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Reviewer: Retrolord ( talk · contribs) 11:32, 10 July 2013 (UTC) reply

Happy to review. Retro Lord 11:32, 10 July 2013 (UTC) reply

Comments

"The numbers of deputies and senators are given for the period after the incorporation of Galicia following the Polish–Austrian War" I think this is a bit out of place. Perhaps put it as a note on the actual figures?

" presented to it" Presented by who?

"disband the chamber of deputies" Disband implies scrapping the whole thing altogether, did you mean dissolve?

I don't really think the lead summarizes the article in sufficient detail, either. There is no mention of Napoleon, composition or its "competences". Could you add to it?

Thanks, Retro Lord 11:38, 10 July 2013 (UTC) reply

I'm traveling out of town at the moment in remote areas with limited Internet access, should be able to address above in a few days. -- Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 15:47, 10 July 2013 (UTC) reply
@ User:Retrolord: all issues above addressed, I hope. Please let me know what else should be done. -- Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 12:40, 15 July 2013 (UTC) reply
Ok Thanks, I'll give it one more quick look then pass it. Retro Lord 13:06, 15 July 2013 (UTC) reply

PASS! Retro Lord 00:56, 18 July 2013 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Retrolord ( talk · contribs) 11:32, 10 July 2013 (UTC) reply

Happy to review. Retro Lord 11:32, 10 July 2013 (UTC) reply

Comments

"The numbers of deputies and senators are given for the period after the incorporation of Galicia following the Polish–Austrian War" I think this is a bit out of place. Perhaps put it as a note on the actual figures?

" presented to it" Presented by who?

"disband the chamber of deputies" Disband implies scrapping the whole thing altogether, did you mean dissolve?

I don't really think the lead summarizes the article in sufficient detail, either. There is no mention of Napoleon, composition or its "competences". Could you add to it?

Thanks, Retro Lord 11:38, 10 July 2013 (UTC) reply

I'm traveling out of town at the moment in remote areas with limited Internet access, should be able to address above in a few days. -- Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 15:47, 10 July 2013 (UTC) reply
@ User:Retrolord: all issues above addressed, I hope. Please let me know what else should be done. -- Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 12:40, 15 July 2013 (UTC) reply
Ok Thanks, I'll give it one more quick look then pass it. Retro Lord 13:06, 15 July 2013 (UTC) reply

PASS! Retro Lord 00:56, 18 July 2013 (UTC) reply


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