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Chua did not attempt to make a statistical analysis. One such shows that the fall of Communism and the increase in the number of democratic states were accompanied by a sudden and dramatic decline in total warfare, interstate wars, ethnic wars, revolutionary wars, and the number of refugees and displaced persons [1]. This is related to the democratic peace theory which argues that more democracy causes a general decrease in systematic violence.
I have some serious reservations about this "Criticism" Section:
(1) Problems with how you interpreted the source
Your source measures from 1946 to present...remember that the Cold War was not the only thing going on during this period...The implications of the Cold War would have been pretty miniscule if it weren't for the ongoing processes of European De-Colonization in Africa, Latin America, the Middle East, South Asia, South East Asia, and East Asia--many of the conflicts during the Coldwar were motivated by structural conditions that were in the works regardless of the coldwar context--the coldwar only supplied militants of any and every stripe with arms suppliers (US / USSR).
(2) Your "Statistical Analysis"
Yes there was "an increase in the number of democratic states" after the fall of the Cold War--many of which liberalized their markets and reduced the scope of state activities and state institutions (consult "Washington Consensus" and Milton Friedman "Liberalize, Liberalize, Liberalize"). The vast majority of these states fell flat on their face, they reduced their capacity to effectively manage and discharge necessary state functions in the name of open markets that left the vast majority of the population impoverished and disenfranchised. This is what Chua is addressing---the transmission of Laissez Faire Capitalism and Overnight Democracy.
I'm not sure what the fall of communism has to do with Chua's book, as she never touches upon it--except to discuss that this was the impetus for the export of US Democracy & Laissez Faire Capitalism
I think that you, perhaps, misunderstood her operationalized term "Democracy." She never asserted that Democratzation in and of itself was bad policy--what she argued, was that imposing Democracy in the form that we have it on a state with little or no experience in Democracy is unrealistic--how can we export our Democratic model successfully without exporting the 200 yrs in its making?
If you included that growing number of "Democracies" figure in rebuttal to her "Backlash against Democracy" claim, then again, you were mistaken. She distinguishes between Demagoguery and Democracy, indicating the former as evidence of a backlash against the latter insofar as the practices of Demagogues in relation to MDMs has been one of confiscation, state racism, ethnic cleansing, mass expulsions, and outright genocide.
(3) "total warfare, interstate wars, ethnic wars, revolutionary wars, and the number of
refugees and displaced persons"
Yes, all very true. But again...how is this relevant to a criticism of World on Fire?
However you might think this is relevant to the book...it probably isn't....recall for just a moment (if you actually read the whole book) that Chua wasn't addressing "WAR" and her study did not consider war....it considered the Ethnic tension and conflict within the confines of states...wherein the target populations she was considering, usually made up between .5-2% of the population.
(4) "Chua did not attempt to make a statistical analysis."
Chua largely used economic indicators of MDM capital-exodus from Markets/Economies as her measure...What Statistical analyses do you propose one could effectively, with little margin of error and conflicting cultural distinctions affecting measurement and variables, use?
(5) "Democratic Peace Theory"
My biased opinion: That is pure and utter nonsense...That theory is untestable, and will remain so until the entire world is covered with Democratic regimes.
