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Hi,
I have recreated the article in my Userspace as per your feedback. I have tried to avoid any words which may be seen as promotional and/or non-neutral. I have also added further references and links. I hope the article is now acceptible to be moved back into articlespace. Finally I would like to point out that I am not Fiedorczuk or QuietCountry25, although these people are known to me. I look forward to your feedback. Aspland11 ( talk) 12:35, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
Thanks for the feedback. Re-Philosophy, what would you recommend I cut, my inclination would be that the last sentence could go; would that be adequate? Re-links in Programming/Events covered/Artists interviewed: Not sure what to do there because the station does cover a wide array. The Programming list is similar to that on the WFMU page, only smaller, if I left that but cut down the Artists section would that be okay? Again, thanks for your feedback. Aspland11 ( talk) 15:36, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
Hi, re-lack of references, there were references, in fact the article was much longer and well referenced, but if you look at the article history you will see that
User:JzG has done six edits on the article. I was in touch with
User:MC10 as per the threads message history on my page, and they were on the verge of accepting the article. As this is a page which JzG has deleted before, I don't know why he has done these edits. I asked you and UserMC10 for your advice. I would prefer if you could help me to create an objective non-promtional article. I trust your ability to be fair and objective in this matter. Please help. Am I allowed to undo Guys edits? I did want to cut some stuff as mentioned in the subjects thread on my talk page message.
Aspland11 (
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19:46, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
Hi, I can remove the link you said looks unreliable, no problem. Re- the Brooklyn Heights Courier, the article mentions Radio23 in paragraph eight. I believe I cited it for DJ 9-Eleven Thesaurus, a youth-group collective who DJ on Radio23. Philosophy can go if need be. The list of musical styles reflects the content on the WFMU page, which Radio23 is related to and shares an archive with. Does that need to go? User:MC10 suggested I shorten the list of artists features, which I wrote back to them indicating my willingness to do so, but it can go if you think it totally neccessary. I am ready to undertake all changes that you see fit. Let me know what you think. What can I do? If the page meets the criteria and you see it as fit and valid, can it be afforded some sort of protection? Thanks Aspland11 ( talk) 20:44, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
Thanks for the message. I noticed that after you wrote you did an edit on the article; would it be okay to stand now as you've edited it? It looks good to me- thanks for the help. If so can I move it back to articlespace or would it be better if you did it to lessen the likelihood of it being deleted again? Aspland11 ( talk) 11:30, 21 June 2010 (UTC)
— MC10 ( T• C• GB• L) 19:33, 25 June 2010 (UTC)
— MC10 ( T• C• GB• L) 01:18, 26 June 2010 (UTC)
— MC10 ( T• C• GB• L) 20:15, 2 July 2010 (UTC)
— MC10 ( T• C• GB• L) 17:05, 3 July 2010 (UTC)
— MC10 ( T• C• GB• L) 02:30, 7 July 2010 (UTC)
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— Rlevse • Talk • 06:04, 7 July 2010 (UTC)
I have nominated Ola's Kool Kitchen, an article that you created, for deletion. I do not think that this article satisfies Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion, and have explained why at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Ola's Kool Kitchen. Your opinions on the matter are welcome at that same discussion page; also, you are welcome to edit the article to address these concerns. Thank you for your time.
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![]() | On July 26, 2010, Did you know? was updated with a fact from the article Ola's Kool Kitchen, which you created or substantially expanded. You are welcome to check how many hits the article got while on the front page ( here's how, quick check ) and add it to DYKSTATS if it got over 5,000. If you know of another interesting fact from a recently created article, then please suggest it on the Did you know? talk page. |
Hello, Aspland11, and
welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for
your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Our
intro page provides helpful information for new users - please check it out! If you need help, visit
Wikipedia:Questions, ask me on my talk page, or place {{helpme}}
on this page and someone will show up shortly to answer your questions. Claritas Happy editing!
