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Would like an expert editor to review and possibly improve this new article I created. Immunize ( talk) 17:59, 10 April 2010 (UTC)
Did you look at the article, or do you feel that only a medical expert should review the article? Immunize (talk) ( talk) 17:52, 11 April 2010 (UTC)
A thyroid neoplasm can be benign or malignant, thyroid cancer is malignant by definition. Furthermore, the treatment for benign thyroid neoplasm (such as thyroid adenoma) differs completely from that of a malignant thyroid neoplasm. Immunize (talk) ( talk) 18:15, 11 April 2010 (UTC)
Hello,
I just created my first article about a Swedeish/Portuguese music group. Because I'm not used to Wiki I would apreciate some input before I think about submiting it as a mainspace article.
Thank you for any help! Sérgio Crisóstomo —Preceding unsigned comment added by Sergiosbox ( talk • contribs) 07:45, 11 April 2010 (UTC)
Meanwhile how do I answer to your comment? like I did, just add ":" on the page and "write"?
Thank you again!, Sergiosbox ( talk) 19:50, 11 April 2010 (UTC)
User:SlatersGarage/The Latimer Group
Looking for feedback on an article I'm working on about The Latimer Group, a communications coaching firm in Wallingford Connecticut. Subheads include info on its founder, as well as company history...
This is my first Wikipedia article, so I'm hoping I got it pretty close... Feedback would be much appreciated.
Thanks SlatersGarage ( talk) 13:24, 12 April 2010 (UTC)SlatersGarage 04-12-10
I found a page about a local Appliance/Electronic store in Utah called R.C. Willey and decided to create a page about a local Electronic/Custom Installation store called TV Specialists, Inc. I would like to get it reviewed and posted and I believe this is the next step? TV_Specialists,_Inc
User:Since1953/TV Specialists, Inc
Thank you!
Sorry about the link - couldn't get it to work right.
Since1953 ( talk) 16:21, 12 April 2010 (UTC)
I have just created a page stil under the userspace draft on here ( http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bbiswalo/Mwananchi_Communications_Ltd) and would like your feedback before I move it to be a peoper Wikipedia article.
The company Mwananchi Communicatrions Ltd is one of the leading media houses in Tanzania but it has been hard to find info about it on the net while its a huge company that many Tanzanians and others people have interest in it for the role it plays as an independent media in Tanzania . So I decided to find info as much as I could and found some resources on-line to share with fellows like me who would be interested in this company and its products.
Please help me review this article by giving me feedback so that we make it a great resource for all. Thanks!
The article is at http: Mwananchi Communications Ltd. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Bbiswalo ( talk • contribs)
The Digital Creative Agency page is a brief description of the services of a digital creative agency. With today's growing technology, digital creative agencies are in competition with or compliment traditional advertising agencies. This page states the differences between the two and provides some examples of digital creative agencies.
Thank you so much for taking the time to review this article.
-Sami —Preceding unsigned comment added by Playgroundsami ( talk • contribs)
I created an article on Christopher T. Gonzalez and it is ready to be reviewed by others.Michelle D. Dartis 18:41, 13 April 2010 (UTC)Michelle Dartis —Preceding unsigned comment added by Michelle Dartis ( talk • contribs)
H.R. Gray We have edited this page to make sure it it neutral. Can you please review again and remove the flags if you agree? If not, can you be specific about what it is you would like to see changed? Amynumbers ( talk) 14:08, 14 April 2010 (UTC)
User:Remawa/Sandford Pre School
14/04/2010 Remawa ( talk) 11:15, 14 April 2010 (UTC)
Organizational Immaturity User:Mklubeck/Organizational Immaturity
This article attempts to explain the concept of Organizational Immaturity which organizations may suffer from.
Mklubeck 18:39, 13 April 2010 (UTC)MKlubeck, April 13, 2010
Thanks! I think it does help. I did co-author the book, but I would have tried to put this into Wikipedia years ago (before writing the book) if I was more aware. You are right it is a new concept and understand if it requires more time. Don't know what to do about the "conflict of interest" since we (the authors) are probably the most knowledgable at this time - until (hopefully) our readership grows. Thanks again!
Mklubeck ( talk) 18:37, 14 April 2010 (UTC)Mklubeck
I've just completed an article on a non-profit community organization at User:VitusKonter/Bay View Garden and Yard Society. I've included as many references as I could find, so I hope this helps to meet the notablility guidelines. Thank you for your time and consideration. VitusKonter ( talk) 06:44, 14 April 2010 (UTC)
Hi friends,
Recently, I have added this page to Wikipedia and tired to make the content of this article lucid. In order to make this article beautiful, I request you for your feedback and suggestions.
Your help will be deeply appreciated.--
Alok Mishra (
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09:11, 14 April 2010 (UTC)
AETC Collaboration Portal User:Afeducationuser/AETC Collaboration Portal
Please review my article. Afeducationuser ( talk) 14:45, 15 April 2010 (UTC)
Could I have some feedback about the article please. Many thanks —Preceding unsigned comment added by Steverance ( talk • contribs) 15:24, 15 April 2010 (UTC)
Hi friends,
Recently, I have added this page to Wikipedia and tired to make this article lucid and informative. In order to make this article beautiful, I request you for your feedback and suggestions. Please let me know how it looks and developmental need.
Your help will be deeply appreciated.--
Alok Mishra (
talk)
09:35, 14 April 2010 (UTC)
Greetings!
My non-profit organization just set up our own page, located at MEET - Middle East Education through Technology
In a nutshell, the mission of MEET is to be a bridge facilitating healthy interaction and dialogue between Israeli and Palestinian high-school students, through a shared goal of education and cross-cultural learning.
However we realize this topic may be a bit sensitive (even though our organization is neutral), therefore would like to seek feedback from the Wiki community on your thoughts about our page (too political? sensitive?) and any advice on improving it.
Thanks so much!!
Lbeana, 4/15 Lbeana ( talk) 23:28, 15 April 2010 (UTC)
I need feedback on this article: User:Fvroig/Fidel Roig Matons Thanks.
Fvroig ( talk) 00:05, 16 April 2010 (UTC)
[ [1]] My article on the above subject, I am told, needs a feedback. Please let me know if there is anything concerning this article that I have missed out? This is an historical account of the State of jammu & Kashmir backed by references whereever required and even referenced comparable articles with the same context or subject. Still I will appreciate if I am corrected to make this article meaningful. Thanks --Mrathore 13:56, 14 April 2010 (UTC) Mrathore 14.42 —Preceding unsigned comment added by Mrathore ( talk • contribs) 13:48, 14 April 2010 (UTC)
Thanks Mike I wrote this article in context with the prevailing situation in Jammu & Kashmir and wanted to apprise the interested parties with a version a common man in J & K wants the international community to be aware of. To understand the imbroglio an impartial analysis can be made getting the story from horses mouth. Please advise further. Thanks 86.21.13.87 ( talk) 08:09, 15 April 2010 (UTC)[ [2]
User:SuKristie/Self defense pressure points
This is my first article. It is about using pressure points of your attackers body to defend yourself and discusses which of your body parts to use on these pressure points. Are the lists a problem, or anything else?
-- SuKristie ( talk) 19:23, 15 April 2010 (UTC)SuKristie 4/15/10
Corinne Malvern -- I'd appreciate someone reviewing this for me. Dfoy ( talk) 14:56, 16 April 2010 (UTC)
User:Hannahralston/William A. Edelstein
Hello! This is my first article and I'd be grateful for feedback on whether it is ready for publication. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Hannahralston ( talk • contribs) 16:31, 16 April 2010 (UTC)
Hello,
I'd love to receive feedback on my draft post: User:AllisonShapira/Energy_Policy_of_the_Obama_Administration. This is my first time writing a page on Wikipedia.
