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This article is extremely poorly written. For example - in the plot it states that he professes his love for Linda, after a bee sting. First of all, he was stung by the bee the night before. Secondly, why would you even phrase it that way? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.192.213.238 ( talk) 19:28, 2 May 2013 (UTC)
This film has nothing to do with race, but someone tries to insinuate that it does.
Hello, Wikipedia. I do not know enough about the movie 'Election' to edit its page, but its literacy is not up-to-standard for the site (grammatically) so I am hoping the good person who wrote and shared such a detailed review of the film edits their page further. Also, I don't think words like 'sluttiness' are appropriate for an encyclopedia. I am sorry to complain; anyone who contributes to this site is excellent, in my opinion :)
I've tidied this up some, but the discussion of the themes feels like someone's term paper, rather than an encyclopedia article. I'm not at all clear that it's appropriate to include.
Boojum
20:01, 18 August 2005 (UTC)
Yea, the plot summary here is poorly written and just plain incorrect in several places. One of these days when I have time, I will rewrite. Eric Cable | Talk 20:14, 3 June 2013 (UTC)
There is absolutely no indication that Tracy is using her sexuality to curry favor with the congressman at the end of the movie. Indeed, this politician is played by a real-life congressman (at the moment, his name escapes me). The notion that a sitting United States Congressman would allow himself to portrayed as a philanderer in any way in any media is absurd to the point that it renders absudity obsolete. I don't know where the author gets this, aside from his/her own assumption. This point needs to be deleted. Swatson1978 00:02, 24 January 2006 (UTC)
Tammy's campaign speech to the student body is one of the most memorable scenes ever filmed.-- FrickFrack 21:27, 1 August 2006 (UTC)
I think this article needs a serious cleanup. There's currently 11 paragraphs detailing the plot (in a non-encylcopedic tone, in my opinion). The article also has 27 Trivia points. I'm not opposed to lengthy wikipedia articles; but it seems to me this article could be written in more concise terms with less emphasis on plot spoilers and pop culture trivia. 66.17.118.195 17:08, 2 March 2007 (UTC)
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BetacommandBot ( talk) 20:52, 13 February 2008 (UTC)
I've added a note on the film's narrative style, which I think is a distinctive feature of this particular film and should get a mention in an encyclopedic article. It's an obvious point that stands as it is, I think, but I'll go looking for some published criticism about this aspect of the film to see if I can link out to a reference. Adam C Fletcher ( talk) 12:30, 22 May 2009 (UTC) Done :) Adam C Fletcher ( talk) 13:18, 22 May 2009 (UTC)
The claim that the novel "Election" was inspired by the incident in Eau Claire, Wisconsin where a pregnant girl was denied the homecoming queen title sounds dubious. I haven't found any source that makes that claim independent from Wikipedia. ~~Moebius —Preceding unsigned comment added by 130.166.31.21 ( talk) 19:18, 16 July 2009 (UTC)
I've also added in information on the UK certification of the film. The line 'some moderate sex and references' sounds terribly clunky but is word for word the advice on the BBFC site. Adam C Fletcher ( talk) 08:21, 23 May 2009 (UTC)
The article does not accurately represent how crappy this movie is. Particularly the creepiness of Mathew Broderick. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 67.186.116.78 ( talk) 04:33, 4 January 2012 (UTC)
I would have phrased it better, but some mention of critical reception would be nice. The lack of it makes me think "universally panned". — Preceding unsigned comment added by 83.70.170.48 ( talk) 11:56, 6 March 2012 (UTC)
The plot mentions that the teacher who seduced Tracey was not charged with statutory rape. The age of consent in Nebraska is 17. Tracey is depicted as being at the end of her junior year (running for student body president for the following school year). Most poeple are 17 by the end of their junior year. It is possible, therefore, that there could not be a charge of statutory rape if Tracey was of age. Of course still wrong for a married teacher to seduce a student. Eric Cable | Talk 20:10, 3 June 2013 (UTC)
okay, this has become subject to some edit warring, without any discussion at all, and we have one user sniping at another in the main article itself. I've rolled back [1] this because Wordpress is 100% not a WP:RS and the xojane article is basically a blog/lifestyle article, not a news one. I agree with TheOldJacobite ( talk · contribs) that is it is not really germane to the article and is more suited to the associated actor's pages. Calitrav ( talk · contribs), please make your case here as to why you think it should belong, keeping in mind WP:NPA WP:BLP WP:RS. Thanks. hbdragon88 ( talk) 10:00, 25 December 2017 (UTC)
I never responded to your question "The Old Jacobite" because I thought that I'd made it clear I believed an accusation (allegation) of sexual assault from a former industry professional against her ex-boss Alexander Payne was worth mentioning in light of the Harvey Weinstein allegations. As you will no doubt recall Harvey was merely "alleged" to have committed crimes for a considerable period of time before he was actually prosecuted and convicted for any of them.
