary is an absolute non sequitur. Please note that Naval Striking and Support Forces Southern Europe did not exist at the time of such earlier NATO Southern Region military exercise as 1952's Exercise Longstep and 1952's Exercise Grand Slam. In fact, Naval Striking and Support Forces Southern Europe (STRIKFORSOUTH) was created after the creation of Allied Forces Mediterranean (AFMED) under Lord Mountbatten, and STRIKFORSOUTH was created to maintain American control over U.S. nuclear weapons on U.S. Sixth Fleet aircraft carrier in accordance with the McMahon Act. Therefore, this background information on the command structure for Operation Deep Water is approbriate. Consequently, the assertion that this information is covered by other articles is incorrect and also does a disservice to our user audience to exclude this information for this article. I therefore reverts the edited text to the original content. See talk page for this article, and I suggest that we examine this issue there. Marcd30319 ( talk) 13:28, 16 September 2011 (UTC)
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Hello,
An article you have helped edit, Confirmation and overclaiming of aerial victories during World War II (which was formerly entitled "Confirmation and overclaiming of aerial victories") has been proposed for deletion.
Georgejdorner ( talk) 17:37, 2 October 2011 (UTC)
The ships were equipped with either a 4-inch gun, or a 4.7-inch gun. In the vast majority of cases, it is not known which of the two was carried. It is entirely possible that both types were carried by the same ship at different times. Mjroots ( talk) 18:07, 4 October 2011 (UTC)
Please see Talk:Dehousing#Chief scientist to the Royal Navy -- PBS ( talk) 03:11, 8 October 2011 (UTC)
I'm polling editors active in the 1953 Iranian coup article on the issue of adding a short subsection titled ’Iranian coup supporters’ since the article has no mention on why they opposed Mosaddeq other than being bribed to do so.
Iranian opponents of Mosaddeq have been described as including "religious leaders and preachers and their followers, as well as landlords and provincial magnates"; [15] "conservative politicians such as prime ministers Ahmad Qavam and General Ali Razmara .... and commanders of the military, most notably General Fazlollah Zahedi ... led by the Shah." [16] They have been described as forces that would "have been crippled without substantial British and later U.S. support," [17] while authors Ali Gheissari, Seyyed Vali Reza Nasr say "it would be mistaken to view the coup as entirely a foreign instigation with no support" in Iran. [18]
Observers differ on the opponents motivation for supporting the coup. Mark J. Gasiorowski describes them as "very ambitious and opportunistic." [19] Another author calls Mosaddeq's Iranian opponents elites "determined to retrieve their endangered interests and influence, and unconcerned with the lasting damage to Iranian patriotic sensibilities and democratic aspirations." [20] Money was involved with the US CIA paying out $150,000 after March 1953 to "journalists, editors, preachers, and opinion members", giving Zahedi $135,000 to "win additional friends", and paying members of the majlis $11,000 a week. [21]
Other authors (Ali Gheissari, Seyyed Vali Reza Nasr) describe the opponents as agreeing with Mosaddeq that the "British position was unjust and illegal," but believing that after the 1946 attempt by the Soviets to separate Azerbaijan and Kurdistan from Iran, "Iran's interests lay in close ties with the West to ward off the Soviet threat." [16]government of Iranian Prime Minister Mohammad Mosaddegh organized by the intelligence agencies of the United Kingdom and the United States. [22] -- BoogaLouie ( talk) 16:49, 18 October 2011 (UTC)
...remove the "popular culture" and picture sections from my KV-4 article? GMRE ( talk) 08:11, 21 October 2011 (UTC)
But what about the pictures then? Those were scans of the real designs. GMRE ( talk) 17:43, 21 October 2011 (UTC)
Graeme, I'd appreciate your support at Talk:Daring class destroyer (1949) about the removal of the "models" section. Shem ( talk) 09:34, 22 October 2011 (UTC)
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Can you give me about 10 more minutes please? Will change template to under construction when I finish. Mjroots ( talk) 16:42, 30 October 2011 (UTC)
Hi, Twelve months ago you were going looking for a photo to go with the article on Charles Terres Weymann - you didn't like the one available. Had any luck? Regards, Eddaido ( talk) 07:09, 6 November 2011 (UTC)
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Although it has been a long time, I really appreciate your comments at Talk:Tatmadaw. Both editors, including myself, forgot to assume good faith when things get hot. Again, thank you very much. — SWH talk 18:08, 12 November 2011 (UTC) |
Thanks for your edits to this page. Would you please mind keeping an eye on it periodically? We may get additional anon/vandal edits on this page that need a second look. Cheers and thanks Buckshot06 (talk) 18:39, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
Hello.
I note that you have replaced my edit with "Citation Needed". I am curious to know why as I am a direct descendant of Charles Albert Hobby — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mypyrex ( talk • contribs) 19:45, 22 November 2011 (UTC)
Sorry I bothered in that case. I ought to know when my own grandfather died. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mypyrex ( talk • contribs) 13:29, 23 November 2011 (UTC)
Did you not think I had that in mind? Israel is at (Israel), and until someone seriously starts adding Tom Cooper's material, we have no data on pre-2003 Iraqi squadrons (and we need some second sources, at the very least). Current Iraqi squadrons seem to have ordinals; ie 23rd Squadron (Iraq). The point is that '1 Squadron, Indian Air Force' is an awfully clumsy title, and this significantly shortens it. But, the Pakistani Air Force is next on my list; can you think of any other 'PAFs' that use RAF-style designations without ordinals? Paraguay will have that Sp/Port little circle after the number, what else? Buckshot06 (talk) 06:57, 25 November 2011 (UTC)
I have removed the {{ prod}} tag from List of books about kites, which you proposed for deletion. I'm leaving this message here to notify you about it. If you still think the article should be deleted, please don't add the {{ prod}} template back to the article. Instead, feel free to list it at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion. Thanks!
Since there was little discussion and no resolution to my proposal to add a short subsection titled ’Iranian coup supporters’ to the 1953 Iranian coup article, I'm doing a Request for Comment on the issue as well as polling editors active on the 1953 Iranian coup article. -- BoogaLouie ( talk) 20:51, 3 December 2011 (UTC)
Greetings, User:GraemeLeggett.
I have a question for you that is pertinent to an article you recently edited, Windhoek Concentration Camp. Since others may also know the answer (or know of a nuance of the answer that you might not be aware of), I've opened the discussion on that article's Talk page. I invite you to comment.
Cordially, Virago250 ( talk) 18:57, 8 December 2011 (UTC)
I,m all for adding bits, but I am a bit dubious of the Flight dimensions for the mainplanes. Personally, I would trust the historian more than a journalist. Can you confirm the figures from another source too? If not, could you change them back to the Putnam ones? Petebutt ( talk) 01:37, 24 December 2011 (UTC)
FWiW Bzuk ( talk) 02:32, 25 December 2011 (UTC).