Thank you very much for your time.
AllisonShapira ( talk) 17:06, 16 April 2010 (UTC) Allison Shapira April 16, 2010
Thanks, Orangemike, for your feedback. Is a website of the US Government considered a reliable source? Allison —Preceding unsigned comment added by AllisonShapira ( talk • contribs) 13:24, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
This is a very simple article about ING Life India as an organization and its origin and growth. The Article is:
I would appreciate any feedback to this article. Thanks!
Vikas Chandak 09:13, 16 April 2010 (UTC)
Hi,
this is going to be my first article: User:Ɯ/Alpha algorithm it's about an algorithm which is mentioned on the Process mining, though not linked nor explained there.
It's far from being finished, but I'd like to make it available to everyone at this stage to avoid duplication. [Ɯ:] ( talk) 14:43, 17 April 2010 (UTC)
Thanks a lot for reviewing! I'm happy with the changes. The bullet points were intentional, though, so I changed the "#"'s back to "*". [Ɯ:] ( talk) 16:37, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
Dr. Dan Ivankovich. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Doinggooddaily/Dr._Dan_Ivankovich
Doinggooddaily ( talk) 21:51, 17 April 2010 (UTC)
Respectfully request feedback on this article to prepare it for publication.
Thank you.
Request review for improvement and a fair rating based on current assessment standards. Sephiroth storm ( talk) 04:21, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
Any feedback on my second article would be appreciated! John Wall (electronic composer) Many thanks! -- PressedBack ( talk) 19:51, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
Many thanks! At what stage does an article get reviewed/rated? -- PressedBack ( talk) 20:58, 21 April 2010 (UTC)
First time author here. I have created an article on computer pioneer Dudley Allen Buck. User:AlanDewey/Enter your new article name here
AlanDewey ( talk) 14:57, 19 April 2010 (UTC)Alan Dewey 19 April 2010
Also, I seem to have screwed up when creating the title for the article. I have not yet figured out how to change it. Maybe it will be easy to change after it is approved. One important point is that this article is about the Electrical Engineer / Inventor Dudley Allen Buck, not the composer Dudley Buck.
AlanDewey ( talk) 17:30, 19 April 2010 (UTC)
Is this how we are supposed to communicate? Someone send the "the missing manual". That was very helpful. Also the unfindable link WP:lead .. very helpful and I would have NEVER found it on my own. I have edited the page a lot based on this input. I am not going to claim it is 'ready' yet. However, I have made significant improvement. Hopefully enough that I am ready for more suggestions. I still don't understand this wikipaedia thing much. But if you have the ability to help edit the article, then go ahead.
I have much more material that can be cited. However, much of it is only recently being declassified. Since most people will not have access to it, is it proper to cite it? AlanDewey ( talk) 19:15, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
I believe this article has proper notability, however several of the external articles for Shushybye come from the Shushybye homepage (articles are downloaded and open in a Word document -- however, they are complete scans of the original article).
Thanks for checking it out! Shushybye is my child's favorite show on BabyFirst TV Shushyfan513 ( talk) 16:02, 19 April 2010 (UTC) Shushyfan513 4/19/2010
Hello, I'd be interested in getting an article reviewed. Nimsoft was posted back in February, and still has the "This is New/Unreviewed Article" notice at the top. If we could have reviewed, it would be much appreciated. Best, Rbudde ( talk) 19:19, 19 April 2010 (UTC)
IMHO, this is Unlikely. A lot of work is needed.
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22:40, 21 April 2010 (UTC)
User:Froggieskc/Double JJ Resort
Resort in Rothbury, MI, where the Rothbury Music Festival has been held. Went bankrupt and re-opened. Opened originally in 1937.
Froggieskc ( talk) 20:42, 19 April 2010 (UTC)
More references have been added. The history is largely from a local historian, making it difficult to cite from the internet. There's a few different news sources now, along with reputable websites for the festival & golf course. Think it looks better now? Thanks Froggieskc ( talk) 13:48, 23 April 2010 (UTC)
My article is about Rutgers University wide receiver Mohamed Sanu. He is one of the top underclassmen in American college football and is a future NFL draft pick.
Signed, Fuddrutgers —Preceding unsigned comment added by Fuddrutgers ( talk • contribs) 22:55, 19 April 2010 (UTC)
I wrote up a profile on a women`s organization that supports women in minority groups dealing with issues of conjugal violence. Please let me know what you think.
User:Taejah33/The_Shield_of_Athena_Montréal
-- Taejah33 ( talk) 00:34, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
I have created a page for American Sportscaster Kenny Rice. User:Eddiebod/Kenny Rice I've included many 3rd party sources and I believe he is notable enough. I would appreciate any feedback on the article as this is my first attempt at a complete WIKI article. The subject is linked to from several other wiki pages, but has no entry of his own yet. Special:WhatLinksHere/Kenny_Rice Eddiebod ( talk) 03:29, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
Thanks! Eddiebod ( talk) 17:49, 21 April 2010 (UTC)
I've written an article about the company Oregon LNG and I've been waiting several weeks for it to be moved from New, Unreviewed Article. Can someone help? Collander123 ( talk) 04:23, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
It is my first wikipedia article and some comments would be helpful to improve the quality of the article.
In this article, an European research project in the area of artificial olfaction is presented.
Jfonollosa ( talk) 09:35, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
Intelligent Manufacturing Systems (IMS) - Global Research and Innovation in Manufacturing Intelligent_Manufacturing_Systems_(IMS)_-_Global_Research_and_Innovation_in_Manufacturing This is a global multi-lateral, non-profit, and government supported program for manufacturing research. We hope to raise awareness to provide our free services to researchers. Thanks kindly for your review. MfgGlobalResearch ( talk) 10:57, 20 April 2010 (UTC) Dan Nagy, Program Director, 20 April, 2010
Greetings Editors,
I have create a userpage draft of a new entry Local Food Plus: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Vj_stokes/Local_Food_Plus
Could someone please review this page and let me know if it suits?
COI disclosure: I am a freelance writer and editor. Local Food Plus is one of my clients. They have asked me to create this for them. I am interested in this area (sustainable food policy/action), and feel it appropriate for LFP to have an entry here.
Thanks so much. Please advise,
Vj stokes ( talk) 14:34, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
Posting information about a new card game with sources from BoardGameGeek, BoardgameNews, and the Publisher's website.
-- TBGF ( talk) 21:54, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
I would appreciate any feedback on this article about a popular cookbook author.
Soflo1800 ( talk) 22:51, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
Please take a look at Chris_Duke, a host of a national American television show called Motorz TV.
We have been working on it for a few months in our personal sandbox, which is why you probably don't see a history on this one. Thank you for your time.
-- Dukenetworks ( talk) 20:00, 21 April 2010 (UTC)
I would appreciate feedback from the following article: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Superdeed/New_York_Food_Tours
This is an article about the culinary tourism company of New York Food Tours. The article was nominated for speedy deletion, under section section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion. I have edited the article and asked for advice from my peers, as well as re-read the Business policy of Wikipedia. Please provide me feedback and criticism on things you believe I should edit, add, or delete. Thanks!
Superdeed ( talk) 04:39, 22 April 2010 (UTC)
Wanted to get some advice and see what you thought of this page, are there changes i can make to prevent it from deletion or does it look good? please let me know, my email is <redacted> —Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.218.244.79 ( talk) 07:41, 22 April 2010 (UTC)
This statement is incorrect.
The Playtronics Toy company and its car park scenes from Sneakers were filmed at the Countrywide Loans Data Processing - Admin Plant at 400 Countrywide Way.
Sneakers was filmed in the building referred to but the company in the building at the time was Gibraltar Savings. Countrywide took over the biudling after Gibraltar was closed by the RTC.
