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Statement by Rlevse

I have full protected this page for two weeks. This seems to be a content dispute. It also appear Elonka did not use her admin bit in this issue and therefore is a regular editor in this matter. I posted a notice on the talk page to encourage peaceful resolution by all on the talk page.RlevseTalk 15:33, 26 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by Tariqabjotu

It's tough for me to say whether this case is a content dispute (which ArbCom doesn't usually address) or a conduct issue. However, I'm inclined to encourage the ArbCom to treat this as a conduct issue and look at it as such. I know many editors who have not been following this page will immediately declare it as a content dispute, but this has long outgrown that description. Nearly every other available avenue of dispute resolution, including a mediation which I led, has been tried and -- particularly in the mediation case -- failed miserably. The article and its talk page, for the most part, can speak for themselves; we see repeated accusations of ownership, a slow-motion edit war, assumptions of bad faith, continuous allegations that sources are being misrepresented -- all the elements that together make a resolution to the now five-month dispute impossible by any other means. Additionally, the actions of certain editors on the article have made the conditions for less involved editors that want to contribute to this article just about unbearable. We have a serious problem here, one that calls into question the integrity of this article, and perhaps dozens others. Investigating the sort of behavior alleged here is not unheard-of, and I request that ArbCom do so again. -- tariqabjotu 16:01, 26 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Just a quick reply to something Justin said: there is an Evidence phase within arbitration cases and this is not it. I assume Jehochman, and any others with specific allegations, will present such evidence when the appropriate time comes. -- tariqabjotu 18:32, 26 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by Justin

I, like User:Tariqabjotu am having difficulty deciding whether this issue is truly a content issue or a behavioral issue. However, I tend to lean towards the former and the evidence presented by User:Jehochman are all examples of content disputes. I'm extremely troubled by Jehochman's accusations (provided without dif's) of original research, and disagree with his assertion that there was a consensus to remove the content PHG added back into the article. I believe the Sadi Carnot arbitration isn't a particularly good analogy to this problem. The primary issue in that dispute was admins reverting each other, which hasn't been the case for this dispute.

I would also note, that I made a request for page protection for the article some time before User:PHG was given a 24 hour block. It was ignored until the block took place, and then denied after input from an involved admin. [1] I applaud User:Rlevse for the two week page protection, as I do believe this will resolve the issues at hand. I have absolute faith that all of the editors involved will work toward a consensus, and eventually that consensus will be reached (with or without User:PHG agreeing). I consider User:Jehochman's suggested remedy of indef blocking an editor with nearly 30,000 edits completely beyond reason. The page protection should offer more than enough time for involved editors to find a consensus version of the article. Justin chat 17:31, 26 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Response to Tariqabjotu: Granted, the ArbCom request doesn't require posting evidence, but an admin made some pretty extraordinary claims about a longstanding editor. By failing to give any evidence to his accusations, it appears that the motive was to poison the well. PHG's disruptions of the article in question were definitely inappropriate, but the sentence "publishing original research in Wikipedia, misrepresenting sources, and frustrating the deletion process and consensus by tendentiously reinstalling content that the community has decided to remove," is a fairly heavy-handed accusation. Jehochman followed up these accusations with a suggested remedy of indef blocking.
Given all of that, I think that since both the accusations and suggested remedy are fairly extreme, it would have been prudent to back up his accusations with evidence. Perhaps PHG has some behavioral problems outside of the article in question, and if that's the case, I'm sure the ArbCom members (and those of us that are unaware of other problems) would like to see evidence of it. In lieu of that, all of us are forced to assume Jehochman made his claims in bad faith or that PHG is indeed a bad faith editor as his claims assert. Neither case is preferable, hence my original point. Justin chat 20:58, 26 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by Shell Kinney

This case should most definately be accepted; while an underlying content dispute was the catalyst, the behaviors of the editors involved, in particular those of PHG, have spiraled out of the community's ability to control. For example:

  • Since the abortive FAC last September, numerous attempts have been made to improve the article; all significant changes (and even some minor ones) have been reverted by PHG [2] [3] [4] [5] [6] [7] [8] [9] who displays rather clear ownership issues [10].
  • The minority POV which was originally under dispute has now sprawled to more than 50 paragraphs in this article (even though the edit summary said "revert" [11]) and has been systematically inserted into scads of other articles creating more than a little bit of disruption that is requiring some rather serious cleanup efforts. (See this talk page post for the list of articles known to have been affected) The behavioral side of this issue stems from PHG is abusively edit warring, subverting myriad other articles and creating numerous POV forks in an attempt to "win" a content dispute.
  • PHG has also canvassed in an attempt to skew the consensus. [12] [13] [14] [15]
  • At least 6 other editors (myself included) are currently working productively on the article via talk page discussion; this was especially apparent during the 24 hours when PHG was blocked from interfering. These editors do not all agree, so this is not about one side winning the dispute.

The committee also needs to be aware that this dispute has attracted certain editors who, for one reason or another, wish to disrupt Elonka's activities on wiki such as editors from past or current Arb cases which she was involved in.

We're not asking ArbCom to intervene in a content dispute and, in fact, don't need any intervention since absent one highly disruptive editor, talk page discussions are resolving the content issues. However, I would strongly urge the Committee to review the clear behavioral problems that stemmed from this dispute. Shell babelfish 19:24, 26 January 2008 (UTC) reply

  • Yet again, PHG has started reverting the moment the article is unprotected. He is continuing to wikilawyer on the talk page and has started yet another misleading article which skews reliable sources to support his original thesis of a mongol alliance. At this point, it seems that he has no intention of engaging in dispute resolution to resolve the issues and is a classic example of a tendentious editor. If the committee is not going to review his behavior, I would strongly suggest a community ban from this topic area. Shell babelfish 14:17, 3 February 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by Orderinchaos

This seems to be yet another argument between those promoting fringe theories or views and those holding a mainstream view on historical issues. Elonka appears to have been trying to defend the NPOV on this and related articles against what seems to be some odd behaviour on the other side. The dispute has gone on so long now (several months) that it's way beyond whatever it started out being about and now is essentially an issue where consensus has failed, and it may well be that some of the individuals on one side never had any intention of accepting a consensus removed from their own view. I would agree with Jehochman and Shell Kinney's points above, and WJB's points below. Orderinchaos 23:19, 26 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by Daniel

I have deleted and protected Wikipedia:Requests for mediation/Franco-Mongol alliance, to protect the privileged nature of Mediation Committee mediation (see also Wikipedia:Arbitration policy#Hearing). Daniel ( talk) 03:06, 27 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by uninvolved Wjhonson

I am not an involved editor in this case. Wikibits of this situation have deposited themselves on various other pages and it peaked my interest to take a look. My rough estimate of the problem is that there was an initial failure to strive for consensus. The catalyst appears to be a complete re-write done in user space was plopped down in situ on top of a large established article. Frankly, were that to happen to an article I had largely contributed to, I would probably react in the same way as PHG. I do not find the approach initially taken in this case to be any remote attempt to strive for consensus. As the talk page clearly shows, many editors were against the rewrite and many were for it. However in that situation, normal consensus building would be to leave the status quo article as it. "Consensus decision-making is a decision-making process that not only seeks the agreement of most participants, but also to resolve or mitigate the objections of the minority to achieve the most agreeable decision. Consensus is usually defined as meaning both general agreement, and the process of getting to such agreement. Consensus decision-making is thus concerned primarily with that process." A more temperate approach, if the underlying issue were size would have been to fork the content. A more temperate approach, if the underlying issue were neutral-point-of-view would have been to take disputes to that Talk board. As well we have a reliable sources noticeboard, and a Talk page at original research. The approach taken in this case, has led, over many months, here. I think that's a fair indication, in light of the thousands of articles PHG has contributed to, that an ArbCom ruling would be effective. Wjhonson ( talk) 11:27, 27 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by uninvolved Durova

I've watched this conflict from afar since the Franco-Mongol alliance FAC of last summer. History is a field where autodidacts often have trouble due to unfamiliarity with priority of sources and historiography. A fair portion of books in the field have been written by untrained persons, some of which are excellent and some of which ought to be classified as humor or fantasy. The more faciful versions get repeated by other autodidact authors because they seem interesting, so absurdities sometimes gain the illusion of a pedigree among readers whose only means of guessing what constitutes mainstream history is to count the number of published books that advance a given hypothesis. This dynamic has manifested in any number of ways at Joan of Arc although the problem is less burdensome now that the article is featured (that Joan of Arc was a man, that she escaped execution, that she was the bastard daughter of the queen of France, etc. etc.). These editors aren't necessarily intending to violate WP:NPOV; they simply lack the knowledge base and critical training to determine what's fringe and what's mainstream.

The most serious assertion at this RFAR is misrepresentation of sources. I have seen no actual evidence to substanitate this. I request that the Committee accept this case to determine one way or the other. Durova Charge! 13:16, 27 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Having now seen evidence of misrepresentation of sources, I urge the Committee to not only accept this case but to rename it PHG. The problem is greater than one article and is largely - perhaps entirely - confined to his conduct. This editor has been conducting what Wikipedia euphemistically calls original research and what the rest of the world terms academic dishonesty. That is, he has been misusing source material in order to claim that recognized experts have asserted things which they cannot reasonably be supposed to have concluded - all tending toward a hypothesis that the Mongol Empire was considerably more powerful than mainstream historians concur that it was. When other editors call upon him to step back from this extreme and novel view, he forks articles to continue promulgating it; when they identify specific misuse of one source, he changes the subject to assertions about other sources. Nothing persuades him. I've seen Adam Bishop (an actual doctoral candidate in Medieval studies) attempt to advise PHG and get rebuffed.
PHG's volunteer efforts for Wikipedia are considerable and his efforts to improve the site appear to be sincere. He has contributed multiple featured articles on various subjects, yet his conduct in this matter leaves me questioning the integrity of his other contributions. When NPA Personality Theory passed GAC before getting deleted, thoughtful Wikipedians were shaken. Franco-Mongol alliance progressed as far as FAC before an editor recognized its flaws, which raises serious questions about the eight other articles that have become FAs under this editor's guidance. This is an arbitration-worthy request, and an important one. Durova Charge! 02:47, 31 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by Kafka Liz

After silently following the dispute at Franco-mongol alliance for some months, I eventually got involved over what I saw as persistent problematic behaviour on the part of PHG. My initial concern stemmed from the creation of a series of forks that PHG presented as good faith attempts to shorten the main article, but in reality served to preserve and expand upon strongly disputed sections. Further examination of the article and its history convinced me that PHG's activities were in violation of two fundamental areas of Wikipedia policy, namely WP:OWN and WP:NPOV (specifically WP:UNDUE). Attempts by myself and other editors to work with PHG regarding these concerns have been met first with polite stonewalling and evasive answers, then accusations of "being polemical and systematically banding together, [16]" and finally silence. I now see PHG resorting to various strategies of gaming the system: engaging in slow revert wars to evade 3RR, wikilawyering [17], and simply refusing to respond directly to the concerns of others.

