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This article has a good deal of bias and lacks counter arguments to offset said bias. Additionally, there a some biased words ( weasel words) that disrupt the neutrality of the article. -- Jeremy ( blah blah • I did it!) 20:33, 15 April 2012 (UTC)
It also seems to be more of a criticism of the livestock practices associated with fast food instead of the industry itself. 173.79.233.238 ( talk) 22:35, 12 March 2013 (UTC)
Under the topic "Food Poisoning Risk" The fact that most fast food restaurants cook their foods in beef tallow should be stated. [1] — Preceding unsigned comment added by Twest14 ( talk • contribs) 19:14, 20 September 2013 (UTC)
I stated that the American Heart Association says that we should consume about 16 grams of saturated fats per day. [2] 74.87.193.254 ( talk) 18:59, 4 October 2013 (UTC)
I am going to add a section titled, "Consumer Responsibilty" because this article seems to blame the fast food industries for the consumers problems. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Twest14 ( talk • contribs)
Childeren do not have a cognitive defenses against marketing, so this makes them targeted more by fast food industries. [3] 74.87.193.254 ( talk) 19:38, 4 October 2013 (UTC) Revised my section "Consumer Responsibility" and made it neutral. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 74.87.193.254 ( talk) 19:25, 25 October 2013 (UTC) Going to state that Mcdonalds is going to offer healthier options in the section titled,"Health based criticism". That being said, other fast food chains may follow. [4] — Preceding unsigned comment added by Twest14 ( talk • contribs) 20:22, 22 November 2013 (UTC)
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Fast food worker strikes→ Criticism of fast food
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I am proposing that the four or five sentence article Fast food worker strikes be merged into this one as part of the labor criticisms section. That one is over referenced to multiple small sources with a huge amount of link rot. While the event received a great deal of press coverage when it happened, the 24-hour news cycle has moved on ( WP:Recentism. -- Jeremy ( blah blah • I did it!) 07:48, 5 October 2013 (UTC)
This article has a very strong bias towards the United States; all sources are American, and it even cites "the Department of Agriculture" without qualification, as if there's only one department of agriculture. Perhaps it should be renamed to reflect its topic more closely? QVVERTYVS ( hm?) 13:57, 7 October 2013 (UTC)
I concur. Even though I am from Canada I have trouble understanding many points in this article because it is purely american. For instance what are "Carryout Bag" laws? 138.229.24.37 ( talk) 16:08, 7 September 2019 (UTC)
I agree also. This is a global problem but the article US centered. Gentleman wiki ( talk) 04:11, 11 November 2019 (UTC)
I think this article could be expanded by talking about the possible difficulties of cutting back on or cutting out fast food. I would look at the convenience or availablity of fast food conpared to heat and serve meals or even home cooked meals. Cost is also a possible venue; I usually feel a little cheated when I get fast food, moreso when I look up at the picture perfect sign/screen. Decepticon117 ( talk) 00:55, 16 November 2013 (UTC)
This could be expanded by fast foods relation to weight gain. How do people gain/lose the weight. Your source seems like it wants to blame the industry, while the industry blames the individual. How do non US country relate to this? Decepticon117 ( talk) 00:55, 16 November 2013 (UTC)
I thought I would give a brief break down for the changes I just made. Consider this a more in depth edit summary:
This article is still replete with issues, particularly with giving due weight to various topics, but I'm not really interested at this time in setting out to improve this page further. AioftheStorm ( talk) 05:47, 18 January 2014 (UTC)
I am going to add a section on animal cruelty. This is a criticism that needs to be added, because of the inappropriate conditions in which animals are raised in and are confined to on factory farms. It is from these farms that fast food companies purchase there meat from. Philip121 ( talk) 22:30, 20 February 2014 (UTC)
i would like to add more information on these animal farms and their practices on these such farms. Relating to the treatment of these animals in which companies have bought there meat from. — Preceding unsigned comment added by MTN Dew 22 ( talk • contribs) 00:55, 9 October 2019 (UTC)
I added a section on worker exploitation, because many fast food workers have complaints/criticisms in regards to their jobs. Many of these complaints are related to the amount of pay they receive. Philip121 ( talk) 22:39, 4 March 2014 (UTC)
I added to the section consumer responsibility an example of a man who went on a fast food diet and improved his health because he was responsible about what and how much he ate. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Philip121 ( talk • contribs) 17:50, 5 March 2014 (UTC)
