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There is no need for a separate article on this. An article on Hurricane Sandy is more than enough. 203.184.41.226 ( talk) 05:28, 31 October 2012 (UTC)
Kennvido ( talk) 06:36, 31 October 2012 (UTC)
Can someone supply a picture of the grounded tanker on Staten Island? Or the flooded subway stations? -- 65.92.181.190 ( talk) 10:12, 31 October 2012 (UTC)
I will be in Manhattan today, stay tuned.-- Woogie10w ( talk) 13:01, 31 October 2012 (UTC)
A lot of the article is in the past participle or present tense. Everything needs to be in the simple past tense.
See subject. The term, here and in the main article, is tossed around as if everyone knows what and where it is. I nor heard of it before, and I found out I live in it.
I'm actually quite interest in it, if it's a post-9/11 thing.
__Also__, someone who knows should mention that emergency text messages--full pop-up graphic screens, actually--appeared automatically periodically on cell phones. Bannered text with "Seek shelter immediately," Do not drive," etc. came on with an alarm sound and vibration. Some people with cells didn't get them, however.
As I say, I live in lower east side across the street from the Con Ed plant that blew up.
The message said, I think, "in this area," so perhaps it was cued to location.
Must be post 9/11; cop I spoke to said he had only seen it used in a police-wide (I think) test.
Note that on 9/11 the famous Emergency Broadcast System was not used.
I think this is an extraordinarily interesting and novel event in NYC. Shlishke ( talk) 16:17, 1 November 2012 (UTC)
In the article for hurricane Sandy, under the "Impact" - "New York" section, it states the following: One of the units at Indian Point nuclear power plant (Unit #3) was shut down around 10:45 p.m. October 29, because of external electrical grid issues according to plant operator Entergy. It links to this page as the main article, so I came here to read more about this. But this article has nothing about the power plant. 80.202.75.220 ( talk) 05:59, 2 November 2012 (UTC) (Nick)
The article seems to primarily be focused on Manhattan with little to no mention of the absolute devastation in the outer boroughs. Specifically Sheepshead Bay, Gerritsen Beach, Brighton Beach, Coney Island & Sea Gate, The Rockaways & Breezy Point. There is tons of documentation out there of the destruction. The majority of it is ignored by the big news media and has been covered by smaller blogs and tumblr's and twitterers. Perhaps someone would like to scour the net for these accounts and add them. 69.122.44.171 ( talk) 23:15, 4 November 2012 (UTC)
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Cuomo used the funds that were intended for the eletrical bills of residents hit by the storm to advertise for himself. This was very controversial and I will be making a section unless anyone objects. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Youngdrake ( talk • contribs) 10:56, 23 June 2014 (UTC)
I added the section yet I cannot seem to get the refrence templates to work. This is just copied from Cuomo's page and uses the same refrences if anyone could do that it would be greatly appreciated.-- Youngdrake ( talk) 11:29, 23 June 2014 (UTC)
This is one of the most disorganized and semi-incoherent articles that I've read on Wikipedia. It seems to move from one immaterial fact to another with little purpose. I sought to find out what effects the storm had on utility services delivery in Manhattan, in hopes of being prepared for future storms. Yet I could find nothing about whether cooking gas was disrupted or where. Neither could I find what areas of Manhattan had been deprived of electricity. 50.108.243.154 ( talk) 16:23, 2 September 2016 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 50.108.243.154 ( talk) 16:21, 2 September 2016 (UTC)
In intro:
//Citation added for damage costs.
Under Immediate Aftermath:
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Under Venue Closures:
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Under Transportation:
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Under Ground:
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Under Events:
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Under Evacuations and Rescues During Storm:
//Sentence removed due to being information later listed under Fires.
Under Damage:
//Fatalities section lacked content, and was thus removed and information was added to here.
Under Fires:
//Sentence here was uncited and not relevant to fires. Paragraph below editted to include more information from the source in addition to reading more coherently.
Under Political:
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Was this cyclone even a hurricane when it hit the N.J.-NYC area? Only reason it's called super is that it had the effrontery to hit new York. If it had hit Florida, it would be a minor storm. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:346:580:1FD0:9D5F:EC92:B815:EE79 ( talk) 17:35, 23 September 2020 (UTC)
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There is no need for a separate article on this. An article on Hurricane Sandy is more than enough. 203.184.41.226 ( talk) 05:28, 31 October 2012 (UTC)
Kennvido ( talk) 06:36, 31 October 2012 (UTC)
Can someone supply a picture of the grounded tanker on Staten Island? Or the flooded subway stations? -- 65.92.181.190 ( talk) 10:12, 31 October 2012 (UTC)
I will be in Manhattan today, stay tuned.-- Woogie10w ( talk) 13:01, 31 October 2012 (UTC)
A lot of the article is in the past participle or present tense. Everything needs to be in the simple past tense.
