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WZZM

The WZZM weatherball
The WZZM weatherball
5x expanded by Sammi Brie ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 693 past nominations.

Sammi Brie (she/her •  tc) 02:53, 24 June 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting: Yes
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Article nominated two days after promotion to GA. Passes Copyvio check. Picture is free use. QPQ done. AGF on ALT0 offline source. I prefer ALT0, it's more interesting. Riley1012 ( talk) 21:56, 1 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Aid climbing

  • Reviewed:
Improved to Good Article status by Aszx5000 ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

Aszx5000 ( talk) 13:45, 23 June 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Approving nomination. Article is long enough and promoted to GA 1 day before DYK nom. Article is well-sourced, presentable, and copyvio-free (excluding quoted section). Hook is interesting and well-sourced. Image meets criteria. QPQ not needed. Good to go. Thank you for you nomination Aszx5000! Kimikel ( talk) 02:35, 1 July 2024 (UTC) reply
Poking my nose in while promoting hooks to prep - this hook seems to not really be about the bolded subject, which is aid climbing. The hook reads as though the bolded article should be Lynn Hill or maybe free climbing. Is there another hook possible that focuses more directly on aid climbing? Premeditated Chaos ( talk) 22:21, 14 July 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Premeditated Chaos:, I understand your point but I offered that hook as the whole affair was one of the biggest moments in modern rock climbing history. Some alternatives are:
ALT1 ... that Jim Bridwell's 1975 aid climbing route, Sea of Dreams, was the first "if you fall, you die" pitch on El Capitan (pictured - same as above) ?
Source: Obituary: Jim "The Bird" Bridwell (1944-2018)
ALT2 ... that the aid climbing routes on the Great Trango Tower (pictured) are some of the longest vertical big wall climbs in the world?
Image
Great trango tower
Source: Great Trango Tower: The Biggest Big Wall, Big-Wall Climbing: What is it, Which Wall is the Biggest, and Why is This Climbing Different?
Would any of those work? thanks. Aszx5000 ( talk) 13:42, 15 July 2024 (UTC) reply
Yup, I think either of those would work nicely. I leave it to the promoter to pick between them; I'll strike ALT0. ♠ PMC(talk) 00:42, 16 July 2024 (UTC) reply
Premeditated Chaos, just to clarify, you have reviewed and approved ALT1 & 2? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 ( talk) 13:16, 16 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Goodboy Galaxy

  • Source: Yin-Poole, Wesley (28 August 2021). ""First commercial GBA game in 13 years" smashes Kickstarter target in less than a day Goodboy, Galaxy". Euro Gamer. Retrieved 27 June 2024. / McFerran, Damien (27 August 2021). "The Game Boy Advance Is Getting Its First Commercial Release In 13 Years, Goodboy Galaxy". Nintendo Life. Retrieved 27 June 2024.
Created by Oz346 ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 8 past nominations.

Slgrandson ( How's my egg-throwing coleslaw?) 09:37, 27 June 2024 (UTC). reply

Sam Salz (American football)

Moved to mainspace by Bruxton ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 152 past nominations.

