I have recently had one peer review of this article in the main Wikipedia peer review, but I am looking for one more opinion before I take it to a GA review. Since this is an article of an architectural work, this seems to be an appropriate place to get an opinion. Edward R. Hills House is my first completed major contribution so I will take any notes on style. In particular, I would like to know if my lead section is adequate. The last reviewer thought that it was a little short, but I am not sure what else would be appropriate to include. I am still experimenting with different citation styles and I am not completely satisfied with the lengthiness of my notes and reference section. I might go back to a single reference list with one entry for each page of each source rather than concerning myself with consecutively numbered footnotes. Otherwise, the article is as complete as I intend it to be at this point but I will take any comments and suggestions throughout.
Thank you in advance A.Fox 02:35, 10 May 2010 (UTC)
I have recently had one peer review of this article in the main Wikipedia peer review, but I am looking for one more opinion before I take it to a GA review. Since this is an article of an architectural work, this seems to be an appropriate place to get an opinion. Edward R. Hills House is my first completed major contribution so I will take any notes on style. In particular, I would like to know if my lead section is adequate. The last reviewer thought that it was a little short, but I am not sure what else would be appropriate to include. I am still experimenting with different citation styles and I am not completely satisfied with the lengthiness of my notes and reference section. I might go back to a single reference list with one entry for each page of each source rather than concerning myself with consecutively numbered footnotes. Otherwise, the article is as complete as I intend it to be at this point but I will take any comments and suggestions throughout.
Thank you in advance A.Fox 02:35, 10 May 2010 (UTC)