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I've edited out most of the "Story" section. It was poorly written (it read like a 8 year-old child writing a book report on it), contaied myriad spelling and grammar mistakes and in many places was highly innacurate or downright wrong; the "elastic" plot means that what happens in one game may not happen in the next, and it is nearly impossible to chronicle ALL different angles. Crimson Shadow 02:20, 23 April 2006 (UTC)
"Several of the voice actors from the American-dubbed version of Code: Lyoko provide the voices of the characters in this game."
I've deleted this trivia. While true, the VA's did a whole lot more than just C:L. They're prolific voice actors who work on a variety of projects, MOST OF WHICH are other videogames. The entry seemed trite. ~ 69.180.225.127 21:20, 5 December 2005 (UTC)
"Many gamers felt that the much-hyped "elastic" plot was too static, and that the instances that could change the game were too few. One might partially counter this argument by saying that this was exactly why the storyline was labelled "elastic" instead of "dynamic," but unfortunately, by that definition, numerous other adventure games might also be considered as having a quasi-"elastic" plot."
Why is this unfortunate? It's just marketing.-- Roofus 01:25, 26 December 2005 (UTC)
Changed to "However" because it is neutral. A counter-argument can't have good or bad fortune without a bit of anthropomorphising. E.g; "Fortunately, for the toaster" makes no sense. You could say "fortunately, for those that would like to put this argument across" - but "However" keeps things neutral and is short and simple. 62.31.159.236 16:30, 26 June 2006 (UTC)
Sorry about that! When I did that I was new to the Wikipedia concept and hadn't figured out how to sign it yet. I've done it now post factum so that it's clear. The whole entry strikes me as a bit Weasle-wordy, though. What the original author seems to mean is that s/he and perhaps some of his/her friends felt that the plot was too static. On the other hand - it could be valid criticism. Just wish we had the statistics -- 62.31.159.236 16:30, 26 June 2006 (UTC)
The criticism section is just a whole load of unsourced POV rubbish. I'm not denying that the criticisms are not valid, some of them are, I have read quite a few reviews of the game. But the whole section on Criticism is just stupid:
I'm not sure if I have time to properly source and write a section on this, but I hope others looking to edit this article in the future will take these concerns into account. - Hahnchen 14:38, 13 January 2006 (UTC)
Added "Unsourced" and "Weasel" templates to help put the situation in perspective. -- Soniczip 19:35, 26 November 2006 (UTC)
I have removed this section (see below). -- Auger Martel 08:45, 11 August 2007 (UTC)
Was this actually released in America yet? Besides the ESRB listing (under AO-rated games) I haven't been able to find any other information about this. -- SevereTireDamage 17:52, 24 May 2006 (UTC)
This game seems to have enough trivia/cultural references to warrant their own section (e.g. the diner radio directly quoting - possibly sampling - Eric Fensler's 11th GI Joe PSA, and everybody's cupboards being full of Duck Soup). I've only noticed a handful so far in my current playthrough, but I remember noticing many more the first time through.
Any objections to me creating such a section?-- Gwilym 00:22, 17 July 2006 (UTC)
Hey,
Does anyone know all the languages Fahrenheit has been released in. David Cage always says that it has been released in "seven languages" (audio, subtitle, and menu-wise), while I only see references to English, French, German, Spanish and Italian editions. That makes five.
Also, on my copy of Fahrenheit, I only see four languages, English, French, German, Spanish, but not Italian. So what edition includes Italian, and what edition includes those mysterious other languages?
And lastly, does anyone know, if the Fahrenheit: Indigo Prophecy Director's Cut game is only available in English, or does it include other languages. I only seem to know, that it's only available in North America.
Thanks,
-- Szajd 13:13, 20 August 2006 (UTC)
The start of the control section says "In the console version ...", but doesn't mention the PC version. Anyone feel like putting in those details, because I don't know them. Champs -- 218.215.128.251 09:21, 26 October 2006 (UTC)
Can somebody please put information about the VAs to this game? Angie Y. 14:07, 19 November 2006 (UTC)
Should chroma info be placed on the article, or would that be too much of a spoiler? Same question regarding the Matrix-like scenes (e.g. bullet-dodging, aerial fighting). Chronolegion 15:22, 19 December 2006 (UTC)
Someone put that the Oracle holding a gun to a person's head is out-of-character for him, as he is very powerful. However, there is another plausible explanation. Yes, he is powerful, but perception matters as well. If someone threatened you by holding a finger to your head, would you be afraid? Chronolegion 13:14, 11 January 2007 (UTC)
The official name of the game is Farenheit (which is the article name), and as the article says, the northamerican version changed the name to Indigo Prophecy. But the original and official name still is Farenheit, so I don't see the reason to reword the article with "Indigo Prophecy" as the main name. Sega381 00:26, 21 March 2007 (UTC)
everytime i try to install fahrenhiet on vista it lets me choose the install path and when it begins to install a message interupts saying fahrenheit could not be installed or something and says the system was not modified if you google it there are many others claiming the same message —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 88.109.103.204 ( talk) 17:45, 21 April 2007 (UTC).