Bruxton ( talk) 19:39, 23 June 2024 (UTC). reply

  • This is only a preliminary review for now as the article needs a copyedit when it comes to wording and missing punctuation. However, the article does seem long enough and is adequately sourced and a QPQ has been done. My preferred hook is ALT1, but it doesn't exactly match the article or the source so it might fail at WT:DYK or ERRORS. ALT0 could probably be modified to say he never played organized football before signing up as the current wording might be too vague. ALT2 might need additional context especially for readers from countries where Judaism is not a common religion: my suggestion would be to propose a new hook that explains his 39 jersey and how it related to the Sabbath. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 13:37, 28 June 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Narutolovehinata5: Thank you for checking out this nomination.. I did some copyediting but it is hard for me to find my own errors so I would appreciate you calling them out. For hook ideas I prefer that someone click the article to discover rather than getting in the weeds with specificity in the hook. For fifth and sixth hook ideas:
ALT4: ... that a wide receiver on the Texas A&M Aggies football team wears number 39 to symbolize the tasks or items which Jews should avoid during the Sabbath?
ALT5: ... that American football player Sam Salz wears number 39 to remind him of "lamed tet melachot"?
Bruxton ( talk) 15:10, 28 June 2024 (UTC) reply
ALT4 sounds good to me. The article is improved but the wording still seems a bit weird (for example, "As a young boy Salz never watched college football because it is played on the Shabbat and he is an observant orthodox Jew." and "He was not invited to join the football team so he practiced by himself within sight of the football team and eventually earned a roster spot.") I don't have access to the NYT source; is 2003 mentioned in that article? Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 23:18, 28 June 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Narutolovehinata5: Excellent. You can archive a link to read text it by putting the url in archive.ph. Here is a link to the NYT article. I got 2003 from "Salz, 21, became obsessed with playing college football at a young age, for reasons he can’t exactly pinpoint." It is a 2024 article and 2024-21 is c. 2003. Regarding the two sentences, I do not see the weirdness to their structurel; if you do please edit them. Bruxton ( talk) 23:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC) reply
Maybe it's just me not being a native speaker but something feels off about the first sentence to me, but it could just be that it's correct to a native speaker but sounds weird to a non-native one. The second one could probably be rewritten to something like "As he was not invited to join the football team, he practiced by himself within sight of them. He eventually earned a roster spot." Maybe something like that? Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 09:03, 30 June 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Narutolovehinata5: I reordered the first sentence you called out and I used your language for the second sentence. Bruxton ( talk) 22:44, 4 July 2024 (UTC) reply
Now that I think about it, ALT4a is quite long. Would it be okay if it got shortened to ALT4a ... that a Texas A&M Aggies football wide receiver wears number 39 to symbolize the tasks or items which Jews should avoid during the Sabbath? "Football" could even be dropped if possible, but given American football's relatively niche popularity outside of North America, just "wide receiver" without context might not make much sense, hence the addition of "football" (or even "college football" if really needed). Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 00:31, 5 July 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Narutolovehinata5: I am ok with any change that helps advance this nomination. Bruxton ( talk) 01:01, 5 July 2024 (UTC) reply
Cool. I'll think about hook options over the next few days but as long as the copyediting has been completed I can probably complete the review. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 13:31, 7 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Apologies for the delay in reviewing. The article meets requirements for newness and length, and I did not find any close paraphrasing. QPQ has been done and verified. All major statements in the article match the sources, and all hooks are mentioned in the article and verified in the sources. There is one statement in the article, however: the "thought to be the only orthodox Jewish football player in NCAA Division I" fact might change in the future, so the mention in the article may need a qualifier. I also note that one of the sources says he's the first known orthodox Jewish college football player, but given the recent brouhaha over "first" hooks it might be the safest option not to go with that. Some variation of ALT4 (I will leave the exact wording to the promoter) is probably the best option here as the most unusual or interesting; my original preference (ALT1) is unsuitable due to not being directly mentioned in the article, as well as not meeting the "unlikely to change" criterion. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 10:35, 11 July 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Narutolovehinata5: Good catch I attributed the statement Bruxton ( talk) 04:21, 12 July 2024 (UTC) reply
Okay, I think there should be no more issues here. The only approved option here is some variant of ALT4; I will leave it to the promoter on what wording to use, or whether to mention Salz by name in the hook. I do wonder if a hook that goes "that in 2023, the Atlanta Jewish Times suggested that Sam Salz is the only Orthodox Jewish player in NCAA Division I college football?" or even "that The Times of Israel suggests that Sam Salz may be college football's first known Orthodox Jewish player?", but given both are "first" or "only" hooks and thus are likely to be a whole can of worms, they're only food for thought and the nomination can proceed with ALT4 or some variant. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 00:36, 14 July 2024 (UTC) reply

The fact that he's an orthodox jew playing football is the story, so we'd be silly to shy away from mentioning that in the hook. I think we'd be OK with a "first" as long as we qualify it with "believed to be" or something to that effect. The Jewish Times says "Salz is believed to be the only Orthodox Jew to play Division I college football this season (if not, the first-ever)", which seems like an appropriate level of hedging. As for the 39-based hooks, I'm torn between the significance of 39 being lost on most of our readers vs piquing their interest ("what's so special about 39?") RoySmith (talk) 13:18, 14 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Elsewhere, Black Kite said:

"Suggests" and "known" and "may be" are really vague though, aren't they? You would have thought that given the ridiculous amount of statistical trivia about the game, there would be a definitive source.
I'm sure they keep all kinds of statistics about on-field performance, but I wouldn't expect they have data on the religious affiliation of every player. And even if they did, who's to say what an "Orthodox Jew" is? It's kind of a self-identify thing. RoySmith (talk) 19:17, 14 July 2024 (UTC) reply
The issue here is all the recent brouhahas with "first" or "only" hooks and how much scrutiny they get. If we go with that angle, we want to be sure we're right and not have to have another long discussion about how we promoted a factual error, even if objectively this was the more interesting option. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 01:04, 15 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Diesel (donkey)

  • ... that after disappearing in 2019, Diesel is "living his best life" with a wild elk herd?
Created by Gobonobo ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 121 past nominations.

gobonobo + c 02:57, 28 June 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Article checks out for newness, length, and plagiarism; on the shorter side, but still long enough to be counted for DYK. Well written and well sourced. Hook is interesting and cited; I personally believe ALT1 to be the more interesting of the proposed hooks. QPQ done by editor. Overall checks out, however article is currently nominated for AfD, so until that process has been completed the review is on hold. Sims2aholic8 ( talk) 09:35, 30 June 2024 (UTC) reply
Passing this now that article has survived AfD. Sims2aholic8 ( talk) 08:37, 9 July 2024 (UTC) Sims2aholic8 ( talk) reply

