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Hello, I found this article through on the good article nomination board. In the article it says In universe, the phrase "Shinzo wo Sasageyo!" was the primary salute and war cry used by the anime's protagonists throughout the show, making it a fitting title for the song
. I read the inline citations but couldn't find any information that said that it was the primary salute of the protagonists (not that I doubt you) but I think it falls under
Wikipedia:No original research. I'm new to this so I might have said something wrong here (apologies if so). (I should clarify this is not a good article review)
Wandering
Morpheme
02:44, 14 October 2023 (UTC)
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Reviewer: WanderingMorpheme ( talk · contribs) 17:06, 14 October 2023 (UTC)
This is my first good article review so feel free to give me pointers or challenge me on any points that I will make. I'm confident in my English skills but I can always make mistakes so if you don't think my suggestions are good, feel free to let me know. Also I saw on your user page that you might be busy and I will keep that in mind, so don't feel rushed, take all the time you need. Wandering Morpheme 17:06, 14 October 2023 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
as opposed to writing something "paraphrased" to "look like the original".I think in the source he's talking about paraphrasing to make it "his original", but he says that's stupid and takes pride in taking it straight from the source material, as there was no point in having to paraphrase it, as people want "attack on titan", and not a spin on it. Or at least that's how I interpreted it.
as well as their first original music released in almost four years.The source is talking about the anime not the band, the band released one song in 2015 called "Seishun wa Hanabi no Youni".
Linked Horizon would host, primarily in 2017.I would change this to just "in 2017" since the source is from 2017 and doesn't have info about potential future concerts.
On 20 July 2018, the Dutch symphonic metal band Epica would create a cover version of the song.The source says the song was available at that date but its actual creation was sometime in the summer, no specific date is given for the creation. You could fix this by changing from "created" to "was released" (or something along those lines) and/or mention it was created in the summer of 2017
the song would be streamed over 100 million times on the audio streaming service Spotify, becoming the first and only Linked Horizon song to accomplish the feat.The source does not say that it would be the only one, just that it was a one, and looking at the current spotify numbers show that Guren no Yumiya has reached the same feat. This is not a big issue but I think keeping up to date with the numbers would be nice, there are a few ways to fix this, either you could cut out the "only" or say and introduce a newer source that says that Guren no Yumiya also attained this feat, but later. Either should be fine.
Revo would later say in an interview with the Japanese music network BARKS [ja], that he would "pull out the words from Attack on Titan with pride" to make the song enjoyable for both Linked Horizon and Attack on Titan fans.I'm afraid this is a bit WP:SYNTH, the two statements are not connected in the source and not implied so. Also the part about making the song enjoyable for both types of fans is about the upcoming tour and not about the song itself.
The result was: promoted by
PrimalMustelid
talk
02:11, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
Improved to Good Article status by Johnson524 ( talk). Nominated by Mugtheboss ( talk) at 16:09, 15 October 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Shinzō wo Sasageyo!; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
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Hello, I found this article through on the good article nomination board. In the article it says In universe, the phrase "Shinzo wo Sasageyo!" was the primary salute and war cry used by the anime's protagonists throughout the show, making it a fitting title for the song
. I read the inline citations but couldn't find any information that said that it was the primary salute of the protagonists (not that I doubt you) but I think it falls under
Wikipedia:No original research. I'm new to this so I might have said something wrong here (apologies if so). (I should clarify this is not a good article review)
Wandering
Morpheme
02:44, 14 October 2023 (UTC)
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Reviewer: WanderingMorpheme ( talk · contribs) 17:06, 14 October 2023 (UTC)
This is my first good article review so feel free to give me pointers or challenge me on any points that I will make. I'm confident in my English skills but I can always make mistakes so if you don't think my suggestions are good, feel free to let me know. Also I saw on your user page that you might be busy and I will keep that in mind, so don't feel rushed, take all the time you need. Wandering Morpheme 17:06, 14 October 2023 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
as opposed to writing something "paraphrased" to "look like the original".I think in the source he's talking about paraphrasing to make it "his original", but he says that's stupid and takes pride in taking it straight from the source material, as there was no point in having to paraphrase it, as people want "attack on titan", and not a spin on it. Or at least that's how I interpreted it.
as well as their first original music released in almost four years.The source is talking about the anime not the band, the band released one song in 2015 called "Seishun wa Hanabi no Youni".
Linked Horizon would host, primarily in 2017.I would change this to just "in 2017" since the source is from 2017 and doesn't have info about potential future concerts.
On 20 July 2018, the Dutch symphonic metal band Epica would create a cover version of the song.The source says the song was available at that date but its actual creation was sometime in the summer, no specific date is given for the creation. You could fix this by changing from "created" to "was released" (or something along those lines) and/or mention it was created in the summer of 2017
the song would be streamed over 100 million times on the audio streaming service Spotify, becoming the first and only Linked Horizon song to accomplish the feat.The source does not say that it would be the only one, just that it was a one, and looking at the current spotify numbers show that Guren no Yumiya has reached the same feat. This is not a big issue but I think keeping up to date with the numbers would be nice, there are a few ways to fix this, either you could cut out the "only" or say and introduce a newer source that says that Guren no Yumiya also attained this feat, but later. Either should be fine.
Revo would later say in an interview with the Japanese music network BARKS [ja], that he would "pull out the words from Attack on Titan with pride" to make the song enjoyable for both Linked Horizon and Attack on Titan fans.I'm afraid this is a bit WP:SYNTH, the two statements are not connected in the source and not implied so. Also the part about making the song enjoyable for both types of fans is about the upcoming tour and not about the song itself.
The result was: promoted by
PrimalMustelid
talk
02:11, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
Improved to Good Article status by Johnson524 ( talk). Nominated by Mugtheboss ( talk) at 16:09, 15 October 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Shinzō wo Sasageyo!; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.