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Other than that, the rest is looking pretty good. :)
1. The article does a great job using studies to show the arguments and back them up. 2. I would suggest having headings of the titles Social, Mental, Physical (Maybe these are not them, but you had three that you said in class). This will clarify the article I feel. 3. It is obvious that you have a good outline, I think having more connections between what you talk about would contribute to the contribution. 4. I like the inclusion of counter arguments. I am now considering including something in my paper such as these. Farley.ty ( talk) 23:25, 19 October 2016 (UTC)
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Recommendations / Conclusions:-- Plaslie ( talk) 16:48, 25 November 2017 (UTC)
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Other than that, the rest is looking pretty good. :)
1. The article does a great job using studies to show the arguments and back them up. 2. I would suggest having headings of the titles Social, Mental, Physical (Maybe these are not them, but you had three that you said in class). This will clarify the article I feel. 3. It is obvious that you have a good outline, I think having more connections between what you talk about would contribute to the contribution. 4. I like the inclusion of counter arguments. I am now considering including something in my paper such as these. Farley.ty ( talk) 23:25, 19 October 2016 (UTC)
Background:
Hazards:
Policies:
Controls:
Recommendations / Conclusions:-- Plaslie ( talk) 16:48, 25 November 2017 (UTC)