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I've added the "japanese female singer" tag to the article, so that it appears on the index... (sorry no user) 217.125.129.224 18:26, 18 September 2006 (UTC)
Wasn't she involved with one of the guys from Toto for a while? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 66.176.39.56 ( talk) 09:51, 26 March 2008 (UTC)
I added the note about her 21st studio album, as it's pulled directly from her official homepage. Also, noting her name as just "Iijima" I feel does her a disservice, so I edited to "Mari Iijima" as that is her whole name. —Preceding unsigned comment added by NocturneVoyager ( talk • contribs) 20:39, 30 June 2009 (UTC)
Here ;) -- ReyBrujo ( talk) 03:54, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
I removed the "Oscar and Grammy winning" part of Ryuichi Sakamoto's mention in the lead because I felt like it wasn't needed (although I realise it was in a previous version of this page) as this page isn't about him, and his name is a wiki link, so people can click that and find out that information themselves if they're interested?
Another thing I've aiming for in my (continuing) edits is too make this article a lot less related to Macross or Lynn Minmay, since I feel the older versions were guilty of this, and article is about Mari herself. Macross is a relatively small part of Miss Iijima's career, who is primarily a musician as you can see by her large discography.
So like above, I feel like maybe the mention of Macross & Minmay in the lead is also unneeded as I did write a section about it at the start of the biography section, so maybe it's repeated information/uneeded? Again, Macross & Minmay have wiki links in this article so I'm concerned that they don't have to be mentioned further in this article than I have already done so, but I know the lead is supposed to be a summary? so I won't remove that for now. Akiman ( talk) 09:56, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
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I've added the "japanese female singer" tag to the article, so that it appears on the index... (sorry no user) 217.125.129.224 18:26, 18 September 2006 (UTC)
Wasn't she involved with one of the guys from Toto for a while? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 66.176.39.56 ( talk) 09:51, 26 March 2008 (UTC)
I added the note about her 21st studio album, as it's pulled directly from her official homepage. Also, noting her name as just "Iijima" I feel does her a disservice, so I edited to "Mari Iijima" as that is her whole name. —Preceding unsigned comment added by NocturneVoyager ( talk • contribs) 20:39, 30 June 2009 (UTC)
Here ;) -- ReyBrujo ( talk) 03:54, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
I removed the "Oscar and Grammy winning" part of Ryuichi Sakamoto's mention in the lead because I felt like it wasn't needed (although I realise it was in a previous version of this page) as this page isn't about him, and his name is a wiki link, so people can click that and find out that information themselves if they're interested?
Another thing I've aiming for in my (continuing) edits is too make this article a lot less related to Macross or Lynn Minmay, since I feel the older versions were guilty of this, and article is about Mari herself. Macross is a relatively small part of Miss Iijima's career, who is primarily a musician as you can see by her large discography.
So like above, I feel like maybe the mention of Macross & Minmay in the lead is also unneeded as I did write a section about it at the start of the biography section, so maybe it's repeated information/uneeded? Again, Macross & Minmay have wiki links in this article so I'm concerned that they don't have to be mentioned further in this article than I have already done so, but I know the lead is supposed to be a summary? so I won't remove that for now. Akiman ( talk) 09:56, 22 June 2011 (UTC)
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