Thank you for correcting my typo from 'hinges' to 'latches' with regard to the inflight loss of the inspection panel on British Airways flight 2157, however, you then marked the article for deletion based on the incident not being newsworthy. May I politely request that you would reconsider this and unmark the article? I have spent some time in researching it to get the facts right and it was on the mainstream BBC News and also several newpapers at the time. I think it is important that people have access to the truth and that is why I have put the link to the AIBB. Many people I know remember this incident and it is one of few cases when the emergency vehicles have been mobilised at Gatwick. As you probably know, one of the panel latches was allegedly found inside the cabin which would indicate a hull breach, but I could not find a reliable reference for this and so did not include it in the article. Please advise - many thanks! BritAirman ( talk) 21:20, 30 December 2011 (UTC)
BritAirman ( talk) 22:47, 31 December 2011 (UTC)
You might want to take a look at Template:Admiralty airships - I think you know more about this subject than I do. It's just been substantially edited by someone who made a number of (good faith but ill-informed) edits to airship articles yesterday: I've reverted several & noticed you had reverted another. And a happy new year to you! TheLongTone ( talk) 00:29, 31 December 2011 (UTC)
I added the 1905 US Patent content and web source to the Whitehead article and moved the controversy section out of the introduction. You subsequently reverted my edit which removed the US Patent content and source completely. I've restored the US Patent content to the intro and left the lengthy controversial content in the intro. If you're going to be a mother hen, at least leave reliable npov content in the article. Tomticker5 ( talk) 15:08, 7 January 2012 (UTC)
Hi, I have been doing some work on the CP Ships article, trying to make it more similar to the other steamship articles. I noticed that you reverted the detailed information on why the captains are notable. When I compare this to other pages, it seems to me that there is too much information. This article should be about CP Ships and having the Captians there is relevant. I just think there is too much detail, since they each have their own webpage. I think two of the Captains can be expanded into the relevant fleet event and the one Commodore should probably be in the history section above (with reduced information on his numerous honours). What do you think? Doesn't make sense to me to now have the Japanese earthquake referenced for both the ship and Captain separately, for example.-- Varaldarade ( talk) 19:57, 17 January 2012 (UTC)
I'm polling editors active in the 1953 Iranian coup article on the issue of cleaning up the article to fix duplication, contradiction and bad chronology. Here are my proposed changes. Please leave a comment. -- BoogaLouie ( talk) 22:26, 19 January 2012 (UTC)
Dear Graeme, thanks for the tidying - but what is LAA version? Best wishes ( Msrasnw ( talk) 13:05, 31 January 2012 (UTC))
Hi there. I saw that you have been making some edits to the above article and wanted your opinion on this: Do you think that this article is over-referenced? For example, the sentence "President Franklin D. Roosevelt arrived at a temporary platform[23][24] on his special train via the Reading RR from the North[25] after leaving Springwood at Hyde Park NY[26] that morning.[27]" has five citations, including two for the fact that he arrived at at temporary platform. It seems to me that only one citation would be enough for the sentence. (I wanted a second opinion before I started removing notes.) Thanks for your work on the article so far. Wild Wolf ( talk) 21:24, 5 February 2012 (UTC)
I de-prodded this, which appears to be real and notable. Take it to WP:AfD for wider discussion. Bearian ( talk) 01:39, 7 February 2012 (UTC)
I don't know if you remember, but a while back we collaborated on Disney bomb. I'm now working on bringing HMS Graph up to GA and, as it's the first time I've done this as a solo effort, wondered if you would care to look it over before I put it in for an A-class review. You seem to be an experienced editor with an interest in WW2 stuff. Catsmeat ( talk) 23:04, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
Dave ♠♣♥♦™№1185©♪♫® 22:47, 10 March 2012 (UTC)
Please clarify what clause, specifically, of the MOS:FLAG policy supports your edit. As it was pointed out during the related discussion, there are a lot of aircraft pages where coutry flags are used. Your change creates an inconsistency in handling of different aircraft pages, there must be a very good reason for that. C1010 ( talk) 15:54, 16 March 2012 (UTC)
Please read: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Blohm_%26_Voss_BV_238#Conflicting_accounts_of_the_destruction_of_the_aircraft.
Cricobr ( talk) 14:16, 22 March 2012 (UTC)
Morning. I was looking at the edit history of this article (which is now undergoing my trademark 'give the article a partial rewrite and then bugger off for pastures new, leaving behind a good sprinkling of typos' edit style), & noticed you'd changed the specs back to the original aircraft specifications. I've changed it back, because I couldn't stop it displaying 'Height()', which I tink looks messy... height is a pretty unimportant dimension & is missing from many sets of specs in reference works. TheLongTone ( talk) 11:04, 2 April 2012 (UTC)
Just curious as to why you piped links that already re-directed to the relevant articles. Personally I prefer re-directs which give a far better chance of someone searching finding the correct article, particularly with the Wikipedia search engine. Although it is a personal preference, I will re-direct links wherever possible, replacing piped links. Petebutt ( talk) 17:13, 2 April 2012 (UTC)
Thank you for spotting and removing my last edit. I intended to make only a couple of minor edits (which have already been dealt with) but for some reason which I cannot figure out I must have been working on a previous version of the text without realising it. Thankfully you have put it right and no permanent damage is done! Sue Zuki ( talk) 15:48, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
to all the editors involved in the rapidly expanding List of monuments of the Gettysburg Battlefield. I recently spun off the state monuments for Alabama, North Carolina, Virginia (and intend to do Pennsylvania soon), leaving only a token bit of each in the list. I named these articles to include the name of the battle Alabama State Monument (Gettysburg) because many states have monuments in several battlefields and it seemed that we might as well start preparing for Alabama State Monument (Vicksburg) right now. Someone then re-named those articles (yesterday?) and removed the name of the battle. (they also changed the picture of the North Carolina Monument that I had added that I think much better caught the spirit of Borglum's work, but that is another issue.) Furthermore, there is something really unexplained happening on the talk pages of the new articles, If you click on the TALK tab at, say Virginia Monument (a really lame title, because how many of those are there across America?) you end up at the talk page of the list. What is that about? I would like to redirect these articles back to where they were redirected from yesterday, but unlike the editor who just did it, I'd like to involve all the interested editors. Einar aka Carptrash ( talk) 17:37, 8 April 2012 (UTC)
I removed the tag on the strength of applying the specs template, but I still don't see where we might find more comprehensive specifications from. I am taking the view that unless there are truly gaping holes then I remove the tags. It doesn't stop anybody adding more later, and it helps tidy up the tag section on the maintenance page. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Petebutt ( talk • contribs) 06:22, 14 April 2012 (UTC)
Hi, I saw you changed many of the '|200px' to '|thumb' in List of military aircraft operational during World War II. You only changed some of them. Should I change them all to 'thumb', or change them back? -- The High Fin Sperm Whale 00:28, 13 May 2010 (UTC)
Why did you revert my trimming of the armament section? Most of that detail belongs in the class article, not the ship article. I'll be changing it back unless you can convince me otherwise. And all the armament revisions will be covered; I'd saved all that stuff for when I get to my planned sections on interwar and wartime modifications. However I'm perfectly willing to discuss the organization of this article if you have any better ideas.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 19:00, 20 May 2010 (UTC)
Hi, the page history of Parasite aircraft suggests that you are the main editor, at least recently. I have proposed moving it to Composite aircraft for two reasons, see discussion page. Do you have an opinion either way? — Cheers, Steelpillow ( Talk) 20:50, 25 May 2010 (UTC)
It's been beefed up a bit now, please don't delete an important topic such as side-by-side seating before it's had a chance to be fleshed out. It's an unusual configuration for high performance aircraft, but favored for training and electronic-intensive operations. Bachcell ( talk) 19:42, 16 June 2010 (UTC)
Have you ever heard that the RN ever had any particular skill at night-fighting? That's news to me and needs a citation if it's to remain in the article.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 21:54, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
Hello there. I've noticed that you've been helpeing me a bit with this article and my GAN for the Type IXA's. I was wondering, since Parsec cannot help me, would you mind being my co-nom in an ACR for SMS Zrinyi?-- White Shadows There goes another day 21:14, 30 June 2010 (UTC)
Your assertion that the former purported Dab is plainly and absurdly false in light of
WP:Stub -- it could even in fact be divided into several valid stubs if any of the crossings are inadequately covered -- so i assume you mean that nothing adequate to the title
History of crossings of the Rhine can be written. The proper action in that case is one of the deletion processes, not the discarding of
the creator's prose without due process. You may of course draw on that prose in getting to a Dab (tho see below w/in this contrib), which i applaud. In the meantime, i will restore my version when you seem to be done, splitting the edit history in the least confusing fashion to keep the original editor's revisions with the article until there is a decision about retention of it as an article. I will monitor it for a reasonable time, and if a deletion should be made, propose an edit-history-only merge back into the edit history of the Dab, and a soft-Dab to the Dab from
History of crossings of the Rhine (which is less likely to attract recreation of an article.
(IMO the content of a compliant Dab has the same copyright status as a telephone directory: the protections apply to the "work" (the Dab page) as a whole, but not to any of the individual entries, which may individually be freely copied w/o even attribution, so IMO the copyright underlying our copyleft is not relevant to the status of the Dab you are creating -- bcz a paraphrasing of a copyright-protected work is an original work for copyright purposes, breaking the chain of attribution at the point where you reduce each entry to a mere prose-free Dab entry.
(Still, courtesy and our copyleft policies counsel caution, and the attribution trail should IMO be maintained using at least an edit summary like "material extracted from
History of crossings of the Rhine has its edit history at that article, pending consideration of its deletion or merging its history back into that of this Dab. I can add that via a dummy edit to the Dab, if that confuses you or you're not interested.)
