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I have added the dates Anna Buhigas played professional soccer in her inbox and I can't think of any additional improvements I could make since I have provided third person sources about her career. Dwanyewest ( talk) 00:08, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
Hello!
I have viewed, that my draft of the "Planforge" article was declined. Please review the draft again, as it is an exact translation of the german article "Planforge": https://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Planforge
Thus, I don't understand, how the draft could not be accepted, as the exact same german article I translated it from, already existed on wikipedia for a long time. Furthermore, as it is a translation, it would be wrong, if I now wrote it completely different than the german one, right?
Thank you and best regards Kristinak98 ( talk) 07:16, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
Thank you for your review. Could you please elaborate on the aspects in which the article needs enhancements for it to be approved? Pedropaulofb ( talk) 08:21, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
Trying to understand why the article was declined I tried to make it very similar to other book articles for example this: /info/en/?search=The_Heather_Blazing Edizengoff ( talk) 08:39, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
The novel received considerable critical acclaim, by its recognition at the Irish Book Awards in 2003 and its nomination for the prestigious International Dublin Literary Award., it should be followed by a citation to a reliable source that says, without confusion, that Oh yes! the novel truely received a critical acclaim by its recognition at the Irish Book Awards in 2003... and so on. It should not be exactly what the source states though, you should write what the source says in your own words. Also,
Notably, Alison Light from The Independent provided a commendable review, stating, "McGahern conjures the warmth and decency of working people without sentimentality.should be followed by a citation too, and so on.
I need a assistance to guide me to post a article. Digital.niteshsharma ( talk) 09:08, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
My submission was declined. The reviewer said "close, but not enough independent, significant coverage."
I would love some more detail on what coverage is needed. I thought the references provided were enough in number from multiple independent sources. Sirius Stella ( talk) 09:21, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
Hello, for the charts is it enough to cite the website that documents music placements, or do I need a reference to a chart position from a news source? Lastly, it looks like peacocking language was used early on but has been edited out - does there need to be any more tidying before this draft is resubmitted? 220.253.130.93 ( talk) 10:38, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
Why are sources I have picked arent reliable enough? To prove the books has won prized I have cited the prizes webisite. Regarding the plot sumarry I have cite an academic papper and a blog why isnt that enough? Edizengoff ( talk) 11:05, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
How many reference add to publish Quake Services page on Wikipedia. Talhashakeel374 ( talk) 12:12, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
I made my first Article on Wikipedia and want to contribute more on sample cooler topic. This topic is separate from "Steam and Water Analysis System" How can I move my draft Article to Publish it for all viewers ? I can contribute more on this topic. Kindly advice ASKanetkar ( talk) 13:08, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
I am confused about the reasoning behind references not being accepted. Yes, I added a couple of sources like https://www.yahoo.com/lifestyle/tagged/health/amsterdams-bynder-bringing-cloud-based-130000325.html and https://www.bynder.com/en/about-us/ that do not comply with being "secondary". However, I do not see what is wrong with sources like https://www.forrester.com/blogs/bynders-acquisition-of-webdam-for-49-million-will-force-big-players-to-innovate/ and https://martechseries.com/content/digi-asset-mgmt/bynder-announces-strategic-acquisition-webdam-49-1-million/ Could you clarify? Jbobbink ( talk) 14:58, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
Given the existence of plenty of other reporters with less accomplishments, it seems strange to have Suzanne Kianpour's career be denied and considered insignificant, especially given she's both listed in Wikipedia already under other BBC reporters with Wikipedia pages for themselves.
