23:2223:22, 4 November 2023diffhist−109
Majdal Shams
→Demography: This is an encyclopedia... relocating link to section hatnote. I'm also removing the dead link to the non-existent section in favor of a link to the base article.
23:1923:19, 4 November 2023diffhist−6
Majdal Shams
Doesn't make sense to describe the town as Druze. The residents are largely Druze, which is indicated in the following sentence.
06:4606:46, 14 October 2023diffhist+7
Israel–Hamas war
→Name: First, remove over-bolding per
WP:AVOIDBOLD. Second, the cited sources are not calling the conflict the third intifada. They are speculating about whether or not it could lead to a third intifada. Previous language was functionally
WP:OR.
06:3106:31, 14 October 2023diffhist−1
Israel–Hamas war
Rockets are the not the same thing as missiles (e.g. missiles can change trajectory mid-flight). The source specifically says "3,000 rockets".
01:3501:35, 8 October 2023diffhist0
Hamas
→Overview: Grammar fix. I'm not sure about the apostrophe placement, but I know it doesn't make sense to refer to a country and an organization as a "war crime". The acts are crimes, not the entities themselves. Please feel free to reword this if my apostrophe usage is wrong.
23:2223:22, 4 November 2023diffhist−109
Majdal Shams
→Demography: This is an encyclopedia... relocating link to section hatnote. I'm also removing the dead link to the non-existent section in favor of a link to the base article.
23:1923:19, 4 November 2023diffhist−6
Majdal Shams
Doesn't make sense to describe the town as Druze. The residents are largely Druze, which is indicated in the following sentence.
06:4606:46, 14 October 2023diffhist+7
Israel–Hamas war
→Name: First, remove over-bolding per
WP:AVOIDBOLD. Second, the cited sources are not calling the conflict the third intifada. They are speculating about whether or not it could lead to a third intifada. Previous language was functionally
WP:OR.
06:3106:31, 14 October 2023diffhist−1
Israel–Hamas war
Rockets are the not the same thing as missiles (e.g. missiles can change trajectory mid-flight). The source specifically says "3,000 rockets".
01:3501:35, 8 October 2023diffhist0
Hamas
→Overview: Grammar fix. I'm not sure about the apostrophe placement, but I know it doesn't make sense to refer to a country and an organization as a "war crime". The acts are crimes, not the entities themselves. Please feel free to reword this if my apostrophe usage is wrong.