Adding an alt here:
  • ALT2: ... that the escaped donkey Diesel is "living his best life" with a wild elk herd?
@ Bremps: I really like the "living his best life" quote. Maybe there's a way to incorporate both. Something like...that an escaped donkey "living his best life" may have killed a mountain lion? I'm reluctant to go with a "may have killed" hook though, since others have pointed out that the article is already pretty heavy on speculation. For what it's worth, this reference indicates that donkeys killing mountain lions is rare, but not unheard of. Maybe Sims2aholic8 has an opinion now that the article has survived AfD. gobonobo + c 01:08, 6 July 2024 (UTC) reply
User:Gobonobo I get it, I also like to cleanse my DYK hooks of speculation. If you're willing to stomach the "possibly", that's not a bad hook. Bremps ... 02:12, 7 July 2024 (UTC) reply
Yeah I also really like the "living his best life" quote, so definitely keen to place that in the hook. Also completely understand the reluctance to lean on speculation here re. the mountain lion, but it is a very interesting aspect of this story. Potentially something along the lines of that an escaped donkey "living his best life" with an elk herd was reported to have killed a mountain lion? I think it's important to note why he's living his best life (i.e. with the elk herd); without that caveat I'm not sure how relevant the quote is to the hook. Sims2aholic8 ( talk) 08:37, 9 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Wong Sau Ying

Wong Sau Ying wearing her hair in a bob cut
Wong Sau Ying wearing her hair in a bob cut
  • ... that after Wong Sau Ying (pictured) attempted to assassinate a British colonial official, the police and press began to associate the bob cut with anarchism?
Improved to Good Article status by Grnrchst ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 37 past nominations.

Grnrchst ( talk) 09:54, 24 June 2024 (UTC). reply

  • @ Orchastrattor: Here's a couple excerpts from the text. It goes further into this in preceding and subsequent paragraphs:

    The colonial public was chilled by her [Wong Sau Ying's] exacting premeditation. The ‘bobbed-hair woman’ had arrived in Kuala Lumpur only that morning. Some reports said that she came from Canton; others that she was from Penang, and fluent in Malay. They were, above all, obsessed by the way she looked. [...]
    The year 1925 was when the ‘Modern Girl’ became a global phenomenon, and in this the women of Asia took the lead. [...] There were stories of ‘bobbed-hair riots’ as far away as Mexico City, of rival ‘anti-bobbed-hair leagues’ and ‘bobbed-hair defence leagues’. [...]
    The ‘Modern Girl’ was increasingly linked to a dangerous, disordered modernity; to nihilism and to anarchism. As one expatriate journal put it: ‘The now notorious “bobbed-haired” lady might just as well have turned up in Venezuela or Tibet for all the relation that her “mission” had to events in Malaya... Politics virtually do not exist in this country.’ The Straits Times brayed for a system of ‘identity tickets’ to indicate who was a loyal subject of His Majesty King George V and who was not. There were suddenly other sightings of ‘strange’ young women in Kuala Lumpur. [...]
    At the root of the case was her ‘new style’.

    -- Grnrchst ( talk) 09:32, 1 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Cobra Crack

Climber standing at the distinctive 'Cobra' silhouette groove at the start of the Cobra Crack
Climber standing at the distinctive 'Cobra' silhouette groove at the start of the Cobra Crack
Improved to Good Article status by Aszx5000 ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 5 past nominations.

Aszx5000 ( talk) 13:57, 23 June 2024 (UTC). reply

Matahi Brightwell

Matahi Brightwell
Matahi Brightwell
  • Source: [1] "Mr Brightwell was made an Officer of the New Zealand Order of Merit for starting waka ama in Aotearoa, a sport he picked up – along with his name and his wife Raipoia – while he was building the ocean-going waka Hawaikinui in Tahiti."
  • ALT1: ... that Matahi Brightwell (pictured) left the eyes of Ngātoro-i-rangi blank? Source: [2] "When Mr Brightwell created Ngatoroirangi, he was so upset by the negativity that he left the sculpture's eyes blank."
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Sofiya Vakman
  • Comment: Welcome any suggestions for alternative hooks or improvements to the hook or article. There's also a free picture of the Ngātoro-i-rangi sculpture (currently in the article) that could be used as an alternative to the picture of Brightwell, although I'm not sure it'll show up well at 100x100.
Created by Chocmilk03 ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 29 past nominations.

Chocmilk03 ( talk) 02:28, 25 June 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article is long enough and created a day day before DYK nom. Article is well-sourced, presentable, and free from copyvio. QPQ done. Hooks are both interesting; personally, I think ALT0 works better from a DYK perspective as it's more accessible to someone who doesn't know what Ngatoroirangi is. Image meets criteria. Thank you for your nomination Chocmilk03! Kimikel ( talk) 22:43, 9 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Hercules (1973 ship)

  • ... that on 20 July 1982, the neutral oil tanker Hercules was scuttled after being struck by an Argentine bomb during the Falklands War?
  • Source: "June 8 .... that afternoon Hercules was attacked without warning in three different strikes by Argentine aircraft using bombs and air-to-surface missiles" from: Sohn, Louis B.; Noyes, John (25 October 2021). Cases and Materials on the Law of the Sea. BRILL. p. 82. ISBN  978-90-04-48042-1. and "20 July: The VLCC Hercules has her seacocks opened ... it had been decided that the unexploded bomb aboard was too dangerous to defuse and thus sinking was the only alternative" from:Ambrose, A. J. (1983). Jane's Merchant Shipping Review. Jane's Publishing Company. p. 17. ISBN  978-0-7106-0261-9.
  • ALT1: ... that the neutral Liberian oil tanker Hercules was attacked three times by Argentine aircraft during the Falklands War and eventually scuttled? Source: As above
  • ALT2: ... that the neutral oil tanker Hercules carried an unexploded bomb into a Brazilian port after being attacked by Argentine aircraft during the Falklands War? Source: As above
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/War Tank America
  • Comment: ALT0 if it can be run on 20th July, others if not.
Moved to mainspace by Dumelow ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 847 past nominations.

