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The first sentence is a lot to handle. Maybe just end it after placekicker and then say He played on game...
Early life and education
When young, his family moved to a suburban community in Washington, I know this is silly, but you probably need to mention that he moved to America. his family moved to America, settling down in a suburban...
1982 NFL Draft, only behind Rohn Stark you can delete , only
Professional career
Was he a one-step kicker, or a three-step kicker? Can you clarify.
, who they had just released in favor of deBruijn a week prior repetitive to the sentence earlier. Can just delete.
He felt confident in camp, saying "I felt that I was going to have a chance. the repetition of "felt" isn't great. Maybe just He was confident
as part of the roster cuts either just "roster cuts" or "their roster cuts"
Later life
Maybe tack on the mining company before Newmont.
References
Ref #1 and #7, #12, #13 and #17 have a different date format.
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The first sentence is a lot to handle. Maybe just end it after placekicker and then say He played on game...
Early life and education
When young, his family moved to a suburban community in Washington, I know this is silly, but you probably need to mention that he moved to America. his family moved to America, settling down in a suburban...
1982 NFL Draft, only behind Rohn Stark you can delete , only
Professional career
Was he a one-step kicker, or a three-step kicker? Can you clarify.
, who they had just released in favor of deBruijn a week prior repetitive to the sentence earlier. Can just delete.
He felt confident in camp, saying "I felt that I was going to have a chance. the repetition of "felt" isn't great. Maybe just He was confident
as part of the roster cuts either just "roster cuts" or "their roster cuts"
Later life
Maybe tack on the mining company before Newmont.
References
Ref #1 and #7, #12, #13 and #17 have a different date format.
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.