06:3306:33, 27 February 2019diffhist+233
Waste
added distinction and similarities between byproduct, joint product and resource to the header paragraph.
01:1701:17, 27 February 2019diffhist+135
Black-throated finch
please do not delete article tags until the issue has been resolved. you may apply for moderation or community advice if you feel the need.
11:3011:30, 23 February 2019diffhist+556
Bok choy
→Toxic effects: citation needed tags added for cancer claim and patients hypothyroidism caused by her diabetes. added reference for the original case study published by her physicians.
20 February 2019
13:2913:29, 20 February 2019diffhist+338
Effects of blue light technology
Undid revision 877235180 by
90.240.3.74 (
talk) revert edit. references are the UK Association of Optometrists, commenting on a case in which an optometrical chain was found guilty of fraud for doing so and a European Commission report that concluded your position is not supported by evidence. please see
Health claim. wikipedia is not the place to put forth your personal opinion and to offer health claims about products.Tag: Undo
23:5023:50, 19 February 2019diffhist+645
Black-throated finch
Undid revision 884168633 by
Casliber (
talk) wrong, no evidence means no evidence. lack of evidence does not prove a positive or a negative. cite a single source for its state of decline. wikipedia does not consider personal anecdotes to be reliable sources.
WP:DISPUTEDTag: Undo
21:1221:12, 19 February 2019diffhist+1,577
Carmichael coal mine
→Endangered species: there is no data to suggest the finch is endangered. the recommendation which was granted for its endangered and threatened status acknowledges that there is no actual proof populations are in decline.
21:0221:02, 19 February 2019diffhist+630
Black-throated finch
updated dead link, web page uses contradictory references to state that the population is in decline when those references state that there is no evidence or those pages incorrectly interpret their primary resource which states that it is not known.
18:1518:15, 19 February 2019diffhist+936
Fluorite
→Optics: fluorite type glass itself does have low dispersion but what is more important is how it is used for the final effect. typically telescope/photographic lenses contain 7 or more elements while even in the best lenses, only one or two of those elements will be fluorite. they also lighten the lenses, reducing lens body sag but i didnt want to go into too much detail.
07:4007:40, 18 February 2019diffhist+1,422
Carmichael coal mine
added dubious tag. the ABC reported inaccurate interpretations of the court transcript. provided reference for the court documents and page number which disputes what is contained in the ABC article.
07:4107:41, 17 February 2019diffhist+247
Caterpillar D9
added explanation for high drive in the image blurb. readers unfamiliar with decades of history of construction equipment may not know what high drive means. it should probably have its own section in the article considering it is a Caterpillar patented design and to further explain the problems they were trying to solve by changing the track configuration but for avoiding confusion for other readers as to what the image is illustrating this seemed appropriate.
02:1502:15, 17 February 2019diffhist+549
RimWorld
→Gameplay: gameplay section was incorrect. the game is not about collecting resources, this is only an incidental mechanic. the developers themselves state it is about the computer generated story, managing the feelings of settlers, and they intend to continue to develop it this way.
16 February 2019
15:5515:55, 16 February 2019diffhist+160
Sodium fusion test
weird undo bug. cant undo weird edits using undo button. undid strange edits that just had corrupted tags and strange deletions. reverted to : 04:47, 13 February 2019 Abelmoschus Esculentus
11:2811:28, 16 February 2019diffhist+696
Roger Nash Baldwin
→Life and work: the reference is very broad, covering 1886 bound volumes. but that's how many letters he wrote and received which i put forward to substantiate the claim. specifically it's the roughly 1916-1920 period contained within this collection that mainly deals with I.W.W. cases.
05:3105:31, 15 February 2019diffhist−26
Bromism
→Treatment: deleted line, " Sulfur is required for
sulfur metabolism chemistry in the body." moved the sulphur metabolism tag to the previous sentence so it hyperlinks, "dietary sulphur." added cleanup tag. no references for last paragraph. doesnt connect to bromide in any way in the article. it would be more interesting in its own paragraph if there is something special about sulphur's effect on bromide metabolism but as it stands, it is just a confusing way to end the article.