It seemed clear that some other Wikipedia Editor took it upon themselves to decide which allegations can or cannot be made here based on...I'm not sure what. Failure for well-known newspapers to pick up on the story?
In any event I just recalled that in 2020 Rose McGowan claimed Alexander Payne had sex with her when she was only 15. There are many major newspapers that picked up that accusation / allegation of statutory rape. I googled that and sure enough Rose McGowan had indeed heard of Payne's previous accuser whose story I linked to in the xo jane blog. I see The Sun (UK) picked up the story about the previous accuser in August of 2020 -- see link:
https://www.thesun.co.uk/news/12458103/former-assistant-claims-alexander-payne-belittled-her/
So now that's TWO women who've accused Payne of sexual harassment / permitting sexual assault, or committing statutory rape. Apparently that was enough for Rose MacGowan's accusation to get assigned to Payne's personal wikipedia page.
I live and work in Hollywood but I have never had any professional ties to Payne or MacGowan or his previous accuser. However, it seemed to me there was the "ring of truth" to the previous allegation and I felt it was worth mentioning. With a stronger accusation and much more press backing up the initial accuser, I should think the above link from The Sun should probably be put on Payne's wiki page.
"Tracy announces to Jim, who is in charge of organizing the school's student government, that she is running for student body president, telling him they "will be spending a lot of time together." In Jim's mind, this is a sign of unbridled ambition and sexual manipulation, and finds it repugnant. With Tracy appearing to have no opposition, Jim decides to humiliate Tracy by encouraging Paul Metzler to enter the race."
Emphasis is mine. This material is unsourced (or just speculation). It seems to me Jim isn't trying to humiliate Tracy, just find a candidate who can beat her. The first bit is speculative as well. Renard Migrant ( talk) 13:41, 27 September 2019 (UTC)
The article currently describes Tracy as "an overachieving senior". I assume it would be normal for elections for student government president to take place towards the end of the junior year of high school. There are a few hints in the narration that this is still the junior year. Tracy's relationship with Dave Novotny is described as taking place in Tracy's junior year, "a few months" before the events of the film. Paul Metzler broke his leg "at Shadow Ridge over Christmas break" and his leg is still in a brace. The narration towards the end of the film describes the events of senior year. I'm not very familiar with the American high school system, but shouldn't Tracy be described as "an overachieving junior"? Jean-de-Nivelle ( talk) 17:04, 11 January 2023 (UTC)
The revision as of 00:48, 5 September 2023 changed it to say Novotny was grooming Tracy. That's not how I remembered the movie, so I looked up its script. And the argument seems a little weak. Mr. Novotny did not have intent to "groom" her, nor was there any suggestions that his actions fall under the current wikipedia definition of child grooming, in particular "to lower the child's inhibitions with the objective of sexual abuse".
The whole thing seems like colleagues having an affair and then falling in love, even though he knows it was wrong. Her perception of it is questionable. On the one hand she is smart enough to debunk the thought that she was being taken advantage of, or that she was seeking a father figure. But on the other hand, she admits she felt safe and protected with him. Near the end, she even hopes that he finished the great novel he was supposed to write.
So, I'm going to add a "citation needed" tag to that sentence, because I'm too chicken to remove it completely. Hopefully others come along and weigh in on this. Fshafique ( talk) 02:04, 14 January 2024 (UTC)
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This article is extremely poorly written. For example - in the plot it states that he professes his love for Linda, after a bee sting. First of all, he was stung by the bee the night before. Secondly, why would you even phrase it that way? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.192.213.238 ( talk) 19:28, 2 May 2013 (UTC)
This film has nothing to do with race, but someone tries to insinuate that it does.
