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Hi all, I'm wondering whether this sentence can be removed from the article: "[Empire] is included in the 2003 film reference book 1001 Movies You Must See Before You Die."
I removed it, but my edit was reverted. My argument is that, compared to all the other high rankings Empire has received, being one of the 1001 best movies of all time seems insignificant. The editor who reverted my edit ( Darkwarriorblake) pointed out that this book was compiled by a total of 70 critics, and not just by one author, as I had assumed. Even then, I'm unsure why Empire's inclusion in such a book is meaningful, especially since the book is more than 20 years old. What Wikipedia readers are going to find this information useful? Wafflewombat ( talk) 22:59, 17 February 2024 (UTC)
I agree with Wafflewombat. 1001 Movies You Must See Before You Die is not considered a prestige list among film buffs. This is especially true of the newer entries that have been added (and often removed again) in updated editions. I'm not entirely sure as I might be misremembering, but I don't think it's a consensus list that the contributors have collectively agreed on, but rather a list where many different people have written the essays for the individual entries. At any rate, the list's standing in the field is dubious – it's considered a "fun" list rather than a "serious" one, for lack of better words. It's also not a "best of" list but a "must-see" list, as the title implies. It might be worth mentioning for comparatively obscure works like Storm over Asia, Méditerranée, and Deseret, but for films with wide recognition like this one mentioning it on the article is mostly dilution of more worthwhile content. TompaDompa ( talk) 09:07, 29 February 2024 (UTC)
Hey Darkwarriorblake, I have a quick question for you. Now that two people have supported removing this segment, would you be willing to reconsider your stance on it? Wafflewombat ( talk) 00:40, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
A segment that seems (to me) a little unclear. I added bold emphasis to the terms that may need clarifying or changing:
"The Empire Strikes Back debuted at the Dominion Theatre, London, on May 6, 1980, followed by a premiere on May 17 at the Kennedy Center in Washington, D.C. This event, which featured the principal cast, was attended by 600 children, including Special Olympians. The film's world premiere took place on May 20 at the Odeon Leicester Square, London. Dubbed "Empire Day", the event included actors in Stormtrooper attire interacting with people across the city."
Rinzler describes the Dominion screening as a "sneak preview," not a "debut." To me, "debut" sounds like it was an official premiere. The Wiki page for premiere defines it as "the debut (first public presentation) of a work." Rinzler describes the Kennedy Center screening alternately as a "preview" and "premiere." Rinzler calls the Odeon screening the "world premiere," and the Getty Images source calls it both a "premiere" and a "royal premiere." Interestingly, the Washington Post source calls the Kennedy Center screening the "world premiere."
If I'm not alone in thinking the terms could be tweaked a bit for clarification, please let me know, and I'll draft a new version of the segment. Wafflewombat ( talk) 04:48, 27 February 2024 (UTC)
I've drafted a new version:
"A sneak preview of The Empire Strikes Back took place on May 6, 1980 at the Dominion Theatre in London, followed by another preview screening on May 17 at the Kennedy Center in Washington, D.C. This event, which featured the principal cast, was attended by 600 children, including Special Olympians. The film's world premiere took place on May 20 at the Odeon Leicester Square in London. Dubbed "Empire Day", the event included actors in Stormtrooper attire interacting with people across the city."
Here is the Rinzler segment I consulted for the clarifications: "Following a sneak preview at the Dominion Theater on May 6, the world premiere of Star Wars: Episode V The Empire Strikes Back took place at the Odeon in London on May 20, the US preview having taken place three days earlier." (Chapter 11)
Would anyone oppose me implementing these changes?
Wafflewombat (
talk) 07:32, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
Changes implemented.
Hi folks! I'm posting three segments from the article that I feel could be changed or removed, and I'm hoping to get your thoughts.
1. "Hamill insisted on doing as many of his stunts as possible, though the insurers refused to allow him to perform a 15-foot (4.6 m) fall out of a window. He fell from a nine-inch ledge 40 feet (12 m) high but rolled on landing to avoid injury."
If the insurers wouldn't allow him to fall 15 feet, then why did they allow him to fall 40 feet? Or was the 40-foot fall accidental? I feel this should be clarified, but I don't have access to the cited source (Starlog no.40, November 1980). Can someone with access look this up, or tell me where I can find the Starlog issue online, so I can look into it?