See subject. The term, here and in the main article, is tossed around as if everyone knows what and where it is. I nor heard of it before, and I found out I live in it.
I'm actually quite interest in it, if it's a post-9/11 thing.
__Also__, someone who knows should mention that emergency text messages--full pop-up graphic screens, actually--appeared automatically periodically on cell phones. Bannered text with "Seek shelter immediately," Do not drive," etc. came on with an alarm sound and vibration. Some people with cells didn't get them, however.
As I say, I live in lower east side across the street from the Con Ed plant that blew up.
The message said, I think, "in this area," so perhaps it was cued to location.
Must be post 9/11; cop I spoke to said he had only seen it used in a police-wide (I think) test.
Note that on 9/11 the famous Emergency Broadcast System was not used.
I think this is an extraordinarily interesting and novel event in NYC. Shlishke ( talk) 16:17, 1 November 2012 (UTC)
In the article for hurricane Sandy, under the "Impact" - "New York" section, it states the following: One of the units at Indian Point nuclear power plant (Unit #3) was shut down around 10:45 p.m. October 29, because of external electrical grid issues according to plant operator Entergy. It links to this page as the main article, so I came here to read more about this. But this article has nothing about the power plant. 80.202.75.220 ( talk) 05:59, 2 November 2012 (UTC) (Nick)
The article seems to primarily be focused on Manhattan with little to no mention of the absolute devastation in the outer boroughs. Specifically Sheepshead Bay, Gerritsen Beach, Brighton Beach, Coney Island & Sea Gate, The Rockaways & Breezy Point. There is tons of documentation out there of the destruction. The majority of it is ignored by the big news media and has been covered by smaller blogs and tumblr's and twitterers. Perhaps someone would like to scour the net for these accounts and add them. 69.122.44.171 ( talk) 23:15, 4 November 2012 (UTC)
References
[2] - i'd use firefogg, the firefox extension to import it. Victor Grigas ( talk) 07:23, 15 December 2013 (UTC)
Cuomo used the funds that were intended for the eletrical bills of residents hit by the storm to advertise for himself. This was very controversial and I will be making a section unless anyone objects. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Youngdrake ( talk • contribs) 10:56, 23 June 2014 (UTC)
I added the section yet I cannot seem to get the refrence templates to work. This is just copied from Cuomo's page and uses the same refrences if anyone could do that it would be greatly appreciated.-- Youngdrake ( talk) 11:29, 23 June 2014 (UTC)
This is one of the most disorganized and semi-incoherent articles that I've read on Wikipedia. It seems to move from one immaterial fact to another with little purpose. I sought to find out what effects the storm had on utility services delivery in Manhattan, in hopes of being prepared for future storms. Yet I could find nothing about whether cooking gas was disrupted or where. Neither could I find what areas of Manhattan had been deprived of electricity. 50.108.243.154 ( talk) 16:23, 2 September 2016 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 50.108.243.154 ( talk) 16:21, 2 September 2016 (UTC)
In intro:
//Citation added for damage costs.
Under Immediate Aftermath:
//Consolidation of micro paragraphs into more cohesive arrangements, removal of an uncited statement. Relinked a broken citation to a new source that mentions the public health emergency declaration.
//Sentence deleted due to citation leading to a 404 Error and not being able to find a replacement.
Under Venue Closures:
//Sentence waived below stating that a full list of parks closed could be found on the citation at the end of the paragraph.
Under Transportation:
//Everything said here gets explained further down. Removed for redundancy.
Under Ground:
//A picture depicting a flooded subway tunnel entrance was removed due to this section already being very dense with pictures and a similar picture already existing.
//Deleted sentence here as a result of not seeing how it related to overall theme of the paragraph.
Under Events:
//Deleted section about events that progressed as planned. The hurricane did not effect these events, so I see no reason for them to be included in an article about the Effects of Hurricane Sandy. Cancelled and Rescheduled events subsections combined due to lacking enough substance to stand alone.
Under Evacuations and Rescues During Storm:
//Sentence removed due to being information later listed under Fires.
Under Damage:
//Fatalities section lacked content, and was thus removed and information was added to here.
Under Fires:
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