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Hello. This message is being sent to inform you that there currently is a discussion on Temple's reliability here. Regards Gun Powder Ma ( talk) 08:39, 11 August 2010 (UTC)
Hello Graeme. I have removed the clarify tag. There is no contradiction with it, the ETC 500 is the model name only. It does not mean that the rack can only carry 500lbs max. The number does not denote weight restriction. Dapi89 ( talk) 21:54, 13 August 2010 (UTC)
Absolutely. It’s an oversight I made. Will do it now. Dapi89 ( talk) 14:17, 14 August 2010 (UTC)
I added a REFERENCED explanation for who the faces shown in this episode may be. The Discontinuity Guide, published by Virgin Books in 1995, suggests that the faces may be younger faces of the first Doctor. This seems a valid contribution and is sourced. Certainly equal to the other sources which also provide speculative answers to who these faces may be. My edit was deleted with the comment that speculation has no place in the article. You have now selectively restored some speculation, but not mine. I don't see the difference. 71.146.29.93 ( talk) 09:14, 17 August 2010 (UTC)
It will simply be deleted by the editor who seems to have set themselves up as the guardian of all the Dr Who pages. 71.146.29.93 ( talk) 09:30, 17 August 2010 (UTC)
Dear Graeme, Thanks for taking an interest in the LCA article. I have not taken time to familiarize myself with all the style conventions on Wikipedia - you've no doubt noticed. One place you have altered an "a" to an "an" article before LCA. I've written the entire article using the article "a", so you may have some editing to do. I've been reading "a Landing Craft Assault" each time LCA comes up, and not "an el-see-ay". Anyway, where initialisms are concerned, in the USA this is an English usage decision that must be made by each writer (I don't know about British English or Wiki style guide). I'm going to change it back, but if I see you've gone through the whole article and made the change consistently sometime in the future, I'll not be fussed. Also, here is a question for you: the LCA is more of a Navy than a Military subject (LCA being Royal Navy craft). I've had someone change all my 0000 times to 00:00 times. Do you have an opinion? Do you know of a convention for WikiProject articles that are both military and ship? Thanks for any assistance. I've been somewhat surprised by how lonely this project has been. Regards, AmesJussellR ( talk) 19:28, 25 August 2010 (UTC)
Thanks for catching my error on the British patent number. Obviously I should be writing such things down instead of trusting my short-term memory. As to the article you linked to on Googlebooks not saying it was a motorjet, I agree entirely. I added that reference when I changed the page to read that this plane was a ducted fan. I believe the patents and articles written at that time establish this, as does Gibbs-Smith's later detailed treatment of the Coanda 1910. However This assertion has met with some resistance. I am currently engaged in a discussion on the aircraft engine talk page as to wether these patents can be used as evidence as to the nature of Coanda's propulsion system. The other side argues that these patents aren't germane because Coanda's plane was a jet which he never bothered to patent and that the plane's resemblance to these patents is entirely co-incidental. Romaniantruths ( talk) 03:56, 27 August 2010 (UTC)
I can't see what your were trying to achieve here. Why have you edited the image size of the ATC crest?, it was sized for a reason, you just made the article look untidy, the page has reverted as I cannot be bothered to go round chasing your edits. You are welcome to contribute but if you make a mess of it then expect a revert, I have also reverted the ATC Activities page as the the info box is relevant. Pandaplodder ( talk) 13:16, 27 September 2010 (UTC)
Lsorin ( talk · contribs) has asked for my help regarding the content dispute at Coandă-1910, which you are involved in. Without taking any sides, I have explained my actions on his talk page. — KuyaBriBri Talk 17:27, 1 October 2010 (UTC)
Ah, I'd missed that with regard to that category. Apologies, and thanks. - The Bushranger Return fire Flank speed 18:26, 14 October 2010 (UTC)
Hi. The only correct spelling for the island is Spitsbergen. It was discovered by the Dutch and is a Dutch name, so there is absolutely no reason to use the German spelling outside the German language. British authors have numerous times used the German spelling, ignorant of the fact that it is a Dutch name. And it only has a redirect from the German spelling because this mistake has been made several times. Note though, usage does not make it correct. And please ignore the Etymology section, written by British editors completely ignorant of the island and its history. They simply nitpicked sources and put whatever they wanted. Jonas Poole ( talk) 23:55, 15 October 2010 (UTC)
Hi, why remove the link to the photo of Weymann. Surely you could see that it was an addition to what you had put there, not a replacement? Would you put it back please. Eddaido ( talk) 07:40, 29 October 2010 (UTC)
Graeme, if I could find a photo I would put it up. I thought I had found one (your link, once mine) and all I did was let readers know where they could see it. Have you noticed that the new page I created (fabric bodies) from scratch receives much more than twice the attention of this biography and indeed this biography now gets double the attention it got before I tarted it up in May this year. Weymann 66 gets rather less than quarter of the attention of the car bodies. Please put back that link. Its the only pic we got!! Eddaido ( talk) 08:46, 29 October 2010 (UTC)
Please take special note that the reason the photo is important to me is that it shows Haitians he is possibly of local (African-American) stock which probably will be why he chose to live in France and not USA.
What might "encyclopaedic in tone" mean? I do not understand. Eddaido ( talk) 09:07, 29 October 2010 (UTC)
Graham, please have a look at the Discussion page on Charles Terres Weymann. Whoever supplied the info has gone back and deleted any identity to make it unsourced so I added the question which you have subsequently posed pn the actual page. If I could privide a source I would but as it seems to be entirely credible I have used the form of words "it is said" to indicate it is not an established fact, May I be directly rude to you within articles? Eddaido ( talk) 12:32, 29 October 2010 (UTC)
Please add the right template to Coanda-1910 if you understand what I mean. I don't really now all those bloody templates in Wikipedia.Thanks in advance!-- Lsorin ( talk) 21:20, 10 November 2010 (UTC)
Dear Graeme, Thanks for the attention to the Motor Landing Craft page. Do you know where an image might be found? I have only seen one; it is in the early pages of Brian Lavery's "Assault Landing Craft." According to the picture credits in the index the image belongs to him. Best regards, AmesJussellR ( talk) 14:43, 24 November 2010 (UTC)
The forum link shows the Motor Landing Craft! Second image I've seen of the beast. That would be perfect - if legal. The Science Museum MLC20 model is a Thornycroft 1938 design LCM(1). AmesJussellR ( talk) 15:18, 24 November 2010 (UTC)
Dear GraemeLeggett, You have done a great job on that page. But if you are interested I was cleaning up the ex links and I added a link of a video of the first Perth fitted with the COW 37mm and it shown being fired. And it explains which course the designer took to deal with recoil: ie either a muzzle brake or a very long recoil. If you watch the video you can tell which option was chose. Again, thanks for a great page. Jack
Jackehammond (
talk) 07:14, 27 November 2010 (UTC)
1. I totally disagree with you. In 2007 there was much talk on the PUC discussion page to no avail because there is no GOOD justification for taking all the pertinent information out of the tables. There was some suggestion for moving it to a new page or a subpage where people could find the information they seek. But that was not done then and I don't think you have any intention to do that.
2. In my opinion an encyclopedia is for providing information to those people researching a particular subject or area of interest. Providing the entire (which is the appropriate thing to do) information which includes the cited authority, issuing authority and complete text supporting the awarding of the award is encyclopedic. The only reason paper encyclopedias restricted article size was because of the cost of publishing. In a world of electronic encyclopedias size is a minor problem. When there are Wikipedia articles that amount to advertisements for computer games we should not be discussing eliminating historic information.
3. The entire citation often includes individual organizations down to section and platoon level who participated in the events leading to the heroic efforts for which they are being awarded. These individual units may not normally be organic to the larger organization and therefore not identified singularly. Which is another way we could list awardees, down to platoons and sections.
4. Finding the citations published by the government, either the Department of War/Navy or the Department of Defense or one of the subordinate services is not easy. The Pentagon Library is the only source that I am aware of to find this information.
5. I would gladly leave this up to the Military History WikiProject folks for determination. Meyerj ( talk) 00:00, 30 November 2010 (UTC)
Dear Graeme, I have come across another image of the MLC - http://www.seayourhistory.org.uk/content/view/457/610/1/0/ . I have no idea how to put images into the wikicommon. Do you know some saintly person who could make the miracle happen? I am lost as to the mechanics and the legality of it all.