I have revised a previous edit concerning an experiment of a science teacher that lost weight on a fast food diet. I have added it to the negative effects of fast food section and along with this edit I gave an expert’s comment in support of the experiment. This piece of information accompanies the criticism of fast food regarding obesity. It shows that fast food is not solely to blame for our weight gain and the health problems that come along with it. Philip121 ( talk) 21:17, 27 March 2014 (UTC)
I have added a section in regards to the actions fast food companies have made in response to the criticism that they receive. It's important to know that fast food companies do recognize the criticisms that they receive and attempt to do something about them. Philip121 ( talk) 21:18, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
I have added information to the section “Worker discrepancies and strikes” regarding the criticism of fast food restaurants employment of teenagers. The argument is that teenagers do not need the money they earn, because they still have the support of their parents. However, many teenagers that do work at fast food restaurants are actually helping to support their parents and family with the money that they earn. Philip121 ( talk) 21:18, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
Added additional information related to workers who stay at restaurants and their concerns around ongoing support related to pandemic conditions. And how it correlates to more pressure in an already strained industry. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Blarney1928 ( talk • contribs) 03:17, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
I have added a section in regards to fast foods effect on the environment. This is important because the environment needs to be taken care of and because fast food has been linked to harming the environment it is a criticism that needs to be addressed. Philip121 ( talk) 17:28, 29 April 2014 (UTC)
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Hello, I am a student, I am interested in the title. My purpose is to help people while they are choosing their life styles. I would like to edit on some sections, and compare some other sources with the article. I think, there are also some other information need to be added to make it more reliable. Especially on the sections: employee wages, obesity, wraps and packages, and so on. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lanolk ( talk • contribs) 02:12, 2 March 2018 (UTC)
This paragraph seems to either be misplaced or unnecessary. I figured I'd open it up for discussion before just deleting it entirely.
"There are lots of healthy damages on the human body while eating fast food products. It would be proper to know how fast food has a negative impact on human health. The researchers found that if a person eats fast foods more than a once a week, they may gain a significant amount of fat in their body. Also, there is a debate over proceeded food that has unhealthy nutrients inside that are not almost organic, where the results might be obviously harmful to the social life."
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I am a new user of Wikipedia. This looks like a great community, I'm glad I found it. I hope that I could learn how to edit the article here, and do my best to help this great community. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Niuhemao ( talk • contribs) 02:00, 19 February 2020 (UTC) I have made a few edits to this article in the last few weeks. In the health based criticisms, I added a new condition "increased suicide attempt" and reference to it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Niuhemao ( talk • contribs) 15:42, 30 April 2020 (UTC)
In the relationship between fast food and diabetes, the old version only provided a study of monkeys. I added a study conducted in Singapore showing fast food increase diabetes and heart disease. A reference was provided. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Niuhemao ( talk • contribs) 16:37, 2 May 2020 (UTC) In the last section, fast food proximity, I added one more study and its reference. Niuhemao ( talk) 16:40, 2 May 2020 (UTC) In the animal cruelty section, the original article only listed two animal cruelty events. I provided a short discussion about this phenomenon and a reference. Niuhemao ( talk) 16:54, 2 May 2020 (UTC)
I'm going to add information about fast food workers during the pandemic and the risk of them contracting covid-19. Will focus on PPE and social distancing related content. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Blarney1928 ( talk • contribs) 22:49, 22 November 2021 (UTC)
I will be adding more information under the fast food and the pandemic. I want to elaborate on the the second entry. I also will add information about the mental health of the fast food workers. Blarney1928 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Blarney1928 ( talk • contribs) 01:59, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
I will be adding information about the demographic profiles of fast-food workers. I will be going to expand on the pandemic and fast-food workers. Blarney1928 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Blarney1928 ( talk • contribs) 20:48, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
The article Food swamp contains information that could easily be considered criticism of fast food. I have added a link in See also, but it might also be good to add a summary to this page.