I don't see the reason to write about this problem in an ENCYCLOPEDIA, you know, I can complain that it doesn't run on ultra quality on a 386 with Windows NT standing in my grandmother's office. Would that be of any interest to anybody? 84.47.156.86 04:48, 30 June 2007 (UTC) KoZaK
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is there any relation to this? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Indigo_child 76.217.120.247 21:35, 5 July 2007 (UTC)
I have removed the criticism section as the promised sources to back up the claims have not emerged. This section has been tagged since November 2006 so there had been plenty of time for those wishing a criticism section to produce adequate sources backing up these claims.-- Auger Martel 08:45, 11 August 2007 (UTC)
The article says about Tyler Miles: "He is voiced by Your Mom". I'm not sure if this is vandalism or Your Mom is actually somebody's nickname, as ridiculous as it sounds. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 90.150.125.78 ( talk) 06:09:55, August 19, 2007 (UTC)
There is definitely some kind of connection to this game and the film "Emmett's Mark" written/directed by Keith Snyder. I don't know if that is the same Keith Snyder that wrote "Night Men" recently.
If you watch the film, you will see THE SAME diner that is presented in "Farenheight" and a very similar music score. The characters are also very much alike in their development and "Emmett's Mark" AKA "Killing Emmett Young" focuses on many of the same psychological themes as "Farenheight." I suspect that Keith Snyder may have sold some of the intellectual property rights to his film, but there is no evidence that I've found to confirm this. Can anyone throw me a bone here? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 62.68.84.67 ( talk) 01:36, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
What? I thought it was Doc's Diner... unless that was changed in the NA and EU versions too. Farslayer ( talk) 08:04, 21 July 2008 (UTC)
Some have criticized the game for its use of racial stereotypes.
I removed this comment from the introduction. The source was a few lines in an internet review of the game, so it doesn't seem to be a big issue. And placing it in the introduction and not mention it later is deceiving. It makes it look like something several people have attacked the game for. J-C V ( talk) 20:04, 12 March 2009 (UTC)
USmode=0 no longer works on the steam version, not sure about the retail —Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.213.48.43 ( talk) 09:09, 26 December 2009 (UTC)
The article currently assumes Agatha is what she appears, until she dies midway through the game and is subsequently impersonated by the Purple Clan. However, it seems more likely that she was a creation of the Purple Clan all along. It is strongly implied throughout the game that the crows have some significance, and they are clearly tied to Agatha, even at the point when it is revealed she is being impersonated by the Purple Clan. Thus it seems the crows are creations of the Purple Clan. Agatha was clearly tied to the crows from the start, so it would seem that Agatha was tied to the Purple Clan from the start.
It is probably all just speculation either way though... —Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.94.213.15 ( talk) 07:13, 2 January 2010 (UTC)
Why is there no article about the sequel, and not even a mention here? - NeF ( talk) 15:15, 22 February 2010 (UTC)
There is a sequel? 71.190.225.116 ( talk) 20:26, 8 April 2010 (UTC)
This game was highly criticized by common adventure gamers, and the article needs a section about this!!! For starters, you have have a look at this link: http://www.peliplaneetta.net/arvostelut/575/ (English summary) 95.245.5.98 ( talk) 09:53, 26 April 2010 (UTC)
This game is probably one of the best examples of a QTE game to date, yet it isn't mentioned once in the article :( Stalkaz ( talk) 14:55, 23 October 2012 (UTC)
Please do not delete dead links, mark them as dead in the first instace and give editors a chance to find alternate sources or archived versions. Flat Out let's discuss it 00:26, 2 February 2015 (UTC)
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I've edited out most of the "Story" section. It was poorly written (it read like a 8 year-old child writing a book report on it), contaied myriad spelling and grammar mistakes and in many places was highly innacurate or downright wrong; the "elastic" plot means that what happens in one game may not happen in the next, and it is nearly impossible to chronicle ALL different angles. Crimson Shadow 02:20, 23 April 2006 (UTC)
"Several of the voice actors from the American-dubbed version of Code: Lyoko provide the voices of the characters in this game."