Dumelow ( talk) 16:33, 24 June 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Approving all hooks on good faith. Article is long enough and was created same day as DYK nom. Article is presentable, well-sourced, and free from copyvio. Hooks are interesting and sourced; the exact pages are unavailable online. QPQ done. Thank you for your nomination Dumelow! Kimikel ( talk) 22:00, 9 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Ashin Munindabhivamsa

Created by Battlesnake1 ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 10 past nominations.

Htanaungg ( talk) 10:08, 25 June 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: The article appeared in the news before, and the hook does not seem interesting because these types of killings are common. Considering the reply of the nominator. I feel life ALT2 is more interesting. TheNuggeteer ( talk) 00:52, 26 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ TheNuggeteer: Thank you for the review. Per WP:DYKNEW, I’ve mentioned in the comment that the subject is listed only in RD section of the ITN, not bold link.
Although this type of killing may be common elsewhere, it is a rare case in the highly religious country that a prominent religious figure was shot dead by the ruling junta’s soldiers. Plus, it is very few that the junta apologized publicly; he would never show his weakness in public.
I’d like to nominate another ALTs:
Regards, Htanaungg ( talk) 03:36, 26 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Software maintenance

Improved to Good Article status by Buidhe ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 247 past nominations.

( t · c) buidhe 00:41, 25 June 2024 (UTC). reply

  • The article is new enough (promoted to GA yesteday).
  • The article is long enough.
  • The article is well-sourced, neutral, BLP-compliant, and copyvio-free. Earwig at 4.8%, copyvio unlikely.
  • The article is presentable.
  • The hook is cited to a reliable source (I assume Ref9 in the article), the source is not linked in the DYK.
  • Images are in public domain.
  • QPQ done.

Looks good to me. Vacant0 ( talk) 11:58, 25 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Luxembourg in the Eurovision Song Contest

Improved to Good Article status by Sims2aholic8 ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 20 past nominations.

Sims2aholic8 ( talk) 13:19, 26 June 2024 (UTC). reply

  • @ Sims2aholic8: Article is long enough and listed as GA same day as DYK nom. Article is well-sourced, presentable, and free from copyvio. All hooks are interesting and sourced. The problem I have with both the nomination and the article is the use of a user-generated blog as a source. This needs to be either replaced in both the article and nomination before approval.

Hannibal von Degenfeld

Hannibal von Degenfeld, engraving by Wolfgang Philipp Kilian
Hannibal von Degenfeld, engraving by Wolfgang Philipp Kilian
  • Source: Staudinger 1904, p. 575: "der Begründer des jungen Heeres Freiherr von Degenfeld" and Wheatcroft 2009, p. 168: "...all the main players planned the decisive battle that would settle the fate of Vienna. The duke represented the Habsburg forces and the Emperor; General Hannibal von Degenfeld took the place of his master, Max Emmanuel, the Elector of Bavaria."
Created by Cplakidas ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 144 past nominations.

Constantine 16:24, 30 June 2024 (UTC). reply

  • All the sources are offline or in German, but just about everything else is in order. Long enough and new enough. I myself prefer the first hook. A few minor quibbles: (1) A couple of sentences in the Venetian service subsection aren't sourced. (2) Is the Life section break really necessary? Clarityfiend ( talk) 10:24, 10 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Rozelle–Darling Harbour railway line

  • Reviewed:
  • Comment: Since opening this nomination, I have moved the page from Rozelle–Darling Harbour railway line to Rozelle–Darling Harbour Goods Line. The former title reflected general – but not mandatory – convention on articles for Australian railway lines, while the latter reflects the line's common name. As such, this nomination links to what is now a redirect, while the hook itself links to what is now the article's primary title. The article remains the same; it has simply been moved on relatively minor technical grounds. Will Thorpe ( talk) 07:03, 4 July 2024 (UTC) reply
Created by Willthorpe ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

Will Thorpe ( talk) 15:07, 2 July 2024 (UTC). reply

Launchballer The subject of the nomination is the main page, not the redirect. The title of the article (Rozelle-Darling Harbour railway line) reflects Wikipedia convention on the naming of rail lines in Australia, while the hook and article body (Rozelle-Darling Harbour Goods Line) reflects its common name. Happy to amend if necessary. Cheers, Will Thorpe ( talk) 01:40, 3 July 2024 (UTC) reply
I’ve actually now requested the article be moved to its common name, which is what is used in the nomination. Cheers, Will Thorpe ( talk) 01:57, 3 July 2024 (UTC) reply
New enough, long enough, interesting, no copyright problems, hook cited on article, all good. The light is now green. JuniperChill ( talk) 21:39, 5 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Windy Zhan

Zhan in 2024
Zhan in 2024
  • Reviewed:
Created by Will629 ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

Will629 ( talk) 19:13, 26 June 2024 (UTC). reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

This page transcludes a subset of the nominations found on the page of all the approved nominations for the " Did you know" section of the Main Page. It only transcludes the nominations filed under dates of the fourth-most recent week. The page is intended to allow editors to easily review recent nominations that may not be displaying correctly on the complete page of approved nominations if that page's contents are causing the page to hit the post-expand include size limit.