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This article has a good deal of bias and lacks counter arguments to offset said bias. Additionally, there a some biased words ( weasel words) that disrupt the neutrality of the article. -- Jeremy ( blah blah • I did it!) 20:33, 15 April 2012 (UTC)
It also seems to be more of a criticism of the livestock practices associated with fast food instead of the industry itself. 173.79.233.238 ( talk) 22:35, 12 March 2013 (UTC)
Under the topic "Food Poisoning Risk" The fact that most fast food restaurants cook their foods in beef tallow should be stated. [1] — Preceding unsigned comment added by Twest14 ( talk • contribs) 19:14, 20 September 2013 (UTC)
I stated that the American Heart Association says that we should consume about 16 grams of saturated fats per day. [2] 74.87.193.254 ( talk) 18:59, 4 October 2013 (UTC)
I am going to add a section titled, "Consumer Responsibilty" because this article seems to blame the fast food industries for the consumers problems. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Twest14 ( talk • contribs)
Childeren do not have a cognitive defenses against marketing, so this makes them targeted more by fast food industries. [3] 74.87.193.254 ( talk) 19:38, 4 October 2013 (UTC) Revised my section "Consumer Responsibility" and made it neutral. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 74.87.193.254 ( talk) 19:25, 25 October 2013 (UTC) Going to state that Mcdonalds is going to offer healthier options in the section titled,"Health based criticism". That being said, other fast food chains may follow. [4] — Preceding unsigned comment added by Twest14 ( talk • contribs) 20:22, 22 November 2013 (UTC)
References
Fast food worker strikes→ Criticism of fast food
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
I am proposing that the four or five sentence article Fast food worker strikes be merged into this one as part of the labor criticisms section. That one is over referenced to multiple small sources with a huge amount of link rot. While the event received a great deal of press coverage when it happened, the 24-hour news cycle has moved on ( WP:Recentism. -- Jeremy ( blah blah • I did it!) 07:48, 5 October 2013 (UTC)
This article has a very strong bias towards the United States; all sources are American, and it even cites "the Department of Agriculture" without qualification, as if there's only one department of agriculture. Perhaps it should be renamed to reflect its topic more closely? QVVERTYVS ( hm?) 13:57, 7 October 2013 (UTC)
I concur. Even though I am from Canada I have trouble understanding many points in this article because it is purely american. For instance what are "Carryout Bag" laws? 138.229.24.37 ( talk) 16:08, 7 September 2019 (UTC)
I agree also. This is a global problem but the article US centered. Gentleman wiki ( talk) 04:11, 11 November 2019 (UTC)
I think this article could be expanded by talking about the possible difficulties of cutting back on or cutting out fast food. I would look at the convenience or availablity of fast food conpared to heat and serve meals or even home cooked meals. Cost is also a possible venue; I usually feel a little cheated when I get fast food, moreso when I look up at the picture perfect sign/screen. Decepticon117 ( talk) 00:55, 16 November 2013 (UTC)
This could be expanded by fast foods relation to weight gain. How do people gain/lose the weight. Your source seems like it wants to blame the industry, while the industry blames the individual. How do non US country relate to this? Decepticon117 ( talk) 00:55, 16 November 2013 (UTC)
I thought I would give a brief break down for the changes I just made. Consider this a more in depth edit summary:
This article is still replete with issues, particularly with giving due weight to various topics, but I'm not really interested at this time in setting out to improve this page further. AioftheStorm ( talk) 05:47, 18 January 2014 (UTC)
I am going to add a section on animal cruelty. This is a criticism that needs to be added, because of the inappropriate conditions in which animals are raised in and are confined to on factory farms. It is from these farms that fast food companies purchase there meat from. Philip121 ( talk) 22:30, 20 February 2014 (UTC)
i would like to add more information on these animal farms and their practices on these such farms. Relating to the treatment of these animals in which companies have bought there meat from. — Preceding unsigned comment added by MTN Dew 22 ( talk • contribs) 00:55, 9 October 2019 (UTC)
I added a section on worker exploitation, because many fast food workers have complaints/criticisms in regards to their jobs. Many of these complaints are related to the amount of pay they receive. Philip121 ( talk) 22:39, 4 March 2014 (UTC)
I added to the section consumer responsibility an example of a man who went on a fast food diet and improved his health because he was responsible about what and how much he ate. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Philip121 ( talk • contribs) 17:50, 5 March 2014 (UTC)
