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Reviewer: Carbrera ( talk · contribs) 05:28, 4 January 2017 (UTC)
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Carbrera: I'd like to say the same for this one as Loveppears. Please try to get to it soon.
dannymusiceditor
Speak up! 00:54, 11 February 2017 (UTC)
Done
Done
Done The source of Itunes has them both so probably different, I have no idea. One could be like the branch who has several sub companies, one for music, movies, arts...
Done
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If the nomination hadn't been made back in July 2016 and the review delayed another month and a half, I might be less inclined to recommend putting this on hold to see what could be accomplished in a week's time to address the very many issues raised, but because of that long wait—and the genuine possibility that a new submission might have to wait another half year—I'm going to suggest that it be put on hold for the standard seven days.
However, there is a great deal of work to be done, as Carbrera notes, and to my eye there's even more than has been mentioned above:
Upon its release, the album received positive reviews from music critics. Many commended the composition and her songwriting, and several critics selected the singles as some of her greatest work.I don't see how "Many" can be used here since the body of the article doesn't back it up—I only see three reviews (two of which have been brought into question), which is "a few" or "some", not "many"; you'll need a larger and representative selection of reviews to justify "many". If you are going to use the "some of her greatest work", it needs to be in the context of a number of retrospective reviews covering more than just the first album. The phrase "the composition and her songwriting" reads a bit oddly as well.
this was one of Cybersound's first records to assist outside of North Americadoesn't make sense; it needs to be rewritten.
There may well be other issues; assuming that these can be dealt with, the new and newly revised material addressing the above will need to be vetted. Best of luck. BlueMoonset ( talk) 02:27, 24 February 2017 (UTC)
Upon its release, Delicious Way received favorable reviews from most music critics.This is a very strong claim, yet it is unsourced. Furthermore, we have all of two reviews here, one of which is retrospective and thus not made at the time the album was released. There needs to be work done to find more reviews and sources to bolster the claims here. Right now, this is a very thin section, and does not meet GA standards. The final quote is quite odd, including the nonsensical statement
but her first album has deemed itself as a classic—an album cannot "deem itself" anything at all. The statement should be dropped entirely (along with the rest of the quote) because it makes no sense. (If it is, instead, a bad translation, then a better one is needed if the quote is to be used.) BlueMoonset ( talk) 05:56, 26 February 2017 (UTC)
@ BlueMoonset: There are no other reviews available but those two. MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk) 20:35, 26 February 2017 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Carbrera ( talk · contribs) 05:28, 4 January 2017 (UTC)
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Carbrera: I'd like to say the same for this one as Loveppears. Please try to get to it soon.
dannymusiceditor
Speak up! 00:54, 11 February 2017 (UTC)
Done
Done
Done The source of Itunes has them both so probably different, I have no idea. One could be like the branch who has several sub companies, one for music, movies, arts...
Done
Done
Done
If the nomination hadn't been made back in July 2016 and the review delayed another month and a half, I might be less inclined to recommend putting this on hold to see what could be accomplished in a week's time to address the very many issues raised, but because of that long wait—and the genuine possibility that a new submission might have to wait another half year—I'm going to suggest that it be put on hold for the standard seven days.
However, there is a great deal of work to be done, as Carbrera notes, and to my eye there's even more than has been mentioned above:
Upon its release, the album received positive reviews from music critics. Many commended the composition and her songwriting, and several critics selected the singles as some of her greatest work.I don't see how "Many" can be used here since the body of the article doesn't back it up—I only see three reviews (two of which have been brought into question), which is "a few" or "some", not "many"; you'll need a larger and representative selection of reviews to justify "many". If you are going to use the "some of her greatest work", it needs to be in the context of a number of retrospective reviews covering more than just the first album. The phrase "the composition and her songwriting" reads a bit oddly as well.
this was one of Cybersound's first records to assist outside of North Americadoesn't make sense; it needs to be rewritten.
There may well be other issues; assuming that these can be dealt with, the new and newly revised material addressing the above will need to be vetted. Best of luck. BlueMoonset ( talk) 02:27, 24 February 2017 (UTC)
Upon its release, Delicious Way received favorable reviews from most music critics.This is a very strong claim, yet it is unsourced. Furthermore, we have all of two reviews here, one of which is retrospective and thus not made at the time the album was released. There needs to be work done to find more reviews and sources to bolster the claims here. Right now, this is a very thin section, and does not meet GA standards. The final quote is quite odd, including the nonsensical statement
but her first album has deemed itself as a classic—an album cannot "deem itself" anything at all. The statement should be dropped entirely (along with the rest of the quote) because it makes no sense. (If it is, instead, a bad translation, then a better one is needed if the quote is to be used.) BlueMoonset ( talk) 05:56, 26 February 2017 (UTC)
@ BlueMoonset: There are no other reviews available but those two. MarioSoulTruthFan ( talk) 20:35, 26 February 2017 (UTC)