The current article on LCT is covering a vast subject area. I was toying with the idea of a separate LCT(1) page. It has all the promise of exploring the background discussions that went into imagining this type of craft - all the others marks have their interesting stories, but their beginnings are pretty much "improvements were desired on the then current LCT design." What do you think? Regards, AmesJussellR ( talk) 22:22, 30 November 2010 (UTC)
Thanks Graeme. I can wait. I can even get back to what I really should be doing. I know nothing about finding images at the IWM site. Best regards, AmesJussellR ( talk) 00:52, 1 December 2010 (UTC)
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Hi, I'm polling editors active in the 1953 Iranian coup article on the issue of revising two sentences in the article lead.
The change is discussed here and reasons for the change also here
Hope you have time to give it a look see, BoogaLouie ( talk) 02:12, 15 December 2010 (UTC)
Graeme, I've been doing some image cleanup. What is File:AM vickers.JPG an image of? Is it a toy? Kelly hi! 20:19, 23 December 2010 (UTC)
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Hi, I'm doing another poll of editors active in the 1953 Iranian coup article on the issue of revising a phrase in the article lead. It's a repeat but I didn't explain it well in the first poll.
The reason for the change is discussed
here and is, briefly, that the sentence as is doesn't match the rest of the article, (and doesn't match most of the books that deal with US motivation in the coup).
The
US motivation section gives only one author (Abrahamian) who thinks the US leadership wasn't seriously worried about the possibility that Iran might become a communist country, while listing several who thought cold war motivation of the US was important.
An even more thorough examination of the sources dealing with issue is
here.
Hope you have time to give it a look see, -- BoogaLouie ( talk) 01:21, 19 January 2011 (UTC)
Hi, could you take a look at Talk:Ground attack aircraft#Requested move? -- Kubanczyk ( talk) 19:44, 23 January 2011 (UTC)
Aliwiki (
here) and Kurdo (
here) have both made complaints about the proposed changes that I think have merit, so I'm
revising the change so that Iran falling under the influence of the expansionist Soviet Communist "empire"[7] refers to the US administration point of view and not a statement of fact.
The to-be-revised text and revised text are in italics. --
BoogaLouie (
talk) 17:45, 25 January 2011 (UTC)
Current wording
Proposed change
The reason for the change is the same as the original one and is discussed here
I know you didn't make any comment on my last attempt but I hope you will find this one is a true improvement. -- BoogaLouie ( talk) 01:05, 26 January 2011 (UTC)
Trying to get some commonality between projects. You can weigh in here. Marcus Qwertyus 08:41, 28 January 2011 (UTC)
Hi, Graeme! I just wanted to mention that informed input from all users is welcome at ANI. I'm not an admin, either, but I do contribute there frequently, trying to provide helpful information and (as I hope!) a calm/respectful take on issues presented. It's my impression that maybe half to two-thirds of the contributors there on any given day aren't admins, and don't have any personal involvement with the issues they comment on. Non-admin participation has always seemed welcome there, to me; no one has ever objected in the least. ( On the contrary, actually: I'm somewhat embarrassed to mention it, but our illustrious founder once made an extremely positive comment about a lengthy analysis I posted there, and another user gave me a barnstar for my analysis of a different issue at ANI. ) I do try to think carefully and understand the relevant issues before I express an opinion that opposes that of any admin, of course, but it's been my strong impression that my participation has been entirely welcome, as I'm sure your thoughtful contributions would be as well. Best regards, – OhioStandard ( talk) 02:06, 29 January 2011 (UTC)
A file that you uploaded or altered, File:Motorcycle engine configs.PNG, has been listed at Wikipedia:Files for deletion. Please see the discussion to see why this is (you may have to search for the title of the image to find its entry), if you are interested in it not being deleted. Thank you. Kelly hi! 20:58, 5 February 2011 (UTC)
Hello There -
I didn't remove the discussion I just posted it twice by mistake and removed the dupe! :)-- Connorthomha ( talk) 21:21, 7 February 2011 (UTC)
I trying to get rid of that when 3 Brits were killed by Us in august 2007 when in fact that it was a Brit-on-Brits Friendly Fire. the British FAC gave the wrong coordinates to the the pilots which accidentally drop it on 3 Brits. Right now, he's facing charges. So it's not the pilots fault. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Paulioetc19 ( talk • contribs) 02:18, 15 February 2011 (UTC)
Hi. i tried contacting the CBC contact about this two weeks and no reply at all. When I also found this the Korean War, "Canadian officer Dan Loomis called in mortar fire to help Canadian troops being pursued by Chinese forces, but the fire hit his own men after he mistakenly transmitted the wrong map co-ordinates". But i don't know what kind of battle they are talking about and how many were killed in this? does anyone know? i tried look for it everywhere and i can't seem to find one. http://www.cbc.ca/news/background/friendlyfire/fogofwar.html I also heard that the British(or Indian and British i think) 17th division during the retreat from Burma was repeatedly bombed by RAF planes causing hundred of casualties in the Irrawaddy River. Tried look for it and its still heard to find. can anybody answer me or something? Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Paulioetc ( talk • contribs) 00:12, 16 February 2011 (UTC)
as regardinf your comment about edward not being killed by friendly fire?
actually there is? wanna see? here
http://www.fijitimes.com/story.aspx?id=68040 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Paulioetc ( talk • contribs) 04:35, 21 February 2011 (UTC)
Hello user User:GraemeLeggett: I have restored the article's last version of anonymous user 82.44.98.11 for the following reasons: 1. Infobox "trivia" -- Why do you consider the actual names of the airline's 3 successive HQ buildings trivial? It names these buildings. Though I agree that such info is not absolutely essential in an airline info box, it doesn't distract the reader's attention (as opposed to unrelated/irrelevant details, ie trivia). 2. Adding timeframe and context to first sentence of intro -- By reading through this passage and looking at the accompanying info box itself it will be sufficiently clear to uninitiated readers that this company was sold to and ultimately absorbed into British Airways. Therefore, this re-phrasing adds no extra value. 3. Trimming descriptions of external links and removing possible hyperbole -- Conceding that the original author[s] could have phrased these in a more succinct way, they are nonetheless relevant. To make this clearer, let me give you this example: ... a Dan-Air Boeing 707 ... on the ramp at Berlin Tegel on X-mas Day 1971 ... the aircraft's colour scheme was the airline's 2nd livery (the 1st to be applied uniformly, fleet-wide); maybe, for you personally the info inside the round brackets may not seem to be very important but it is still correct, especially if you check this against the references cited in the article, incl. some only available in printed format (ie inflight magazines and other relevant hard copy publications); also, it certainly doesn't constitute hyperbole. 4. Trimming references -- I do agree that these could have been written a lot shorter and appreciate your effort to re-write them; however, the original author[s] must have had good reasons why they chose a particular style to cite references' and as long as they have been consistent in their chosen style of citation and it does include relevant details, then that's OK; also, when you do this please make sure that you re-check your edits before posting them on to the website to avoid having orphaned references, most probably as a result of mistakenly deleting [14] tags and/or square brackets (or forgetting to put them when completely re-writing a reference). 5. Style manual advising against use of scroll boxes for listing citations at end of article due to browser compatibility issues -- I am aware of this manual's existence and have actually read it; however, I do consider it a guideline to be applied with a common sense approach (as opposed to a strictly [to be] enforced, uniform rule; what I mean by this is that if you've got an article with say 10, 15, 20-30 or even 50-60 citations at the end, a scroll box is unnecessary; if, however, on the other hand, you've got more than 100, perhaps even 200+ citations at the end, a scroll box makes navigating the article definitely easier (regardless of any browser issues); and rather than "hiding" anything (the other, and in my opinion somewhat "specious" argument advanced in the aforesaid style manual against the use of scroll boxes to list citations at the end of articles), anyone who is familiar with the basics of computer use will know that the so-called "hidden" info can be accessed without difficulty by moving down on the scroll bar (the reason I'm making this assumption is that I don't want to give ammunition to those who say in public that Wikipedia is not serious and/or unreliable because they think it's too "dumbed down", which is why I'm not assuming that every reader of an article published in this media is a "dummy"); therefore, I'm kindly requesting you to take this into consideration in future before you decide to remove scroll boxes.
The 4 points made above equally apply to other articles where I saw you making similar edits
OK then. That's enough for today. Don't be discouraged by my specific criticisms of some of your recent edits; try to take it as constructive criticism and continue having a great time improving Wikipedia articles. Devanahalli2008 ( talk) —Preceding undated comment added 15:52, 21 February 2011 (UTC).
1. The specific locations of an airlines HQ or even its registered address (whether defunct or not) go beyond the needs of an encyclopaedia. Further the infobox is for summary information and detail is to be avoided. It can go within the main article but does not belong in the infobox.