I have revised a previous edit concerning an experiment of a science teacher that lost weight on a fast food diet. I have added it to the negative effects of fast food section and along with this edit I gave an expert’s comment in support of the experiment. This piece of information accompanies the criticism of fast food regarding obesity. It shows that fast food is not solely to blame for our weight gain and the health problems that come along with it. Philip121 ( talk) 21:17, 27 March 2014 (UTC)
I have added a section in regards to the actions fast food companies have made in response to the criticism that they receive. It's important to know that fast food companies do recognize the criticisms that they receive and attempt to do something about them. Philip121 ( talk) 21:18, 7 April 2014 (UTC)
I have added information to the section “Worker discrepancies and strikes” regarding the criticism of fast food restaurants employment of teenagers. The argument is that teenagers do not need the money they earn, because they still have the support of their parents. However, many teenagers that do work at fast food restaurants are actually helping to support their parents and family with the money that they earn. Philip121 ( talk) 21:18, 15 April 2014 (UTC)
Added additional information related to workers who stay at restaurants and their concerns around ongoing support related to pandemic conditions. And how it correlates to more pressure in an already strained industry. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Blarney1928 ( talk • contribs) 03:17, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
I have added a section in regards to fast foods effect on the environment. This is important because the environment needs to be taken care of and because fast food has been linked to harming the environment it is a criticism that needs to be addressed. Philip121 ( talk) 17:28, 29 April 2014 (UTC)
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Hello, I am a student, I am interested in the title. My purpose is to help people while they are choosing their life styles. I would like to edit on some sections, and compare some other sources with the article. I think, there are also some other information need to be added to make it more reliable. Especially on the sections: employee wages, obesity, wraps and packages, and so on. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lanolk ( talk • contribs) 02:12, 2 March 2018 (UTC)
This paragraph seems to either be misplaced or unnecessary. I figured I'd open it up for discussion before just deleting it entirely.
"There are lots of healthy damages on the human body while eating fast food products. It would be proper to know how fast food has a negative impact on human health. The researchers found that if a person eats fast foods more than a once a week, they may gain a significant amount of fat in their body. Also, there is a debate over proceeded food that has unhealthy nutrients inside that are not almost organic, where the results might be obviously harmful to the social life."
SKay ( talk) 07:54, 19 February 2019 (UTC)
I am a new user of Wikipedia. This looks like a great community, I'm glad I found it. I hope that I could learn how to edit the article here, and do my best to help this great community. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Niuhemao ( talk • contribs) 02:00, 19 February 2020 (UTC) I have made a few edits to this article in the last few weeks. In the health based criticisms, I added a new condition "increased suicide attempt" and reference to it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Niuhemao ( talk • contribs) 15:42, 30 April 2020 (UTC)
In the relationship between fast food and diabetes, the old version only provided a study of monkeys. I added a study conducted in Singapore showing fast food increase diabetes and heart disease. A reference was provided. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Niuhemao ( talk • contribs) 16:37, 2 May 2020 (UTC) In the last section, fast food proximity, I added one more study and its reference. Niuhemao ( talk) 16:40, 2 May 2020 (UTC) In the animal cruelty section, the original article only listed two animal cruelty events. I provided a short discussion about this phenomenon and a reference. Niuhemao ( talk) 16:54, 2 May 2020 (UTC)
I'm going to add information about fast food workers during the pandemic and the risk of them contracting covid-19. Will focus on PPE and social distancing related content. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Blarney1928 ( talk • contribs) 22:49, 22 November 2021 (UTC)
I will be adding more information under the fast food and the pandemic. I want to elaborate on the the second entry. I also will add information about the mental health of the fast food workers. Blarney1928 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Blarney1928 ( talk • contribs) 01:59, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
I will be adding information about the demographic profiles of fast-food workers. I will be going to expand on the pandemic and fast-food workers. Blarney1928 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Blarney1928 ( talk • contribs) 20:48, 30 November 2021 (UTC)
The article Food swamp contains information that could easily be considered criticism of fast food. I have added a link in See also, but it might also be good to add a summary to this page.