06:3306:33, 27 February 2019diffhist+233
Waste
added distinction and similarities between byproduct, joint product and resource to the header paragraph.
01:1701:17, 27 February 2019diffhist+135
Black-throated finch
please do not delete article tags until the issue has been resolved. you may apply for moderation or community advice if you feel the need.
11:3011:30, 23 February 2019diffhist+556
Bok choy
→Toxic effects: citation needed tags added for cancer claim and patients hypothyroidism caused by her diabetes. added reference for the original case study published by her physicians.
20 February 2019
13:2913:29, 20 February 2019diffhist+338
Effects of blue light technology
Undid revision 877235180 by
90.240.3.74 (
talk) revert edit. references are the UK Association of Optometrists, commenting on a case in which an optometrical chain was found guilty of fraud for doing so and a European Commission report that concluded your position is not supported by evidence. please see
Health claim. wikipedia is not the place to put forth your personal opinion and to offer health claims about products.Tag: Undo
23:5023:50, 19 February 2019diffhist+645
Black-throated finch
Undid revision 884168633 by
Casliber (
talk) wrong, no evidence means no evidence. lack of evidence does not prove a positive or a negative. cite a single source for its state of decline. wikipedia does not consider personal anecdotes to be reliable sources.
WP:DISPUTEDTag: Undo
21:1221:12, 19 February 2019diffhist+1,577
Carmichael coal mine
→Endangered species: there is no data to suggest the finch is endangered. the recommendation which was granted for its endangered and threatened status acknowledges that there is no actual proof populations are in decline.
21:0221:02, 19 February 2019diffhist+630
Black-throated finch
updated dead link, web page uses contradictory references to state that the population is in decline when those references state that there is no evidence or those pages incorrectly interpret their primary resource which states that it is not known.
18:1518:15, 19 February 2019diffhist+936
Fluorite
→Optics: fluorite type glass itself does have low dispersion but what is more important is how it is used for the final effect. typically telescope/photographic lenses contain 7 or more elements while even in the best lenses, only one or two of those elements will be fluorite. they also lighten the lenses, reducing lens body sag but i didnt want to go into too much detail.
07:4007:40, 18 February 2019diffhist+1,422
Carmichael coal mine
added dubious tag. the ABC reported inaccurate interpretations of the court transcript. provided reference for the court documents and page number which disputes what is contained in the ABC article.
07:4107:41, 17 February 2019diffhist+247
Caterpillar D9
added explanation for high drive in the image blurb. readers unfamiliar with decades of history of construction equipment may not know what high drive means. it should probably have its own section in the article considering it is a Caterpillar patented design and to further explain the problems they were trying to solve by changing the track configuration but for avoiding confusion for other readers as to what the image is illustrating this seemed appropriate.
02:1502:15, 17 February 2019diffhist+549
RimWorld
→Gameplay: gameplay section was incorrect. the game is not about collecting resources, this is only an incidental mechanic. the developers themselves state it is about the computer generated story, managing the feelings of settlers, and they intend to continue to develop it this way.
16 February 2019
15:5515:55, 16 February 2019diffhist+160
Sodium fusion test
weird undo bug. cant undo weird edits using undo button. undid strange edits that just had corrupted tags and strange deletions. reverted to : 04:47, 13 February 2019 Abelmoschus Esculentus
11:2811:28, 16 February 2019diffhist+696
Roger Nash Baldwin
→Life and work: the reference is very broad, covering 1886 bound volumes. but that's how many letters he wrote and received which i put forward to substantiate the claim. specifically it's the roughly 1916-1920 period contained within this collection that mainly deals with I.W.W. cases.
05:3105:31, 15 February 2019diffhist−26
Bromism
→Treatment: deleted line, " Sulfur is required for
sulfur metabolism chemistry in the body." moved the sulphur metabolism tag to the previous sentence so it hyperlinks, "dietary sulphur." added cleanup tag. no references for last paragraph. doesnt connect to bromide in any way in the article. it would be more interesting in its own paragraph if there is something special about sulphur's effect on bromide metabolism but as it stands, it is just a confusing way to end the article.