WZZM

The WZZM weatherball
The WZZM weatherball
5x expanded by Sammi Brie ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 693 past nominations.

Sammi Brie (she/her •  tc) 02:53, 24 June 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting: Yes
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Article nominated two days after promotion to GA. Passes Copyvio check. Picture is free use. QPQ done. AGF on ALT0 offline source. I prefer ALT0, it's more interesting. Riley1012 ( talk) 21:56, 1 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Aid climbing

  • Reviewed:
Improved to Good Article status by Aszx5000 ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

Aszx5000 ( talk) 13:45, 23 June 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Approving nomination. Article is long enough and promoted to GA 1 day before DYK nom. Article is well-sourced, presentable, and copyvio-free (excluding quoted section). Hook is interesting and well-sourced. Image meets criteria. QPQ not needed. Good to go. Thank you for you nomination Aszx5000! Kimikel ( talk) 02:35, 1 July 2024 (UTC) reply
Poking my nose in while promoting hooks to prep - this hook seems to not really be about the bolded subject, which is aid climbing. The hook reads as though the bolded article should be Lynn Hill or maybe free climbing. Is there another hook possible that focuses more directly on aid climbing? Premeditated Chaos ( talk) 22:21, 14 July 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Premeditated Chaos:, I understand your point but I offered that hook as the whole affair was one of the biggest moments in modern rock climbing history. Some alternatives are:
ALT1 ... that Jim Bridwell's 1975 aid climbing route, Sea of Dreams, was the first "if you fall, you die" pitch on El Capitan (pictured - same as above) ?
Source: Obituary: Jim "The Bird" Bridwell (1944-2018)
ALT2 ... that the aid climbing routes on the Great Trango Tower (pictured) are some of the longest vertical big wall climbs in the world?
Image
Great trango tower
Source: Great Trango Tower: The Biggest Big Wall, Big-Wall Climbing: What is it, Which Wall is the Biggest, and Why is This Climbing Different?
Would any of those work? thanks. Aszx5000 ( talk) 13:42, 15 July 2024 (UTC) reply
Yup, I think either of those would work nicely. I leave it to the promoter to pick between them; I'll strike ALT0. ♠ PMC(talk) 00:42, 16 July 2024 (UTC) reply
Premeditated Chaos, just to clarify, you have reviewed and approved ALT1 & 2? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 ( talk) 13:16, 16 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Goodboy Galaxy

  • Source: Yin-Poole, Wesley (28 August 2021). ""First commercial GBA game in 13 years" smashes Kickstarter target in less than a day Goodboy, Galaxy". Euro Gamer. Retrieved 27 June 2024. / McFerran, Damien (27 August 2021). "The Game Boy Advance Is Getting Its First Commercial Release In 13 Years, Goodboy Galaxy". Nintendo Life. Retrieved 27 June 2024.
Created by Oz346 ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 8 past nominations.

Slgrandson ( How's my egg-throwing coleslaw?) 09:37, 27 June 2024 (UTC). reply

Sam Salz (American football)

Moved to mainspace by Bruxton ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 152 past nominations.