I concur with the statements put forth by Jehochman, Shell Kinney, Orderinchaos, and WJBscribe, and believe Jehochman's reference to the Sadi Carnot case is particularly fitting to the case at hand. Kafka Liz ( talk) 17:32, 27 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by (fairly) uninvolved Iridescent

As someone who's spent an inordinate amount of time spatting with Elonka over this — and as a former occasional collaborator with Sadi Carnot (albeit not on the problematic articles) — I do agree that Arbcom ought to get involved here. After a lengthy argument with Elonka after I accused her of edit-warring on the issue, I actually went and checked the contributions of PHG more thoroughly, and on inspection he's the very model of a true problem editor. As with Sadi Carnot, he makes enough valid and high-quality contributions that they mask the problem edits, unless one goes looking for them. On the articles in question, his "sources" seem to be a mix of mistranslations, fabrications and self-published crackpots, and he's using these sources to replace material from numerous multiple independent sources.

There's always going to be a problem with articles like this, in that they rely on sources derived from other sources far removed from the original sources (unless we happen to have an editor floating around who speaks mediaeval Armenian); however, his pet theory (that Jerusalem was captured by the Mongols) would have been so significant, one would have to assume it would be chronicled in both Christian and Islamic histories; in this case, I think it is reasonable to assume that absence of evidence is evidence of absence.

Normally, this would just be a content dispute on a very low-traffic article that wouldn't warrant an Arbcom intervention. However, this saga is starting to have spin-off effects on the rest of Wikipedia which in my opinion warrants a high-level intervention by either Arbcom or Jimbo to put a stop to the whole mess. Not only is this dispute starting to be used by WR et al as anti-Wikipedia "evidence", but it's already derailed one RFA of Elonka's and (almost) derailed another*, and is starting to waste a lot of time of a lot of regulars who could be more profitably be doing something useful.iride scent 15:33, 28 January 2008 (UTC) reply

*I know I opposed both of Elonka's RFAs for other reasons, but they should not have failed for this reason and I freely admit I was wrong; the accusation of edit-warring was unfair in this case.

Statement by uninvolved TimVickers

Any editor who writes that another contributor has "attacked the Franco-Mongol alliance page" and complains about "hijacking of this page" is, in my opinion, suffering from serious ownership issues. This is not a simple content dispute, the behavior of the editors involved needs to be examined in detail. I recommend the committee accept this case. Tim Vickers ( talk) 18:02, 28 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by John Kenney

My familiarity, at this point, with what ArbCom does, exactly, is not all too clear, so I can't say directly whether Arbcom should accept this case. I do think that PHG is a serious problem editor, that his contributions are full of incredibly tendentious arguments, and that he holds ground with a tenacity that makes it difficult for normal editing practice to arrive at consensus in improving these articles. As Tim Vickers notes above, PHG has serious ownership issues with articles he creates, and, further, he is very difficult to reason with. Something certainly ought to be done about him. john k ( talk) 20:19, 28 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by Adam Bishop

My problem is not so much the content, just that there is too much of it, and that PHG has no idea how to read, study, or write history. It's embarrassing to read and is a perfect example of why Wikipedia is untrustworthy. But now it is too big to fix. If it were up to me, I would recommend deleting it and everything else that has been written about it, leaving it for a few months, and then restarting from scratch...but that's just me. I'm not sure this needs to be subjected to yet another Wikipedia process, but I agree with John that PHG is a huge problem. I know that PHG has been here for a long time and had worked on a large amount of articles on obscure topics, and that is usually a great thing, but after my experience here, I wonder whether those articles are as awful as this one is... Adam Bishop ( talk) 08:44, 29 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by uninvolved Pupster21

I agree completely with what Vickers said, I think this is a dispute with a little more than content involved. -- Pupster21 Talk To Me 13:13, 30 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by uninvolved Philwelch

Whether or not this case is accepted (I have no recommendations), I think it would be prudent for Arbcom to consider the firm distinction between content disputes and user conduct issues arising out of content disputes. From what I have gathered (but not personally confirmed), the article ownership and user conduct issues revolving around PHG in this case are reminiscent of an Arbcom case I was involved with some years ago: that of Copperchair. I advise all parties and administrators to review and consider that precedent. Philwelch ( talk) 19:14, 31 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by ElC

I'm a bit concerned with Elonka's third-person (addressed to others) usage of PHG's talk page today to showcase, at length, her criticism. [18] El_C 09:58, 4 February 2008 (UTC) reply

I've been criticized by Shell Kinney ("most unhelpful line to take" [etc.] [19]) for my statement here and on the talk page. [20] On further thought, I don't see what I have to retract. Just because it seems clear that PHG has already been found guilty, does not mean everything goes; that it is some sort of a free for all; that his talk page may be turned into an evidence page (a mere day or two before we have official evidence pages set up, anyway) without his explicit consent. Once we stop guarding the rights of the accused, it's all down hill from there. El_C 21:38, 4 February 2008 (UTC) reply
I've been asked to comment, as someone with professional historical training, on PHG's contributions. Well, I don't really have much to add that hasn't been said here already. Except, if the Arbitration Committee and others are able to bring together a panel of experts (not me, I specialize in 20th Century history), to not only look at this article, but also his prior contributions (including several FAs), that would be ideal. Because, clearly, certain methodological practices on his part do not add up. El_C 23:22, 4 February 2008 (UTC) reply
I'm a bit concerned with the lengths to which Elonka seems prepared to go to demonstrate to me that my objection is unfounded. [21] [22] All I'm saying it that using another user's talk page as an evidence page without securing their permission, oversteps user talk page etiquette. I hope that both Elonka, and her supporters, will be able to draw this conclusion, and move on. El_C 00:22, 5 February 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by uninvolved User:Alvestrand

I believe that PHG has clearly demonstrated behaviour that is harmful to Wikipedia. This type of editor (the one that seems to appear reasonable at a quick glance, but is pursuing a single point of view with total disregard to others', and is willing to spend considerable energy working around the rules intended to prevent such behaviour) is one of the most frustrating types of conflict that Wikipedia has to deal with.

Elonka deserves praise for having had the stamina to deal with this person, and PHG should be banned quickly and permanently. -- Alvestrand ( talk) 02:20, 14 February 2008 (UTC) reply

Motions

Request to amend prior case: Wikipedia:Requests for arbitration/Franco-Mongol alliance

Copied from Wikipedia:Requests for arbitration for archiving, initiator withdrew request. Daniel ( talk) 05:53, 24 March 2008 (UTC) reply


Request to amend prior case: Wikipedia:Requests for arbitration/Franco-Mongol alliance

Request for review: Wikipedia:Requests for arbitration/Franco-Mongol alliance

Report on use of sources

As noted in the present request for clarification, arbitrators examined closely the use of sources by the parties in this dispute. In summary we found PHG to be honest with sources to the limited extent that cited material is in reliable sources, and when a direct quote is given, it is indeed to be found in the source in the place mentioned. However, material is taken out of context, and frequently more weight is put on an imprecise wording than it will reasonably bear. The following is a summary of the examination of sources undertaken. Some of the more important sources were available to every member of the committee.

An extensive check found not a single source which could support the contention of "a regular alliance, complete with military cooperation". Taken together the sources are clear that the Mongols and Franks found themselves coincidentally both in the Middle East and both opposing the muslims, and so sometimes their objectives happened to coincide. However, attempts by the Mongols to form something more formal were rebuffed.
In the citation of Peter Jackson's "The Mongols and the West" we examined the contention that it contains a chapter about the Mongols as allies. It was noted that individual citations from within the chapter were scarce. On examination the chapter was found to tell the story of how Mongol attempts to form an alliance did not meet with success. It was confirmed that when Jackson reported that the Mongols liberated Jerusalem, this was as one among a list of false rumours spread at the time.
Attention was drawn to the citation in Jackson of the mediaeval British monk Matthew Paris claiming Bohemond V was a tributary to the Mongols in 1246. However Jackson's view of Matthew Paris is given on page 58 where he describes Matthew Paris as "a problematic source in view of the author's tendency to insert material of his own fashioning".
It was then noted that the claim that Bohemond VI may have ridden into Damascus with the Mongols is followed by Jackson rubbishing the rumour that Bohemond converted the Great Mosque in Damascus into a church, and that the same source is given for both assertions. It was considered that the word "may" was particularly important.
Sylvia Schein's "Gesta Dei per Mongolos" has been cited many times by participants in this dispute. The subtitle of the article is "The genesis of a non-event", the non-event in question being the recovery of the Holy Land by Mongols and its subsequent handing over to the Christians. We considered that citation of Schein on matters of detailed history ought not to disguise a text concentrating on rebutting its underlying thesis that no extensive collaboration between Mongols and Christians took place and certainly no alliance.
We considered the claim that Amin Maalouf is "extensive and specific on the alliance". Although arbitrators looked at a different translation (published by Al Saqi Books, 1984) so the page numbers were different, the relevant quotes were located.
We found that the opinion that Armenian Franks "sided with the Mongols" leaves out Maalouf's following opinion which was translated as follows: "But the prevalent impression in both East and West was that the Mongol campaign was a sort of holy war against Islam, a pendant to the Frankish expeditions". We considered the use of 'pendant' intriguing, possibly an example of mistranslation or possibly making the French preposition 'pendant' into a noun. If it was the latter then Maalouf's opinion would seem to be that the Mongols were having a go at the muslims during the same time that the Franks were there.
We noted accurate later references in Maalouf referring to Frankish rulers as being "allies" of Mongols, although a fuller reading supports the view that there was nothing formal in it. Our attention was drawn to the quotation that says the Hospitallers were "going as far as fighting at [the Mongols'] side", which we considered as implying that such a thing had never, or rarely, happened before.
A check of Zoe Oldenbourg's "The Crusades" to find the reference to "Alliance of Franks and Mongols against Qalawun" in 1280 discovered it to be a single entry in a timeline at the very end of a very long book. There was no mention in the text amplifying or explaining the reference, given that the focus of the book is before 1280.
It was noted that Peter Edbury, after mentioning an alliance and giving an example, followed this mention by stating "but there was no effective co-operation between Mongols and Christians". We considered that when Edbury says the Mongol attack coincided with Edward I's presence, the context of the book shows that the word "coincidence" is used in the sense of 'accidentally happening at the same time' rather than a deliberate choice.
In addition to checking sources cited, some other books not cited were checked to see if they helped shed light on the subject. J.J. Saunders' "Aspects of the Crusades" (University of Canterbury, 1962) had a chapter entitled "The Franks and the Mongols" which apppeared particularly relevant. The opening sentence of the chapter reads: "In the last years of Frankish Outremer the Christians were unexpectedly presented with a potential ally of enormous strength, and had the two joined forces, Islam might have been annihilated." The thrust of the chapter is along exactly the lines foreshadowed in its opening. At the end Saunders usefully summarises René Grousset. The summary is that Grousset reproves the Franks for not forming an alliance with the Mongols.