My factual Problem: Its nice that you try to include a theoretical consideration....however, do not forget the Realist, Neo-Realist, Liberal, Neo- Liberal, Cosmopolitan, Biopower (Michel Focault/Felix Deleuze), Constructivist, Postmodern, Marxist, Neo-Marxist, Walzian (Jus Ad Bellum), Internationalist, or Huntingdon's Clash of Civilizations Theories...Because of all the theories you could have addressed in relation to this book....Democratic Peace Theory was the worst…
—Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.73.50.182 ( talk) 14:20, 8 May 2006 (UTC)
I have moved the following text from the Democracy article, in the process of streamlining its reference to Chua's World on Fire. It might be useful for the criticism section, although the original author's phrasing has WP:NPOV problems ("readily disputed"). - David Oberst 21:22, 1 March 2007 (UTC)
I request that you keep your talk directed at ideas, and away from people; makes it easier for me (and other people) to do the same. Most importantly, the citation of NPOV requires justification. Justify this NPOV assertion and note exactly and specifically what doesn't seem neutral about it. Personally, I see NO NPOV issues at all, unless you are having problems with the book review of George Leef .. is that the case? As a sports box commentator, by self-description, editors aren't allowed to hold bias either for or against respectable sources like Leef, so I am adding this section to the article, as should have been done originally. -- Landen99 15:54, 2 March 2007 (UTC)
I see NO issues with sources in this article. Everything appears well-sourced to me. -- Landen99 16:34, 7 March 2007 (UTC)
The Summary is mainly just bad book review prose and could be upgraded by someone with some free time and a copy of the book (I have neither). However, in the Criticism section, is there any source on the whole "democratic peace theory" paragraph? I don't remember any of the reviews I ran across bringing up anything like this, and I assume it was introduced by an editor instead of reflecting an existing response to the book? - David Oberst 07:43, 8 March 2007 (UTC)
That might be okay for a "See Also" link. But the paragraph begins with what could be considered a leading statement, postulates the link, and draws the conclusions, all without reference to any source which connects "World on Fire" with " democratic peace theory". For all I know it might be the kernal of a good argument (or simply magic pixie dust); the whole point of WP:A is to avoid forcing a reader (or editor) from having to evaluate these sorts of unattributed syntheses. Given that the book seems to drawn a certain amount of attention (judging from the range of reviews I've come across), is there not a source to point to which refers to Chua's work and the peace theory together? - David Oberst 04:29, 10 March 2007 (UTC)
There were two big problems with that paragraph:
For these reasons I have removed this paragraph. As true as it might be, it isn't verified. Atropos 07:25, 23 May 2007 (UTC)
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Chua did not attempt to make a statistical analysis. One such shows that the fall of Communism and the increase in the number of democratic states were accompanied by a sudden and dramatic decline in total warfare, interstate wars, ethnic wars, revolutionary wars, and the number of refugees and displaced persons [1]. This is related to the democratic peace theory which argues that more democracy causes a general decrease in systematic violence.
I have some serious reservations about this "Criticism" Section:
(1) Problems with how you interpreted the source
Your source measures from 1946 to present...remember that the Cold War was not the only thing going on during this period...The implications of the Cold War would have been pretty miniscule if it weren't for the ongoing processes of European De-Colonization in Africa, Latin America, the Middle East, South Asia, South East Asia, and East Asia--many of the conflicts during the Coldwar were motivated by structural conditions that were in the works regardless of the coldwar context--the coldwar only supplied militants of any and every stripe with arms suppliers (US / USSR).
(2) Your "Statistical Analysis"
Yes there was "an increase in the number of democratic states" after the fall of the Cold War--many of which liberalized their markets and reduced the scope of state activities and state institutions (consult "Washington Consensus" and Milton Friedman "Liberalize, Liberalize, Liberalize"). The vast majority of these states fell flat on their face, they reduced their capacity to effectively manage and discharge necessary state functions in the name of open markets that left the vast majority of the population impoverished and disenfranchised. This is what Chua is addressing---the transmission of Laissez Faire Capitalism and Overnight Democracy.
I'm not sure what the fall of communism has to do with Chua's book, as she never touches upon it--except to discuss that this was the impetus for the export of US Democracy & Laissez Faire Capitalism
I think that you, perhaps, misunderstood her operationalized term "Democracy." She never asserted that Democratzation in and of itself was bad policy--what she argued, was that imposing Democracy in the form that we have it on a state with little or no experience in Democracy is unrealistic--how can we export our Democratic model successfully without exporting the 200 yrs in its making?
If you included that growing number of "Democracies" figure in rebuttal to her "Backlash against Democracy" claim, then again, you were mistaken. She distinguishes between Demagoguery and Democracy, indicating the former as evidence of a backlash against the latter insofar as the practices of Demagogues in relation to MDMs has been one of confiscation, state racism, ethnic cleansing, mass expulsions, and outright genocide.