Claritas
§
17:11, 19 June 2010 (UTC)
Hi,
I have recreated the article in my Userspace as per your feedback. I have tried to avoid any words which may be seen as promotional and/or non-neutral. I have also added further references and links. I hope the article is now acceptible to be moved back into articlespace. Finally I would like to point out that I am not Fiedorczuk or QuietCountry25, although these people are known to me. I look forward to your feedback. Aspland11 ( talk) 12:35, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
Thanks for the feedback. Re-Philosophy, what would you recommend I cut, my inclination would be that the last sentence could go; would that be adequate? Re-links in Programming/Events covered/Artists interviewed: Not sure what to do there because the station does cover a wide array. The Programming list is similar to that on the WFMU page, only smaller, if I left that but cut down the Artists section would that be okay? Again, thanks for your feedback. Aspland11 ( talk) 15:36, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
Hi, re-lack of references, there were references, in fact the article was much longer and well referenced, but if you look at the article history you will see that
User:JzG has done six edits on the article. I was in touch with
User:MC10 as per the threads message history on my page, and they were on the verge of accepting the article. As this is a page which JzG has deleted before, I don't know why he has done these edits. I asked you and UserMC10 for your advice. I would prefer if you could help me to create an objective non-promtional article. I trust your ability to be fair and objective in this matter. Please help. Am I allowed to undo Guys edits? I did want to cut some stuff as mentioned in the subjects thread on my talk page message.
Aspland11 (
talk)
19:46, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
Hi, I can remove the link you said looks unreliable, no problem. Re- the Brooklyn Heights Courier, the article mentions Radio23 in paragraph eight. I believe I cited it for DJ 9-Eleven Thesaurus, a youth-group collective who DJ on Radio23. Philosophy can go if need be. The list of musical styles reflects the content on the WFMU page, which Radio23 is related to and shares an archive with. Does that need to go? User:MC10 suggested I shorten the list of artists features, which I wrote back to them indicating my willingness to do so, but it can go if you think it totally neccessary. I am ready to undertake all changes that you see fit. Let me know what you think. What can I do? If the page meets the criteria and you see it as fit and valid, can it be afforded some sort of protection? Thanks Aspland11 ( talk) 20:44, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
Thanks for the message. I noticed that after you wrote you did an edit on the article; would it be okay to stand now as you've edited it? It looks good to me- thanks for the help. If so can I move it back to articlespace or would it be better if you did it to lessen the likelihood of it being deleted again? Aspland11 ( talk) 11:30, 21 June 2010 (UTC)
— MC10 ( T• C• GB• L) 19:33, 25 June 2010 (UTC)
— MC10 ( T• C• GB• L) 01:18, 26 June 2010 (UTC)
— MC10 ( T• C• GB• L) 20:15, 2 July 2010 (UTC)
— MC10 ( T• C• GB• L) 17:05, 3 July 2010 (UTC)
— MC10 ( T• C• GB• L) 02:30, 7 July 2010 (UTC)
![]() | On July 7, 2010, Did you know? was updated with a fact from the article Radio23, which you created or substantially expanded. You are welcome to check how many hits the article got while on the front page ( here's how, quick check ) and add it to DYKSTATS if it got over 5,000. If you know of another interesting fact from a recently created article, then please suggest it on the Did you know? talk page. |
— Rlevse • Talk • 06:04, 7 July 2010 (UTC)
I have nominated Ola's Kool Kitchen, an article that you created, for deletion. I do not think that this article satisfies Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion, and have explained why at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Ola's Kool Kitchen. Your opinions on the matter are welcome at that same discussion page; also, you are welcome to edit the article to address these concerns. Thank you for your time.
Please contact me if you're unsure why you received this message. Guy ( Help!) 08:29, 23 July 2010 (UTC)
— MC10 ( T• C• GB• L) 00:24, 26 July 2010 (UTC)
— MC10 ( T• C• GB• L) 17:37, 26 July 2010 (UTC)
![]() | On July 26, 2010, Did you know? was updated with a fact from the article Ola's Kool Kitchen, which you created or substantially expanded. You are welcome to check how many hits the article got while on the front page ( here's how, quick check ) and add it to DYKSTATS if it got over 5,000. If you know of another interesting fact from a recently created article, then please suggest it on the Did you know? talk page. |