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"digestive cookie disorder" Anyone care to explain what the hell that's supposed to be? — Preceding
unsigned comment added by
71.166.118.199 (
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Copy/edits
Lead
the first sentence in the lead is excessively long and should be split to make it more readable.
"had a near-death experience and cured miraculously" is grammatically incorrect possibly "was miraculously cured" would be better.
"the film scheduled to be released" should be "the film is scheduled to be released"
Plot
Anna's disease is diagnosed by Dr. Burgi, the pediatric specialist in Ft. Worth, not by Dr. Nurko in Boston. — Preceding
unsigned comment added by
174.69.3.85 (
talk) 05:08, 9 August 2016 (UTC)reply
do you know what the rare digestive disease is? the disease should be linked if known.
" no evidence of the chronic illness is found." The illness can be chronic or acute, and considering she got better, I'm going to go with acute. — Preceding
unsigned comment added by
Sobeita (
talk •
contribs) 21:21, 15 March 2016 (UTC)reply
"and only able to eat by feeding tubes" the use of feeding tubes is not strictly
eating
"miraculously cured after surviving a near-death experience" is grammatically incorrect
this is an excessively long sentence now, should be split to make it more readable.
Cast
"sick girls mother" the daughter actually has a name
"girl's father" does he have a name in the film?
there are other key cast members that should be included in the list
just need to indicate Eugenio Derbez's role - the description of who the character is inspired by should be included in the plot or production section
Production
"was only able to eat by feeding tubes" - see previous comment
"She was cured after a miraculous visit to heaven and saved from a near-death experience" is grammatically incorrect
there are multiple times that 'set' is used (i.e. "and set Randy Brown" and "Jennifer Garner was set to star") which is not the correct use of the word and an alternative should be applied.
THR should be the full name and not the abbreviation
"Same day, Variety confirmed" is grammatically incorrect - possibly should be "On the same day
Variety confirmed"
Release
"Sony set the film for an March" once again incorrect use of 'set'
"The girl is suffering" should be "Anna is suffering"
"And later she is miraculously" should be "Following which she is miraculously"
"Later, the filming was confirmed by various sources, along with that cinematographer Checco Varese, production designer David R. Sandefur, and editor Emma E. Hickox were also announced." should be "Filming was subsequently confirmed by various sources, together with announcements that David R. Sandefur and Emma E. Hickox had been appointed as the production designer and editor respectively."
Everything else looks fine.
Dan arndt (
talk) 10:14, 24 July 2015 (UTC)reply
A fact from Miracles from Heaven (film) appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the Did you know column on 29 July 2015 (
check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Evangelical Christianity, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
Evangelical Christianity on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.Evangelical ChristianityWikipedia:WikiProject Evangelical ChristianityTemplate:WikiProject Evangelical ChristianityEvangelical Christianity articles
This article has been given a rating which conflicts with the
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"digestive cookie disorder" Anyone care to explain what the hell that's supposed to be? — Preceding
unsigned comment added by
71.166.118.199 (
talk) 22:30, 16 March 2016 (UTC)reply
Copy/edits
Lead
the first sentence in the lead is excessively long and should be split to make it more readable.
"had a near-death experience and cured miraculously" is grammatically incorrect possibly "was miraculously cured" would be better.
"the film scheduled to be released" should be "the film is scheduled to be released"
Plot
Anna's disease is diagnosed by Dr. Burgi, the pediatric specialist in Ft. Worth, not by Dr. Nurko in Boston. — Preceding
unsigned comment added by
174.69.3.85 (
talk) 05:08, 9 August 2016 (UTC)reply
do you know what the rare digestive disease is? the disease should be linked if known.
" no evidence of the chronic illness is found." The illness can be chronic or acute, and considering she got better, I'm going to go with acute. — Preceding
unsigned comment added by
Sobeita (
talk •
contribs) 21:21, 15 March 2016 (UTC)reply
"and only able to eat by feeding tubes" the use of feeding tubes is not strictly
eating
"miraculously cured after surviving a near-death experience" is grammatically incorrect
this is an excessively long sentence now, should be split to make it more readable.
Cast
"sick girls mother" the daughter actually has a name
"girl's father" does he have a name in the film?
there are other key cast members that should be included in the list
just need to indicate Eugenio Derbez's role - the description of who the character is inspired by should be included in the plot or production section
Production
"was only able to eat by feeding tubes" - see previous comment
"She was cured after a miraculous visit to heaven and saved from a near-death experience" is grammatically incorrect
there are multiple times that 'set' is used (i.e. "and set Randy Brown" and "Jennifer Garner was set to star") which is not the correct use of the word and an alternative should be applied.
THR should be the full name and not the abbreviation
"Same day, Variety confirmed" is grammatically incorrect - possibly should be "On the same day
Variety confirmed"
Release
"Sony set the film for an March" once again incorrect use of 'set'
"The girl is suffering" should be "Anna is suffering"
"And later she is miraculously" should be "Following which she is miraculously"
"Later, the filming was confirmed by various sources, along with that cinematographer Checco Varese, production designer David R. Sandefur, and editor Emma E. Hickox were also announced." should be "Filming was subsequently confirmed by various sources, together with announcements that David R. Sandefur and Emma E. Hickox had been appointed as the production designer and editor respectively."
Everything else looks fine.
Dan arndt (
talk) 10:14, 24 July 2015 (UTC)reply