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Possible improvements for this article:
- Paragraphs in the lede could be reduced. See here.
- "On RogerEbert.com, Peter Sobczynski gave the film 3 ½ out of 5 stars, commending film's style and use of Indonesian folklore, but criticising some elements of the ending. He particularly highlighted the film's opening sequence, calling it "electrifying" and "absolutely spellbinding" I think Roger Ebert's website grades out of four stars.
- "In a more mixed review, James Marsh in South China Morning Post rated the film 2.5 out of 5 stars and said the film was "unevenly paced and fails to capitalise on its grisly premise", but praised Basro's performance.
Al Jazeera highlighted Impetigore as part of a new wave of low-budget folk horror films bringing attention to Southeast Asia's film industry, alongside Malaysian film Roh." Possibly merge these into one paragraph IMO.
- Some refs, like this, are all right, though there could be better refs from RT. Also, I checked some refs, and ref 3 couldn't be opened somehow.
These are minor issues still, if these are improved this would be a easy B-class. Many thanks! VickKiang ( talk) 03:38, 28 June 2022 (UTC)
- It might be just an error with my device, but I couldn’t open ref 15, so could you please check it?
- This is a very minor suggestion, though Variety also has some criticisms, including:
“the convoluted later mix of chase scenes and explanatory flashbacks feels more like an awkward pileup of miscellaneous genre tropes than an elegant (or terrifying) solution to a supernatural mystery.”
If this could be mentioned briefly, that would be great. I had a quick read at the other sections, and there are no big problems. For GA, IMO someone more into horror films could review this for you, as I am not an expert in this genre. Thanks! VickKiang ( talk) 21:41, 1 July 2022 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Andrzejbanas ( talk · contribs) 17:28, 3 February 2023 (UTC)
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The soundtrack section is a little underdeveloped, any ideas on who the Spouse are? Perhaps how the people are involved might be better integrated into the post-production section as I don't think this soundtrack has too much relevance.
I'd suggest adding links to Archive.org for all these sources as we've already seem to have lost one. I found when I was editing film articles form Asia, that web pages tend to just vanish, so it's good to back them up.
I'll do a further review after these issues are taken care of, the big issues being the plot a bit hard to parse and some citations needing expansion. Andrzejbanas ( talk) 21:23, 3 February 2023 (UTC)
- per MOS:FILM, drop "Indonesian" from the first sentence, it's clarified by the co-production info in the second paragraph. - I'd say "American" first and then state US-based. - Would combine the third and fourth paragraph. - Don't really need a cite in the lead if we have it already cited in the prose. I believe you only need citations in the lead if it's really
Plot
- "The attacker is shot and killed by police." this still reads as happening rather quickly like we missed thing. I'm guessing this is just happens as a bit of a shock? if so, maybe re-phrase as "Suddenly, the attacker..." If not, is there a bit of plot here missing?
Development probably don't need brackets on "inspired by his own mother".
Release Check capitalization on "Shudder Picks Up Joko Anwar's 'Impetigore' Indonesian Horror (EXCLUSIVE)" (EXCLUSIVE -> Exclusive)
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" but criticising some elements of the ending. " what parts?
- I might drop the Independent review as it's not really saying much. It's almost like they didn't watch the film.
- "Marco- Ferrarese in Al Jazeera highlighted Impetigore as part of a new wave of low-budget horror films bringing attention to Southeast Asia's film industry, alongside Malaysian film Roh.", maybe expand on this a bit now. What is this wave? how has it changed? Andrzejbanas ( talk) 04:16, 13 March 2023 (UTC)
Thanks for your patience. I believe you've covered everything, so I'll be passing this article. Great work! }}— Andrzejbanas ( talk) 23:40, 2 April 2023 (UTC)
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Improved to Good Article status by Arcahaeoindris ( talk). Self-nominated at 08:50, 4 April 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Impetigore; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
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Arcahaeoindris: Nice. One minor gripe: the source does not seem to back up the fact that the crew build roads, only a path. Please adjust accordingly, or let me know if I am incorrect.
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![]() | A fact from Impetigore appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the
Did you know column on 2 May 2023 (
check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
| ![]() |
Possible improvements for this article:
- Paragraphs in the lede could be reduced. See here.