I've deleted this trivia. While true, the VA's did a whole lot more than just C:L. They're prolific voice actors who work on a variety of projects, MOST OF WHICH are other videogames. The entry seemed trite. ~ 69.180.225.127 21:20, 5 December 2005 (UTC)
"Many gamers felt that the much-hyped "elastic" plot was too static, and that the instances that could change the game were too few. One might partially counter this argument by saying that this was exactly why the storyline was labelled "elastic" instead of "dynamic," but unfortunately, by that definition, numerous other adventure games might also be considered as having a quasi-"elastic" plot."
Why is this unfortunate? It's just marketing.-- Roofus 01:25, 26 December 2005 (UTC)
Changed to "However" because it is neutral. A counter-argument can't have good or bad fortune without a bit of anthropomorphising. E.g; "Fortunately, for the toaster" makes no sense. You could say "fortunately, for those that would like to put this argument across" - but "However" keeps things neutral and is short and simple. 62.31.159.236 16:30, 26 June 2006 (UTC)
Sorry about that! When I did that I was new to the Wikipedia concept and hadn't figured out how to sign it yet. I've done it now post factum so that it's clear. The whole entry strikes me as a bit Weasle-wordy, though. What the original author seems to mean is that s/he and perhaps some of his/her friends felt that the plot was too static. On the other hand - it could be valid criticism. Just wish we had the statistics -- 62.31.159.236 16:30, 26 June 2006 (UTC)
The criticism section is just a whole load of unsourced POV rubbish. I'm not denying that the criticisms are not valid, some of them are, I have read quite a few reviews of the game. But the whole section on Criticism is just stupid:
I'm not sure if I have time to properly source and write a section on this, but I hope others looking to edit this article in the future will take these concerns into account. - Hahnchen 14:38, 13 January 2006 (UTC)
Added "Unsourced" and "Weasel" templates to help put the situation in perspective. -- Soniczip 19:35, 26 November 2006 (UTC)
I have removed this section (see below). -- Auger Martel 08:45, 11 August 2007 (UTC)
Was this actually released in America yet? Besides the ESRB listing (under AO-rated games) I haven't been able to find any other information about this. -- SevereTireDamage 17:52, 24 May 2006 (UTC)
This game seems to have enough trivia/cultural references to warrant their own section (e.g. the diner radio directly quoting - possibly sampling - Eric Fensler's 11th GI Joe PSA, and everybody's cupboards being full of Duck Soup). I've only noticed a handful so far in my current playthrough, but I remember noticing many more the first time through.
Any objections to me creating such a section?-- Gwilym 00:22, 17 July 2006 (UTC)
Hey,
Does anyone know all the languages Fahrenheit has been released in. David Cage always says that it has been released in "seven languages" (audio, subtitle, and menu-wise), while I only see references to English, French, German, Spanish and Italian editions. That makes five.
Also, on my copy of Fahrenheit, I only see four languages, English, French, German, Spanish, but not Italian. So what edition includes Italian, and what edition includes those mysterious other languages?
And lastly, does anyone know, if the Fahrenheit: Indigo Prophecy Director's Cut game is only available in English, or does it include other languages. I only seem to know, that it's only available in North America.
Thanks,
-- Szajd 13:13, 20 August 2006 (UTC)
The start of the control section says "In the console version ...", but doesn't mention the PC version. Anyone feel like putting in those details, because I don't know them. Champs -- 218.215.128.251 09:21, 26 October 2006 (UTC)
Can somebody please put information about the VAs to this game? Angie Y. 14:07, 19 November 2006 (UTC)
Should chroma info be placed on the article, or would that be too much of a spoiler? Same question regarding the Matrix-like scenes (e.g. bullet-dodging, aerial fighting). Chronolegion 15:22, 19 December 2006 (UTC)
Someone put that the Oracle holding a gun to a person's head is out-of-character for him, as he is very powerful. However, there is another plausible explanation. Yes, he is powerful, but perception matters as well. If someone threatened you by holding a finger to your head, would you be afraid? Chronolegion 13:14, 11 January 2007 (UTC)
The official name of the game is Farenheit (which is the article name), and as the article says, the northamerican version changed the name to Indigo Prophecy. But the original and official name still is Farenheit, so I don't see the reason to reword the article with "Indigo Prophecy" as the main name. Sega381 00:26, 21 March 2007 (UTC)
everytime i try to install fahrenhiet on vista it lets me choose the install path and when it begins to install a message interupts saying fahrenheit could not be installed or something and says the system was not modified if you google it there are many others claiming the same message —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 88.109.103.204 ( talk) 17:45, 21 April 2007 (UTC).