Arbitrators found this work provided a useful background before considering the user conduct issues raised by the case. Sam Blacketer ( talk) 13:45, 28 August 2008 (UTC) reply

Response by PHG

Thank you so much for taking the time to report for the first time the findings of the Arbcom regarding sources for this case. I am hugely releaved that you confirm that my references have always proved to be exact. I indeed never ever make up references (putting appart the occasional mistake, probably less than 1 in a 100). The central issue seems to be about my interpretation of sources (... or possibly portrayals of my interpretations). I would like to make a few comments on your analysis.

1) You claim that "not a single source which could support the contention of "a regular alliance, complete with military cooperation"". This is, respectfully, untrue. Many authors talk about the occurence of an alliance, with military cooperation, lasting years at a time, although they generally differ about its nature and timing.

  • Alain Demurger, in the 2002 Jacques de Molay biography The Last Templar, refers to it as the "Mongol alliance", which came to fruition through such events as the 1300 combined offensives between the Templars and the Mongols.(Demurger, p.147 "This expedition sealed by a concrete act the Mongol alliance"), "The strategy of the Mongol alliance in action(Demurger p.145) "De Molay led the fight for the reconquest of Jerusalem by relying on an alliance with the Mongols", back cover)
  • René Grousset L'épopée des Croisades: " Edward I renewed the precious Mongol Alliance" (in "L'épopée des Croisades", p.301), "The Franco-Mongol coalition, of which the Hospitallers were giving the example" (p.686)
  • Jean Richard in Histoire des Croisades, has the Franco-Mongol alliance start in earnest in the 1260s ("The sustained attacks of Baibars (...) rallied the Occidentals to this alliance, to which the Mongols also convinced the Byzantines to adhere", in Histoire des Croisades, p.453.) and continue on-and-off until it was strongly revived by Ghazan, to continue to have an influence until 1322 ("In 1297 Ghazan resumes his projects against Egypt (...) the Franco-Mongol cooperation had thus survived, to the loss of Acre by the Franks, and to the conversion of the khan to Islam. It was to remain one of the political factors of the policy of the Crusades, until the peace treaty with the Mamluks, which was concluded in 1322 by khan Abu Said." in Histoire des Croisades, p.468). He concludes on the many missed opportunities the alliance offered: "The Franco-Mongol alliance (...) seems to have been rich with missed opportunities" in "Histoire des Croisades", 1996, Jean Richard, p.469
  • Reuven Amitai-Preiss in Mongols and Mamluks writes that "Under Bohemond VI, the northern Franks maintained their unequivocal pro-Mongol alliance after 'Ayn Jālūt" (p.54). She also writes about the "Mongol-Frankish rapprochement" (Mamluk perceptions of the Mongol-Frankish rapprochement, MHR 7 (1992), p.50-65)
  • Dr. Martin Sicker, in The Islamic World Ascendancy (p.113): " Ket-Buqa and Bohemond VI fully appreciated the mutual advantages of the Frank-Mongol alliance".
  • Jean-Paul Roux, in Histoire de l'Empire Mongol ISBN  2213031649, has a chapter on the "Frank alliance" with the Mongols. He describes the continuation of this alliance until the time of Oljeitu: "The Occident was reassured that the Mongol alliance had not ceased with the conversion of the Khans to Islam. However, this alliance could not have ceased. The Mamelouks, through their repeated military actions, were becoming a strong enough danger to force Iran to maintain relations with Europe.", p.437
  • Claude Mutafian in Le Royaume Arménien de Cilicie describes "the Mongol alliance" entered into by the king of Armenia and the Franks of Antioch ("the King of Armenia decided to engage into the Mongol alliance, an intelligence that the Latin barons lacked, except for Antioch"), and "the Franco-Mongol collaboration" (Mutafian, p.55)
  • Zoe Oldenbourg in The Crusades mentions the 1280 "Alliance of Franks and Mongols against Qalawun". (Oldenbourg, "The Crusades", p.620)
  • Jonathan Riley-Smith mentions in his Atlas of the Crusades that in 1285 the Hospitallers of the north agreed to ally to the Mongols.("En 1285, Qalawun, nouveau sultan mamelouk, reprend l'offensive, qu'il dirige contre les Hospitaliers du nord, qui s'etaient montres prets a s'allier aux Mongols", Jonathan Riley-Smith, "Atlas des Croisades", p.114) He also describes Bohemond's alliance with the Mongols: "Bohemond VI of Antioch-Tripoli became their [the Mongol's] ally", in History of the Crusades, p.136
  • Peter Jackson in The Mongols and the West entitles a whole chapter "An ally against Islam: the Mongols in the Near East" and describes all the viscicitudes and the actual limited results of the Mongol alliance.
  • Claude Lebedel in Les Croisades describes the alliance of the Franks of Antioch and Tripoli with the Mongols: (in 1260) "the Frank barons refused an alliance with the Mongols, except for the Armenians and the Prince of Antioch and Tripoli".
  • Amin Maalouf in The Crusades through Arab eyes is extensive and specific on the alliance (page numbers refer to the French edition): “The Armenians, in the person of their king Hetoum, sided with the Mongols, as well as Prince Bohemond, his son-in-law. The Franks of Acre however adopted a position of neutrality favourable to the muslims” (p.261), “Bohemond of Antioch and Hethoum of Armenia, principal allies of the Mongols” (p.265), “Hulagu (…) still had enough strength to prevent the punishment of his allies [Bohemond and Hethoum]” (p.267), “..the Hospitallers. These monk-horsemen allied with the Mongols, going as far as fighting at their side in a new attempt at invasion in 1281."
  • Patrick Huchet in Les Templiers, une fabuleuse epopee relates that "Jacques de Molay, elected Master in 1292, associated himself with the Mongols to set up military operations on the island of Ruad (near Tortose)."
  • E. L. Skip Knox, Boise State University, in The Fall of Outremer online: "Some of the Crusader States wanted to form an alliance with the Mongols, while others weren't so sure. The allure of destroying Egypt was great, but the Mongols were pretty scary allies. In the end, Armenia and Antioch joined, along with the Templars and Hospitallers." also here: "A double army marched down from the north and east, crossing the Euphrates in 1281. Qalavun marched north and they met near Homs on 30 October. Once again, Christians fought alongside the Mongols (the Hospitallers and the Armenians this time)".

2) You further state that the Mongols and Franks encounters were only "coincidental". The reality is that the Franks and the Mongols actually exchanged letters of agreement to cooperate, and then effectively cooperated on the field, although in limited and rather ineffective ways.

3) Peter Jackson's "The Mongols and the West". I never claimed that Peter Jackson was an all-out proponent of the Mongol alliance. Here is what I wrote, and I think it is quite exact: " Peter Jackson in The Mongols and the West entitles a whole chapter "An ally against Islam: the Mongols in the Near East" and describes all the viscicitudes and the actual limited results of the Mongol alliance." Peter Jackson indeed mentions several cases of Franco-Mongol cooperation (the participation of the Hospitallers of Marqab in the Mongol campaign of 1280, p.168, the 800 Genoese who built ships for the Il-Khanate in Bagdad, p.169, the expedition of 1300: "more serious was the expedition led in 1300, in response to another appeal by Ghazan", p.171 etc...). I agree the phrase about Jerusalem is ambiguous "The Mongol liberation of the Holy City, of course, furnished the opportunity for Pope Boniface and Western chroniclers alike to castagate Latin princes", but it can honestly be taken both ways. The capture of Jerusalem by the Mongols in 1300 is also considered as fact by many authors (this is not just "a false rumor"): see Mongol raids into Palestine for references.

4) Matthew Paris: I hadn't noticed that Jackson considered him as a problematic source in page 58. Jackson nonetheless quotes Matthew for the Bohemond VI bit, so I guess he still gives some credence to it, and I don't think you can criticize me for mentioning the quote. Jackson is actually unambiguous about Bohemond VI's cooperation with the Mongols: "Prince Bohemond VI, perhaps under the influence of his father-in-law King Hetum of Lesser Armenia, waited upon Hulegu in person and wass allowed to reach a settlement that covered his country of Tropoli as well. He participated in the Mongol campaign against Balabakk, which he hoped to obtain from Hulegu", p.117. "His conciliatory attitude towards the Mongols had incurred a ban of excomunication by the Papal legate Thomas Agni di Lentino.", p.117.

5) "May have ridden into Damascus with the Mongol army": this is what I quoted and referenced, no more no less. The fact that "Jackson rubbished the rumour that Bohemond converted the Great Mosque in Damascus into a church" is a different fact. Nothing indicate that the source is common to these two assertions: they are separated by a ";", and the only thing that Jackson declares apocryphal is the story of the church.

