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There has apparently been long-term massive deletion and content removals made by User:HiChrisBoyleHere on Laksmi De-Neefe Suardana page. Please stop your disruptive edits by deleting major references and replace it with Instagram links as a reliable reference, as you did on [1], [2], [3], [4] and more on article page history. See Wikipedia:Biographies of living persons guidelines before started adding Instagram links as your main source of references. If You continue doing this, I will have to escalate with admins' noticeboard. Thanks.-- Canny Yeohmanly ( talk) 08:21, 2 June 2022 (UTC)
If you really have time to keep reverting my edits and report me, why don't you try to find more reliable sources instead? You said Instagram links bother you, but I'm sure you know and notice how messy the references, not to mention the article itself. The whole thing is just a mess. I'm just trying to improve the article, not vandalise it like you think. HiChrisBoyleHere ( talk) 10:35, 2 June 2022 (UTC)
The references are messy and excessive. The article has too many grammar, spelling, and punctuation mistakes. I don't know why adding more references (and at some point become too much) makes an article seems more reliable. Just trying to improve the article, not vandalise it. Plus it's not like I'm erasing everything and don't add reliable references. See how other beauty Queen's article works, such as Celeste Cortesi. HiChrisBoyleHere ( talk) 13:11, 2 June 2022 (UTC)
@ Canny Yeohmanly: Justru karena aku orang Indonesia, aku rasa referencesnya berantakan. Gimana kalau kamu yang tambahkan referencesnya instead of me who fix all the grammar errors? HiChrisBoyleHere ( talk) 13:41, 2 June 2022 (UTC)
@ HiChrisBoyleHere: Ak g prcy lu wong Indonesia, indonesia dmn lu? ora usah ngadi-ngadi deh, lo org ngra atas pulau Sulawesi toh, aku ki wes suwe bc artikel2 e dol. lapo kok mbuk hapos2, nek meh benerin grammar benerno gpp, nek referensi kbnykn tak cb kurangi deh. mhon krjasama, bls cb pk indo kl elu emang org sni.-- Canny Yeohmanly ( talk) 13:49, 2 June 2022 (UTC)
@ Canny Yeohmanly: Gue Indonesia, ga percaya amat. 1) Gue ga hapus semua isi artikelnya, gue mempersingkat biar efektif. 2) Referencesnya kebanyakan, ga efisien. Untuk tingginya aja pake tiga ref(?) 3) Kalau emg link instagram ga reliable, bleh coba cari link pengganti lain kok. Plus itu jg bukan di bagian biografi Laksminya. 4) Banyak kesalahan grammar, tands baca, dan spelling di artikelnya. Jelek bgt jdnya. 5) Aku orang Indo, bukan orang atas Sulawesi. Jadi disini aku pure bukan mau merusak artikel Laksmi, tapi memperbaiki.
Sekian dan terima kasih. HiChrisBoyleHere ( talk) 13:58, 2 June 2022 (UTC)
@ HiChrisBoyleHere: oo gt, y sdh kl gt km bnerin dl grammarnya nnti ak yg ksh referensinya lg, yg km hps itu ada bnyk web pmrintah yg jstru kuat untuk di jdkn referensi di wiki, soalnya kl gk d ksh referensi artikel laksmi bs d hps sm admin lo! instagram & youtube itu g blh dol d pk buat referensi, ada ketentuannya, cm blh instagram dr instansi pemerintah yg di pk, gk blh ngasal. soal tinggi bdn lbh baik pk referensi krn dr kmrn bnyk yg rubah tinggi bdnnya gk brdsrkn referensi. btw td aku tmbhin info soal laksmi kpilih jd duta ambassador g20 summit kok mbuk hps. foto profil e jg ilang km hps, nguawur iku ak yg motret dol. oh y satu lg, di wiki khususnya biografi, hrs pk 2 ref yg akurat, wiki bhs inggris bd sm wiki bhs indo praturan lbh ketat, cb liat wiki Agnez Mo, stiap klimat ada sumber 1-3 ref.-- Canny Yeohmanly ( talk) 14:13, 2 June 2022 (UTC)
@ Canny Yeohmanly: Ya intinya isi artikel dari aku cukup segitu, masalah referensi kamu bleh tambah, mngkin akan aku sesuaikan lagi nanti biar ga messy lagi. Thanks. HiChrisBoyleHere ( talk) 14:44, 2 June 2022 (UTC)
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The national newspaper The Weekend Australian reported yesterday that the subject of this article was born in Melbourne, Australia. The article is here (behind a paywall). As the subject has an Australian mother, and as the report, including its claim as to the subject's birthplace, is based in part on an interview with the subject, it is much more likely to be correct than the sources that claim, without having interviewed the subject, that she was born in Ubud (where The Weekend Australian says she was raised). Additionally, the claim that her grandfather was a "business tycoon" is not supported by the sources - "businessman" would be a more appropriate description. Bahnfrend ( talk) 03:39, 5 June 2022 (UTC)
Captions on the images and gallery images need trimming down per MOS:CAPSUCCINCT, likewise many are overlinked per MOS:OVERLINK and MOS:LINKONCE. One is a MOS:SEAOFBLUE. Would anyone prefer to have a go at de-linking and editing before I do? Sciencefish ( talk) 15:11, 13 January 2023 (UTC)
In the translation of the references [1] [2], there is no mention of ambassador roles, only that Suardana and associated winners were there to promote the Indonesian G20 presidency. There is only the mention that they were going to do it. This would appear to be MOS:PUFFERY unless a reference is provide that details what they actually did. Sciencefish ( talk) 12:41, 23 January 2023 (UTC)