I don't see the reason to write about this problem in an ENCYCLOPEDIA, you know, I can complain that it doesn't run on ultra quality on a 386 with Windows NT standing in my grandmother's office. Would that be of any interest to anybody? 84.47.156.86 04:48, 30 June 2007 (UTC) KoZaK
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is there any relation to this? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Indigo_child 76.217.120.247 21:35, 5 July 2007 (UTC)
I have removed the criticism section as the promised sources to back up the claims have not emerged. This section has been tagged since November 2006 so there had been plenty of time for those wishing a criticism section to produce adequate sources backing up these claims.-- Auger Martel 08:45, 11 August 2007 (UTC)
The article says about Tyler Miles: "He is voiced by Your Mom". I'm not sure if this is vandalism or Your Mom is actually somebody's nickname, as ridiculous as it sounds. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 90.150.125.78 ( talk) 06:09:55, August 19, 2007 (UTC)
There is definitely some kind of connection to this game and the film "Emmett's Mark" written/directed by Keith Snyder. I don't know if that is the same Keith Snyder that wrote "Night Men" recently.
If you watch the film, you will see THE SAME diner that is presented in "Farenheight" and a very similar music score. The characters are also very much alike in their development and "Emmett's Mark" AKA "Killing Emmett Young" focuses on many of the same psychological themes as "Farenheight." I suspect that Keith Snyder may have sold some of the intellectual property rights to his film, but there is no evidence that I've found to confirm this. Can anyone throw me a bone here? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 62.68.84.67 ( talk) 01:36, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
What? I thought it was Doc's Diner... unless that was changed in the NA and EU versions too. Farslayer ( talk) 08:04, 21 July 2008 (UTC)
Some have criticized the game for its use of racial stereotypes.
I removed this comment from the introduction. The source was a few lines in an internet review of the game, so it doesn't seem to be a big issue. And placing it in the introduction and not mention it later is deceiving. It makes it look like something several people have attacked the game for. J-C V ( talk) 20:04, 12 March 2009 (UTC)
USmode=0 no longer works on the steam version, not sure about the retail —Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.213.48.43 ( talk) 09:09, 26 December 2009 (UTC)
The article currently assumes Agatha is what she appears, until she dies midway through the game and is subsequently impersonated by the Purple Clan. However, it seems more likely that she was a creation of the Purple Clan all along. It is strongly implied throughout the game that the crows have some significance, and they are clearly tied to Agatha, even at the point when it is revealed she is being impersonated by the Purple Clan. Thus it seems the crows are creations of the Purple Clan. Agatha was clearly tied to the crows from the start, so it would seem that Agatha was tied to the Purple Clan from the start.
It is probably all just speculation either way though... —Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.94.213.15 ( talk) 07:13, 2 January 2010 (UTC)
Why is there no article about the sequel, and not even a mention here? - NeF ( talk) 15:15, 22 February 2010 (UTC)
There is a sequel? 71.190.225.116 ( talk) 20:26, 8 April 2010 (UTC)
This game was highly criticized by common adventure gamers, and the article needs a section about this!!! For starters, you have have a look at this link: http://www.peliplaneetta.net/arvostelut/575/ (English summary) 95.245.5.98 ( talk) 09:53, 26 April 2010 (UTC)
This game is probably one of the best examples of a QTE game to date, yet it isn't mentioned once in the article :( Stalkaz ( talk) 14:55, 23 October 2012 (UTC)
Please do not delete dead links, mark them as dead in the first instace and give editors a chance to find alternate sources or archived versions. Flat Out let's discuss it 00:26, 2 February 2015 (UTC)
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@ Cognissonance: Alrighty, I think I gave give you a few things.
That's some stuff for you to be going on with. Not a huge amount, mostly fiddly stuff. Basically the article's sound. Once you've addressed or explained the above, I'll give the article another look through. -- ProtoDrake ( talk) 21:38, 30 May 2020 (UTC)