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Nominator: HistoryofIran ( talk · contribs) 13:30, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: That Tired Tarantula ( talk · contribs) 16:26, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
Hi. I'll be reviewing the article over the course of this week.
That Tired Tarantula
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16:26, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
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The article stays focused, but I'm concerned about its broadness, since it only has a history section; most GAs about nations or societies in the past have sections about their government and culture as well, along with additional sections about different aspects of their societies, so the fact that there's only a history section is a pretty significant issue; furthermore, since this article covers both Safavid Iran and Qajar Iran and the articles for those eras have significant coverage of their governments and cultures, it seems like there's a lot of information about those topics that the article should cover.
Or okay, maybe stuff about the government's not necessary because of there being two different eras that this article covers, but there should definitely be some stuff about the culture and population in the area.
Unfortunately, I think I'm going to have to quickfail this GAR because the article needs to be significantly expanded before it is broad enough to become a GA. However, this decision is not final; since I'm newer to the review process, I'm going to contact a more experienced reviewer first for some more input on this review and how the article should be improved. That Tired Tarantula Burrow 00:38, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
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Nominator: HistoryofIran ( talk · contribs) 13:30, 12 June 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: That Tired Tarantula ( talk · contribs) 16:26, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
Hi. I'll be reviewing the article over the course of this week.
That Tired Tarantula
Burrow
16:26, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
Good Article review progress box
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The article stays focused, but I'm concerned about its broadness, since it only has a history section; most GAs about nations or societies in the past have sections about their government and culture as well, along with additional sections about different aspects of their societies, so the fact that there's only a history section is a pretty significant issue; furthermore, since this article covers both Safavid Iran and Qajar Iran and the articles for those eras have significant coverage of their governments and cultures, it seems like there's a lot of information about those topics that the article should cover.
Or okay, maybe stuff about the government's not necessary because of there being two different eras that this article covers, but there should definitely be some stuff about the culture and population in the area.
Unfortunately, I think I'm going to have to quickfail this GAR because the article needs to be significantly expanded before it is broad enough to become a GA. However, this decision is not final; since I'm newer to the review process, I'm going to contact a more experienced reviewer first for some more input on this review and how the article should be improved. That Tired Tarantula Burrow 00:38, 13 July 2024 (UTC)