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There has apparently been long-term massive deletion and content removals made by User:HiChrisBoyleHere on Laksmi De-Neefe Suardana page. Please stop your disruptive edits by deleting major references and replace it with Instagram links as a reliable reference, as you did on [1], [2], [3], [4] and more on article page history. See Wikipedia:Biographies of living persons guidelines before started adding Instagram links as your main source of references. If You continue doing this, I will have to escalate with admins' noticeboard. Thanks.-- Canny Yeohmanly ( talk) 08:21, 2 June 2022 (UTC)
If you really have time to keep reverting my edits and report me, why don't you try to find more reliable sources instead? You said Instagram links bother you, but I'm sure you know and notice how messy the references, not to mention the article itself. The whole thing is just a mess. I'm just trying to improve the article, not vandalise it like you think. HiChrisBoyleHere ( talk) 10:35, 2 June 2022 (UTC)
The references are messy and excessive. The article has too many grammar, spelling, and punctuation mistakes. I don't know why adding more references (and at some point become too much) makes an article seems more reliable. Just trying to improve the article, not vandalise it. Plus it's not like I'm erasing everything and don't add reliable references. See how other beauty Queen's article works, such as Celeste Cortesi. HiChrisBoyleHere ( talk) 13:11, 2 June 2022 (UTC)
@ Canny Yeohmanly: Justru karena aku orang Indonesia, aku rasa referencesnya berantakan. Gimana kalau kamu yang tambahkan referencesnya instead of me who fix all the grammar errors? HiChrisBoyleHere ( talk) 13:41, 2 June 2022 (UTC)
@ HiChrisBoyleHere: Ak g prcy lu wong Indonesia, indonesia dmn lu? ora usah ngadi-ngadi deh, lo org ngra atas pulau Sulawesi toh, aku ki wes suwe bc artikel2 e dol. lapo kok mbuk hapos2, nek meh benerin grammar benerno gpp, nek referensi kbnykn tak cb kurangi deh. mhon krjasama, bls cb pk indo kl elu emang org sni.-- Canny Yeohmanly ( talk) 13:49, 2 June 2022 (UTC)
@ Canny Yeohmanly: Gue Indonesia, ga percaya amat. 1) Gue ga hapus semua isi artikelnya, gue mempersingkat biar efektif. 2) Referencesnya kebanyakan, ga efisien. Untuk tingginya aja pake tiga ref(?) 3) Kalau emg link instagram ga reliable, bleh coba cari link pengganti lain kok. Plus itu jg bukan di bagian biografi Laksminya. 4) Banyak kesalahan grammar, tands baca, dan spelling di artikelnya. Jelek bgt jdnya. 5) Aku orang Indo, bukan orang atas Sulawesi. Jadi disini aku pure bukan mau merusak artikel Laksmi, tapi memperbaiki.
Sekian dan terima kasih. HiChrisBoyleHere ( talk) 13:58, 2 June 2022 (UTC)
@ HiChrisBoyleHere: oo gt, y sdh kl gt km bnerin dl grammarnya nnti ak yg ksh referensinya lg, yg km hps itu ada bnyk web pmrintah yg jstru kuat untuk di jdkn referensi di wiki, soalnya kl gk d ksh referensi artikel laksmi bs d hps sm admin lo! instagram & youtube itu g blh dol d pk buat referensi, ada ketentuannya, cm blh instagram dr instansi pemerintah yg di pk, gk blh ngasal. soal tinggi bdn lbh baik pk referensi krn dr kmrn bnyk yg rubah tinggi bdnnya gk brdsrkn referensi. btw td aku tmbhin info soal laksmi kpilih jd duta ambassador g20 summit kok mbuk hps. foto profil e jg ilang km hps, nguawur iku ak yg motret dol. oh y satu lg, di wiki khususnya biografi, hrs pk 2 ref yg akurat, wiki bhs inggris bd sm wiki bhs indo praturan lbh ketat, cb liat wiki Agnez Mo, stiap klimat ada sumber 1-3 ref.-- Canny Yeohmanly ( talk) 14:13, 2 June 2022 (UTC)
@ Canny Yeohmanly: Ya intinya isi artikel dari aku cukup segitu, masalah referensi kamu bleh tambah, mngkin akan aku sesuaikan lagi nanti biar ga messy lagi. Thanks. HiChrisBoyleHere ( talk) 14:44, 2 June 2022 (UTC)
This
edit request has been answered. Set the |answered= or |ans= parameter to no to reactivate your request. |
The national newspaper The Weekend Australian reported yesterday that the subject of this article was born in Melbourne, Australia. The article is here (behind a paywall). As the subject has an Australian mother, and as the report, including its claim as to the subject's birthplace, is based in part on an interview with the subject, it is much more likely to be correct than the sources that claim, without having interviewed the subject, that she was born in Ubud (where The Weekend Australian says she was raised). Additionally, the claim that her grandfather was a "business tycoon" is not supported by the sources - "businessman" would be a more appropriate description. Bahnfrend ( talk) 03:39, 5 June 2022 (UTC)
Captions on the images and gallery images need trimming down per MOS:CAPSUCCINCT, likewise many are overlinked per MOS:OVERLINK and MOS:LINKONCE. One is a MOS:SEAOFBLUE. Would anyone prefer to have a go at de-linking and editing before I do? Sciencefish ( talk) 15:11, 13 January 2023 (UTC)
In the translation of the references [1] [2], there is no mention of ambassador roles, only that Suardana and associated winners were there to promote the Indonesian G20 presidency. There is only the mention that they were going to do it. This would appear to be MOS:PUFFERY unless a reference is provide that details what they actually did. Sciencefish ( talk) 12:41, 23 January 2023 (UTC)
References