6) Sylvia Schein: she does have an article entitled "The genesis of a non-event", but the "non-event" refers to the capture of Jerusalem and the rumors about it in the West. She nonetheless writes about the existence of a Franco-Mongol alliance: "They (the Templars, Hospitallers and crusaders of Cyprus) sailed to the island of Ruad, and, from that base, captured Tortosa, but retired a few days later when their allies (the Mongols) did not appear.", p.811. Schein even states in her 1991 book that "The conquest of Jerusalem by the Mongols was confirmed by Niccolo of Poggibonsi who noted (Libro d'Oltramare 1346-1350, ed. P. B. Bagatti (Jerusalem 1945), 53, 92) that the Mongols removed a gate from the Dome of the Rock and had it transferred to Damascus". Schein, 1991, p. 163. Schein, Sylvia (1991). Fideles Crucis: The Papacy, the West, and the Recovery of the Holy Land. Clarendon. ISBN  0198221657

7) Amin Maalouf . You discuss the meaning of Amin Maalouf's usage of the French word "pendant" and what he really means. The best translation would be "match"/"counterpart"/"parallel", and really has basically nothing to do with a discussion of timing (the adjective "pendant" and the noun "un pendant" have totally different meanings). Here is what Maalouf writes in the original French: "Les Armeniens , en la personne de leur roi Hetoum, prennent fait et cause pour les Mongols, ainsi que le Prince Bohemond. En revanche, les Franj d'acre adoptent une position de neutralite, plutot favorable aux Musulmans. Mais l'impression qui prevaut, aussi bien en Orient qu'en Occident, c'est que la campagne mongole est une sorte de guerre sainte qui fait pendant aux expeditions franques": i.e. "The Armenians, in the person of king Hethoum, sided with the Mongols, as well as Prince Bohemond. On the contrary, the Franks of Acre took a position of neutrality, rather favourable to the Muslims. But the prevailing fealing in the East and the West was that the Mongol campaign was a sort of Holy War which was a match/counterpart/parallel to the Frankish expeditions." I am sorry to see that your interpretation of the french is mistaken, and even more sorry to see that this can be used as a base for an arbitration.

8) "Rare occurence": I do not dispute, and have never disputed, that the instance of actual Franco-Mongol collaboration have always been few and rather unsuccesfull.

9) Zoe Oldenbourg's "1280 Alliance of Franks and Mongols against Qalawun". I do not dispute that Zoe Oldenbourg does not further elaborate on the alliance, and that this is a single mention in her book. She nonetheless mentions it in her timeline, and therefore shows she considers the event as an alliance. Whether the mention is short or long, is I think rather irrelevant, as long as we are truthfull to what she says.

10) Here is what Peter Edbury exactly says: he mentions the Franco-Mongol alliance in The Kingdom of Cyprus and the Crusades, 1191-1374 (p. 92) and gives as an example that "the Mongol staged an attack to coincide with the Frank offensive during the Crusade of Edward I" Google Books: this does not means at all a coincidence as you claim, this means that the Mongols deliberately organized both offensives to work together. Unfortunately, I am afraid you are the one who misreads and misrepresents the source.

11) I do not dispute your reading of J.J. Saunders' "Aspects of the Crusades" (University of Canterbury, 1962): this is not a source I have been using. You could read Grousset first hand to make an opinion, but he does say that there was an alliance, although it was not pursued far enough by the West ( "Louis IX and the Franco-Mongol alliance" (p521), "Only Edward I understood the value of the Mongol alliance" (p.653) "Edward I and the Mongol alliance" (p.653), "Edward I renewed the precious Mongol Alliance" (in "L'épopée des Croisades", p.301), "The Franco-Mongol coalition, of which the Hospitallers were giving the example" (p.686)).

I thank you for listing the Arbitrator "evidence" that have been relied on in my case, but I am sorry to say that I don't see much incriminating here. If the case of the Arbcom is such a weak one, I think it has to be cancelled. Regards PHG ( talk) 19:20, 28 August 2008 (UTC) reply

The point of this posting was not to hash out every individual source. I would draw your attention to the fact that the phrase "a regular alliance, complete with military cooperation" came from your full version of the article, and that now to state "that the instance of actual Franco-Mongol collaboration have always been few and rather unsuccesful" is to contradict it. Sam Blacketer ( talk) 20:02, 28 August 2008 (UTC) reply
Really? I am sorry, but "A regular alliance, complete with military cooperation, although instances of actual collaboration were rather few and unsuccesful" is I think a totally rational proposition, and this is all I have ever described in the Franco-Mongol alliance. An alliance or a military collaboration do not have to be "intense" or even "successful" to exist nonetheless. PHG ( talk) 20:37, 28 August 2008 (UTC) reply
    • PHG, we are not re-opening the case. We provided a fuller explanation as a courtesy to you and the other users that wanted to better underatand the issues we had with your use of sources. The best approach going forward is for you to continue to work with your mentor to write high quality articles. FloNight ♥♥♥ 20:44, 28 August 2008 (UTC) reply
Hello FloNight. Please understand. Sam has just proven that the Arbcom has actually never properly established the alleged misuse of sources on my part. Most of the cases described above are either mis-interpreted or based on mis-translations. I am not a native English speaker and do not have your powers of argumentation, but should I just stand still and endure such malpractice? It is still time to redress things and repair past wrongdoings. I will not bear any grudge to anybody, as I love the whole idea of Wikipedia much too much for that. Regards PHG ( talk) 20:57, 28 August 2008 (UTC) reply
PHG, in a word, Yes. (Endure it! -- for the time being.) I do not find your discussion, here, of the problems with sources asserted in the ArbComm report, to be offensive, but this isn't the place to resolve that. I will help you with this if you like. It will not be quick. The time may come when you will be vindicated, but that time isn't now, not through the present Appeal, unless some miracle happens. To my mind, the real problem was always civility, style of argument, and personality clashes, though I have not carefully investigated that, it simply seems highly likely. As I noted elsewhere (and you accepted), the filing of this Appeal and the arguments you gave here were impolitic, and learning how to avoid that is probably the main lesson you will derive from this period of restriction, and this will benefit both you and the project. I continue to believe that your work is truly extraordinary, and that the restrictions are damaging, but not seriously so, as long as your relationship with the community is not so disrupted that you withdraw and stop editing. Given that you can continue to create excellent articles, the medieval period's loss is the later period's gain. -- Abd ( talk) 03:01, 29 August 2008 (UTC) reply
PHG, you demonstrate again that you use the words "I have proved" (or "disproved" in this case) when all you have done is state your opinion. In both scholarship and on Wikipedia, it is wise to ask that someone other than yourself decide whether or not your statement can be considered "proof". Until your behaviour shows that you understand that, I'm happy that you're working under mentorship. -- Alvestrand ( talk) 05:13, 29 August 2008 (UTC) reply
Sorry Alvestand, it is not a matter of opinion, but a matter of facts. Just give me a few solid cases in which I would have misrepresented sources, and I will gladly apologize. Unfortunately, the above "Report on use of sources" mainly consists of obvious misinterpretations and translations mistakes. I am mortified that the Arbcom can base a ruling on such falty and inexact material. Regards PHG ( talk) 14:46, 30 August 2008 (UTC) reply
It is my view, and I think the view of other editors that look at your work, that your contributions do too much synthesizing and analysis of the original text and it makes it too close to original research. We need for the sources to state facts or opinions in a more direct manner. If you can not find sources that give a detail of information in a concise statement then it most likely does not belong in Wikipedia and is best left out. FloNight ♥♥♥ 15:00, 30 August 2008 (UTC) reply
Thank you FloNight for this answer. This is already quite different from just slapping me with "misrepresentation of sources" accusations based on a flawed "Report on use of sources" (above) and trying to put me into disrepute through an Arbcom ban. All my references have actually proven to be exact (Sam Blacketer, above), and I can reaffirm that I never misrepresent my sources (should it happen, this would only be accidental). Now I think what you are saying is that I often over-interpret my sources. I don't think this is the case, but I suspect where this opinion could come from. I like to write on little known subjects (I tend to think that being able to go into quite a lot of details on little-known event is one of the beauties of Wikipedia), which are often remote from the Anglo-Saxon world (hence little English literature)... just look at the article I created today Pierre de Milard, this little-known amazing French adventurer in Burma in the 18th century. This means I often have to rely on a multiciplicity of sources which, taken individually, often only have a few lines on the subject. I often have to patch these elements together to obtain the full, detailed, picture. I believe these subject are nonetheless highly encyclopedic and worthy of Wikipedia ( France-Japan relations (19th century), Indo-Greek kingdom etc... etc...). I am carefull however not to draw undue conclusions or to synthese this material unduly ("No original research Cs from a documented As and Bs": I basically only put together documented As, Bs and Cs). If there are accusations I would have done undue synthesis, I would like to see proof of it, but I strongly dispute it. In the meantime, it seems fairly obvious from the above that the case against me has been poorly defined and has been based on a multiplicity of falty accusations. In itself, even just the disclosure that the evidence is falty can be the basis of an appeal. All this taken into consideration, I am formally asking the Arbcom to now cancel its ruling against me. I am willing however to continue working with my mentor as it might reassure part of the community, and because I do enjoy and learn from the relationship. Best regards. PHG ( talk) 16:22, 30 August 2008 (UTC) reply
PHG, I'm not talking about the sources you cite, I'm talking about the way in which you use them. To wit:
  • Sam Blacketer says: "A check of Zoe Oldenbourg's "The Crusades" to find the reference to "Alliance of Franks and Mongols against Qalawun" in 1280 discovered it to be a single entry in a timeline at the very end of a very long book. There was no mention in the text amplifying or explaining the reference, given that the focus of the book is before 1280."
  • You say: "Zoe Oldenbourg in The Crusades mentions the 1280 "Alliance of Franks and Mongols against Qalawun". (Oldenbourg, "The Crusades", p.620)"
Your conclusion, after making similar remarks about Sam's other mentions: "Sam has just proven that the Arbcom has actually never properly established the alleged misuse of sources on my part." (FWIW, Amazon claims that the books has 672 pages. It's not established that you're talking about different pages.)
The last is your interpretation. It is obviously not Sam's interpretation. Neither of you can lay claim to knowing the whole truth and its correct interpretation - yet you act as if you do. That is the behaviour that I find reprehensible and irresponsible. -- Alvestrand ( talk) 12:38, 31 August 2008 (UTC) reply

Related AE thread

I have filed a thread requesting an extension of PHG's topic ban, at Wikipedia:Arbitration/Requests/Enforcement#Request concerning Per Honor et Gloria. -- El on ka 23:28, 14 February 2010 (UTC) reply