(3) "total warfare, interstate wars, ethnic wars, revolutionary wars, and the number of
refugees and displaced persons"
Yes, all very true. But again...how is this relevant to a criticism of World on Fire?
However you might think this is relevant to the book...it probably isn't....recall for just a moment (if you actually read the whole book) that Chua wasn't addressing "WAR" and her study did not consider war....it considered the Ethnic tension and conflict within the confines of states...wherein the target populations she was considering, usually made up between .5-2% of the population.
(4) "Chua did not attempt to make a statistical analysis."
Chua largely used economic indicators of MDM capital-exodus from Markets/Economies as her measure...What Statistical analyses do you propose one could effectively, with little margin of error and conflicting cultural distinctions affecting measurement and variables, use?
(5) "Democratic Peace Theory"
My biased opinion: That is pure and utter nonsense...That theory is untestable, and will remain so until the entire world is covered with Democratic regimes.
My factual Problem: Its nice that you try to include a theoretical consideration....however, do not forget the Realist, Neo-Realist, Liberal, Neo- Liberal, Cosmopolitan, Biopower (Michel Focault/Felix Deleuze), Constructivist, Postmodern, Marxist, Neo-Marxist, Walzian (Jus Ad Bellum), Internationalist, or Huntingdon's Clash of Civilizations Theories...Because of all the theories you could have addressed in relation to this book....Democratic Peace Theory was the worst…
—Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.73.50.182 ( talk) 14:20, 8 May 2006 (UTC)
I have moved the following text from the Democracy article, in the process of streamlining its reference to Chua's World on Fire. It might be useful for the criticism section, although the original author's phrasing has WP:NPOV problems ("readily disputed"). - David Oberst 21:22, 1 March 2007 (UTC)
I request that you keep your talk directed at ideas, and away from people; makes it easier for me (and other people) to do the same. Most importantly, the citation of NPOV requires justification. Justify this NPOV assertion and note exactly and specifically what doesn't seem neutral about it. Personally, I see NO NPOV issues at all, unless you are having problems with the book review of George Leef .. is that the case? As a sports box commentator, by self-description, editors aren't allowed to hold bias either for or against respectable sources like Leef, so I am adding this section to the article, as should have been done originally. -- Landen99 15:54, 2 March 2007 (UTC)
I see NO issues with sources in this article. Everything appears well-sourced to me. -- Landen99 16:34, 7 March 2007 (UTC)
The Summary is mainly just bad book review prose and could be upgraded by someone with some free time and a copy of the book (I have neither). However, in the Criticism section, is there any source on the whole "democratic peace theory" paragraph? I don't remember any of the reviews I ran across bringing up anything like this, and I assume it was introduced by an editor instead of reflecting an existing response to the book? - David Oberst 07:43, 8 March 2007 (UTC)
That might be okay for a "See Also" link. But the paragraph begins with what could be considered a leading statement, postulates the link, and draws the conclusions, all without reference to any source which connects "World on Fire" with " democratic peace theory". For all I know it might be the kernal of a good argument (or simply magic pixie dust); the whole point of WP:A is to avoid forcing a reader (or editor) from having to evaluate these sorts of unattributed syntheses. Given that the book seems to drawn a certain amount of attention (judging from the range of reviews I've come across), is there not a source to point to which refers to Chua's work and the peace theory together? - David Oberst 04:29, 10 March 2007 (UTC)
There were two big problems with that paragraph:
For these reasons I have removed this paragraph. As true as it might be, it isn't verified. Atropos 07:25, 23 May 2007 (UTC)
Image:Worldsfah.jpg is being used on this article. I notice the image page specifies that the image is being used under fair use but there is no explanation or rationale as to why its use in this Wikipedia article constitutes fair use. In addition to the boilerplate fair use template, you must also write out on the image description page a specific explanation or rationale for why using this image in each article is consistent with fair use.
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