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1. Please update the first paragraph of the lead with:
Bear Witness, Take Action is a YouTube Original series of specials that premiered on YouTube on June 13, 2020, with the second special, Bear Witness, Take Action 2: Continuing The Movement, set for December 5, 2020. [1] [2] The series is part of YouTube’s initiative to support Black creatives, and to address racial inequity and civil unrest in America following the killings of George Floyd and Breonna Taylor. [1] Hosted by Keke Palmer and Common, the first program featured roundtable discussions on racial inequities led by media personalities Soledad O’Brien and Roland Martin. [2] It also featured testimonials and performances from celebrities including John Legend, Sterling K. Brown and Kerry Washington. [3] The one-and-a-half-hour long livestream centers around the history and experiences as people of color in America, as well as exploring ways to raise awareness and end inequality. [1] Palmer and Common are also hosting the second event. [2] [4]
Explanation: Updates lead to make evergreen, correcting error that this was a one-time event. Clarifies hosts and roles of celebrity participants, and structure of the program. Removes participants I couldn't find mentioned after an extensive search for supporting secondary sources. Adds reliable sources to support the entry. Adds source from The Grio, which is more reliable than current source in article. Removes a bit of subjective language.
2. Delete:
“On November 17, 2020, it was announced that a second teleconference titled Bear Witness, Take Action 2: Continuing The Movement will premiere on December 5, 2020.”
Explanation: if the changes in the first request are made, this is superfluous.
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Thanks very much. Oceans87 ( talk) 18:19, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
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I work for WhiteHatWiki.com, which is a paid consultant to YouTube Originals. Since I have a conflict of interest, I am submitting this for review by independent editors, as instructed on the Contact Us [1] page for the subjects of articles or their reps to request corrections and updates. I will not directly edit the article as instructed on WP: PAID.
1. Please update the first paragraph of the lead with:
Bear Witness, Take Action is a YouTube Original series of specials that premiered on YouTube on June 13, 2020, with the second special, Bear Witness, Take Action 2: Continuing The Movement, set for December 5, 2020. [1] [2] The series is part of YouTube’s initiative to support Black creatives, and to address racial inequity and civil unrest in America following the killings of George Floyd and Breonna Taylor. [1] Hosted by Keke Palmer and Common, the first program featured roundtable discussions on racial inequities led by media personalities Soledad O’Brien and Roland Martin. [2] It also featured testimonials and performances from celebrities including John Legend, Sterling K. Brown and Kerry Washington. [3] The one-and-a-half-hour long livestream centers around the history and experiences as people of color in America, as well as exploring ways to raise awareness and end inequality. [1] Palmer and Common are also hosting the second event. [2] [4]
Explanation: Updates lead to make evergreen, correcting error that this was a one-time event. Clarifies hosts and roles of celebrity participants, and structure of the program. Removes participants I couldn't find mentioned after an extensive search for supporting secondary sources. Adds reliable sources to support the entry. Adds source from The Grio, which is more reliable than current source in article. Removes a bit of subjective language.
2. Delete:
“On November 17, 2020, it was announced that a second teleconference titled Bear Witness, Take Action 2: Continuing The Movement will premiere on December 5, 2020.”
Explanation: if the changes in the first request are made, this is superfluous.
References
Thanks very much. Oceans87 ( talk) 18:19, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
References