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Statement by Rlevse

I have full protected this page for two weeks. This seems to be a content dispute. It also appear Elonka did not use her admin bit in this issue and therefore is a regular editor in this matter. I posted a notice on the talk page to encourage peaceful resolution by all on the talk page.RlevseTalk 15:33, 26 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by Tariqabjotu

It's tough for me to say whether this case is a content dispute (which ArbCom doesn't usually address) or a conduct issue. However, I'm inclined to encourage the ArbCom to treat this as a conduct issue and look at it as such. I know many editors who have not been following this page will immediately declare it as a content dispute, but this has long outgrown that description. Nearly every other available avenue of dispute resolution, including a mediation which I led, has been tried and -- particularly in the mediation case -- failed miserably. The article and its talk page, for the most part, can speak for themselves; we see repeated accusations of ownership, a slow-motion edit war, assumptions of bad faith, continuous allegations that sources are being misrepresented -- all the elements that together make a resolution to the now five-month dispute impossible by any other means. Additionally, the actions of certain editors on the article have made the conditions for less involved editors that want to contribute to this article just about unbearable. We have a serious problem here, one that calls into question the integrity of this article, and perhaps dozens others. Investigating the sort of behavior alleged here is not unheard-of, and I request that ArbCom do so again. -- tariqabjotu 16:01, 26 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Just a quick reply to something Justin said: there is an Evidence phase within arbitration cases and this is not it. I assume Jehochman, and any others with specific allegations, will present such evidence when the appropriate time comes. -- tariqabjotu 18:32, 26 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by Justin

I, like User:Tariqabjotu am having difficulty deciding whether this issue is truly a content issue or a behavioral issue. However, I tend to lean towards the former and the evidence presented by User:Jehochman are all examples of content disputes. I'm extremely troubled by Jehochman's accusations (provided without dif's) of original research, and disagree with his assertion that there was a consensus to remove the content PHG added back into the article. I believe the Sadi Carnot arbitration isn't a particularly good analogy to this problem. The primary issue in that dispute was admins reverting each other, which hasn't been the case for this dispute.

I would also note, that I made a request for page protection for the article some time before User:PHG was given a 24 hour block. It was ignored until the block took place, and then denied after input from an involved admin. [1] I applaud User:Rlevse for the two week page protection, as I do believe this will resolve the issues at hand. I have absolute faith that all of the editors involved will work toward a consensus, and eventually that consensus will be reached (with or without User:PHG agreeing). I consider User:Jehochman's suggested remedy of indef blocking an editor with nearly 30,000 edits completely beyond reason. The page protection should offer more than enough time for involved editors to find a consensus version of the article. Justin chat 17:31, 26 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Response to Tariqabjotu: Granted, the ArbCom request doesn't require posting evidence, but an admin made some pretty extraordinary claims about a longstanding editor. By failing to give any evidence to his accusations, it appears that the motive was to poison the well. PHG's disruptions of the article in question were definitely inappropriate, but the sentence "publishing original research in Wikipedia, misrepresenting sources, and frustrating the deletion process and consensus by tendentiously reinstalling content that the community has decided to remove," is a fairly heavy-handed accusation. Jehochman followed up these accusations with a suggested remedy of indef blocking.
Given all of that, I think that since both the accusations and suggested remedy are fairly extreme, it would have been prudent to back up his accusations with evidence. Perhaps PHG has some behavioral problems outside of the article in question, and if that's the case, I'm sure the ArbCom members (and those of us that are unaware of other problems) would like to see evidence of it. In lieu of that, all of us are forced to assume Jehochman made his claims in bad faith or that PHG is indeed a bad faith editor as his claims assert. Neither case is preferable, hence my original point. Justin chat 20:58, 26 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by Shell Kinney

This case should most definately be accepted; while an underlying content dispute was the catalyst, the behaviors of the editors involved, in particular those of PHG, have spiraled out of the community's ability to control. For example:

  • Since the abortive FAC last September, numerous attempts have been made to improve the article; all significant changes (and even some minor ones) have been reverted by PHG [2] [3] [4] [5] [6] [7] [8] [9] who displays rather clear ownership issues [10].
  • The minority POV which was originally under dispute has now sprawled to more than 50 paragraphs in this article (even though the edit summary said "revert" [11]) and has been systematically inserted into scads of other articles creating more than a little bit of disruption that is requiring some rather serious cleanup efforts. (See this talk page post for the list of articles known to have been affected) The behavioral side of this issue stems from PHG is abusively edit warring, subverting myriad other articles and creating numerous POV forks in an attempt to "win" a content dispute.
  • PHG has also canvassed in an attempt to skew the consensus. [12] [13] [14] [15]
  • At least 6 other editors (myself included) are currently working productively on the article via talk page discussion; this was especially apparent during the 24 hours when PHG was blocked from interfering. These editors do not all agree, so this is not about one side winning the dispute.

The committee also needs to be aware that this dispute has attracted certain editors who, for one reason or another, wish to disrupt Elonka's activities on wiki such as editors from past or current Arb cases which she was involved in.

We're not asking ArbCom to intervene in a content dispute and, in fact, don't need any intervention since absent one highly disruptive editor, talk page discussions are resolving the content issues. However, I would strongly urge the Committee to review the clear behavioral problems that stemmed from this dispute. Shell babelfish 19:24, 26 January 2008 (UTC) reply

  • Yet again, PHG has started reverting the moment the article is unprotected. He is continuing to wikilawyer on the talk page and has started yet another misleading article which skews reliable sources to support his original thesis of a mongol alliance. At this point, it seems that he has no intention of engaging in dispute resolution to resolve the issues and is a classic example of a tendentious editor. If the committee is not going to review his behavior, I would strongly suggest a community ban from this topic area. Shell babelfish 14:17, 3 February 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by Orderinchaos

This seems to be yet another argument between those promoting fringe theories or views and those holding a mainstream view on historical issues. Elonka appears to have been trying to defend the NPOV on this and related articles against what seems to be some odd behaviour on the other side. The dispute has gone on so long now (several months) that it's way beyond whatever it started out being about and now is essentially an issue where consensus has failed, and it may well be that some of the individuals on one side never had any intention of accepting a consensus removed from their own view. I would agree with Jehochman and Shell Kinney's points above, and WJB's points below. Orderinchaos 23:19, 26 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by Daniel

I have deleted and protected Wikipedia:Requests for mediation/Franco-Mongol alliance, to protect the privileged nature of Mediation Committee mediation (see also Wikipedia:Arbitration policy#Hearing). Daniel ( talk) 03:06, 27 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by uninvolved Wjhonson

I am not an involved editor in this case. Wikibits of this situation have deposited themselves on various other pages and it peaked my interest to take a look. My rough estimate of the problem is that there was an initial failure to strive for consensus. The catalyst appears to be a complete re-write done in user space was plopped down in situ on top of a large established article. Frankly, were that to happen to an article I had largely contributed to, I would probably react in the same way as PHG. I do not find the approach initially taken in this case to be any remote attempt to strive for consensus. As the talk page clearly shows, many editors were against the rewrite and many were for it. However in that situation, normal consensus building would be to leave the status quo article as it. "Consensus decision-making is a decision-making process that not only seeks the agreement of most participants, but also to resolve or mitigate the objections of the minority to achieve the most agreeable decision. Consensus is usually defined as meaning both general agreement, and the process of getting to such agreement. Consensus decision-making is thus concerned primarily with that process." A more temperate approach, if the underlying issue were size would have been to fork the content. A more temperate approach, if the underlying issue were neutral-point-of-view would have been to take disputes to that Talk board. As well we have a reliable sources noticeboard, and a Talk page at original research. The approach taken in this case, has led, over many months, here. I think that's a fair indication, in light of the thousands of articles PHG has contributed to, that an ArbCom ruling would be effective. Wjhonson ( talk) 11:27, 27 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by uninvolved Durova

I've watched this conflict from afar since the Franco-Mongol alliance FAC of last summer. History is a field where autodidacts often have trouble due to unfamiliarity with priority of sources and historiography. A fair portion of books in the field have been written by untrained persons, some of which are excellent and some of which ought to be classified as humor or fantasy. The more faciful versions get repeated by other autodidact authors because they seem interesting, so absurdities sometimes gain the illusion of a pedigree among readers whose only means of guessing what constitutes mainstream history is to count the number of published books that advance a given hypothesis. This dynamic has manifested in any number of ways at Joan of Arc although the problem is less burdensome now that the article is featured (that Joan of Arc was a man, that she escaped execution, that she was the bastard daughter of the queen of France, etc. etc.). These editors aren't necessarily intending to violate WP:NPOV; they simply lack the knowledge base and critical training to determine what's fringe and what's mainstream.

The most serious assertion at this RFAR is misrepresentation of sources. I have seen no actual evidence to substanitate this. I request that the Committee accept this case to determine one way or the other. Durova Charge! 13:16, 27 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Having now seen evidence of misrepresentation of sources, I urge the Committee to not only accept this case but to rename it PHG. The problem is greater than one article and is largely - perhaps entirely - confined to his conduct. This editor has been conducting what Wikipedia euphemistically calls original research and what the rest of the world terms academic dishonesty. That is, he has been misusing source material in order to claim that recognized experts have asserted things which they cannot reasonably be supposed to have concluded - all tending toward a hypothesis that the Mongol Empire was considerably more powerful than mainstream historians concur that it was. When other editors call upon him to step back from this extreme and novel view, he forks articles to continue promulgating it; when they identify specific misuse of one source, he changes the subject to assertions about other sources. Nothing persuades him. I've seen Adam Bishop (an actual doctoral candidate in Medieval studies) attempt to advise PHG and get rebuffed.
PHG's volunteer efforts for Wikipedia are considerable and his efforts to improve the site appear to be sincere. He has contributed multiple featured articles on various subjects, yet his conduct in this matter leaves me questioning the integrity of his other contributions. When NPA Personality Theory passed GAC before getting deleted, thoughtful Wikipedians were shaken. Franco-Mongol alliance progressed as far as FAC before an editor recognized its flaws, which raises serious questions about the eight other articles that have become FAs under this editor's guidance. This is an arbitration-worthy request, and an important one. Durova Charge! 02:47, 31 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by Kafka Liz

After silently following the dispute at Franco-mongol alliance for some months, I eventually got involved over what I saw as persistent problematic behaviour on the part of PHG. My initial concern stemmed from the creation of a series of forks that PHG presented as good faith attempts to shorten the main article, but in reality served to preserve and expand upon strongly disputed sections. Further examination of the article and its history convinced me that PHG's activities were in violation of two fundamental areas of Wikipedia policy, namely WP:OWN and WP:NPOV (specifically WP:UNDUE). Attempts by myself and other editors to work with PHG regarding these concerns have been met first with polite stonewalling and evasive answers, then accusations of "being polemical and systematically banding together, [16]" and finally silence. I now see PHG resorting to various strategies of gaming the system: engaging in slow revert wars to evade 3RR, wikilawyering [17], and simply refusing to respond directly to the concerns of others.

