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I am not sure if Club Trillion is a term that I should use in this article. Is it a thing. Bartelstein had several club trill efforts if it is.-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:40, 21 May 2023 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
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15:45, 24 May 2023 (UTC)
Created by TonyTheTiger ( talk). Self-nominated at 06:17, 21 May 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Josh Bartelstein; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
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Article looks alright. AGF on the source for hook ALT0; however, I'm getting a 404 for the ALT1 source – you probably will want to change that.
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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 ( talk · contribs) 20:15, 24 August 2023 (UTC)
I'll review this one.
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He played college basketball for Michigan as a walk-on and a 3x Academic All-Big Ten honoree.missing "was" after "and"
Because his fatherseems extraneous at best. This could probably be summed up to
Because of the connections his father made, Bartelstein met many famous athletes and even worked out with Mo Williams, Bobby Simmons, and Kirk Hinrich.
TonyTheTiger, at this time I am leaning towards a fail due to 3B, namely that this article is excessively long and too detailed. However, I am happy to give you a few days to see if you can focus it up. Happy to come back and re-review after. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 20:42, 24 August 2023 (UTC)
![]() | Josh Bartelstein was nominated as a Sports and recreation good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (August 30, 2023, reviewed version). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated. |
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I am not sure if Club Trillion is a term that I should use in this article. Is it a thing. Bartelstein had several club trill efforts if it is.-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:40, 21 May 2023 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
Bruxton (
talk)
15:45, 24 May 2023 (UTC)
Created by TonyTheTiger ( talk). Self-nominated at 06:17, 21 May 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Josh Bartelstein; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems |
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Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation |
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall:
Article looks alright. AGF on the source for hook ALT0; however, I'm getting a 404 for the ALT1 source – you probably will want to change that.
BeanieFan11 (
talk)
02:06, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 ( talk · contribs) 20:15, 24 August 2023 (UTC)
I'll review this one.
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He played college basketball for Michigan as a walk-on and a 3x Academic All-Big Ten honoree.missing "was" after "and"
Because his fatherseems extraneous at best. This could probably be summed up to
Because of the connections his father made, Bartelstein met many famous athletes and even worked out with Mo Williams, Bobby Simmons, and Kirk Hinrich.
TonyTheTiger, at this time I am leaning towards a fail due to 3B, namely that this article is excessively long and too detailed. However, I am happy to give you a few days to see if you can focus it up. Happy to come back and re-review after. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 20:42, 24 August 2023 (UTC)