1) Failure of
WP:LEAD. Lead (intro) should summarize the article and should not contain new information - failure on both counts. 2) Much more serious is the failure of
WP:COPYVIO/
WP:PLAGIARISM. It was even noted on talk of the article (sections above the review), yet nothing was done to address the issue. Both instances reported by Reactor factor are confirmed.
Seems mostly fine, but few references need tweaking. Guillory needs title, date. Bureau needs title, date. Wilson Quarterly needs author. Also, last para of the Background is missing a reference.
No response for over a week, which does not surprise me much given this was an educational assignment and the class has likely ended. It would be nice to hear anything from the instructor or the ambassador. In the holiday spirit, and taking into account possibly crazy RL, I'll wait for few more days. If no reply is pending by the time this reaches a 2-week mark, this will be an auto fail. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus|
talk to me01:25, 27 December 2011 (UTC)reply
Piotrus, I ran into this more or less by accident. I'm sorry that your time was wasted--but maybe it wasn't all wasted: I certainly appreciate your good efforts here and who knows, something may yet come out of this. Thanks.
Drmies (
talk)
17:30, 5 December 2018 (UTC)reply
1) Failure of
WP:LEAD. Lead (intro) should summarize the article and should not contain new information - failure on both counts. 2) Much more serious is the failure of
WP:COPYVIO/
WP:PLAGIARISM. It was even noted on talk of the article (sections above the review), yet nothing was done to address the issue. Both instances reported by Reactor factor are confirmed.
Seems mostly fine, but few references need tweaking. Guillory needs title, date. Bureau needs title, date. Wilson Quarterly needs author. Also, last para of the Background is missing a reference.
No response for over a week, which does not surprise me much given this was an educational assignment and the class has likely ended. It would be nice to hear anything from the instructor or the ambassador. In the holiday spirit, and taking into account possibly crazy RL, I'll wait for few more days. If no reply is pending by the time this reaches a 2-week mark, this will be an auto fail. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus|
talk to me01:25, 27 December 2011 (UTC)reply
Piotrus, I ran into this more or less by accident. I'm sorry that your time was wasted--but maybe it wasn't all wasted: I certainly appreciate your good efforts here and who knows, something may yet come out of this. Thanks.
Drmies (
talk)
17:30, 5 December 2018 (UTC)reply