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I've completely reworked the article on Katie Holmes and have posted it on WP:PR in the hopes of advancing it to WP:FAC. I would be grateful for your comments at Wikipedia:Peer review/Katie Holmes/archive1. PedanticallySpeaking 19:02, 9 February 2006 (UTC)
I think the plot summary needs a little work, the whole dinner with police officer thing, and the Las Vegas story is left out. If someone wants I can do a little work on that mo'fo.
- please do, this summary is utterly incomplete
- Yeah, I don't remember the film enough to help, but there was a huge plot section in Vegas involving the Simon and the character played by Taye Diggs. Then there was the Amway-ish thing with the cop and his wife. Finally, Ronna wakes up in the ditch at the end, doesn't she? I vaguely remember her going back to work and the supermarket, and her and Claire retrieving Mannie from where they left him. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 24.220.150.201 ( talk) 06:10, 5 December 2006 (UTC).
There is contradictory information in this article regarding the budget for the film. Was it $6.5 million or $20 million? Can someone find out and correct? Iamvered 18:12, 2 January 2007 (UTC)
It'd be nice to get some info about the special Edition of this movie - NeF ( talk) 10:12, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
A tag complained of the plot being too long or with too many details, so I trimmed it up some. If you're feeling more ruthless than I was, go 'head and snip more... I'm sure there are many spots where it'll help. — HarringtonSmith ( talk) 09:50, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
WP:FILMPLOT advises plot summary should be 400 to 700 words unless…
- unconventional structure
- non-linear storylines
- complicated
Go may not be overly "complicated" but is fairly complex and packs in a whole lotta story with its unconventional, non-linear structure. It's clearly 21/2 of the exceptions.
I have trimmed the plot from 913 words to 736 mostly through concision but I cut into a little of the meat by excising the credit card and food poisoning. I also added a little with the car chase which wasn't mentioned but is more integral. Given that so much happens in this movie —- it's almost 3-in-1 —- I suggest that while improvements may be made there is little point in trying to squish the plot summary much further. I have removed the "long plot" template. Captainllama ( talk) 23:45, 13 October 2018 (UTC)
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I've completely reworked the article on Katie Holmes and have posted it on WP:PR in the hopes of advancing it to WP:FAC. I would be grateful for your comments at Wikipedia:Peer review/Katie Holmes/archive1. PedanticallySpeaking 19:02, 9 February 2006 (UTC)
I think the plot summary needs a little work, the whole dinner with police officer thing, and the Las Vegas story is left out. If someone wants I can do a little work on that mo'fo.
- please do, this summary is utterly incomplete
- Yeah, I don't remember the film enough to help, but there was a huge plot section in Vegas involving the Simon and the character played by Taye Diggs. Then there was the Amway-ish thing with the cop and his wife. Finally, Ronna wakes up in the ditch at the end, doesn't she? I vaguely remember her going back to work and the supermarket, and her and Claire retrieving Mannie from where they left him. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 24.220.150.201 ( talk) 06:10, 5 December 2006 (UTC).
There is contradictory information in this article regarding the budget for the film. Was it $6.5 million or $20 million? Can someone find out and correct? Iamvered 18:12, 2 January 2007 (UTC)
It'd be nice to get some info about the special Edition of this movie - NeF ( talk) 10:12, 30 March 2010 (UTC)
A tag complained of the plot being too long or with too many details, so I trimmed it up some. If you're feeling more ruthless than I was, go 'head and snip more... I'm sure there are many spots where it'll help. — HarringtonSmith ( talk) 09:50, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
WP:FILMPLOT advises plot summary should be 400 to 700 words unless…
- unconventional structure
- non-linear storylines
- complicated
Go may not be overly "complicated" but is fairly complex and packs in a whole lotta story with its unconventional, non-linear structure. It's clearly 21/2 of the exceptions.
I have trimmed the plot from 913 words to 736 mostly through concision but I cut into a little of the meat by excising the credit card and food poisoning. I also added a little with the car chase which wasn't mentioned but is more integral. Given that so much happens in this movie —- it's almost 3-in-1 —- I suggest that while improvements may be made there is little point in trying to squish the plot summary much further. I have removed the "long plot" template. Captainllama ( talk) 23:45, 13 October 2018 (UTC)