I concur with the statements put forth by Jehochman, Shell Kinney, Orderinchaos, and WJBscribe, and believe Jehochman's reference to the Sadi Carnot case is particularly fitting to the case at hand. Kafka Liz ( talk) 17:32, 27 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by (fairly) uninvolved Iridescent

As someone who's spent an inordinate amount of time spatting with Elonka over this — and as a former occasional collaborator with Sadi Carnot (albeit not on the problematic articles) — I do agree that Arbcom ought to get involved here. After a lengthy argument with Elonka after I accused her of edit-warring on the issue, I actually went and checked the contributions of PHG more thoroughly, and on inspection he's the very model of a true problem editor. As with Sadi Carnot, he makes enough valid and high-quality contributions that they mask the problem edits, unless one goes looking for them. On the articles in question, his "sources" seem to be a mix of mistranslations, fabrications and self-published crackpots, and he's using these sources to replace material from numerous multiple independent sources.

There's always going to be a problem with articles like this, in that they rely on sources derived from other sources far removed from the original sources (unless we happen to have an editor floating around who speaks mediaeval Armenian); however, his pet theory (that Jerusalem was captured by the Mongols) would have been so significant, one would have to assume it would be chronicled in both Christian and Islamic histories; in this case, I think it is reasonable to assume that absence of evidence is evidence of absence.

Normally, this would just be a content dispute on a very low-traffic article that wouldn't warrant an Arbcom intervention. However, this saga is starting to have spin-off effects on the rest of Wikipedia which in my opinion warrants a high-level intervention by either Arbcom or Jimbo to put a stop to the whole mess. Not only is this dispute starting to be used by WR et al as anti-Wikipedia "evidence", but it's already derailed one RFA of Elonka's and (almost) derailed another*, and is starting to waste a lot of time of a lot of regulars who could be more profitably be doing something useful.iride scent 15:33, 28 January 2008 (UTC) reply

*I know I opposed both of Elonka's RFAs for other reasons, but they should not have failed for this reason and I freely admit I was wrong; the accusation of edit-warring was unfair in this case.

Statement by uninvolved TimVickers

Any editor who writes that another contributor has "attacked the Franco-Mongol alliance page" and complains about "hijacking of this page" is, in my opinion, suffering from serious ownership issues. This is not a simple content dispute, the behavior of the editors involved needs to be examined in detail. I recommend the committee accept this case. Tim Vickers ( talk) 18:02, 28 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by John Kenney

My familiarity, at this point, with what ArbCom does, exactly, is not all too clear, so I can't say directly whether Arbcom should accept this case. I do think that PHG is a serious problem editor, that his contributions are full of incredibly tendentious arguments, and that he holds ground with a tenacity that makes it difficult for normal editing practice to arrive at consensus in improving these articles. As Tim Vickers notes above, PHG has serious ownership issues with articles he creates, and, further, he is very difficult to reason with. Something certainly ought to be done about him. john k ( talk) 20:19, 28 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by Adam Bishop

My problem is not so much the content, just that there is too much of it, and that PHG has no idea how to read, study, or write history. It's embarrassing to read and is a perfect example of why Wikipedia is untrustworthy. But now it is too big to fix. If it were up to me, I would recommend deleting it and everything else that has been written about it, leaving it for a few months, and then restarting from scratch...but that's just me. I'm not sure this needs to be subjected to yet another Wikipedia process, but I agree with John that PHG is a huge problem. I know that PHG has been here for a long time and had worked on a large amount of articles on obscure topics, and that is usually a great thing, but after my experience here, I wonder whether those articles are as awful as this one is... Adam Bishop ( talk) 08:44, 29 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by uninvolved Pupster21

I agree completely with what Vickers said, I think this is a dispute with a little more than content involved. -- Pupster21 Talk To Me 13:13, 30 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by uninvolved Philwelch

Whether or not this case is accepted (I have no recommendations), I think it would be prudent for Arbcom to consider the firm distinction between content disputes and user conduct issues arising out of content disputes. From what I have gathered (but not personally confirmed), the article ownership and user conduct issues revolving around PHG in this case are reminiscent of an Arbcom case I was involved with some years ago: that of Copperchair. I advise all parties and administrators to review and consider that precedent. Philwelch ( talk) 19:14, 31 January 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by ElC

I'm a bit concerned with Elonka's third-person (addressed to others) usage of PHG's talk page today to showcase, at length, her criticism. [18] El_C 09:58, 4 February 2008 (UTC) reply

I've been criticized by Shell Kinney ("most unhelpful line to take" [etc.] [19]) for my statement here and on the talk page. [20] On further thought, I don't see what I have to retract. Just because it seems clear that PHG has already been found guilty, does not mean everything goes; that it is some sort of a free for all; that his talk page may be turned into an evidence page (a mere day or two before we have official evidence pages set up, anyway) without his explicit consent. Once we stop guarding the rights of the accused, it's all down hill from there. El_C 21:38, 4 February 2008 (UTC) reply
I've been asked to comment, as someone with professional historical training, on PHG's contributions. Well, I don't really have much to add that hasn't been said here already. Except, if the Arbitration Committee and others are able to bring together a panel of experts (not me, I specialize in 20th Century history), to not only look at this article, but also his prior contributions (including several FAs), that would be ideal. Because, clearly, certain methodological practices on his part do not add up. El_C 23:22, 4 February 2008 (UTC) reply
I'm a bit concerned with the lengths to which Elonka seems prepared to go to demonstrate to me that my objection is unfounded. [21] [22] All I'm saying it that using another user's talk page as an evidence page without securing their permission, oversteps user talk page etiquette. I hope that both Elonka, and her supporters, will be able to draw this conclusion, and move on. El_C 00:22, 5 February 2008 (UTC) reply

Statement by uninvolved User:Alvestrand

I believe that PHG has clearly demonstrated behaviour that is harmful to Wikipedia. This type of editor (the one that seems to appear reasonable at a quick glance, but is pursuing a single point of view with total disregard to others', and is willing to spend considerable energy working around the rules intended to prevent such behaviour) is one of the most frustrating types of conflict that Wikipedia has to deal with.

Elonka deserves praise for having had the stamina to deal with this person, and PHG should be banned quickly and permanently. -- Alvestrand ( talk) 02:20, 14 February 2008 (UTC) reply

Motions

Request to amend prior case: Wikipedia:Requests for arbitration/Franco-Mongol alliance

Copied from Wikipedia:Requests for arbitration for archiving, initiator withdrew request. Daniel ( talk) 05:53, 24 March 2008 (UTC) reply


Request to amend prior case: Wikipedia:Requests for arbitration/Franco-Mongol alliance

Request for review: Wikipedia:Requests for arbitration/Franco-Mongol alliance

Report on use of sources

As noted in the present request for clarification, arbitrators examined closely the use of sources by the parties in this dispute. In summary we found PHG to be honest with sources to the limited extent that cited material is in reliable sources, and when a direct quote is given, it is indeed to be found in the source in the place mentioned. However, material is taken out of context, and frequently more weight is put on an imprecise wording than it will reasonably bear. The following is a summary of the examination of sources undertaken. Some of the more important sources were available to every member of the committee.

An extensive check found not a single source which could support the contention of "a regular alliance, complete with military cooperation". Taken together the sources are clear that the Mongols and Franks found themselves coincidentally both in the Middle East and both opposing the muslims, and so sometimes their objectives happened to coincide. However, attempts by the Mongols to form something more formal were rebuffed.
In the citation of Peter Jackson's "The Mongols and the West" we examined the contention that it contains a chapter about the Mongols as allies. It was noted that individual citations from within the chapter were scarce. On examination the chapter was found to tell the story of how Mongol attempts to form an alliance did not meet with success. It was confirmed that when Jackson reported that the Mongols liberated Jerusalem, this was as one among a list of false rumours spread at the time.
Attention was drawn to the citation in Jackson of the mediaeval British monk Matthew Paris claiming Bohemond V was a tributary to the Mongols in 1246. However Jackson's view of Matthew Paris is given on page 58 where he describes Matthew Paris as "a problematic source in view of the author's tendency to insert material of his own fashioning".
It was then noted that the claim that Bohemond VI may have ridden into Damascus with the Mongols is followed by Jackson rubbishing the rumour that Bohemond converted the Great Mosque in Damascus into a church, and that the same source is given for both assertions. It was considered that the word "may" was particularly important.
Sylvia Schein's "Gesta Dei per Mongolos" has been cited many times by participants in this dispute. The subtitle of the article is "The genesis of a non-event", the non-event in question being the recovery of the Holy Land by Mongols and its subsequent handing over to the Christians. We considered that citation of Schein on matters of detailed history ought not to disguise a text concentrating on rebutting its underlying thesis that no extensive collaboration between Mongols and Christians took place and certainly no alliance.
We considered the claim that Amin Maalouf is "extensive and specific on the alliance". Although arbitrators looked at a different translation (published by Al Saqi Books, 1984) so the page numbers were different, the relevant quotes were located.
We found that the opinion that Armenian Franks "sided with the Mongols" leaves out Maalouf's following opinion which was translated as follows: "But the prevalent impression in both East and West was that the Mongol campaign was a sort of holy war against Islam, a pendant to the Frankish expeditions". We considered the use of 'pendant' intriguing, possibly an example of mistranslation or possibly making the French preposition 'pendant' into a noun. If it was the latter then Maalouf's opinion would seem to be that the Mongols were having a go at the muslims during the same time that the Franks were there.
We noted accurate later references in Maalouf referring to Frankish rulers as being "allies" of Mongols, although a fuller reading supports the view that there was nothing formal in it. Our attention was drawn to the quotation that says the Hospitallers were "going as far as fighting at [the Mongols'] side", which we considered as implying that such a thing had never, or rarely, happened before.
A check of Zoe Oldenbourg's "The Crusades" to find the reference to "Alliance of Franks and Mongols against Qalawun" in 1280 discovered it to be a single entry in a timeline at the very end of a very long book. There was no mention in the text amplifying or explaining the reference, given that the focus of the book is before 1280.
It was noted that Peter Edbury, after mentioning an alliance and giving an example, followed this mention by stating "but there was no effective co-operation between Mongols and Christians". We considered that when Edbury says the Mongol attack coincided with Edward I's presence, the context of the book shows that the word "coincidence" is used in the sense of 'accidentally happening at the same time' rather than a deliberate choice.
In addition to checking sources cited, some other books not cited were checked to see if they helped shed light on the subject. J.J. Saunders' "Aspects of the Crusades" (University of Canterbury, 1962) had a chapter entitled "The Franks and the Mongols" which apppeared particularly relevant. The opening sentence of the chapter reads: "In the last years of Frankish Outremer the Christians were unexpectedly presented with a potential ally of enormous strength, and had the two joined forces, Islam might have been annihilated." The thrust of the chapter is along exactly the lines foreshadowed in its opening. At the end Saunders usefully summarises René Grousset. The summary is that Grousset reproves the Franks for not forming an alliance with the Mongols.