Here are examples offered below:
/info/en/?search=List_of_current_BBC_newsreaders_and_reporters
/info/en/?search=David_Willis_(journalist) /info/en/?search=Ben_Bland /info/en/?search=Kim_Ghattas /info/en/?search=Barbara_Plett_Usher /info/en/?search=Sophie_Long
These briefs for other reporters list less accomplishments than Kianpour, yet aren't denied. 65.215.95.162 ( talk) 15:48, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
Draft has been rejected multiple times and need help with next steps. The page was first rejected for not enough reliable sources. I added in references to make sure the information was well-supported, but the submission was then rejected for having too many sources tied to the subject (this made sense, I did not realize that press releases by related companies were not allowed). I then reworked the page to include information only from independent news outlets and it was just rejected again. I'm a bit unsure what to do next, as I feel like I've shown that Rosen is a notable Cleveland businessman. Can you help me with exactly what next steps to take? Thank you! 2600:1700:B880:5970:9E2:FAEA:8102:807 ( talk) 16:41, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
Hello, I try to work on the new version of my article about Bernhard Ruchti ( /info/en/?search=Draft:Bernhard_Ruchti). I understand sone of the concerns about the neutral point of view, I can easily fix this. However, I have two questions: - About the comment that is still appearing at the top that says: "This article may have been created or edited in return for undisclosed payments, a violation of Wikipedia's terms of use." This is not the case and I don't understand why this comment is appearing here, I have no personal relation with the person and I am not paid by him. I don't receive any incentive or anything else. What should I do (apart from the conversation I already had with your colleague) to have this sentence removed? - About the DOB: I was told that I should prove the DOB. Usually this musicians doesn't display his full DOB online (for example on his website there is only is year of birth) but I found it in a printed program when attending one of his concerts. Can I use a printed program as source of DOB? Also, how to quote it properly so that it is considered valid for Wikipedia? For example, when I look at other musicians' Wikipedia page such as András Schiff ( /info/en/?search=Andr%C3%A1s_Schiff) there is no reference after the DOB. Thank you for your help, Dkoltorcan Dkoltorcan ( talk) 17:06, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
I have a physical hard copy of a newspaper article in English and Odia language. I want to show it as a reference to prove the authenticity of the person in the Wikipedia. How can I use this physical newspaper cutouts. Please help. Saffiulla Muhammad ( talk) 18:27, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
Can you please help me create an articles about the biography of Georgios Dritsakos as a Lieutenant General of the Hellenic Air Force, a Lieutenant Colonel and Colonel of the Hellenic Air Force, and Adjutant to the President of the Hellenic Republic Constantinos Stephanopoulos? 108.21.67.83 ( talk) 18:35, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
I have tried to upload a well known term twice but you keep rejecting my artical. I am starting to think that you do not accept the fact that FeminISISm is real Ddllggpro ( talk) 21:09, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
This page was declined for submission. How can I improve the article so that it will be accepted the next time? Luc1239 ( talk) 22:05, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
Helllo! My draft about the magnet school called the Academies of Loudoun. It was rejected for lacking reliable sources. I'm confused about this for two reasons, the first is that many other articles in the same category and locale use the same sources I did. For example, in an article about a high school in the same district (Independence High School in Ashburn) uses sources that came from 6 different publishers, 4 of which I also cited.
Secondly, Wikipedia's reliable sources wiki states that "Similarly, the publisher's web site is likely to be reliable for the fact that the work exists". In my article, for example, I cite the school district's website that certain courses in fact are taught at the school. I frequently cited the school district's website, but only for things that were completely factual, like the population of the school.
Because of this, I'm having trouble finding a way to fix the reputability of my article, how can I do this? Melursus Mare ( talk) 23:19, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
I added real news source, could you please help me, how can make it live? Dubaiali ( talk) 23:31, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
This is my first attempt at creating an article, and I can't tell you how much I appreciate the fast feedback, but it looks like I'm going to need some hand holding because of my inexperience. Can you tell me if the primary weakness in the article is the references contained in the following sentences, or is it something else? Thank you!
Myrlie Evers-Williams who called the book “a treasure.”
Lee Smith has called The Queen of Palmyra "the most powerful and also the most lyrical novel about race, racism and denial in the American South since To Kill a Mockingbird," and Kirkus Reviews has described "Gwin's prose [as] profound and Faulknerian in tone." GonetotheDawgs ( talk) 23:35, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
Dear Sir, The article is for a film director and given authenticate news source. Could you help me please how would be the article live as it is declined. Should i change the article formate? Looking for your kind support Dubaiali ( talk) 23:46, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
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I have added the dates Anna Buhigas played professional soccer in her inbox and I can't think of any additional improvements I could make since I have provided third person sources about her career. Dwanyewest ( talk) 00:08, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
Hello!
