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Following the recently archived FA nomination, I'd like to continue the unfinished discussions about the quality of the article and get some feedback in a informal setting on the latest changes I made, so that I can make another nomination later this year (assuming Knittel et al. or Van Goethem et al. doesn't publish another paper on XSLeaks at the 2024 conferences that requires a rewrite). @ JimKillock and TechnoSquirrel69: I've addressed some of the issues surrounding the lede. (hemingwayapp.com gives me a Grade 13. OK. for the lede) Let me know if I can make any further changes.
Thanks, Sohom ( talk) 03:27, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
@ JimKillock and TechnoSquirrel69: Fix ping Sohom ( talk) 03:28, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
As mentioned earlier, I intend to complete the review of the prose I started earlier this week. Expect some comments in the next few days! — TechnoSquirrel69 ( sigh) 03:43, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
Sorry for the delay; I've been pulled in several different directions these last couple weeks. Alright, it's going to take a while to get through a full prose review, but let's take this section by section or I'm never going to start anything. On the chopping block today is § Defences.
I'll be back for more. Feel free to respond to my comments in line. By the way, if you have some spare time, I'd appreciate any comments at this FAC or the other one. Let me know if you have any questions! — TechnoSquirrel69 ( sigh) 06:34, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
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Following the recently archived FA nomination, I'd like to continue the unfinished discussions about the quality of the article and get some feedback in a informal setting on the latest changes I made, so that I can make another nomination later this year (assuming Knittel et al. or Van Goethem et al. doesn't publish another paper on XSLeaks at the 2024 conferences that requires a rewrite). @ JimKillock and TechnoSquirrel69: I've addressed some of the issues surrounding the lede. (hemingwayapp.com gives me a Grade 13. OK. for the lede) Let me know if I can make any further changes.
Thanks, Sohom ( talk) 03:27, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
@ JimKillock and TechnoSquirrel69: Fix ping Sohom ( talk) 03:28, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
As mentioned earlier, I intend to complete the review of the prose I started earlier this week. Expect some comments in the next few days! — TechnoSquirrel69 ( sigh) 03:43, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
Sorry for the delay; I've been pulled in several different directions these last couple weeks. Alright, it's going to take a while to get through a full prose review, but let's take this section by section or I'm never going to start anything. On the chopping block today is § Defences.
I'll be back for more. Feel free to respond to my comments in line. By the way, if you have some spare time, I'd appreciate any comments at this FAC or the other one. Let me know if you have any questions! — TechnoSquirrel69 ( sigh) 06:34, 10 April 2024 (UTC)