Bruxton ( talk) 19:39, 23 June 2024 (UTC). reply

  • This is only a preliminary review for now as the article needs a copyedit when it comes to wording and missing punctuation. However, the article does seem long enough and is adequately sourced and a QPQ has been done. My preferred hook is ALT1, but it doesn't exactly match the article or the source so it might fail at WT:DYK or ERRORS. ALT0 could probably be modified to say he never played organized football before signing up as the current wording might be too vague. ALT2 might need additional context especially for readers from countries where Judaism is not a common religion: my suggestion would be to propose a new hook that explains his 39 jersey and how it related to the Sabbath. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 13:37, 28 June 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Narutolovehinata5: Thank you for checking out this nomination.. I did some copyediting but it is hard for me to find my own errors so I would appreciate you calling them out. For hook ideas I prefer that someone click the article to discover rather than getting in the weeds with specificity in the hook. For fifth and sixth hook ideas:
ALT4: ... that a wide receiver on the Texas A&M Aggies football team wears number 39 to symbolize the tasks or items which Jews should avoid during the Sabbath?
ALT5: ... that American football player Sam Salz wears number 39 to remind him of "lamed tet melachot"?
Bruxton ( talk) 15:10, 28 June 2024 (UTC) reply
ALT4 sounds good to me. The article is improved but the wording still seems a bit weird (for example, "As a young boy Salz never watched college football because it is played on the Shabbat and he is an observant orthodox Jew." and "He was not invited to join the football team so he practiced by himself within sight of the football team and eventually earned a roster spot.") I don't have access to the NYT source; is 2003 mentioned in that article? Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 23:18, 28 June 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Narutolovehinata5: Excellent. You can archive a link to read text it by putting the url in archive.ph. Here is a link to the NYT article. I got 2003 from "Salz, 21, became obsessed with playing college football at a young age, for reasons he can’t exactly pinpoint." It is a 2024 article and 2024-21 is c. 2003. Regarding the two sentences, I do not see the weirdness to their structurel; if you do please edit them. Bruxton ( talk) 23:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC) reply
Maybe it's just me not being a native speaker but something feels off about the first sentence to me, but it could just be that it's correct to a native speaker but sounds weird to a non-native one. The second one could probably be rewritten to something like "As he was not invited to join the football team, he practiced by himself within sight of them. He eventually earned a roster spot." Maybe something like that? Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 09:03, 30 June 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Narutolovehinata5: I reordered the first sentence you called out and I used your language for the second sentence. Bruxton ( talk) 22:44, 4 July 2024 (UTC) reply
Now that I think about it, ALT4a is quite long. Would it be okay if it got shortened to ALT4a ... that a Texas A&M Aggies football wide receiver wears number 39 to symbolize the tasks or items which Jews should avoid during the Sabbath? "Football" could even be dropped if possible, but given American football's relatively niche popularity outside of North America, just "wide receiver" without context might not make much sense, hence the addition of "football" (or even "college football" if really needed). Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 00:31, 5 July 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Narutolovehinata5: I am ok with any change that helps advance this nomination. Bruxton ( talk) 01:01, 5 July 2024 (UTC) reply
Cool. I'll think about hook options over the next few days but as long as the copyediting has been completed I can probably complete the review. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 13:31, 7 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Apologies for the delay in reviewing. The article meets requirements for newness and length, and I did not find any close paraphrasing. QPQ has been done and verified. All major statements in the article match the sources, and all hooks are mentioned in the article and verified in the sources. There is one statement in the article, however: the "thought to be the only orthodox Jewish football player in NCAA Division I" fact might change in the future, so the mention in the article may need a qualifier. I also note that one of the sources says he's the first known orthodox Jewish college football player, but given the recent brouhaha over "first" hooks it might be the safest option not to go with that. Some variation of ALT4 (I will leave the exact wording to the promoter) is probably the best option here as the most unusual or interesting; my original preference (ALT1) is unsuitable due to not being directly mentioned in the article, as well as not meeting the "unlikely to change" criterion. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 10:35, 11 July 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Narutolovehinata5: Good catch I attributed the statement Bruxton ( talk) 04:21, 12 July 2024 (UTC) reply
Okay, I think there should be no more issues here. The only approved option here is some variant of ALT4; I will leave it to the promoter on what wording to use, or whether to mention Salz by name in the hook. I do wonder if a hook that goes "that in 2023, the Atlanta Jewish Times suggested that Sam Salz is the only Orthodox Jewish player in NCAA Division I college football?" or even "that The Times of Israel suggests that Sam Salz may be college football's first known Orthodox Jewish player?", but given both are "first" or "only" hooks and thus are likely to be a whole can of worms, they're only food for thought and the nomination can proceed with ALT4 or some variant. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 00:36, 14 July 2024 (UTC) reply

The fact that he's an orthodox jew playing football is the story, so we'd be silly to shy away from mentioning that in the hook. I think we'd be OK with a "first" as long as we qualify it with "believed to be" or something to that effect. The Jewish Times says "Salz is believed to be the only Orthodox Jew to play Division I college football this season (if not, the first-ever)", which seems like an appropriate level of hedging. As for the 39-based hooks, I'm torn between the significance of 39 being lost on most of our readers vs piquing their interest ("what's so special about 39?") RoySmith (talk) 13:18, 14 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Elsewhere, Black Kite said:

"Suggests" and "known" and "may be" are really vague though, aren't they? You would have thought that given the ridiculous amount of statistical trivia about the game, there would be a definitive source.
I'm sure they keep all kinds of statistics about on-field performance, but I wouldn't expect they have data on the religious affiliation of every player. And even if they did, who's to say what an "Orthodox Jew" is? It's kind of a self-identify thing. RoySmith (talk) 19:17, 14 July 2024 (UTC) reply
The issue here is all the recent brouhahas with "first" or "only" hooks and how much scrutiny they get. If we go with that angle, we want to be sure we're right and not have to have another long discussion about how we promoted a factual error, even if objectively this was the more interesting option. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 01:04, 15 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Diesel (donkey)

  • ... that after disappearing in 2019, Diesel is "living his best life" with a wild elk herd?
Created by Gobonobo ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 121 past nominations.

gobonobo + c 02:57, 28 June 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Article checks out for newness, length, and plagiarism; on the shorter side, but still long enough to be counted for DYK. Well written and well sourced. Hook is interesting and cited; I personally believe ALT1 to be the more interesting of the proposed hooks. QPQ done by editor. Overall checks out, however article is currently nominated for AfD, so until that process has been completed the review is on hold. Sims2aholic8 ( talk) 09:35, 30 June 2024 (UTC) reply
Passing this now that article has survived AfD. Sims2aholic8 ( talk) 08:37, 9 July 2024 (UTC) Sims2aholic8 ( talk) reply