Segment is now more clear. Wafflewombat ( talk) 20:24, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
2. "When the crew returned to London, they had only half the planned footage, including background plates for special effects shots that were uneven."
I made the argument that the average reader of this article won't know what background plates are, but another editor disagreed with me. I'm hoping to hear what others think. If we use filmmaking terminology like this, I feel we should either explain it or wikilink it. Unfortunately, there isn't a Wikipedia page for background plates. Explaining what they are would mean devoting more article space to a very minor topic, so my suggestion is that we remove the mention of background plates entirely.
Background plates now explained. Wafflewombat ( talk) 14:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
3. "Kershner wanted each character to make a unique entrance in the film. While filming Vader's entrance, the snow troopers preceding Prowse tripped over the polystyrene ice, and the stuntman behind him stood on his cape, breaking it off, causing Prowse to fall onto the snow troopers."
I feel this segment should be removed from the article, but on this there has also been disagreement. My argument is that the segment has no connection to anything else in the article. It's a disconnected anecdote which doesn't provide any valuable information. If the segment was preceded by a sentence telling us that the polystyrene ice caused numerous problems on set, or if it was followed by a sentence telling us that it took two days to repair Vader's cape, which delayed the production, then I would support keeping it in. Another reason to keep it would be if we had information about the unique entrances of other characters, but such information is not in the article. As it is, the anecdote has no context. Thoughts? Wafflewombat ( talk) 04:32, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
I'm listing two more segments I have questions about. Thank you, Darkwarriorblake, for your swift action on two of the previous ones.
4. "The American Film Institute ranked Darth Vader as the third best villain on its 2003 list of the 100 Best Heroes & Villains, after Norman Bates and Hannibal Lecter."
@
Darkwarriorblake, could I get your thoughts on the above sentence? Is a 2003 ranking still important?
I'm just wondering if this is too outdated, since it's from 20 years ago. Vader would probably still be high on the list today, but that is ultimately speculation and not fact.
5. "Filmmakers such as the Russo brothers, Roland Emmerich, and Kevin Feige cite it as an inspiration in their careers or identify as fans."
This is awkward, because we aren't told which of these filmmakers have been inspired by the film in their careers, and which ones are simply fans. There are probably way, way more filmmakers than just these three who have been inspired by Empire or are fans, so I'm not sure why there should be a list of just these three. Wafflewombat ( talk) 22:14, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
The article's lead says that Empire takes place three years after the events of Star Wars. How do we know this? It's not in the opening crawl. @ Darkwarriorblake, maybe you can answer this question?
Similarly, the page for Return of the Jedi says the plot occurs one year after Empire, but this also is absent from that film's opening crawl. Wafflewombat ( talk) 03:35, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
Would it be beneficial to standardize the article titles for Skywalker Saga films? Lucasfilm has changed its titling policy several times over the course of this franchise, from just the subtitle when the original trilogy was being released to "Star Wars: Episode ? - Subtitle" when the prequels were coming out, to "Star Wars: Subtitle" when the sequels were coming out, and now they're displayed as "Star Wars: Subtitle (Episode ?)" on Disney+. That's all well and good, but Lucasfilm has always retroactively used whatever their current titling policy is to refer to the previous films, so when they made the prequels they were referring to the original trilogy with "Star Wars: Episode ? - Subtitle" and when they made the sequels they used "Star Wars: Subtitle" for both the previous trilogies, and so on. The film articles are frozen to whatever the titling policy was at the time, so they're different for all three trilogies, but Lucasfilm never treats them this way. They're always referred to using the same titling policy. Perhaps more pertinently, sources also almost never treat the films this way. Whenever they're referred to as a set, which is frequently, they always have the same name styles, because that is what obviously makes more sense. I know that this is against normal film guidelines but in this case I think it would be better to follow sources than to follow the normal film guidelines. My personal preference would be to just use the subtitle, like this article does, so it would be for example The Phantom Menace or The Force Awakens. Obviously, Star Wars (film) would be an exception to this because it released without a subtitle and is frequently referred to as just Star Wars rather than as A New Hope. Ladtrack ( talk) 17:00, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
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Hi all, I'm wondering whether this sentence can be removed from the article: "[Empire] is included in the 2003 film reference book 1001 Movies You Must See Before You Die."