Arbitrators found this work provided a useful background before considering the user conduct issues raised by the case. Sam Blacketer ( talk) 13:45, 28 August 2008 (UTC) reply

Response by PHG

Thank you so much for taking the time to report for the first time the findings of the Arbcom regarding sources for this case. I am hugely releaved that you confirm that my references have always proved to be exact. I indeed never ever make up references (putting appart the occasional mistake, probably less than 1 in a 100). The central issue seems to be about my interpretation of sources (... or possibly portrayals of my interpretations). I would like to make a few comments on your analysis.

1) You claim that "not a single source which could support the contention of "a regular alliance, complete with military cooperation"". This is, respectfully, untrue. Many authors talk about the occurence of an alliance, with military cooperation, lasting years at a time, although they generally differ about its nature and timing.

  • Alain Demurger, in the 2002 Jacques de Molay biography The Last Templar, refers to it as the "Mongol alliance", which came to fruition through such events as the 1300 combined offensives between the Templars and the Mongols.(Demurger, p.147 "This expedition sealed by a concrete act the Mongol alliance"), "The strategy of the Mongol alliance in action(Demurger p.145) "De Molay led the fight for the reconquest of Jerusalem by relying on an alliance with the Mongols", back cover)
  • René Grousset L'épopée des Croisades: " Edward I renewed the precious Mongol Alliance" (in "L'épopée des Croisades", p.301), "The Franco-Mongol coalition, of which the Hospitallers were giving the example" (p.686)
  • Jean Richard in Histoire des Croisades, has the Franco-Mongol alliance start in earnest in the 1260s ("The sustained attacks of Baibars (...) rallied the Occidentals to this alliance, to which the Mongols also convinced the Byzantines to adhere", in Histoire des Croisades, p.453.) and continue on-and-off until it was strongly revived by Ghazan, to continue to have an influence until 1322 ("In 1297 Ghazan resumes his projects against Egypt (...) the Franco-Mongol cooperation had thus survived, to the loss of Acre by the Franks, and to the conversion of the khan to Islam. It was to remain one of the political factors of the policy of the Crusades, until the peace treaty with the Mamluks, which was concluded in 1322 by khan Abu Said." in Histoire des Croisades, p.468). He concludes on the many missed opportunities the alliance offered: "The Franco-Mongol alliance (...) seems to have been rich with missed opportunities" in "Histoire des Croisades", 1996, Jean Richard, p.469
  • Reuven Amitai-Preiss in Mongols and Mamluks writes that "Under Bohemond VI, the northern Franks maintained their unequivocal pro-Mongol alliance after 'Ayn Jālūt" (p.54). She also writes about the "Mongol-Frankish rapprochement" (Mamluk perceptions of the Mongol-Frankish rapprochement, MHR 7 (1992), p.50-65)
  • Dr. Martin Sicker, in The Islamic World Ascendancy (p.113): " Ket-Buqa and Bohemond VI fully appreciated the mutual advantages of the Frank-Mongol alliance".
  • Jean-Paul Roux, in Histoire de l'Empire Mongol ISBN  2213031649, has a chapter on the "Frank alliance" with the Mongols. He describes the continuation of this alliance until the time of Oljeitu: "The Occident was reassured that the Mongol alliance had not ceased with the conversion of the Khans to Islam. However, this alliance could not have ceased. The Mamelouks, through their repeated military actions, were becoming a strong enough danger to force Iran to maintain relations with Europe.", p.437
  • Claude Mutafian in Le Royaume Arménien de Cilicie describes "the Mongol alliance" entered into by the king of Armenia and the Franks of Antioch ("the King of Armenia decided to engage into the Mongol alliance, an intelligence that the Latin barons lacked, except for Antioch"), and "the Franco-Mongol collaboration" (Mutafian, p.55)
  • Zoe Oldenbourg in The Crusades mentions the 1280 "Alliance of Franks and Mongols against Qalawun". (Oldenbourg, "The Crusades", p.620)
  • Jonathan Riley-Smith mentions in his Atlas of the Crusades that in 1285 the Hospitallers of the north agreed to ally to the Mongols.("En 1285, Qalawun, nouveau sultan mamelouk, reprend l'offensive, qu'il dirige contre les Hospitaliers du nord, qui s'etaient montres prets a s'allier aux Mongols", Jonathan Riley-Smith, "Atlas des Croisades", p.114) He also describes Bohemond's alliance with the Mongols: "Bohemond VI of Antioch-Tripoli became their [the Mongol's] ally", in History of the Crusades, p.136
  • Peter Jackson in The Mongols and the West entitles a whole chapter "An ally against Islam: the Mongols in the Near East" and describes all the viscicitudes and the actual limited results of the Mongol alliance.
  • Claude Lebedel in Les Croisades describes the alliance of the Franks of Antioch and Tripoli with the Mongols: (in 1260) "the Frank barons refused an alliance with the Mongols, except for the Armenians and the Prince of Antioch and Tripoli".
  • Amin Maalouf in The Crusades through Arab eyes is extensive and specific on the alliance (page numbers refer to the French edition): “The Armenians, in the person of their king Hetoum, sided with the Mongols, as well as Prince Bohemond, his son-in-law. The Franks of Acre however adopted a position of neutrality favourable to the muslims” (p.261), “Bohemond of Antioch and Hethoum of Armenia, principal allies of the Mongols” (p.265), “Hulagu (…) still had enough strength to prevent the punishment of his allies [Bohemond and Hethoum]” (p.267), “..the Hospitallers. These monk-horsemen allied with the Mongols, going as far as fighting at their side in a new attempt at invasion in 1281."
  • Patrick Huchet in Les Templiers, une fabuleuse epopee relates that "Jacques de Molay, elected Master in 1292, associated himself with the Mongols to set up military operations on the island of Ruad (near Tortose)."
  • E. L. Skip Knox, Boise State University, in The Fall of Outremer online: "Some of the Crusader States wanted to form an alliance with the Mongols, while others weren't so sure. The allure of destroying Egypt was great, but the Mongols were pretty scary allies. In the end, Armenia and Antioch joined, along with the Templars and Hospitallers." also here: "A double army marched down from the north and east, crossing the Euphrates in 1281. Qalavun marched north and they met near Homs on 30 October. Once again, Christians fought alongside the Mongols (the Hospitallers and the Armenians this time)".

2) You further state that the Mongols and Franks encounters were only "coincidental". The reality is that the Franks and the Mongols actually exchanged letters of agreement to cooperate, and then effectively cooperated on the field, although in limited and rather ineffective ways.

3) Peter Jackson's "The Mongols and the West". I never claimed that Peter Jackson was an all-out proponent of the Mongol alliance. Here is what I wrote, and I think it is quite exact: " Peter Jackson in The Mongols and the West entitles a whole chapter "An ally against Islam: the Mongols in the Near East" and describes all the viscicitudes and the actual limited results of the Mongol alliance." Peter Jackson indeed mentions several cases of Franco-Mongol cooperation (the participation of the Hospitallers of Marqab in the Mongol campaign of 1280, p.168, the 800 Genoese who built ships for the Il-Khanate in Bagdad, p.169, the expedition of 1300: "more serious was the expedition led in 1300, in response to another appeal by Ghazan", p.171 etc...). I agree the phrase about Jerusalem is ambiguous "The Mongol liberation of the Holy City, of course, furnished the opportunity for Pope Boniface and Western chroniclers alike to castagate Latin princes", but it can honestly be taken both ways. The capture of Jerusalem by the Mongols in 1300 is also considered as fact by many authors (this is not just "a false rumor"): see Mongol raids into Palestine for references.

4) Matthew Paris: I hadn't noticed that Jackson considered him as a problematic source in page 58. Jackson nonetheless quotes Matthew for the Bohemond VI bit, so I guess he still gives some credence to it, and I don't think you can criticize me for mentioning the quote. Jackson is actually unambiguous about Bohemond VI's cooperation with the Mongols: "Prince Bohemond VI, perhaps under the influence of his father-in-law King Hetum of Lesser Armenia, waited upon Hulegu in person and wass allowed to reach a settlement that covered his country of Tropoli as well. He participated in the Mongol campaign against Balabakk, which he hoped to obtain from Hulegu", p.117. "His conciliatory attitude towards the Mongols had incurred a ban of excomunication by the Papal legate Thomas Agni di Lentino.", p.117.

5) "May have ridden into Damascus with the Mongol army": this is what I quoted and referenced, no more no less. The fact that "Jackson rubbished the rumour that Bohemond converted the Great Mosque in Damascus into a church" is a different fact. Nothing indicate that the source is common to these two assertions: they are separated by a ";", and the only thing that Jackson declares apocryphal is the story of the church.

