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Reviewer: Retrolord ( talk · contribs) 11:32, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
Happy to review. ★ ★ Retro Lord ★★ 11:32, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
"The numbers of deputies and senators are given for the period after the incorporation of Galicia following the Polish–Austrian War" I think this is a bit out of place. Perhaps put it as a note on the actual figures?
" presented to it" Presented by who?
"disband the chamber of deputies" Disband implies scrapping the whole thing altogether, did you mean dissolve?
I don't really think the lead summarizes the article in sufficient detail, either. There is no mention of Napoleon, composition or its "competences". Could you add to it?
Thanks, ★ ★ Retro Lord ★★ 11:38, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
PASS! ★ ★ Retro Lord ★★ 00:56, 18 July 2013 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Retrolord ( talk · contribs) 11:32, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
Happy to review. ★ ★ Retro Lord ★★ 11:32, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
"The numbers of deputies and senators are given for the period after the incorporation of Galicia following the Polish–Austrian War" I think this is a bit out of place. Perhaps put it as a note on the actual figures?
" presented to it" Presented by who?
"disband the chamber of deputies" Disband implies scrapping the whole thing altogether, did you mean dissolve?
I don't really think the lead summarizes the article in sufficient detail, either. There is no mention of Napoleon, composition or its "competences". Could you add to it?
Thanks, ★ ★ Retro Lord ★★ 11:38, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
PASS! ★ ★ Retro Lord ★★ 00:56, 18 July 2013 (UTC)