- "On RogerEbert.com, Peter Sobczynski gave the film 3 ½ out of 5 stars, commending film's style and use of Indonesian folklore, but criticising some elements of the ending. He particularly highlighted the film's opening sequence, calling it "electrifying" and "absolutely spellbinding" I think Roger Ebert's website grades out of four stars.
- "In a more mixed review, James Marsh in South China Morning Post rated the film 2.5 out of 5 stars and said the film was "unevenly paced and fails to capitalise on its grisly premise", but praised Basro's performance.
Al Jazeera highlighted Impetigore as part of a new wave of low-budget folk horror films bringing attention to Southeast Asia's film industry, alongside Malaysian film Roh." Possibly merge these into one paragraph IMO.
- Some refs, like this, are all right, though there could be better refs from RT. Also, I checked some refs, and ref 3 couldn't be opened somehow.
These are minor issues still, if these are improved this would be a easy B-class. Many thanks! VickKiang ( talk) 03:38, 28 June 2022 (UTC)
- It might be just an error with my device, but I couldn’t open ref 15, so could you please check it?
- This is a very minor suggestion, though Variety also has some criticisms, including:
“the convoluted later mix of chase scenes and explanatory flashbacks feels more like an awkward pileup of miscellaneous genre tropes than an elegant (or terrifying) solution to a supernatural mystery.”
If this could be mentioned briefly, that would be great. I had a quick read at the other sections, and there are no big problems. For GA, IMO someone more into horror films could review this for you, as I am not an expert in this genre. Thanks! VickKiang ( talk) 21:41, 1 July 2022 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Andrzejbanas ( talk · contribs) 17:28, 3 February 2023 (UTC)
I will be reviewing this article.
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Infobox
Lead
Plot
Cast
Production
The soundtrack section is a little underdeveloped, any ideas on who the Spouse are? Perhaps how the people are involved might be better integrated into the post-production section as I don't think this soundtrack has too much relevance.
I'd suggest adding links to Archive.org for all these sources as we've already seem to have lost one. I found when I was editing film articles form Asia, that web pages tend to just vanish, so it's good to back them up.
I'll do a further review after these issues are taken care of, the big issues being the plot a bit hard to parse and some citations needing expansion. Andrzejbanas ( talk) 21:23, 3 February 2023 (UTC)
- per MOS:FILM, drop "Indonesian" from the first sentence, it's clarified by the co-production info in the second paragraph. - I'd say "American" first and then state US-based. - Would combine the third and fourth paragraph. - Don't really need a cite in the lead if we have it already cited in the prose. I believe you only need citations in the lead if it's really
Plot
- "The attacker is shot and killed by police." this still reads as happening rather quickly like we missed thing. I'm guessing this is just happens as a bit of a shock? if so, maybe re-phrase as "Suddenly, the attacker..." If not, is there a bit of plot here missing?
Development probably don't need brackets on "inspired by his own mother".
Release Check capitalization on "Shudder Picks Up Joko Anwar's 'Impetigore' Indonesian Horror (EXCLUSIVE)" (EXCLUSIVE -> Exclusive)
Reception
" but criticising some elements of the ending. " what parts?
- I might drop the Independent review as it's not really saying much. It's almost like they didn't watch the film.
- "Marco- Ferrarese in Al Jazeera highlighted Impetigore as part of a new wave of low-budget horror films bringing attention to Southeast Asia's film industry, alongside Malaysian film Roh.", maybe expand on this a bit now. What is this wave? how has it changed? Andrzejbanas ( talk) 04:16, 13 March 2023 (UTC)
Thanks for your patience. I believe you've covered everything, so I'll be passing this article. Great work! }}— Andrzejbanas ( talk) 23:40, 2 April 2023 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
BorgQueen (
talk)
09:33, 24 April 2023 (UTC)
Improved to Good Article status by Arcahaeoindris ( talk). Self-nominated at 08:50, 4 April 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Impetigore; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems |
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QPQ: Done. |
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Arcahaeoindris: Nice. One minor gripe: the source does not seem to back up the fact that the crew build roads, only a path. Please adjust accordingly, or let me know if I am incorrect.
Unlimitedlead (
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16:30, 5 April 2023 (UTC)