Hi
BeanieFan11, review follows: article moved to mainspace on 11 June and exceeds minimum length; article is generally well written (I couldn't parse "was named first-team All-State, All-Metro and to the Lincoln Journal Star's Super-State Team" but might just be my ignorance of basketball?); sources cited look to be reliable enough, though I am not familiar with them; I didn't pick up any issues with overly close paraphrasing from a spot check; hook fact is interesting enough for me, mentioned in the article and checks out to the source cited. My first review for a good few months but looks fine to me except that a QPQ is awaited -
Dumelow (
talk) 15:19, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
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Dumelow: QPQ done; sorry for the delay. (Also, in the sentence you mention, those things mentioned are different all-star teams.)
BeanieFan11 (
talk) 14:51, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
Thanks, looks good to me -
Dumelow (
talk) 16:06, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
Hi
BeanieFan11, review follows: article moved to mainspace on 11 June and exceeds minimum length; article is generally well written (I couldn't parse "was named first-team All-State, All-Metro and to the Lincoln Journal Star's Super-State Team" but might just be my ignorance of basketball?); sources cited look to be reliable enough, though I am not familiar with them; I didn't pick up any issues with overly close paraphrasing from a spot check; hook fact is interesting enough for me, mentioned in the article and checks out to the source cited. My first review for a good few months but looks fine to me except that a QPQ is awaited -
Dumelow (
talk) 15:19, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
@
Dumelow: QPQ done; sorry for the delay. (Also, in the sentence you mention, those things mentioned are different all-star teams.)
BeanieFan11 (
talk) 14:51, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
Thanks, looks good to me -
Dumelow (
talk) 16:06, 24 June 2024 (UTC)