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Sorting this lot out may take some time as it will require a review of the major uncited sources, such as those listed in the further reading section. - Sitush ( talk) 10:53, 13 June 2015 (UTC)
At that time, north India was ruled by Ibrahim Lodi of the Lodi dynasty. In 1524, he got an invitation from his uncle Daulat Khan Lodi to overthrow Ibrahim and establish his rule.in which the referents for the pronouns were unclear. Since then the senetences have been rewritten
In 1524, Daulat Khan Lodi invited his nephew, Babur, to overthrow Ibrahim and become ruler.Can someone verify that Daulat Khan Lodi was the uncle of Babur and not Ibrahim? It's possible, but wanted to be sure.
Unlike his father, he had ascetic tendencies and did not have any great interest in women....Babur treated them and his other women relatives well., especially without attributing them to the source. Also the section (like others) has numerous prose issues, eg
...who was was five years old);
He had one daughter by her, Fakhr-un-Nissa, who died as an infant within a year in 1500 AD.)
In the period 1506-08, Babar married four women, being...)
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There has been discussion on the talk page
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here, from which it is clear that several people are not satisfied that this article meets the standards expected of a GA. Some of the issues have been fixed already but others remain. These include:
Sorting this lot out may take some time as it will require a review of the major uncited sources, such as those listed in the further reading section. - Sitush ( talk) 10:53, 13 June 2015 (UTC)
At that time, north India was ruled by Ibrahim Lodi of the Lodi dynasty. In 1524, he got an invitation from his uncle Daulat Khan Lodi to overthrow Ibrahim and establish his rule.in which the referents for the pronouns were unclear. Since then the senetences have been rewritten
In 1524, Daulat Khan Lodi invited his nephew, Babur, to overthrow Ibrahim and become ruler.Can someone verify that Daulat Khan Lodi was the uncle of Babur and not Ibrahim? It's possible, but wanted to be sure.
Unlike his father, he had ascetic tendencies and did not have any great interest in women....Babur treated them and his other women relatives well., especially without attributing them to the source. Also the section (like others) has numerous prose issues, eg
...who was was five years old);
He had one daughter by her, Fakhr-un-Nissa, who died as an infant within a year in 1500 AD.)
In the period 1506-08, Babar married four women, being...)