2. Given the poorly laid out and overburdened with refs lede of the article. It's important to get the first sentence right until the rest can be addressed. Not everyone reads infoboxes.
3. External links should be for giving information not included (but not necessary to the article) the description of the link should indicate what it gives you. The MoS says "a concise description of the contents and a clear indication of its source is more important than the actual title of the page". The current titles are not concise and don't indicate why the content linked is relevant because there is too much detail.
4. Trimming references was for presentation - the long blue underline link make for poor readability. The link need only cover the actual article title not the publication, date and page number.
5. The deprecation of scrolling lists of citations is that they do not work in every browser. For instance on Safari on an iPhone viewing the mobile version of the Dan-Air article only citations 1, 2 and 118 display, in the regular version its only 1-7 and 119-124. On the British Eagle article - which currently does not have the scrolling - they all display.
Of these issues the most important is No. 5 - the non display of information. GraemeLeggett ( talk) 16:32, 21 February 2011 (UTC)
I see you're having a problem with User:Paulioetc, may I suggest a WP:WQA is appropriate as he clearly isn't prepared to listen or engage on the talk page. Wee Curry Monster talk 10:49, 25 February 2011 (UTC)
Have you looked at the main source of all of User:Paulioetc's edits? They nearly all stem from WP:SPS such as forums. There is a thread at WP:RSN#Forums a reliable source?, where the forum names the source this is what he is quoting as his source. I see no indication his edits meet WP:RS. Wee Curry Monster talk 11:58, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
Re your blanking of the occupants from the list. I'm not sure that every occupant needed to go, although I probably wouldn't object to some criteria being established for inclusion. Please give your thoughts at talk:Lympne Airport#Infobox. Thanks for your assistance in improving the article. Mjroots ( talk) 17:43, 7 March 2011 (UTC)
Yes, as soon as I saw it I thought it was him again. Let me check that reference out. Wee Curry Monster talk 20:55, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
Another newly registered editor, editing friendly fire? [1] Wee Curry Monster talk 21:04, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
Copyedit from my talk page: Though your note mentions safety, Hamilton-Paterson stresses that the SBAC request was not on safety grounds but, and I think he's quoting the SBAC, because it was "inappropriate behaviour for a bomber". He cites The Aeroplane Jan 09 p10. GraemeLeggett ( talk) 19:37, 11 March 2011 (UTC)
Thanks for cleaning up and helping edit the above article. I have been doing all this by myself as most of the other contributions are pretty much politically biased stuff. It hasnt been easy as I often get accused of being the supporter of military junta. Okkar ( talk) 23:10, 15 March 2011 (UTC)
I see that you have gone through and removed the Merge banners that I placed on the various Libyan NFZ Operation pages stating that the "merge suggestion closed out with "keep separate" at target page talk" The talk page for 2011 military intervention in Libya claims that the matter was previously closed "on the merger project page, after consensus was reached." I cannot find the "merger project page" referred to and so do not see where the claimed consensus is. Merge proposals are supposed to stay open for 7 days to allow the forming of a consensus, but some editors have decided to close the topic after only 1-2 days. This is premature. Unless you are able to identify where the consensus is, please reinstate the merge banners you have deleted. regards Mztourist ( talk) 13:58, 21 March 2011 (UTC)
I have resisted the temptation to revert your edit there - merely corrected where you attributed the Lynx Mk 8 to the Sutherland when the original says it had the Mk 3.
But what is going to happen is that more recent data wil be published and the original replaced. The big advantage of the table format was that when data for different dates become available, then it can be added as different columns without too much effort.-- Toddy1 ( talk) 21:20, 23 March 2011 (UTC)
Re: the October discussion you participated in on hyphenating ship names, User:SW is willing to make a mass move with a bot if there is a consensus here. — kwami ( talk) 21:47, 25 March 2011 (UTC)
(I posted that to all the participants of the discussion so I wouldn't be accused of canvassing.)
Per you recent edit here, I'm wondering why a Type 22 frigate would not hyphenate, but a Type 312 minesweeper would. Oversight? Shall I remove similar articles that remain?
Also, I would think that Standard-type battleship would hyphenate, even if 'Standard' is not the name of the type. — kwami ( talk) 22:01, 25 March 2011 (UTC)
Hi Graeme,
Thanks for all your help so far with this article. It needs a lot of works, and is a bit daunting, so having experts on board is a big help! Heywoodg 20:13, 29 March 2011 (UTC)
http://www.daftlogic.com/projects-google-maps-distance-calculator.htm enjoy :) Bwmoll3 ( talk) 13:12, 5 April 2011 (UTC)
I admire your rewrite of the lede for List of World War I aces from Poland. I was obviously unaware of the link to which you connected; that link improves the article enormously. Good show, as the Brit cousins would say.
Georgejdorner ( talk) 15:49, 6 April 2011 (UTC)
I'm soliciting active editors in coup article for a poll on this proposed change -- BoogaLouie ( talk) 15:00, 9 April 2011 (UTC)
See here - Neutralhomer • Talk • 00:47, 13 April 2011 (UTC)
You participated in the Frank Buckles A-Class review. If you have any further comments on the article or are satisfied with the article as it is, please post on the A-Class review page. Thanks. - Neutralhomer • Talk • 23:55, 18 April 2011 (UTC)
Why did you merge AC into Armed merchantmen? AC's may have technically been AMMs but they had a primarily navel function like privateers. AMMs had a primary merchant function. There is a big difference.-- 71.162.161.175 ( talk) 17:44, 19 April 2011 (UTC)
The A-Class Review for the Frank Buckles article was closed and promoted just moments ago. I want personally thank you for your help on the article and hope to work again with you on the FAC in the near future. :) - Neutralhomer • Talk • 10:23, 21 April 2011 (UTC)
Looks like the RAF Radar Museum is back online after fixing the fire exit problem. I'm going to be based in Cambridge from 18 to 22 May, inclusive, and perhaps I will be able to hire a car for a day and take a run up to Neatishead. What's your schedule during that period? I'd love to say hello. Email me via the link on my user page. Binksternet ( talk) 21:43, 24 April 2011 (UTC)
I disagree with your edit of the 21st of November. Would you object to me inserting a new version based around the word 'Notwithstanding'? Dolive21 ( talk) 11:13, 25 April 2011 (UTC)
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Would you be interested in WikiProject East Anglia?
If yes, please support us here at Wikipedia:WikiProject Council/Proposals/East Anglia. Wilbysuffolk talk 07:36, 8 May 2011 (UTC)
If it checks out then feel free to insert it. My problem with the edits is while some of the uncited material checks out, much of it doesn't as it is from unreliable sources such as WP:SPS and then he's obsessed with blaming that poor FAC in the Afghan incident when no-one was to blame. For info I asked a guy from the Operation Crimp article to comment. Wee Curry Monster talk 19:35, 10 May 2011 (UTC)
you wrote "A US Patriot missile battery fired on two F/A-18C Hornets 50 mi (80 km) from Karbala, Iraq. One missile hit the aircract of U.S. Navy pilot Lieutenant Nathan Dennis White of VFA-195, Carrier Air Wing Five killing him. This was the result of the missile design flaw in identifying hostile aircraft" You make sound like as if two aircrafts was fired on.
How about this: Two missiles fired by a US Patriot missile battery on F/A-18C Hornets from Karbala, Iraq. One missile hit the aircraft of U.S. Navy pilot Lieutenant Nathan Dennis White of VFA-195, Carrier Air Wing Five killing him. This was the result of the missile design flaw in identifying hostile aircraft". Is that ok? BTW try and find a link that say two missile cause i having a hard time finding them. Correct if i'm wrong but was two aircrafts fired on? 67.164.105.159 ( talk) 14:38, 11 May 2011 (UTC)
On the friendly fire section for Iraq War, someone needed to update and changhe the steve roberts. I don't like when it statement said shot and killed by a fellow British soldier when in fact he was shot by a tank-mounted machine gun from a fellow British soldier along with an Iraqi protester. Would you mind changing it it or something source it into something good? we need to let the readers know that he was shot by a tank-mounted machine gun, not a fellow UK soldier(like killing him with a sniper or something) I can't because my grammar and my spelling can be a pretty bit upwards and not good. I asked u since you pretty good at grammar.
