The article was promoted by Karanacs 21:39, 12 February 2010 [1].
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I am nominating here Flower, an indie game for the PlayStation 3 that involves flying flower petals across a landscape, enlivening and brightening the world around you. It's had a successful GAN, I've tried to copy-edit it with a fine-tooth comb, I've checked external links and dabs, and all of the images have fair-use rationales and alt text. The game itself is only an hour long, but I think that the article gives a fair treatment of everything about it. -- Pres N 20:24, 26 January 2010 (UTC) reply
Very nice article! As you say, dabs and external links check out, and the fair-use rationales all seem to be fine. I'm not exactly an expert on alt text, but it looks like you've got that covered too! I think that the prose could do with one polish in places; I did a minor copyedit to the lead so I apologize if I changed any meanings, but the sentence beginning with Flying towards flowers causes petals to follow the lead petal strikes me as being a little off; I'm not sure if its just me, but that sentence I think could do with a quick re-write/polish. Insofar as I can tell (game articles aren't really my speciality) all of the sources check out (though you might want to
archive the online sources in case they are taken down later; use |archiveurl= and |archivedate=). Save for
criterian 1a) (the prose), I think that it meets all of the requirements. My only quibble (and a very minor one at that) is that I think Development should be above Gameplay (if the Wikiproject generally has Gameplay above Development, then I'll be happy to strike that)? Switch that and a prose polish and I'll be happy to support.
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Source comments Everything fine. RB88 ( T) 00:25, 5 February 2010 (UTC) reply
Comments leaning to support:
Otherwise good, and made me wish i had an opportunity to check it out! hamiltonstone ( talk) 22:45, 11 February 2010 (UTC) reply
The article was promoted by Karanacs 21:39, 12 February 2010 [1].
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I am nominating here Flower, an indie game for the PlayStation 3 that involves flying flower petals across a landscape, enlivening and brightening the world around you. It's had a successful GAN, I've tried to copy-edit it with a fine-tooth comb, I've checked external links and dabs, and all of the images have fair-use rationales and alt text. The game itself is only an hour long, but I think that the article gives a fair treatment of everything about it. -- Pres N 20:24, 26 January 2010 (UTC) reply
Very nice article! As you say, dabs and external links check out, and the fair-use rationales all seem to be fine. I'm not exactly an expert on alt text, but it looks like you've got that covered too! I think that the prose could do with one polish in places; I did a minor copyedit to the lead so I apologize if I changed any meanings, but the sentence beginning with Flying towards flowers causes petals to follow the lead petal strikes me as being a little off; I'm not sure if its just me, but that sentence I think could do with a quick re-write/polish. Insofar as I can tell (game articles aren't really my speciality) all of the sources check out (though you might want to
archive the online sources in case they are taken down later; use |archiveurl= and |archivedate=). Save for
criterian 1a) (the prose), I think that it meets all of the requirements. My only quibble (and a very minor one at that) is that I think Development should be above Gameplay (if the Wikiproject generally has Gameplay above Development, then I'll be happy to strike that)? Switch that and a prose polish and I'll be happy to support.
MelicansMatkin (
talk,
contributions) 05:44, 29 January 2010 (UTC)
reply
Source comments Everything fine. RB88 ( T) 00:25, 5 February 2010 (UTC) reply
Comments leaning to support:
Otherwise good, and made me wish i had an opportunity to check it out! hamiltonstone ( talk) 22:45, 11 February 2010 (UTC) reply