I have viewed, that my draft of the "Planforge" article was declined. Please review the draft again, as it is an exact translation of the german article "Planforge": https://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Planforge
Thus, I don't understand, how the draft could not be accepted, as the exact same german article I translated it from, already existed on wikipedia for a long time. Furthermore, as it is a translation, it would be wrong, if I now wrote it completely different than the german one, right?
Thank you and best regards Kristinak98 ( talk) 07:16, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
Thank you for your review. Could you please elaborate on the aspects in which the article needs enhancements for it to be approved? Pedropaulofb ( talk) 08:21, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
Trying to understand why the article was declined I tried to make it very similar to other book articles for example this: /info/en/?search=The_Heather_Blazing Edizengoff ( talk) 08:39, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
The novel received considerable critical acclaim, by its recognition at the Irish Book Awards in 2003 and its nomination for the prestigious International Dublin Literary Award., it should be followed by a citation to a reliable source that says, without confusion, that Oh yes! the novel truely received a critical acclaim by its recognition at the Irish Book Awards in 2003... and so on. It should not be exactly what the source states though, you should write what the source says in your own words. Also,
Notably, Alison Light from The Independent provided a commendable review, stating, "McGahern conjures the warmth and decency of working people without sentimentality.should be followed by a citation too, and so on.
I need a assistance to guide me to post a article. Digital.niteshsharma ( talk) 09:08, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
My submission was declined. The reviewer said "close, but not enough independent, significant coverage."
I would love some more detail on what coverage is needed. I thought the references provided were enough in number from multiple independent sources. Sirius Stella ( talk) 09:21, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
Hello, for the charts is it enough to cite the website that documents music placements, or do I need a reference to a chart position from a news source? Lastly, it looks like peacocking language was used early on but has been edited out - does there need to be any more tidying before this draft is resubmitted? 220.253.130.93 ( talk) 10:38, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
Why are sources I have picked arent reliable enough? To prove the books has won prized I have cited the prizes webisite. Regarding the plot sumarry I have cite an academic papper and a blog why isnt that enough? Edizengoff ( talk) 11:05, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
How many reference add to publish Quake Services page on Wikipedia. Talhashakeel374 ( talk) 12:12, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
I made my first Article on Wikipedia and want to contribute more on sample cooler topic. This topic is separate from "Steam and Water Analysis System" How can I move my draft Article to Publish it for all viewers ? I can contribute more on this topic. Kindly advice ASKanetkar ( talk) 13:08, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
I am confused about the reasoning behind references not being accepted. Yes, I added a couple of sources like https://www.yahoo.com/lifestyle/tagged/health/amsterdams-bynder-bringing-cloud-based-130000325.html and https://www.bynder.com/en/about-us/ that do not comply with being "secondary". However, I do not see what is wrong with sources like https://www.forrester.com/blogs/bynders-acquisition-of-webdam-for-49-million-will-force-big-players-to-innovate/ and https://martechseries.com/content/digi-asset-mgmt/bynder-announces-strategic-acquisition-webdam-49-1-million/ Could you clarify? Jbobbink ( talk) 14:58, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
Given the existence of plenty of other reporters with less accomplishments, it seems strange to have Suzanne Kianpour's career be denied and considered insignificant, especially given she's both listed in Wikipedia already under other BBC reporters with Wikipedia pages for themselves.