I removed it, but my edit was reverted. My argument is that, compared to all the other high rankings Empire has received, being one of the 1001 best movies of all time seems insignificant. The editor who reverted my edit ( Darkwarriorblake) pointed out that this book was compiled by a total of 70 critics, and not just by one author, as I had assumed. Even then, I'm unsure why Empire's inclusion in such a book is meaningful, especially since the book is more than 20 years old. What Wikipedia readers are going to find this information useful? Wafflewombat ( talk) 22:59, 17 February 2024 (UTC)
I agree with Wafflewombat. 1001 Movies You Must See Before You Die is not considered a prestige list among film buffs. This is especially true of the newer entries that have been added (and often removed again) in updated editions. I'm not entirely sure as I might be misremembering, but I don't think it's a consensus list that the contributors have collectively agreed on, but rather a list where many different people have written the essays for the individual entries. At any rate, the list's standing in the field is dubious – it's considered a "fun" list rather than a "serious" one, for lack of better words. It's also not a "best of" list but a "must-see" list, as the title implies. It might be worth mentioning for comparatively obscure works like Storm over Asia, Méditerranée, and Deseret, but for films with wide recognition like this one mentioning it on the article is mostly dilution of more worthwhile content. TompaDompa ( talk) 09:07, 29 February 2024 (UTC)
Hey Darkwarriorblake, I have a quick question for you. Now that two people have supported removing this segment, would you be willing to reconsider your stance on it? Wafflewombat ( talk) 00:40, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
A segment that seems (to me) a little unclear. I added bold emphasis to the terms that may need clarifying or changing:
"The Empire Strikes Back debuted at the Dominion Theatre, London, on May 6, 1980, followed by a premiere on May 17 at the Kennedy Center in Washington, D.C. This event, which featured the principal cast, was attended by 600 children, including Special Olympians. The film's world premiere took place on May 20 at the Odeon Leicester Square, London. Dubbed "Empire Day", the event included actors in Stormtrooper attire interacting with people across the city."
Rinzler describes the Dominion screening as a "sneak preview," not a "debut." To me, "debut" sounds like it was an official premiere. The Wiki page for premiere defines it as "the debut (first public presentation) of a work." Rinzler describes the Kennedy Center screening alternately as a "preview" and "premiere." Rinzler calls the Odeon screening the "world premiere," and the Getty Images source calls it both a "premiere" and a "royal premiere." Interestingly, the Washington Post source calls the Kennedy Center screening the "world premiere."
If I'm not alone in thinking the terms could be tweaked a bit for clarification, please let me know, and I'll draft a new version of the segment. Wafflewombat ( talk) 04:48, 27 February 2024 (UTC)
I've drafted a new version:
"A sneak preview of The Empire Strikes Back took place on May 6, 1980 at the Dominion Theatre in London, followed by another preview screening on May 17 at the Kennedy Center in Washington, D.C. This event, which featured the principal cast, was attended by 600 children, including Special Olympians. The film's world premiere took place on May 20 at the Odeon Leicester Square in London. Dubbed "Empire Day", the event included actors in Stormtrooper attire interacting with people across the city."
Here is the Rinzler segment I consulted for the clarifications: "Following a sneak preview at the Dominion Theater on May 6, the world premiere of Star Wars: Episode V The Empire Strikes Back took place at the Odeon in London on May 20, the US preview having taken place three days earlier." (Chapter 11)
Would anyone oppose me implementing these changes?
Wafflewombat (
talk) 07:32, 1 June 2024 (UTC)
Changes implemented.
Hi folks! I'm posting three segments from the article that I feel could be changed or removed, and I'm hoping to get your thoughts.
1. "Hamill insisted on doing as many of his stunts as possible, though the insurers refused to allow him to perform a 15-foot (4.6 m) fall out of a window. He fell from a nine-inch ledge 40 feet (12 m) high but rolled on landing to avoid injury."
If the insurers wouldn't allow him to fall 15 feet, then why did they allow him to fall 40 feet? Or was the 40-foot fall accidental? I feel this should be clarified, but I don't have access to the cited source (Starlog no.40, November 1980). Can someone with access look this up, or tell me where I can find the Starlog issue online, so I can look into it?
