The result was: promoted by
— Maile (
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Created by HelenOnline ( talk). Self nominated at 13:41, 27 February 2014 (UTC).
REVIEW: Close but not ready yet. (STRIKING PER BELOW, GTG FOR ALT2) The article is long enough, new enough, and appears to be neutral, adequately sourced, and no indication of copyvio issues. As a BLP, it conforms to the relevant policies. QPQ completed. The hook content is of appropriate length (165 characters with spaces), accurate, neutral, and interesting...however I think it is essential to mention her name in the hook. I would revise the hook, as proposed in ALT1, to state:
Does the nominator agree?-- ColonelHenry ( talk) 19:59, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
— Maile (
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Created by HelenOnline ( talk). Self nominated at 13:41, 27 February 2014 (UTC).
REVIEW: Close but not ready yet. (STRIKING PER BELOW, GTG FOR ALT2) The article is long enough, new enough, and appears to be neutral, adequately sourced, and no indication of copyvio issues. As a BLP, it conforms to the relevant policies. QPQ completed. The hook content is of appropriate length (165 characters with spaces), accurate, neutral, and interesting...however I think it is essential to mention her name in the hook. I would revise the hook, as proposed in ALT1, to state:
Does the nominator agree?-- ColonelHenry ( talk) 19:59, 28 February 2014 (UTC)