Here are examples offered below:
/info/en/?search=List_of_current_BBC_newsreaders_and_reporters
/info/en/?search=David_Willis_(journalist) /info/en/?search=Ben_Bland /info/en/?search=Kim_Ghattas /info/en/?search=Barbara_Plett_Usher /info/en/?search=Sophie_Long
These briefs for other reporters list less accomplishments than Kianpour, yet aren't denied. 65.215.95.162 ( talk) 15:48, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
Draft has been rejected multiple times and need help with next steps. The page was first rejected for not enough reliable sources. I added in references to make sure the information was well-supported, but the submission was then rejected for having too many sources tied to the subject (this made sense, I did not realize that press releases by related companies were not allowed). I then reworked the page to include information only from independent news outlets and it was just rejected again. I'm a bit unsure what to do next, as I feel like I've shown that Rosen is a notable Cleveland businessman. Can you help me with exactly what next steps to take? Thank you! 2600:1700:B880:5970:9E2:FAEA:8102:807 ( talk) 16:41, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
Hello, I try to work on the new version of my article about Bernhard Ruchti ( /info/en/?search=Draft:Bernhard_Ruchti). I understand sone of the concerns about the neutral point of view, I can easily fix this. However, I have two questions: - About the comment that is still appearing at the top that says: "This article may have been created or edited in return for undisclosed payments, a violation of Wikipedia's terms of use." This is not the case and I don't understand why this comment is appearing here, I have no personal relation with the person and I am not paid by him. I don't receive any incentive or anything else. What should I do (apart from the conversation I already had with your colleague) to have this sentence removed? - About the DOB: I was told that I should prove the DOB. Usually this musicians doesn't display his full DOB online (for example on his website there is only is year of birth) but I found it in a printed program when attending one of his concerts. Can I use a printed program as source of DOB? Also, how to quote it properly so that it is considered valid for Wikipedia? For example, when I look at other musicians' Wikipedia page such as András Schiff ( /info/en/?search=Andr%C3%A1s_Schiff) there is no reference after the DOB. Thank you for your help, Dkoltorcan Dkoltorcan ( talk) 17:06, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
I have a physical hard copy of a newspaper article in English and Odia language. I want to show it as a reference to prove the authenticity of the person in the Wikipedia. How can I use this physical newspaper cutouts. Please help. Saffiulla Muhammad ( talk) 18:27, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
Can you please help me create an articles about the biography of Georgios Dritsakos as a Lieutenant General of the Hellenic Air Force, a Lieutenant Colonel and Colonel of the Hellenic Air Force, and Adjutant to the President of the Hellenic Republic Constantinos Stephanopoulos? 108.21.67.83 ( talk) 18:35, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
I have tried to upload a well known term twice but you keep rejecting my artical. I am starting to think that you do not accept the fact that FeminISISm is real Ddllggpro ( talk) 21:09, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
This page was declined for submission. How can I improve the article so that it will be accepted the next time? Luc1239 ( talk) 22:05, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
Helllo! My draft about the magnet school called the Academies of Loudoun. It was rejected for lacking reliable sources. I'm confused about this for two reasons, the first is that many other articles in the same category and locale use the same sources I did. For example, in an article about a high school in the same district (Independence High School in Ashburn) uses sources that came from 6 different publishers, 4 of which I also cited.
Secondly, Wikipedia's reliable sources wiki states that "Similarly, the publisher's web site is likely to be reliable for the fact that the work exists". In my article, for example, I cite the school district's website that certain courses in fact are taught at the school. I frequently cited the school district's website, but only for things that were completely factual, like the population of the school.
Because of this, I'm having trouble finding a way to fix the reputability of my article, how can I do this? Melursus Mare ( talk) 23:19, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
I added real news source, could you please help me, how can make it live? Dubaiali ( talk) 23:31, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
This is my first attempt at creating an article, and I can't tell you how much I appreciate the fast feedback, but it looks like I'm going to need some hand holding because of my inexperience. Can you tell me if the primary weakness in the article is the references contained in the following sentences, or is it something else? Thank you!
Myrlie Evers-Williams who called the book “a treasure.”
Lee Smith has called The Queen of Palmyra "the most powerful and also the most lyrical novel about race, racism and denial in the American South since To Kill a Mockingbird," and Kirkus Reviews has described "Gwin's prose [as] profound and Faulknerian in tone." GonetotheDawgs ( talk) 23:35, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
Dear Sir, The article is for a film director and given authenticate news source. Could you help me please how would be the article live as it is declined. Should i change the article formate? Looking for your kind support Dubaiali ( talk) 23:46, 6 November 2023 (UTC)