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This page is part of an Educational Project by students of LIUC, Italy, with a course page at: https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/courses/LIUC_-_Universit%C3%A0_Cattaneo/Digital_Technology_(Autumn_2022) The users of the group are new to the Wikipedia platform and are learning to edit following Wikipedia rules. They are open to any advice on improvements of the page in conformity to Wikipedia requirements and guidelines, and any help useful for the enhancement of the page will be gladly accepted. The student User names are:
Limelightangel (
talk) 18:30, 14 November 2022 (UTC)
The page needs a relevant Infobox template. There are a range of Infobox templates for churches,including a general one: Template:Infobox_church and some more specific to types/denominations of church. You may find a more relevant one here: Wikipedia:List_of_infoboxes and/or by looking at the ones used on similar pages. You can see how it has been used on these page by inspecting the markup (Edit). It is not necessary to complete all the fields in this template. There are predefined rules for the content you can add to each field in the template. See the Infobox help at: Help:Infobox Limelightangel ( talk) 12:07, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
I have added a new section entitled "Atmospheric events" in which I have reported the main weather disasters to which Chiesa Vecchia was subject. I have employed bullet points, later we can evaluate if we are going to keep it like this or if it is better to write a paragraph made up of complete sentences. LIUC4Giulia04 ( talk) 16:05, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
I have also write te relation of Taugwalder with Macugnaga and the Chiesa Vecchia. -- LIUC4Matteo04 ( talk) 15:30, 21 November 2022 (UTC)
Limelightangel ( talk) 11:04, 21 November 2022 (UTC)
Limelightangel ( talk) 15:20, 26 November 2022 (UTC)
Limelightangel ( talk) 15:37, 26 November 2022 (UTC)
Do you think we should add two sections, one for the Dorf and one for the Old Linden? In the Dorf section we could write about the small nucleus of huts in larch trunks stuck together which belonged to the ancient Walser community. While in the Old Linden section we could write that its age goes back seven centuries and the population used to gather under its branches. Do you agree? LIUC4Giulia04 ( talk) 07:00, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
Please advise your students to follow some of the basic rules outlined in the Manual of Style, especially those on bolding, duplicate links, and overlinked terms. They have also removed valid citation needed tags from statements without providing a source. I've been reverting quite a few of their edits over the past few hours and see that there's still hundreds that need to be checked for compliance. SounderBruce 10:41, 2 December 2022 (UTC)
Many thanks. I will reinforce this with them, be having meetings with them to review their recent work and the many issues. They have repeatedly had this advice but clearly need it emphasizing. Thanks for the feedback. Limelightangel (talk) 14:47, 2 December 2022 (UTC)
I suggest you address the issues in my feedback here, submit the page for review, notify Deb talk, and continue to improve the page. When you contact them for a review, there is nothing to stop you asking for any further suggestions.
Limelightangel ( talk) 12:56, 3 December 2022 (UTC)
I have found some legends related to the Old Church that trace back to the Walser community which used to live in the Dorf. Maybe we could add a section with brief summaries of the most interesting legends. Do you agree? LIUC4Giulia04 ( talk) 10:03, 5 December 2022 (UTC)
Hi @ Rosguill: sorry to bother, should all the bullet points be converted into prose or just some of them? Sometimes we had put them to lighten the content for the reader. Moreover, is there any particular suggestion to improve subject headings? Thanks in advance. LIUC4Giulia04 ( talk) 11:17, 6 December 2022 (UTC)
I think we have addressed the issues highlighted in the copyedit tag. The help resources of Wikipedia claim that we are allowed to remove it once we have satisfied the suggestions mentioned in it. Do you agree? Should we remove it? LIUC4Giulia04 ( talk) 20:41, 8 December 2022 (UTC)
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This page is part of an Educational Project by students of LIUC, Italy, with a course page at: https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/courses/LIUC_-_Universit%C3%A0_Cattaneo/Digital_Technology_(Autumn_2022) The users of the group are new to the Wikipedia platform and are learning to edit following Wikipedia rules. They are open to any advice on improvements of the page in conformity to Wikipedia requirements and guidelines, and any help useful for the enhancement of the page will be gladly accepted. The student User names are:
Limelightangel (
talk) 18:30, 14 November 2022 (UTC)
The page needs a relevant Infobox template. There are a range of Infobox templates for churches,including a general one: Template:Infobox_church and some more specific to types/denominations of church. You may find a more relevant one here: Wikipedia:List_of_infoboxes and/or by looking at the ones used on similar pages. You can see how it has been used on these page by inspecting the markup (Edit). It is not necessary to complete all the fields in this template. There are predefined rules for the content you can add to each field in the template. See the Infobox help at: Help:Infobox Limelightangel ( talk) 12:07, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
I have added a new section entitled "Atmospheric events" in which I have reported the main weather disasters to which Chiesa Vecchia was subject. I have employed bullet points, later we can evaluate if we are going to keep it like this or if it is better to write a paragraph made up of complete sentences. LIUC4Giulia04 ( talk) 16:05, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
I have also write te relation of Taugwalder with Macugnaga and the Chiesa Vecchia. -- LIUC4Matteo04 ( talk) 15:30, 21 November 2022 (UTC)
Limelightangel ( talk) 11:04, 21 November 2022 (UTC)
Limelightangel ( talk) 15:20, 26 November 2022 (UTC)
Limelightangel ( talk) 15:37, 26 November 2022 (UTC)
Do you think we should add two sections, one for the Dorf and one for the Old Linden? In the Dorf section we could write about the small nucleus of huts in larch trunks stuck together which belonged to the ancient Walser community. While in the Old Linden section we could write that its age goes back seven centuries and the population used to gather under its branches. Do you agree? LIUC4Giulia04 ( talk) 07:00, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
Please advise your students to follow some of the basic rules outlined in the Manual of Style, especially those on bolding, duplicate links, and overlinked terms. They have also removed valid citation needed tags from statements without providing a source. I've been reverting quite a few of their edits over the past few hours and see that there's still hundreds that need to be checked for compliance. SounderBruce 10:41, 2 December 2022 (UTC)
Many thanks. I will reinforce this with them, be having meetings with them to review their recent work and the many issues. They have repeatedly had this advice but clearly need it emphasizing. Thanks for the feedback. Limelightangel (talk) 14:47, 2 December 2022 (UTC)
I suggest you address the issues in my feedback here, submit the page for review, notify Deb talk, and continue to improve the page. When you contact them for a review, there is nothing to stop you asking for any further suggestions.
Limelightangel ( talk) 12:56, 3 December 2022 (UTC)
I have found some legends related to the Old Church that trace back to the Walser community which used to live in the Dorf. Maybe we could add a section with brief summaries of the most interesting legends. Do you agree? LIUC4Giulia04 ( talk) 10:03, 5 December 2022 (UTC)
Hi @ Rosguill: sorry to bother, should all the bullet points be converted into prose or just some of them? Sometimes we had put them to lighten the content for the reader. Moreover, is there any particular suggestion to improve subject headings? Thanks in advance. LIUC4Giulia04 ( talk) 11:17, 6 December 2022 (UTC)
I think we have addressed the issues highlighted in the copyedit tag. The help resources of Wikipedia claim that we are allowed to remove it once we have satisfied the suggestions mentioned in it. Do you agree? Should we remove it? LIUC4Giulia04 ( talk) 20:41, 8 December 2022 (UTC)