Aslo can you add this as well? i found this link:
http://www.arlingtoncemetery.net/edward-korn.htm —Preceding unsigned comment added by 130.65.109.34 ( talk) 19:11, 24 May 2011 (UTC)
Hello, i noticed you moved Battle of Brazos Santiago to an action of title but you had moved it to the wrong date. Ive changed it to the correct one, just thought id give you a heads up in case you were planning to move some other articles. XavierGreen ( talk) 23:00, 24 May 2011 (UTC)
why was that steven roberts section erased? I don't see the "steven roberts" section for no reason. 130.65.109.34 ( talk) 21:20, 25 May 2011 (UTC)
I think the best citation to look up is The Poor Man's Guardian, "Advertisements & Notices," Issue 54. June 23, 1832. Text fragment: “attack on the Iron Duke, the”. That could get us new information, as opposed to confirming what I did. This was right after the iron shutters were put up, so it might tell us if people at the time made a connection with the nickname. The Freeman Journal cites are 14 June 1830, 16 June 16 1830, 28 June 1830, 26 July 1830, 30 October 1830, 5 November 1830, 4 January 1832, and 18 May 1832. I am surprised you haven’t voted in the Duke of Marlborough page move yet. Kauffner ( talk) 17:51, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
I'm notifying contributors to the 1953 Iranian coup article about a proposed change in the article posted on the talk page, that adds information about events leading up to the coup. Only a couple of comments so far. Am planning to request comments WP:RfC later. -- BoogaLouie ( talk) 00:00, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
Hey GraemeLeggett, I posted some information in the thread you opened on the Type VII that should hopefully clear up the situation. Just thought I'd drop by and let you know in case you have not seen it. Parsecboy ( talk) 11:11, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
Graeme, did you mean to rate the current version of Blockhaus d'Éperlecques as start-class? [2] The article was originally rated start-class before I expanded it, but it looks well beyond a start-class article now. Could you possibly take another look at it? Prioryman ( talk) 20:18, 7 June 2011 (UTC)
Thank you for pointing that out. I suggest to work on one single page. I will merge my article with Catsmeat's one and delete mine afterwards. -- Alberto Fernandez Fernandez ( talk) 11:06, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
I wondered why you reverted my edit? I think it is against MOS for "see also" to occur within the prose. The link within it simply doesn't back up the claim either. Such a claim surely needs a source, and the only one I have seen on one of the BI articles doesn't quite say this. To say that historians often avoid a term (for whatever reason) is quite a big claim to make without any support. Matt Lewis ( talk) 20:53, 11 June 2011 (UTC)
...but I reverted one of your edits in reverting our old friend User:Paulioetc for block evasion. Wee Curry Monster talk 13:30, 12 June 2011 (UTC)
Hi there. I do not disagree that infoboxes should be concise but the version you restored contains information that is simply incorrect. There is a different between "human" and "human with altered DNA" and that difference should be included in the infobox as well. I don't think that little bit (45 characters) makes the infobox any more complicated. What is irrelevant is the number of times it has been stated on the show though. If the primary source says it once, it's enough, there is no need to have it said multiple times before we can include it in the infobox. I don't think there is a policy/guideline that says different, is there? As such, I would request that you undo your revert, also per WP:BRD, since I just restored the revision before Edokter's edit and you shouldn't re-revert me if you disagree but instead take it to the talk page. Regards So Why 17:58, 17 June 2011 (UTC)
I am not confident with the list of the bombings on Mimoyecques. Given your experience, how would you recommend to systematically track (and correctly source) the bombings? Thank you for your help-- Alberto Fernandez Fernandez ( talk) 06:55, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
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First off, thanks for your assistance with editing the 3d Infantry Division article. You're been a great help. I apologize if we seem to be stepping on each other's toes between edits. Perhaps I can shed some justification on my edits.
Again, considering
good faith, I appreciate your help in making my Division's page better.
Bullmoosebell (
talk) 21:42, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
Hi did you read the article before and after the edit. My revision had sources Mjroots did not. Based on the hate message he put on my page he has a problem with Iranians, accusing me of being one. I guess he's not the only one? Xonus ( talk) 21:32, 4 July 2011 (UTC)
Thanks for the appreciation - there's still some way to go on that article though. DexDor ( talk) 20:57, 5 July 2011 (UTC)
Your there. As I'm not familiar with en:WP rules/details/templates: better than only removing the template do yourself what you ask from a “foreigner/guest”. That way ignorance will remain what seems to be usual. -- Хрюша 10:57, 8 July 2011 (UTC)
I'm still in the dark as to what "a difference of less than an eighth of an inch of water gauge" means. The link to water gauge leads to an article about a device for showing the water level in a boiler or whatever: it is nothing to do with pressure differences, which surely is the issue here. I'm no technical expert, but I do have a prety fair understanding of technical issues for an amateur, and think that if I can't understand this, the average user of wkipedia will be equally baffled. (if it means less han an eighth of an inch of hydrostatic pressure, that is indeed a very sensitive valve indeed) TheLongTone ( talk) 10:37, 9 July 2011 (UTC)
I notice you were at one time active editing sugar beet. I would like to remove the "unref" tag and was hoping you could help. Do you know of some reference(s) one could cite for the long, detailed section about processing? The "History" section also cites no sources except for something about GM sugar beets. And so on. I was hoping you'd have some background info that you could share. Sharktopus talk 21:15, 9 July 2011 (UTC)
Chryssoun Aristion Andrias mean Golden Medal for Bravery.-- 46.246.178.119 ( talk) 10:23, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
I have edited out many, if not all, of the material commented upon on the article's talk page. It would now be quite easy to transfer the remaining sections into the existing Hyper engine article. I was quite concerned about the major rework necessary to revise the existing article with what material I thought was needed to revive it, but I am now confident, with the consensus of all concerned, that I can manage that task. Would you please, when you find a moment, take a look at my edits and leave your comments? Regards, Buster40004 Talk 16:22, 15 July 2011 (UTC)
Thanks for researching this change. If you have the time, you might consider examining the rest of the category's entries to see which others are more properly named Exercise rather than Operation, as well. Cheers and thanks Buckshot06 (talk) 19:22, 17 July 2011 (UTC)
Graeme, the issue of Barnes and the relative worth of his work are IMO a distraction in the article. I'll see if I can find some other sources for the relative strength of both sides in the battle -- this would allow citations to Barnes' work to be removed from the article as well as the amplifying note I inserted as "nb 1". Barnes' work overall may be fine, but the ratios cited for the two forces appear to be internally inconsistent with other information provided in the work. Cheers, W. B. Wilson ( talk) 15:16, 21 July 2011 (UTC)
"British" Ministry of War Transport? How many other MoWTs are there. Surely the phrase shows that it's British, in a similar way to Royal Air Force and Royal Navy do. Mjroots2 ( talk) 10:37, 28 July 2011 (UTC)
including a Norwegian one. GraemeLeggett ( talk) 11:56, 28 July 2011 (UTC)
I have reverted your truncation of subject article pending discussion and consensus on alleged duplication of material in unspecified articles. A certain amount of duplication may be appropriate background for a site commemorating a relatively short duration of service by a small number of aircraft with some high-profile events at other points on the service routes. Potential duplication may involve articles on:
Alternative approaches might be to merge stub articles on some of these subjects into more comprehensive articles and replace the stubs with redirects. I invite your comments. Thewellman ( talk) 21:41, 1 August 2011 (UTC)
I have a question. Are we deleting all images (rank, awards, etc.) in infoboxes of military personnel? I understand how flags should not be included, per
MOS:FLAG, though they do serve the purpose of the infobox, according to
MOS:INFOBOX, which allows "readers to identify key facts at a glance."
However, I understand how some infoboxes contain more info than other and, as a result, present an opportunity for a cluster of images and links. So, is it out intent to delete images from infoboxes, or are we going by a case-by-case basis (for instance, the article of
George Washington has flags & images in the infobox, yet is rated a
good article). Here's some other articles to consider,
Carter Ham,
William Westmoreland,
Audie Murphy. Thanks for you help with this and let me know what you think!