Hello, Wikipedia. I do not know enough about the movie 'Election' to edit its page, but its literacy is not up-to-standard for the site (grammatically) so I am hoping the good person who wrote and shared such a detailed review of the film edits their page further. Also, I don't think words like 'sluttiness' are appropriate for an encyclopedia. I am sorry to complain; anyone who contributes to this site is excellent, in my opinion :)
I've tidied this up some, but the discussion of the themes feels like someone's term paper, rather than an encyclopedia article. I'm not at all clear that it's appropriate to include.
Boojum
20:01, 18 August 2005 (UTC)
Yea, the plot summary here is poorly written and just plain incorrect in several places. One of these days when I have time, I will rewrite. Eric Cable | Talk 20:14, 3 June 2013 (UTC)
There is absolutely no indication that Tracy is using her sexuality to curry favor with the congressman at the end of the movie. Indeed, this politician is played by a real-life congressman (at the moment, his name escapes me). The notion that a sitting United States Congressman would allow himself to portrayed as a philanderer in any way in any media is absurd to the point that it renders absudity obsolete. I don't know where the author gets this, aside from his/her own assumption. This point needs to be deleted. Swatson1978 00:02, 24 January 2006 (UTC)
Tammy's campaign speech to the student body is one of the most memorable scenes ever filmed.-- FrickFrack 21:27, 1 August 2006 (UTC)
I think this article needs a serious cleanup. There's currently 11 paragraphs detailing the plot (in a non-encylcopedic tone, in my opinion). The article also has 27 Trivia points. I'm not opposed to lengthy wikipedia articles; but it seems to me this article could be written in more concise terms with less emphasis on plot spoilers and pop culture trivia. 66.17.118.195 17:08, 2 March 2007 (UTC)
Image:Election poster.jpg is being used on this article. I notice the image page specifies that the image is being used under fair use but there is no explanation or rationale as to why its use in this Wikipedia article constitutes fair use. In addition to the boilerplate fair use template, you must also write out on the image description page a specific explanation or rationale for why using this image in each article is consistent with fair use.
Please go to the image description page and edit it to include a fair use rationale. Using one of the templates at Wikipedia:Fair use rationale guideline is an easy way to insure that your image is in compliance with Wikipedia policy, but remember that you must complete the template. Do not simply insert a blank template on an image page.
If there is other fair use media, consider checking that you have specified the fair use rationale on the other images used on this page. Note that any fair use images lacking such an explanation can be deleted one week after being tagged, as described on criteria for speedy deletion. If you have any questions please ask them at the Media copyright questions page. Thank you.
BetacommandBot ( talk) 20:52, 13 February 2008 (UTC)
I've added a note on the film's narrative style, which I think is a distinctive feature of this particular film and should get a mention in an encyclopedic article. It's an obvious point that stands as it is, I think, but I'll go looking for some published criticism about this aspect of the film to see if I can link out to a reference. Adam C Fletcher ( talk) 12:30, 22 May 2009 (UTC) Done :) Adam C Fletcher ( talk) 13:18, 22 May 2009 (UTC)
The claim that the novel "Election" was inspired by the incident in Eau Claire, Wisconsin where a pregnant girl was denied the homecoming queen title sounds dubious. I haven't found any source that makes that claim independent from Wikipedia. ~~Moebius —Preceding unsigned comment added by 130.166.31.21 ( talk) 19:18, 16 July 2009 (UTC)
I've also added in information on the UK certification of the film. The line 'some moderate sex and references' sounds terribly clunky but is word for word the advice on the BBFC site. Adam C Fletcher ( talk) 08:21, 23 May 2009 (UTC)
The article does not accurately represent how crappy this movie is. Particularly the creepiness of Mathew Broderick. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 67.186.116.78 ( talk) 04:33, 4 January 2012 (UTC)
I would have phrased it better, but some mention of critical reception would be nice. The lack of it makes me think "universally panned". — Preceding unsigned comment added by 83.70.170.48 ( talk) 11:56, 6 March 2012 (UTC)
The plot mentions that the teacher who seduced Tracey was not charged with statutory rape. The age of consent in Nebraska is 17. Tracey is depicted as being at the end of her junior year (running for student body president for the following school year). Most poeple are 17 by the end of their junior year. It is possible, therefore, that there could not be a charge of statutory rape if Tracey was of age. Of course still wrong for a married teacher to seduce a student. Eric Cable | Talk 20:10, 3 June 2013 (UTC)
okay, this has become subject to some edit warring, without any discussion at all, and we have one user sniping at another in the main article itself. I've rolled back [1] this because Wordpress is 100% not a WP:RS and the xojane article is basically a blog/lifestyle article, not a news one. I agree with TheOldJacobite ( talk · contribs) that is it is not really germane to the article and is more suited to the associated actor's pages. Calitrav ( talk · contribs), please make your case here as to why you think it should belong, keeping in mind WP:NPA WP:BLP WP:RS. Thanks. hbdragon88 ( talk) 10:00, 25 December 2017 (UTC)
I never responded to your question "The Old Jacobite" because I thought that I'd made it clear I believed an accusation (allegation) of sexual assault from a former industry professional against her ex-boss Alexander Payne was worth mentioning in light of the Harvey Weinstein allegations. As you will no doubt recall Harvey was merely "alleged" to have committed crimes for a considerable period of time before he was actually prosecuted and convicted for any of them.
