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Well-written article. On the technical side: I believe that the names of Otsuka Miki should be switched, per name guidelines; and second, the last sentence of the article is phrased somewhat awkwardly; I would advise changing it around. As for DYK hooks: I suggest:
Good luck! Boneyard90 ( talk) 14:32, 25 April 2011 (UTC)
In the description of the attack on the Nagato, it states:
one bomb killed "her commanding officer... as well as the executive officer and at least twelve other men.[9] Another 500 pound bomb ...[killed] about 22 sailors... By the time the attack concluded at 4:10 pm, 35 of the battleship's 967 officers and men had been killed."
That's 36 men killed due to the 2 bombs (CO + XO + 12 + 22). Is the "35" a mistake, or is this in addition to the 36 already mentioned? Boneyard90 ( talk) 22:58, 3 February 2012 (UTC)
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Reviewer: MathewTownsend ( talk · contribs) 17:41, 5 February 2012 (UTC)
Should they be under "Further reading" or something? Am I missing something? Otherwise, the article is great, very clear reading. MathewTownsend ( talk) 15:26, 8 February 2012 (UTC)
GA review-see WP:WIAGA for criteria (and here for what they are not)
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May 4, 2011. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the main target of the 1945
attack on Yokosuka was the
battleship Nagato, the
flagship of the fleet that
attacked Pearl Harbor in 1941? |
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Well-written article. On the technical side: I believe that the names of Otsuka Miki should be switched, per name guidelines; and second, the last sentence of the article is phrased somewhat awkwardly; I would advise changing it around. As for DYK hooks: I suggest:
Good luck! Boneyard90 ( talk) 14:32, 25 April 2011 (UTC)
In the description of the attack on the Nagato, it states:
one bomb killed "her commanding officer... as well as the executive officer and at least twelve other men.[9] Another 500 pound bomb ...[killed] about 22 sailors... By the time the attack concluded at 4:10 pm, 35 of the battleship's 967 officers and men had been killed."
That's 36 men killed due to the 2 bombs (CO + XO + 12 + 22). Is the "35" a mistake, or is this in addition to the 36 already mentioned? Boneyard90 ( talk) 22:58, 3 February 2012 (UTC)
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Reviewer: MathewTownsend ( talk · contribs) 17:41, 5 February 2012 (UTC)
Should they be under "Further reading" or something? Am I missing something? Otherwise, the article is great, very clear reading. MathewTownsend ( talk) 15:26, 8 February 2012 (UTC)
GA review-see WP:WIAGA for criteria (and here for what they are not)