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User talk:Oceans87/sandbox
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22:3722:37, 12 July 2022diffhist−4,198
The Real News Network
Substantial edits to remove and replace primary sources, improve neutrality, remove promotional and uncited/poorly cited statements. Clarified/added to lead/history. Removed unnecessary subheadings
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Janelle James
→Career: corrected crystal ball language "forthcoming" and "set to"; added date. Removed "legendary" - considered promotional language. Corrected grammar.
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Ruder Finn
Replaced source and added date to Finn's retirement and Kathy Bloomgarden's appointment as CEO and organized in chronological order. Replaced PR Week source with NYT in History section (2nd paragraph)
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Krista Vernoff
removed "showrunner" from lead, as it's the same job as executive producer and thus, redundant. Minor edits to clean up grammar/sentence structure in the lead.
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Mimi Gurbst
To improve neutrality of article, removed sentences from the lede and About that violate WP: NPOV and Puffery. Removed broken sources.
22:3522:35, 11 August 2022diffhist+140
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User talk:Oceans87/sandbox
←Created page with '{{Userboxtop}} {{User:Cari-Su/rescuedog}} {{User:Yutah123/userbox/likecatanddog}} {{User USofA}} {{Wikipedia:WikiProject Rocketry/LoveNASA}}'
22:3722:37, 12 July 2022diffhist−4,198
The Real News Network
Substantial edits to remove and replace primary sources, improve neutrality, remove promotional and uncited/poorly cited statements. Clarified/added to lead/history. Removed unnecessary subheadings
21:3021:30, 12 July 2022diffhist−3
m
Janelle James
→Career: corrected crystal ball language "forthcoming" and "set to"; added date. Removed "legendary" - considered promotional language. Corrected grammar.
18:2418:24, 24 June 2022diffhist+249
m
Ruder Finn
Replaced source and added date to Finn's retirement and Kathy Bloomgarden's appointment as CEO and organized in chronological order. Replaced PR Week source with NYT in History section (2nd paragraph)
20:4320:43, 21 June 2022diffhist−40
m
Krista Vernoff
removed "showrunner" from lead, as it's the same job as executive producer and thus, redundant. Minor edits to clean up grammar/sentence structure in the lead.
15:5215:52, 30 August 2021diffhist−983
m
Mimi Gurbst
To improve neutrality of article, removed sentences from the lede and About that violate WP: NPOV and Puffery. Removed broken sources.