Adding an alt here:
  • ALT2: ... that the escaped donkey Diesel is "living his best life" with a wild elk herd?
@ Bremps: I really like the "living his best life" quote. Maybe there's a way to incorporate both. Something like...that an escaped donkey "living his best life" may have killed a mountain lion? I'm reluctant to go with a "may have killed" hook though, since others have pointed out that the article is already pretty heavy on speculation. For what it's worth, this reference indicates that donkeys killing mountain lions is rare, but not unheard of. Maybe Sims2aholic8 has an opinion now that the article has survived AfD. gobonobo + c 01:08, 6 July 2024 (UTC) reply
User:Gobonobo I get it, I also like to cleanse my DYK hooks of speculation. If you're willing to stomach the "possibly", that's not a bad hook. Bremps ... 02:12, 7 July 2024 (UTC) reply
Yeah I also really like the "living his best life" quote, so definitely keen to place that in the hook. Also completely understand the reluctance to lean on speculation here re. the mountain lion, but it is a very interesting aspect of this story. Potentially something along the lines of that an escaped donkey "living his best life" with an elk herd was reported to have killed a mountain lion? I think it's important to note why he's living his best life (i.e. with the elk herd); without that caveat I'm not sure how relevant the quote is to the hook. Sims2aholic8 ( talk) 08:37, 9 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Wong Sau Ying

Wong Sau Ying wearing her hair in a bob cut
Wong Sau Ying wearing her hair in a bob cut
  • ... that after Wong Sau Ying (pictured) attempted to assassinate a British colonial official, the police and press began to associate the bob cut with anarchism?
Improved to Good Article status by Grnrchst ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 37 past nominations.

Grnrchst ( talk) 09:54, 24 June 2024 (UTC). reply

  • @ Orchastrattor: Here's a couple excerpts from the text. It goes further into this in preceding and subsequent paragraphs:

    The colonial public was chilled by her [Wong Sau Ying's] exacting premeditation. The ‘bobbed-hair woman’ had arrived in Kuala Lumpur only that morning. Some reports said that she came from Canton; others that she was from Penang, and fluent in Malay. They were, above all, obsessed by the way she looked. [...]
    The year 1925 was when the ‘Modern Girl’ became a global phenomenon, and in this the women of Asia took the lead. [...] There were stories of ‘bobbed-hair riots’ as far away as Mexico City, of rival ‘anti-bobbed-hair leagues’ and ‘bobbed-hair defence leagues’. [...]
    The ‘Modern Girl’ was increasingly linked to a dangerous, disordered modernity; to nihilism and to anarchism. As one expatriate journal put it: ‘The now notorious “bobbed-haired” lady might just as well have turned up in Venezuela or Tibet for all the relation that her “mission” had to events in Malaya... Politics virtually do not exist in this country.’ The Straits Times brayed for a system of ‘identity tickets’ to indicate who was a loyal subject of His Majesty King George V and who was not. There were suddenly other sightings of ‘strange’ young women in Kuala Lumpur. [...]
    At the root of the case was her ‘new style’.

    -- Grnrchst ( talk) 09:32, 1 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Cobra Crack

Climber standing at the distinctive 'Cobra' silhouette groove at the start of the Cobra Crack
Climber standing at the distinctive 'Cobra' silhouette groove at the start of the Cobra Crack
Improved to Good Article status by Aszx5000 ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 5 past nominations.

Aszx5000 ( talk) 13:57, 23 June 2024 (UTC). reply

Matahi Brightwell

Matahi Brightwell
Matahi Brightwell
  • Source: [1] "Mr Brightwell was made an Officer of the New Zealand Order of Merit for starting waka ama in Aotearoa, a sport he picked up – along with his name and his wife Raipoia – while he was building the ocean-going waka Hawaikinui in Tahiti."
  • ALT1: ... that Matahi Brightwell (pictured) left the eyes of Ngātoro-i-rangi blank? Source: [2] "When Mr Brightwell created Ngatoroirangi, he was so upset by the negativity that he left the sculpture's eyes blank."
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Sofiya Vakman
  • Comment: Welcome any suggestions for alternative hooks or improvements to the hook or article. There's also a free picture of the Ngātoro-i-rangi sculpture (currently in the article) that could be used as an alternative to the picture of Brightwell, although I'm not sure it'll show up well at 100x100.
Created by Chocmilk03 ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 29 past nominations.

Chocmilk03 ( talk) 02:28, 25 June 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Article is long enough and created a day day before DYK nom. Article is well-sourced, presentable, and free from copyvio. QPQ done. Hooks are both interesting; personally, I think ALT0 works better from a DYK perspective as it's more accessible to someone who doesn't know what Ngatoroirangi is. Image meets criteria. Thank you for your nomination Chocmilk03! Kimikel ( talk) 22:43, 9 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Hercules (1973 ship)

  • ... that on 20 July 1982, the neutral oil tanker Hercules was scuttled after being struck by an Argentine bomb during the Falklands War?
  • Source: "June 8 .... that afternoon Hercules was attacked without warning in three different strikes by Argentine aircraft using bombs and air-to-surface missiles" from: Sohn, Louis B.; Noyes, John (25 October 2021). Cases and Materials on the Law of the Sea. BRILL. p. 82. ISBN  978-90-04-48042-1. and "20 July: The VLCC Hercules has her seacocks opened ... it had been decided that the unexploded bomb aboard was too dangerous to defuse and thus sinking was the only alternative" from:Ambrose, A. J. (1983). Jane's Merchant Shipping Review. Jane's Publishing Company. p. 17. ISBN  978-0-7106-0261-9.
  • ALT1: ... that the neutral Liberian oil tanker Hercules was attacked three times by Argentine aircraft during the Falklands War and eventually scuttled? Source: As above
  • ALT2: ... that the neutral oil tanker Hercules carried an unexploded bomb into a Brazilian port after being attacked by Argentine aircraft during the Falklands War? Source: As above
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/War Tank America
  • Comment: ALT0 if it can be run on 20th July, others if not.
Moved to mainspace by Dumelow ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 847 past nominations.