6) Sylvia Schein: she does have an article entitled "The genesis of a non-event", but the "non-event" refers to the capture of Jerusalem and the rumors about it in the West. She nonetheless writes about the existence of a Franco-Mongol alliance: "They (the Templars, Hospitallers and crusaders of Cyprus) sailed to the island of Ruad, and, from that base, captured Tortosa, but retired a few days later when their allies (the Mongols) did not appear.", p.811. Schein even states in her 1991 book that "The conquest of Jerusalem by the Mongols was confirmed by Niccolo of Poggibonsi who noted (Libro d'Oltramare 1346-1350, ed. P. B. Bagatti (Jerusalem 1945), 53, 92) that the Mongols removed a gate from the Dome of the Rock and had it transferred to Damascus". Schein, 1991, p. 163. Schein, Sylvia (1991). Fideles Crucis: The Papacy, the West, and the Recovery of the Holy Land. Clarendon. ISBN  0198221657

7) Amin Maalouf . You discuss the meaning of Amin Maalouf's usage of the French word "pendant" and what he really means. The best translation would be "match"/"counterpart"/"parallel", and really has basically nothing to do with a discussion of timing (the adjective "pendant" and the noun "un pendant" have totally different meanings). Here is what Maalouf writes in the original French: "Les Armeniens , en la personne de leur roi Hetoum, prennent fait et cause pour les Mongols, ainsi que le Prince Bohemond. En revanche, les Franj d'acre adoptent une position de neutralite, plutot favorable aux Musulmans. Mais l'impression qui prevaut, aussi bien en Orient qu'en Occident, c'est que la campagne mongole est une sorte de guerre sainte qui fait pendant aux expeditions franques": i.e. "The Armenians, in the person of king Hethoum, sided with the Mongols, as well as Prince Bohemond. On the contrary, the Franks of Acre took a position of neutrality, rather favourable to the Muslims. But the prevailing fealing in the East and the West was that the Mongol campaign was a sort of Holy War which was a match/counterpart/parallel to the Frankish expeditions." I am sorry to see that your interpretation of the french is mistaken, and even more sorry to see that this can be used as a base for an arbitration.

8) "Rare occurence": I do not dispute, and have never disputed, that the instance of actual Franco-Mongol collaboration have always been few and rather unsuccesfull.

9) Zoe Oldenbourg's "1280 Alliance of Franks and Mongols against Qalawun". I do not dispute that Zoe Oldenbourg does not further elaborate on the alliance, and that this is a single mention in her book. She nonetheless mentions it in her timeline, and therefore shows she considers the event as an alliance. Whether the mention is short or long, is I think rather irrelevant, as long as we are truthfull to what she says.

10) Here is what Peter Edbury exactly says: he mentions the Franco-Mongol alliance in The Kingdom of Cyprus and the Crusades, 1191-1374 (p. 92) and gives as an example that "the Mongol staged an attack to coincide with the Frank offensive during the Crusade of Edward I" Google Books: this does not means at all a coincidence as you claim, this means that the Mongols deliberately organized both offensives to work together. Unfortunately, I am afraid you are the one who misreads and misrepresents the source.

11) I do not dispute your reading of J.J. Saunders' "Aspects of the Crusades" (University of Canterbury, 1962): this is not a source I have been using. You could read Grousset first hand to make an opinion, but he does say that there was an alliance, although it was not pursued far enough by the West ( "Louis IX and the Franco-Mongol alliance" (p521), "Only Edward I understood the value of the Mongol alliance" (p.653) "Edward I and the Mongol alliance" (p.653), "Edward I renewed the precious Mongol Alliance" (in "L'épopée des Croisades", p.301), "The Franco-Mongol coalition, of which the Hospitallers were giving the example" (p.686)).

I thank you for listing the Arbitrator "evidence" that have been relied on in my case, but I am sorry to say that I don't see much incriminating here. If the case of the Arbcom is such a weak one, I think it has to be cancelled. Regards PHG ( talk) 19:20, 28 August 2008 (UTC) reply

The point of this posting was not to hash out every individual source. I would draw your attention to the fact that the phrase "a regular alliance, complete with military cooperation" came from your full version of the article, and that now to state "that the instance of actual Franco-Mongol collaboration have always been few and rather unsuccesful" is to contradict it. Sam Blacketer ( talk) 20:02, 28 August 2008 (UTC) reply
Really? I am sorry, but "A regular alliance, complete with military cooperation, although instances of actual collaboration were rather few and unsuccesful" is I think a totally rational proposition, and this is all I have ever described in the Franco-Mongol alliance. An alliance or a military collaboration do not have to be "intense" or even "successful" to exist nonetheless. PHG ( talk) 20:37, 28 August 2008 (UTC) reply
    • PHG, we are not re-opening the case. We provided a fuller explanation as a courtesy to you and the other users that wanted to better underatand the issues we had with your use of sources. The best approach going forward is for you to continue to work with your mentor to write high quality articles. FloNight ♥♥♥ 20:44, 28 August 2008 (UTC) reply
Hello FloNight. Please understand. Sam has just proven that the Arbcom has actually never properly established the alleged misuse of sources on my part. Most of the cases described above are either mis-interpreted or based on mis-translations. I am not a native English speaker and do not have your powers of argumentation, but should I just stand still and endure such malpractice? It is still time to redress things and repair past wrongdoings. I will not bear any grudge to anybody, as I love the whole idea of Wikipedia much too much for that. Regards PHG ( talk) 20:57, 28 August 2008 (UTC) reply
PHG, in a word, Yes. (Endure it! -- for the time being.) I do not find your discussion, here, of the problems with sources asserted in the ArbComm report, to be offensive, but this isn't the place to resolve that. I will help you with this if you like. It will not be quick. The time may come when you will be vindicated, but that time isn't now, not through the present Appeal, unless some miracle happens. To my mind, the real problem was always civility, style of argument, and personality clashes, though I have not carefully investigated that, it simply seems highly likely. As I noted elsewhere (and you accepted), the filing of this Appeal and the arguments you gave here were impolitic, and learning how to avoid that is probably the main lesson you will derive from this period of restriction, and this will benefit both you and the project. I continue to believe that your work is truly extraordinary, and that the restrictions are damaging, but not seriously so, as long as your relationship with the community is not so disrupted that you withdraw and stop editing. Given that you can continue to create excellent articles, the medieval period's loss is the later period's gain. -- Abd ( talk) 03:01, 29 August 2008 (UTC) reply
PHG, you demonstrate again that you use the words "I have proved" (or "disproved" in this case) when all you have done is state your opinion. In both scholarship and on Wikipedia, it is wise to ask that someone other than yourself decide whether or not your statement can be considered "proof". Until your behaviour shows that you understand that, I'm happy that you're working under mentorship. -- Alvestrand ( talk) 05:13, 29 August 2008 (UTC) reply
Sorry Alvestand, it is not a matter of opinion, but a matter of facts. Just give me a few solid cases in which I would have misrepresented sources, and I will gladly apologize. Unfortunately, the above "Report on use of sources" mainly consists of obvious misinterpretations and translations mistakes. I am mortified that the Arbcom can base a ruling on such falty and inexact material. Regards PHG ( talk) 14:46, 30 August 2008 (UTC) reply
It is my view, and I think the view of other editors that look at your work, that your contributions do too much synthesizing and analysis of the original text and it makes it too close to original research. We need for the sources to state facts or opinions in a more direct manner. If you can not find sources that give a detail of information in a concise statement then it most likely does not belong in Wikipedia and is best left out. FloNight ♥♥♥ 15:00, 30 August 2008 (UTC) reply
Thank you FloNight for this answer. This is already quite different from just slapping me with "misrepresentation of sources" accusations based on a flawed "Report on use of sources" (above) and trying to put me into disrepute through an Arbcom ban. All my references have actually proven to be exact (Sam Blacketer, above), and I can reaffirm that I never misrepresent my sources (should it happen, this would only be accidental). Now I think what you are saying is that I often over-interpret my sources. I don't think this is the case, but I suspect where this opinion could come from. I like to write on little known subjects (I tend to think that being able to go into quite a lot of details on little-known event is one of the beauties of Wikipedia), which are often remote from the Anglo-Saxon world (hence little English literature)... just look at the article I created today Pierre de Milard, this little-known amazing French adventurer in Burma in the 18th century. This means I often have to rely on a multiciplicity of sources which, taken individually, often only have a few lines on the subject. I often have to patch these elements together to obtain the full, detailed, picture. I believe these subject are nonetheless highly encyclopedic and worthy of Wikipedia ( France-Japan relations (19th century), Indo-Greek kingdom etc... etc...). I am carefull however not to draw undue conclusions or to synthese this material unduly ("No original research Cs from a documented As and Bs": I basically only put together documented As, Bs and Cs). If there are accusations I would have done undue synthesis, I would like to see proof of it, but I strongly dispute it. In the meantime, it seems fairly obvious from the above that the case against me has been poorly defined and has been based on a multiplicity of falty accusations. In itself, even just the disclosure that the evidence is falty can be the basis of an appeal. All this taken into consideration, I am formally asking the Arbcom to now cancel its ruling against me. I am willing however to continue working with my mentor as it might reassure part of the community, and because I do enjoy and learn from the relationship. Best regards. PHG ( talk) 16:22, 30 August 2008 (UTC) reply
PHG, I'm not talking about the sources you cite, I'm talking about the way in which you use them. To wit:
  • Sam Blacketer says: "A check of Zoe Oldenbourg's "The Crusades" to find the reference to "Alliance of Franks and Mongols against Qalawun" in 1280 discovered it to be a single entry in a timeline at the very end of a very long book. There was no mention in the text amplifying or explaining the reference, given that the focus of the book is before 1280."
  • You say: "Zoe Oldenbourg in The Crusades mentions the 1280 "Alliance of Franks and Mongols against Qalawun". (Oldenbourg, "The Crusades", p.620)"
Your conclusion, after making similar remarks about Sam's other mentions: "Sam has just proven that the Arbcom has actually never properly established the alleged misuse of sources on my part." (FWIW, Amazon claims that the books has 672 pages. It's not established that you're talking about different pages.)
The last is your interpretation. It is obviously not Sam's interpretation. Neither of you can lay claim to knowing the whole truth and its correct interpretation - yet you act as if you do. That is the behaviour that I find reprehensible and irresponsible. -- Alvestrand ( talk) 12:38, 31 August 2008 (UTC) reply

Related AE thread

I have filed a thread requesting an extension of PHG's topic ban, at Wikipedia:Arbitration/Requests/Enforcement#Request concerning Per Honor et Gloria. -- El on ka 23:28, 14 February 2010 (UTC) reply


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