It seemed clear that some other Wikipedia Editor took it upon themselves to decide which allegations can or cannot be made here based on...I'm not sure what. Failure for well-known newspapers to pick up on the story?
In any event I just recalled that in 2020 Rose McGowan claimed Alexander Payne had sex with her when she was only 15. There are many major newspapers that picked up that accusation / allegation of statutory rape. I googled that and sure enough Rose McGowan had indeed heard of Payne's previous accuser whose story I linked to in the xo jane blog. I see The Sun (UK) picked up the story about the previous accuser in August of 2020 -- see link:
https://www.thesun.co.uk/news/12458103/former-assistant-claims-alexander-payne-belittled-her/
So now that's TWO women who've accused Payne of sexual harassment / permitting sexual assault, or committing statutory rape. Apparently that was enough for Rose MacGowan's accusation to get assigned to Payne's personal wikipedia page.
I live and work in Hollywood but I have never had any professional ties to Payne or MacGowan or his previous accuser. However, it seemed to me there was the "ring of truth" to the previous allegation and I felt it was worth mentioning. With a stronger accusation and much more press backing up the initial accuser, I should think the above link from The Sun should probably be put on Payne's wiki page.
"Tracy announces to Jim, who is in charge of organizing the school's student government, that she is running for student body president, telling him they "will be spending a lot of time together." In Jim's mind, this is a sign of unbridled ambition and sexual manipulation, and finds it repugnant. With Tracy appearing to have no opposition, Jim decides to humiliate Tracy by encouraging Paul Metzler to enter the race."
Emphasis is mine. This material is unsourced (or just speculation). It seems to me Jim isn't trying to humiliate Tracy, just find a candidate who can beat her. The first bit is speculative as well. Renard Migrant ( talk) 13:41, 27 September 2019 (UTC)
The article currently describes Tracy as "an overachieving senior". I assume it would be normal for elections for student government president to take place towards the end of the junior year of high school. There are a few hints in the narration that this is still the junior year. Tracy's relationship with Dave Novotny is described as taking place in Tracy's junior year, "a few months" before the events of the film. Paul Metzler broke his leg "at Shadow Ridge over Christmas break" and his leg is still in a brace. The narration towards the end of the film describes the events of senior year. I'm not very familiar with the American high school system, but shouldn't Tracy be described as "an overachieving junior"? Jean-de-Nivelle ( talk) 17:04, 11 January 2023 (UTC)
The revision as of 00:48, 5 September 2023 changed it to say Novotny was grooming Tracy. That's not how I remembered the movie, so I looked up its script. And the argument seems a little weak. Mr. Novotny did not have intent to "groom" her, nor was there any suggestions that his actions fall under the current wikipedia definition of child grooming, in particular "to lower the child's inhibitions with the objective of sexual abuse".
The whole thing seems like colleagues having an affair and then falling in love, even though he knows it was wrong. Her perception of it is questionable. On the one hand she is smart enough to debunk the thought that she was being taken advantage of, or that she was seeking a father figure. But on the other hand, she admits she felt safe and protected with him. Near the end, she even hopes that he finished the great novel he was supposed to write.
So, I'm going to add a "citation needed" tag to that sentence, because I'm too chicken to remove it completely. Hopefully others come along and weigh in on this. Fshafique ( talk) 02:04, 14 January 2024 (UTC)