Segment is now more clear. Wafflewombat ( talk) 20:24, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
2. "When the crew returned to London, they had only half the planned footage, including background plates for special effects shots that were uneven."
I made the argument that the average reader of this article won't know what background plates are, but another editor disagreed with me. I'm hoping to hear what others think. If we use filmmaking terminology like this, I feel we should either explain it or wikilink it. Unfortunately, there isn't a Wikipedia page for background plates. Explaining what they are would mean devoting more article space to a very minor topic, so my suggestion is that we remove the mention of background plates entirely.
Background plates now explained. Wafflewombat ( talk) 14:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
3. "Kershner wanted each character to make a unique entrance in the film. While filming Vader's entrance, the snow troopers preceding Prowse tripped over the polystyrene ice, and the stuntman behind him stood on his cape, breaking it off, causing Prowse to fall onto the snow troopers."
I feel this segment should be removed from the article, but on this there has also been disagreement. My argument is that the segment has no connection to anything else in the article. It's a disconnected anecdote which doesn't provide any valuable information. If the segment was preceded by a sentence telling us that the polystyrene ice caused numerous problems on set, or if it was followed by a sentence telling us that it took two days to repair Vader's cape, which delayed the production, then I would support keeping it in. Another reason to keep it would be if we had information about the unique entrances of other characters, but such information is not in the article. As it is, the anecdote has no context. Thoughts? Wafflewombat ( talk) 04:32, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
I'm listing two more segments I have questions about. Thank you, Darkwarriorblake, for your swift action on two of the previous ones.
4. "The American Film Institute ranked Darth Vader as the third best villain on its 2003 list of the 100 Best Heroes & Villains, after Norman Bates and Hannibal Lecter."
@
Darkwarriorblake, could I get your thoughts on the above sentence? Is a 2003 ranking still important?
I'm just wondering if this is too outdated, since it's from 20 years ago. Vader would probably still be high on the list today, but that is ultimately speculation and not fact.
5. "Filmmakers such as the Russo brothers, Roland Emmerich, and Kevin Feige cite it as an inspiration in their careers or identify as fans."
This is awkward, because we aren't told which of these filmmakers have been inspired by the film in their careers, and which ones are simply fans. There are probably way, way more filmmakers than just these three who have been inspired by Empire or are fans, so I'm not sure why there should be a list of just these three. Wafflewombat ( talk) 22:14, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
The article's lead says that Empire takes place three years after the events of Star Wars. How do we know this? It's not in the opening crawl. @ Darkwarriorblake, maybe you can answer this question?
Similarly, the page for Return of the Jedi says the plot occurs one year after Empire, but this also is absent from that film's opening crawl. Wafflewombat ( talk) 03:35, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
Would it be beneficial to standardize the article titles for Skywalker Saga films? Lucasfilm has changed its titling policy several times over the course of this franchise, from just the subtitle when the original trilogy was being released to "Star Wars: Episode ? - Subtitle" when the prequels were coming out, to "Star Wars: Subtitle" when the sequels were coming out, and now they're displayed as "Star Wars: Subtitle (Episode ?)" on Disney+. That's all well and good, but Lucasfilm has always retroactively used whatever their current titling policy is to refer to the previous films, so when they made the prequels they were referring to the original trilogy with "Star Wars: Episode ? - Subtitle" and when they made the sequels they used "Star Wars: Subtitle" for both the previous trilogies, and so on. The film articles are frozen to whatever the titling policy was at the time, so they're different for all three trilogies, but Lucasfilm never treats them this way. They're always referred to using the same titling policy. Perhaps more pertinently, sources also almost never treat the films this way. Whenever they're referred to as a set, which is frequently, they always have the same name styles, because that is what obviously makes more sense. I know that this is against normal film guidelines but in this case I think it would be better to follow sources than to follow the normal film guidelines. My personal preference would be to just use the subtitle, like this article does, so it would be for example The Phantom Menace or The Force Awakens. Obviously, Star Wars (film) would be an exception to this because it released without a subtitle and is frequently referred to as just Star Wars rather than as A New Hope. Ladtrack ( talk) 17:00, 12 June 2024 (UTC)