Dumelow ( talk) 16:33, 24 June 2024 (UTC). reply

  • Approving all hooks on good faith. Article is long enough and was created same day as DYK nom. Article is presentable, well-sourced, and free from copyvio. Hooks are interesting and sourced; the exact pages are unavailable online. QPQ done. Thank you for your nomination Dumelow! Kimikel ( talk) 22:00, 9 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Ashin Munindabhivamsa

Created by Battlesnake1 ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 10 past nominations.

Htanaungg ( talk) 10:08, 25 June 2024 (UTC). reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: The article appeared in the news before, and the hook does not seem interesting because these types of killings are common. Considering the reply of the nominator. I feel life ALT2 is more interesting. TheNuggeteer ( talk) 00:52, 26 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ TheNuggeteer: Thank you for the review. Per WP:DYKNEW, I’ve mentioned in the comment that the subject is listed only in RD section of the ITN, not bold link.
Although this type of killing may be common elsewhere, it is a rare case in the highly religious country that a prominent religious figure was shot dead by the ruling junta’s soldiers. Plus, it is very few that the junta apologized publicly; he would never show his weakness in public.
I’d like to nominate another ALTs:
Regards, Htanaungg ( talk) 03:36, 26 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Software maintenance

Improved to Good Article status by Buidhe ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 247 past nominations.

( t · c) buidhe 00:41, 25 June 2024 (UTC). reply

  • The article is new enough (promoted to GA yesteday).
  • The article is long enough.
  • The article is well-sourced, neutral, BLP-compliant, and copyvio-free. Earwig at 4.8%, copyvio unlikely.
  • The article is presentable.
  • The hook is cited to a reliable source (I assume Ref9 in the article), the source is not linked in the DYK.
  • Images are in public domain.
  • QPQ done.

Looks good to me. Vacant0 ( talk) 11:58, 25 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Luxembourg in the Eurovision Song Contest

Improved to Good Article status by Sims2aholic8 ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 20 past nominations.

Sims2aholic8 ( talk) 13:19, 26 June 2024 (UTC). reply

  • @ Sims2aholic8: Article is long enough and listed as GA same day as DYK nom. Article is well-sourced, presentable, and free from copyvio. All hooks are interesting and sourced. The problem I have with both the nomination and the article is the use of a user-generated blog as a source. This needs to be either replaced in both the article and nomination before approval.

Hannibal von Degenfeld

Hannibal von Degenfeld, engraving by Wolfgang Philipp Kilian
Hannibal von Degenfeld, engraving by Wolfgang Philipp Kilian
  • Source: Staudinger 1904, p. 575: "der Begründer des jungen Heeres Freiherr von Degenfeld" and Wheatcroft 2009, p. 168: "...all the main players planned the decisive battle that would settle the fate of Vienna. The duke represented the Habsburg forces and the Emperor; General Hannibal von Degenfeld took the place of his master, Max Emmanuel, the Elector of Bavaria."
Created by Cplakidas ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 144 past nominations.

Constantine 16:24, 30 June 2024 (UTC). reply

  • All the sources are offline or in German, but just about everything else is in order. Long enough and new enough. I myself prefer the first hook. A few minor quibbles: (1) A couple of sentences in the Venetian service subsection aren't sourced. (2) Is the Life section break really necessary? Clarityfiend ( talk) 10:24, 10 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Rozelle–Darling Harbour railway line

  • Reviewed:
  • Comment: Since opening this nomination, I have moved the page from Rozelle–Darling Harbour railway line to Rozelle–Darling Harbour Goods Line. The former title reflected general – but not mandatory – convention on articles for Australian railway lines, while the latter reflects the line's common name. As such, this nomination links to what is now a redirect, while the hook itself links to what is now the article's primary title. The article remains the same; it has simply been moved on relatively minor technical grounds. Will Thorpe ( talk) 07:03, 4 July 2024 (UTC) reply
Created by Willthorpe ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

Will Thorpe ( talk) 15:07, 2 July 2024 (UTC). reply

Launchballer The subject of the nomination is the main page, not the redirect. The title of the article (Rozelle-Darling Harbour railway line) reflects Wikipedia convention on the naming of rail lines in Australia, while the hook and article body (Rozelle-Darling Harbour Goods Line) reflects its common name. Happy to amend if necessary. Cheers, Will Thorpe ( talk) 01:40, 3 July 2024 (UTC) reply
I’ve actually now requested the article be moved to its common name, which is what is used in the nomination. Cheers, Will Thorpe ( talk) 01:57, 3 July 2024 (UTC) reply
New enough, long enough, interesting, no copyright problems, hook cited on article, all good. The light is now green. JuniperChill ( talk) 21:39, 5 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Windy Zhan

Zhan in 2024
Zhan in 2024
  • Reviewed:
Created by Will629 ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

Will629 ( talk) 19:13, 26 June 2024 (UTC). reply


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