I worked at Gibralter while Sneakers was Being filmed and saw Robert Redford. Please correct this satement someone. I would just mess it up.
4/21/2010. onipa'a —Preceding unsigned comment added by Onipa'a ( talk • contribs) 04:48, 23 April 2010 (UTC)
Hello,
This is the first time I have created a Wikipedia page and would like to check that it meets all the necessary conventions.
I have been researching Truman's for the last few months as part of a personal interest in east London history. Despite the fact that they were once the world's largest brewery there are not man books on them. The London Metropolitan archives, where almost all the source material was found, has many photos and original letters and recipes. I intend to add photos later, but am waiting for the opportunity to photograph some of the images held by the archive.
I have also been looking into how to move this article onto the main site, but do not meet the criteria of having made 10 edits. I have tried to read the section about what to do in this situation, but am frankly a bit confused. If anybody could help with this it would be much appreciated.
Many Thanks
User:Mghemus/Truman's Beer
Mghemus ( talk) 15:30, 23 April 2010 (UTC)
Hello
Thank you very much for your feedback, obviously it's extremely helpful.
- If you would be happy to do a bit more work at the start before the main space that would be great - I think you have a better idea of what needs doing to get that section right. - Thanks for the editorial changes - I have been trying to find the Hornsey book, unfortunately it is about $75 to buy and none of the libraries I have visited currently has it. What I have read on the google extracts seems very good. The reason I omitted the mention of a Truman family being involved in brewing in 1381 is because there is no definite proof that they are from the same family. There is then no mention of any Truman's in brewing until the 17th century. However, I could add this in if you think it is valid information. - I looked for survey 27 but the London Metropolitan Archive has unfortunately 'misplaced it' - I spent quite a long time with them trying to track it down, but it is the one survey in their collection that is not there. Apparently there might be a copy in another library, but I have yet to make down there. - Thanks for making the PLC change - Let me know about the quote in the Growth section, if you think it is inappropriate then I can take it out. - The original name of the company was Truman but it was known as and referred to itself as 'Truman's Beer', which is why I selected this name. As time progress it became Truman & Hanbury Co. Ltd. and then Truman, Hanbury and Buxton Co. Ltd. but it was still referred to by the public as Truman's Beer. Prior to being shut down, Grand Metropolitan shortened the name to just Truman's (which was the name that remained in use when shut down in 1989). Perhaps the entry should be called 'Truman, Hanbury & Buxton Co. Ltd. with the term 'Truman's Beer' also linking to the page? - The name of the main London brewery was 'Black Eagle Brewery', named after the street on which it was built (Black Eagle Street) - I will include a reference to John Bickerdyke with regards to the creation of Porter. Not a source I had seen before.
Lastly, I have rephotographed many of the hundreds of photos that they have of the old brewery, pubs and vehicles. I also have the necessary permission to re-publish them. Do you think it would help the entry to add photos? They are all black and white and from the turn of the 20th Century.
Thanks again for your help
M-G
Betty Hyatt: Community Development and Housing Pioneer
Looking for help with article to refine it.
Thyatt ( talk) 15:37, 23 April 2010 (UTC)Thomas Hyatt 4/23/2010
I am creating a page about a person and would like to upload an image or two. How can I do that? I cant understand the copyrights etc. These pictures arent copyrighted - do they have to be? I got these images from a shotoshoot that was taken of the person. How can i upload them, without getting them deleted? Thanks!
Xer014 ( talk) 00:35, 24 April 2010 (UTC) Cheryl Falzon
Frances Koons Frances Koons FansofFrances ( talk) 01:13, 24 April 2010 (UTC)
Re article http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Donchats/The_Dragon%27s_Journey
I would appreciate if someone could give me some feed back on my first attempt at the Dragon's Journey. When time permits I propose to examine in more detail each chapter. Can you tell me what might be required to go live?
Thank you -- Donchats ( talk) 03:02, 24 April 2010 (UTC) DonChats
Thank you for requesting feedback on your draft before creating an article.
I hope these comments help. If you have questions regarding these comments, please contact me by leaving me a message. I will reply on your talk page. Thank you, liquidluck✽ talk 23:00, 25 April 2010 (UTC)
I would like Category:Head and neck cancer and Category:Brain tumor reviewed. Best wishes, Immunize ( talk) 14:41, 24 April 2010 (UTC)
Freedom Deep Freedom Deep a feature film by Aaron Stevenson (Me) John Ranko ( talk) 02:58, 25 April 2010 (UTC)
After User:Imgahn2u created a page Night of the Grizzlies a few days back, I put together the above. Not sure now that it is done, as it seems to be less about the book and more like a description of the events in the book.
I do agree with Imgahn2u in that I feel it is probably an important book, even if only from the point of view of recording a part of the history of the national park service, and Glacier in particular.
My frustration lies in not being able to find anything which provides support in the way of notability for the book itself - no reviews, no indication of sales (other than hearsay "best seller among backpacking community").
Maybe it shouldn't be about the book, and I should rewrite it as an article about that night? Or should I just slap it in the book article and let it develop as it will from there?
Thoughts, input, guidance, structural changes and recommendations? All welcome :-). Best wishes. -- Haruth ( talk) 14:18, 25 April 2010 (UTC)
The Silver Star Families of America
Would like a little help and reviews on the Silver STar Families of America
I have had lots of help but the page still seems to have too many open spaces I cannot delete out.
Anyway, thank you all and God bless.
And thanks to all who have helped.
Steven1969 ( talk) 21:55, 24 March 2010 (UTC)
THANK you Nuujinn!
Steven1969 ( talk) 00:42, 25 March 2010 (UTC)
And by all means edit away!
Steven1969 ( talk) 00:46, 25 March 2010 (UTC)
This article is about the Kanchan Armour indigeneously developed in India. Please comment on this: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lohiyagaurav/Kanchan_armour —Preceding unsigned comment added by 193.113.57.161 ( talk) 12:31, 14 April 2010 (UTC)
Almost two weeks ago, I created Reading Wood Black, who was a notable person in Texas history - he was the founder of Uvalde County, Texas and Uvalde, Texas. It was initially tagged as an orphan which I immediately cleared up. Since then, it still has the tag as New Unreviewed Article. Just wondering how long it takes before somebody reviews it and removes that tag. Maile66 ( talk) 01:57, 26 April 2010 (UTC)
I have reviewed
your page and left comments on its talk section. Thanks!
Optiguy54 (
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23:22, 26 April 2010 (UTC)
A ring shaped like an octopus. Please write feedback so I can improve my article. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Eyelovepink ( talk • contribs) 19:34, April 26, 2010. Signed by liquidluck✽ talk 05:30, 27 April 2010 (UTC)
Where is the article? You need to include a link to it. (I am very new here also) AlanDewey ( talk) 19:04, 4 May 2010 (UTC)
The Wikipedia page Elaine Szymoniak was recently created. This woman was a politician in the US State of Iowa. The article has "gone live" and I was hoping to have some help/suggestions and a review of the article for credibility and quality. In addition, I am currently having trouble posting an image of Szymoniak, but I am working with the linked tutorials to hopefully alleviate the issue. Thanks. MattSzymoniak ( talk) 00:07, 27 April 2010 (UTC)
Please review and edit/comment
David Raether 4/26/2010 Davidraether ( talk) 01:21, 27 April 2010 (UTC)
This article is about a product called the Wi-Fire. It is made by a company called hField Technologies Inc. This article details its specifications and other usability statistics and information.
The page also gives an overview of the Wi-Fire's uses (where it can be used, as well as many other examples of use) and gives a description of how to install the product.—Preceding unsigned comment added by Krg210 ( talk • contribs)
Grave Disorder (novel): User:Techeric46052/Grave_Disorder
Page looks good and cites several sources from the media.
