- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
AirshipJungleman29
talk 15:36, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
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Rosemary Miller
- ... that Rosemary Miller tried out skeet shooting in 1961, won her state's championship in 1962, and then won a state shooting championship all but two years for the rest of her life?
- Source: started in 1961 won championship in 1962 - 63 and 64, before skipping 65 ( [1]) - 66 through 74 with the exception of 73 (won by Isabelle Thompson) - died in 1974
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BeanieFan11 (
talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 187 past nominations.
BeanieFan11 ( talk) 23:03, 8 June 2024 (UTC).
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Article is new enough, long enough, and within policy. The first two parts of the hook are verified, but I am having trouble understanding the last part of the hook. The wording is confusing. We need a new hook.
4meter4 (
talk) 15:27, 14 June 2024 (UTC)
- @ 4meter4: What I am trying to communicate is that, after she first entered the championship in 1962, there were only two years for the rest of her life that she did not win a state shooting championship. Can you think of a better way to word it? I also added a QPQ. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 02:47, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
- @ BeanieFan11 and 4meter4: ALT1 ... that after winning her state's skeet shooting championship in 1962, Rosemary Miller won a state shooting championship in all but two years for the rest of her life? Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 03:09, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
- Works for me. Approving Alt1:
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4meter4 (
talk) 14:50, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
- @
Narutolovehinata5 and
4meter4: I do think it adds some interest that the championship was one year after she first learned the sport. What about: ALT2 ... that
Rosemary Miller won her state's
skeet shooting championship one year after learning the sport, and then won a state shooting championship in all but two years for the rest of her life? Or something like that.
BeanieFan11 (
talk) 20:32, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- I'm promoting ALT2; I don't think it needs a new review, as the additions were said to be "verified" above by 4meter4. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 ( talk) 15:35, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
- @
Narutolovehinata5 and
4meter4: I do think it adds some interest that the championship was one year after she first learned the sport. What about: ALT2 ... that
Rosemary Miller won her state's
skeet shooting championship one year after learning the sport, and then won a state shooting championship in all but two years for the rest of her life? Or something like that.
BeanieFan11 (
talk) 20:32, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- Works for me. Approving Alt1:
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
AirshipJungleman29
talk 15:36, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
| DYK toolbox |
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Rosemary Miller
- ... that Rosemary Miller tried out skeet shooting in 1961, won her state's championship in 1962, and then won a state shooting championship all but two years for the rest of her life?
- Source: started in 1961 won championship in 1962 - 63 and 64, before skipping 65 ( [1]) - 66 through 74 with the exception of 73 (won by Isabelle Thompson) - died in 1974
Moved to mainspace by
BeanieFan11 (
talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 187 past nominations.
BeanieFan11 ( talk) 23:03, 8 June 2024 (UTC).
-
Article is new enough, long enough, and within policy. The first two parts of the hook are verified, but I am having trouble understanding the last part of the hook. The wording is confusing. We need a new hook.
4meter4 (
talk) 15:27, 14 June 2024 (UTC)
- @ 4meter4: What I am trying to communicate is that, after she first entered the championship in 1962, there were only two years for the rest of her life that she did not win a state shooting championship. Can you think of a better way to word it? I also added a QPQ. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 02:47, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
- @ BeanieFan11 and 4meter4: ALT1 ... that after winning her state's skeet shooting championship in 1962, Rosemary Miller won a state shooting championship in all but two years for the rest of her life? Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 03:09, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
- Works for me. Approving Alt1:
.
4meter4 (
talk) 14:50, 25 June 2024 (UTC)
- @
Narutolovehinata5 and
4meter4: I do think it adds some interest that the championship was one year after she first learned the sport. What about: ALT2 ... that
Rosemary Miller won her state's
skeet shooting championship one year after learning the sport, and then won a state shooting championship in all but two years for the rest of her life? Or something like that.
BeanieFan11 (
talk) 20:32, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- I'm promoting ALT2; I don't think it needs a new review, as the additions were said to be "verified" above by 4meter4. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 ( talk) 15:35, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
- @
Narutolovehinata5 and
4meter4: I do think it adds some interest that the championship was one year after she first learned the sport. What about: ALT2 ... that
Rosemary Miller won her state's
skeet shooting championship one year after learning the sport, and then won a state shooting championship in all but two years for the rest of her life? Or something like that.
BeanieFan11 (
talk) 20:32, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
- Works for me. Approving Alt1: