The article was promoted by Karanacs 16:56, 30 June 2009 [1].
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Article is about one of the most famous matchfixing/bribery related scandals in cricket, involving Mark Waugh and Shane Warne, who had dealing with bookmakers. Article has been copyedited by Mattisse and myself. The article is very accessible to the layperson as it does not require knowledge of the laws of cricket etc :) YellowMonkey ( cricket calendar poll!) paid editing=POV 03:32, 24 June 2009 (UTC) reply
Looks good. Nice choice of topic. I'd suggest two things: one is that the "two players" needs to be clarified in the Lead (first use of the term comes after mention of three cricketers). The other is that the Lead is too short. Easy to expand using some of the content from the "Later inquiries" section, that's currently missing. -- Dweller ( talk) 12:42, 24 June 2009 (UTC) reply
The article was promoted by Karanacs 16:56, 30 June 2009 [1].
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Article is about one of the most famous matchfixing/bribery related scandals in cricket, involving Mark Waugh and Shane Warne, who had dealing with bookmakers. Article has been copyedited by Mattisse and myself. The article is very accessible to the layperson as it does not require knowledge of the laws of cricket etc :) YellowMonkey ( cricket calendar poll!) paid editing=POV 03:32, 24 June 2009 (UTC) reply
Looks good. Nice choice of topic. I'd suggest two things: one is that the "two players" needs to be clarified in the Lead (first use of the term comes after mention of three cricketers). The other is that the Lead is too short. Easy to expand using some of the content from the "Later inquiries" section, that's currently missing. -- Dweller ( talk) 12:42, 24 June 2009 (UTC) reply