One of my concerns is how to publish it, since Grave Disorder already exists. Is there any assistance for making a disambiguation page?
Thanks! :)
Techeric46052 ( talk) 14:14, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
Magnificent Baby Magnificent Baby
< http://www.magnificentbaby.com>
Luvlab2 ( talk) 15:25, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
Taedeat ( http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:IgnyteZero/Taedeat) IgnyteZero ( talk) 18:06, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
A short article on the swedish blackened death metal band Taedeat.
Dear Wikipedia editors:
Would it possible to have the following page for Professor Barbara Kellerman http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Barbara_Kellerman_(Academic) show up under the "Kellermann" surname category ( http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kellerman)?
Professor Kellerman is a Professor at the Harvard Kennedy School and this page is about her career and work.
Currently only Barbara Kellerman the actress is shown. I would like to have Barbara Kellerman (Academic) also show up. Moreover, is it possible to have Barbara Kellerman (Academic) automatically appear when typing in the search field?
Please tell me if there is anything I can do to help in this process.
Your help is greatly appreciated. Thanks!
Best, Mike
User:Bobh00000/35H00060_Battery_Series Bobh00000 ( talk) 01:56, 29 April 2010 (UTC)
I'm putting together an article about Frazer-Nash Consultancy and would appreciate some feedback, the articles currently at User:Stephenpenndb7/Draft of article. Thanks Stephenpenndb7 ( talk) 15:34, 29 April 2010 (UTC)
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dakota_Jackson,_Furniture_Designer
I have recently researched and written a new entry about American furniture designer Dakota Jackson. I just moved it to go live and I would like some feedback about the article. Thanks!
Could someone please look at [ [4]] and give me some feedback. It's been waiting to be reviewed for quite some time now. Many thanks Bowl4u ( talk) 23:50, 29 April 2010 (UTC)
Linzi Wilson-Wilde Jimwhiskey ( talk) 09:44, 30 April 2010 (UTC)
Milton Reynolds http://en.wikipedia.org/?title=User:Lppgeraldj/Enter_your_new_article_name_here&oldid=359308593
Feedback, please.
Lppgeraldj ( talk) 19:38, 30 April 2010 (UTC)
- Article Title: Carpal Tunnel Syndrome
Mfestejo (
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08:49, 2 May 2010 (UTC)
Wajdi Mallat is an influential Lebanese political figure who has recently passed away. I have finished editing the entry and believe that it is complete and up to standard. Cross links and references included. I would appreciate feedback. Thank you. Shaque ( talk) 12:09, 2 May 2010 (UTC)
Hi friends,
Recently, I have added this page to Wikipedia. Keeping a good faith in Wikipedia, I have tried to make this article lucid and informative and in Encyclopedic style. In order to make this article beautiful, I request you for your feedback and suggestions. Please let me know how it looks and its developmental need.
Your help will be deeply appreciated.
--
Alok Mishra (
talk)
11:34, 3 May 2010 (UTC)
I would like feedback for my article, User:CBehringer/Pneumococcal Awareness Council of Experts. Also, would someone be able to recommend how I can embed photos? Thank you,
CBehringer ( talk) 17:20, 3 May 2010 (UTC)
This is a page for our honors program. It has lots of history and should be recognized. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Sdoober ( talk • contribs) 21:24, 3 May 2010 (UTC)
Request for feedback/article move for Cherry Bekaert & Holland. This article reviews the certified public accounting firm, Cherry, Bekaert & Holland, located in the Southeast US. Mnewman.cbh ( talk) 15:56, 4 May 2010 (UTC)
I had previously sought feedback on an early draft, now extensively linked and annotated, made language more objective.
I saw a help item on changing the userspace tag but can't find it now, so one question is what if anything to do with the page tag.
Thanks for your help. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Lppgeraldj ( talk • contribs) 19:04, 4 May 2010 (UTC)
Arthur_De_Vany is about a pioneer in entertainment economics, a specialized sub-field which I think will gain increasing attention as general economics and finance begin to focus more on behavioral economics and intellectual property.
Allenwlee ( talk) 00:09, 5 May 2010 (UTC)allen lee may 4, 2010
thanks for your help! Allenwlee ( talk) 23:51, 7 May 2010 (UTC)allen
Ham and Petersham Cricket Club
This a relatively brief starter article about Ham and Petersham Cricket Club. In 2015 the club will 200 years old. This wikipedia entry will provide a short history of the club along and some historic facts which may be of interest to some readers. Will Cowling Willcowling ( talk) 08:52, 5 May 2010 (UTC)
International Victimology Institute Tilburg (INTERVICT)
I don't quite understand if I have posted the article to the main Wikipedia section. Tried to follow the guidelines, but am afraid I don't quite get them...
Also I would appreciate some feedback on the content. I'm new at the process, so if I can do anything to improve the page or the way to manage the content, I would be very grateful for any advice.
-- PRcor ( talk) 17:14, 5 May 2010 (UTC)
This is my first wiki article, I have read all of the help topics on Wikipedia and I think the article ready to go live. Please review the article and make any suggestions so the article does not get deleted.
User:Emma.roach/Professional systems associates Thank you,
Emma.roach ( talk) 21:04, 5 May 2010 (UTC)
I took your recommendations: I added references and sentences that will support the notability and I cited the references with footnotes. Please look at it again and tell me if I need anything else. Thanks! Emma.roach ( talk) 16:48, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
I made all of the changes recommended including taking any mention of "solution" out of the article. Is there anything else that I should change or that has a "marketing tone"? Emma.roach ( talk) 18:35, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
I noticed that the article has the "Move" tab on it now. Do you think it is ready for the main space? Emma.roach ( talk) 18:04, 7 May 2010 (UTC)
Thank you for all of the time that you have contributed and the feedback. I have moved the page to the mainspace. Emma.roach ( talk) 15:06, 10 May 2010 (UTC)
Kronid Lyubarsky: Leader of the Moscow Helsinki Group from 1993 to 1996 and one of the editors of the samizdat publication Chronicle of Current Events.
I am not sure how much of the article should be sourced; I could add more info on his trial using the Amnesty International translations of the "Chronicle" itself; but this seems redunant, as he was its editor.
Most of the information is taken from the book on him published in Russia; sourcing individual paragraphs seems superfluous.
Also, I am not sure if the chronological structure of the article is OK and how much, if anything, should be mentioned in the first sentence of the article.
Nkrita ( talk) 16:00, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
I am having a really hard time moving this article. I have gone through everything many times. Can someone please guide me in the right direction? KIND Healthy Snacks http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zevzigler/KIND_Healthy_Snacks
Thanks, Zev —Preceding unsigned comment added by Zziegler129 ( talk • contribs) 00:06, 7 May 2010 (UTC)
I created an article on the Anti Cancer Diet, which I presented in school. I am ready to post it live but wanted final feedback. Let me know what you think. Thank you, LoHeHa77 ( talk) 00:22, 8 May 2010 (UTC)LoHeHa77 May 7, 2010
Hey, I would really appreciate some feedback on my article about line of PDAs Pocket LOOX by Fujitsu-Siemens.
Thanks! —Preceding unsigned comment added by Hurk87 ( talk • contribs) 01:16, 8 May 2010 (UTC)
Hi, this is my first article and I'm keen to get some feedback, thanks. User:Ellyrobi/Australian Institute of Family Studies Thanks Ellyrobi ( talk) 07:52, 8 May 2010 (UTC)
Thanks very much, great ideas. I'll address these issues, which shouldn't be too hard. Should I then gain feedback here again? Or can I go on to publish the article? Ellyrobi ( talk) 03:37, 10 May 2010 (UTC)
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Would like an expert editor to review and possibly improve this new article I created. Immunize ( talk) 17:59, 10 April 2010 (UTC)
Did you look at the article, or do you feel that only a medical expert should review the article? Immunize (talk) ( talk) 17:52, 11 April 2010 (UTC)
A thyroid neoplasm can be benign or malignant, thyroid cancer is malignant by definition. Furthermore, the treatment for benign thyroid neoplasm (such as thyroid adenoma) differs completely from that of a malignant thyroid neoplasm. Immunize (talk) ( talk) 18:15, 11 April 2010 (UTC)
Hello,
I just created my first article about a Swedeish/Portuguese music group. Because I'm not used to Wiki I would apreciate some input before I think about submiting it as a mainspace article.
Thank you for any help! Sérgio Crisóstomo —Preceding unsigned comment added by Sergiosbox ( talk • contribs) 07:45, 11 April 2010 (UTC)
Meanwhile how do I answer to your comment? like I did, just add ":" on the page and "write"?
Thank you again!, Sergiosbox ( talk) 19:50, 11 April 2010 (UTC)
User:SlatersGarage/The Latimer Group
Looking for feedback on an article I'm working on about The Latimer Group, a communications coaching firm in Wallingford Connecticut. Subheads include info on its founder, as well as company history...
This is my first Wikipedia article, so I'm hoping I got it pretty close... Feedback would be much appreciated.
Thanks SlatersGarage ( talk) 13:24, 12 April 2010 (UTC)SlatersGarage 04-12-10
I found a page about a local Appliance/Electronic store in Utah called R.C. Willey and decided to create a page about a local Electronic/Custom Installation store called TV Specialists, Inc. I would like to get it reviewed and posted and I believe this is the next step? TV_Specialists,_Inc
User:Since1953/TV Specialists, Inc
Thank you!
Sorry about the link - couldn't get it to work right.
Since1953 ( talk) 16:21, 12 April 2010 (UTC)
I have just created a page stil under the userspace draft on here ( http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bbiswalo/Mwananchi_Communications_Ltd) and would like your feedback before I move it to be a peoper Wikipedia article.
The company Mwananchi Communicatrions Ltd is one of the leading media houses in Tanzania but it has been hard to find info about it on the net while its a huge company that many Tanzanians and others people have interest in it for the role it plays as an independent media in Tanzania . So I decided to find info as much as I could and found some resources on-line to share with fellows like me who would be interested in this company and its products.
Please help me review this article by giving me feedback so that we make it a great resource for all. Thanks!
The article is at http: Mwananchi Communications Ltd. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Bbiswalo ( talk • contribs)
The Digital Creative Agency page is a brief description of the services of a digital creative agency. With today's growing technology, digital creative agencies are in competition with or compliment traditional advertising agencies. This page states the differences between the two and provides some examples of digital creative agencies.
Thank you so much for taking the time to review this article.
-Sami —Preceding unsigned comment added by Playgroundsami ( talk • contribs)
I created an article on Christopher T. Gonzalez and it is ready to be reviewed by others.Michelle D. Dartis 18:41, 13 April 2010 (UTC)Michelle Dartis —Preceding unsigned comment added by Michelle Dartis ( talk • contribs)
H.R. Gray We have edited this page to make sure it it neutral. Can you please review again and remove the flags if you agree? If not, can you be specific about what it is you would like to see changed? Amynumbers ( talk) 14:08, 14 April 2010 (UTC)
User:Remawa/Sandford Pre School
14/04/2010 Remawa ( talk) 11:15, 14 April 2010 (UTC)
Organizational Immaturity User:Mklubeck/Organizational Immaturity
This article attempts to explain the concept of Organizational Immaturity which organizations may suffer from.
Mklubeck 18:39, 13 April 2010 (UTC)MKlubeck, April 13, 2010
Thanks! I think it does help. I did co-author the book, but I would have tried to put this into Wikipedia years ago (before writing the book) if I was more aware. You are right it is a new concept and understand if it requires more time. Don't know what to do about the "conflict of interest" since we (the authors) are probably the most knowledgable at this time - until (hopefully) our readership grows. Thanks again!
Mklubeck ( talk) 18:37, 14 April 2010 (UTC)Mklubeck
I've just completed an article on a non-profit community organization at User:VitusKonter/Bay View Garden and Yard Society. I've included as many references as I could find, so I hope this helps to meet the notablility guidelines. Thank you for your time and consideration. VitusKonter ( talk) 06:44, 14 April 2010 (UTC)
Hi friends,
Recently, I have added this page to Wikipedia and tired to make the content of this article lucid. In order to make this article beautiful, I request you for your feedback and suggestions.
Your help will be deeply appreciated.--
Alok Mishra (
talk)
09:11, 14 April 2010 (UTC)
AETC Collaboration Portal User:Afeducationuser/AETC Collaboration Portal
Please review my article. Afeducationuser ( talk) 14:45, 15 April 2010 (UTC)
Could I have some feedback about the article please. Many thanks —Preceding unsigned comment added by Steverance ( talk • contribs) 15:24, 15 April 2010 (UTC)
Hi friends,
Recently, I have added this page to Wikipedia and tired to make this article lucid and informative. In order to make this article beautiful, I request you for your feedback and suggestions. Please let me know how it looks and developmental need.
Your help will be deeply appreciated.--
Alok Mishra (
talk)
09:35, 14 April 2010 (UTC)
Greetings!
My non-profit organization just set up our own page, located at MEET - Middle East Education through Technology
In a nutshell, the mission of MEET is to be a bridge facilitating healthy interaction and dialogue between Israeli and Palestinian high-school students, through a shared goal of education and cross-cultural learning.
However we realize this topic may be a bit sensitive (even though our organization is neutral), therefore would like to seek feedback from the Wiki community on your thoughts about our page (too political? sensitive?) and any advice on improving it.
Thanks so much!!
Lbeana, 4/15 Lbeana ( talk) 23:28, 15 April 2010 (UTC)
I need feedback on this article: User:Fvroig/Fidel Roig Matons Thanks.
Fvroig ( talk) 00:05, 16 April 2010 (UTC)
[ [1]] My article on the above subject, I am told, needs a feedback. Please let me know if there is anything concerning this article that I have missed out? This is an historical account of the State of jammu & Kashmir backed by references whereever required and even referenced comparable articles with the same context or subject. Still I will appreciate if I am corrected to make this article meaningful. Thanks --Mrathore 13:56, 14 April 2010 (UTC) Mrathore 14.42 —Preceding unsigned comment added by Mrathore ( talk • contribs) 13:48, 14 April 2010 (UTC)
Thanks Mike I wrote this article in context with the prevailing situation in Jammu & Kashmir and wanted to apprise the interested parties with a version a common man in J & K wants the international community to be aware of. To understand the imbroglio an impartial analysis can be made getting the story from horses mouth. Please advise further. Thanks 86.21.13.87 ( talk) 08:09, 15 April 2010 (UTC)[ [2]
User:SuKristie/Self defense pressure points
This is my first article. It is about using pressure points of your attackers body to defend yourself and discusses which of your body parts to use on these pressure points. Are the lists a problem, or anything else?
-- SuKristie ( talk) 19:23, 15 April 2010 (UTC)SuKristie 4/15/10
Corinne Malvern -- I'd appreciate someone reviewing this for me. Dfoy ( talk) 14:56, 16 April 2010 (UTC)
User:Hannahralston/William A. Edelstein
Hello! This is my first article and I'd be grateful for feedback on whether it is ready for publication. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Hannahralston ( talk • contribs) 16:31, 16 April 2010 (UTC)
Hello,
I'd love to receive feedback on my draft post: User:AllisonShapira/Energy_Policy_of_the_Obama_Administration. This is my first time writing a page on Wikipedia.
Thank you very much for your time.
AllisonShapira ( talk) 17:06, 16 April 2010 (UTC) Allison Shapira April 16, 2010
Thanks, Orangemike, for your feedback. Is a website of the US Government considered a reliable source? Allison —Preceding unsigned comment added by AllisonShapira ( talk • contribs) 13:24, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
This is a very simple article about ING Life India as an organization and its origin and growth. The Article is:
I would appreciate any feedback to this article. Thanks!
Vikas Chandak 09:13, 16 April 2010 (UTC)
Hi,
this is going to be my first article: User:Ɯ/Alpha algorithm it's about an algorithm which is mentioned on the Process mining, though not linked nor explained there.
It's far from being finished, but I'd like to make it available to everyone at this stage to avoid duplication. [Ɯ:] ( talk) 14:43, 17 April 2010 (UTC)
Thanks a lot for reviewing! I'm happy with the changes. The bullet points were intentional, though, so I changed the "#"'s back to "*". [Ɯ:] ( talk) 16:37, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
Dr. Dan Ivankovich. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Doinggooddaily/Dr._Dan_Ivankovich
Doinggooddaily ( talk) 21:51, 17 April 2010 (UTC)
Respectfully request feedback on this article to prepare it for publication.
Thank you.
Request review for improvement and a fair rating based on current assessment standards. Sephiroth storm ( talk) 04:21, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
Any feedback on my second article would be appreciated! John Wall (electronic composer) Many thanks! -- PressedBack ( talk) 19:51, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
Many thanks! At what stage does an article get reviewed/rated? -- PressedBack ( talk) 20:58, 21 April 2010 (UTC)
First time author here. I have created an article on computer pioneer Dudley Allen Buck. User:AlanDewey/Enter your new article name here
AlanDewey ( talk) 14:57, 19 April 2010 (UTC)Alan Dewey 19 April 2010
Also, I seem to have screwed up when creating the title for the article. I have not yet figured out how to change it. Maybe it will be easy to change after it is approved. One important point is that this article is about the Electrical Engineer / Inventor Dudley Allen Buck, not the composer Dudley Buck.
AlanDewey ( talk) 17:30, 19 April 2010 (UTC)
Is this how we are supposed to communicate? Someone send the "the missing manual". That was very helpful. Also the unfindable link WP:lead .. very helpful and I would have NEVER found it on my own. I have edited the page a lot based on this input. I am not going to claim it is 'ready' yet. However, I have made significant improvement. Hopefully enough that I am ready for more suggestions. I still don't understand this wikipaedia thing much. But if you have the ability to help edit the article, then go ahead.
I have much more material that can be cited. However, much of it is only recently being declassified. Since most people will not have access to it, is it proper to cite it? AlanDewey ( talk) 19:15, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
I believe this article has proper notability, however several of the external articles for Shushybye come from the Shushybye homepage (articles are downloaded and open in a Word document -- however, they are complete scans of the original article).
Thanks for checking it out! Shushybye is my child's favorite show on BabyFirst TV Shushyfan513 ( talk) 16:02, 19 April 2010 (UTC) Shushyfan513 4/19/2010
Hello, I'd be interested in getting an article reviewed. Nimsoft was posted back in February, and still has the "This is New/Unreviewed Article" notice at the top. If we could have reviewed, it would be much appreciated. Best, Rbudde ( talk) 19:19, 19 April 2010 (UTC)
IMHO, this is Unlikely. A lot of work is needed.
A p3rson
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22:40, 21 April 2010 (UTC)
User:Froggieskc/Double JJ Resort
Resort in Rothbury, MI, where the Rothbury Music Festival has been held. Went bankrupt and re-opened. Opened originally in 1937.
Froggieskc ( talk) 20:42, 19 April 2010 (UTC)
More references have been added. The history is largely from a local historian, making it difficult to cite from the internet. There's a few different news sources now, along with reputable websites for the festival & golf course. Think it looks better now? Thanks Froggieskc ( talk) 13:48, 23 April 2010 (UTC)
My article is about Rutgers University wide receiver Mohamed Sanu. He is one of the top underclassmen in American college football and is a future NFL draft pick.
Signed, Fuddrutgers —Preceding unsigned comment added by Fuddrutgers ( talk • contribs) 22:55, 19 April 2010 (UTC)
I wrote up a profile on a women`s organization that supports women in minority groups dealing with issues of conjugal violence. Please let me know what you think.
User:Taejah33/The_Shield_of_Athena_Montréal
-- Taejah33 ( talk) 00:34, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
I have created a page for American Sportscaster Kenny Rice. User:Eddiebod/Kenny Rice I've included many 3rd party sources and I believe he is notable enough. I would appreciate any feedback on the article as this is my first attempt at a complete WIKI article. The subject is linked to from several other wiki pages, but has no entry of his own yet. Special:WhatLinksHere/Kenny_Rice Eddiebod ( talk) 03:29, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
Thanks! Eddiebod ( talk) 17:49, 21 April 2010 (UTC)
I've written an article about the company Oregon LNG and I've been waiting several weeks for it to be moved from New, Unreviewed Article. Can someone help? Collander123 ( talk) 04:23, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
It is my first wikipedia article and some comments would be helpful to improve the quality of the article.
In this article, an European research project in the area of artificial olfaction is presented.
Jfonollosa ( talk) 09:35, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
Intelligent Manufacturing Systems (IMS) - Global Research and Innovation in Manufacturing Intelligent_Manufacturing_Systems_(IMS)_-_Global_Research_and_Innovation_in_Manufacturing This is a global multi-lateral, non-profit, and government supported program for manufacturing research. We hope to raise awareness to provide our free services to researchers. Thanks kindly for your review. MfgGlobalResearch ( talk) 10:57, 20 April 2010 (UTC) Dan Nagy, Program Director, 20 April, 2010
Greetings Editors,
I have create a userpage draft of a new entry Local Food Plus: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Vj_stokes/Local_Food_Plus
Could someone please review this page and let me know if it suits?
COI disclosure: I am a freelance writer and editor. Local Food Plus is one of my clients. They have asked me to create this for them. I am interested in this area (sustainable food policy/action), and feel it appropriate for LFP to have an entry here.
Thanks so much. Please advise,
Vj stokes ( talk) 14:34, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
Posting information about a new card game with sources from BoardGameGeek, BoardgameNews, and the Publisher's website.
-- TBGF ( talk) 21:54, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
I would appreciate any feedback on this article about a popular cookbook author.
Soflo1800 ( talk) 22:51, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
Please take a look at Chris_Duke, a host of a national American television show called Motorz TV.
We have been working on it for a few months in our personal sandbox, which is why you probably don't see a history on this one. Thank you for your time.
-- Dukenetworks ( talk) 20:00, 21 April 2010 (UTC)
I would appreciate feedback from the following article: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Superdeed/New_York_Food_Tours
This is an article about the culinary tourism company of New York Food Tours. The article was nominated for speedy deletion, under section section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion. I have edited the article and asked for advice from my peers, as well as re-read the Business policy of Wikipedia. Please provide me feedback and criticism on things you believe I should edit, add, or delete. Thanks!
Superdeed ( talk) 04:39, 22 April 2010 (UTC)
Wanted to get some advice and see what you thought of this page, are there changes i can make to prevent it from deletion or does it look good? please let me know, my email is <redacted> —Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.218.244.79 ( talk) 07:41, 22 April 2010 (UTC)
This statement is incorrect.
The Playtronics Toy company and its car park scenes from Sneakers were filmed at the Countrywide Loans Data Processing - Admin Plant at 400 Countrywide Way.
Sneakers was filmed in the building referred to but the company in the building at the time was Gibraltar Savings. Countrywide took over the biudling after Gibraltar was closed by the RTC.
I worked at Gibralter while Sneakers was Being filmed and saw Robert Redford. Please correct this satement someone. I would just mess it up.
4/21/2010. onipa'a —Preceding unsigned comment added by Onipa'a ( talk • contribs) 04:48, 23 April 2010 (UTC)
Hello,
This is the first time I have created a Wikipedia page and would like to check that it meets all the necessary conventions.
I have been researching Truman's for the last few months as part of a personal interest in east London history. Despite the fact that they were once the world's largest brewery there are not man books on them. The London Metropolitan archives, where almost all the source material was found, has many photos and original letters and recipes. I intend to add photos later, but am waiting for the opportunity to photograph some of the images held by the archive.
I have also been looking into how to move this article onto the main site, but do not meet the criteria of having made 10 edits. I have tried to read the section about what to do in this situation, but am frankly a bit confused. If anybody could help with this it would be much appreciated.
Many Thanks
User:Mghemus/Truman's Beer
Mghemus ( talk) 15:30, 23 April 2010 (UTC)
Hello
Thank you very much for your feedback, obviously it's extremely helpful.
- If you would be happy to do a bit more work at the start before the main space that would be great - I think you have a better idea of what needs doing to get that section right. - Thanks for the editorial changes - I have been trying to find the Hornsey book, unfortunately it is about $75 to buy and none of the libraries I have visited currently has it. What I have read on the google extracts seems very good. The reason I omitted the mention of a Truman family being involved in brewing in 1381 is because there is no definite proof that they are from the same family. There is then no mention of any Truman's in brewing until the 17th century. However, I could add this in if you think it is valid information. - I looked for survey 27 but the London Metropolitan Archive has unfortunately 'misplaced it' - I spent quite a long time with them trying to track it down, but it is the one survey in their collection that is not there. Apparently there might be a copy in another library, but I have yet to make down there. - Thanks for making the PLC change - Let me know about the quote in the Growth section, if you think it is inappropriate then I can take it out. - The original name of the company was Truman but it was known as and referred to itself as 'Truman's Beer', which is why I selected this name. As time progress it became Truman & Hanbury Co. Ltd. and then Truman, Hanbury and Buxton Co. Ltd. but it was still referred to by the public as Truman's Beer. Prior to being shut down, Grand Metropolitan shortened the name to just Truman's (which was the name that remained in use when shut down in 1989). Perhaps the entry should be called 'Truman, Hanbury & Buxton Co. Ltd. with the term 'Truman's Beer' also linking to the page? - The name of the main London brewery was 'Black Eagle Brewery', named after the street on which it was built (Black Eagle Street) - I will include a reference to John Bickerdyke with regards to the creation of Porter. Not a source I had seen before.
Lastly, I have rephotographed many of the hundreds of photos that they have of the old brewery, pubs and vehicles. I also have the necessary permission to re-publish them. Do you think it would help the entry to add photos? They are all black and white and from the turn of the 20th Century.
Thanks again for your help
M-G
Betty Hyatt: Community Development and Housing Pioneer
Looking for help with article to refine it.
Thyatt ( talk) 15:37, 23 April 2010 (UTC)Thomas Hyatt 4/23/2010
I am creating a page about a person and would like to upload an image or two. How can I do that? I cant understand the copyrights etc. These pictures arent copyrighted - do they have to be? I got these images from a shotoshoot that was taken of the person. How can i upload them, without getting them deleted? Thanks!
Xer014 ( talk) 00:35, 24 April 2010 (UTC) Cheryl Falzon
Frances Koons Frances Koons FansofFrances ( talk) 01:13, 24 April 2010 (UTC)
Re article http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Donchats/The_Dragon%27s_Journey
I would appreciate if someone could give me some feed back on my first attempt at the Dragon's Journey. When time permits I propose to examine in more detail each chapter. Can you tell me what might be required to go live?
Thank you -- Donchats ( talk) 03:02, 24 April 2010 (UTC) DonChats
Thank you for requesting feedback on your draft before creating an article.
I hope these comments help. If you have questions regarding these comments, please contact me by leaving me a message. I will reply on your talk page. Thank you, liquidluck✽ talk 23:00, 25 April 2010 (UTC)
I would like Category:Head and neck cancer and Category:Brain tumor reviewed. Best wishes, Immunize ( talk) 14:41, 24 April 2010 (UTC)
Freedom Deep Freedom Deep a feature film by Aaron Stevenson (Me) John Ranko ( talk) 02:58, 25 April 2010 (UTC)
After User:Imgahn2u created a page Night of the Grizzlies a few days back, I put together the above. Not sure now that it is done, as it seems to be less about the book and more like a description of the events in the book.
I do agree with Imgahn2u in that I feel it is probably an important book, even if only from the point of view of recording a part of the history of the national park service, and Glacier in particular.
My frustration lies in not being able to find anything which provides support in the way of notability for the book itself - no reviews, no indication of sales (other than hearsay "best seller among backpacking community").
Maybe it shouldn't be about the book, and I should rewrite it as an article about that night? Or should I just slap it in the book article and let it develop as it will from there?
Thoughts, input, guidance, structural changes and recommendations? All welcome :-). Best wishes. -- Haruth ( talk) 14:18, 25 April 2010 (UTC)
The Silver Star Families of America
Would like a little help and reviews on the Silver STar Families of America
I have had lots of help but the page still seems to have too many open spaces I cannot delete out.
Anyway, thank you all and God bless.
And thanks to all who have helped.
Steven1969 ( talk) 21:55, 24 March 2010 (UTC)
THANK you Nuujinn!
Steven1969 ( talk) 00:42, 25 March 2010 (UTC)
And by all means edit away!
Steven1969 ( talk) 00:46, 25 March 2010 (UTC)
This article is about the Kanchan Armour indigeneously developed in India. Please comment on this: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lohiyagaurav/Kanchan_armour —Preceding unsigned comment added by 193.113.57.161 ( talk) 12:31, 14 April 2010 (UTC)
Almost two weeks ago, I created Reading Wood Black, who was a notable person in Texas history - he was the founder of Uvalde County, Texas and Uvalde, Texas. It was initially tagged as an orphan which I immediately cleared up. Since then, it still has the tag as New Unreviewed Article. Just wondering how long it takes before somebody reviews it and removes that tag. Maile66 ( talk) 01:57, 26 April 2010 (UTC)
I have reviewed
your page and left comments on its talk section. Thanks!
Optiguy54 (
talk)
23:22, 26 April 2010 (UTC)
A ring shaped like an octopus. Please write feedback so I can improve my article. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Eyelovepink ( talk • contribs) 19:34, April 26, 2010. Signed by liquidluck✽ talk 05:30, 27 April 2010 (UTC)
Where is the article? You need to include a link to it. (I am very new here also) AlanDewey ( talk) 19:04, 4 May 2010 (UTC)
The Wikipedia page Elaine Szymoniak was recently created. This woman was a politician in the US State of Iowa. The article has "gone live" and I was hoping to have some help/suggestions and a review of the article for credibility and quality. In addition, I am currently having trouble posting an image of Szymoniak, but I am working with the linked tutorials to hopefully alleviate the issue. Thanks. MattSzymoniak ( talk) 00:07, 27 April 2010 (UTC)
Please review and edit/comment
David Raether 4/26/2010 Davidraether ( talk) 01:21, 27 April 2010 (UTC)
This article is about a product called the Wi-Fire. It is made by a company called hField Technologies Inc. This article details its specifications and other usability statistics and information.
The page also gives an overview of the Wi-Fire's uses (where it can be used, as well as many other examples of use) and gives a description of how to install the product.—Preceding unsigned comment added by Krg210 ( talk • contribs)
Grave Disorder (novel): User:Techeric46052/Grave_Disorder
Page looks good and cites several sources from the media.
One of my concerns is how to publish it, since Grave Disorder already exists. Is there any assistance for making a disambiguation page?
Thanks! :)
Techeric46052 ( talk) 14:14, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
Magnificent Baby Magnificent Baby
< http://www.magnificentbaby.com>
Luvlab2 ( talk) 15:25, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
Taedeat ( http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:IgnyteZero/Taedeat) IgnyteZero ( talk) 18:06, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
A short article on the swedish blackened death metal band Taedeat.
Dear Wikipedia editors:
Would it possible to have the following page for Professor Barbara Kellerman http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Barbara_Kellerman_(Academic) show up under the "Kellermann" surname category ( http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kellerman)?
Professor Kellerman is a Professor at the Harvard Kennedy School and this page is about her career and work.
Currently only Barbara Kellerman the actress is shown. I would like to have Barbara Kellerman (Academic) also show up. Moreover, is it possible to have Barbara Kellerman (Academic) automatically appear when typing in the search field?
Please tell me if there is anything I can do to help in this process.
Your help is greatly appreciated. Thanks!
Best, Mike
User:Bobh00000/35H00060_Battery_Series Bobh00000 ( talk) 01:56, 29 April 2010 (UTC)
I'm putting together an article about Frazer-Nash Consultancy and would appreciate some feedback, the articles currently at User:Stephenpenndb7/Draft of article. Thanks Stephenpenndb7 ( talk) 15:34, 29 April 2010 (UTC)
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dakota_Jackson,_Furniture_Designer
I have recently researched and written a new entry about American furniture designer Dakota Jackson. I just moved it to go live and I would like some feedback about the article. Thanks!
Could someone please look at [ [4]] and give me some feedback. It's been waiting to be reviewed for quite some time now. Many thanks Bowl4u ( talk) 23:50, 29 April 2010 (UTC)
Linzi Wilson-Wilde Jimwhiskey ( talk) 09:44, 30 April 2010 (UTC)
Milton Reynolds http://en.wikipedia.org/?title=User:Lppgeraldj/Enter_your_new_article_name_here&oldid=359308593
Feedback, please.
Lppgeraldj ( talk) 19:38, 30 April 2010 (UTC)
- Article Title: Carpal Tunnel Syndrome
Mfestejo (
talk)
08:49, 2 May 2010 (UTC)
Wajdi Mallat is an influential Lebanese political figure who has recently passed away. I have finished editing the entry and believe that it is complete and up to standard. Cross links and references included. I would appreciate feedback. Thank you. Shaque ( talk) 12:09, 2 May 2010 (UTC)
Hi friends,
Recently, I have added this page to Wikipedia. Keeping a good faith in Wikipedia, I have tried to make this article lucid and informative and in Encyclopedic style. In order to make this article beautiful, I request you for your feedback and suggestions. Please let me know how it looks and its developmental need.
Your help will be deeply appreciated.
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11:34, 3 May 2010 (UTC)
I would like feedback for my article, User:CBehringer/Pneumococcal Awareness Council of Experts. Also, would someone be able to recommend how I can embed photos? Thank you,
CBehringer ( talk) 17:20, 3 May 2010 (UTC)
This is a page for our honors program. It has lots of history and should be recognized. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Sdoober ( talk • contribs) 21:24, 3 May 2010 (UTC)
Request for feedback/article move for Cherry Bekaert & Holland. This article reviews the certified public accounting firm, Cherry, Bekaert & Holland, located in the Southeast US. Mnewman.cbh ( talk) 15:56, 4 May 2010 (UTC)
I had previously sought feedback on an early draft, now extensively linked and annotated, made language more objective.
I saw a help item on changing the userspace tag but can't find it now, so one question is what if anything to do with the page tag.
Thanks for your help. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Lppgeraldj ( talk • contribs) 19:04, 4 May 2010 (UTC)
Arthur_De_Vany is about a pioneer in entertainment economics, a specialized sub-field which I think will gain increasing attention as general economics and finance begin to focus more on behavioral economics and intellectual property.
Allenwlee ( talk) 00:09, 5 May 2010 (UTC)allen lee may 4, 2010
thanks for your help! Allenwlee ( talk) 23:51, 7 May 2010 (UTC)allen
Ham and Petersham Cricket Club
This a relatively brief starter article about Ham and Petersham Cricket Club. In 2015 the club will 200 years old. This wikipedia entry will provide a short history of the club along and some historic facts which may be of interest to some readers. Will Cowling Willcowling ( talk) 08:52, 5 May 2010 (UTC)
International Victimology Institute Tilburg (INTERVICT)
I don't quite understand if I have posted the article to the main Wikipedia section. Tried to follow the guidelines, but am afraid I don't quite get them...
Also I would appreciate some feedback on the content. I'm new at the process, so if I can do anything to improve the page or the way to manage the content, I would be very grateful for any advice.
-- PRcor ( talk) 17:14, 5 May 2010 (UTC)
This is my first wiki article, I have read all of the help topics on Wikipedia and I think the article ready to go live. Please review the article and make any suggestions so the article does not get deleted.
User:Emma.roach/Professional systems associates Thank you,
Emma.roach ( talk) 21:04, 5 May 2010 (UTC)
I took your recommendations: I added references and sentences that will support the notability and I cited the references with footnotes. Please look at it again and tell me if I need anything else. Thanks! Emma.roach ( talk) 16:48, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
I made all of the changes recommended including taking any mention of "solution" out of the article. Is there anything else that I should change or that has a "marketing tone"? Emma.roach ( talk) 18:35, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
I noticed that the article has the "Move" tab on it now. Do you think it is ready for the main space? Emma.roach ( talk) 18:04, 7 May 2010 (UTC)
Thank you for all of the time that you have contributed and the feedback. I have moved the page to the mainspace. Emma.roach ( talk) 15:06, 10 May 2010 (UTC)
Kronid Lyubarsky: Leader of the Moscow Helsinki Group from 1993 to 1996 and one of the editors of the samizdat publication Chronicle of Current Events.
I am not sure how much of the article should be sourced; I could add more info on his trial using the Amnesty International translations of the "Chronicle" itself; but this seems redunant, as he was its editor.
Most of the information is taken from the book on him published in Russia; sourcing individual paragraphs seems superfluous.
Also, I am not sure if the chronological structure of the article is OK and how much, if anything, should be mentioned in the first sentence of the article.
Nkrita ( talk) 16:00, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
I am having a really hard time moving this article. I have gone through everything many times. Can someone please guide me in the right direction? KIND Healthy Snacks http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zevzigler/KIND_Healthy_Snacks
Thanks, Zev —Preceding unsigned comment added by Zziegler129 ( talk • contribs) 00:06, 7 May 2010 (UTC)
I created an article on the Anti Cancer Diet, which I presented in school. I am ready to post it live but wanted final feedback. Let me know what you think. Thank you, LoHeHa77 ( talk) 00:22, 8 May 2010 (UTC)LoHeHa77 May 7, 2010
Hey, I would really appreciate some feedback on my article about line of PDAs Pocket LOOX by Fujitsu-Siemens.
Thanks! —Preceding unsigned comment added by Hurk87 ( talk • contribs) 01:16, 8 May 2010 (UTC)
Hi, this is my first article and I'm keen to get some feedback, thanks. User:Ellyrobi/Australian Institute of Family Studies Thanks Ellyrobi ( talk) 07:52, 8 May 2010 (UTC)
Thanks very much, great ideas. I'll address these issues, which shouldn't be too hard. Should I then gain feedback here again? Or can I go on to publish the article? Ellyrobi ( talk) 03:37, 10 May 2010 (UTC)