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5x expanded by Eanisman ( talk). Self-nominated at 01:07, 26 October 2020 (UTC).
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Overall: Article length and age fine after first review. Copyvio notes problems but that's with a site that repeats Wikipedia info. Eanisman You might consider changing the hook to make it clear that it is an individual spider that can change colour, not that individuals found on different plants are different colours? So I might suggest something like ... that an individual goldenrod crab spider, Misumena vatia, can change color between white and yellow depending on the color of the flowers on which it lives? Looks like nominator's first DYK nomination, so no QPQ required. I have marked this as requiring another editor to review not because it needs a lot of work but because I am a new DYK reviewer seeking a second opinion. I am specifically wanting to check that a) my suggested ALT hook is OK, b) how closely the wording of the hook should match the article text. The information about colour changing in the article is contained in two paragraphs with four sources. So the information is summarised into the hook accurately, as far as I can tell, but the hook itself does not appear in the same or similar form in the article. Is this normal? DrThneed ( talk) 03:43, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
These spiders have the unusual ability to match the color of the yellow or white flower with great accuracy. They are able to match with greater accuracy to white flowers, which is currently lacking a footnote. Narutolovehinata5 t c csd new 01:22, 15 November 2020 (UTC)
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The result was: promoted by
Yoninah (
talk) 17:32, 23 November 2020 (UTC)
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5x expanded by Eanisman ( talk). Self-nominated at 01:07, 26 October 2020 (UTC).
Eanisman ( talk) 00:28, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems |
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Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation |
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QPQ: None required. |
Overall: Article length and age fine after first review. Copyvio notes problems but that's with a site that repeats Wikipedia info. Eanisman You might consider changing the hook to make it clear that it is an individual spider that can change colour, not that individuals found on different plants are different colours? So I might suggest something like ... that an individual goldenrod crab spider, Misumena vatia, can change color between white and yellow depending on the color of the flowers on which it lives? Looks like nominator's first DYK nomination, so no QPQ required. I have marked this as requiring another editor to review not because it needs a lot of work but because I am a new DYK reviewer seeking a second opinion. I am specifically wanting to check that a) my suggested ALT hook is OK, b) how closely the wording of the hook should match the article text. The information about colour changing in the article is contained in two paragraphs with four sources. So the information is summarised into the hook accurately, as far as I can tell, but the hook itself does not appear in the same or similar form in the article. Is this normal? DrThneed ( talk) 03:43, 27 October 2020 (UTC)
These spiders have the unusual ability to match the color of the yellow or white flower with great accuracy. They are able to match with greater accuracy to white flowers, which is currently lacking a footnote. Narutolovehinata5 t c csd new 01:22, 15 November 2020 (UTC)
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