Bullmoosebell (
talk) 19:27, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
Regarding your recent edit for Audie Murphy, I invite you to participate in a discussion at Talk:Audie Murphy. Thank you, in advance, Bullmoosebell ( talk) 01:42, 17 August 2011 (UTC)
The intention was to re-direct each to the List, but sleep intervened. Will have a go later, after work. Petebutt ( talk) 03:17, 23 August 2011 (UTC)
I took the liberty to revert your change at Junkers Ju 87. IMHO the very fact that there were some German speakers in the town does not mean we have to use the German name (or double naming, for that matter). There's a couple of thousands of Poles living in London, but that doesn't mean we should always mention "London (Londyn)". Or mention German names of British cities bombed by the Luftwaffe, for that matter. Sure, they are mentioned in German sources, but that doesn't mean we should follow.Cheers, // Halibu tt 00:05, 24 August 2011 (UTC)
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References Brown, R (2006). "Size of the Moon", Scientific American, 51(78). Miller, E (2005). The Sun, Academic Press. Samuraiantiqueworld ( talk) 11:34, 28 August 2011 (UTC)
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Hello Graeme. Thanks for your tweak of Ansett-ANA Flight 325.
I have just noticed the article XV179. I see you have done some work on it this year. The title of this article doesn’t conform to the guidance at Wikipedia:WikiProject Aviation/Aviation accident task force#Accident article naming conventions. Could you have a look at this one and move it to a more appropriate title if you agree that is what is needed. Regards. Dolphin ( t) 12:57, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
Hello Graeme,
According to the Canadian Encyclopedia, Canada is merely consulted when it comes to organizing peace in the aftermath of the World War II. The Peace Conference held in Paris, in the summer of 1946, gives the second-tier Allies such as Canada the opportunity to only comment on the decisions taken. So Canada, like some other Western powers, does not end the state of war with Germany until 1951. Hope this Help! (BenSF) — Preceding unsigned comment added by BenSF ( talk • contribs) 02:44, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
Thanks for your comment Graeme. I'll copy it to TheEd17's talkpage where the discussion may be taking place ; I completely agree with you. Cheers Buckshot06 (talk) 15:36, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
Hello, GraemeLeggett. I looked at the introductory paragraph under the Background section for Exercise Grand Slam, and it is not historically accurate (e.g., World War Two ended in 1945, and NATO was formed in 1949; the start of the Cold War predates the Korean War). NATO reflected the containment policy of the Truman administration, and the Soviet containment strategy sub-section in the Background section summarizes this information in the Exercise Longstep article. Also, Exercise Longstep is contemporaneaous with Exercise Grand Slam, both being 1952 NATO military operations. Marcd30319 ( talk) 23:10, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
I noticed that when you did your last edit on the (shamefully sketchy) Cody biog that you changed the last edit I made, which had changed 'British Isles' to 'Britain'. I did that not because it's an issue with me, but because I've an editor breathing down my nec on the subjest: see my talk page. Nice refs, btw. TheLongTone ( talk) 07:09, 16 September 2011 (UTC)
On Ed17 talk page, Graeme Leggett noted that: "I think some common approach is needed on NATO exercise articles. On the one hand, some degree of background is necessary for each article to be put into context: eg with respect to current doctrine or the results of the previous similar exercise, or a change in the political situation. On the other hand, I think largely political rather than operational viewpoints are too distant from the point and overlong quotes are not useful - deprecated even per MoS etc. Is this something worth flagging up at the MilHist talkpages?" Given the fact that the Eisenhower administration developed its so-called "New Look" approach in defense strategy which emphasized massive retaliation, and this policy represents an evolution from the containment policy of the Truman administration. Also, for the U.S. Navy, historian Samuel P. Huntington set forth a naval strategy oriented to naval operation in the Mediterranean Sea. This strategic background is appropriate and essential to understanding the historical context for NATO exercises in 1957. This assertion that this is covered by other articles is not appropriate approach and does a disservice to our user audience. I therefore reverts the edited text to the original content. See talk page for this article, and I suggest that we examine this issue there. Marcd30319 ( talk) 13:28, 16 September 2011 (UTC)
The suggestion that this background information is duplicative and unnecessary is an absolute non sequitur. Please note that Naval Striking and Support Forces Southern Europe did not exist at the time of such earlier NATO Southern Region military exercise as 1952's Exercise Longstep and 1952's Exercise Grand Slam. In fact, Naval Striking and Support Forces Southern Europe (STRIKFORSOUTH) was created after the creation of Allied Forces Mediterranean (AFMED) under Lord Mountbatten, and STRIKFORSOUTH was created to maintain American control over U.S. nuclear weapons on U.S. Sixth Fleet aircraft carrier in accordance with the McMahon Act. Therefore, this background information on the command structure for Operation Deep Water is approbriate. Consequently, the assertion that this information is covered by other articles is incorrect and also does a disservice to our user audience to exclude this information for this article. I therefore reverts the edited text to the original content. See talk page for this article, and I suggest that we examine this issue there. Marcd30319 ( talk) 13:28, 16 September 2011 (UTC)
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Hello,
An article you have helped edit, Confirmation and overclaiming of aerial victories during World War II (which was formerly entitled "Confirmation and overclaiming of aerial victories") has been proposed for deletion.
Georgejdorner ( talk) 17:37, 2 October 2011 (UTC)
The ships were equipped with either a 4-inch gun, or a 4.7-inch gun. In the vast majority of cases, it is not known which of the two was carried. It is entirely possible that both types were carried by the same ship at different times. Mjroots ( talk) 18:07, 4 October 2011 (UTC)
Please see Talk:Dehousing#Chief scientist to the Royal Navy -- PBS ( talk) 03:11, 8 October 2011 (UTC)
I'm polling editors active in the 1953 Iranian coup article on the issue of adding a short subsection titled ’Iranian coup supporters’ since the article has no mention on why they opposed Mosaddeq other than being bribed to do so.
Iranian opponents of Mosaddeq have been described as including "religious leaders and preachers and their followers, as well as landlords and provincial magnates"; [15] "conservative politicians such as prime ministers Ahmad Qavam and General Ali Razmara .... and commanders of the military, most notably General Fazlollah Zahedi ... led by the Shah." [16] They have been described as forces that would "have been crippled without substantial British and later U.S. support," [17] while authors Ali Gheissari, Seyyed Vali Reza Nasr say "it would be mistaken to view the coup as entirely a foreign instigation with no support" in Iran. [18]
Observers differ on the opponents motivation for supporting the coup. Mark J. Gasiorowski describes them as "very ambitious and opportunistic." [19] Another author calls Mosaddeq's Iranian opponents elites "determined to retrieve their endangered interests and influence, and unconcerned with the lasting damage to Iranian patriotic sensibilities and democratic aspirations." [20] Money was involved with the US CIA paying out $150,000 after March 1953 to "journalists, editors, preachers, and opinion members", giving Zahedi $135,000 to "win additional friends", and paying members of the majlis $11,000 a week. [21]
Other authors (Ali Gheissari, Seyyed Vali Reza Nasr) describe the opponents as agreeing with Mosaddeq that the "British position was unjust and illegal," but believing that after the 1946 attempt by the Soviets to separate Azerbaijan and Kurdistan from Iran, "Iran's interests lay in close ties with the West to ward off the Soviet threat." [16]government of Iranian Prime Minister Mohammad Mosaddegh organized by the intelligence agencies of the United Kingdom and the United States. [22] -- BoogaLouie ( talk) 16:49, 18 October 2011 (UTC)
...remove the "popular culture" and picture sections from my KV-4 article? GMRE ( talk) 08:11, 21 October 2011 (UTC)
But what about the pictures then? Those were scans of the real designs. GMRE ( talk) 17:43, 21 October 2011 (UTC)
Graeme, I'd appreciate your support at Talk:Daring class destroyer (1949) about the removal of the "models" section. Shem ( talk) 09:34, 22 October 2011 (UTC)
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Can you give me about 10 more minutes please? Will change template to under construction when I finish. Mjroots ( talk) 16:42, 30 October 2011 (UTC)
Hi, Twelve months ago you were going looking for a photo to go with the article on Charles Terres Weymann - you didn't like the one available. Had any luck? Regards, Eddaido ( talk) 07:09, 6 November 2011 (UTC)
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Although it has been a long time, I really appreciate your comments at Talk:Tatmadaw. Both editors, including myself, forgot to assume good faith when things get hot. Again, thank you very much. — SWH talk 18:08, 12 November 2011 (UTC) |
Thanks for your edits to this page. Would you please mind keeping an eye on it periodically? We may get additional anon/vandal edits on this page that need a second look. Cheers and thanks Buckshot06 (talk) 18:39, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
Hello.
I note that you have replaced my edit with "Citation Needed". I am curious to know why as I am a direct descendant of Charles Albert Hobby — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mypyrex ( talk • contribs) 19:45, 22 November 2011 (UTC)
Sorry I bothered in that case. I ought to know when my own grandfather died. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mypyrex ( talk • contribs) 13:29, 23 November 2011 (UTC)
Did you not think I had that in mind? Israel is at (Israel), and until someone seriously starts adding Tom Cooper's material, we have no data on pre-2003 Iraqi squadrons (and we need some second sources, at the very least). Current Iraqi squadrons seem to have ordinals; ie 23rd Squadron (Iraq). The point is that '1 Squadron, Indian Air Force' is an awfully clumsy title, and this significantly shortens it. But, the Pakistani Air Force is next on my list; can you think of any other 'PAFs' that use RAF-style designations without ordinals? Paraguay will have that Sp/Port little circle after the number, what else? Buckshot06 (talk) 06:57, 25 November 2011 (UTC)
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Since there was little discussion and no resolution to my proposal to add a short subsection titled ’Iranian coup supporters’ to the 1953 Iranian coup article, I'm doing a Request for Comment on the issue as well as polling editors active on the 1953 Iranian coup article. -- BoogaLouie ( talk) 20:51, 3 December 2011 (UTC)
Greetings, User:GraemeLeggett.
I have a question for you that is pertinent to an article you recently edited, Windhoek Concentration Camp. Since others may also know the answer (or know of a nuance of the answer that you might not be aware of), I've opened the discussion on that article's Talk page. I invite you to comment.
Cordially, Virago250 ( talk) 18:57, 8 December 2011 (UTC)
I,m all for adding bits, but I am a bit dubious of the Flight dimensions for the mainplanes. Personally, I would trust the historian more than a journalist. Can you confirm the figures from another source too? If not, could you change them back to the Putnam ones? Petebutt ( talk) 01:37, 24 December 2011 (UTC)
FWiW Bzuk ( talk) 02:32, 25 December 2011 (UTC).
Thank you for correcting my typo from 'hinges' to 'latches' with regard to the inflight loss of the inspection panel on British Airways flight 2157, however, you then marked the article for deletion based on the incident not being newsworthy. May I politely request that you would reconsider this and unmark the article? I have spent some time in researching it to get the facts right and it was on the mainstream BBC News and also several newpapers at the time. I think it is important that people have access to the truth and that is why I have put the link to the AIBB. Many people I know remember this incident and it is one of few cases when the emergency vehicles have been mobilised at Gatwick. As you probably know, one of the panel latches was allegedly found inside the cabin which would indicate a hull breach, but I could not find a reliable reference for this and so did not include it in the article. Please advise - many thanks! BritAirman ( talk) 21:20, 30 December 2011 (UTC)
BritAirman ( talk) 22:47, 31 December 2011 (UTC)
You might want to take a look at Template:Admiralty airships - I think you know more about this subject than I do. It's just been substantially edited by someone who made a number of (good faith but ill-informed) edits to airship articles yesterday: I've reverted several & noticed you had reverted another. And a happy new year to you! TheLongTone ( talk) 00:29, 31 December 2011 (UTC)
I added the 1905 US Patent content and web source to the Whitehead article and moved the controversy section out of the introduction. You subsequently reverted my edit which removed the US Patent content and source completely. I've restored the US Patent content to the intro and left the lengthy controversial content in the intro. If you're going to be a mother hen, at least leave reliable npov content in the article. Tomticker5 ( talk) 15:08, 7 January 2012 (UTC)
Hi, I have been doing some work on the CP Ships article, trying to make it more similar to the other steamship articles. I noticed that you reverted the detailed information on why the captains are notable. When I compare this to other pages, it seems to me that there is too much information. This article should be about CP Ships and having the Captians there is relevant. I just think there is too much detail, since they each have their own webpage. I think two of the Captains can be expanded into the relevant fleet event and the one Commodore should probably be in the history section above (with reduced information on his numerous honours). What do you think? Doesn't make sense to me to now have the Japanese earthquake referenced for both the ship and Captain separately, for example.-- Varaldarade ( talk) 19:57, 17 January 2012 (UTC)
I'm polling editors active in the 1953 Iranian coup article on the issue of cleaning up the article to fix duplication, contradiction and bad chronology. Here are my proposed changes. Please leave a comment. -- BoogaLouie ( talk) 22:26, 19 January 2012 (UTC)
Dear Graeme, thanks for the tidying - but what is LAA version? Best wishes ( Msrasnw ( talk) 13:05, 31 January 2012 (UTC))
Hi there. I saw that you have been making some edits to the above article and wanted your opinion on this: Do you think that this article is over-referenced? For example, the sentence "President Franklin D. Roosevelt arrived at a temporary platform[23][24] on his special train via the Reading RR from the North[25] after leaving Springwood at Hyde Park NY[26] that morning.[27]" has five citations, including two for the fact that he arrived at at temporary platform. It seems to me that only one citation would be enough for the sentence. (I wanted a second opinion before I started removing notes.) Thanks for your work on the article so far. Wild Wolf ( talk) 21:24, 5 February 2012 (UTC)
I de-prodded this, which appears to be real and notable. Take it to WP:AfD for wider discussion. Bearian ( talk) 01:39, 7 February 2012 (UTC)
I don't know if you remember, but a while back we collaborated on Disney bomb. I'm now working on bringing HMS Graph up to GA and, as it's the first time I've done this as a solo effort, wondered if you would care to look it over before I put it in for an A-class review. You seem to be an experienced editor with an interest in WW2 stuff. Catsmeat ( talk) 23:04, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
Dave ♠♣♥♦™№1185©♪♫® 22:47, 10 March 2012 (UTC)
Please clarify what clause, specifically, of the MOS:FLAG policy supports your edit. As it was pointed out during the related discussion, there are a lot of aircraft pages where coutry flags are used. Your change creates an inconsistency in handling of different aircraft pages, there must be a very good reason for that. C1010 ( talk) 15:54, 16 March 2012 (UTC)
Please read: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Blohm_%26_Voss_BV_238#Conflicting_accounts_of_the_destruction_of_the_aircraft.
Cricobr ( talk) 14:16, 22 March 2012 (UTC)
Morning. I was looking at the edit history of this article (which is now undergoing my trademark 'give the article a partial rewrite and then bugger off for pastures new, leaving behind a good sprinkling of typos' edit style), & noticed you'd changed the specs back to the original aircraft specifications. I've changed it back, because I couldn't stop it displaying 'Height()', which I tink looks messy... height is a pretty unimportant dimension & is missing from many sets of specs in reference works. TheLongTone ( talk) 11:04, 2 April 2012 (UTC)
Just curious as to why you piped links that already re-directed to the relevant articles. Personally I prefer re-directs which give a far better chance of someone searching finding the correct article, particularly with the Wikipedia search engine. Although it is a personal preference, I will re-direct links wherever possible, replacing piped links. Petebutt ( talk) 17:13, 2 April 2012 (UTC)
Thank you for spotting and removing my last edit. I intended to make only a couple of minor edits (which have already been dealt with) but for some reason which I cannot figure out I must have been working on a previous version of the text without realising it. Thankfully you have put it right and no permanent damage is done! Sue Zuki ( talk) 15:48, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
to all the editors involved in the rapidly expanding List of monuments of the Gettysburg Battlefield. I recently spun off the state monuments for Alabama, North Carolina, Virginia (and intend to do Pennsylvania soon), leaving only a token bit of each in the list. I named these articles to include the name of the battle Alabama State Monument (Gettysburg) because many states have monuments in several battlefields and it seemed that we might as well start preparing for Alabama State Monument (Vicksburg) right now. Someone then re-named those articles (yesterday?) and removed the name of the battle. (they also changed the picture of the North Carolina Monument that I had added that I think much better caught the spirit of Borglum's work, but that is another issue.) Furthermore, there is something really unexplained happening on the talk pages of the new articles, If you click on the TALK tab at, say Virginia Monument (a really lame title, because how many of those are there across America?) you end up at the talk page of the list. What is that about? I would like to redirect these articles back to where they were redirected from yesterday, but unlike the editor who just did it, I'd like to involve all the interested editors. Einar aka Carptrash ( talk) 17:37, 8 April 2012 (UTC)
I removed the tag on the strength of applying the specs template, but I still don't see where we might find more comprehensive specifications from. I am taking the view that unless there are truly gaping holes then I remove the tags. It doesn't stop anybody adding more later, and it helps tidy up the tag section on the maintenance page. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Petebutt ( talk • contribs) 06:22, 14 April 2012 (UTC)