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Hello, I'm reviewing this article. My practice is to check articles against the GA criteria, then if necessary, I make suggestions for improving text below. Also know that I'm not a gamer by any means, so please excuse my ignorance if and/or when I ask stupid questions. Christine (Figureskatingfan) ( talk) 22:29, 1 February 2013 (UTC)
I'll have some time over the weekend to work some more on this review. Stay tuned!
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Prose and other issues
In games
Character Design
Reception
Sources
Lem is Vladimir Lem from the previous sentence (in-game he is refered to as "Vlad", not "Lem"). [3] Mona's uncanonical survival/resurrection (and Vlad's death) looks like that: [4]. (Canonic plot in 60 s: [5].) "Valkyr drug" is a fictional drug from the first game and in a different form in the film [6] (its mystery is explained in the plot sections of their articles, it's a pretty complicated conspiracy). Yes, it's a coda scene. It's just a (very) popular misconception that citations need to be "perfected in any way (" Perfectly formatted citations are not required."). UGO is (was) actually a general entertainment website. -- Niemti ( talk) 01:03, 4 February 2013 (UTC)
You know I really meant Thurs. (well, for me it's still Wed.), right? Sorry, it's kinda been a busy week. Thanks for your clarifications, and sorry for the oversights. I don't think we need to go into any detail about the deaths and the drug conspiracy, since they're plot points. I was honestly unaware of the easier requirement for citations in GAs, so I'm okay with them as is. See, I review GACs with the mindset that eventually they're go to FAC, so many of my suggestions are in light of that. At FAC, you'd have to make the format consistent, so if you're able to expand it to the point that you're nominate it there, I recommend that you think about making the refs consistent. I get you about UGO, but there are better sources; again, not something I expect at this level, but I don't think it would be acceptable at FAC. Now I'll look at the sources, finally.
Sources (part 2)
Ok, that's it, it was fun to work on a new topic. I'll put this on hold for a week to give you time to address my issues, and then I'll pass it. Good luck. Christine (Figureskatingfan) ( talk) 06:09, 7 February 2013 (UTC)
I'm not sure what's "a Hollywood model" exactly, but it seems a legit thing, possibly Hollywood Model Management (but that's my guess). [8] Are you sure coma goes after a quotation? It's like that in Polish, but in America I see "words," "words." all the time. Rockstar is the publisher's website ( Rockstar Games), Xbox.com is also official (Microsoft's). The link is straight to the comic and it's free. The interview was undated. I was actually concernd about it because it's just a fan site. [9] I personally don't doubt it, but that's what it is. -- Niemti ( talk) 23:34, 11 February 2013 (UTC)
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Tagging the authors and/or possibly interested editors, SNAAAAKE!!, Barry Sandwich, Damien Linnane, Kung Fu Man and Cukie Gherkin. The article contains a lot of issues. It has zero development/concept and design section, a lot of the claims were unsourced at the appearances section, the portrayal is a bit flimsy and probably could be merged at development section and the major issues are at the reception section where it might probably take time to rewrite and then implement all the sources from its talk page. I am only doing this for a GAR purpose so people wouldn't call the nomination as "rush" and criticize it. Only interested editors shall participate as usual. The article will be nominated as GAR soon. GreenishPickle! ( 🔔) 01:19, 25 June 2023 (UTC)
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Hello, I'm reviewing this article. My practice is to check articles against the GA criteria, then if necessary, I make suggestions for improving text below. Also know that I'm not a gamer by any means, so please excuse my ignorance if and/or when I ask stupid questions. Christine (Figureskatingfan) ( talk) 22:29, 1 February 2013 (UTC)
I'll have some time over the weekend to work some more on this review. Stay tuned!
Christine (Figureskatingfan) (
talk) 01:19, 2 February 2013 (UTC)
Prose and other issues
In games
Character Design
Reception
Sources
Lem is Vladimir Lem from the previous sentence (in-game he is refered to as "Vlad", not "Lem"). [3] Mona's uncanonical survival/resurrection (and Vlad's death) looks like that: [4]. (Canonic plot in 60 s: [5].) "Valkyr drug" is a fictional drug from the first game and in a different form in the film [6] (its mystery is explained in the plot sections of their articles, it's a pretty complicated conspiracy). Yes, it's a coda scene. It's just a (very) popular misconception that citations need to be "perfected in any way (" Perfectly formatted citations are not required."). UGO is (was) actually a general entertainment website. -- Niemti ( talk) 01:03, 4 February 2013 (UTC)
You know I really meant Thurs. (well, for me it's still Wed.), right? Sorry, it's kinda been a busy week. Thanks for your clarifications, and sorry for the oversights. I don't think we need to go into any detail about the deaths and the drug conspiracy, since they're plot points. I was honestly unaware of the easier requirement for citations in GAs, so I'm okay with them as is. See, I review GACs with the mindset that eventually they're go to FAC, so many of my suggestions are in light of that. At FAC, you'd have to make the format consistent, so if you're able to expand it to the point that you're nominate it there, I recommend that you think about making the refs consistent. I get you about UGO, but there are better sources; again, not something I expect at this level, but I don't think it would be acceptable at FAC. Now I'll look at the sources, finally.
Sources (part 2)
Ok, that's it, it was fun to work on a new topic. I'll put this on hold for a week to give you time to address my issues, and then I'll pass it. Good luck. Christine (Figureskatingfan) ( talk) 06:09, 7 February 2013 (UTC)
I'm not sure what's "a Hollywood model" exactly, but it seems a legit thing, possibly Hollywood Model Management (but that's my guess). [8] Are you sure coma goes after a quotation? It's like that in Polish, but in America I see "words," "words." all the time. Rockstar is the publisher's website ( Rockstar Games), Xbox.com is also official (Microsoft's). The link is straight to the comic and it's free. The interview was undated. I was actually concernd about it because it's just a fan site. [9] I personally don't doubt it, but that's what it is. -- Niemti ( talk) 23:34, 11 February 2013 (UTC)
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Tagging the authors and/or possibly interested editors, SNAAAAKE!!, Barry Sandwich, Damien Linnane, Kung Fu Man and Cukie Gherkin. The article contains a lot of issues. It has zero development/concept and design section, a lot of the claims were unsourced at the appearances section, the portrayal is a bit flimsy and probably could be merged at development section and the major issues are at the reception section where it might probably take time to rewrite and then implement all the sources from its talk page. I am only doing this for a GAR purpose so people wouldn't call the nomination as "rush" and criticize it. Only interested editors shall participate as usual. The article will be nominated as GAR soon. GreenishPickle! ( 🔔) 01:19, 25 June 2023 (UTC)